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Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

Qaatil

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1st Update of chapter 3 posted, Give A Like And Don't Forget To Post Your Precious Feedback ❤


Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.

sahi kaha bhai.
Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...
Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy 😔😔😔 ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi 😍😍
Pr kuch swal heen
Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aati🤔🤔🤔ap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy 😍😍😍
Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear :check:
badhiya update bhai ji
KYA BAAT KYA BAAT :peace:
Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update
Waiting bhai log..
Baught badhia update h bhai
Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai
Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update
Waiting Qaatil sir

Nice update 👍
Mast update hai
Nice introduction.......
Jhakaasssss😇
Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho
Awesome update
lajwaab update bro
Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.
But please continue as per your story.
I am enjoying it. Thanks
Next part
aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update
sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.
Super update
Ye turning update h
Keep posting
Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.
Nice update waiting for next
Atulniya Update sirji 😍


Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤
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Nice start 👍👍 bro
Super se bhi uper update
shandar update
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𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠

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Lajawab update
Superb Starting bro keep it up
Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya
Awesome update
Bahut badhiya update bhai
Good name of story. 😈
Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.
Superb update bhai...... :applause: :applause: :applause:
Fantastic update..bhai
nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..
aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..
ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai 🤔🤔.
Bdiya update bhai ji :love:

Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta 😭😭

Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do

Age apki marzi
Nice update..
Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again.:sigh: Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring.:shy: Send that teacher to me, I teach him. :angry: If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.:love:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

🖤🖤🖤
Shandar Dumdar Update👏👏👏Aksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.
Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....
Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???
dekthe aage kya hota.....
Waiting for next.....
Shandar Bhai
Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤
Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤
:congrats: For completed 25k views on your story thread.....
hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad :D
Waiting For Next Update
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb
Waiting bro
Intazar rahega bhai 😊
Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?
Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,
tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.
Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,
Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.

Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.
jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.

Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.
vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.
Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.
Superb update bro
Fabulous update bro 👌💥
Good story
Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h 👍
Waiting bro
नमस्कार सर जी।
कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।

कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।

अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।
पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।

लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।

कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।
बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।
behatrin story bro....................

mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi

but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............

hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............

sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................

whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......

sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................

overall outstanding story till continued update................


next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................
Bhai next update kab ayega?
Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....
Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work
Baught hi shaandaar update h
:heart: 🌹
Romance is oozing in this story.
the story maker
Nice story keep it bhai
Waiting for update....
Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai
Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai
 

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तीसरे अध्याय का पहला भाग
कहानी एक वर्ष बाद शुरू होती है। अक्ष को सीबीआई अधिकारी अभिनव की हत्या का दोषी मना गया है और उसे जेल में डाल दिया गया है कोई है जो अक्ष को रिहा कर दिया। रिहाई के बाद सबसे पहले अक्ष ने राणा के आदमियों को मारा जिससे राणा तिलमिला गया। अब्दुल भी अक्ष से मिला हुआ है और उसकी मदद कर रहा है राणा से बदला लेने में।।
साक्षी की हालत बहुत खराब है अपने परिवार को खोकर वो एकदम जिंदा लाश बन गई है सुहास और उसकी मां किसी तरह साक्षी हो संभाले हुए हैं। न समय से खाने की फिक्र न समय से सोने की चिंता। राधा सन्तोष और अक्ष के गम ने साक्षी को खोखला कर दिया है।।
अब सवाल ये उठता है कि एक वर्ष पहले हुआ क्या था। कैसे मारे गए साक्षी के आई बाबा। अमन आरती और मानसी की मौत कैसे हुई। अब्दुल अक्ष से कैसे मिल। सीबीआई अधिकारी की हत्या किसने की और अक्ष को क्यों फसाया इस हत्या में। अक्ष को किसने जेल से बाहर निकाला।।

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Thank You So Much Ji ❤❤
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Chapter 3 - The Qaatil

Update 1

Mega Update


Word Count: 2425
Estimated Reading Time: 00:13:00











1 Year Later.......



Jail ki salakho ke piche, ek kone me koi ladka apne upar chadar odhe leta tha. Tabhi waha ek Hawaldar ajata he, or gate kholne lagta he.

Hawaldar: chal be oye..... sale pata nahi kese connection he tere, jaha itne bade afsar ke Qaatil ko fasi honi chahiye lekin tu to bahar nikal raha he....
Us Hawaldar ki baat sunkar us Qaatil ke chehre par ek shaitani hasi ajati he. Uska haal kafi bhayanak tha, lambe baal, badhi hui dadhi, or dhul gandagi se lipta sharir. Qaatil uthkar dhire dhire salakho ke bahar ajata he, waha uski rihayi ki sari formalities puri hone ke baad Qaatil ko waha se jane ki ijazat mil gayi. Qaatil apne dhime kadmo se jail ke bahar agaya, bahar akar wo chalte chalte ek jagah par chala jata he, jaha par kareeb 5-6 log gaadi me kuch saman load kar rahe the.

Aadmi: abe bhikari kahi ke.... Tu andar kese agaya be? Chal nikal yaha se.....
Wo aadmi uske paas ate hue kehta he, or apne haath se use dhakka de deta he. Lekin tabhi Qaatil ne piche se us aadmi ki gardan pakad kar ek hi jhatke me mod di, jis se wo aadmi dard se karhate hue wahi par gir gaya. Apne aadmi ko aise girta dekh kar waha khade baki aadmi Qaatil ki taraf ane lagte he, Qaatil niche jhuk kar zameen par padi mitti utha kar sabki aakho me fek deta he, jese hi sab logo ne apni aakhe band kar li, us bich Qaatil ne ek aadmi ke paas se khanjar chinn liya, or sabse pehle usi aadmi ke sar me wo khanjar dhasa diya. Khun ku bunde Qaatil ke chehre par udd chuki thi, jis se Qaatil ka chehra shaitani hasi se khil utha tha. Tabtak dusra Aadmi haath me khanjar liye aage akar Qaatil par vaar kar raha hota he ke Qaatil uska haath pakad kar apne Khanjar sidha us aadmi ke pet me maar deta he. Piche se 2 aadmi Qaatil par humla bolne wale the, isliye Qaatil us admi ko tadapta chhod kar piche mud jata he. Ab uske samne 2 log the, isliye wo dono Qaatil par bhari padd gaye or usme se ek aadmi ne Qaatil ki gardan ke piche Khanjar se vaar kar diya. Lekin jo dukh or dard Qaatil ke dil me the, uske samne to ye khanjar ka dard uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha, Qaatil ki aakhe gusse me aag babula ho gayi thi, usne apne aap ko dusre aadmi ke vaar se bachate hue, piche ja kar uska gala Khanjar se alag kar diya. Ye dekh kar waha bacha aakhri aadmi darr ke mare kaanp gaya. Usne apna hatiyar niche daal diya or Qaatil ke samne ghutno par haath jod ke beth gaya. Qaatil muskurate hue aage ajata he, or tezi se apna khanjar us aadmi ki aakho me dhasa deta he. Wo aadmi tadapta hua wahi gir gaya, lekin Qaatil ko uspar rehem nahi aya, usne us aadmi ke saath saath baki sabhi admiyo ki aakhe nikal li thi.


