Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

First of all, I want to thank and congratulate you so much for writing a new story. The title poster and beautiful lines of the story are very good. I hope everyone likes this story very much.
Thank You...
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This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...
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Thank You So Much Aakash. bhai for your comments and support, And 1st Update posted.

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread
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...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...
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Guys 1st Update Of The Story Posted
Please Comments your view Keep Reading And Keep Supporting

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life


Update 1
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Word Count - 3874

Kaali andheri raat, khaufnaam Mosam or jungle ke bicho bich bana ek lauta ghar jisme Aksh dard ke mare niche beth kar karah raha tha, or Sakshi use dekh kar apne asu rok nahi paati or Aksh ko sahara dete hue niche beth kar use sambhal leti he.
Sakshi: Aksh hum ek dusre ko humesha se jante hai, mene tujhe Hasta hua dekha hai, khush dekha hai, Tujhe Rota dekha Hai, Akela dekha hai…. Lekin…. Lekin ye sab……ye sab kya hai Aksh?
Wo rote hue Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar puchti he. Lekin Aksh bina Sakshi se nazre milaye koi jawab nahi deta.
Sakshi: chup kyu ho mujhe jawab do Aksh….. warna…. Warna..
Ye kehte hue Sakshi niche padi Gun ko utha leti he or apne mathe par point kar deti hai. Usne trigger par apni ungli hi rakhi thi ke Aksh apni dayi taraf ki diwar ko dekhne lagta he, Sakshi uski nazro ka picha karte hue us diwar ko dekhti he lekin jese hi Sakshi ki nazar us diwar par gayi to uske hosh ud gaye the. Uski wajah thi ke diwar pe bahot se logo ki tasveer lagi hui thi lekin center me Aksh, Sakshi, Santosh or Radha ki tasveer thi. Santosh, Radha or bahot si tasveero par red marker se cross bana hua tha.
Sakshi sawalo se bhari nazro se Aksh ko dekh rahi thi, Aksh dhire dhire apne pero par khada ho jata he or jese jese Aksh Sakshi ko apni baat bata raha tha waise waise Sakshi ki akho se Aansu tez behne lage the, Sakshi ke haath se Gun niche gir gayi thi. Lekin suddenly waha Goliya chalne lagti he, or is bich Sakshi ki chink nikalti he jise dekh kar Aksh ki dhadkane ruk si gayi thi.

Aksh: Sakshi………

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Hospital ke bed par ek Aurat bade hi dard me thi, lekin use is dard ki koi parwah nahi thi kyu ke us dard ki wajah thi ke wo kisi nanhi si jaan ko janm dene wali thi, kuch hi der me us Aurat ne ek ladke ko janm diya, or uske kuch hi der baad ek pyaari si ladki ko.... Us Aurat ki halat kafi kharab ho chuki thi, Doctor ne dono baccho ko ek towel me lapet kar Aurat ke samne kar diya, un rote hue baccho ko dekh kar Aurat ka sara dard ek pal me hawa ho jata he, uske aakho se asu behne lage the, un baccho ki awaaz to jese uske kaano me shehed si ghul rahi thi, kehte he ke koi maa apne baccho ko rota nahi dekh sakti lekin aise waqt pe un baccho ka rona dekh kar ek maa ke liye wo to jese puri duniya ki kushi hoti he, usne bade hi pyaar se dono baccho ko chuma. Doctor waha se bahar ajati he jaha Aurat ka pati bahot hi bechain halat me yaha se waha chakkar laga raha tha, doctor ko dekh kar wo aadmi uski taraf ajata he.

Aadmi: Doctor.... K...kya hua... Radha....Radha thik he na?
Wo kafi Ghabrahat bhari awaaz me puchta he.
Abtak to aap samaj gaye honge ke, wo aadmi Santosh or wo Aurat Radha thi.
Doctor: dekhiye sab kuch thik he, aapki patni bhi Normal he or unhone do baccho ko janm diya he....
Wo Santosh ke kandhe par haath rakh kar kehti he, uski baat se Santosh ko to mano puri duniya ki khushi mil gayi thi.
Santosh: kya? Th...thank you... Thank You Doctor.. kya me use mil sakta hu?
Doctor: ji zarur....

Doctor ki permission milte hi Santosh andar dod patda he, samne Radha bed par apne baccho ko liye leti thi, Santosh ko dekh kar Radha ke chehre par ek bahot hi pyaari hasi ajati he, Santosh uske nazdeek ata he or apne baccho ka chehra dekh uska rona ruk nahi pata. Wo pehle Radha ke sar pe haath ferta he or uske mathe ko chum kar dono baccho ko apne haath me le leta he. Is waqt is puri duniya ki khushi Santosh ke haatho me thi, use dekh kar Santosh ki aakhe bhar ati he.

Ek din baad Radha ko discharge kiya jata he, Santosh or Radha apne baccho ko le kar apne ghar ajate he. Ghar akar Santosh Radha ko Aaram se bed par lita deta he, or khud uske paas beth jata he apne baccho ke saath. Ab inka ghar koi alishan mehel nahi tha, lekin jitni mehnat se Santosh ne ise banaya tha uske or Radha ke liye to is ghar ke samne alishan mehel bhi fika lage, or is ghar me 3 average size ke bedroom the, ek hall or us se hi juda kitchen tha, or upar bas chatt bani hui thi jaha ane jane ke liye andar se hi sidhi banayi hui thi.

Santosh: aaj sahi mayno me ye ghar khushnuma ho gaya, aaj humara pariwar ban gaya Radha....
Wo muskurate hue Radha se kehta he.
Radha: Sahi kaha aapne... Deva(bhagwaan) bas aise hi humari zindagi me khushi bani rahe.....
Usne haath jodkar bhagwaan se prarthana karte hue kaha.
Radha: waise inka naam waise hi rakhna he na jo humne socha tha?
Santosh: are ha.... Wahi jo humne tay kiya tha, ke ladki hui to Sakshi or ladka hua to Aksh... lekin dekho to Bhagwaan ne dono hi de diye hume....
Wo apne Baccho par pyaar bhari nazar dalkar kehta he. Dono pati patni bas in baccho me hi khoye hue the.

Aise hi din nikalte gaye, dono baccho ka naamkaran bhi ho gaya tha, dono pati patni apne baccho ke saath apni zindagi bahot hi khushi se ji rahe the. Santosh ko to apne job par jane ka bhi dil nahi karta tha, wo to apna mann marke chala jata, lekin waha ja kar wo bas suraj dhalne ka intezar karta ke jab ye suraj dube or me apne baccho se milu. Santosh or Radha ne apne dono baccho ko ek tarike ka hi pyaar diya, dono bacche bhi humesha haste rehte the.

Din par din, or saal par saal kis tarah guzar gaye kisi ko pata hi nahi chala, ab dono bhai behen bade ho gaye the or ab wo 5th class me chale gaye the, wo dono ek saath apne school jate the. Aksh or Sakshi ki jodi pure school me famous thi, Wajah unki pyaar bhari nok jhok thi.



Subah ke 7 baje hue the, Sakshi nind se uth kar apni aakhe mal rahi thi, usne apne side me dekha to Aksh gehri nind me soya hua tha. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko ek shararat sujhti he or uske chehre par hasi ajati he.

