Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

sabse pahle to nayi story ke liye update padhkar jo samjh me aaya kahunga

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Thank You So Much Bhai aapka is story ka part bann neke liye, or jaha tak baat he ending ki to bas jude rahiye kafi mod ane he story me, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

Thank You So Much Bhai
Baki to chapter 1 inki early life show karega kyu ke hum keh sakte he ke actual kahani ki jadd yahi se shuru honi he, so Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

Bahot shukriya bhai aapka, or baki me day to day khudko imrove karne ki koshish karta hu, hope aage bhi ye improvement pasand aye... Baki to ek baat kahunga ke the first sentence can't be written untill the last is written..... bhai kahani likhte waqt na aapko ye nahi sochna hota ke iski Shuruwat kese hogi balki ye sochna hota he ke story ka end kya hoga, tabb jakar hi ek story birth le sakti he, or baki jo aapki adat he wo kamal he kyu ke jab aap character se connect karte he iska matlab aap us Story, movie me puri tarah se involve ho jate ho... Baki to me ummid karta hu ke aapko story akhir tak pasand aye... Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update ​

Thank You So Much Bhai
Sahi kaha bhai, bhale hi middle class parents baccho ke badi icchaye nahi puri kar sakte, but aisi wishes ko bina bole puru karne se unka pyaar dikhta he. Baki Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

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Lazwab, apritam, khubsurath, masumiyath se bara hua update, missing my childhood. pehle update mein se hi suspense keep it up bro good going
Wating for next.....

Thank You So Much Bhai
Bas aage bhi jude rehna wo gana he na "kya se kya ho gaye dekhte dekhte" ye gana is story ko acche se relate kar pata he. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

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waiting for next update

Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow At 12 PM, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

Nice update bro...

Thank You So Much Bhai ❤❤
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

 

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Nice start

 

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Nice start

Thank You So Much Bhai
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Dosto mujhe please 2 din dijiye.... Sala naseeb hi kharab he, 4 updates ready the, abhi Google Docs me check kar raha tha to sara ka sara Untitled documents show ho raha he, or pure pages blank ho gaye

2nd Update kal nahi Saturday ko de dunga... Or agar kisi ko is situation ka solution pata ho to please batana, mene sabkuch try kiya lekin nothing happened....

Ye dekho

 

[tabishqureshi]

Dosto mujhe please 2 din dijiye.... Sala naseeb hi kharab he, 4 updates ready the, abhi Google Docs me check kar raha tha to sara ka sara Untitled documents show ho raha he, or pure pages blank ho gaye

Ye dekho

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