"Boss...... Boss..... Humare aadmi, humare aadmi mare gaye......"

Ek aadmi chillate hue Rana ke samne akar kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Rana gusse me uthkar khada ho gaya.
Rana: kis Madarchod me itni himmat agayi?
Aadmi: pata nahi Boss.... Me abhi waha gaya to waha humare sare Admiyo ki lashe thi, or to or un saki aakhe nikali hui he.....
Ye sab sunkar Rana Gusse me us jagah par chal padta he, uske piche Abdul bhi tha, lekin shayad Abdul janta tha ke ye sab kiska kaam ke, or isi wajah se Abdul ke chehre par ek muskurahat thi.

Rana jab waha pahocha to us jagah ji halat dekh kar dang reh gaya, jab Rana aage akar gadi me load ho raha maal dekhta he, to waha ek khun se latt patt parchi thi, Rana us parchi ko khol kar padhne lagta he, lekin us parchi ko padhne ke baad pehli baar Rana ke chehre par khauf chaya hua tha.


"Aksh...... Naam bhula nahi hoga tu? Kese bhulega? Khair, darinda samjhta he na tu khud ko? Lekin ye baat samajh le, ke ab tujhse bhi bade darinde ne is dharti par janm le liya he "Qaatil"..... Jitna Guda he, wo ab apni jaan bachane me laga de.... kyu ke behtarin shikari hu me, apne halato ka shikar nahi, Bass ghayal hu me, abhi takk mara nahi..."

Abdul: Boss..... Boss.....
Wo Rana ke paas akar use awaz de raha tha, lekin Rana ke hosh to is parchi ko padhkar kabke udd chuke the. Abdul aage akar Rana ke kandhe par haath rakh kar use hosh me lata he.
Abdul: kya hua Boss? Aap itne pareshan kyu lagg rahe ho?
Rana: A..... Aksh... Aksh wapis agaya he....
Wo apni dari hui awaz me kehta he. Abdul ko to yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ke Rana Aksh ke itne chote karname se darr gaya.
Abdul: aap chinta kyu kar rahe ho? Wo aap takk tabhi pahoch payega, jab uska samna mujhse hoga.... Or jabtak wo mujhtak ayega, wo zinda nahi hoga....
Rana: Ghayal Sher....... Ghayal Sher he wo is waqt.... dhundo use.... Mere samne zinda hi chahiye wo.....
Abdul: ho jayega Boss.... Wo aapke samne hoga.... Zinda.....


Rukha hua chehra, aakho ke niche gehre kaale daag, sukha hua sharir.... Dopeher ke 2 baje hue the, apne Office me Sakshi bethkar kaam kar rahi thi. Uski halat kafi buri thi, is waqt sablog Lunch Break par gaye the, lekin Sakshi akele bethkar apna kaam kar rahi thi. Tabhi waha Suhas ajata he.

Suhas: Sakshi, chalo khana khane.....
Sakshi: na.... Nahi... Me badme kha lungi.....
Wo apne kaam par concentrate karte hue kehti he, uski baat sunkar Suhas akar uske bagal me beth jata he.
Suhas: Sakshi tumhe yaad bhi he ke tumne kabhi thik waqt par khana khaya ho?
Wo narazgi se Sakshi ki chair apni taraf karte hue kehta he. Uski baat par Sakshi bass apni nazre jhuka leti he.
Suhas: Sakshi halat dekho apni..... Thoda to khayal rakho apna....
Sakshi: kya karu apna khayal rakh kar? Meri wajah se hi Aai Baba aaj is duniya me nahi he..... Meri galati ki saza mene apne pariwar ko di or sabko kho diya.... Sabko......
Itna kehkar Sakshi fut fut kar rone lagti he. Suhas ko to ab adat si hi ho gayi thi Sakshi ko har roz rota dekh dekh kar. Wo kisi tarah Sakshi ko sambhal leta he or uska rona band kara deta he.
Suhas: kise kho diya Sakshi tumne? Ha? Hum log he na? Or tum Aksh ko kese bhul gayi? Use dhund na baki he na?
Sakshi: nahi..... Ab apne aap ko kho chuki hu me, kisi or ko dhund na namumkin he mere liye....
Wo hatash hokar nirasha bhare swaro me kehti he.
Suhas: koi or? Sakshi wo bhai he tumhara..... Agar sab tumhari wajah se hua he, to ise tumhe hi suljhana hoga....
Fir Suhas kisi tarah se Sakshi ko apne saath le jata he lunch karne ke liye. Lunch ke baad Sakshi fir se apne kaam me lagg jati he.

Waha CBI Headquarter me Anant apne ek Officer ke saath bethkar baate kar raha tha.
Officer: Sir..... Aksh riha karwa diya he....
Anant: thik he..... Bass ab khel jese aage ja raha he, jane do....
Officer: Lekin sir, Aksh ko saza dilane ki bajaye ye sab....
Anant: saza to milegi hi Aksh ko... Lekin wo saza DGP sir ke Qaatil Aksh ko milegi....
Officer: me kuch samjha nahi....
Anant: is waqt Aksh apna badla pura karna chahta he, mujhe bass Rana or uska khas Abdul chahiye.... Or untak pahochne ka rasta sirf or sirf Aksh ke zariye hi mil sakta he... Uske baad Aksh ko bhi uske kiye ki saza zarur milegi.....
Officer: lekin Rana koi chota mota gunda to nahi he.... Aksh ko marna to uske liye chutkiyo ko kaam he.....
Anant: sahi kaha.... Aksh ko marna Rana ke liye chutkiyo ka kaam he... Lekin is waqt Aksh ek Haiwan he.... Or Haiwan ko harane ki takat har kisi me nahi hoti.....
Officer: lekin sir iske chalte Aksh ne kuch galat kaam kiye to.... Kyu ke Medical Reports ke hawale se dekhe, to uski dimagi halat thik nahi he....
Anant: uske bare me mene soch liya he.... Tum bass mera ek kaam karo.....
Aadmi: ji sir bataye.....

Fir Anant use koi kaam sop deta he, or wo Aadmi chala jata he apne kaam par.