Sakshi jaldi se uthkar kamre se bahar jhakti he to Radha kitchen me kaam kar rahi thi, Sakshi dabe paav ghar ke bahar baramde me jati he jaha kapde sukh rahe the Sakshi ne waha rakhe stool par khade ho ke kapde sukhane ke liye jo clip lagate he wo nikal li or jaldi se andar apne kamre me agayi. Sakshi ne us clip ko Aksh ke naak par laga diya, ab Aksh saas lene ke liye apna muh khol leta he, uska muh pura khula hua tha jise dekh kar Sakshi ke chehre par hasi ajati he or wo apni hasi dabaye Aksh ko dekh rahi thi, ab Aksh ko muh se saas lene me dikkat ho rahi thi uski nind tut chuki thi, wo apni naak se clip hata deta he or dekhta he ke samne Sakshi zor zor se uspar has rahi thi.

Aksh: Sakhsi tu bahot pitegi mujhse aaj.... Rukja....
Wo bed se uth kar Sakshi ko marne ke liye aage badhta he lekin tabtak Sakshi kamre se nikal kar apni Maa ke paas bhag jati he.

Sakshi: Aai(Maa) bachao... Ye dekho Aksh mujhe bina wajah tang kar raha he.
Wo Radha ke piche chup kar kehti he.
Aksh: Jhuti..... Jhuti..... Khud mujhe pareshan karti he ye.... Aai tum hatt jao, me aaj is chipkali ko nahi chhodunga....
Wo Radha ke piche chupi Sakshi ko pakadne ki koshish karte hue kehta he.
Radha: Deva(Bhagwaan)...... Pareshan ho gayi hu me tum dono se.... Roz kutte billi ki tarah shuru ho jate ho, din accha nahi guzarta kya tumhara lade bina?
Radha dono ke kaan pakad kar puchti he.
Aksh: ahhh…. Aai, me so raha tha, ye chipkali ne mere naak pe clip laga di thi....
Uski baat se Radha Aksh ka kaan azaad karti he or Sakshi ko halka sa thappad mar deti he.
Radha: kyu karti rehti ho aise harkate? Ha bolo?
Uski halki si thappad se hi Sakshi ki aakho me asu agaye the, tabhi Santosh hall me akar beth jata he.
Santosh: kya hua meri beti ko kisne rulaya subah subah?
Wo roti hui Sakshi ko dekh kar puchta he, Santosh ko dekh kar Sakshi tezi se bhag kar uske gale lag rona shuru kar deti he.

Sakshi: Baba(Papa)..... Aai ne mara..... Mujhe Thappad mara.....
Wo apna gaal sehlate hue sisak kar rote hue kehti he.
Santosh: accha? Abhi Aai ki khabar leta hu me ruko....
Ye kehkar wo Radha ko pukarta he.
Santosh: kyu mara tumne Radha meri beti ko?.
Radha: aapki beti din ba din badmash hoti ja rahi he, or marungi use me.....
Wo kitchen se hi unchi awaaz me jawab deti he, jise sun kar Aksh Sakshi ke samne akar zor zor se hasne lagte he. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko bahot hi zyada gussa ajata he.

Sakshi: bandar..... Aaj ke baad kabhi baat mat karna....
Wo chillakar Aksh se kehti he or apne kamre me bhaag jati he. Uske jane ke baad Santosh Aksh ka kaan pakad leta he.
Santosh: tu kyu pareshan karta rehta he use? Ha?
Aksh: ahh... Baba mene kuch nahi kiya tha, wo chipkali roz roz mujhe nind se jagane ke naye tarike dhund ti rehti he...
Wo apna kaan ko azaad karne ki koshish me kehta he.
Santosh: ab jaldi se tayar ho jao, school jana he...
Wo Aksh ka kaan chhod kar kehta he. Aksh chala jata he tayar hone Aksh or Sakshi ek hi room me the, Radha ne bhi Sakshi ko tayar kar diya tha or wo dono ke liye nashta banane chali gayi, Sakshi ko ab apne jute ki lace bandh ni thi jo use nahi ata tha, Radha to apne kaam me lag chuki thi or yaha sirf Aksh ko hi jute ki lace bandh na ata tha, Aksh apna school bag check kar raha tha, Sakshi uske piche khadi thi.

Sakshi: Aksh......
Uski awaaz sunkar Aksh ansuna kar deta he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Sunn na....
Is baar Aksh uski taraf mudkar dekhta he.
Sakshi: meri jute ki lace bandh do na please......
Wo bade hi pyaar se apne bhai ko kehti he.
Aksh: kyu tu to mujhse baat nahi karne wali thi na?
Wo Sakshi ko kuch der pehle ki baad yaad dilate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: h... Wo....me to....
Aksh: chal ab pehle sorry bol mujhe.... Tabhi help karunga Teri....
Sakshi: sorry dada(bhai).......
Wo apne kaan pakad kar bahot hi pyaar se kehti he. Fir Aksh uske lace bandh ne ke liye tayar ho jata he. Sakshi bed par beth jati he or Aksh apne chote chote ungliyo se lace pakad kar bandhne lagta he, Sakshi Aksh ko dekh kar has rahi thi.
Aksh: ho gaya....
Sakshi: thank You Aksh..... Kutta..... Kutta.... Kutta.....
Pehle wo pyaar se Aksh ko bolti he or use dhakka de kar kutta bol ke apna school bag utha kar bhaag jati he.
Aksh: chipkali..... Chipkali... Tu..... Ab fir kabhi madat nahi karunga teri....
Fir wo bhi apna bag utha kar ghar ke bahar ajata he, jaha Sakshi Santosh ki bike par aage tanki ke paas bethi hui thi, wo Aksh ko ata dekh kar use chidane lagti he. Aksh to use Santosh ke samne kuch nahi kar sakta tha, isliye usne ishare se hi use kaha ki badme dekh lunga. Or wo akar bike ke piche ki seat par beth jata he, darasal Sakshi humesha aage beth kar tez chalti hawao ke maze leti thi.

Radha: aaj tum dono ko me pehle hi bata de rahi hu, School se sidha ghar ana, warna bahot pitoge dono....
Wo dono ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, me to is bandar ko kehti hu ghar chal to ye humesha apne dost ke ghar se ho kar hi jata he.
Aksh: jhuti chipkali..... Aai... Baba hume jate hue jo paise dete he na ye chipkali school chutne ke baad uska gola khane ke liye mujhe bhi apne saath le jati he.
Sakshi: to tum bhi to khate ho na.... Bandar.....
Dono bas ek dusre par galati dal rahe the, dono humesha aise hi ladte rehte the.
Santosh: are bas karo..... Ghar me to kabhi shant nahi rehte, bahar jate waqt to chup raha karo....
Uski baat se dono apna muh fulaye chup ho jate he.
Santosh: thik he Radha, me chalta hu.... Shaam ko ajaunga.
Radha: sambhal kar jana....
Wo muskurate hue Santosh se kehti he, Santosh dono ko school drop karne ke liye nikal jata he.

