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thanks bhai and please let me know about the other updates as well.Nice and beautiful introduction of the story.....
thanks bhai and please let me know about the other updates as well.Nice and beautiful introduction of the story.....
Nice and lovely update....UPDATE 1
“ ahhhhhhh…. Ahhhhhhhhh.” pura kamra siskion se gunj utha aur uska hath bijli ki raftaar se apne lund par upar neeche hone laga. Uski aankhein band aur munh khula hua tha. Woh bed par peeth ke bal tangein failaye leta tha aur kamukta ke kaaran paseene se tar-b-tar ho chuka tha. Tabhi uske munh se ek anandmayi aah nikli aur kisi mahir muthal ki tarah pehli boond supade se nikalte hi dusra hath mein pakda towel paper us ke upar aa gaya. Usne apni kamar ko do teen jhatke diye aur kisi kate patang ki tarah woh bed par pasar gaya. Usne aankhein band kiye hi apne anubhawi hathon se paper ka geela tukda darwaje ke paas pade dustbin mein fenk diya.
Kareeb adhe ghante ke baad jab usne aankhein kholi toh samne deewar ghadi ka chhota kanta 3 par tha aur parde se gujr kar kamre mein pravesh kar rahi dhoop bahar ki bheeshan garmi ka ehsas karwa rahi thi. Khair kamre mein bina kapdon ke lete use thoda thand ka ehsas ho raha tha toh usne apne bagal mein pada AC ka remote utha kar temperature thoda badha diya. Usne remote ko rakha aur paas hi pade apne phone ko uthaya aur dekha toh uspar vinod ke 25 msg a chuke the. Usne bina msg padhe hi phone side par rakha aur vaise hi lete lete chhat ko ghurne laga.
“Ting Tong…Ting Tong…” Doorbell ki awaz uske kanon mein padi.
“Aa gayi teeno shayad se.” Usne bed se uthate huye muh mein badbadaya aur jameen par pade kapde pehanne laga. Tabhi doorbell fir se sunai di.
“Abe aa raha hun…” Usne chidhte kaha aur jaldi se kapde pehan kar apne kamre se bahar nikal gaya. Par tab tak doorbell ki awaz lagatar aane lagi. Use pata tha ki yeh Divya hi hogi. Woh bhaagte huye Darwaje par pahuncha aur usne samne apni teeno behno ko khade paya.
“Avi…. kya kar raha tha itni der…” Simran ne Darwaja khulte hi puchha.
Divya: kya kar raha hoga didi… aise hi pada hoga kisi kone mein.
Kiara: didi chalo na jaldi ander… ap aur bhaiya ladne baithe toh shaam ho jayegi. Dekho na kitni garmi hai bahar. (usne masoom si shakal bana kar kaha)
Aarav (aankh maslte huye): Sorry Simmi Di. main so raha tha ander.
“Mujhe sorry kon bolega Avi.” Divya ne apne dono hath kamar par rakhte huye kaha.
“Mera juta.” Aarav ne apne pairon ki taraf dekha “ohh maine toh kuch pehna hi nahi pairon mein. Tu ek kaam kar idhar ruk tab tak hum teeno ander jakar araam karte hain aur shaam ko juta pehan kar milta hun tere se.”
Aarav ki baat sun Kiara khilkhila kar hans padi aur usne apna hath utha kar Aarav ko taali di. Yeh sab dekh Divya aag babula ho uthi aur Aarav ko shayad marne ke liye age badh hi rahi thi ki Simran ne uske kandhe par hath rakh kar use rok liya.
Simran: Abhi tum log chup chap ander chalo nahi toh teeno ko dhoop mein bahar nikal dungi.
Simran ki baat sunte hi Kiara bhag kar ghar ke ander chali gayi aur Divya bhi Aarav ko ghoorte hue uske peeche peeche nikal gayi. Aarav use aise jate dekh halka sa muskura diya. Tabhi uska dhyan Simran par gaya jo uski hi tarf dekh rahi thi.
“Sorry di…” Aarav ki hansi ek second mein hi chhu mantar ho gayi jise dekh ab hasne ki baari Simran ki thi. “ kya di ab ap bhi Divya di ki tarah mera majak udane lage.”
“Agar tu didi uske samne bol diya kare toh is ghar ke aadhe kalesh khatam ho jayein.” Simran ne uske balon mein unglian ferte huye kaha. Uski Height apni maa ki hi tarah lambi thi aur Aarav ke 6 feet unche kad ke bawjud uske kandhe tak aa jati thi.