Anant (mann me): Aksh.... Tumne Gunah to kiya he, or Gunehgar ko saza milni hi chahiye.... Saza tumhe bhi milegi.... Zarur milegi.....


Waha ghani jhadiyo ke bich Aksh betha hua tha, or tabhi piche se ek car akar waha ruk jati he, or usme se Abdul bahar ajata he.

Abdul: tayar ho apna badla pura karne ke liye?
Wo Aksh ke piche khada ho kar kehta he. Uski awaz sunkar Aksh piche mudkar dekhta he to waha Abdul tha, use dekh kar Aksh khada ho gaya.
Abdul: chalo betho andar....
Fir Abdul Aksh ko gadi me bitha kar ghane jungle ke bich chal padta he, kuch der baad dono ek tute fute ghar ke paas pahoch jate he, wo ghar Jungle ke bicho bich bana hua tha, or yaha dur dur takk kisi insan ka namo nishan nahi tha. Dono gadi se utar kar Ghar ke andar ajate he.
Abdul: jabtak tumhara badla pura nahi ho jata, tum yahi par rehna.....
Aksh bass Sari baate sunn raha tha, kyu ke Aksh ki dimagi halat kafi kharab ho gayi thi. Wo jabse Jail me tha, tabse usne ek shabd bhi apne zuban par nahi ane diya.

Khair, Abdul Car me se Aksh ke liye kuch zaruri saman le ata he, jisme kapde, shoes, uske roz marra ki chize thi, or saath me kuch Guns, Bullets, Khanjar or talwar.
Abdul: agar kisi chiz ki zarurat ho to mujhe bata dena, ye lo.... Ye phone, is phone se tum bina kisi darr ke kisi ko bhi call kar sakte ho.....
Wo Mobile phone Aksh ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Aksh bhi us se mobile le kar rakh deta he. Abdul kuch der waha bethkar or Aksh ko khana khila kar waha se nikal gaya.

Aksh ne saman ko kholkar dekha to usme Aksh ka bhi kafi sara saman tha, lekin usme sabse upar Radha, Santosh or Mansi ki saath me khinchi hui photo frame thi. Use dekh kar Aksh ki aakho se asu behne lagta he.

Aksh (mann me): A..... Aai..... Baba...... M.... Mansi..... Chinta matt karna..... B.... Bahot jald milunga me aap sab se.... Kyu ke me sirf... Me sirf apna badla pura karne takk is duniya me hu, uske baad.... Me bhi... Me bhi aap sabke paas chala aaunga.....

Aksh apne Aai Baba or Mansi ko yaad karte hue ro raha tha, lekin jese hi uske haath me bag se ek dusri photo nikli, to use dekh kar Aksh apne aap ko rok nahi pata or fut fut kar rone laga. Kyu ke ye photo Sakshi or Aksh ka tha, or wo bass Sakshi ki tasveer dekh kar ghanto takk rone lagta he.


Raat ke 8 baje hue the, Sakshi ne waha ab ek ghar Rent par le liya tha. Or is waqt wo bed par leti hui thi, ghar ka kitchen humesha ki tarah khali tha, ghar ke hall ki lights off thi, sirf Sakshi ke kamre me ek light jal rahi thi. Har roz ki tarah Sakshi bass yahi soch rahi thi ke wo Aksh ko kese dhunde. Sach kahe to usne Aksh ke zinda rehne ki ummid bilkul chhod di thi. Lekin uska dil kahi na kahi ye baat maan ne ko tayar nahi tha ke Aksh marr chuka he. Jabtak Sakshi apne dil se baate kare ja rahi thi, tabhi Doorbell bajti he, Sakshi akar door open karti he to samne Suhas ki Maa khadi thi.

Sakshi: Aunty.... Aap... Aap is waqt?
S. Maa: kyu nahi asakti?
Sakshi: aisi baat nahi he.... Aap... Aap ayiye na andar....
Fir S. Ki Maa andar ajati he. Sakshi pehle lights on kar deti he or dono sofe par akar beth jati he.
S. Maa: Khana abtak nahi banaya tumne Sakshi?
Sakshi: ahh... Nahi wo... Wo mera pet dard kar raha he to... Me...
Wo Suhas ki Maa se nazre churate hue kehti he.
S. Maa: Sakshi, tum jhut nahi bol pati beta.... Matt koshish kiya karo....
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apni taraf karte hue kehti he.
S. Maa: kesi halat bana rakhi he Sakshi tumne? Din ba din or bhi zyada bigad rahi he tumhari halat.... Kyu kar rahi ho aisa? Kyu apne aap ko nuksan pahocha rahi ho?
Sakshi: or me kya karu Aunty? Mera pura pariwar mujhe chhod kar chala gaya... Me kya karu fir?
Wo Suhas ki Maa ki Godd me sar rakh kar rote hue kehti he.
S. Maa: tumhe kitni baar kaha he Sakshi.... Hum sab he na tumhara pariwar..... Or to or Aksh bhi he na?
Sakshi: kaha he wo? Kaha he? Kitni koshish kar li use dhund ne ki.... Kaha he Aksh.....
Aksh ka naam sunkar Sakshi or bhi zyada rone lagi, Suhas ki Maa ne kisi tarah use shant kara diya.
S. Maa: ab Rona band karo..... Or mujhe batao tum Doctor se milkar ayi ya nahi?
Uski baat par Sakshi naa me gardan hila deti he.
S. Maa: me janti hi thi... Chalo pehle Doctor se milkar ate he....
Fir Suhas ki Maa Sakshi ko Doctor ke paas le jati he. Darasal Sakshi ki galat ki wajah se use har Hafte checkup ke liye jana padta tha, lekin Sakshi khud kabhi nahi jati thi, isliye Suhas Ki Maa use yaha le kar ati.

Khair, jese tese Sakshi kuch niwale apne gale se utar kar dawai le leti he fir Suhas ki Maa bhi use Sula kar ghar chali jati he.


Or kuch is tarah sabki zindagi guzar rahi thi. Aksh, Sakshi dono hi takleef me the. Kya Sakshi Aksh se mil payegi? Akhri DGP Abhinav ka Qaatil Aksh ko kyu kaha ja raha tha? Or sabse badi baat, Abhinav ki maut..... Sabka parda waqt ane par uth jayega.

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1 Year Later.......



Jail ki salakho ke piche, ek kone me koi ladka apne upar chadar odhe leta tha. Tabhi waha ek Hawaldar ajata he, or gate kholne lagta he.

