Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Raj Singh]

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[Sanju]

Waiting for next update bhai

 

[Kasi]

Sorry bhai...par me ye story padhna chhod raha hun...kyun ki holiday aa jate hain par update nahi ata...apka story bahat hi jyada achchha bhai... such a great story... but film ki tarah wait nahi kar sakte...okkk bhai have a nice day...extraordinary mindblowing perfect story...


Bye

 

[Qaatil]

Please Read Till The End

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Ab bata deta hu ke ye sab me kyu kar raha hu. Me rehta hu Maharashtra me, or yaha ke halat din ba din battar hote ja rahe he, jesa aapko pata he ke kuch waqt pehle mujhe Covid hua tha, or tabb meri job bhi chali gayi thi, lekin uske baad dusri job mil gayi. Lekin halat itne bure ho gaye he yaha ke, is company ne mujhe Sunday ko Mail kiya ke ab company sirf 50% employee ke saath hi kaam karegi, or me us 50% me shamil nahi hu, Matlab mera ye job bhi chala gaya. Or tabse me bass job ki talash me hu, aaj meri purani company jaha me job karta tha, unse baat hui he, Management mujhe Saturday Sunday takk bata denge ke kya wo mujhe fir se Job denge ya nahi...

Or ye bahana nahi he, ho sakta he aapko bahana lage, kyu ke ye pehli baar nahi ho raha, mene kayi baar aise break liye he... But kya karu? Zindagi itni asan to he nahi.... Khair, jo bhi story ko complete kar sakta he, wo mujhe inbox kar de.... Sunday ko agar mera Job ka kuch nahi hua to me aapko Laal Ishq Story Preview or Ishq Hai Tumse 2 Story preview or kuch Updates and mere is account ki login details bhej dunga....

Amazing update

Jabardast update.. bhai ❤

Sau dard hai sau raahatein
Sab mila dilnashin ek tu hi nahin

Rookhi rookhi si yeh hawa
Aur sukhe patte ki tarah
Shehar ki sadko pe main
Laawaris udta hua
Sau raaste par teri raah nahi

Sau dard hai sau raahatein
Sab mila dilnashin ek tu hi nahin
Ab oor kya khoo mn bs yh gany k bool hi yaad aa rhy heen aksh k pass too mansi hy pr sakshi ka kya
Mujy lg rha hy 3rd part mn too nhi milny waly sakshi oor aksh matlab 3rd part mn dono alag hi rhy gy☹☹☹

Superb fantastic Qaatil bhai.......

Bahut hi emotional update hai......

Ho Gaya kand....
Wahi hua jiska dar tha....

behatrin update bro

Ufffffff Uffffff uffffff phir se suspense bhai mar hi daloge aap to


Bohat hi zabardast update words hi nhi aapki tareef ko mind blowing

अध्याय दो का पचीसवाँ भाग।​

बहुत ही जबरदस्त और शानदार सर जी।​

आखिरकार जिसका डर था वही हुआ। साक्षी ने अक्ष से अपने प्यार का इज़हार कर ही दिया। लेकिन उसके पहले उसे बहुत ही मानसिक तनाव से गुजरना पड़ा। जिसकी सारी झुंझलाहट गुस्से के रूप में मानसी पर फूटी। मानसी और अक्ष को साक्षी का ये बर्ताव समझ नहीं आया।​

सुबह जब अक्ष उठता है तो पता चलता है कि रात में जो कॉल मानसी के काट दिया था वो साक्षी का है और वो कॉल कटा नहीं था बल्कि उठ गया था। अक्ष साक्षी से बात करने की कोशिश करता है तो पता चलता है कि साक्षी अस्पताल में है और उसके सिर में बहुत दर्द है जिससे अक्ष मुम्बई जाने का सोचता है तो साक्षी अपनी कसम देकर अक्ष को मना कर देती है।​