Radha andar akar apne kaamo me lag jati he, wahi Santosh dono ke school pahoch jata he, unka school dur nahi tha, Santosh apne kaam par jate hue dono ko drop kar deta, or wo dono school ki chutti ke baad saath ghar jate the.

Dono bike se utar jate he, or Sakshi Santosh ko ek tak dekhe ja rahi thi. Aksh bhi wahi ruk gaya.

Santosh: kya hua? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho?
Ispar Sakshi bas apna haath aage badha deti he. Santosh us se tali bajata he. Jis se Sakshi ka muh ful jata he.
Sakshi: tali nahi.... Paise do....
Santosh: ohhhh... To ye baat he, nahi.... Aaj to me tum dono ko pese nahi dunga, tum dono school se late jate ho na ghar? Ab sidha ghar pe jana... Shaam ko milta hu...
Or itna kehkar Santosh aage badh jata he, lekin Sakshi or Aksh ka chehra udas ho gaya tha.

Sakshi: sab teri wajah se hua, bandar kahi ka....
Wo gusse me Aksh ko apne nazuk se hatho se marte hue kehti he.
Aksh: mene kya kiya? Mujhe bhi kaha pese mile?
Sakshi: kya zarurat thi Aai ko batane ki school ke baad gola khane jate he?
Aksh: to fir tune kyu mera naam liya tha?
Ab wo dono school ke gate par hi jhagad ne lage the. Tabhi Sakshi ki dost Neha waha ajati he. Or wo dono ko andar le jati he, Aksh waise zyada kisi se baat nahi karta tha, siwaye Sakshi ke. Recess ke waqt Aksh uthkar apne dost ke saath beth jata he, Sakshi ko is se bura laga. Aksh or uska dost tiffin nikal kar khane lagte he, Neha piche ke bench se uthkar Sakshi ke paas ajati he. Wo dono bhi apna tiffin open kar ke khana shuru kar dete he. Aaj Sakshi ke tiffin me ek chocolate bhi thi, Radha dono ko kabhi kabhi hi chocolate deti thi, Sakshi wo chocolate dekh kar khush ho jati he, ek chocolate hone ki wajah se wo aadhi chocolate Neha ko bhi de deti he. Lekin use or chocolate kahni thi, Aksh ko ye baat pata thi to usne apne hisse ki chocolate bacha kar rakh di. Jab sab logo ka khana ho jata he to Neha apne bench par chali jati he, Aksh akar Sakshi ke saath beth jata he.

Aksh: oye chipkali...... Ye le.....
Wo Sakshi ko apni chocolate dete hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tune kyu nahi khayi?
Aksh: mujhe teri tarah apne daat nahi kharab karne he.... Ye le....
Fir Sakshi us se chocolate chin leti he or khushi khushi kha leti he. Aise hi kuch ghanto baad school ki chutti ho jati he, dono saath me ghar jane ke liye nikalte he. Raste me Sakshi ka chehra us gole wale ko dekh kar utar jata he. Kyu ke aaj to Santosh ne un dono ko paise diye hi nahi the. Aksh ne uska udas chehra dekh liya tha.

Aksh: oye chipkali.... Gola khana he tujhe?
Wo apna chalte chalte ruk kar kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba ne paise kaha diye he?
Wo narazgi se apna muh fula kar kehti he.
Aksh: mere paas thode paise he na... Me tere jese sare pese kharch nahi karta samjhi chipkali....
Sakshi: sacchi?
Wo kafi khush ho kar kehti he. Fir Aksh 1 gola le leta he kyu ke uske paas ek gole ke pese hi the, usne Gola sirf Sakshi ke liye liya tha lekin Sakshi use bhi khane ko kehti he, dono ek gola hi apas me share kar ke kha lete he or jaldi se ghar ki taraf badhte he. Aaj bhi dono ko ghar pahoch ne me late ho gaya tha. Radha ghar ke darwaze par hi ruki hui thi, dono dur se hi Radha ko dekh lete he, dono samajh gaye ke aaj to unki kher nahi. Dono ghar ke paas ajate he or jese hi wo darwaze ke paas aye to wo dono apna muh niche kiye ruke the.

Radha: kitni baar kaha he tum dono se ke school se sidha ghar ajaya karo, ha?
Dono hi chup chaap apna muh niche kiye ruke the.
Radha: bolo...
Wo unchi awaaz me kehti he.
Aksh: Sorry Aai.... Wo.....
Radha: tum dono aise nahi manoge na? Thik he aaj khana khane ke baad tum dono shaam tak padhai karte rahoge, Shaam tak TV bhi nahi dekhoge or agar padhai nahi ki to dono ko maar padegi....
Ye saza sunkar dono ka chehra udas ho jata he. Wo dono andar ajate he or kapde badal kar khana kha lete he or ja kar padhai karne lagte he.

Sakshi: aye Aksh....
Kuch der padhai karne ke baad Sakshi use awaaz deti he.
Aksh: bol?
Sakshi: Aksh koi rasta dhund na, kese hum roz Gola bhi kha sake or ghar ane me late bhi na ho....
Aksh: me to roz kehta hu na, chalte hue gola khaya kar, tu kaha manti he.
Sakshi: are buddhu... Agar itni dhup me chalte hue gola khaye to wo pighal jata he, mujhe waha ped ke niche beth kar gola khane me hi maza ata he.
Aksh: ab ye gola khana bhul ja, me roz roz itni der nahi padh sakta....
Sakshi: ha... Hum Kal se school me se jaldi hi nikal jayenge, fir aram se gola kha kar ghar waqt par aya karenge....
Aksh: akele hi kar tu, me nahi karne wala ye sab.....
Sakshi: are lekin.....
Aksh: mujhe nahi karna bas.....
Sakshi: thik he, mat kar.... Huhhhh...
Or wo gusse se firse apni padhai me lag jati he.

Shaam ko Unki padhai ho gayi tab wo log hall me akar cartoon dekhne lage, kuch der baad Santosh ghar ajata he, lekin uske haath me ek bag bhi thi.
Sakshi: Baba.... Ye kya laye ho?
Wo bahot utsukta ke saath bhaag kar darwaze par ja kar Santosh ke haath se wo bag le leti he.
Santosh: tum dono ke liye hi laya hu, khud dekho...
Aksh or Sakshi kafi khush the, wo dono dekhte he ke bag me kaala khatta or kuch syrups ki bottle thi.
Santosh: roz tum raste me ruk kar hi gola khate ho na? Ab se ghar time se aao or jitna marzi utna kha lo….
Wo andar sofe pe beth kar kehta he, Radha uske liye pani le kar ati he. Sakshi or Aksh dono Santosh ko gale laga lete he, kyu ke unhe ye gift kafi pasand aya.
Aksh: thank You Baba....
Sakshi: ha Baba thank you, ab hum time se ghar ajayenge.
Wo Santosh ke galo par kiss karte hue kehti he.

Radha: aap bhi na.... Ab ye roz roz barf khayenge to bimar pad jayenge...
Wo Santosh ke bagal me beth te hue kehti he, Aksh or Sakshi to bas khushi se apne me hi lage the.
Santosh: are koi baat nahi Radha.... Kuch nahi hoga.....

Fir aise hi din nikal jata he, Raat ko charo milkar niche zameen par beth kar khana kha rahe the, lekin Aksh or Sakshi kafi tezi se khana kha rahe the.

