Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

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Chapter 2 - The Journey

Update 2

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Subah subah Sakshi tayar ho kar College jane ke liye nikal rahi thi, roz ki tarah hi aaj bhi Sakshi bhagwaan se prarthana kar rahi thi, or akar bahar hall me beth jati he, Radha nashta bana kar Sakshi ko de deti he.

Sakshi: Aai, Aksh soya he kya abtak?
Wo Aksh ko waha par na dekh kar puch leti he.
Aai: ha sone do.... Der se aya tha na wo raat me?
Sakshi: ha.... Lekin wo kafi thak chuka tha...
Santosh: chalo der se hi sahi use samajh to ane laga ke jo wo soch raha he hum logo ke liye waisa karna namumkin he.
Wo apne kaam par jane ke liye nikla tha ke Radha or Sakshi ki baat sun kar wahi ruk kar kehta he.
Sakshi: kya Baba aap bhi? Aap ko sach me lagta he ke Aksh itni jaldi haar manega? Wo to bass aage ke liye Saving kar raha he.
Wo haste hue Santosh se kehti he.
Santosh: tu to kuch bol hi mat.... Use samjhane ke bajaye humesha uski tarafdari karti rehti he....
Sakshi: Baba agar wo kuch galat karega to thodi na me uski side lungi.... Aksh apni jagah par bilkul sahi he....
Radha: are aap kis se behes karne lage... Bhuliye mat ye Aksh ki hi behen he, Aksh ki sari adate isme bhi thus thus kar bhari hui he.....
Wo kitchen me se kaam karte hue Santosh se kehti he.
Santosh: sahi kaha.... Waise padhai kesi chal rahi Sakshi?
Sakshi: ekdum badhiya chal rahi he...
Santosh: Exam ki dates agayi ya nahi?
Sakshi: ha... Agle mahine se Exams hone he...
Santosh: chalo thik he, padhai par dhyan dena, or chalo me tujhe college chhod deta hu...
Sakshi: nahi Baba aap jayiye... Mujhe thodi der he College jane me...
Santosh: thik he... Me chalta hu...
Or fir Santosh apne kaam par chala jata he.

Sakshi bhi kuch der baad apne college jane ke liye nikal jati he. Jab wo bus me bethi thi tab use Neha ka call ajata he, Sakshi jaldi se call pick kar leti he.

Sakshi: ha Neha Bolo....
Neha: Sakshi me kuch din college nahi ane wali thik he?
Sakshi: kya? Lekin kyu?
Neha: are wo meri Nani ki tabiyat khafi kharab he, to hum sab abhi unke paas jane ke liye nikal rahe he...
Sakshi: ohh.... Accha thik he, sambhal kar jana...
Neha: okay.. bye..
Sakshi: bye...
Or fir wo call cut kar deti he, kuch der baad Sakshi college pahoch gayi. Class shuru hone me thoda waqt tha to Sakshi ja kar Library me beth jati he.

Waha counter par ek ladka kaam kar raha tha, or Sakshi uske kuch duri par beth kar kitab padh rahi thi. Us ladke ki nazar Sakshi par jati he or wo apne daat dikhaye Sakshi ko dekh muskuraye ja raha tha. Sakshi ki nazar achanak us ladke par padti he to wo ek pal ke liye darr si jati he.

Sakshi(mann me): Deva..... Ye Bavlat(pagal) kon he? Kitni buri tarike se dekh raha he....

Lekin wo ladka to baaz ane ko razi nahi tha.

Sakshi(mann me): iski to..... Kese ghur raha he ye, or daat to aise dikha raha he jese kisi toothpaste ki ad kar raha ho...
Wo apne mann me soch rahi hoti he or ye sochte hue Sakshi ki hasi chutt jati he. Or Sakshi ki hasi us ladke ne dekh li.

Ladka(mann me): are bhaiya..... Ye to muskura rahi he, haye... Matlab line clear he beta....
Wo Sakshi ko ek tak dekhe soche ja raha tha, ab Sakshi ko waha or betha nahi ja raha tha, to wo uthkar book shelf ke paas chali jati he or waha koi book dhund ne lagti he. Tabhi wo ladka Sakshi ke paas ajata he.