वैसे धनाढ्य लोग वाकई में बेशर्म होते हैं। बेटी एक लड़के के साथ पूरी रात बिताकर आई है और ऊपर से माँ ये बोलती है कि मुझे तो उम्मीद नहीं थी कि तुम सुबह चलकर घर आओगी। बेशर्मी की भी हद होती है। हमारे गांव में होता तो पहले जी भर कर सुताई की जाती उसके बाद आगे बात होती। संस्कार नाम की भी कोई चीज होती है।​

अक्ष को अपने ड्रग खोजी यंत्र से पता चलता है कि अमन के ट्रक से भी ड्रग को ले आया जाता है तो अक्ष अमन से इस बारे में बात करता है। अमन अक्ष को मंत्री की पूरी सच्चाई बता देता है। फिर अमन और अक्ष अभिनव से मिलते हैं और सारी सच्चाई उन्हें बताते हैं। अभिनव भी कुछ नया प्लान करके अमन को सज़ा देने की बात करता है।​

देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है। साक्षी के प्यार का इजहार करने के बाद अक्ष की क्या प्रतिक्रिया होती है। क्या बदलाव आएगा अब अक्ष और साक्षी के रिश्ते में। और अभिनव अपने प्लान में किस हद तक कामयाब होता है।​

अध्याय दो का छब्बीसवाँ भाग (अ)​

बहुत ही बेहतरीन, लाजवाब और शानदार सर जी।​

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कहानी का ये भाग बहुत ही क्रन्दनपूर्ण और गमगीन है। जिसकी विस्तृत समीक्षा करने में हम असमर्थ हैं।​

देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है सर जी।​

अगले भाग की प्रतीक्षा में।।​

Yrr ye

Yrr yeh kya ho gya kya yeh dono kabhi hmesha hmesha k liye ekk honge bhi yaa nhi ... Ksm se yrr bht glt hua dono k sath


Or voh Mansi voh voh toh smjh skti thi na dono ko lekin usne toh dono ko bilkul hi alag krr diya yeh shi nhi kiya mansi ne ager voh aksh se pyr krti toh usse uski Khushi kii chinta hoti mana k Sakshi ne apne bhai se hi pyr krke glt kiya prrr yrr pyrr soch k thodi kiya jata h voh toh bss ho Jata h mansi ne yeh thk nhi Kiya.....

Aksh bhi sakshi se pyr krta h prrr voh smjh nhi pa raha h abb jab sakshi usse dur huyi hai tabhi usse pta lgega k voh sakshi se kitna pyr krta h ager Sakshi usse apne pyr ka ehsaas dilane k liye kisi or k kreeb jane ka natak krke use jealous feel krvaye too bhot mzaa aayega prr ager mansi aksh ko uske pyr ka ehsaas hone degi tab hi Sakshi or Aksh ekk honge .......

Abb writer sahab plzzz yrr in dono ko ekk krdo jldi se yrr aksh ko jldi se apne pyr ka ehsaas ho jaye or shayad abb usse feel bhi ho kyu ki Sakshi ne ekk toh aapna pyr confess kr liya or dusra usse dur chli gyi .....
Let's see what happen nxt bht hii fantastic update tha.....
Now egerly waiting for nxt update ❤❤❤

Bhai kbi kbi Jo dikhta ha wo hota ni ho sakta ha k Aksh janta ho us Ki feeling lakin bhai behen hony ki wajha sy kuch nh kr sakta ho.
Aur ya bh ho sakta ha k wo is tarh sy soch he nh raha ho. Ab kn bhai soch sakta ha us Ki behen k Bary mein asa

Awesome update

Jabardast update

Nice and superb update....

Hn thk h prr Aksh sakshi ko apni behen nhi bestfrnd manta h toh ho skta h k voh apni feelings abhi tak smjha hi na ho apme so called rishte ki vjh se or Mansi ko trf attract ho gya ho

Awesome update .. waiting for next

bahut emotional update ..
ek taraf aksh ,sakshi ka pyar jisme dono kabhi ek nahi ho sakte . ,,aur dusri taraf abdul apni behan ko khone ke dard me ro raha tha ..