Hawaldar: chal be oye..... sale pata nahi kese connection he tere, jaha itne bade afsar ke Qaatil ko fasi honi chahiye lekin tu to bahar nikal raha he....
Us Hawaldar ki baat sunkar us Qaatil ke chehre par ek shaitani hasi ajati he. Uska haal kafi bhayanak tha, lambe baal, badhi hui dadhi, or dhul gandagi se lipta sharir. Qaatil uthkar dhire dhire salakho ke bahar ajata he, waha uski rihayi ki sari formalities puri hone ke baad Qaatil ko waha se jane ki ijazat mil gayi. Qaatil apne dhime kadmo se jail ke bahar agaya, bahar akar wo chalte chalte ek jagah par chala jata he, jaha par kareeb 5-6 log gaadi me kuch saman load kar rahe the.

Aadmi: abe bhikari kahi ke.... Tu andar kese agaya be? Chal nikal yaha se.....
Wo aadmi uske paas ate hue kehta he, or apne haath se use dhakka de deta he. Lekin tabhi Qaatil ne piche se us aadmi ki gardan pakad kar ek hi jhatke me mod di, jis se wo aadmi dard se karhate hue wahi par gir gaya. Apne aadmi ko aise girta dekh kar waha khade baki aadmi Qaatil ki taraf ane lagte he, Qaatil niche jhuk kar zameen par padi mitti utha kar sabki aakho me fek deta he, jese hi sab logo ne apni aakhe band kar li, us bich Qaatil ne ek aadmi ke paas se khanjar chinn liya, or sabse pehle usi aadmi ke sar me wo khanjar dhasa diya. Khun ku bunde Qaatil ke chehre par udd chuki thi, jis se Qaatil ka chehra shaitani hasi se khil utha tha. Tabtak dusra Aadmi haath me khanjar liye aage akar Qaatil par vaar kar raha hota he ke Qaatil uska haath pakad kar apne Khanjar sidha us aadmi ke pet me maar deta he. Piche se 2 aadmi Qaatil par humla bolne wale the, isliye Qaatil us admi ko tadapta chhod kar piche mud jata he. Ab uske samne 2 log the, isliye wo dono Qaatil par bhari padd gaye or usme se ek aadmi ne Qaatil ki gardan ke piche Khanjar se vaar kar diya. Lekin jo dukh or dard Qaatil ke dil me the, uske samne to ye khanjar ka dard uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha, Qaatil ki aakhe gusse me aag babula ho gayi thi, usne apne aap ko dusre aadmi ke vaar se bachate hue, piche ja kar uska gala Khanjar se alag kar diya. Ye dekh kar waha bacha aakhri aadmi darr ke mare kaanp gaya. Usne apna hatiyar niche daal diya or Qaatil ke samne ghutno par haath jod ke beth gaya. Qaatil muskurate hue aage ajata he, or tezi se apna khanjar us aadmi ki aakho me dhasa deta he. Wo aadmi tadapta hua wahi gir gaya, lekin Qaatil ko uspar rehem nahi aya, usne us aadmi ke saath saath baki sabhi admiyo ki aakhe nikal li thi.


"Boss...... Boss..... Humare aadmi, humare aadmi mare gaye......"

Ek aadmi chillate hue Rana ke samne akar kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Rana gusse me uthkar khada ho gaya.
Rana: kis Madarchod me itni himmat agayi?
Aadmi: pata nahi Boss.... Me abhi waha gaya to waha humare sare Admiyo ki lashe thi, or to or un saki aakhe nikali hui he.....
Ye sab sunkar Rana Gusse me us jagah par chal padta he, uske piche Abdul bhi tha, lekin shayad Abdul janta tha ke ye sab kiska kaam ke, or isi wajah se Abdul ke chehre par ek muskurahat thi.

Rana jab waha pahocha to us jagah ji halat dekh kar dang reh gaya, jab Rana aage akar gadi me load ho raha maal dekhta he, to waha ek khun se latt patt parchi thi, Rana us parchi ko khol kar padhne lagta he, lekin us parchi ko padhne ke baad pehli baar Rana ke chehre par khauf chaya hua tha.


"Aksh...... Naam bhula nahi hoga tu? Kese bhulega? Khair, darinda samjhta he na tu khud ko? Lekin ye baat samajh le, ke ab tujhse bhi bade darinde ne is dharti par janm le liya he "Qaatil"..... Jitna Guda he, wo ab apni jaan bachane me laga de.... kyu ke behtarin shikari hu me, apne halato ka shikar nahi, Bass ghayal hu me, abhi takk mara nahi..."

Abdul: Boss..... Boss.....
Wo Rana ke paas akar use awaz de raha tha, lekin Rana ke hosh to is parchi ko padhkar kabke udd chuke the. Abdul aage akar Rana ke kandhe par haath rakh kar use hosh me lata he.
Abdul: kya hua Boss? Aap itne pareshan kyu lagg rahe ho?
Rana: A..... Aksh... Aksh wapis agaya he....
Wo apni dari hui awaz me kehta he. Abdul ko to yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ke Rana Aksh ke itne chote karname se darr gaya.
Abdul: aap chinta kyu kar rahe ho? Wo aap takk tabhi pahoch payega, jab uska samna mujhse hoga.... Or jabtak wo mujhtak ayega, wo zinda nahi hoga....
Rana: Ghayal Sher....... Ghayal Sher he wo is waqt.... dhundo use.... Mere samne zinda hi chahiye wo.....
Abdul: ho jayega Boss.... Wo aapke samne hoga.... Zinda.....


Rukha hua chehra, aakho ke niche gehre kaale daag, sukha hua sharir.... Dopeher ke 2 baje hue the, apne Office me Sakshi bethkar kaam kar rahi thi. Uski halat kafi buri thi, is waqt sablog Lunch Break par gaye the, lekin Sakshi akele bethkar apna kaam kar rahi thi. Tabhi waha Suhas ajata he.

Suhas: Sakshi, chalo khana khane.....
Sakshi: na.... Nahi... Me badme kha lungi.....
Wo apne kaam par concentrate karte hue kehti he, uski baat sunkar Suhas akar uske bagal me beth jata he.
Suhas: Sakshi tumhe yaad bhi he ke tumne kabhi thik waqt par khana khaya ho?
Wo narazgi se Sakshi ki chair apni taraf karte hue kehta he. Uski baat par Sakshi bass apni nazre jhuka leti he.
Suhas: Sakshi halat dekho apni..... Thoda to khayal rakho apna....
Sakshi: kya karu apna khayal rakh kar? Meri wajah se hi Aai Baba aaj is duniya me nahi he..... Meri galati ki saza mene apne pariwar ko di or sabko kho diya.... Sabko......
Itna kehkar Sakshi fut fut kar rone lagti he. Suhas ko to ab adat si hi ho gayi thi Sakshi ko har roz rota dekh dekh kar. Wo kisi tarah Sakshi ko sambhal leta he or uska rona band kara deta he.
Suhas: kise kho diya Sakshi tumne? Ha? Hum log he na? Or tum Aksh ko kese bhul gayi? Use dhund na baki he na?
Sakshi: nahi..... Ab apne aap ko kho chuki hu me, kisi or ko dhund na namumkin he mere liye....
Wo hatash hokar nirasha bhare swaro me kehti he.
Suhas: koi or? Sakshi wo bhai he tumhara..... Agar sab tumhari wajah se hua he, to ise tumhe hi suljhana hoga....
Fir Suhas kisi tarah se Sakshi ko apne saath le jata he lunch karne ke liye. Lunch ke baad Sakshi fir se apne kaam me lagg jati he.

