Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

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Chapter 2 - The Journey

Update 7​

Word Count: 3755
Estimated Reading Time: 00:17:00



Suraj ki Khubsurat kirno ne kamre me ek roshni or Aksh ki zindagi me nayi ashao ko bikhera hua tha, Suraj ki kirne sidha Aksh ki aakho par pad rahi thi, Aksh apni aakhe masalte hue apni nind se jaag jata he, lekin usne paya ke Sakshi uske upar use kas kar gehri nind me thi. Dono ka badan ek dusre se puri tarah chipka hua tha, or ye nazara dekh kar Aksh thoda conscious ho jata he. Aksh Sakshi ko apne upar se hatane ki koshish me lagg jata he, lekin Sakshi ne use kafi kass liya tha.

Sakshi: uhhhh..... Sone dona.....
Wo apni aadhi nind me hi Aksh ko or zyada kaste hue kehti he. Ab Aksh kya karta, or baat to ye thi ke use bhi Sakshi se alag hone ka mann nahi tha. Aksh foran apna haath Sakshi ke sar pe rakh kar use apne sine me chupa sa leta he.

or uske makhnaki balo me apni ungliya ferne lagta he, fir khud aakhe band kare apni soch me chala jata he.

Kareeb 1 ghante ki nind le kar Sakshi ki aakhe khulne lagti he, wo aaj kafi sukoon bhari nind soyi thi, lekin jab use ehsas hota he ke uski sukoon bhari nind ka raaz kya he, to wo hadbadate hue uthkar Aksh se alag ho jati he. Aksh jagne ke baad firse soya hi nahi tha wo to 1 ghante se Sakshi ki zulfo se khel raha tha, Sakshi ko aisa dekh kar wo bhi heran sa uth jata he.

Aksh: kya hua Sakshi?
Wo bed pe uthkar beth te hue puchta he.
Sakshi: N..... Nahi.... Kuch nahi.....
Wo uthkar ayne ke samne apne baal bandh te hue kehti he.
Aksh: yaar tu kafi moti ho gayi he Sakshi......
Wo muskurate hue Sakshi ke piche khada ho kar kehta he, jise sunkar Sakshi gussa ho jati he.
Sakshi: kuch bhi bakwas mat kar Aksh tu.....
Wo piche palat kar Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Aksh: me sach keh raha hu, tu to mere upar so gayi thi, lekin yaha mere badan ka purza purza dard karne laga he, moti kahi ki......
Wo kamre se bahar jate waqt Sakshi ko chidhate hue kehta he or apne kamre me chala jata he.

Uske jane ke baad Sakshi ke chehre par sharm or hasi ke bhav ajate he, or wo apne aap ko mirror me dekhne lagti he.

Sakshi(mann me): bavlat...... Kuch bhi bolta rehta he, lekin Aksh ab kitna alag sa behave ane laga he, mujhe Aksh ko humesha isi tarah dekhna he, hasta hua, khush hota hua..... Or me uski khushi ke liye har ek ciz karne ke liye tayar hu.....

Wo apne mann me bass Aksh ke bare me soche ja rahi thi, lekin ab use bahot ajib sa lagne lagg raha tha, use bahot bechaini si hone lagi thi. Sakshi jaldi se naha kar ajati he or tayar ho kar sabke saath milkar nashta kar rahi hoti he.

Sakshi: Aai.... Me Neha se milne ja rahi hu, thodi der baad ajaungi.....
Radha: thik he....
Aksh: chal me tujhe chhod deta hu waha....
Sakshi: ahh.... N... Nahi tu rehne de.... Me chali jaungi....
Wo hadbadate hue Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: thik he..... Aai me kuch kaam se Garage ja raha hu, Dopeher ko aa jaunga ghar....
Or wo ghar se apni bike le kar nikal jata he, lekin wo thoda aage ja kar bike rok deta he. Wahi Sakshi bhi ghar se nikal jati he, wo to bass apni soch me gum thi or aage chali ja rahi thi, Aksh use ata hua dekh leta he, lekin Sakshi use dekhe bina hi bagal se aage nikal jati he.