Superb update bro

Waiting for next

It will take some time for Aksh to understand this because it does not happen and for the first time today, Sakshi did not say wrong but the way she said it, I felt wrong, It is like a tornado, either drowning in it or getting out of it, there are only two ways, otherwise only the pain will be encountered. Looking at Abdul, it seems that because of him his sister is not in this world today, but we still do not know what happened.

If seen, no one is wrong here, Aksh and Sakshi are fine in their place but it is a heart that does not believe that the whole mistake is hers. What I feared, the two were separated, I had heard that love never gives up, now just to see.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Plz post

Intjaar....

Waiting bro

Pls post the update

Intezar nhi hota

waiting for next update bro

Aj sunday hy bhiya waiting

Aaj sunday hai Qaatil sir agerly waiting for new update...

Waiting

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Waiting

teenagers ki soch
abhi jawani pe kadam rakhe nahi ke ... jane kya se kya karne lag gaye

Khair......
to sakshi ne sab kuch sach sach bata di aksh ko.. matlab insects love bov ke bare mein
jishe sun aksh bhi pagla gaya
ab achha bhala insaan aisi baatein sunne ke baad pagla hi ho jayega na thodi na khushi mein jhumega...
thappad bhi maar diya... are re ghani dukh ki baat hai
lo ji... phir suru hua fully emotional drama....
dono ki milne bichhadne ki baatein..
AKSH ka pagalpan... hath jalake hospital mein admit hona... phir sakshi aake khoon dena....
sakshi hamesa hamesha ke liye liye uski life se door chali jana... etc. etc.
Phir kuch drama Mumbai apne ghar mein bhi.... wohi job bagerah ke chalte sab se door rahne wali hai sakshi...
......

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1) Yahaan kamini Mansi sahi hoke bhi galat hai........
Kyun?
Kyunki wo samajh kyun nahi rahi hai ye baat ki ye insects story line hai... to uska kya kaam is story mein
Sakshi hi original & lead heroine hai ye baat kyun bhool jaati hai wo baar baar lagatar

2) aksh.... ab iske bare mein kya hi kahu ... isse bada bewakuf is story mein aur koi nahi..... hath ko jakhmi ya jala dene se thodi sab kuch thik ho jayega... upar se sakshi ke 1 unit khoon chus liya so alag

3) sakshi......... bichari na ghar ki rahi na ghat ki....
Kya jarurat thi batane ki... ab bhugto insects pyar wale proposal mein mile dukh aur dard dono hi

Well... problems ke solution...
1) kiran ab wohi sambhaal sakti hai bewakuf aksh ko...
writer sahab ushe aksh ke paas bhejiye aur us mansi ko out kijiye aksh ki life se phir dekhiyega sab kuch okay okay ho jaani hai uski life mein...

2) the legendary characters Nischal aur nandini ko le aaiye kahani mein.... matlab Aksh ki life mein.... are pyar byaar ke liye nahi yaar... Balki as a guru... Sahi maarg darshan ke liye...


Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Intjaar....

We are eagerly waiting for next update.

Humm...quite an update well everything didn't go the way it should have been. Can not blame anyone neither akash is wrong nor mansi, and also sakshi poor girlusne bus apni feelings ki suni thi aur usko badle mein dard mila...
Well things turned very bad especially for aksh, jisko usne apna life mein sabse important hissa mana tha wo hi ise dur hogaya hai really hard for him....
Lets the see what last update of this chapter will offer...
Waiting...

Intjaar....

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next update bhai

Sorry bhai...par me ye story padhna chhod raha hun...kyun ki holiday aa jate hain par update nahi ata...apka story bahat hi jyada achchha bhai... such a great story... but film ki tarah wait nahi kar sakte...okkk bhai have a nice day...extraordinary mindblowing perfect story...


