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Thriller Kya fark padta hai

Alex123

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55 bottles is more than 40 liters. Is this thriller or joke ?
Sunkar accha laga ki aapne itna deeply update padha magar Bhai kise Bande ke ghur Kar dekhne se koi vahan jal Kar rakh nahi hoti .han janta hun kuch zaida hi phek Diya hai likhne se pahle Socha bi tha ki likhunga ya nahi magar bad me Socha Jo hoga dekha jayega.magar ye bhi to socho Bhai Maine ye bhi likha hai ki ye imagination hai wo bhi Meri hope AAP samjhoge anyway thanks story pe aane ke liye and bro keep supporting
 

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UPDATE 4
Ab Tak aapne padha ki AURTHER ke chutki bajate hi g6 ki body jal Kar rakh ho gayi aur ladki ke samne ki diwar bhi hat gayi
AB aage
Divar ke hat te hi AURTHER ne dekha ki us ladki ne apne ghutne mode hue the aur apne chote Bhai ko kas Kar Gale lagaye thar thar kamp rahi thi use is bat ka bhi khayal nahi tha ki usne apna pajama nahi pahna hai .magar isse AURTHER ko koi fark na pada wo normally chalte hue un ki taraf badha to wo dono aur bhi samat Kar baith Gaye .AURTHER ne us ladki ka pajama uthaya aur us ladki ki taraf badhate hue kaha.
AURTHER- name Kya hai tum dono ka aur itni rat ko yahan Kya Kar rahi thi?
Ladki itni dari Hui thi ki uske much se bol Tak nahi phut rahe the magar khud ko sambhalte hue dari Hui aawaz me boli .
Ladki - m m Mera n na nam vaishali hai a au aur ye Mera Bhai ro rohan hai usne apna pajama lete hue kaha aur jhat se apna pajama pahan liya magar nada na hone ki wajah se bandh na saki ispar AURTHER ne apna belt badhate hue us se kaha lo bandh lo.ladki ne darte hue AURTHER ke hath se belt liya aur bandh liya .ab wo kuch had Tak sambhal chuki thi aur uska Bhai bhi tabhi AURTHER ne kaha .
AURTHER- tumne bataya nahi Tum yaha kaise pahuchi .ispar vaishali ne Rohan ke taraf dekhte hue kaha Mai yahan se kuch dur sadak ke kinare Jo college ke pas wali basti hai wahi wahi rahti hun .aur Ghar chalane ke liye college ke bagal wale restorent me waitress ki job karti hun .jab Mai restorent se wapas Ghar ja rahi thi to in gundon ne mujhe pakad liya inhone mere Bhai ko pahle se hi pakad rakha tha.
AURTHER- hmm aur ye drugs ka Kya mamla hai .
Vaishali- ek din jab Mai restorent me kam Kar rahi thi to Maine suna ke ye log college me drugs ki badi deal karne wale hai .ye khabar Maine police walon ko Bata di lekin mujhe Kya pata tha ki bhalai karne ka sila ye milega khair hamari Jan bachane ke liye sukriya warna aaj Kal to apne bhi madad nahi karte lekin aapne ye sab kaise Kiya aur wo sab kaha Gaye .ispar AURTHER ne vaishali ki taraf dekhte hue kaha .
AURTHER- bahadur ho tum warna aaj Kal aisa sahas bohot Kam hi milta hai .aur jaha Tak sawal hai ki Maine ye kaise kiya to tumhara isse koi Lena dena nahi hai .jawab sunkar to ek bar vaishali bhi sakpaka gayi magar khud ki halat sambhalte hue han me sar hila Diya .tabhi AURTHER ne kaha wo gadi Kahan hai jisse tumhe wo gunde layen the ispar vaishali ne kaha
Vaishali- mujhe nahi pata raste me unhone hamari aankhon par Patti bandh di thi . AURTHER -koi bat nahi tum dono sadak Tak jao waha tumhe Mera driver Nazar aayega .Mai thodi der me aata hun . vaishali kuch balna chahti thi magar AURTHER ka ravaiya dekh Kar uske bol na phute.vaishali ke jate hi AURTHER ne apna hath zamin par rakha aur aankhen band ki to use maloom hua ki gadi 38 kadam ki duri par hai .itni rat ki bhi use sab kuch din ke ujale jaise saf dikh Raha tha gadi ke pas pahuchte hi usne gadi par rakhi tahni ko hataya jisse gadi dikh nahi rahi thi .tahni ke hatate hi usne andar ka jayeza liya to usme 4camere aur 2laptop Nazar aaya usne un dono chizon ko gadi me pade ek bag me dala aur bahar aakar dono gadiyon ki tarf gor se dekha .uske ghur ke dekhte ki gadiyan dhu dhu Kar ke jalne lagi aur kuch second me hi rakh ho gayi .ye Kam karne ke bad AURTHER jungle se bahar aaya to usne apne pith par bag tanga hua tha tabhi usne Peter se pucha .
AURTHER -peter car thik Hui .
Peter - ji sahab puncher bana Diya hai inka Kya karna hai .
AURTHER- phone nikal Kar number list se ek number par call karta hai. udher se call uthate hi ji sir boliye .
AURTHER- uski bat par bina gor farmaye Meri location track Karo aur abhi car bhejo .
Uder se aawaz aati hai yes sir aur call cut ho jata hai .vaishali ab Tak samajh chuki thi ki uske samne khada Saks Yani AURTHER pahuchi Hui chiz hai magar use ye samajh nahi aaya dusri car Kyu kyun ki Jo car samne khadi thi use itni sit thi ki 4log aaram se baith jayen to phir dusri car kyun .wo kahna chahti thi magar kaha nahi .idar AURTHER ne Peter se kaha ye college ke pas wali basti me rahti hai ise waha chod aao itna kahte hi usne that se car ke back sit se apni sarab ki bottle nikali Jo ki wo jungle me Jane se pahle chod Gaya tha .tabhi Peter ne AURTHER ke pas ja Kar dhire se kaha .
Peter-malik waha par sab jhopde aur tent me rahte hai aapko nahi lagta ki AAP ko inhe aashram bhej Dena chahiye waha ye safe bhi rahenge . AURTHER ko ye bat thik lagi usne apna rukh vaisali ke tarf Kiya aur kaha .
AURTHER- ek job hai tumhare liye karna chahogi .ispar vaishali ne kaha .
Vaishali-aapne hamari Jan bachai hai warna hum garib ka hai hi kaun . hum AAP ki bat ko kaise tal sakte hai Hume manzur hai .ispar AURTHER ne kaha .
AURTHER- good Mai tumhe jab is liye nahi de Raha hun ki tum garib ho balke is liye de Raha hun ki tum imandar aur nek Dil ho .usne piter ki taraf dekhte hue kaha .Peter inhe hamare anath ashram le jao aur aur maneger ko inke bare me Bata Dena .
Peter-ji malik kah Kar darwaza kholta hai tab Tak dusri car bhi aa jati hai . AURTHER ja Kar dusre driver ko bahar aane ko kahta hai aur us se kahta hai ki ja Kar Peter ki car me baith Jaye .dusra driver kuch nahi kahta hai aur jaisa AURTHER ne kaha tha waisa hi karta hai .thodi der bad Peter teno ko le Kar aage badh jata hai jab ki AURTHER car me baith ke wahin aadhi sarab gatak Raha tha .
Awesome
 