Sakshi(mann me): ahhh yaar ye Joker yaha kyu agaya?
Ladka: h...... Hi ji......
Wo bina Sakshi ko dekhe kehta he, Sakshi ka mann to use thappad lagane ka kar raha tha. Sakshi bas use gusse se dekhti he or apni book dhun ne me lagg jati he.
Ladka: mene kaha Hi ji.....
Wo Sakshi ke nazdeek ja kar dhire se kehta he.
Sakshi: tere Hi ki aisi ki taisi.... kya ghure ja raha he tu mujhe?
Wo gusse me thodi unchi awaz me us se puchti he. Lekin shayad ye ladka sar ke bal gira tha, kyu ke wo ab bhi bas hase hi ja raha tha.
Sakshi: tu pagal he? Muh band kar apna....
Uske kehne par akhir kar wo ladka apna bhayanak Hasna rok deta he.
Ladka: ji aap gusse me bahot Khubsurat dikhti ho...
Sakshi: accha? Haath me chappal le kar tujhe marte hue us se bhi zyada Khubsurat lagungi, dekhna he?
Wo apne daat piste hue kehti he.
Ladka: aap to bahdak gayi.... Hum to bas baat karne aye the...
Sakshi: baat..... Iske aage apna chehra dikhaya na to baat karne ke layak nahi chhodungi, samjha...
Wo gusse me us se kehti he or ek kitab uske sar me maar ke waha se bahar ajati he.

Ladka: ye to garam mijaz ki he.... Lekin Badi cute he....
Wo apna sar sehlate hue khud se kehta he. Or ja kar apne kaam me lagg jata he.

Sakshi(mann me): Bavlat..... Shakal dekhi he ayne me? Hasta he to kisi Joker se kam nahi lagta, Huhhh....
Wo apna muh fulaye mann me sochte hue class ki taraf ja rahi thi. Aise hi classes shuru ho jati he, or Sakshi apni padhai me lagg jati he.



Surat me ek CBI inspector jiska naam Khan tha wo apni car se kisi mission ki tayari karne ja raha hota he. Uske kaan me Bluetooth earphones lage the jis se wo CBI head Abhinav Roy se baat kar raha tha.

Khan: hello Sir....
Abhinav: Ha Khan bolo...
Khan: sir mujhe us Rana ke bare me kuch Sensitive information mili he....
Abhinav: kya?
Wo Khan ki baat sunkar heran reh jata he, kyu ke jiske bare me wo baat kar raha tha uski koi information milna next to impossible hota tha.
Khan: yes sir.... Is se hume Rana ko pakadne me asani hogi...
Abhinav: very good Khan... Tum abhi kaha ho?
Wo kafi khushi se kehta he.
Khan: Sir me abhi Office hi araha hu....
Abhinav: thik he, me tumhara intezar kar raha hu, jaldi aao...
Khan: okay sir....
Or fir wo call cut kar deta he. Khan ke Gaadi ki raftar thodi tez thi, lekin tabhi uske samne crossing se ek bada sa truck ajata he, Raftar tez hone se Khan car ko control nahi kar pata, or ja kar truck se takra jata he. Takkar itni tez hui thi ke Khan behosh ho gaya.

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Khan dhire dhire hosh me araha tha, uski akhe dhire dhire khul rahi thi, jese hi wo hosh me aya to uske pero tale se zameen hi khisak gayi. Kyu ke uske samne kam se kam 40-50 log haatho me gun liye khade the, or Khan waha lachar sa zameen par gira hua tha. Tabhi Khan ke piche se ek Aadmi apne Ek haath me jalti hui cigarette, or dusre haath me dhar daar Talvar le kar samne ajata he. Wo aadmi or koi nahi balki Rana tha.

Rana Khan ke samne khada tha, tabhi ek admi Rana ke liye chair la kar rakh deta he, Rana cigarette ki ek kush lete hue chair par beth jata he. Khan use kafi gusse se dekh raha tha. Rana Talwar ka aage ka nukila hissa le ja kar Khan ke gale par rakh deta he. Khan ke haath per bandhe hone se wo kuch kar nahi pa raha tha, or agar uske haath per khule bhi hote to bhi wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha.