Waha CBI Headquarter me Anant apne ek Officer ke saath bethkar baate kar raha tha.
Officer: Sir..... Aksh riha karwa diya he....
Anant: thik he..... Bass ab khel jese aage ja raha he, jane do....
Officer: Lekin sir, Aksh ko saza dilane ki bajaye ye sab....
Anant: saza to milegi hi Aksh ko... Lekin wo saza DGP sir ke Qaatil Aksh ko milegi....
Officer: me kuch samjha nahi....
Anant: is waqt Aksh apna badla pura karna chahta he, mujhe bass Rana or uska khas Abdul chahiye.... Or untak pahochne ka rasta sirf or sirf Aksh ke zariye hi mil sakta he... Uske baad Aksh ko bhi uske kiye ki saza zarur milegi.....
Officer: lekin Rana koi chota mota gunda to nahi he.... Aksh ko marna to uske liye chutkiyo ko kaam he.....
Anant: sahi kaha.... Aksh ko marna Rana ke liye chutkiyo ka kaam he... Lekin is waqt Aksh ek Haiwan he.... Or Haiwan ko harane ki takat har kisi me nahi hoti.....
Officer: lekin sir iske chalte Aksh ne kuch galat kaam kiye to.... Kyu ke Medical Reports ke hawale se dekhe, to uski dimagi halat thik nahi he....
Anant: uske bare me mene soch liya he.... Tum bass mera ek kaam karo.....
Aadmi: ji sir bataye.....

Fir Anant use koi kaam sop deta he, or wo Aadmi chala jata he apne kaam par.

Anant (mann me): Aksh.... Tumne Gunah to kiya he, or Gunehgar ko saza milni hi chahiye.... Saza tumhe bhi milegi.... Zarur milegi.....


Waha ghani jhadiyo ke bich Aksh betha hua tha, or tabhi piche se ek car akar waha ruk jati he, or usme se Abdul bahar ajata he.

Abdul: tayar ho apna badla pura karne ke liye?
Wo Aksh ke piche khada ho kar kehta he. Uski awaz sunkar Aksh piche mudkar dekhta he to waha Abdul tha, use dekh kar Aksh khada ho gaya.
Abdul: chalo betho andar....
Fir Abdul Aksh ko gadi me bitha kar ghane jungle ke bich chal padta he, kuch der baad dono ek tute fute ghar ke paas pahoch jate he, wo ghar Jungle ke bicho bich bana hua tha, or yaha dur dur takk kisi insan ka namo nishan nahi tha. Dono gadi se utar kar Ghar ke andar ajate he.
Abdul: jabtak tumhara badla pura nahi ho jata, tum yahi par rehna.....
Aksh bass Sari baate sunn raha tha, kyu ke Aksh ki dimagi halat kafi kharab ho gayi thi. Wo jabse Jail me tha, tabse usne ek shabd bhi apne zuban par nahi ane diya.

Khair, Abdul Car me se Aksh ke liye kuch zaruri saman le ata he, jisme kapde, shoes, uske roz marra ki chize thi, or saath me kuch Guns, Bullets, Khanjar or talwar.
Abdul: agar kisi chiz ki zarurat ho to mujhe bata dena, ye lo.... Ye phone, is phone se tum bina kisi darr ke kisi ko bhi call kar sakte ho.....
Wo Mobile phone Aksh ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Aksh bhi us se mobile le kar rakh deta he. Abdul kuch der waha bethkar or Aksh ko khana khila kar waha se nikal gaya.

Aksh ne saman ko kholkar dekha to usme Aksh ka bhi kafi sara saman tha, lekin usme sabse upar Radha, Santosh or Mansi ki saath me khinchi hui photo frame thi. Use dekh kar Aksh ki aakho se asu behne lagta he.

Aksh (mann me): A..... Aai..... Baba...... M.... Mansi..... Chinta matt karna..... B.... Bahot jald milunga me aap sab se.... Kyu ke me sirf... Me sirf apna badla pura karne takk is duniya me hu, uske baad.... Me bhi... Me bhi aap sabke paas chala aaunga.....

Aksh apne Aai Baba or Mansi ko yaad karte hue ro raha tha, lekin jese hi uske haath me bag se ek dusri photo nikli, to use dekh kar Aksh apne aap ko rok nahi pata or fut fut kar rone laga. Kyu ke ye photo Sakshi or Aksh ka tha, or wo bass Sakshi ki tasveer dekh kar ghanto takk rone lagta he.


Raat ke 8 baje hue the, Sakshi ne waha ab ek ghar Rent par le liya tha. Or is waqt wo bed par leti hui thi, ghar ka kitchen humesha ki tarah khali tha, ghar ke hall ki lights off thi, sirf Sakshi ke kamre me ek light jal rahi thi. Har roz ki tarah Sakshi bass yahi soch rahi thi ke wo Aksh ko kese dhunde. Sach kahe to usne Aksh ke zinda rehne ki ummid bilkul chhod di thi. Lekin uska dil kahi na kahi ye baat maan ne ko tayar nahi tha ke Aksh marr chuka he. Jabtak Sakshi apne dil se baate kare ja rahi thi, tabhi Doorbell bajti he, Sakshi akar door open karti he to samne Suhas ki Maa khadi thi.