“Di agar hum dono ki ladayian band ho gayi toh apka kya kaam is ghar mein.” Aarav ne shararti si muskan ke sath kaha.
“Han ruk tu abhi… ab akar mangna mere se khana, extra pocket money, aur han meri car, aur mom-dad ke gusse se khud ko khud hi bacha lio ab se… mere paas mat ana kisi bhi kaam ke liye.” Simran munh fer kar ander jane hi lagi thi ki Aarav ne peeche se use apni bahon mein jakad liya. Usne apni dono bahein uske sapat pet se lapet di aur sir uske kandhe par tika kar usse ek dum chipak gaya.
“Sorry di…” Aarav ne uske kandhe ko chumte huye kaha. Par Simran ne koi bhi jawab nahi diya aur usne jaldi se Aarav ke hath apne pet se hataye aur bina kuch bole hall ki seedian chadhte huye upar apne kamre ki taraf bhag gayi. Aarav wahin darwaje par hairan sa khada raha. Use samajh mein nahi a raha tha ki itne chhote se majak ke liye Simran usse itna gussa kaise ho gayi. Jabki woh hamesha koi na koi shararat karta hi rehta tha. Divya aur papa ko chhod aur koi bhi kabhi use dant ta nahi tha uski nautankion ke liye. Upar se Simran toh hamesha use sabse jyada pyar karti thi. Uske is tarah ke response se Aarav bhi thoda aahat ho gya tha. Usne bujhe man se darwaja band kiya aur wapis apne kamre mein chala gaya.
Bed par pada uska phone fir se flash ho raha tha. Usne paas jakar dekha toh vinod ka call tha. Usne call pick kiya.
“Han bhai… bol kya hua.” Aarav mayus si awaj mein bola.
Vinod: Sale tu theek toh hai na? Maine itne sare msg kiye, call bhi kiya kitni baar… uthaya kion ni be?
Aarav: kuch ni yaar ghar par akela tha aj. Mamma papa kisi kaam se mama ke ghar gaye the aur behnein kahin park- bark mein gayi thi shayad se.
Vinod: sale toh tu kya ghar pe gaand mara raha tha. Main subah se cricket khelne ke liye msg kar raha hun.
Aarav: kya be lodu… itni garmi mein jhaant sulghane hain kya tujhe. Sunday ke din bhi ghar pe nahi tika jata tere se.
Vinod: sale Gym bhi toh jata hai. Wahan kya tere ko paseena sunghne ka shauk hai?
Aarav: bhai kion bakchodi kar raha hai. Gym ki baat alag hai.
Vinod: han…. Lauda mera… sale main janta hun udhar legging wali laudian taadta hai tu.
Aarav: nahi yaar… Gym nahi jaunga toh fir se pet nikalne lagega aur bhai college mein aa gaye hum log aur aaj tak ek bhi gf nahi hai hamari. Kab tak apna haath jagannath karte rahenge.
Vinod: vaise teri baat toh sahi hai, main bhi soch raha tha gym jane ki. Thode abs wagera honge toh main bhi sexy lagunga. Upar se mere pados ki auntian bhi udhar ki gaand matkati hain aj kal. (hanste huye)
Aarav: sale aise toh ban gaye dole tere, thoda dedication dikha bsdk.
Vinod: bhai kya karun yaar socha tha college ake choot milegi par 2 mahine nikal gaye aur abhi tak kisi ladki se hlo tak nahi bola.
Aarav: han yaar… maine toh khud aj 2 baar muth peli. Sala ghar pe jab akela hota hun control hi nahi hota.
Vinod: isiliye bol raha hun cricket khelne aja nahi toh gym mein bahaye paseene ka ras tatton ke raaste nikal jayega.
Aarav: han theek hai sham ko milte hai starbucks pe.
Vinod: Ground mein aaja… Cricket khel lenge.
Aarav: nahi bhai aj nahi… sham ko 7 baje milte hain.
Fir Aarav ne phone rakh diya aur khud washroom ki taraf fresh hone chal pada. Uske dimag mein abhi bhi Simran ka yunn gussa hona khatak raha tha.
thank you bhai, keep supporting aur apna review bhi batayein agar kuchh behtar kar skaun.Nice and lovely update....
Nice and awesome update....UPDATE 2
"Kya hua bhai?... jab se idhar aaya hai aise hi chup chap sa baitha hai." Vinod ne Aarav ko khyalon mein khoya dekh puchha.
Aarav: kuch nahi yaar… aise hi ek baat samajh mein nahi a rahi.