Rana: Khan.... Huhh... Jis se Gujrat ke bade bade logo ki Gaand fat jati he, or wo bechara mere samne lachar sa pada he. Hahaha
Wo ek shaitani hasi ke saath kehta he. Uski talwar itni dhar daar thi ke sirf Khan ke gale par rakh kar bhi waha khun araha tha.
Khan: M.... Matharchod.... Mere haath to azad kar... Fir teri bhi Gaand na fadi to mera naam bhi Khan nahi....
Wo gurrate hue Rana ki akho me akhe daal kar kehta he. Or apne ghutno par beth jata he.
Rana: accha? Dekh apni baat se mukarna nahi....
Or ye kehkar Rana khada hota he, or ja kar Khan ke piche ruk jata he. Uske sare admi samajh gaye the ke ab yaha kya hone wala he, tabhi waha Khan ki zordar chink nikal jati he.

Khan: ahhhhhh..... Ahhhhh.... Uhhhh...

Khan tadapte hue apne muh ke bal gir ke chilla raha tha, kyu ke Rana ne uska ek haath kaat kar alag kar diya. Kisi ko tadapta hua dekh kar Rana ko bahot khushi hoti thi. Khan apne dusre haath ke zariye uthne ki koshish kar raha tha Ke tabhi Rana ne ulte gire hue Khan ki pith par apna per rakh diya.
Rana: samne itne sare admi Guns le kar khade he, lekin me tujhe maar raha hu talwar se.... Kya he na, mera jo bhi dushman mere zyada paas chala ata he na, to usko aise hi tadapta hua dekh kar mera dil khush ho jata he. Hahahaha.....
Or fir Rana niche jhuk kar Khan ke baal pakad leta he or uska sar upar utha ta he.
Rana: Mr. Khan..... Abhinav se hi milne ja raha tha na tu? Khair.... Tu Abhinav ke paas to zarur pahochega, lekin tu us se baat nahi kar payega.... Pata he kyu?
Ye kehte hue wo Khan ka sar chhod deta he, or apni talwar se Khan ka dusra haath bhi kaat deta he.

Khan: ahhhhhhh......... Uhhhh.... N....... Na..... Nahi.... Ba.... bachega...... kabhi na..... Kabhi.... To.... Ahhhhh
Wo apni dard bhari tuti awaz me Rana se keh raha tha, lekin tabhi Rana apni Talwar sidhi Khan ke sar ke piche se ghusa deta he, jis se ab Dhire dhire khan ki saase tham rahi thi. Lekin Khan ki akhri saas lene se pehle Rana uska Gala hi alag kar deta he. Is tarah Rana ke haath se ek or jabaz jisne Rana ke khilaf jane ki koshish ki mara gaya. Or uske saath saath wo sabut bhi.

Rana: Huhhh.... Ab jayega tu Abhinav ke paas..... Abhinav.... Tu tere jabaz mujhe dhund ne me laga te ja, or me unko aisi hi dard naak maut deta jaunga.. hahahaha.....
Wo zor zor se haste hue kehta he, fir ek aadmi Rana ko cigarette de deta he, or Rana maze me apni cigarette pine lagta he.



Yaha CBI Headquarters me Abhinav apne cabin me besabri se Khan ka intezar kar rah tha. Lekin tabhi ek inspector bhagte hue Abhinav ke cabin me ajata he.

Inspector: Boss..... Boss......
Abhinav: kya hua?
Inspector: Boss.... K...... Khan Sir......
Abhinav: kya hua? Khan kya?
Inspector: sir Parking me.... Khan sir ki gadi buri halat me mili, or usme Sir.... Ki.... Laash tukdo me thi....
Uski baat sunkar Abhinav hakka bakka reh jata he, or dono jaldi se Parking area me chale jate he. Abhinav Khan ki laash ke tukde dekh kar apne Asu rok na paya, kyu ke Khan jese jabaz Inspector ko khona CBI ke liye badi dukh ki baat thi.


Abhinav: Rana..... Ye sab tera hi khel he na? Lekin bass tu dekh.... Khan ki Qurbani zaya nahi jayegi.... Katayi nahi jayegi....




