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1st Update of chapter 3 posted, Give A Like And Don't Forget To Post Your Precious Feedback ❤
Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.
sahi kaha bhai.
Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...
Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi
Pr kuch swal heen
Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aatiap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy
Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear
badhiya update bhai ji
KYA BAAT KYA BAAT
Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update
Waiting bhai log..
Baught badhia update h bhai
Waiting
Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai
Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update
Waiting Qaatil sir
Ok bhai
Nice update
Waiting
Mast update hai
Nice introduction.......
Jhakaasssss
Super
Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho
Awesome update
lajwaab update bro
Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.
But please continue as per your story.
I am enjoying it. Thanks
Next part
aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update
sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.
Super update
Ye turning update h
Keep posting
Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.
Nice update waiting for next
Atulniya Update sirji
Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤
N
Nice start bro
Super se bhi uper update
shandar update
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𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠
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Lajawab update
Nice
Superb Starting bro keep it up
Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya
Awesome update
Super
Bahut badhiya update bhai
Good name of story.
Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.
Superb update bhai......
Fantastic update..bhai
nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..
aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..
ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .
Bdiya update bhai ji
Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta
Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do
Age apki marzi
Nice update..
Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.
Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....
Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???
dekthe aage kya hota.....
Waiting for next.....
Shandar Bhai
Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤
Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤
For completed 25k views on your story thread.....
hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad
Waiting For Next Update
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb
Waiting bro
Intazar rahega bhai
Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?
Waiting
Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,
tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.
Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,
Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.
Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.
jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.
Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.
vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.
Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.
Superb update bro
Fabulous update bro
Good story
Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h
Waiting bro
नमस्कार सर जी।
कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।
कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।
अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।
पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।
लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।
कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।
बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।
behatrin story bro....................
mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi
but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............
hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............
sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................
whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......
sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................
overall outstanding story till continued update................
next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................
Bhai next update kab ayega?
Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....
Waiting
Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work
Baught hi shaandaar update h
❤
Umda
Romance is oozing in this story.
Waiting
the story maker
Nice story keep it bhai
Waiting for update....
Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai
Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai