UPDATE - 1
Hello dosto maiho vishal ye kahani meri hi zubani chalegi mai pehle apko apne barey mai batado mai 20 saal ek acha kasha balisht nawjawan ho aur logon ka kehna ke smart bhi bohut houn aur wo sach hi kehte honge kyunki meri Maa bhi bohut zyada hi khoobsurat hai aisa nahi ki ghar ke bakhi log ache nahi dhikte balki sabhi ki apni apni khobsurti hai aur mai apne pariwar ka ek louta ladka hone se bohut zyada LAADLAA ho.
Mai gao mai apne pariwar ke sath rehta ho aur kheti ka kaam dekhta houn. Humare pass bohut hi zameen hai aur uspe tarah tarah kheti aur bagechi hai jinpe gao log kaam Karte hai.
Ab atey hai mere ghar pe to humara ghar humare pariwar ke hisab se hi bada hai 2 floor ka ghar hai jisme neeche 4 room aur kitchen aur haal hai aur ek bathroom hai. Ek room maa ka hai ek bade papa ka ek chote papa ka aur ek room dadi ka hai. First floor par 3 room hai with attach bathroom jisme se ek mera waise mai jab jiske sath chahe unke room mai hi rehta ho kyunki kabhi dadi to kabhi maa log mujhe apne sath hi sola lete hai aur ek taniya ka aur ek room tiya didi log ka hai jab wo yaha ati hai to rehne ke liye jo unka hi tha shadi se pehle.
Second floor par bhi 3 room hai jo ki bua log jab atey hai to wo wahi rehte hai aur upar khola chat aur ek store room jisme un-used samaan rakha rehta hai.
Aap log sonch rahe hoge ki gao mai bhi aisa ghar to batado ki humara gao Acha developed hai dusre gao ke hisab se isliya dadaji ne ghar ko shehar ke hisab se banaya tha bacho ke liye.
Roz ki tarah hi subah uthkar naha dhoke nashta karke mai apne kheto ki taraf nikal pada kaam ka jayeza lene, wahan pahonchkar maine dekha ki bade papa aur chote papa bhi apne kaam mai lagey huwe they unko maine bohut baar bola hai ki aplog sirf baith kar kaam dikhayi itne mazdoor to kaam ke liye par wo log meri sunte nahi kehte hai beta kaam karne ki Hume adat hai aur rehta bhi konsa zyada kaam sab to mazdoor hi kardete hai. Mujhe kher mai dhekti hi bade papa bole
B. Papa: arey beta vishal agaya
Mai: ji B.papa abhi hi aya
B. Papa: aur beta nashta to karliya na
Mai: ji
C. Papa: bete apke shehar jao to ache beej lete ana pichli baar ki tarah is baar fasal achi huwi tumahre laye huwe beej ache they
Mai :ji letey aonga
Mai zara baki mazdooro bhi dekhleta houn aur unhe bhi kuch zaroorat hai kya pochleta houn
C papa: Acha beta dekhlo aur zara aam ke baagh mai bhi dekhlena beta tumne bohut Acha kiya jo aam ke bagh bhi banadiye usse bhi amdani achi ho rahi hai
Mai: ji dekhlonga waha bhi
Aise mai khet mai sabhi mazdoor ka kaam dekhne mai laga huwa tha aur wahi ek kone mai sumitra kaki kuch takhi se baithi howi thi sumitra kaki bhi mere hi gao ki mahila hai apne pati aur ek beti ke sath rehti hai inka pati kuch kaam ka nahi hai din bhar sharab ke nashe mai kahi bhi pada rehta hai aur ye bechari mehnat mazdoori karke apna ghar chalati hai
Mai : arey kaki kya huwa bohut thaki huwi lagrahi ho
S. Kaki: arey kuch nahi malik bas zara tabiyat kharab thi abhi kaam pe lagti ho
Mai: kaki aap ko kitni baar bola hai ki mujhe malik na boliye beta boliye aur ab bataiye kya huwa apko
S. Kaki: kuch nahi beta kal raat se kuch tabiyat kharab hai
Mai: phir aap aaj kaam pe kyu ayi hai apko to aram karna chahiye tha na
S. Kaki: Beta tumhe to pata hai ki tumahre kaka kuch kaam Daam nahi karte aise mai bhi agar ghar baithi to ghar kaise chalega
Mai: aap pehle mere sath chaliye mai aapko ghar chod donga aur jab tak aap thik nahi hojati apko aney ki zaroorat nahi hai aur mai apke paise bhi nahi katonga chaliye
S. Kaki: arey rehne do beta utni bhi kharab nahi thodi der sahi hojayegi
Mai: kaki maine apko kya bola bas wahi kariye chaliye
Kaki ko leke mai unke ghar nikal pada B. Papa ko batake
Mai: B. Papa mai kaki ko unke ghar chodne ja raha ho inki tabiyat kuch kharab hai aur ye 3-4 khet nahi ayegi
B. Papa: thik hai beta bohut Ache chod do bichari hi pora ghar chala rahi hai pati to pikar pata nahi kaha pada rehta hai
Aur kaki ko lekar mai nikal pada unse kamzori ke karan sahi se chala bhi nahi ja raha tha pehle se se tabiyat sahi nahi thi ab dhop ke karan aur kamzoori ho gayi thi maine hi unko sahara deke chalne laga
Mai: kaki jab apko pata tha ke tabiyat sahi nahi hai to aap ko aaj ghar se nahi nikal na chahiye tha
Kaki: Beta mujhe laga zara bhokar hai kuch der mai kaam hojayega.