Bye

 

[Naina]

Please Read Till The End

Ye mera last message ho sakta he, ho sake to maaf kar dena, lekin don't worry story complete hogi, jo bhi meri story aage badha sakta he, please mujhe inbox kar de, me sari Story preview share kar dunga.... or saath hi saath Ishq He Tumse 2 ki bhi Story Preview share kar dunga, or uske bhi kuch Updates likh rakhe he... Mujhe inbox kar de, me apne is account ki login details bhi bhej dunga.

Ab bata deta hu ke ye sab me kyu kar raha hu. Me rehta hu Maharashtra me, or yaha ke halat din ba din battar hote ja rahe he, jesa aapko pata he ke kuch waqt pehle mujhe Covid hua tha, or tabb meri job bhi chali gayi thi, lekin uske baad dusri job mil gayi. Lekin halat itne bure ho gaye he yaha ke, is company ne mujhe Sunday ko Mail kiya ke ab company sirf 50% employee ke saath hi kaam karegi, or me us 50% me shamil nahi hu, Matlab mera ye job bhi chala gaya. Or tabse me bass job ki talash me hu, aaj meri purani company jaha me job karta tha, unse baat hui he, Management mujhe Saturday Sunday takk bata denge ke kya wo mujhe fir se Job denge ya nahi...

Or ye bahana nahi he, ho sakta he aapko bahana lage, kyu ke ye pehli baar nahi ho raha, mene kayi baar aise break liye he... But kya karu? Zindagi itni asan to he nahi.... Khair, jo bhi story ko complete kar sakta he, wo mujhe inbox kar de.... Sunday ko agar mera Job ka kuch nahi hua to me aapko Laal Ishq Story Preview or Ishq Hai Tumse 2 Story preview or kuch Updates and mere is account ki login details bhej dunga....

Pehli baat aap surakshit rahe yahi dil se dua hai... aur akhiri baat bhi yahin hai....


Update ka kya hai.. wo to aate jaate rahenge.... uske liye fikar mat kijiye...
aur aap jo keh rahe hai uspe mujhe purn roop se vishvas hai....

 

[ragish7357]

Please Read Till The End

Ye mera last message ho sakta he, ho sake to maaf kar dena, lekin don't worry story complete hogi, jo bhi meri story aage badha sakta he, please mujhe inbox kar de, me sari Story preview share kar dunga.... or saath hi saath Ishq He Tumse 2 ki bhi Story Preview share kar dunga, or uske bhi kuch Updates likh rakhe he... Mujhe inbox kar de, me apne is account ki login details bhi bhej dunga.

Ab bata deta hu ke ye sab me kyu kar raha hu. Me rehta hu Maharashtra me, or yaha ke halat din ba din battar hote ja rahe he, jesa aapko pata he ke kuch waqt pehle mujhe Covid hua tha, or tabb meri job bhi chali gayi thi, lekin uske baad dusri job mil gayi. Lekin halat itne bure ho gaye he yaha ke, is company ne mujhe Sunday ko Mail kiya ke ab company sirf 50% employee ke saath hi kaam karegi, or me us 50% me shamil nahi hu, Matlab mera ye job bhi chala gaya. Or tabse me bass job ki talash me hu, aaj meri purani company jaha me job karta tha, unse baat hui he, Management mujhe Saturday Sunday takk bata denge ke kya wo mujhe fir se Job denge ya nahi...

Or ye bahana nahi he, ho sakta he aapko bahana lage, kyu ke ye pehli baar nahi ho raha, mene kayi baar aise break liye he... But kya karu? Zindagi itni asan to he nahi.... Khair, jo bhi story ko complete kar sakta he, wo mujhe inbox kar de.... Sunday ko agar mera Job ka kuch nahi hua to me aapko Laal Ishq Story Preview or Ishq Hai Tumse 2 Story preview or kuch Updates and mere is account ki login details bhej dunga....