Subah ke kareeb 11 baje hue the, Aman subah hi kuch Meeting ke liye ghar se bahar chala gaya tha, Kiran upar Mansi ke kamre me chali jati he. is waqt Mansi apne kamre me, ya ye kehna galat nahi hoga ke kisi mehel jese uske kamre me soyi hui thi. Kal uska 18th birthday tha or kal party ki wajah se Mansi der raat soyi thi. Kiran Mansi ke paas ja kar beth jati he.

Kiran: Mansi..... Beta utho.... Kab tak sona he tumhe?
Wo Mansi ke mathe par pyaar se haath ferte hue kehti he. Apni Maa ke sparsh se Mansi turant jaag jati he. Or Jaldi se Kiran ko kaskar hug karti he.
Mansi: Good Morning Mom.....
Kiran: konsi Good Morning he ye? Time dekho....
Mansi jaldi se ghadi par nazar dalti he to uske chehre ke haaw bhaw hi badal jate he.
Mansi: ohh No.... Mom aapne mujhe jagaya kyu nahi, mujhe Dad ke saath jana tha Vadodara....
Wo roti hui shakal banate hue apne haath per patak kar Kiran se kehti he.
Kiran: Are are.... Me to ek baar ayi thi tumhe jagane, lekin tum to jagi hi nahi, tumhare Dad bhi aye the, lekin tumhe sone se fursat mile tabb na....
Wo Mansi ko shant karate hue kehti he, Mansi chup to ho gayi lekin wo kafi udas si lagg rahi thi.
Kiran: Ab aise mujhse ruth kar mere din ki Shuruwat karogi Mansi tum?
Wo Mansi ke gaal kinch te hue puchti he.
Mansi: me aapse gussa nahi hu...
Kiran: to fir?
Mansi: me Dad se gussa hu.... Pichle tin dino se keh rahi thi na me ke mujhe bhi unke saath jana he, or wo akele hi chale gaye. Ab ane do unhe....
Wo apna muh fulate hue bade hi gusse me kehti he.
Kiran: accha baba.... Ab ye gussa chhodo or jaldi se fresh ho kar niche ajao....
Mansi: okay....
Or fir Kiran niche chali jati he. Mansi uth kar fresh ho jati he or kapde pehen kar niche Breakfast karne chali jati he. Aaj Mansi ko dekh kar to koi bhi apna kaleja nikal kar uske samne rakh deta.

Mansi ne is waqt half Sleeve, Cropped T-shirt or blue jeans pehni thi, jisme wo baot hi Khubsurat lagg rahi thi. Mansi breakfast karne chali jati he, or Kiran uske saatah hi bethi hui thi.

Kiran: accha Mansi.... Kal tumne bilkul padhai nahi ki he, aaj bilkul padhai miss nahi karni...
Wo Mansi ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Mansi: ummm... Mom... Aaj to meri azadi ka din he, or aap chahti he ke me band kamre me padhai karu?
Kiran: azadi? Ye kya keh rahi ho Mansi?
Mansi: ab ne 18 ho gayi hu, matlab me Drive karne ke liye Legal hu na? To aaj me ji bhar ke apni pyari pyari cars chalungi.....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehti he.
Kiran: Mansi, tumhe ye chuttiya padhai karne ke liye mili he.....
Mansi: are to kar lungi na padhai.... Don't worry... Or me ja rahi hu ab...
Wo chair se uthkar Aage badhte hue kehti he.
Kiran: are ruk jao, me bhi ati hu tumhare saath...
Wo Mansi ke piche jate hue kehti he.
Mansi: No.... Me akeli jaungi....
Kiran: beta....
Mansi: mujhe kuch nahi sunn na... Me akeli jaungi.... Akeli hi jaungi.....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehti he. Ab Mansi ki zidd ke aage Kiran chup pad jati he.
Kiran: thik he... Thik he.... lekin Slow speed me drive karogi tum okay?
Wo Mansi ko ungli dikhate hue puchti he.
Mansi: Mom... Ye Sport car 20 ki speed se chalau fir? Kya aap bhi.... Me dhyan rakhungi na...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar kehti he.
Kiran: accha thik he... Or jaldi ajana ghar...
Wo Mansi ke sar pe haath ferte hue kehti he, Fir Mansi Main door ke bahar ajati he jaha 5-6 Cars Ready To Drive khadi thi. Mansi in me se apni favorite car, Maserati choose karti he, Mansi ko bahar ata dekh Driver turant uske paas chala ata he.