Aksh: Sakshi.....
Uski awaz sunkar Sakshi apne khayalo se bahar ajati he or piche mudkar Aksh ke paas ajati he.
Sakshi: t.... Tu gaya nahi?
Aksh: kya hua Sakshi? Tu kuch pareshani si lagg rahi he mujhe.....
Sakshi: nahi.... Nahi.... Aisi to koi baat nahi he.... Wo to bass thodi si thakan mehsus ho rahi he....
Aksh: accha? Chal beth ja....
Sakshi: Aksh tu fikar matt kar me chali jaungi......
Aksh: kya baat he? Koi or araha he kya tujhe pick karne ke liye?
Wo Sakshi ko tease karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat..... Kuch bhi matt bol,
Wo gusse me Aksh ko mukka marne ka ishara karte hue kehti he or jakar bike pe beth jati he. Aksh muskurate hue bike start kar deta he or aage badh jata he. Kuch der baad Sakshi Neha ke ghar se kuch dur Aksh ko bike rokne ke liye kehti he.

Aksh: lene ke liye ajau?
Sakshi: nahi me bass thodi der me chali jaungi ghar....
Wo Bike se utarte hue kehti he. Fir Aksh apne garage chala jata he, Sakshi dekhti he ke Aksh ab nazar nahi araha, to wo Neha ke ghar pe jane ke bajaye kuch duri par jo bus stop tha waha chali jati he or bus ka intezar karne lagti he.


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Place: Surat, Gujrat

Mansi or uske kafi sari friends unki ek dost jiska naam Kavita tha uske ghar pe the, Mansi, Kavita or kuch ladkiya saath beth kar baate kar rahe hote he, tabhi Mansi ki nazar samne ate ek ladke par pad jati he.

Mansi: Ahhhh..... Kavita..... Me ja rahi hu apne ghar....
Wo gusse me apni jagah se uth te hue kehti he.
Kavita: are kya ho gaya Mansi?
Wo Mansi ka haath pakadkar use rokte hue puchti he.
Mansi: is ghadhe ko yaha kyu bulaya tumne?
Wo apne daat piste hue us ladke ki taraf ishara kar ke Kavita se puchti he.
Kavita: yaar..... Mansi ab tumhari or Shahid ki jamti nahi usme meri kya galati? Wo mera accha dost he na...
Mansi: lekin tum janti ho na ye mera dimag khata rehta he humesha.... Fir bhi....
Kavita: Mansi ab wo pura waqt thodi na humare saath hi bethega..... Please try to understand...
Wo Mansi ko samjhate hue use wahi par bitha deti he.

Shahid: hey Girls...... How are you....
Wo Kavita or baki sab ke paas akar Mansi ko dekhte hue puchta he. Baki sab to us se baat kar leti he, lekin Mansi use bina dekhe apne Mobile me lagg jati he.
Shahid: Mohatrma....... Humne pucha kesi he aap?
Wo chair Mansi ke samne rakh kar us pe beth te hue kehta he.
Mansi: tum se Matlab?
Shahid: Haye..... Aap na humesha vaar karne ke liye tayar bethi rehti ho.... Waise aap to humara qatl bhi kar de to has kar aapke samne qurban ho jaye....
Mansi: Hahaha..... Very funny.... Now get lost.... Tumhe dikhayi nahi de raha yaha hum ladkiya bethi hui he? Ohh sorry... Pehle ye Glasses hatao shayad dikh jaye.....
Uski baat par Kavita or baki ladkiya hasne lagti he.
Shahid: are Mansi ji.... Ye Glasses is liye lagaye he humne ke kahi humari aakhe dekh aap unme kho na jao....
Mansi: accha? Ek minute hatao to Glasses.....
Uski baat par Shahid apne glasses hata deta he.
Mansi: ohh.... Ab samjhi kyu tum ye glasses pehenkar ghumte ho.... Kavita ye He ek number ka Nashedi..... Dekho to aakhe kitni laal ho gayi he Nasha kar kar ke.... ohh nahi.. nahi.. mat dekhna warna hum ladkiya yahi chakkar kha kar gir jayengi.....
Wo Shahid ka mazak udate hue kehti he. Jis se waha majud sab hasne lagte he. Or Shahid ka muh puri tarah se utar jata he.
Mansi: Kara li bezzati? Ab jaoge ya or kuch kahu?
Wo Shahid ke nazdeek akar kehti he.
Kavita: yaar ab bass karo tum dono..... Maza karne aye ho ya ladne ke liye?
Wo Mansi or Shahid ko chup karate hue kehti he or fir sablog waha party enjoy karte he. Shahid waha se hatkar apne kuch dosto ke saath join ho jata he, lekin wo Mansi ko hi dekhe ja raha tha.