Vinod: kya hua…mere ko bata kya pata koi help kar sakun teri.
Aarav: yaar di aaj mere se gussa ho gayi.
Vinod(hanste huye): abe to ismein kya badi baat hai woh toh hamesha gussa hi rehti hai tere se.
Aarav: yaar main Divya ki baat nahi kar raha… Simmi di.
Vinod: kion bhai aisa kaise ho gaya. Simmi di gussa aur woh bhi tere se?
Aarav: pata nahi yaar… dopehar se main v bas yahi soch raha hun. Maine kabhi didi ko kisi ke sath gussa hote nahi dekha aur mere se gussa toh baat hi dur ki hai.
Vinod: achha… pehle bata ki akhir baat kya huyi.
Aarav ne vinod ko apne majak ki puri baat bata di.
Vinod: bhai ise sunne ke baad to aur jyada confuse ho gaya hun. Ismein toh gussa hone ki koi baat hi nahi hai. Shayad se di tere sath mazak kar rahi hongi.
Aarav: han yaar mere ko yahi laga tha toh isiliye maine unhein manane ki bhi koshish Ki par wo ulta aur jyada gussa hokar apne kamre mein bhaag gayi. Uske baad woh neeche ayi hi nahi.
Vinod: acha?... mere bhi kuch samajh mein nahi a raha. Par shayad se baat kuch aur ho.
Aarav: kya pata… soch raha hun abhi ghar jake unse ek baar fir baat karne ki try karun. May be kuch pata chale.
Vinod: han par pehle coffee toh peele.
Vinod ne ek coffee ka cup Aarav ki taraf badhate huye kaha aur ek khud peene laga. Tabhi Aarav ka dhyan coffee ke cup par likhe naam par gaya. DIVANSH.
Aarav: bhosdike… yeh kiski coffee utha laya.
Vinod: abe peele… hamari hi hai.
Aarav: toh yeh Divansh kon hai?
Vinod: abe woh dekh… kitni sundar ladki order le rahi hai. Ab usne cup par likhne ko naam puchha toh Vinod thode na bolta.
Aarav: sale tu v ajeeb namuna hai.
Fir dono wahin baithe bakchodi pelte rahe aur ladkian taadte rahe. Bhale hi starbucks ki coffee kitni v mehangi ho par idhar aakar mast ladkian taadne ka jo awsar in logon ko milta tha uske liye toh yeh dono apna ghar baar sab luta dete.
Aarav: bhai kya mast haryali hai aj toh idhar.
Vinod: kya fayada bhai… hamare dil toh abhi bhi banjar hi hain.
Vinod ne apne dil par hath rakhte huye kaha.
Aarav: kya yaar jab dekho tu yahi baat ko lekar baitha rehta hai. Bhai kuch aur bhi soch liya kar.
Vinod: aur sale kya hi sochun. Padhai mein hum thehre ek dum nikkame, koi talent hum mein hai nahi. Ab zindagi se bas ek hi umeed hai ki koi kanya mil jaye toh hum chain se jee sakein. Warna zindagi ke sab armaanon ki chita saja kar baithe hain. Bas aag lagana baki hai. Soch raha hun sanyasi ban jaun bhenchod.
Aarav ne Vinod ke kandhe par hath rakh kar kaha : "bhai tere halaat mujhe theek nahi lag rahe. Sale itna v kya nakaratmak sochna. Abhi hamari umar hi kya hai."
Vinod: bhai tera phir bhi theek hai. Ghar ke do do businesses hain. Kisi ek ke galle par baith jayega par bhai hamara toh baap bhi thehra sarkari naukar. 60 saal ka hote hi government gaand pe laat maar bhaga degi upar se pension pata nahi bsdk dete hain yah nahi. Agar mere yahi halaat rahe toh kahin majduri karni padegi.
Aarav: bhosdike… agar itni hi fikar hai toh yeh starbucks pe kion gaand marwata hai ake.
Vinod: bhai yeh toh investment hai. Dekh idhar ati hain bade bade ghar ki kanyaein. Agar kabhi kisi ke sath setting ho gayi toh apna sara kharcha sood samet wapis ho jayega.
Aarav: acha toh…
Tabhi Aarav ke phone ki ghanti baji aur usne apna phone jeb se nikal kar dekha toh Simran ka msg tha. "Avi… mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai. Abhi ghar a sakta hai kya?"
Aarav (text pe): han di. Aya bas das minute.