Kaki ko sahara dene ke liye maine kaki ka ek hath apne khande par dal liya tha aur apna ek hath kaki ke kamar mai itne saalo baad kisi mard ki itne kharib aur chuhe janey se kaki ke sharir mai aur garmi badrahi thi jiska mujhe pata nahi tha kyonki tab mere dimag mai sirf kaki ko ghar chohdna hi tha
Kaki(Maan mai) :kitna acha hai ye ladka jo har kisi ki parwah karta hai humesha logon ki madat karta hai aur kitna pyaara aur mazboot hai kaise meri kamar ko pora tham liya hai aur iske chone se hi jisam mai kitni garmi badrahi hai.
Aise hi baat karte huwe hum kaki ke ghar tak pahoonch gaye kaki ghar bohut chota tha do kamre ka jisme ek mai inki beti aur ek mai Yeh rehte they kaki ki ladki ka Naam chinki hai aur wo us Waqt ghar mai hi thi kuch kaam Karte huwe humey dekhte hi wo jaldi humare pass ayi
Chinki:arey maa kya howa tujhe to thik to hai na
Mai:arey chinki kuch nahi huwa hai bas thodi si kamzoori Hogayi hai bhokar ke karan
Chinki:bola tha maine ke aaj mat ja par meri sunti hi kaha hai
Chinki ek 19 saal ki ache jism ki malkin thi aur zyada tar apne ghar mai ados pados mai saheliyo ke sath hi rehti hai
Maine kaki ko wahi ghar ki charpayi pe baitha diya aur wahi khada raha
Kaki: arey chinki kuch nahi sirf dhop ki wajah se thodi kamzoori Hogayi hai aur mujhe beta tum baitho waha se mujhe sambhal ke laye ho aur chinki ja pani lekar aa vishal ke liye
Chinki:mujhe pani dete huwe ye lo vishal aur kaha ho aaj kal dikhte hi nahi
Mai: mai kaha rahoonga khet mai ye phir ghar par hi rehta ho
Chinki: wo tumahre aam ke bagiche mai aam to lag gaye honge mujhe kuch chahiye they
Mai: arey 2-3 din baad akey lelena mai tod kar dedonga aur kaki se acha kaki mai chalta ho aur aap ye paise rakhiye kuch paise detey huwe aur aram kariye jab tabiyat bilkul thik hojaye Tabhi ana
Kaki: shukriya beta jo tumne itna khayal kiya jeete raho
Chinki : phir mai aongi aam lene
Mai: ajana mai tod kar dedonga Acha chalta houn
Waha se mai sidha aam ke bagiche ki aor nikal pada waha ka kaam dekhne ke baad phir se kheto mai B. Papa ke log ke pass agaye mujhe dekhte hi
B. Papa:arey beta agaya son to ghar jakey khana kar kuch aram karle dophaher Hogayi aur mai ek ladke ko bhejdonga usey mera aur chote ka khana dekar bhej dena hum yahi kahkar room mai aram karlenge
Mai: ji thik hai aur mai waha se ghar ki aur nikal pada ghar pahonch te hi Badi Maa ne mujhe dekhliya
B. Maa: agaya mera beta Jaa jaldi hath moh dhole mai tera khana lagati ho aur B. Papa log nahi aye
Mai : nahi B. Maa unka khana ladke ke hath se bheja dijiye wo wahi kahlenge
B. Maa: thik hai to jaldi aa mai tera khana lagati houn humne bhi nahi khaya sirf teri dadi ne hi khaya
Mai:OK mai bahar bane bathroom mai hi hath moh dhoke haal mai agaya dining table par
Choti maa aur maa bhi agayi thi wo bhi kitchen mai hi thi B. Papa log ka khana ban rahi thi