Shahid(mann me): koi baat nahi Mansi ji..... Bezzati to ki he aapne humari.... Baki aap to humari begum hi banogi..... Or Begum apne Shohar ka mazak udaye to usme konsi badi baat ho gayi.... Huhhh....

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Place: Mumbai, Maharashtra

Sakshi bus se utar gayi or samne bane ek Mandir me jane lagi. Kuch sidhiya chadhne ke baad wo Bhagwaan ki murti ke samne ja kar khadi ho jati he or apne haath jodkar aakhe band kar leti he.

Sakshi(mann me): he bhagwaan, meri madat kijiye.... Mujhe samajh nahi araha ke akhir mere dil me kya chal raha he, lekin aap to sabkuch jante ho na? To please meri madat kijiye or mujhe is duvidha se bahar nikalye.... Me janti hu ke jo kuch mere dil me chal raha he wo galat he, lekin me use puri tarah se nahi samajh pa rahi..... Agar me galat hu to mujhe uska ehsas kara dijiye.... Or agar me sahi hu to mujhe Aksh.......

Wo is se aage kuch soch pati ke uski aakho se asu ane lagte he. Kuch der Sakshi bass aise hi apne haath jode bhagwaan se baate karti he, fir apne aap ko sambhal kar mandir ke kuch gol chakkar laga kar samne bani bethne ki jagah par jakar beth jati he. Sakshi kuch der apna dil wahi par halka karti he. Kareeb 1 ghante tak waha bethne ke baad Sakshi apne ghar jane ke liye nikalti he kyu ke use ghar ja kar Aksh ke App par bhi kaam karna tha, wo ja kar bus pakad leti he or jab wo seat par bethi thi to use ab bhi bas kuch soch khaye ja rahi thi.

Sakshi(mann me): me to in sab me or bhi zyada ulajhti ja rahi hu, jitni koshish karti hu in bato ko nazar andaz karne ki, utna hi ye baate mere upar hawi ho rahi he..... me kya karu? Ye he to galat hi na? To kya me Aksh se thoda distance maintain kar lu? Nahi... nahi..... fir to pata nahi Aksh apne purane roop me wapis chala jaye.... to kya karu me? Kuch samajh me nahi araha he.... mujhe apne aap ko is daldal me jane se rokna he.... lekin kese? Deva.... Please Help me....

Wo apna sar window se lagaye apne dil or dimag se jung ladd rahi thi. Lekin ab is jung me jeet kiski hogi ye na to Sakshi ko pata tha or nahi kisi or ko.

kuch der baad Sakshi ghar ajati he lekin wo dekhti he ke darwaze par to Tala laga hua he, unke ghar ki ek chabi pados wale ghar me hoti, Sakshi waha jakar chabi le leti he or akar ghar me chali jati he, usne waqt dekha to 12 baje hue the. Sakshi Radha ko call kar ke puchti he ke wo kaha he, to wo kuch kaam se bahar gayi thi or use ghar ate 4 bajne wale the.

Sakshi(mann me): chalo, Aksh abhi ata hi hoga ghar.... Khuch khane ke liye bana leti hu pehle, badme Aksh ka kaam bhi to karna he.....

Fir wo apne kaam me lagg jati he, kareeb 1 baje Aksh ghar agaya tha, wo kafi thaka hua sa lagg raha tha. Sakshi use pani la kar deti he.

Sakshi: kya hua bahot kaam tha Garage me?
Wo Aksh ke samne khadi ho kar puchti he.
Aksh: ha bass, aisa hi samajh le....
Sakshi: chal tu haath muh dho le, me khana lagati hu.....
Aksh bass ha me gardan hila deta he, Sakshi ja kar kitchen me khana parosne lagti he, lekin Aksh wahi par betha hua tha, Sakshi plate le kar uske paas akar beth jati he.
Sakshi: tu abtak yahi betha he?
Aksh: yaar mera mann nahi kar raha uthne ka....
Sakshi: are khana kha kar tu soja...
Aksh: ab khila de tu apne haatho se, waise bhi tere haatho se khana or bhi zyada swad lagta he.......
Wo tirchi nazro se Sakshi ko dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tu na sach me pagal ho gaya he Aksh....
Wo Aksh ki baat par haste hue kehti he.
Aksh: kyu? To kya me pehle jesa hi bann jau fir?
Sakshi: Aksh tuna kisi din pitega mujhse.... Hazar baar kaha he matt kiya kar wo baate, fir bhi tu manta kyu nahi he?
Wo bahot hi gusse me apne dant piste hue Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: are shant ho ja.... Me to mazak kar raha tha, ab khana khila rahi he ya.....
Fir Sakshi apne haatho se Aksh ko khana khilane lagti he. Aksh kafi thak gaya tha to Sakshi ne use aram karne ko kaha or khud Aksh ka App banane me jut gayi. Dono is waqt Aksh ke kamre me the. Sakshi pura waqt App banane me laga deti he, lekin bich bich me uski nazar baar baar Aksh par pad rahi thi, wo laakh koshish kar rahi thi ke wo apne kaam par dhyan de sake lekin is bich Sakshi ki nazar Aksh par pad hi jati or fir uske dil me firse kuch kuch hone lagta, use apne kamre me jane ka bhi dil nahi kar raha tha, to wo bass yahi bethkar apna kaam karti he.