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Alex123 pahle to Bhai Maine aaj hi start kri aapki story
Amazing startup
Arthur ye Kuch suna suna sa laga name
Yaad Aaya it's a brother of LUCIFIER
To if I m not wrong ye story kaffi similar hogi and I THOUGHT KUCH TYM MAIN AAP FLASHBACK START KRNE WALLE HO
EXCITED FOR NEXT UPDATE
KEEP IT UP
:balle::balle::cool1::cool1::cool1::devil:
 
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ROMANCHAK KAHANI. AAGE BADHAYE
 
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Alex123 pahle to Bhai Maine aaj hi start kri aapki story
Amazing startup
Arthur ye Kuch suna suna sa laga name
Yaad Aaya it's a brother of LUCIFIER
To if I m not wrong ye story kaffi similar hogi and I THOUGHT KUCH TYM MAIN AAP FLASHBACK START KRNE WALLE HO
EXCITED FOR NEXT UPDATE
KEEP IT UP
:balle::balle::cool1::cool1::cool1::devil:
Sun Kar accha laga Bhai ki AAP ko ye story pasand aa rahi hai .aur dusri bat ye ke flashbacks start hone me abhi bohot waqt hai aur ye ye story devil aur angel se badh Kar hogi waise AAP ke suggestion par Mai khara utarne ki kosish zarur karunga be along and keep supporting.
 