Aarav(Vinod se): chal bhai… main nikalta hun. Didi ko kuch kaam hai.
Vinod(khus hote huye): are wah… lagta hai teri problem sulat gayi khud hi… chal main v chalta hun ghar ab.
Aarav: meri coffee ke paise le lio mere se baad mein yaad karke. Faltu mein sunayega nahi toh..
Vinod: chal be bsdk. Jyada dhani raam banne ki jarurat nahi hai. Itne bhi bure din nahi aye mere.
Woh dono udhar se apne apne raaste nikal gaye.
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Aarav jaise hi ghar pahuncha toh uske mom dad wapis aa chuke the aur woh dono hall mein Divya aur Kiara ke sath baithe TV dekh rahe the. Aarav jaise hi ander aya toh uske papa ki nazar us par padi.
Vikram: aa gaye sahebzade… awaragardi karke.
Aarav: kya yaar papa… ap ate hi lag jao daant ne mujhe… yaar mumma bolo na kuch inhe.
Itna bolte huye Aarav jakar apni maa ki god mein baith gaya aur apne hath unke gale mein daal liye. Uski maa ne uske mathe par hath fera aur hug kar liya.
"Han doodh v pila de ab ise… thak gaye honge lafandar giri karke." Vikram ne TV ke channel badlte huye kaha.
Shivani: ap kuch lihaz karo bolne se pehle… bachon ke samne aisi batein shobha deti hain kya apko.
Vikram: shobha toh yeh harkatein bhi nahi deti is umar mein. (Aarav ki taraf dekhte huye) iski tangein tod dega boj se… ghoda ho gaya hai par akal ek duani ki nahi hai ismein. Pata ni kis mahaan ghadi srujna huyi hai in mahanuvav ki.
Divya(khus hote hue): lagta hai papa aj form mein hain.
Shivani(Divya ko ghoor kar): chup kar tu shakuni mama… sara din baap beti mere bache ke peeche pade rehte ho. Aur aap (Vikram) toh kuch boliye hi mat. Apke lakshan batane baithi na jawani ke, toh raat gujar jayegi. Umar hai bachon ki mauj masti karne ki, karne dijiye. Sara din kud kud karoge toh jaldi bistar pakad lena hai apne.
Vikram(sofe se uth kar): ab do minute baith bhi nahi sakte is ghar mein.
Itna bol kar woh ghar se bahar jane laga.
"Main suresh ke paas ja raha hun. Dinner ke time aa jaunga." Darwaje se hi chila kar bola aur bahar chala gaya.
Shivani(hanste huye): gaye chinta parshad apne yaar se chuglian ladane.
Aarav: han Vinod bata raha tha ki papa aur Suresh uncle unki baithak mein baithe hum dono ki burai hi karte hain bas.
Divya: toh aur kya woh tumhari tareef ke kaseede padhein… kuch dhang ka kaam karo toh kion unka BP high ho sara time. Mujhe toh lagta hai tum dono un logon ko pareshan karne ke liye hi paida hue ho.
Aarav: han beta tu toh badi kalpana chawla hai na. Mere se 2 saal badi hai… fir bhi kya hi ukhaad liya tune.
Shivani: aj kal na is ghar mein kisi ki juban se phool nahi girte… sab angaar ugalte hain. Aur Avi beta uthja please ab sach mein tangein toot jani hai meri.
Aarav(god se khade hokar): chal theek hai maate hum ne apki binti sun li hai… ap se baad mein bhent karte hain abhi Didi shree ko kuch kaam hai mujhse.
Itna bol kar Aarav ne Divya ke sir par ek tapli maari aur upar chala gaya.
Divya: maa dekho na yeh kya harkatein karta hai sara din. Fir ap iski side leti ho.
Shivani(Divya ke sir sehlate huye): koi na bache… chhota hai tere se. Tu v toh Simran ko kitna pareshan karti thi.
Divya: kya yaar mom… hamesha yahi bol dete ho ap. Woh abhi bada hoke ghoda ho gaya hai. Kab tak mere naak mein dum karta rahega.
Udhar Aarav seedha Simran ke kamre ke bahar pahuncha aur dekha toh darwaja ander se band tha usne knock kia aur bola. "Didi ander a jaun?"
"Han aja…" andar se Simran ki awaj ayi. Jise sun Aarav ko kuch ghabrahat si huyi aur usne fat se darwaja khola. Use jis baat ka shak tha wahi hua andar Simran apne bed par ghutnon mein sar dabaye subak rahi thi.
thank you bhaiNice and awesome update....