Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

Thank You So Much Dosto Aap sabke Comments ke liye..... waise aaj Dopeher me discharge ho gaya, ab pehle se kafi rahat mehsus ho rahi he.... And Update Will Be Out on Sunday 9 PM.... Actually jab 21st Update post kiya tha, tabhi 22 adha likh chuka tha, lekin uske baad kuch bhi nahi kar paya, aaj Update pura kar ke kal raat post kar dunga, Till Then Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

Ab to mara mari vala update aayega

Behatrin update bro

Superb update

Fantastic update bro

Bhai bahat achchha laga ye update...next update thoda fast dena please...

Sahi bol rhe ho bhai

Fantastic update
Dekhte hai shahid bachta hai ya mrta hai..

Amazing update

Bahut khoob.......

Awesome update

इक्कीसवाँ भाग

तो शाहिद और कविता का साक्षी को बदनाम करने के लिए बिछाए गए जाल में साक्षी फंस ही जाती है। शिक्षक के नाम पर कलंक वो शिक्षक अपनी किताब जानबूझकर क्लास में भूल जाता है और जब साक्षी किताब देने जाती है तो उसके साथ गंदी हरकत करने की कोशिश करता है।

प्रिंसिपल को साक्षी पर भरोसा था इसलिए उसने उस शिक्षक को निलंबित करके पुलिस के हवाले कर दिया, लेकिन तब तक साक्षी बदनाम हो चुकी थी। कॉलेज के हर विद्यार्थी की जुबान पर साक्षी का ही नाम था लेकिन मानसी की वजह से कोई बोल नहीं पा रहा था।

उधर जब अक्ष को पता चलता है तो वो साक्षी को सुलाकर रात में उस शिक्षक के घर जाता है और खूब कुटाई करके सच उगलवा लेता है। साक्षी अपनी नस काटने की कोशिश करती है लेकिन सही समय पर अक्ष उसे बचा लेता है।

लगता है अगला भाग ढिसुम ढिसुम वाला होगा। मज़ा आएगा।

बहुत बेहतरीन सर जी।

Superb update bro

A person's honor means a lot to him and today Shahid, Kavita and professor of that college have done a lot wrong by proving the honor of Sakshi in front of everyone, It is very important to punish them, I feel very bad seeing this and this thing is happening about the dignity of a girl, then it is like a fire that keeps on spreading. Well, Aksh is angry but he should not take any wrong step in anger, I am worried about this.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Nice and excellent update...

mast updte bro

nice update ..to sakshi ki ijjat khatm karne ke liye us professor ka istemal kiya kavita aur shahid ne .
aur wo kamina maan gaya ..
us professor ko to achche se dhoya aksh ne aur sach jaan liya ..
par ye sakshi itna bada kadam utha rahi thi par sahi waqt par aksh ne aakar usko rok liya ..

ab shahid ke saath kya karega aksh dekhte hai .
aur ab mansi kavita se dosti rakhti hai ya nahi ye bhi dekhte hai ..waise mansi ne sakshi ka saath dekar achche dost hone ka sabit kar diya ..

Nice story. Carry on.

Waiting bro

Super update

Too good writing brother
Ab dekhana ye hoga ki shahid ki kaisi watt lagegi.
Waiting brother.

Bhai Umda kahani hai main ne kuch waqt pehle he iss ko parhna shuru kia sach me bohat achi kahani hai ap ki kahani se mujhe bohat kuch seekhne ko mila hai bhai Jis ka main bohat shukar guzar hu Aise he update dete rahiye bhai Love you bhai ❣

Waiting for next update

Wow so nice story beautiful

 

[Qaatil]

Dosto sachme aap sabke Best Wishes ke liye bahot bahot shukriya.... Shayad isi wajah se bilkul thik ho kar ghar laut aya hu me.... Warna to kafi darawna mahol tha.... Khair, ab wo baate jane dete he.... Dopeher me ghar agaya tha me, or baat kare next update ki to jab 21st update post kiya tha, us waqt 22 ka half part likh chuka tha... Lekin uske baad ye dab hota chala gaya to fir aage kuch likh nahi paya.... Aaj us update ko complete kar dunga, or kal Raat ko post kar dunga.... Or ha, fir se bahot bahot shukriya aap sabke Best Wishes ke liye....
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

Take care your health...

Get well soon as possible

Apna khayal rakhiye.. get well soon..

Take rest bro..

Take care urself sir....take rest & get well soon

Take care

Get well soon

Don't Worry Bhai dekhna jald hi thik ho jaoge

Get well soon and take care with carefully and one more thing don't panic....

apna khayal rakho ...

apna khyal rakhna bhai ji
Jaldi thik hokar khbar dena yha bhi

get well soon bro.....

हमारी दिल से दुआ है आप जल्दी स्वास्थ्य हो ा

Don't worry sir dekhna aap bht jldi thk ho jaoge or vpis aajoge ......
Get well soon ❤

tension na leo sab theek ho jayega bas kuch dino ki baat hai aur mai aapke jaldi se theek hone ki kaamna karta hun

Get Well Soon

Bhai koi dikkat nahi hai aap think ho ke kahani likhe GOOD BLESS YOU ♥♥♥
COME BACK HOME

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Hamari Dua hai aap jald hi theek ho jayege..........