Radha: itni kya ghayi he tum dono ko? Aram se khao...
Sakshi: hmm..... Aai..... hume Gola bhi khana he na...
Wo apne chote se muh me bada sa niwala bharte hue apne fule gaalo se kehti he.
Santosh: nahi.... Raat ko nahi, sirf tum school se aaoge tab hi Milega... Or ha Radha, agar ye dono late aye to Gola bana kar mat dena inhe...
Radha: gola nahi dungi, saza dungi... Pata he na saza?
Ispar dono thoda udas ho jate he. Khane ke baad Aksh or Sakshi Cartoon dekh rahe the, kafi der baad Radha ne dono ko sone ke liye bhej diya.

Sakshi bed par let te hi so gayi, Aksh use dekh kar subah ka badla lene ka plan banata he.

Aksh: chipkali.... Mujhe satati he na? Ab dekh kese rulata hu tujhe....
Or itna kehkar wo uthkar apne parents ke kamre me chala jata he, uske jane ke kuch hi minutes baad Sakshi ki aakh khulti he or wo apne aap ko kamre me akela pa kar ghabra jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Aai..... Baba.....
Wo zor zor se chillate hue rone lagti he, or kamre se bahar ajati he. Darasal Sakshi ko raat me akele sone se dar lagta tha, isliye Aksh or wo ek saath sote the. Uski awaaz sunkar Aksh or uske Parents bahar ajate he.

Radha: Sakshi chup ho ja... Me hu na yahi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne sine se laga kar chup karane lagti he.
Sakshi: bandar.... Kutta.... Janbujh ke gaye na room se?
Wo rote hue gusse se Aksh ko puchti he. Lekin Aksh ko uspar hasi arahi thi, tab Santosh uska kaan pakad kar use daant deta he, ab Sakshi or Aksh wapis apne kamre me agaye the.

Sakshi: bahot ganda he tu.... Kutta....
Wo andar ake Aksh ko gusse me kehti he.
Aksh: thik he, so tu fir yaha akeli...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar jane lagta he, lekin Sakshi use piche se pakad leti he.
Sakshi: sone do na mujhe....
Wo roni si shakal banate hue kehti he.
Aksh: to bol, mujhe nahi satayegi ab se...
Sakshi: nahi sataungi... Please mat jao....
Wo apni bhigi palko ke saath kehti he.
Aksh: thik he so ja....
Or wo dono bed par akar let jate he, Sakshi Aksh ka haath zor se pakadkar kar leti hui thi ke kahi Aksh fir se use akela chhod kar na chala jaye.

Fir dono apni gehri nind me chale jate he or is tarah inka aaj ka din nikal jata he. Thodi si masti, dher sara pyaar or ane wale kal ki khabar liye bina ye sab apni zindagi hasi khushi bita rahe the. Lekin ye sab kabtak chalna tha? Iska jawab to aage mil hi jayega.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

Are bhai ji gajab likha h update
Aai, baba, deva, dada, ghai marathi flavor

Sakshi: thank You Aksh..... Kutta..... Kutta.... Kutta.....

gajab

Yaar in dono ki nok jhok me to bhut mja aya, abhi se story me action start nhi karna, filhal kuch updates aise hi nok jhok bare ho,to mja aa jayega

Eagerly waiting for next update

 

[AK 24]

for new story haseena

 

[Aakash.]

I was surprised at the beginning of the update, let's see what happened in the flashback ...
It is the most pleasant feeling to give birth to children and only a mother can understand the joy of this and mother is also called the creator. It is a happy moment for Santosh and Radha, a family is completed by children. The story starts very well, was filled with love of brother and sister and parents, everything was so nice and sweet, it is so fun to tease each other.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life


Update 1
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Word Count - 3874

Kaali andheri raat, khaufnaam Mosam or jungle ke bicho bich bana ek lauta ghar jisme Aksh dard ke mare niche beth kar karah raha tha, or Sakshi use dekh kar apne asu rok nahi paati or Aksh ko sahara dete hue niche beth kar use sambhal leti he.
Sakshi: Aksh hum ek dusre ko humesha se jante hai, mene tujhe Hasta hua dekha hai, khush dekha hai, Tujhe Rota dekha Hai, Akela dekha hai…. Lekin…. Lekin ye sab……ye sab kya hai Aksh?
Wo rote hue Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar puchti he. Lekin Aksh bina Sakshi se nazre milaye koi jawab nahi deta.
Sakshi: chup kyu ho mujhe jawab do Aksh….. warna…. Warna..
Ye kehte hue Sakshi niche padi Gun ko utha leti he or apne mathe par point kar deti hai. Usne trigger par apni ungli hi rakhi thi ke Aksh apni dayi taraf ki diwar ko dekhne lagta he, Sakshi uski nazro ka picha karte hue us diwar ko dekhti he lekin jese hi Sakshi ki nazar us diwar par gayi to uske hosh ud gaye the. Uski wajah thi ke diwar pe bahot se logo ki tasveer lagi hui thi lekin center me Aksh, Sakshi, Santosh or Radha ki tasveer thi. Santosh, Radha or bahot si tasveero par red marker se cross bana hua tha.
Sakshi sawalo se bhari nazro se Aksh ko dekh rahi thi, Aksh dhire dhire apne pero par khada ho jata he or jese jese Aksh Sakshi ko apni baat bata raha tha waise waise Sakshi ki akho se Aansu tez behne lage the, Sakshi ke haath se Gun niche gir gayi thi. Lekin suddenly waha Goliya chalne lagti he, or is bich Sakshi ki chink nikalti he jise dekh kar Aksh ki dhadkane ruk si gayi thi.

Aksh: Sakshi………

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Hospital ke bed par ek Aurat bade hi dard me thi, lekin use is dard ki koi parwah nahi thi kyu ke us dard ki wajah thi ke wo kisi nanhi si jaan ko janm dene wali thi, kuch hi der me us Aurat ne ek ladke ko janm diya, or uske kuch hi der baad ek pyaari si ladki ko.... Us Aurat ki halat kafi kharab ho chuki thi, Doctor ne dono baccho ko ek towel me lapet kar Aurat ke samne kar diya, un rote hue baccho ko dekh kar Aurat ka sara dard ek pal me hawa ho jata he, uske aakho se asu behne lage the, un baccho ki awaaz to jese uske kaano me shehed si ghul rahi thi, kehte he ke koi maa apne baccho ko rota nahi dekh sakti lekin aise waqt pe un baccho ka rona dekh kar ek maa ke liye wo to jese puri duniya ki kushi hoti he, usne bade hi pyaar se dono baccho ko chuma. Doctor waha se bahar ajati he jaha Aurat ka pati bahot hi bechain halat me yaha se waha chakkar laga raha tha, doctor ko dekh kar wo aadmi uski taraf ajata he.