don't worry bro
stay safe
story ka kya h wo ab nhi to baad m comp ho jayegi
aap apna khyal rakhe or befikr hokr job dekhe
jb bhi time mile story ko pura kijiyega

 

[Angelmahi]

Please Read Till The End

Ye mera last message ho sakta he, ho sake to maaf kar dena, lekin don't worry story complete hogi, jo bhi meri story aage badha sakta he, please mujhe inbox kar de, me sari Story preview share kar dunga.... or saath hi saath Ishq He Tumse 2 ki bhi Story Preview share kar dunga, or uske bhi kuch Updates likh rakhe he... Mujhe inbox kar de, me apne is account ki login details bhi bhej dunga.

Ab bata deta hu ke ye sab me kyu kar raha hu. Me rehta hu Maharashtra me, or yaha ke halat din ba din battar hote ja rahe he, jesa aapko pata he ke kuch waqt pehle mujhe Covid hua tha, or tabb meri job bhi chali gayi thi, lekin uske baad dusri job mil gayi. Lekin halat itne bure ho gaye he yaha ke, is company ne mujhe Sunday ko Mail kiya ke ab company sirf 50% employee ke saath hi kaam karegi, or me us 50% me shamil nahi hu, Matlab mera ye job bhi chala gaya. Or tabse me bass job ki talash me hu, aaj meri purani company jaha me job karta tha, unse baat hui he, Management mujhe Saturday Sunday takk bata denge ke kya wo mujhe fir se Job denge ya nahi...

Or ye bahana nahi he, ho sakta he aapko bahana lage, kyu ke ye pehli baar nahi ho raha, mene kayi baar aise break liye he... But kya karu? Zindagi itni asan to he nahi.... Khair, jo bhi story ko complete kar sakta he, wo mujhe inbox kar de.... Sunday ko agar mera Job ka kuch nahi hua to me aapko Laal Ishq Story Preview or Ishq Hai Tumse 2 Story preview or kuch Updates and mere is account ki login details bhej dunga....

Please Read Till The End

Ye mera last message ho sakta he, ho sake to maaf kar dena, lekin don't worry story complete hogi, jo bhi meri story aage badha sakta he, please mujhe inbox kar de, me sari Story preview share kar dunga.... or saath hi saath Ishq He Tumse 2 ki bhi Story Preview share kar dunga, or uske bhi kuch Updates likh rakhe he... Mujhe inbox kar de, me apne is account ki login details bhi bhej dunga.

Ab bata deta hu ke ye sab me kyu kar raha hu. Me rehta hu Maharashtra me, or yaha ke halat din ba din battar hote ja rahe he, jesa aapko pata he ke kuch waqt pehle mujhe Covid hua tha, or tabb meri job bhi chali gayi thi, lekin uske baad dusri job mil gayi. Lekin halat itne bure ho gaye he yaha ke, is company ne mujhe Sunday ko Mail kiya ke ab company sirf 50% employee ke saath hi kaam karegi, or me us 50% me shamil nahi hu, Matlab mera ye job bhi chala gaya. Or tabse me bass job ki talash me hu, aaj meri purani company jaha me job karta tha, unse baat hui he, Management mujhe Saturday Sunday takk bata denge ke kya wo mujhe fir se Job denge ya nahi...

Or ye bahana nahi he, ho sakta he aapko bahana lage, kyu ke ye pehli baar nahi ho raha, mene kayi baar aise break liye he... But kya karu? Zindagi itni asan to he nahi.... Khair, jo bhi story ko complete kar sakta he, wo mujhe inbox kar de.... Sunday ko agar mera Job ka kuch nahi hua to me aapko Laal Ishq Story Preview or Ishq Hai Tumse 2 Story preview or kuch Updates and mere is account ki login details bhej dunga....