Aise hi Kuch din nikal jate he, ab Aksh ka App or Website dono hi ready thi, sablog kafi khush the, Aksh ne bhagwaan or apne Aai Baba ke Ashirwad le kar Website or App Public kar di. Is naye idea ko launch hue bass kuch hi din hue the, lekin Aksh ke behtarin Idea ne logo ka dhyan apni taraf khich liya, Aksh ka Start Up successful hone laga tha, Aksh ke idea ne logo ko kafi sahuliyat di thi apni gadi ko bina kahi le jaye Modify karne ki.

Dekhte hi dekhte ek mahina nikal chuka tha, Aksh ne to apna investment Breakthrough bhi kar liya, or ab uska Profit ana shuru ho chuka tha. Pehla profit Aksh ko uski ummid se kahi zyada mila. Usne Karim ke saath pura profit 50/50 karne ki baat kahi, lekin Karim ne is se mana kar diya, Karim ka kehna tha ke Garage ke kaam ke alag se yani jo profit Aksh ko Website or App se hota he (Advertisement) wo sirf Aksh hi rakhega. Aksh ab kafi busy rehne laga tha, usne is kaam ko sambhalne ke liye ek chota sa office space rent par le liya jaha se wo in sabka dhyan rakh sakta tha, wo pura din bass apne office or Garage par hi rehta, jis se Sakahi ko uski kami mehsus hone lagi thi. Lekin use pata tha ke Shuruwat me sara waqt business me lagana padta he, lekin uska mann karta tha ke wo Aksh ke saath rahe, ghume.

2 Mahine nikal chuke the, ek baar Raat ko 7 baje Aksh ghar ajata he, uske haath me kafi sare Shopper the. Wo akar sofe par beth jata he.
Radha: beta ye kya? Itna sare bag?
Tabb Aksh kuch bags utha kar Radha ko de deta he.
Aksh: Aai.... Ye tumhare liye Sadiya, or ye lo... Tumhara mangalsutra tut chuka tha na... Use thik kara diya he, mujhe pata tha tum naya nahi logi.... Isliye yahi thik kara diya mene....
Radha to Aksh ka gift dekh kar ro padti he or use apne sine se laga leti he.
Aksh: Aai please agar mene kabhi tumhe takleef di ho, jo mene pehle kayi baar aap sabko di he to mujhe maaf karna, lekin ab kisi ko mujhse koi shikayat nahi hogi. I promise.....
Wo Radha ko apne se alag kar uske asu pochte hue kehta he.
Radha: Maa Baap ko apne baccho se shikayat nahi hoti beta..... Wo bass ek chinta hoti he, jise bacche Shikayat samajh lete he.... Lekin me bahot khush hu ki mera beta ab jesa chahta tha waise usne kar hi liya...
Wo Aksh ke maathe ko chumte hue kehti he. Ab ye sari baate sunkar Sandeep or Sakshi ke akho me bhi asu agaye the, Aksh uthkar Santosh ke samne ajata he or use apne saath bahar ane ko kehta he. Jese hi sab bahar aye to waha ek new Bike khadi thi.

Aksh: Baba aapke liye ye Bike li he....
Wo bike ki chabi Santosh ke haath me dete hue kehta he.
Santosh: Aksh iski kya.....
Aksh: please Baba mana mat kijiye..... Jab aapne mere kehne se pehle hi mujhe sari chize mere samne hazir kar di thi, to kya me itna sa bhi kuch kar nahi sakta?
Wo Santosh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he. Santosh ko aaj Aksh par bahot hi naaz ho raha tha. Fir wo log ghar ke andar ajate he. Sakshi Sofe ke ek corner me muskurate hue khadi thi. Aksh uske paas akar ek bag Sakshi ke haath me thama deta he. Sakshi use dekhti he to usme ek dress tha. Lekin us ek dress ko dekh kar bhi Sakshi bahot khush dikh rahi thi.