Aadmi: Doctor.... K...kya hua... Radha....Radha thik he na?
Wo kafi Ghabrahat bhari awaaz me puchta he.
Abtak to aap samaj gaye honge ke, wo aadmi Santosh or wo Aurat Radha thi.
Doctor: dekhiye sab kuch thik he, aapki patni bhi Normal he or unhone do baccho ko janm diya he....
Wo Santosh ke kandhe par haath rakh kar kehti he, uski baat se Santosh ko to mano puri duniya ki khushi mil gayi thi.
Santosh: kya? Th...thank you... Thank You Doctor.. kya me use mil sakta hu?
Doctor: ji zarur....

Doctor ki permission milte hi Santosh andar dod patda he, samne Radha bed par apne baccho ko liye leti thi, Santosh ko dekh kar Radha ke chehre par ek bahot hi pyaari hasi ajati he, Santosh uske nazdeek ata he or apne baccho ka chehra dekh uska rona ruk nahi pata. Wo pehle Radha ke sar pe haath ferta he or uske mathe ko chum kar dono baccho ko apne haath me le leta he. Is waqt is puri duniya ki khushi Santosh ke haatho me thi, use dekh kar Santosh ki aakhe bhar ati he.

Ek din baad Radha ko discharge kiya jata he, Santosh or Radha apne baccho ko le kar apne ghar ajate he. Ghar akar Santosh Radha ko Aaram se bed par lita deta he, or khud uske paas beth jata he apne baccho ke saath. Ab inka ghar koi alishan mehel nahi tha, lekin jitni mehnat se Santosh ne ise banaya tha uske or Radha ke liye to is ghar ke samne alishan mehel bhi fika lage, or is ghar me 3 average size ke bedroom the, ek hall or us se hi juda kitchen tha, or upar bas chatt bani hui thi jaha ane jane ke liye andar se hi sidhi banayi hui thi.

Santosh: aaj sahi mayno me ye ghar khushnuma ho gaya, aaj humara pariwar ban gaya Radha....
Wo muskurate hue Radha se kehta he.
Radha: Sahi kaha aapne... Deva(bhagwaan) bas aise hi humari zindagi me khushi bani rahe.....
Usne haath jodkar bhagwaan se prarthana karte hue kaha.
Radha: waise inka naam waise hi rakhna he na jo humne socha tha?
Santosh: are ha.... Wahi jo humne tay kiya tha, ke ladki hui to Sakshi or ladka hua to Aksh... lekin dekho to Bhagwaan ne dono hi de diye hume....
Wo apne Baccho par pyaar bhari nazar dalkar kehta he. Dono pati patni bas in baccho me hi khoye hue the.

Aise hi din nikalte gaye, dono baccho ka naamkaran bhi ho gaya tha, dono pati patni apne baccho ke saath apni zindagi bahot hi khushi se ji rahe the. Santosh ko to apne job par jane ka bhi dil nahi karta tha, wo to apna mann marke chala jata, lekin waha ja kar wo bas suraj dhalne ka intezar karta ke jab ye suraj dube or me apne baccho se milu. Santosh or Radha ne apne dono baccho ko ek tarike ka hi pyaar diya, dono bacche bhi humesha haste rehte the.

Din par din, or saal par saal kis tarah guzar gaye kisi ko pata hi nahi chala, ab dono bhai behen bade ho gaye the or ab wo 5th class me chale gaye the, wo dono ek saath apne school jate the. Aksh or Sakshi ki jodi pure school me famous thi, Wajah unki pyaar bhari nok jhok thi.



Subah ke 7 baje hue the, Sakshi nind se uth kar apni aakhe mal rahi thi, usne apne side me dekha to Aksh gehri nind me soya hua tha. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko ek shararat sujhti he or uske chehre par hasi ajati he.

Sakshi jaldi se uthkar kamre se bahar jhakti he to Radha kitchen me kaam kar rahi thi, Sakshi dabe paav ghar ke bahar baramde me jati he jaha kapde sukh rahe the Sakshi ne waha rakhe stool par khade ho ke kapde sukhane ke liye jo clip lagate he wo nikal li or jaldi se andar apne kamre me agayi. Sakshi ne us clip ko Aksh ke naak par laga diya, ab Aksh saas lene ke liye apna muh khol leta he, uska muh pura khula hua tha jise dekh kar Sakshi ke chehre par hasi ajati he or wo apni hasi dabaye Aksh ko dekh rahi thi, ab Aksh ko muh se saas lene me dikkat ho rahi thi uski nind tut chuki thi, wo apni naak se clip hata deta he or dekhta he ke samne Sakshi zor zor se uspar has rahi thi.

Aksh: Sakhsi tu bahot pitegi mujhse aaj.... Rukja....
Wo bed se uth kar Sakshi ko marne ke liye aage badhta he lekin tabtak Sakshi kamre se nikal kar apni Maa ke paas bhag jati he.

Sakshi: Aai(Maa) bachao... Ye dekho Aksh mujhe bina wajah tang kar raha he.
Wo Radha ke piche chup kar kehti he.
Aksh: Jhuti..... Jhuti..... Khud mujhe pareshan karti he ye.... Aai tum hatt jao, me aaj is chipkali ko nahi chhodunga....
Wo Radha ke piche chupi Sakshi ko pakadne ki koshish karte hue kehta he.
Radha: Deva(Bhagwaan)...... Pareshan ho gayi hu me tum dono se.... Roz kutte billi ki tarah shuru ho jate ho, din accha nahi guzarta kya tumhara lade bina?
Radha dono ke kaan pakad kar puchti he.
Aksh: ahhh…. Aai, me so raha tha, ye chipkali ne mere naak pe clip laga di thi....
Uski baat se Radha Aksh ka kaan azaad karti he or Sakshi ko halka sa thappad mar deti he.
Radha: kyu karti rehti ho aise harkate? Ha bolo?
Uski halki si thappad se hi Sakshi ki aakho me asu agaye the, tabhi Santosh hall me akar beth jata he.
Santosh: kya hua meri beti ko kisne rulaya subah subah?
Wo roti hui Sakshi ko dekh kar puchta he, Santosh ko dekh kar Sakshi tezi se bhag kar uske gale lag rona shuru kar deti he.

Sakshi: Baba(Papa)..... Aai ne mara..... Mujhe Thappad mara.....
Wo apna gaal sehlate hue sisak kar rote hue kehti he.
Santosh: accha? Abhi Aai ki khabar leta hu me ruko....
Ye kehkar wo Radha ko pukarta he.
Santosh: kyu mara tumne Radha meri beti ko?.
Radha: aapki beti din ba din badmash hoti ja rahi he, or marungi use me.....
Wo kitchen se hi unchi awaaz me jawab deti he, jise sun kar Aksh Sakshi ke samne akar zor zor se hasne lagte he. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko bahot hi zyada gussa ajata he.

Sakshi: bandar..... Aaj ke baad kabhi baat mat karna....
Wo chillakar Aksh se kehti he or apne kamre me bhaag jati he. Uske jane ke baad Santosh Aksh ka kaan pakad leta he.
Santosh: tu kyu pareshan karta rehta he use? Ha?
Aksh: ahh... Baba mene kuch nahi kiya tha, wo chipkali roz roz mujhe nind se jagane ke naye tarike dhund ti rehti he...
Wo apna kaan ko azaad karne ki koshish me kehta he.
Santosh: ab jaldi se tayar ho jao, school jana he...
Wo Aksh ka kaan chhod kar kehta he. Aksh chala jata he tayar hone Aksh or Sakshi ek hi room me the, Radha ne bhi Sakshi ko tayar kar diya tha or wo dono ke liye nashta banane chali gayi, Sakshi ko ab apne jute ki lace bandh ni thi jo use nahi ata tha, Radha to apne kaam me lag chuki thi or yaha sirf Aksh ko hi jute ki lace bandh na ata tha, Aksh apna school bag check kar raha tha, Sakshi uske piche khadi thi.