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UPDATE 4
Ab Tak aapne padha ki AURTHER ke chutki bajate hi g6 ki body jal Kar rakh ho gayi aur ladki ke samne ki diwar bhi hat gayi
AB aage
Divar ke hat te hi AURTHER ne dekha ki us ladki ne apne ghutne mode hue the aur apne chote Bhai ko kas Kar Gale lagaye thar thar kamp rahi thi use is bat ka bhi khayal nahi tha ki usne apna pajama nahi pahna hai .magar isse AURTHER ko koi fark na pada wo normally chalte hue un ki taraf badha to wo dono aur bhi samat Kar baith Gaye .AURTHER ne us ladki ka pajama uthaya aur us ladki ki taraf badhate hue kaha.
AURTHER- name Kya hai tum dono ka aur itni rat ko yahan Kya Kar rahi thi?
Ladki itni dari Hui thi ki uske much se bol Tak nahi phut rahe the magar khud ko sambhalte hue dari Hui aawaz me boli .
Ladki - m m Mera n na nam vaishali hai a au aur ye Mera Bhai ro rohan hai usne apna pajama lete hue kaha aur jhat se apna pajama pahan liya magar nada na hone ki wajah se bandh na saki ispar AURTHER ne apna belt badhate hue us se kaha lo bandh lo.ladki ne darte hue AURTHER ke hath se belt liya aur bandh liya .ab wo kuch had Tak sambhal chuki thi aur uska Bhai bhi tabhi AURTHER ne kaha .
AURTHER- tumne bataya nahi Tum yaha kaise pahuchi .ispar vaishali ne Rohan ke taraf dekhte hue kaha Mai yahan se kuch dur sadak ke kinare Jo college ke pas wali basti hai wahi wahi rahti hun .aur Ghar chalane ke liye college ke bagal wale restorent me waitress ki job karti hun .jab Mai restorent se wapas Ghar ja rahi thi to in gundon ne mujhe pakad liya inhone mere Bhai ko pahle se hi pakad rakha tha.
AURTHER- hmm aur ye drugs ka Kya mamla hai .
Vaishali- ek din jab Mai restorent me kam Kar rahi thi to Maine suna ke ye log college me drugs ki badi deal karne wale hai .ye khabar Maine police walon ko Bata di lekin mujhe Kya pata tha ki bhalai karne ka sila ye milega khair hamari Jan bachane ke liye sukriya warna aaj Kal to apne bhi madad nahi karte lekin aapne ye sab kaise Kiya aur wo sab kaha Gaye .ispar AURTHER ne vaishali ki taraf dekhte hue kaha .
AURTHER- bahadur ho tum warna aaj Kal aisa sahas bohot Kam hi milta hai .aur jaha Tak sawal hai ki Maine ye kaise kiya to tumhara isse koi Lena dena nahi hai .jawab sunkar to ek bar vaishali bhi sakpaka gayi magar khud ki halat sambhalte hue han me sar hila Diya .tabhi AURTHER ne kaha wo gadi Kahan hai jisse tumhe wo gunde layen the ispar vaishali ne kaha
Vaishali- mujhe nahi pata raste me unhone hamari aankhon par Patti bandh di thi . AURTHER -koi bat nahi tum dono sadak Tak jao waha tumhe Mera driver Nazar aayega .Mai thodi der me aata hun . vaishali kuch balna chahti thi magar AURTHER ka ravaiya dekh Kar uske bol na phute.vaishali ke jate hi AURTHER ne apna hath zamin par rakha aur aankhen band ki to use maloom hua ki gadi 38 kadam ki duri par hai .itni rat ki bhi use sab kuch din ke ujale jaise saf dikh Raha tha gadi ke pas pahuchte hi usne gadi par rakhi tahni ko hataya jisse gadi dikh nahi rahi thi .tahni ke hatate hi usne andar ka jayeza liya to usme 4camere aur 2laptop Nazar aaya usne un dono chizon ko gadi me pade ek bag me dala aur bahar aakar dono gadiyon ki tarf gor se dekha .uske ghur ke dekhte ki gadiyan dhu dhu Kar ke jalne lagi aur kuch second me hi rakh ho gayi .ye Kam karne ke bad AURTHER jungle se bahar aaya to usne apne pith par bag tanga hua tha tabhi usne Peter se pucha .
AURTHER -peter car thik Hui .
Peter - ji sahab puncher bana Diya hai inka Kya karna hai .
AURTHER- phone nikal Kar number list se ek number par call karta hai. udher se call uthate hi ji sir boliye .
AURTHER- uski bat par bina gor farmaye Meri location track Karo aur abhi car bhejo .
Uder se aawaz aati hai yes sir aur call cut ho jata hai .vaishali ab Tak samajh chuki thi ki uske samne khada Saks Yani AURTHER pahuchi Hui chiz hai magar use ye samajh nahi aaya dusri car Kyu kyun ki Jo car samne khadi thi use itni sit thi ki 4log aaram se baith jayen to phir dusri car kyun .wo kahna chahti thi magar kaha nahi .idar AURTHER ne Peter se kaha ye college ke pas wali basti me rahti hai ise waha chod aao itna kahte hi usne that se car ke back sit se apni sarab ki bottle nikali Jo ki wo jungle me Jane se pahle chod Gaya tha .tabhi Peter ne AURTHER ke pas ja Kar dhire se kaha .
Peter-malik waha par sab jhopde aur tent me rahte hai aapko nahi lagta ki AAP ko inhe aashram bhej Dena chahiye waha ye safe bhi rahenge . AURTHER ko ye bat thik lagi usne apna rukh vaisali ke tarf Kiya aur kaha .
AURTHER- ek job hai tumhare liye karna chahogi .ispar vaishali ne kaha .
Vaishali-aapne hamari Jan bachai hai warna hum garib ka hai hi kaun . hum AAP ki bat ko kaise tal sakte hai Hume manzur hai .ispar AURTHER ne kaha .
AURTHER- good Mai tumhe jab is liye nahi de Raha hun ki tum garib ho balke is liye de Raha hun ki tum imandar aur nek Dil ho .usne piter ki taraf dekhte hue kaha .Peter inhe hamare anath ashram le jao aur aur maneger ko inke bare me Bata Dena .
Peter-ji malik kah Kar darwaza kholta hai tab Tak dusri car bhi aa jati hai . AURTHER ja Kar dusre driver ko bahar aane ko kahta hai aur us se kahta hai ki ja Kar Peter ki car me baith Jaye .dusra driver kuch nahi kahta hai aur jaisa AURTHER ne kaha tha waisa hi karta hai .thodi der bad Peter teno ko le Kar aage badh jata hai jab ki AURTHER car me baith ke wahin aadhi sarab gatak Raha tha .
Awesome update bhai,
uss ladki ko aurther ne job bhi de di hai,
aurther ka character abhi poori tarah se mistry bana hua hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
 