Mansi: Uncle aaj me akeli jaungi.... Mujhe is car ki Chabi dijiye na....
Wo Driver ko rokte hue kehti he.
Driver: lekin sahab ne mana kiya he na aapko akele car chalane se...
Mansi: wo to pehle ki baa ho gayi na... Now I'm Legal to Drive... Please jaldi se car ki chabi de dijiye na...
Fir Driver use Car ki chabi de deta he. Mansi badi utsukt thi, wo jaldi se car me beth kar gadi start kar ke bahar chali jati he. Aaj Mansi bahot khush thi, wo sabse pehle apni Friend Anu ke ghar chali jati he.

Anu: Aao Mansi andar....
Wo door open kar ke samne Mansi ko dekh kar kehti he.
Mansi: Are andar nahi.... Bahar chalo....
Wo Anu ka haath pakad kar bahar khinch te hue kehti he.
Anu: are ruk to jao... Mom ko to bata dene do...
Mansi: ahh... Thik he jaldi...
Fir wo dono ghar ke andar chali jati he.
A. Mom: are Mansi... Ajao betho....
Wo Mansi ko ghar me ata dekh kehti he.
Mansi: nahi nahi Aunty..... Me to aapki beti ko le jane ayi hu...
A. Mummy: accha? Or kaha le jana he use? Exam arahi he tum logo ki, or....
Mansi: Aunty kyu chinta karti ho aap? Anu padhai kare ya na kare... Use to accha ladka hi milega... Or waise bhi, College me ladke pagal ho jate he Anu ko dekh kar....
Anu: Mansi... Kuch bhi mat bola karo tum....
Wo akhe badi karte hue gusse me Mansi se kehti he.
A. Mom: accha? Fir to tum par bhi kitne hi Aashiq fida honge....
Mansi: hmmm... Wo to he... Lekin me tthehri Virani Industries ki hone wali CEO or CEO ko is pyaar vyaar ke chakkar me nahi padna chahiye...
Wo bade hi taav ke saath Anu ki Mom ke paas ja kar kehti he.
A. Mom: accha? Bahot badi badi baate karti ho tum to?
Wo Mansi ka kaan pakadte hue kehti he.
Mansi: ahhh... Ab jane bhi dijiye na Aunty....
Wo apna kaan chhudate hue kehti he.
A. Mom: okay jao... Lekin jaldi ajana ghar..
Anu: okay Mom... Chale Mansi?
Fir wo dono hi Car me beth kar nikal jati he.


Wahi dusri taraf Karim ka Garage aaj band tha, to Aksh ko Garage nahi jana tha. Wo fresh ho kar nashta kar leta he or wo hall me betha tha ke Radha uske paas ajati he.