Sakshi: Aksh......
Uski awaaz sunkar Aksh ansuna kar deta he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Sunn na....
Is baar Aksh uski taraf mudkar dekhta he.
Sakshi: meri jute ki lace bandh do na please......
Wo bade hi pyaar se apne bhai ko kehti he.
Aksh: kyu tu to mujhse baat nahi karne wali thi na?
Wo Sakshi ko kuch der pehle ki baad yaad dilate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: h... Wo....me to....
Aksh: chal ab pehle sorry bol mujhe.... Tabhi help karunga Teri....
Sakshi: sorry dada(bhai).......
Wo apne kaan pakad kar bahot hi pyaar se kehti he. Fir Aksh uske lace bandh ne ke liye tayar ho jata he. Sakshi bed par beth jati he or Aksh apne chote chote ungliyo se lace pakad kar bandhne lagta he, Sakshi Aksh ko dekh kar has rahi thi.
Aksh: ho gaya....
Sakshi: thank You Aksh..... Kutta..... Kutta.... Kutta.....
Pehle wo pyaar se Aksh ko bolti he or use dhakka de kar kutta bol ke apna school bag utha kar bhaag jati he.
Aksh: chipkali..... Chipkali... Tu..... Ab fir kabhi madat nahi karunga teri....
Fir wo bhi apna bag utha kar ghar ke bahar ajata he, jaha Sakshi Santosh ki bike par aage tanki ke paas bethi hui thi, wo Aksh ko ata dekh kar use chidane lagti he. Aksh to use Santosh ke samne kuch nahi kar sakta tha, isliye usne ishare se hi use kaha ki badme dekh lunga. Or wo akar bike ke piche ki seat par beth jata he, darasal Sakshi humesha aage beth kar tez chalti hawao ke maze leti thi.

Radha: aaj tum dono ko me pehle hi bata de rahi hu, School se sidha ghar ana, warna bahot pitoge dono....
Wo dono ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, me to is bandar ko kehti hu ghar chal to ye humesha apne dost ke ghar se ho kar hi jata he.
Aksh: jhuti chipkali..... Aai... Baba hume jate hue jo paise dete he na ye chipkali school chutne ke baad uska gola khane ke liye mujhe bhi apne saath le jati he.
Sakshi: to tum bhi to khate ho na.... Bandar.....
Dono bas ek dusre par galati dal rahe the, dono humesha aise hi ladte rehte the.
Santosh: are bas karo..... Ghar me to kabhi shant nahi rehte, bahar jate waqt to chup raha karo....
Uski baat se dono apna muh fulaye chup ho jate he.
Santosh: thik he Radha, me chalta hu.... Shaam ko ajaunga.
Radha: sambhal kar jana....
Wo muskurate hue Santosh se kehti he, Santosh dono ko school drop karne ke liye nikal jata he.

Radha andar akar apne kaamo me lag jati he, wahi Santosh dono ke school pahoch jata he, unka school dur nahi tha, Santosh apne kaam par jate hue dono ko drop kar deta, or wo dono school ki chutti ke baad saath ghar jate the.

Dono bike se utar jate he, or Sakshi Santosh ko ek tak dekhe ja rahi thi. Aksh bhi wahi ruk gaya.

Santosh: kya hua? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho?
Ispar Sakshi bas apna haath aage badha deti he. Santosh us se tali bajata he. Jis se Sakshi ka muh ful jata he.
Sakshi: tali nahi.... Paise do....
Santosh: ohhhh... To ye baat he, nahi.... Aaj to me tum dono ko pese nahi dunga, tum dono school se late jate ho na ghar? Ab sidha ghar pe jana... Shaam ko milta hu...
Or itna kehkar Santosh aage badh jata he, lekin Sakshi or Aksh ka chehra udas ho gaya tha.

Sakshi: sab teri wajah se hua, bandar kahi ka....
Wo gusse me Aksh ko apne nazuk se hatho se marte hue kehti he.
Aksh: mene kya kiya? Mujhe bhi kaha pese mile?
Sakshi: kya zarurat thi Aai ko batane ki school ke baad gola khane jate he?
Aksh: to fir tune kyu mera naam liya tha?
Ab wo dono school ke gate par hi jhagad ne lage the. Tabhi Sakshi ki dost Neha waha ajati he. Or wo dono ko andar le jati he, Aksh waise zyada kisi se baat nahi karta tha, siwaye Sakshi ke. Recess ke waqt Aksh uthkar apne dost ke saath beth jata he, Sakshi ko is se bura laga. Aksh or uska dost tiffin nikal kar khane lagte he, Neha piche ke bench se uthkar Sakshi ke paas ajati he. Wo dono bhi apna tiffin open kar ke khana shuru kar dete he. Aaj Sakshi ke tiffin me ek chocolate bhi thi, Radha dono ko kabhi kabhi hi chocolate deti thi, Sakshi wo chocolate dekh kar khush ho jati he, ek chocolate hone ki wajah se wo aadhi chocolate Neha ko bhi de deti he. Lekin use or chocolate kahni thi, Aksh ko ye baat pata thi to usne apne hisse ki chocolate bacha kar rakh di. Jab sab logo ka khana ho jata he to Neha apne bench par chali jati he, Aksh akar Sakshi ke saath beth jata he.

Aksh: oye chipkali...... Ye le.....
Wo Sakshi ko apni chocolate dete hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tune kyu nahi khayi?
Aksh: mujhe teri tarah apne daat nahi kharab karne he.... Ye le....
Fir Sakshi us se chocolate chin leti he or khushi khushi kha leti he. Aise hi kuch ghanto baad school ki chutti ho jati he, dono saath me ghar jane ke liye nikalte he. Raste me Sakshi ka chehra us gole wale ko dekh kar utar jata he. Kyu ke aaj to Santosh ne un dono ko paise diye hi nahi the. Aksh ne uska udas chehra dekh liya tha.

Aksh: oye chipkali.... Gola khana he tujhe?
Wo apna chalte chalte ruk kar kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba ne paise kaha diye he?
Wo narazgi se apna muh fula kar kehti he.
Aksh: mere paas thode paise he na... Me tere jese sare pese kharch nahi karta samjhi chipkali....
Sakshi: sacchi?
Wo kafi khush ho kar kehti he. Fir Aksh 1 gola le leta he kyu ke uske paas ek gole ke pese hi the, usne Gola sirf Sakshi ke liye liya tha lekin Sakshi use bhi khane ko kehti he, dono ek gola hi apas me share kar ke kha lete he or jaldi se ghar ki taraf badhte he. Aaj bhi dono ko ghar pahoch ne me late ho gaya tha. Radha ghar ke darwaze par hi ruki hui thi, dono dur se hi Radha ko dekh lete he, dono samajh gaye ke aaj to unki kher nahi. Dono ghar ke paas ajate he or jese hi wo darwaze ke paas aye to wo dono apna muh niche kiye ruke the.