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Super update hai bhai
 

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UPDATE 5
Ab Tak aapne padha ki Peter apne vaishali aur Rohan aur dusre driver ko lekar aage badh Gaya jabki AURTHER wahin dusri gadi ka darwaza khola Kar pith se bag utarkar car me aage ki dusri sit par rakh Kar bagal me baith ke bachi Hui sarab gatak Raha tha .
AB aage
Bachi Hui sarab ki bottle pine ke bad usne Khali bottle bahar pheki aur car ka darwaza band Kar ke aage badh Gaya .udhar dusri taraf Peter ki car me vaishali yahi soch rahi thi ki usne dusri car Kyu mangwai halaki vaishali ne ab Tak AURTHER ka name bhi nahi pucha the ye khayal aate hi usne Socha ki sayad Peter is bare me janta ho yahi soch Kar vaishali ne Peter se pucha .is dauran uska chota Bhai uski godi me so Chuka tha .
Vaishali - piter kaka Mai AAP ko kaka bula sakti hun na .ispar Peter ne muskurate hue kaha .
Peter- ha beti tum bula sakti ho usne us ka chehra back mirror se dekhte hue kaha .aage road ki taraf dekhte hue usne phir se kaha sayad tum mujh se kuch puchna chahti ho hai na . Peter ka ye sawal sun Kar vaishali sakpaka gayi magar usne kaha .
Vaishali -han kaka Mai ye puchna chahti thi ki unka nam Kya hai aur unhone dusri car kyun magwai jab ki hum sab ek sath bhi to ja sakte the.is sawal par piter halka sa muskurate hue kahta hai .
Peter- Mai janta tha ki tum kuch aisa hi puchogi .hamare Malik ka name AURTHER hai aaj se 4 saal pahle wo is sahar me aaye the hare hue tute hue naumidi ke sath kamzori ke sath magar aaj dekho unhe wo dusro ko Rasta dikhate hai ummid bhara duniya ke sabse amir insano me se ek AURTHER group of industries ke Malik .duniya ke sab se powerful insano me se ek agar wo chahe to sarkare gir Jaye .magar koi nahi janta ki bahar se kathor aur mazbut dikhne Wala ye insan andar se kitna akela aur tuta hua hai.aur tumhare dusre sawal ka jawab hai ki Malik ko ladkiyon se nafrat hai kyun ye Mai nahi janta Kai bar pucha hai unse magar har bar unka ek hi jawab hota hai .MAI KISI KE SATH RAHUN YA NA RAHUN KOI MERE SATH RAHE YA NA RAHE (KYA FARK PADTA HAI).magar sawal to ab bhi wahi hai ki Kya unhe fark padta hai.piter itna kah ke chup ho jata hai jab ki vaishali ab bhi apni soch me gum rahti hai aur man hi man kuch nirnaya karti hai .
Idhar Peter ek aalishan bade bangle ke samne gadi rokta hai .to vaishali ka dhayan car rukne se tut jata hai wo bangle ki taraf dekhti hai to bus dekhti hi rah jati hai Bangla light se jagnmaga Raha tha phir uska dhyan bayin taraf ke board par jata hai jis par likha tha ANATH ASHRAM use thoda ajib bhi laga par wo chup hi rahi .tabhi Peter he horn bajaya to gate ke khulne ki aawaz aai .

