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janu2016

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superb,
bas bhai thodi si spell mistakes h. Pls update dene se pehle ek baar read jarur kar liya karo.
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Alex123

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superb,
bas bhai thodi si spell mistakes h. Pls update dene se pehle ek baar read jarur kar liya karo.
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Jaldbazi me ho jata hai Bhai aur spell thik karne ke chakkar me alag se dobara story read karni padti hai jisme aur time lagta hai khair Mai aapki bat par bhi dheyan de dunga
 
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Zas23

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UPDATE 34
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AURTHER us pahad par kafi der rahta hai phir wapas usi Mahal ki tarf chal deta hai Jahan use B mili thi jab wo waha pahuchta hai to dekhta hai ke waha B pahle se hi dining hall me maujood hai .

AURTHER ko dekhte hi Bkahti hai aao AURTHER Mai tumhara hi intezar Kar rahi thi to udan bhar Kar kaisa mahsus Kar rahe ho aur use dining table par baithkar khane ka isara karti hi .

AURTHER usse puchta hai ki AAP ko kaise pata ki Mai ud Raha tha .ispar B kahti hai ki wo use kahi se bhi dekh sakti hai chahe wo dusre grah par ho ya dusre dimension par . AURTHER ko thada shock to lagta hai magar wo jaldi hi us bat ko hazam Kar leta hai kyunki ab Tak Jo kuch bhi uske sath hua tha wo kisi sci-fi ki kisi film ki tarah lad Raha tha magar uske liye sab kuch Sach tha .wo dono khana kha Kar so jate hai .

Chaliye thoda ZEBION grah ka Hal bhi Jan lete hai .

ZEBION grah par king zeon bohot chintit the apni beti Nisha ko le Kar aur raj gaddi aur apne Aude ko le Kar kyunki ZEBION ki prampara ke anusar ek bar jis strip ka name kisi purush KE sath Jud Jaye aur agar kisi Karan mahila ya purush me se koi ek bhag Jaye ya Mana Kar de ki use agle KE sath vivah nahi karna hai to strip ko sazaye maut di jati thi aur purush ko aajiwan kaid ye kaid koi aisi waisi kaid nahi thi kyunki is kaid me purush KE hath aur pair zanziro se bandhi jati thi aur us zanziro ke KE zariye uske body me current pass karaya jata tha aur wo mar na Jaye is liye uske body par ek lotion lagaya jata tha jisse uske body me wo dard aur ahsas to hota tha magar wo Marta nahi tha use khana nahi Diya jata tha bus zinda rahne ke liye sal bhar me ek injection Diya jata tha ye torture itna khatarnak tha ke usme wo Banda Marne ki bhikh magta tha magar apne jiwan Kal ke ant hone se pahle mar nahi pata tha .

Dusra king ka reason ye tha ki king zeon AURTHER ko apna aane Wala king Chun chuke the aur uske gayab hone se ab Baki hath me log sawal utha rahe the .


Ab chalte hai thoda hone wali mistress of council Yani Nisha ki tarf dekhte to ye Kya Kar rahi hai .

Place - training area in king castle

Nisha Puri Jan lagakar 12 guards se lad rahi thi aur Kamal ki bat KE ek bhi guards ab Tak use chu bhi nahi pa rahe the tabhi ek guard ne Nisha ke kalai par kick Mari natija Nisha ke kalai se talwar chut gayi abhi wo guards khush hua bhi nahi tha ke Nisha ko achanak se gussa aa Gaya air usne saw dekha na taw us sab guards ko ek ek hath se utha utha KE patakne lagi aur jis guard ne Nisha ki kalai par kick Mari thi wo Nisha ka ye rodr Roop dekh Kar itna dar Gaya ki uski range kapkapane lagi aur becare me wahi mutr wisarjan Kar Diya abhi Nisha aage badh hi rahi thi KE us ke man me kuch aawaz gunji aur wo achanak apne room ke taraf ho li .