Radha: kitni baar kaha he tum dono se ke school se sidha ghar ajaya karo, ha?
Dono hi chup chaap apna muh niche kiye ruke the.
Radha: bolo...
Wo unchi awaaz me kehti he.
Aksh: Sorry Aai.... Wo.....
Radha: tum dono aise nahi manoge na? Thik he aaj khana khane ke baad tum dono shaam tak padhai karte rahoge, Shaam tak TV bhi nahi dekhoge or agar padhai nahi ki to dono ko maar padegi....
Ye saza sunkar dono ka chehra udas ho jata he. Wo dono andar ajate he or kapde badal kar khana kha lete he or ja kar padhai karne lagte he.

Sakshi: aye Aksh....
Kuch der padhai karne ke baad Sakshi use awaaz deti he.
Aksh: bol?
Sakshi: Aksh koi rasta dhund na, kese hum roz Gola bhi kha sake or ghar ane me late bhi na ho....
Aksh: me to roz kehta hu na, chalte hue gola khaya kar, tu kaha manti he.
Sakshi: are buddhu... Agar itni dhup me chalte hue gola khaye to wo pighal jata he, mujhe waha ped ke niche beth kar gola khane me hi maza ata he.
Aksh: ab ye gola khana bhul ja, me roz roz itni der nahi padh sakta....
Sakshi: ha... Hum Kal se school me se jaldi hi nikal jayenge, fir aram se gola kha kar ghar waqt par aya karenge....
Aksh: akele hi kar tu, me nahi karne wala ye sab.....
Sakshi: are lekin.....
Aksh: mujhe nahi karna bas.....
Sakshi: thik he, mat kar.... Huhhhh...
Or wo gusse se firse apni padhai me lag jati he.

Shaam ko Unki padhai ho gayi tab wo log hall me akar cartoon dekhne lage, kuch der baad Santosh ghar ajata he, lekin uske haath me ek bag bhi thi.
Sakshi: Baba.... Ye kya laye ho?
Wo bahot utsukta ke saath bhaag kar darwaze par ja kar Santosh ke haath se wo bag le leti he.
Santosh: tum dono ke liye hi laya hu, khud dekho...
Aksh or Sakshi kafi khush the, wo dono dekhte he ke bag me kaala khatta or kuch syrups ki bottle thi.
Santosh: roz tum raste me ruk kar hi gola khate ho na? Ab se ghar time se aao or jitna marzi utna kha lo….
Wo andar sofe pe beth kar kehta he, Radha uske liye pani le kar ati he. Sakshi or Aksh dono Santosh ko gale laga lete he, kyu ke unhe ye gift kafi pasand aya.
Aksh: thank You Baba....
Sakshi: ha Baba thank you, ab hum time se ghar ajayenge.
Wo Santosh ke galo par kiss karte hue kehti he.

Radha: aap bhi na.... Ab ye roz roz barf khayenge to bimar pad jayenge...
Wo Santosh ke bagal me beth te hue kehti he, Aksh or Sakshi to bas khushi se apne me hi lage the.
Santosh: are koi baat nahi Radha.... Kuch nahi hoga.....

Fir aise hi din nikal jata he, Raat ko charo milkar niche zameen par beth kar khana kha rahe the, lekin Aksh or Sakshi kafi tezi se khana kha rahe the.

Radha: itni kya ghayi he tum dono ko? Aram se khao...
Sakshi: hmm..... Aai..... hume Gola bhi khana he na...
Wo apne chote se muh me bada sa niwala bharte hue apne fule gaalo se kehti he.
Santosh: nahi.... Raat ko nahi, sirf tum school se aaoge tab hi Milega... Or ha Radha, agar ye dono late aye to Gola bana kar mat dena inhe...
Radha: gola nahi dungi, saza dungi... Pata he na saza?
Ispar dono thoda udas ho jate he. Khane ke baad Aksh or Sakshi Cartoon dekh rahe the, kafi der baad Radha ne dono ko sone ke liye bhej diya.

Sakshi bed par let te hi so gayi, Aksh use dekh kar subah ka badla lene ka plan banata he.

Aksh: chipkali.... Mujhe satati he na? Ab dekh kese rulata hu tujhe....
Or itna kehkar wo uthkar apne parents ke kamre me chala jata he, uske jane ke kuch hi minutes baad Sakshi ki aakh khulti he or wo apne aap ko kamre me akela pa kar ghabra jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Aai..... Baba.....
Wo zor zor se chillate hue rone lagti he, or kamre se bahar ajati he. Darasal Sakshi ko raat me akele sone se dar lagta tha, isliye Aksh or wo ek saath sote the. Uski awaaz sunkar Aksh or uske Parents bahar ajate he.

Radha: Sakshi chup ho ja... Me hu na yahi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne sine se laga kar chup karane lagti he.
Sakshi: bandar.... Kutta.... Janbujh ke gaye na room se?
Wo rote hue gusse se Aksh ko puchti he. Lekin Aksh ko uspar hasi arahi thi, tab Santosh uska kaan pakad kar use daant deta he, ab Sakshi or Aksh wapis apne kamre me agaye the.

Sakshi: bahot ganda he tu.... Kutta....
Wo andar ake Aksh ko gusse me kehti he.
Aksh: thik he, so tu fir yaha akeli...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar jane lagta he, lekin Sakshi use piche se pakad leti he.
Sakshi: sone do na mujhe....
Wo roni si shakal banate hue kehti he.
Aksh: to bol, mujhe nahi satayegi ab se...
Sakshi: nahi sataungi... Please mat jao....
Wo apni bhigi palko ke saath kehti he.
Aksh: thik he so ja....
Or wo dono bed par akar let jate he, Sakshi Aksh ka haath zor se pakadkar kar leti hui thi ke kahi Aksh fir se use akela chhod kar na chala jaye.

Fir dono apni gehri nind me chale jate he or is tarah inka aaj ka din nikal jata he. Thodi si masti, dher sara pyaar or ane wale kal ki khabar liye bina ye sab apni zindagi hasi khushi bita rahe the. Lekin ye sab kabtak chalna tha? Iska jawab to aage mil hi jayega.

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Story Line ​

Word Count - 1133

To dosto sidha aate he story par, to Laal Ishq me aapko Incest, Action, Thriller or Romance ka ek tagda Rectangle milega jispe Emotions ka ek zhonk bhi padega, ye kahani he Mumbai ke rehne wale Ek bhai behen ki, dosto Inka pariwar koi amir background se nahi he, kehte he na insan ko survive karne ke liye 3 chize chahiye hoti he "Roti, Kapda or Makan" or ye tino chize inke paas thi, or jesa ke hume pata he, Zyadatar middle class family apne baccho ko bas padhana likhana chahte he, use bas ek 9-5 job ke liye prepare karwate he. Is pariwar me bhi kuch aisa hi mahol tha. Maa baap apne bete beti ko acchese padha likha na chahte the. Lekin Character to apne dil o dimag me kuch or hi sapne lekar betha hua tha.