Radha: Aksh.... Ye le, ghar ka kuch saman he market jakar le aa....
Wo Aksh ke haath me Saman ki list or kuch paise thama te hue kehti he.
Aksh: thik he Aai.. abhi lata hu...
Radha: or ye bhi rakh.....
Wo Aksh ko kuch or paise dete hue kehti he.
Aksh: ye kis liye?
Wo bina paise haath me liye puchta he.
Radha: apne liye naye kapde kharid lena, or kuch paise rakhna bacha kar...
Aksh: nahi ayi... Mujhe nahi chahiye paise....
Radha: dekh teri aisi harkato se mujhe gussa ata he...
Aksh: are Aai mere paas he kuch paise, or....
Radha: tu le raha he ya nahi?
Wo gusse me Aksh ki baat kaat te hue puchti he.
Ab Aksh apni zidd chhod kar Radha se Paise le leta he, or sabse pehle Market ja kar Radha ne di list ka sara saman le leta he, wo jab ghar lauta to usne dekha ke Sakshi ke college chhutne ka waqt ho gaya he, Aksh sara saman Radha ko de kar Sakshi ko lene chala jata he. Kuch der baad wo college pahoch gaya college abtak chuta nahi tha, to wo bike par hi intezar karta raha, kuch der baad College ki chutti ho jati he, Sakshi bahar arahi thi jese hi wo College ke gate tak pahochi to usne paya ke Aksh samne khada he. Sakshi tezi se uske paas chali jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh... Tu yaha kya kar raha he?
Aksh: tujhe lene aya hu or kya?
Wo bike start karte hue Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: hmm... Aaj Garage nahi gaya tu?
Wo Aksh ke piche beth te hue us se puchti he.
Aksh: aaj Garage band tha, to socha tujhe hi lene ajau...
Or fir wo bike aage badha deta he. Kuch duri par ane ke baad Aksh gadi ko ghar ke raste se opposite bike mod deta he.
Sakshi: ye kaha le ja raha he?
Aksh: market...
Sakshi: market? Kyu?
Aksh: kapde kharidne he, Aai ne paise de kar kaha tha Kapde kharid ne ke liye...
Sakshi: thik he...
Or fir kuch der baad dono market pahoch jate he, Aksh bike ko ek jagah park kar deta he or dono market me chal padte he. Aksh ek kapde ki dukan dekh kar us taraf chal padta he.
Sakshi: oye... Yaha ladies kapde he, kam dikhayi de raha he tujhe?
Wo Aksh ko rokte hue, uska haath pakad kar kehti he.
Aksh: ha to sahi jagah ja raha hu, tu kya ladko ke kapde pehnegi?
Sakshi: Aai ne ye paise tujhe kapde lene ke liye diye he, mujhe nahi.....
Aksh: to tu mujhse alag thodi na he....
Wo muskurate hue Sakshi se keh kar aage badh jata he. Lekin uski baat se Sakshi bas use jata dekh rahi hoti he.
Aksh: kya hua, ruk kyu gayi?
Wo Sakshi ko ek jagah khada dekh kar puchta he.
Sakshi: h... Ha... Ha... Ayi....
Wo hosh me ate hue kehti he or aage ko badh jati he.

Dono us shop me kapde dekhne lagte he, Sakshi jeans, t-shirt, aisa kuch nahi pehenti thi, wo to basb Salwar kameez, punjabi dresses etc. pehenti thi. Aksh uske liye 3-4 dress pasand karta he, Sakshi use mana kar rahi thi ke itne sare dress na le, lekin usne zidd karte hue Sakshi ke liye dress kharid hi liye.

Sakshi: tu pagal he Aksh? Itne sare dress lene ki kya zarurat thi?
Jab dono shop se bahar ate he tabb Sakshi us se puchti he.
Aksh: are yaar tu chup kar...
Sakshi: ab itne se me tere liye Kya kharidega?
Aksh: mujhe bass ek Shirt or Pant leni he...
Sakshi: sirf ek jode me kya hoga?
Aksh: are me din me Garage me hi rehta hu, waha kaam karte waqt kapde kharab hote he isliye Garage ke hi kapde pehenta hu, or job par bhi unke alag kapde he, kya karu zyada kapde kharid kar?
Sakshi: sachme pagal he tu huhhh....
Fir dono Aksh ke liye bhi kapde kharid lete he.

Dono apni shopping kar ke ghar laut rahe the, Sakshi piche bethe bass kisi khayalo me gum si thi. Ab wo kya soch rahi thi ye to wo khud jane. Ab yaha ghar jane ks raste par raaste ki marammat chal rahi thi, to Aksh bike dusri taraf se le leta he, wo dono is waqt usi raste se ja rahe thw jaha se wo bachpan me School se ghar jate the. Aksh ko ped ke niche wahi gole wala nazar ata he.
Aksh: Sakshi.....
Sakshi: ha... Ha kya hua?
Wo apne khayalo se baar ate hue puchti he.
Aksh: Gola khana he?
Wo bike ko Gole wale se kuch dur pehle hi ruka kar Sakshi se puchta he. Us Gole wale ko dekh kar Sakshi ko apna bachpan aakho ke samne nazar ane lagta he or uske chehre par ek pyari si muskurahat ajati he. Aksh piche mudkar Sakshi ko dekhta he to use jawab mil gaya. Dono hi waha ruk kar Gola khane lagte he, Aaj itne saalo baad dono yaha aye the, Sakshi aaj bahot hi zyada khush dikh rahi thi, Aksh use Gola khate hue khush hota dekh kar sukoon sa mehsus kar raha tha.