Lambe lambe kadmo ke sath jab wo apne room ke taraf pahuchi to waha pahle se ek bhudi aurat maujood thi .
Nice update
 

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UPDATE 34
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Apne room pe pahuchte hi Nisha ne us aurat se sawal shuru Kar Diya kaun hai AAP ? AAP mere room me kaise pahuchi ? Aur aapne mere dimag me kaise sandesh bheja ? Ji Han dosto abhi jab Nisha apne aakhri bache guard ko training room me shine hi wali thi ki uske Mann me ek aawaz gunji ke AURTHER ke bare me kuch bat karni hai Mai tumhare room me tumhara intezar Kar rahi hun .Nisha ne ye suna aur bus wo bhagi chali aai aur aate hi sawalo ki jhadi suru Kar di .

Kamal ki bat ye thi ki wo bhudi aurat sirf muskura rahi thi aur us bhudi aurat ka muskurana Nisha ki aur bhi gussa dila raha tha aur wo gusse me hi kahti hai mere sabr ka imtehan mat lijiye isse pahle ki Mai aapke sarir se aapki aakhri sanse bhi khich lun muje mere sawalo ka jawab dijiye Nisha ka lihaza itna darawna tha ke agar is waqt AURTHER bhi uske samne rahta to wo bhi sayad dar jata lekin wo bhudi aurat ko to jaise koi asar hi nahi ho Raha tha tabhi is Puri wartalap ke ke dan uske muh se pahli bar kuch sabd nikalte hai aur wo sabd the .

Bhudi aurat - Kya tum Sach me AURTHER se prem karti ho ya apne baba ke dabaw me aakar ye shadi karna chahti ho.

Ye word Nisha ke liye kisi nuclear bomb se Kam nahi the wo Nisha Jo and Tak gusse me pata nahi Kya Kaya bole ja rahi thi wo aise chupchap ho hai thi jaise ki uski zaban ko lakwa mar Gaya ho aur uska chehra shock ki waja se aisa ho Gaya tha jaise duniya ke date ajube usne ek sath dekh liye ho .

Tabhi wo bhudi aurat kahti hai agar tumne mere sawalo ka jawab de Diya to Mai tumse wada karti hun tumhe wo date jawab mil jayenge Jo tum is waqt Janna chahti ho .

Tabhi Nisha ke both se kuch sabd nikle .

NISHA- Han Mai pyar karti hun AURTHER se jab bhi uske karib jati hun ek Nasha sa chane lagta hai mujhpe aisa lagta hai jaise mere Dil ko sukun mil Gaya ho aur dil me Jine ki khawahis aur zaida ho jati hai jab bhi uske samne rahti hun to bus use mahsus karne ka Dil karta hai .

Bhudi aurat - bus yahi sunna tha sun Kar accha laga ki Meri hone wali bahu mere bete ko kitna pyar karti hai .

Bahu sun Kar Nisha ka matha thanka aur usne pucha ki AAP hai kaun .

Tabhi bhudi aurat kahti hai ab bhi nahi samjhi khair Mai hi bata deti hun Mai AURTHER ki ma aur bhawishyawani hun .

Itna sunna tha KE uske 14 tabak raushan ho Gaye ab use gusse me bole Gaye apne shabd yad aa rahe the achanak se wo Bke pair par jhukne hi wali thi ki B ne use apne gale laga liya aur kaha tumhari jagah mere Dil me hai aur tumhe khud ko sesh Dene ki zarurat nahi hai Mai AURTHER ke liye tumhari bechini sat dekh pa rahi thi isliye to yahan sirf tumse Milne aa gayi .tumhara Yun gusse me sainiko se training room me ladna aur ladne ke kauran apna aapa kho Dena .mujhse gusse me bat karna sab mujhe pata tha .