Ab Aap sochiye, Ek tuta dil, khali jeb or bade sapne milkar kya kar sakte he? Ye sab milkar puri zindagi me tufan la sakte he. To bas is tufan me shamil ho jayiye, or dekhte he ye tufan kesa keher dhata he. Jab ye tufan thamega tab uska after impact kya hota he?

CHARACTERS INTRODUCTION: ​

1) Aksh Joshi(Main Character):
Aksh is story ka pehla ehem kirdar he..... Aksh dikhne me koi hero to nahi he, lekin smart zarur he. To hum Aksh ke bare me kuch bate jaan lete he. Aksh ki soch ek middle class ladke se kuch alag he. Usne 12th ke baad apni padhayi rok di thi, kyu ke use padhai me bilkul intereste nahi tha. Uske marks humesha se hi kam rahe the, use bas kisi tarah ek safal business man bann na he, lekin ye itna asaan to katayi nahi tha. Or is wajah se uske parents uske is decision se bilkul khush nahi the. Lekin sirf ek hi insaan tha is pariwar me jo Aksh ko har mamlo me support karta. Wo insaan or koi nahi Aksh ki behen thi. Usne Aksh ko har mamle me support kiya tha. Aksh ek introvert ladka he, use kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi he, wo bas apne me hi khoya rehta. Lekin ye apni behen ko apni sar aakho par bitha ta he, hala ke wo Aksh se thoda darr ke rehti he.

2) Sakshi Joshi(Main Character):
to ye he Aksh ki ek lauti behen Sakshi. Or is kahani ki sabse ehem kirdar. Iska janm Aksh ke kuch der baad hi hua tha. Ye dikhne me bahot pyaari or masum he. Sakshi Abhi Second Year B.cs kar rahi he, Sakshi padhai me kafi hoshiyaar he, humesha se school me top karte ayi thi or ab college me bhi top karti he. Sakshi ke bas kuch gine chune dost he, Sakshi ladko se kam hi baat karti he. Ye Aksh ko humesha har baat me Support karti ayi he. Sakshi ke liye apne pariwar se badh kar kuch bhi nahi he. Waise to Aksh or Sakshi ki acchi jamti he, lekin Aksh me jo badlav aye the use dekh kar to kabhi kabhi to Sakshi bhi darr jati thi.

3) Radha Joshi:
Ye he Aksh or Sakshi ki maa Radha, ye koi padhi likhi aurat nahi he, lekin Radha bas chahti he ke is samaj me uske dono baccho ka naam ho, lekin Radha Aksh ke liye bahot pareshan rehti he. Radha chahti he ke Aksh padhai kar ke ek acchi si naukri kare. Lekin Aksh to iske ulta hi soch kar betha he, jis wajah se Aksh or uske parents ke bich ek tanav bana rehta he.

4) Santosh Joshi:
ye he Aksh or Sakshi ke Pita... Ye ek mehnati or imandar insaan he, ye ek company me chote se level ka kaam karte he. inhone bhi apna bachpan is Middle class soch me hi guzara he, or ye bhi chahte he ke Aksh padh likh kar ek accha insaan bane. Or inka bhi Aksh ke saath tanav bana hi rehta he.



5) Mansi Virani(Main Character):
Mansi dikhne me bahot hi Khubsurat ladki he, apne maa baap ki ek lauti santaan. Mansi apne family ke saath Surat me rehti he. Mansi kafi shararati ladki he, masti mazak karna Mansi ki fitrat he. Lekin ye dil ki bahot hi saaf ladki he. Mansi First Year B.ba kar rahi he ise apne Papa ka Business sambhalne me kafi dilchaspi he. Or aage ja kar Mansi ko hi Uske Papa ka Business sambhalna he.

6) Aman Virani:
Surat ke safal business man, Virani Industries ke malik. ye apni fitness par bahot dhyan dete he. India ke shayad har naamchin logo se inki pehchan he, Apni ek lauti beti se jaan se zyada pyaar karte he. Inki or Mansi ki kafi jamti he. Doni humesha ek dost ki tarah rehte he.

7) Kiran Virani:
ye Mansi ki Maa he, Kiran ek khule mijaz ki Aurat he, sabse ghul mil kar baat karti he. Kiran Mansi ke liye humesha se overprotective Rahi he, or Kiran ek Housewife he.

8) D.G.P. Abhinav Roy:
Abhinav 50 Saal ke ek hatte katte or tandarust Officer he, jab baat dimag se kaam lene ki ho to inke samne shayad hi koi tik sakta he, or inka Intro mene is liye diya kyu ke story me inka bhi ek ehem role hone wala he.


To dosto ye the kuch characters jinke aspas ye kahani chalegi, or kuch bahot hi interesting characters he jo aapko aage kahani me pata chal hi jayenge. Agar intro accha laga ho to like karna or Comment kar ke batana ke Intro kesa laga.

Dusri baat, dosto mujhe yaha story likh kar koi sona chandi to nahi milta, or wo mujhe nahi chahiye, me bas aap sab se ek hi chiz mangta hu, or apne pure dil se mangta he, or wo he aapke comments… please dosto har Update me apna review zarur diya kijiye, me ye nahi keh raha hu ke sirf tarifo ke phool bandhiye, jo aapko lagta he wo mere saath zarur share kare, ke is Update me ye accha laga, is update me ye kami thi… ise is tarah se sudhara ja sakta tha etc…. jis se me apne aap ko or zyada correct kar pau, Or ha.... Is Story ka pehla Update 2nd December 12 P.M. ko Post ho jayega. Or dosto me week me 3-4 Update dunga… i know ye zyada nahi he, lekin kya karu, ab sab kuch back to normal life achuka he, apne kaam waam bhi dekhna hota he, jese hi time milta he likhne beth jata hu, or har Update 2500-4000 words ka hoga, agar me update kam de raha hu to har Update ki Length to acchi khasi rakh hi sakta hu na to bas Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

bari khushi hoi ap ko wapis lot kr ate dekh k .....umeed ha ap apni koshish jari rakhen ge .....
Ap ki har story hi achi hoti ha to ye to full emotional ho gi or or real life emotional based story hi maza krti h na k wo wali kahaniyan jahan pa koi emotions nhi hote bs sedha choda chudai start ho jati h.....Lehaza mere pass ap Ko hosla dene kileiy alfaaz hi nhi h Good luck and keep it up.

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice aur romanchak update ....pehle aksh ka ghayal hona aur sakshi ko sachchai batana aur phir us ghar par goliyaa chalna .lagta hai aksh bada hokar koi criminal ban gaya ho yaa kisi baat ka badlaa lene ke liye waisa rasta apnaya ho .

dono pati patni khush hai ki unko 2 bachche hai aur unko pyar bhi bahut karte hai ..

aksh aur sakshi ki nok jhok aur ek dusre ke liye pyar bahut majedaar hai ..

aksh ka lace bandhna ,,,apni chocolate sakshi ko dena aur gola khane ke liye paise dena khudke ye dikhta hai ki wo apni behen se kitna pyar karta hai ..

bhale santosh ne paise nahi diye par shamko saara saaman le aaya gola banane ka isse uska pyar bhi dikhta hai apne bachcho ke liye ..