बहुत बुरा लगा सुनकर सर जी।

सबसे पहले आप एकदम स्वस्थ हो जाइए उसके बाद कहानी लिखिएगा।
आपके स्वास्थ्य से ज्यादा कहानी मायने नहीं रखती।

बाकी आप जैसे अच्छे रचनाकार के साथ हर पाठक की दुआ साथ है।

get well soon bro

Shandar jaandar or jabardast update tha yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

We are waiting sir app jldi jldi se thk ho kar vpis aa jao....
M Aapke jldi se thk hone kii god se prey krungi ❤❤❤

Kuchh nahi hoga bhai....

PParam pita aapko shighra hi sehatmand karen....

Get well soon

Hope to see you well soon my all best wishes are with you bro take care

Aap swasth ho jainge bhai....

Ab halat kaisi hai qaatil bhai

Get well soon

Everything will be fine brother just be positive aur han agar kisi bhi tarah se mein aap ki help kar saktha hun tho i will be available brother ❤❤ zaldi se swasth hoke aajaye

Waiting

bhai aap comment padhne me dilchaspi mat lo ..bas aapki sehat sahi ho gayi ye jaankar khushi huyi ..

apna khayal rakho aur achche se theek hone ke baad update do ..

koi bhi bura nahi maanega aapke reply naa dene par ..

God bless uh bro

Waiting Qaatil sir aap jldi se achi tarah se thk ho k aa jao fir ache ache updates dena

Waah.
Bahut hi shandar khabar di h aapne

Don't be hurry frist take some rest when you think now I'm feel better then give me some cool updates take care of yourself

get well soon bro

 

[Râjčhàthâ]

Waiting

 

[Qaatil]

Good update I can understand the emotional drop down that sakshi is facing, aksh had done right thing by punishing the man, but the real culprit the mind behind this is yet to be punished. Interesting to see, what actually is aksh up to??
We all know that, aksh`s rift with shahid will cause ranas involvement in the story and once rana steps in then we might not know what will happen..!!!
Lets see what happens next....
Waiting....
I felt this update was low on emotions, especially the part involving Aksh and sakshi's scene. It could had bene better yet, their is always a scope of improvement. I hope you will not disappoint us.
I don't understand what made you to move quick with the breifings but it causing damage to what you have built-in. You have worked so hard to built the story and suddenly with some reviews, you spoiling the whole thing trust me, story so far has be wonderful, write the way you believe, don't change. People will understand sonner or later, and if they refuse then let it be...✍✍✍✍

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review
Actually baat ye he ke mene ye (21) Update bimari ki halat me likha tha, or mujhe bhi waisa hi feel ho raha tha ke Update kafi low he....
Or baki jo Review ke zariye aapko disappointment hui he, uske liye dil se maafi chahta hu, aage dhyan rakhunga ke koi chiz spoil na ho.... Please keep sharing your Valuable Feedback
Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Update 21 Review


Nice update Akhir jis baat ka dar tha baat wanhi aa gayi lekin iss se zada mujhe us teacher per disappointment huwi hai kiu ke mere papa khud teacher hai mujhe pata hai ek teacher kitna zada Attach hota hai apne kaam ke saath kiu ke ek teacher bacho ka future apne haatho ye banata hai maa baap trust ker ke apne bacho ko us teacher ke paas bhejte hai lekin agar teacher aisa ho to wi ustaad kehlane ke layak nahi hai kiu ke teacher wo nahi hote jo ap ko kitaab se 2 se 4 lafz sikhaye teacher wo hote hai jo ap ko zindagi jeena sikhate hai na ke ap se ap ki zindagi cheen lete hai maa baap ke baad sirf ek insaan ko maa baap jitna mana jata hai aur wo jota hai teacher lekin yahan teacher khud rah bhatak gaya sirf chand paiso aur Zarorto ke liye Agar aise teacher aur aye to wo din dur nahi jab har bacha khud apne ustaad ki zaroorto ka shikaar hota jaye ga


Wanhi shakshi andar se toot chuki hai ab agar sach saamne aa bhi gaya to bhi sab kuch theek hona mushkil ho ga kiu ke hum insaano me ye he to burai hai ke hum dusro ko neecha dikhane ka bus moka chahte hai lekin ek umeed hai sach saamne ane se in ki nazro me shayad kuch sharam aa he jaye shakshi ka tootna kanhi bhi galat nahi laga aur us tooti halat me wo ek galat kadam uthane lagi thi jis ko waqt rehte rok dia gaya aksh ke haatho