BANGLE KE BARE ME​
ye Bangla 40 ekad me bana hua tha aur samne ki taraf gadiyon ke liye Rasta tha aur dono side me ped aur phul lage hue the Rasta katm hote hi bangle ka darwaza tha darwaze se inter hote hi bada sa Hall tha aur hall ke thik samne se dono taf se sidhiyan thi .ye Bangla bohot Vishal aur bada tha.bangle ke ke dusri taraf ek 8th floor ki building thi .jisme servent quarter aur teacher's dono hi rahte the magar ab bhi upar ka 4floor Khali tha .bangle ke piche ki taraf ek bada school bhi tha Jahan us aashram ke bacche padhte the.
(NOTE YE AASHRAM HAI AURTHER KA BUNGLA NAHI IS LIYE CONFUSE MAT HONA .)Peter ne vaishali ko bangle ki tarf na le jate hue building ke tarf le Gaya ye vaishali ko thoda ajib bhi laga magar wo Peter ke piche chalti gayi is dauran Rohan jag Chuka tha aur uske sath chal Raha tha magar neend ki Kumari ab bhi us par thi .jabki dusra driver pahle hi apne quarter me ja Chuka tha . Peter lift ke through 4th floor par vaishali ke sath aata hai aur ek room ke samne ruk Kar darwaza knock karta hai.Darwaze par maneger likha tha .samne ki tarf se aawaz aati hai coming aur darwaza khulta hai . vaishali dekhti hai ke us ke samne ek khubsurat ladki khadi hai .hight 5.1 fair color age 26 sal figure (34- 30-36).usne night dress pahna tha magar usme bhi wo cute lag rahi thi .tabhi Peter ne kaha vaishali beti inse Milo ye hai vaidahi Meri beti aur yahan ki manager .vaidahi Peter se Gale milti hai aur Peter se puchti hai baba ye Kon hai aur yahan is waqt .to Peter ne andar aakar baite hue kaha .
Peter- beti ye vaishali aur rohan hai aur phir sab kuch Jo Jo ab Tak hua sab batata hai .sab sun lene ke bad vaidahi kahti hai ki AURTHER sir ne thik Kiya Jo inhe yahan bhej Diya dekhiye baba mujhe ek bahan aur Bhai bhi mil Gaye wo bhi itne pyare pyere .is par vaishali ko bhi hasi aa gayi.tabhi Rohan kahta hai mujhe bhuk lagi hai .ispar vaidahi kahti hai Mai bhi kitni duffer hun ye bhuke peyase hai aur Mai bakwas kiye ja rahi hun .fir sab ne ek sath Khana khaya aur aur sab apne room me chale Gaye vaishali ,vaidahi aur Rohan ek room me chale Gaye .Rohan isleye kyun ki wo dara hua tha aur yahan Naya bhi tha. Jabki Pete apne room ki taraf chal pada sone ke liye.

 
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