Sakshi: Thanks Aksh... Thank You So Much.....
Wo dono Gola kha kar bike ki taraf ja rahe hote he tabb Sakshi Aksh se kehti he or use bich raste me hi Hug kar leti he. Sakshi ke hug karne se Aksh ki dhadkane ekdum tez ho gayi thi. Wo apne Haath Sakshi ke sar pe le jata he or uska sar sehlata he. Lekin Sakshi ne Aksh ki tez chalti dhadkane mehsus kar li thi, fir Sakshi Aksh se alag ho jati he. Dono bike par beth kar ghar chale jate he.

Thodi der baad Aksh apne Kaam par ja raha hota he, lekin pehle wo Sakshi ke kamre me chala jata he jaha Sakshi apne Exams ki preparation kar rahi thi.

Sakshi: Aksh... Kya hua?
Wo Aksh ko apne kamre me ata dekh puchti he.
Aksh: Me kaam par ja raha hu, or aaj ek party he to ho sakta he mujhe ane me late ho jaye, tu kal ki tarah jagna mat, so jana....
Sakshi: are... Wo... Wo... Kal to me.. mujhe nind nahi arahi thi, isliye jagi thi me...
Wo hadbadate hue Aksh se kehti he lekin Sach baat to ye thi ke wo kal raat Aksh ke liye hi jagi thi.
Aksh: huhhh.... Jhut nahi bol pati tu, rehne de... Or so jana.....
Wo haste hue Sakshi se kehta he or apne kaam par chala jata he.

Sakshi(mann me): Bavlat.... Lekin me kya karu? Tujhe dekhe bina mera Dil ghabra sa jata he.... Deva... Aksh ki humesha Raksha karna.....

Wo apne mann me soche ja rahi thi, fir wo apni padhai me lagg jati he. Aise hi dhire dhire Suraj dhalne lagta he.
Sham ke 5 baje hue the, Sakshi mann laga kar apne kamre me padhai kar rahi thi ke tabhi Radha uske kamre me ajati he.

Radha: Sakshi.. ye le kuch paise... Or apne liye kapde kharid le...
Wo Sakshi ko paise dete hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai mene to aaj hi 4 dress kharide he...
Radha: kya?
Sakshi: ha... Aksh ne le kar diye mujhe...
Radha: Aksh ne? Or usne apne liye kuch nahi liya?
Sakshi: usne to bass ek Shirt or Pant le li, ye kehkar ks Garage me kapde kharab hote he to waha Garage ke hi kapde pehenta he, or uske Job ke bhi kapde alag he...
Radha: Deva.... Ye ladka bhi na? Kuch samajh nahi ata iska....
Wo apne mathe par haath marte hue kehti he.
Radha: ek kaam kar... Ye paise le, or Aksh ko de dena... Meri to baat manega nahi... Teri sune to thik...
Wo Sakshi ko pause dete hue kehti he. Sakshi bhi Radha se Paise le leti he.
Sakshi(mann me): paise to wo mujhse bhi nahi lega... Khair dekhti hu kal....

Sakshi paiso ko apne purse me rakh kar firse padhai me lagg jati he.

Aaj Restaurant me kafi badi party thi, to Aksh ko aaj kafi kaam hone wala tha, shaam ko 8 baje wo party shuru ho jati he. Aksh or uske saath kaam kar rahe ladke par kafi load tha, wo ladka to kafi waqt se ye kaam kar raha tha to use zyada farak nahi padta, lekin Aksh ki halat kafi kamzor si ho gayi thi. Aksh ko kaam pura karne me raat ke 2:30 baj gaye the. Wo thak haar kar ghar ajata he or khana garam kar ke kha kar so jata he.


Is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, jaha humne Sakshi or Aksh ke chote se hi, lekin bahot hi pyare moments dekhe, jaha humne kahani se jude kuch naye kirdar bhi dekhe, dosto kahani ka har kirdar apni jagah par ek ehem role karne wala he. Or aage bhi in sabke aas paas kahani chalegi.