Mujhe yahan thora Aksh ke emotions kam lage shayad ap jaldi ke chakar me ye ker baithe ho lekin yahan ap ko ek baat kahi storie me sab se zaroori cheez sabar hoti hai bohat dafa hum storie ko tez likhne ke chakar me beech me bohat kuch miss ker dete hai iss liye tezi ko choro kiu ke ap ek behtreen storie likh rahe ho jis ke har lafz me ap ki mehnat jhalakti hai aur iss tezi me ap apni mehnat zaya mat karo sakoon se likho aur dil se likho pehle ki tarha


Aksh ne akhir gun utha li Bus dar ye hai Emotions me wo galat kaam na ker baithe jis ke liye us ko bachtana pare kiu ke jab koi insaan hathyar uthahta hai to wo apne saath bohat si zindagiya badal ke rakh deta hai Teacher ka kia bana ye bhi puri tarha pata nahi chala lekin ab daikhna ye hai Aksh shahid ke saath kia karta hai


iss update me sab se best tha mansi ka scene uss ke emotions bohat ache se dikhaye har mushkil me wo shakshi ke aage diwar ban ke khari huwi hai aur pichle update se maloom hota hai ke us ke andar aksh ke liye pyaar ke bheej boye ja chuke hai ab daikhna ye hai wo beej poda kab bante hai Mansi ka character kabile tareef hai


Zabardast update tha lekin har jagha improvement ki jagha baki reh jati hai masterpiece me bhi improvement ki jagha reh he jati hai ap apne andaaz se likho kiu ke hum ap ki storie parhne aye hai na ke ap se changes marwa ker storie likhane aye hai iss liye ap apne andaaz se likho Bohat ache ja rahe ho keep it up

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Review ​

Mujhe yahan thora Aksh ke emotions kam lage shayad ap jaldi ke chakar me ye ker baithe ho lekin yahan ap ko ek baat kahi storie me sab se zaroori cheez sabar hoti hai bohat dafa hum storie ko tez likhne ke chakar me beech me bohat kuch miss ker dete hai iss liye tezi ko choro kiu ke ap ek behtreen storie likh rahe ho jis ke har lafz me ap ki mehnat jhalakti hai aur iss tezi me ap apni mehnat zaya mat karo sakoon se likho aur dil se likho pehle ki tarha

Ha bhai ye baat me bilkul maan ta hu, darasal wajah mene batayi ke wo Update mene thodi bimari ki halat me likha tha, or me bhi jaan gaya tha ke isme Emotions ki kami he....
Or agle Update me aapko disappointment na ho iska pura khayal rakhunga.... please Keep Sharing Your Valuable Feedback
Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Bhai Umda kahani hai main ne kuch waqt pehle he iss ko parhna shuru kia sach me bohat achi kahani hai ap ki kahani se mujhe bohat kuch seekhne ko mila hai bhai Jis ka main bohat shukar guzar hu Aise he update dete rahiye bhai Love you bhai ❣

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Interest In My Story
Yaar sachme bahot khushi hoti he ke agar aapki wajah se kisi ko kuch sikhne ko Mile to... Lekin sach to ye he ki, ye meri 2nd story he... Meri writing me ab bhi kafi khamiya he... Jise me din ba din dur karne ki puri koshish kar raha hu, aapse bhi Anurodh he ke apni story par koi negative comment aye to us se sikh lena, na ki dukhi hona.... Or us hi point ko apni mazbuti bana dena... Again Thank You So Much
Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Dosto sachme aap sabke Best Wishes ke liye bahot bahot shukriya.... Shayad isi wajah se bilkul thik ho kar ghar laut aya hu me.... Warna to kafi darawna mahol tha.... Khair, ab wo baate jane dete he.... Dopeher me ghar agaya tha me, or baat kare next update ki to jab 21st update post kiya tha, us waqt 22 ka half part likh chuka tha... Lekin uske baad ye dab hota chala gaya to fir aage kuch likh nahi paya.... Aaj us update ko complete kar dunga, or kal Raat ko post kar dunga.... Or ha, fir se bahot bahot shukriya aap sabke Best Wishes ke liye....
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤​

Ye to bdiya khbar sunai bhai

Abhi vese aram hi karo kuch din

 

[Angelmahi]

Dosto sachme aap sabke Best Wishes ke liye bahot bahot shukriya.... Shayad isi wajah se bilkul thik ho kar ghar laut aya hu me.... Warna to kafi darawna mahol tha.... Khair, ab wo baate jane dete he.... Dopeher me ghar agaya tha me, or baat kare next update ki to jab 21st update post kiya tha, us waqt 22 ka half part likh chuka tha... Lekin uske baad ye dab hota chala gaya to fir aage kuch likh nahi paya.... Aaj us update ko complete kar dunga, or kal Raat ko post kar dunga.... Or ha, fir se bahot bahot shukriya aap sabke Best Wishes ke liye....
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤​

Congrats Qaatil sir bht achi news di hai aapne waiting for nxt update

 

[Carry Minati]

Bhai aap aaye bhar aai dil mai ek update ki umang hai chai

 

[Carry Minati]

Aap ko fir se ek bar dekh ke acha lga mere dost....ab kaisa lg rha hai