Very good story lekin kahin kahin Urdu thori jyada use ho gayi hai aisa mujhe lagaa …. Overall story bahut sahi jaa rahi hai. Keep it up bro
Govind ka tarasanaa to dikh nahi raha ab kahin bhi shayad future mein aisa kuch ho …..
Waiting for the next update
Kahaanee ki saraahana ke liye dhanyavaad.
Haalaanki, apki tippaniyon ne 84 updates ke saath nyaay nahin kiya hai. Mein aisa kyon kah raha hoon kyonki aap bhee ek lekhak hain.
Koi baat nahin, bhavishy mein aapase aur adhik aur vistrt sameeksha dekhane kee ichchha hai. Aasha hai, aap udaarataapoorvak sahayog karate rahenge.