Sakshi: Aunty.... Aap... Aap is waqt?
S. Maa: kyu nahi asakti?
Sakshi: aisi baat nahi he.... Aap... Aap ayiye na andar....
Fir S. Ki Maa andar ajati he. Sakshi pehle lights on kar deti he or dono sofe par akar beth jati he.
S. Maa: Khana abtak nahi banaya tumne Sakshi?
Sakshi: ahh... Nahi wo... Wo mera pet dard kar raha he to... Me...
Wo Suhas ki Maa se nazre churate hue kehti he.
S. Maa: Sakshi, tum jhut nahi bol pati beta.... Matt koshish kiya karo....
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apni taraf karte hue kehti he.
S. Maa: kesi halat bana rakhi he Sakshi tumne? Din ba din or bhi zyada bigad rahi he tumhari halat.... Kyu kar rahi ho aisa? Kyu apne aap ko nuksan pahocha rahi ho?
Sakshi: or me kya karu Aunty? Mera pura pariwar mujhe chhod kar chala gaya... Me kya karu fir?
Wo Suhas ki Maa ki Godd me sar rakh kar rote hue kehti he.
S. Maa: tumhe kitni baar kaha he Sakshi.... Hum sab he na tumhara pariwar..... Or to or Aksh bhi he na?
Sakshi: kaha he wo? Kaha he? Kitni koshish kar li use dhund ne ki.... Kaha he Aksh.....
Aksh ka naam sunkar Sakshi or bhi zyada rone lagi, Suhas ki Maa ne kisi tarah use shant kara diya.
S. Maa: ab Rona band karo..... Or mujhe batao tum Doctor se milkar ayi ya nahi?
Uski baat par Sakshi naa me gardan hila deti he.
S. Maa: me janti hi thi... Chalo pehle Doctor se milkar ate he....
Fir Suhas ki Maa Sakshi ko Doctor ke paas le jati he. Darasal Sakshi ki galat ki wajah se use har Hafte checkup ke liye jana padta tha, lekin Sakshi khud kabhi nahi jati thi, isliye Suhas Ki Maa use yaha le kar ati.

Khair, jese tese Sakshi kuch niwale apne gale se utar kar dawai le leti he fir Suhas ki Maa bhi use Sula kar ghar chali jati he.


Or kuch is tarah sabki zindagi guzar rahi thi. Aksh, Sakshi dono hi takleef me the. Kya Sakshi Aksh se mil payegi? Akhri DGP Abhinav ka Qaatil Aksh ko kyu kaha ja raha tha? Or sabse badi baat, Abhinav ki maut..... Sabka parda waqt ane par uth jayega.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling 😊 😊
ab ye kya hai :mad2:
ek achhe bhale masoom ladke ko Qaatil bana diya :mad:
Akhir ye ho kya raha hai.... us Rana ki to aisi ki taisi :chop:
Idhar sakshi ki haalat thik nahi... upor ye kaisi afwa hai ki aksh aur sakshi ke mata pita na rahe ab...
Qaatil sahab ye sab na chaulbe is story pe chaliye, chaliye jaldi se sab ko wapis laiye story pe...
waise is naye wale aksh jis tarike pesh kiya hai lage ki dusmano ke liye ye haiwan hai jo kahar barsane aaya ho..
aur ye anant.... isko koi kaam dham nahi hai kya jo us bichare ke piche para hai hath dhoke :sigh:
Btw shayad ab Rana ki khair nahi.... Rana to giyo..
Let's see what happens next
Update padhkar mood kharab coz yaar itne achhe kirdaaro ke sath aisa kuch ho jana.. sachme unbelievable & unexpecteble
Btw brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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Estimated Reading Time: 00:13:00











1 Year Later.......



Jail ki salakho ke piche, ek kone me koi ladka apne upar chadar odhe leta tha. Tabhi waha ek Hawaldar ajata he, or gate kholne lagta he.

Hawaldar: chal be oye..... sale pata nahi kese connection he tere, jaha itne bade afsar ke Qaatil ko fasi honi chahiye lekin tu to bahar nikal raha he....
Us Hawaldar ki baat sunkar us Qaatil ke chehre par ek shaitani hasi ajati he. Uska haal kafi bhayanak tha, lambe baal, badhi hui dadhi, or dhul gandagi se lipta sharir. Qaatil uthkar dhire dhire salakho ke bahar ajata he, waha uski rihayi ki sari formalities puri hone ke baad Qaatil ko waha se jane ki ijazat mil gayi. Qaatil apne dhime kadmo se jail ke bahar agaya, bahar akar wo chalte chalte ek jagah par chala jata he, jaha par kareeb 5-6 log gaadi me kuch saman load kar rahe the.

Aadmi: abe bhikari kahi ke.... Tu andar kese agaya be? Chal nikal yaha se.....
Wo aadmi uske paas ate hue kehta he, or apne haath se use dhakka de deta he. Lekin tabhi Qaatil ne piche se us aadmi ki gardan pakad kar ek hi jhatke me mod di, jis se wo aadmi dard se karhate hue wahi par gir gaya. Apne aadmi ko aise girta dekh kar waha khade baki aadmi Qaatil ki taraf ane lagte he, Qaatil niche jhuk kar zameen par padi mitti utha kar sabki aakho me fek deta he, jese hi sab logo ne apni aakhe band kar li, us bich Qaatil ne ek aadmi ke paas se khanjar chinn liya, or sabse pehle usi aadmi ke sar me wo khanjar dhasa diya. Khun ku bunde Qaatil ke chehre par udd chuki thi, jis se Qaatil ka chehra shaitani hasi se khil utha tha. Tabtak dusra Aadmi haath me khanjar liye aage akar Qaatil par vaar kar raha hota he ke Qaatil uska haath pakad kar apne Khanjar sidha us aadmi ke pet me maar deta he. Piche se 2 aadmi Qaatil par humla bolne wale the, isliye Qaatil us admi ko tadapta chhod kar piche mud jata he. Ab uske samne 2 log the, isliye wo dono Qaatil par bhari padd gaye or usme se ek aadmi ne Qaatil ki gardan ke piche Khanjar se vaar kar diya. Lekin jo dukh or dard Qaatil ke dil me the, uske samne to ye khanjar ka dard uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha, Qaatil ki aakhe gusse me aag babula ho gayi thi, usne apne aap ko dusre aadmi ke vaar se bachate hue, piche ja kar uska gala Khanjar se alag kar diya. Ye dekh kar waha bacha aakhri aadmi darr ke mare kaanp gaya. Usne apna hatiyar niche daal diya or Qaatil ke samne ghutno par haath jod ke beth gaya. Qaatil muskurate hue aage ajata he, or tezi se apna khanjar us aadmi ki aakho me dhasa deta he. Wo aadmi tadapta hua wahi gir gaya, lekin Qaatil ko uspar rehem nahi aya, usne us aadmi ke saath saath baki sabhi admiyo ki aakhe nikal li thi.


"Boss...... Boss..... Humare aadmi, humare aadmi mare gaye......"

Ek aadmi chillate hue Rana ke samne akar kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Rana gusse me uthkar khada ho gaya.
Rana: kis Madarchod me itni himmat agayi?
Aadmi: pata nahi Boss.... Me abhi waha gaya to waha humare sare Admiyo ki lashe thi, or to or un saki aakhe nikali hui he.....
Ye sab sunkar Rana Gusse me us jagah par chal padta he, uske piche Abdul bhi tha, lekin shayad Abdul janta tha ke ye sab kiska kaam ke, or isi wajah se Abdul ke chehre par ek muskurahat thi.

