Adultery Laa-Waaris .... Adult + Action +Thrill (Completed)

[asadjee]

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[asadjee]

Congratulations for 300pages

bohut bohut shukriya....

 

[asadjee]

Ab Raja ka tandav shuru hone wala hai.Dekhana hai Naina kuchh samajh pati hai ya nahi

thanks bhai...... raja kaa tandav to shru hona hi tha bhai. bohut dard bhi to diye han raja aur uske pariwar ko.. naina bhi jald hi kucn to samjhegi

 

[asadjee]

Awesome update bro

suhkriya bhai

 

[asadjee]

Mast update hai Bhai

bohut bohut shukriya bhai

 

[asadjee]

Bahut hi mast kahani he....Update ki pratiksha rehti he ki kab update aayega..Isi tarah update dete rahiye

bohut bohut shukriya suraj bhai..!!................ zarur update time par hi aati rahengi.....

 

[asadjee]

Zabardast fantastic update

bohut bohut shukriya bilal bhai

 

[Alok]

Now waiting for Monday and next update asad bhai....

 

[asadjee]

Abb tak ke saare update padh liye, kahani ki rochakta ko bahut hi khubi se piroye huye aage le jaa rhe hai asad bhai,kahani ka suruaat ek aise roop me huaa , jisse padhkar aapke liye taarif ke shabd kam pad rahe, suruaat me jungle ka scene, usme raja, rana( renu), sanjay, aur chautha ka naam dimag se abhi filhaal nikal gya, inki doshti ka jo drishya aapke kalam dwara darshaya gaya hai, kya hi kahun mai, ekdam lajabab. Uske baad rana ki sachayi samne aana, ki wo rana nhi balki renu hai... Aur uske baad raja aur renu ke beech wo mohabbat ke pal... Shayad hi kisi writer ko aisa likhte dekha hai maine.
Fir jungle se nikalna, sanjay ke family se milna... In sab vyathao ko aapne apne uttam lekhni se jivant kar diya hai asad bhai.
Uske baad jo kahani ne u turn liya... Ekdam se poori kahani hi badalne lagi... Wo raja aur renu ka alag hona.... Raja ke life me akhil aur sanjay ka ek khalnayak ban ke samne aana. Fir raja pe jo torture kiya gya wo... Raja ko goli marna... Renu ka wo dil cheer dene wala rudan jo apne raja ko marte dekh rhi thi.... In sab lekhni ne mera dil chura liya asad bhai... Ab kya hi kahunnn... Jus fabulous.
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Uske baad kahani me aya supernatiral twist.... Raja ka baba se milna.., sandhu ji se milna..., usse powers milna.... Ye sab baate kabile tareef thi.
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Ussi parkar naina ke life ka scene bhi aapne bahut khubi se piro kar likha hai.... Naina ka underword se yun bekhauf hi kar ladna, aapne issi se bata diya tha ki naina ek sharir aur powerful ladki hai.
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Idhar raja jab baba ke pas se vapas aaya to sanjay ke family konani darindgi bhi dikha diya... Wahi darindgai aah poora shirdi dekh raha tha....
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Filhal naina aur raja ek hi sahar me hai, aur dono ek dusre ke baare bahut achhi tarah se jante hai... Ab bas ye dekhne dilchasp hoga ki naina, raja ko pehchabe gi kaise....
Baaki bas yahi kahna chahunga... Niyamit rahe... Hame aapki update ki besabri se intezaar rahta hai

bohut bohut shukriya..
ye kahani thi hi ek munfard kahani.. meri koi bhi kahani ho use main dilse hi likhta hon bhai.... is kahani me raja ek alag hi soch ka malik tha.. fir usme himmat bhi bohut thi.
khud ko talash karne ka jabza bhi bohut tha usme .. usi ke chalte wo island se bhagne me safal hua.. bhagne k is safar me uski team me se har ek ek puri puri himmat aur yahjehti ka saboot dia.. raja ko renu bhi isi safr me mili aur uski life aur bhi khubsurat hogai....
raja ki zindagi me hamesha se hi dard rahe the.. shehar me aane k baad bhi use dard hi mile.. uski renu ko usse juda kar dia gaya.. renu ne bhi apne raja ko bachane ke liye pyar ki ek misal kayam kardi........
wahi se raja totally badal kar reh gaya..
fir waqt guzarne ke sath sath raja me bohut se badlaao aaye.. renu bhi save ho gai.. aur raja fir apni renu ko pamaal karne walun par toot pada..
age chal kar raja ko apni family ko dhundne ka ek clue mila to raja bohut khush hua aur aage ke safar par nikal pada....... raja ko pata chala k uski ek behen bhi hai to raja bohut khush ho gaya aur abb wo pane priwar ko , apne dushmano ko apni naina ko dhundne k liye shirdi me maujud hai..

dekhte han samay kya kuch lekar aata hai dono k liye..

bohut bohut shukriya Ashwathama ji lawaris ke is safar me hamare sath shamil hone k liye........

 

[asadjee]

Wahhhh asadjee bhai. Kya shandar Update hai.
Acha kiya aapne ek sath tin Update diye warna bs itna padh kr man nahi manta.
Aur aapki ye story mujhe ab himmatwala se bhi dhasoo lagne lagi hai.
Itna suspect drama hai ki kya batau.
Apna raja chlo ab apne bare me kaam ka to bahut kuch jaan gaya hai. Ab kuch na se acha itna sb to hai hi.
Aur usne bikul sahi dimak lagaya hai suru se. Ki phle police wale ko lapeta usase such ka kuch kuch pata kiya.
Fir. Comm ko lapeta ab uske baad businesses man ke piche pad gaya. Sahi hai. Aise to apni naina bhi kl jaan jayegi. Raja jinda hai aur isi sahar me hai.
Wahhh maja aa gaya.

bohut bohut shukriya valentine rider:-
updates de kr aap ka khayal to rakhna hi padega na bhai.... aap sabb mujhse aur meri story se jude hue han to jo asth juda hua ho uska khayal to rakhna hi padta hia...... and thanks jo is kahani ko himmatwala se bhi badhkar sarah rahe han aap..
dimag to raja lagaye ga hi..... taqat ke sath sath raja dimag me bhi to best ho gaya hai..

 

[asadjee]

Wahhhh asadjee bhai. Ek se badh kr ek Update hai.
Raja ne to such me kahar dhaya diya shirdi me maja aa gaya.
Apne dusmano ko ek bahut hi bada jhatka de diya sath me apne pariwaar ka pura nahi to 10percent hi badala to le liya jo mehnat in sb ne 19 saal me ki thi wo sari raja ne ek raat me khtam kr di.
Wahhhh ab dekhte hai. 3rd Update me aur kitna maja aata hai.

thanks bhai..!!
qahar to dahna hi tha bhai raja ko.. jo kuch wo jaana hai wo itna dard bhara hai k raja sehn hi nahi kar paaya.. najane uske pariwar me kaun kaun mara hoga. jatin uncle mare gaye.. laila ka kahin kuch pata nahi hai...