Taniya didi bhi wahi agayi thi khana khane waise mare aur taniya didi ke beech zyada baat nahi hoti hai aisa nahi hai ke hum ek dusre ko pasand nahi karte wo bhi mujhse bohut pyaar karti hai aur mai bhi unse par pata nahi kyu hum zyada baat nahi karte utne mai Choti maa bhi khana lekar agayi aur unke piche Maa aur Badi Maa bhi humne khana start kiya
Maa:mujhse aur beta kaam kaise chalraha hai aur ab tum hi sab dekhrahe ho to apne B. Papa aur C. Papa ko kuch aram diya karo
Mai: sab Acha chalraha hai maa aur b. Papa ko bola bhi ki ab aram karlo par apko to pata hai wo meri kaha sonte din bhar c. Papa ke sath khet mai hi rehte hai
B. Maa: to bhi ab wo log utna kaam nahi karte aur unko ghar baithne ki adat bhi nahi hai isliye thoda bohut sahi karte rehte hai
C. Maa: waise bhi mera beta unhe konsa zyada kaam karne deta hai
Aise batey karte huwe humne khana khaiya aur khana khate hi mai apna maa ke kamre mai hi chala gaya sone aur bakhi log apne apne kamre chalegaye aram karne
Mera room mai akey letne ke kuch der baad hi maa bhi kamre mai agayi aur mere sath hi letgayi aram karne maa is Waqt light sky blue sari mai thi aur wo bohut humesha ki tarah bohut pyaari lagrahi thi waise ghar sab sadi hi pahente hai sirf taniya hi suit shalwar pahenti hai
Maa ke leth thi hi maine ne bhi unko apne baho mai bhar liye ye humari beech aam tha sirf maa ke sath hi nahi mai apni dadi B. Maa aur C. Maa ke sath bhi aise hi rehta houn
Maa mere balo mai hath pherte huwe mujhse ye wo bate karti rahi aur mai bhi unke jawab dete dete waisi hi so gaya aur phir sham ke time par utha tab maa mere pass nahi thi maibhi uthke fresh hoke phir apne khet ki aor nikal pada waha kuch der bita ne ke baad B. Papa ko bata kar nikal pada B. Papa aur C. Papa khet ke room mai hi rukne wale they waise bhi wo zyada tar wahi rehte they waha se mai sidha manoj ke ghar nikal pada wo ghar ke bahar hi mujhe milgaya aur hum dono sath mai hi gao ke chaurahe bane ped ke pass nikal pade hum dono aksar hi wahi baith kar batey karte hai kyunki is time waha koi nahi rehta
Manoj : aur bhai suna kaise chalraha
Mai:yaar tujhe to pata hai bas kaam hi dekhne mai din nikal jata hai to suna kuch
Manoj: mera kya hai bhai same teri tarah hi hai aur bata koi ladki patayi hai ya nahi tujhe waise bhi gao ki itni ladkiya line deti hai
Mai: yaar tujhe to pata hi hai mujhe utna intrest nahi hai to bata koi patayi hai kiya keh kar maine smile kardi
Manoj: Abey tujhe to pata hai meri asliyat ke barey
Mai yaha batadon ki manoj ka land mai taqat nahi hai usey bachpan se hi usne kamzori hai wo 1 minute se zyada tikta nahi hai aur ye baat usne mere alawa kisi aur se kabhi nahi kahi hai humne shaher jakar doctor ko bhi dikhaya par uski dawa ka bhi koi asar nahi howa
Mai: Abey tension mat ke yaar dawaye lete ja dekhte hai kabhi na kabhi sahi hojayega isi tarah ki batey karte huwe hum kuch der baad apne apne ghar nikal pade
Ghar atey hi maa ne mujhe khana diya aur usey kahkar mai dadi ke room mai chal diya unke sath soney.......
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