Rana jab waha pahocha to us jagah ji halat dekh kar dang reh gaya, jab Rana aage akar gadi me load ho raha maal dekhta he, to waha ek khun se latt patt parchi thi, Rana us parchi ko khol kar padhne lagta he, lekin us parchi ko padhne ke baad pehli baar Rana ke chehre par khauf chaya hua tha.


"Aksh...... Naam bhula nahi hoga tu? Kese bhulega? Khair, darinda samjhta he na tu khud ko? Lekin ye baat samajh le, ke ab tujhse bhi bade darinde ne is dharti par janm le liya he "Qaatil"..... Jitna Guda he, wo ab apni jaan bachane me laga de.... kyu ke behtarin shikari hu me, apne halato ka shikar nahi, Bass ghayal hu me, abhi takk mara nahi..."

Abdul: Boss..... Boss.....
Wo Rana ke paas akar use awaz de raha tha, lekin Rana ke hosh to is parchi ko padhkar kabke udd chuke the. Abdul aage akar Rana ke kandhe par haath rakh kar use hosh me lata he.
Abdul: kya hua Boss? Aap itne pareshan kyu lagg rahe ho?
Rana: A..... Aksh... Aksh wapis agaya he....
Wo apni dari hui awaz me kehta he. Abdul ko to yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ke Rana Aksh ke itne chote karname se darr gaya.
Abdul: aap chinta kyu kar rahe ho? Wo aap takk tabhi pahoch payega, jab uska samna mujhse hoga.... Or jabtak wo mujhtak ayega, wo zinda nahi hoga....
Rana: Ghayal Sher....... Ghayal Sher he wo is waqt.... dhundo use.... Mere samne zinda hi chahiye wo.....
Abdul: ho jayega Boss.... Wo aapke samne hoga.... Zinda.....


Rukha hua chehra, aakho ke niche gehre kaale daag, sukha hua sharir.... Dopeher ke 2 baje hue the, apne Office me Sakshi bethkar kaam kar rahi thi. Uski halat kafi buri thi, is waqt sablog Lunch Break par gaye the, lekin Sakshi akele bethkar apna kaam kar rahi thi. Tabhi waha Suhas ajata he.

Suhas: Sakshi, chalo khana khane.....
Sakshi: na.... Nahi... Me badme kha lungi.....
Wo apne kaam par concentrate karte hue kehti he, uski baat sunkar Suhas akar uske bagal me beth jata he.
Suhas: Sakshi tumhe yaad bhi he ke tumne kabhi thik waqt par khana khaya ho?
Wo narazgi se Sakshi ki chair apni taraf karte hue kehta he. Uski baat par Sakshi bass apni nazre jhuka leti he.
Suhas: Sakshi halat dekho apni..... Thoda to khayal rakho apna....
Sakshi: kya karu apna khayal rakh kar? Meri wajah se hi Aai Baba aaj is duniya me nahi he..... Meri galati ki saza mene apne pariwar ko di or sabko kho diya.... Sabko......
Itna kehkar Sakshi fut fut kar rone lagti he. Suhas ko to ab adat si hi ho gayi thi Sakshi ko har roz rota dekh dekh kar. Wo kisi tarah Sakshi ko sambhal leta he or uska rona band kara deta he.
Suhas: kise kho diya Sakshi tumne? Ha? Hum log he na? Or tum Aksh ko kese bhul gayi? Use dhund na baki he na?
Sakshi: nahi..... Ab apne aap ko kho chuki hu me, kisi or ko dhund na namumkin he mere liye....
Wo hatash hokar nirasha bhare swaro me kehti he.
Suhas: koi or? Sakshi wo bhai he tumhara..... Agar sab tumhari wajah se hua he, to ise tumhe hi suljhana hoga....
Fir Suhas kisi tarah se Sakshi ko apne saath le jata he lunch karne ke liye. Lunch ke baad Sakshi fir se apne kaam me lagg jati he.

Waha CBI Headquarter me Anant apne ek Officer ke saath bethkar baate kar raha tha.
Officer: Sir..... Aksh riha karwa diya he....
Anant: thik he..... Bass ab khel jese aage ja raha he, jane do....
Officer: Lekin sir, Aksh ko saza dilane ki bajaye ye sab....
Anant: saza to milegi hi Aksh ko... Lekin wo saza DGP sir ke Qaatil Aksh ko milegi....
Officer: me kuch samjha nahi....
Anant: is waqt Aksh apna badla pura karna chahta he, mujhe bass Rana or uska khas Abdul chahiye.... Or untak pahochne ka rasta sirf or sirf Aksh ke zariye hi mil sakta he... Uske baad Aksh ko bhi uske kiye ki saza zarur milegi.....
Officer: lekin Rana koi chota mota gunda to nahi he.... Aksh ko marna to uske liye chutkiyo ko kaam he.....
Anant: sahi kaha.... Aksh ko marna Rana ke liye chutkiyo ka kaam he... Lekin is waqt Aksh ek Haiwan he.... Or Haiwan ko harane ki takat har kisi me nahi hoti.....
Officer: lekin sir iske chalte Aksh ne kuch galat kaam kiye to.... Kyu ke Medical Reports ke hawale se dekhe, to uski dimagi halat thik nahi he....
Anant: uske bare me mene soch liya he.... Tum bass mera ek kaam karo.....
Aadmi: ji sir bataye.....

Fir Anant use koi kaam sop deta he, or wo Aadmi chala jata he apne kaam par.

Anant (mann me): Aksh.... Tumne Gunah to kiya he, or Gunehgar ko saza milni hi chahiye.... Saza tumhe bhi milegi.... Zarur milegi.....


Waha ghani jhadiyo ke bich Aksh betha hua tha, or tabhi piche se ek car akar waha ruk jati he, or usme se Abdul bahar ajata he.

Abdul: tayar ho apna badla pura karne ke liye?
Wo Aksh ke piche khada ho kar kehta he. Uski awaz sunkar Aksh piche mudkar dekhta he to waha Abdul tha, use dekh kar Aksh khada ho gaya.
Abdul: chalo betho andar....
Fir Abdul Aksh ko gadi me bitha kar ghane jungle ke bich chal padta he, kuch der baad dono ek tute fute ghar ke paas pahoch jate he, wo ghar Jungle ke bicho bich bana hua tha, or yaha dur dur takk kisi insan ka namo nishan nahi tha. Dono gadi se utar kar Ghar ke andar ajate he.
Abdul: jabtak tumhara badla pura nahi ho jata, tum yahi par rehna.....
Aksh bass Sari baate sunn raha tha, kyu ke Aksh ki dimagi halat kafi kharab ho gayi thi. Wo jabse Jail me tha, tabse usne ek shabd bhi apne zuban par nahi ane diya.