Or dosto, me ek baat clear kar du ke CBI or ye sab padhkar aap ye mat soch lena ke Aksh koi CBI me join hoga ya kuch, aisa kuch nahi he, Aksh ka vision sirf business par hi he or rahega.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi dono ko bade hi khoobsurat andaz se pesh karte ho aap.
CBI ki entry.... Kuchh samajh nahi aayi.
Mansi ki shararten chalu hi hai.
Kul milakar ek behtreen update tha yah.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

 

[Qaatil]

Excellent update...bhai.❤

Shandar Update

Superb update bro

lovely update

Nice update..

Badhiya updates bhai

shandar update sir

Shandar sir

Nice and excellent update...

Thank You So Much Dosto
Stay Tuned For Next Update, And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Bdiya update bhai ji

Vese mere liye to update bhut chota tha, kyuki mujhe to sirf aksh sakshi related conversation me hi mja ata h, aur vo aaj kam thi rana ke scene ki vjaj se, khair story me agar apne action socha h, to ye to hoga hi


Aksh ke mama ki ladki ka naam bhi anu hi hai
Ye dono ek hi h

Ya koi naam hi nhi suja lekhak mahoday ko
Socha ek se hi do character chla dete h

Thank You So Much Bhai
Ab wo to jab koi character introduce karna he to uski bhi thodi bahot jhalkiya dikhani hi padti he, baki to story in dono par hi based he, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

Aksh ke mama ki ladki ka naam bhi anu hi hai
Ye dono ek hi h

Same naam ke to hazaro log ghum sakte he na

 

[Qaatil]

Qaatil bhai sorry to say lekin story thodi boring chal rahi hai.......

Kuch bhi excitement aur thrill nahi hai.....

Aapse nivedan hai ki story ko thoda romanchak mod de......

Bhai jesa ke mene kaha tha ke, kabhi kabhi kuch moments dikhana actual me important hota he, specially INCEST me, or baki mera filhal ka sab se bada problem he WAQT...... Dimag me kayi baar kaam ke thoughts hote he, still I'll try to improve... Aage ke kuch Updates dekhte he agar ye problem bani rahi to kuch karna hoga, Thank You So Much For Your Precious Feedback Bhai
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

The scene with Sakshi and that unknown person was very funny. Whatever happened to Khan today, we understood that Rana is a bad man, now let's see how Abhinav punished Rana. I am also happy to see Mansi happy on the other side. Everything else was good, Aksh's love for Sakshi was heartfelt.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thank You So Much Bhai
As Abhinav Said "Khan ki kurbani zaya nahi jayegi" will take revenge, lekin iske liye kitni mushkilo ka samna karna padega ye to waqt hi batayega, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Good UpdateTodays update was all about Sakaksh Moments Enjoyed the cute little moments between the duo
One more Interesting Character Rana , It will be interesting to see what part he will play in Aksh's life and also Mansi who aspires to be CEO of Virani Industries, will be interesting to watch Mansi and Aksh's meet with similar dreams and personality...
Lets see what happens next. Keep it up waiting for next.......

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Comment
Or sahi kaha similar dreams, and personality but the difference is Situation.... Both are in different Situations of life, dekhte he aage kya hoga. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

nice update ..aksh sakshi ke liye kapde kharidta hai jo paise uske liye diye the maa ne ..
aur ye rana lagta hai bahut danger hai ek policewale ko maar diya jaan se ..
kahi aisa to nahi ki rana hi mansi ka baap ho ..

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Comment
Or Rana Mansi ka baap alag alag he, Lekin itna bata du ke Rana koi gali ka gunda he nahi, jese jese story aage badhegi aap samajh jaoge, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi dono ko bade hi khoobsurat andaz se pesh karte ho aap.
CBI ki entry.... Kuchh samajh nahi aayi.
Mansi ki shararten chalu hi hai.
Kul milakar ek behtreen update tha yah.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Thank You So Much Bhai
Bas jude rahiye ga, sab kuch samajh ata chala jayega, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[AlexMt]

Shandar Update Rana ki entry lagta he is baar villain khatrnak hone wala hai. Let's see

Aksh: to tu mujhse alag thodi na he....
Wo muskurate hue Sakshi se keh kar aage badh jata he. Lekin uski baat se Sakshi bas use jata dekh rahi hoti he.