sompal
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I don't know ki main reaction kya du appreciate karu bhai ko ya gussa hou kyuki story me koi gand add nahi tha jo ki bohot achha laga ki koi bf ya gf ka chakkar ya sex lust nahi tha pyaar tha or us pyaar me paar ki jaane wali hade lekin ending expected nahi thi mujhe laga tha vo ushe bachalega lekin nahi koi baat nahi ye story likhne wale ne apne hisab se likhi h to uske lie main appreciation deta hu or haa itni lambi story likhna without lust or sex hasne wali ya asan ya aam baat nahi hai bohot mehnat lagti hai time lagta hai mentally bhi preparation karni padti hai kehna bohot asan hota h kisi ki story ko judge karna lekin khud likho to pata lagta hai halat kharab ho jaati hai but once again I appreciate you ki koi gand na and karne ke lie bas last me t-shirt utari lekin koi gandpana nahi hui which is absolutely necessary bas pyaar ki driya paar karna bohot achha lagaga but ek raat dunga ending me dono ko ek karna tha chahe story skip ho jati 5 saal lekin tasalli milti ki do jism ek jaan ban hi gae but kher thank you so much itni amazing story' ke lie brother keep loving keep writing much love and good bye ,