Khair, Abdul Car me se Aksh ke liye kuch zaruri saman le ata he, jisme kapde, shoes, uske roz marra ki chize thi, or saath me kuch Guns, Bullets, Khanjar or talwar.
Abdul: agar kisi chiz ki zarurat ho to mujhe bata dena, ye lo.... Ye phone, is phone se tum bina kisi darr ke kisi ko bhi call kar sakte ho.....
Wo Mobile phone Aksh ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Aksh bhi us se mobile le kar rakh deta he. Abdul kuch der waha bethkar or Aksh ko khana khila kar waha se nikal gaya.

Aksh ne saman ko kholkar dekha to usme Aksh ka bhi kafi sara saman tha, lekin usme sabse upar Radha, Santosh or Mansi ki saath me khinchi hui photo frame thi. Use dekh kar Aksh ki aakho se asu behne lagta he.

Aksh (mann me): A..... Aai..... Baba...... M.... Mansi..... Chinta matt karna..... B.... Bahot jald milunga me aap sab se.... Kyu ke me sirf... Me sirf apna badla pura karne takk is duniya me hu, uske baad.... Me bhi... Me bhi aap sabke paas chala aaunga.....

Aksh apne Aai Baba or Mansi ko yaad karte hue ro raha tha, lekin jese hi uske haath me bag se ek dusri photo nikli, to use dekh kar Aksh apne aap ko rok nahi pata or fut fut kar rone laga. Kyu ke ye photo Sakshi or Aksh ka tha, or wo bass Sakshi ki tasveer dekh kar ghanto takk rone lagta he.


Raat ke 8 baje hue the, Sakshi ne waha ab ek ghar Rent par le liya tha. Or is waqt wo bed par leti hui thi, ghar ka kitchen humesha ki tarah khali tha, ghar ke hall ki lights off thi, sirf Sakshi ke kamre me ek light jal rahi thi. Har roz ki tarah Sakshi bass yahi soch rahi thi ke wo Aksh ko kese dhunde. Sach kahe to usne Aksh ke zinda rehne ki ummid bilkul chhod di thi. Lekin uska dil kahi na kahi ye baat maan ne ko tayar nahi tha ke Aksh marr chuka he. Jabtak Sakshi apne dil se baate kare ja rahi thi, tabhi Doorbell bajti he, Sakshi akar door open karti he to samne Suhas ki Maa khadi thi.

Sakshi: Aunty.... Aap... Aap is waqt?
S. Maa: kyu nahi asakti?
Sakshi: aisi baat nahi he.... Aap... Aap ayiye na andar....
Fir S. Ki Maa andar ajati he. Sakshi pehle lights on kar deti he or dono sofe par akar beth jati he.
S. Maa: Khana abtak nahi banaya tumne Sakshi?
Sakshi: ahh... Nahi wo... Wo mera pet dard kar raha he to... Me...
Wo Suhas ki Maa se nazre churate hue kehti he.
S. Maa: Sakshi, tum jhut nahi bol pati beta.... Matt koshish kiya karo....
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apni taraf karte hue kehti he.
S. Maa: kesi halat bana rakhi he Sakshi tumne? Din ba din or bhi zyada bigad rahi he tumhari halat.... Kyu kar rahi ho aisa? Kyu apne aap ko nuksan pahocha rahi ho?
Sakshi: or me kya karu Aunty? Mera pura pariwar mujhe chhod kar chala gaya... Me kya karu fir?
Wo Suhas ki Maa ki Godd me sar rakh kar rote hue kehti he.
S. Maa: tumhe kitni baar kaha he Sakshi.... Hum sab he na tumhara pariwar..... Or to or Aksh bhi he na?
Sakshi: kaha he wo? Kaha he? Kitni koshish kar li use dhund ne ki.... Kaha he Aksh.....
Aksh ka naam sunkar Sakshi or bhi zyada rone lagi, Suhas ki Maa ne kisi tarah use shant kara diya.
S. Maa: ab Rona band karo..... Or mujhe batao tum Doctor se milkar ayi ya nahi?
Uski baat par Sakshi naa me gardan hila deti he.
S. Maa: me janti hi thi... Chalo pehle Doctor se milkar ate he....
Fir Suhas ki Maa Sakshi ko Doctor ke paas le jati he. Darasal Sakshi ki galat ki wajah se use har Hafte checkup ke liye jana padta tha, lekin Sakshi khud kabhi nahi jati thi, isliye Suhas Ki Maa use yaha le kar ati.

Khair, jese tese Sakshi kuch niwale apne gale se utar kar dawai le leti he fir Suhas ki Maa bhi use Sula kar ghar chali jati he.


Or kuch is tarah sabki zindagi guzar rahi thi. Aksh, Sakshi dono hi takleef me the. Kya Sakshi Aksh se mil payegi? Akhri DGP Abhinav ka Qaatil Aksh ko kyu kaha ja raha tha? Or sabse badi baat, Abhinav ki maut..... Sabka parda waqt ane par uth jayega.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling 😊 😊
Arey yeh kya writer sahab aapne toh aksh ko enterpenure se Qaatil bna Diya 🤭🤭kahanine toh aapna rukh pura hi mod liya uper se Aksh or Sakshi dono itne dukh m hai haan m yeh zroor chahti thi kii Mansi inn dono kii lyf se chali jaye prr aapne toh usse story se hi gayab krr Diya 😂 abb sakshi ko bhi thk krdo or Aksh or sakshi ko ekk krdo bcz dono ko ekk dusre ki zroorat h or abb toh unke pass koi hai nhi toh ekk sath bhi reh skte h jaise mrji chahe......

Or jaisa abb aapne Aksh ka kirdaar dikhaya h voh toh pura devil 😈 ban gya h Rana se bhi bada vala haiwan abb Rana ki khair nhi or shayad DCP ko bhi Aksh ne nhi mara h prr yeh Rana zroor aksh ki haiwaniyat ka shikaar bneya kahani m bht suspense hai bhaiii abb mazza aayega 😈😎


Great update writer sahab as alwz .....i luv it abb toh mazza aayega kyu kii abb story m action aayega or saare Purane raaz khulenge orr my favourite part Sakshi or Aksh bhi ekk honge kyu ki abb unke bich m koi nhi h now egerly waiting for nxt update ❤️❤️❤️
 
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