Ab Nisha ko bohot ajib lag Raha tha use aaram bhi aa rahi thi aur khud par gussa bhi tabhi usne bat Palatine ka Sacha aur B se pucha aapne mujhse kaha tha ki AAP mere sawalo ka jawab dengi .

Tabhi B kahti hai de to Diya tha jaisa ke tumne mujhse pucha tha ki mai kaun hun yaha kaise aai aur tumhare dimag me jhak Kar tumhe sandesh kaise bheja to tumhare inteeno sawalo ka jawab ek hi hai aur wo ye hai ki Mai bhawishyawani hun .

Ab Nisha ke pas puchne ko kuch nahi tha lekin phir bhi wo ek bat puchne hi wali thi ki B ne use jawab dete hue kaha ki AURTHER abhi Jahan hai wo surakshit hai yaha uski shaktiyan aazmane ke kiye ye grah bohot kamzor hai aur wo iswaqt pure brahamand me sab se takatwar hai is liye Mai use ek aisi jagah le gayi him Jahan uski saktiyon ko kabu me laya ja sakta hai.

Dobara Nisha ne apna muh kuch bolne ko khola hi tha ki B me kaha tum waha nahi ja sakti ho magar fikr na Karo AURTHER sirf tumhara hai aur dheyan rahe hamare bich Jo batchil Hui hai wo kisi ko bhi pata na chale kisi ko bhi chahe wo AURTHER ya tumhare pita king zeon hi kyun na ho itna bol Kar B Nisha se gale milti hai aur ep portal khol Kar usme chali jati hai .

Abhi Nisha ka man kuch shant tha magar wo ek bat soch rahi thi ki B ne use kisi ko usse gupt rup se Milne ki khabar kisi ko batane se Mana kyun Kiya?
Nice update
 

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Subha jab AURTHER ki aankh khuli to wo bathroom ja Kar fresh hota hai aur bahar aata hai bahar aate hi uska samna B se ho jata hai .tabhi wo kahti hai AURTHER chalo tumhari training ka waqt ho Gaya hai . AURTHER ha me sir hilata hai aur B KE piche chal deta hai .

Wo log ek hall me pahuchte hai Jahan ek diwar KE samne B apna hath aage karti hai to wo deewar kisi darwaze ki tarah khul jati hai AURTHER aur B dono uske andr jate hai unke jate hi deewar apne AAP hi band ho jati hai fir B ek murti ke upar apna hath rakh Kar kuch kahti hai to wo murti zinda ho jati hai ye dekh Kar AURTHER buri tarah shock ho jata hai ye uski life ka sabse bada jhatka tha tabhi B piche mud Kar AURTHER ka shocked hua chehra dekh Kar kahti hai .

B - zaida shocked hone ki zarurat nahi hai ye sirf ek machine hai tabhi AURTHER kahta magar ye to abhi AURTHER ki bat Puri bhi nahi Hui thi KE B ne kaha real lagti hai na .khair ye sab choda tum bus apni training complete Karo tabhi AURTHER kahta magar Mai akele kaise training karunga tabhi B kahti hai akele thodi na karna hai ye hai na aur han yad rakhna tum ye ek power absorber bhi hai Yani ki tum dino jab ek dusre ke sharir ko chuoge Jo ki ladai ke dauran possible hai to ye machine bhi tum jitni hi mazbut hogi isliye tum yahan training karoge aur B waha se chali jati hai .aur phir M AURTHER ko kuch samjhane lagti hai .


( Machine ko Mai M likhunga jab Tak iska role hai )

Pahle kuch din Tak to M ne AURTHER ko sirf combat fighting ke bare me batlaya fir kuch din Tak Baki wepeon fighting ke bare me dikhaya fir aaya wokt priksha lene ka .

Is waqt dono maidan me the B ne ek shuraksha kawach us field ke Charo taraf bana Diya tha aur fir AURTHER aur wo machine ek dusre ke aapne jhuke aur apni apni position le li
 
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