Hume aapki baat prr pura bhrosa h writer sir aap chinta matt kijiye pehle aapni saari prblms se free ho jaiye or safe rahiye health se badh k kuch nhi hota koi nii update to aate rahenge orr story ko continue aap hi kroge jab sab thk ho jayega plzzz hume koi new writer nhi chahiye hum wait krr lenge aapki saari prblms jldi hi thk ho jayengi or aap forum prr fir se continue ho jouge koi tension matt lijiye......
Firstly be safe uske baarmd sb matter karta h ..hum aapka wait karenge

 

[Kasi]

Please Read Till The End

Ye mera last message ho sakta he, ho sake to maaf kar dena, lekin don't worry story complete hogi, jo bhi meri story aage badha sakta he, please mujhe inbox kar de, me sari Story preview share kar dunga.... or saath hi saath Ishq He Tumse 2 ki bhi Story Preview share kar dunga, or uske bhi kuch Updates likh rakhe he... Mujhe inbox kar de, me apne is account ki login details bhi bhej dunga.

Ab bata deta hu ke ye sab me kyu kar raha hu. Me rehta hu Maharashtra me, or yaha ke halat din ba din battar hote ja rahe he, jesa aapko pata he ke kuch waqt pehle mujhe Covid hua tha, or tabb meri job bhi chali gayi thi, lekin uske baad dusri job mil gayi. Lekin halat itne bure ho gaye he yaha ke, is company ne mujhe Sunday ko Mail kiya ke ab company sirf 50% employee ke saath hi kaam karegi, or me us 50% me shamil nahi hu, Matlab mera ye job bhi chala gaya. Or tabse me bass job ki talash me hu, aaj meri purani company jaha me job karta tha, unse baat hui he, Management mujhe Saturday Sunday takk bata denge ke kya wo mujhe fir se Job denge ya nahi...

Or ye bahana nahi he, ho sakta he aapko bahana lage, kyu ke ye pehli baar nahi ho raha, mene kayi baar aise break liye he... But kya karu? Zindagi itni asan to he nahi.... Khair, jo bhi story ko complete kar sakta he, wo mujhe inbox kar de.... Sunday ko agar mera Job ka kuch nahi hua to me aapko Laal Ishq Story Preview or Ishq Hai Tumse 2 Story preview or kuch Updates and mere is account ki login details bhej dunga....

Bhai apne to emotional kar diya...bhai ek baat bolu...wo life hi kya hai jisme paresaani na ho...bhai waqt uska hi sath deta hai jo struggle karta hai...bhai apke liye ek achchha job wait kar raha hai don't worry God bless you...ek baat aur bhai hamesha cool rahena... koi insaan hamesha achcha wala complement nahi de sakta...mujhe jo laga maine bol diya eske liye me mafi chahta hun

Mujhe lagta hai morning me jo complement diya tha wo sahi kiya tha kyun ki sachchai to jaan gaya aur last me main galat nikla...bhai really vary vary sorry

Bhai last me ye kahunga aap apna khayal rakhna aur job ki tension mat lena...hamesha free mind me rahna...jo hota hai wo achchhe ke liye hi hota hai...aur jab bhi mind up ho to thoda sa dance kar lena dekhna aapko achchha lagega...God bless you bhai...job mil jayega bhai...

Aur ek baat bhai...ye story aur ishq hai tumse 2 bhi aap hi write karna...kyun aapke story me jo feelings hota hai hai na wo DIL me utar jata hai...bhai aapme ek khubi hai jo aur kisi me nahi ho sakta...bhai me jitna woqt lage wait kar lunga apke Updates jab bhi aye mujhe problem nahi hoga...chahe jo bhi ho jaye ye story aap hi write kijiye...


SMILE PLEASE

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Are bhai kuch time lena h to lo, ye new writer ka to rehne hi do, isse acha to story ko stop kar do

Aur bad me jab time mile to shuru kar dena

Don't worry

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Hum intezaar kar lenge

Koi to rok lo story ka itne salo se kiya h
Lekin jab original writer hi story ko pura kare to hi mja h

Isiliye kisi ko story na btaye

Apna time le aur jab time mile story likhne ka to yha par aa jaye ☺