Aksh: pehen kar ajana ise jaldi.....
Sakshi: bass abhi ayi...
Wo muskurate hue Aksh se kehti he or bhagte hue apne kamre me chali jati he.

Radha: Aksh beta uske liye sirf ek dress laya tu? Or kuch le ata na beta......
Wo Aksh ke paas akar kehti he.
Aksh: Aai tum chinta kyu karti ho.... Bass dekhti jao aage...
Or wo aage Sakshi ke kamre ki taraf badh jata he, usne apne haatho ko piche kiye usme kuch chupaya hua tha.
Aksh: Sakshi..... hua ya nahi? Kitni der lagayegi?
Wo Sakshi ke kamre ke bahar se kehta he.
Sakshi: ha ek minute ayi....
Fir wo akar apne kamre ka darwaza khol deti he. Sakshi par wo dress kafi jach raha tha, or us se bhi zyada Khubsurat thi Sakshi ki muskurahat. Aksh to soch me padd gaya ke ek choti si gift se hi Sakshi itni khush ho gayi.
Aksh: andar chal.....
Sakshi: kyu? Kya hua?
Aksh: yaar tu sawal bahot karti he... Chalna andar...
Fir Sakshi kamre ke andar ajati he.
Aksh: chal ab us taraf ghum ja...
Fir Sakshi bina kuch kahe ayne ke samne apna chehra fer deti he. Aksh apne haath aage badha kar Sakshi ke gale tak le ata he, or uske haath me ek Gold Chain thi, jisme ek Diamond bhi laga hua tha, or wo kafi chamak raha tha. Sakshi ka muh wo dekh kar khula ka khula reh gaya tha.
Aksh: jis tarah se tune meri help ki he na... Uske samne agar me is duniya ki sabse kimti chiz bhi tere samne la kar rakh du na... To wo bhi bahot choti si lagegi....
Wo apne haatho se chain ko Sakshi ke gale me pehnate hue kehta he. Sakshi ki akhe ab num ho chuki thi. Lekin tabhi Aksh apni jeb se Gold Earrings nikalta he, or Sakshi ko pehen ne ke liye bolta he. Sakshi ke muh se koi alfaz nahi nikal pa raha tha, wo chup chap Earrings le kar apne kano me pehen leti he. Aksh bass Sakshi ko ayne se niharne me laga hua tha. Sakshi Earrings pehen kar Aksh ki taraf mudti he, uski akhe Asuo se bhari hui thi. Lekin Aksh apni jeb me haath dal kar ek box nikalta he or use kholne ke baat usme se Sakshi ke liye Ring nikal kar Sakshi ko pehna deta he.

Aksh: accha laga Gift?
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue puchta he. Sakshi bina der kiye Aksh ko kas kar gale laga leti he, or sisak kar rone lagti he.
Aksh: yaar isme rone wali konsi baat he?
Wo Sakshi ke sar pe haath ferte hue kehta he. Kuch der Sakshi yu hi Aksh ki baho me roti rehti he. Or Aksh se alag ho kar uske aakho me aakhe dalkar dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: agar me tujhse kuch or mannungi to tu manega?
Aksh: tu bass mujhe bata kya chahiye tujhe?
Wo Sakshi ki aakhe saaf karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: wo...... Ahh... Wo....
Aksh: kya hua? Bata na Sakshi....
Sakshi: Aksh.... Wo... Jabse tera ye business start hua he, tabse tu apna zyada tar waqt ghar se bahar hi bita raha he, Sunday ho ya koi or din, tu bass kaam me hi fasa rehta he. Or Mujhe.... Mujhe bahot akela sa mehsus hota he.....
Wo narazgi se apna muh fulaye Aksh se kehti he, Aksh ko bhi apni galati ka ehsas ho jata he or wo apne kaan pakad kar Sakshi se mafi mangta he.
Aksh: I'm Really Sorry Sakshi..... Me sach me pagal hu, me apne kaam ke bich ye bhul hi gaya ke koi he jo mere liye sab se zyada ehem he... Mujhe maaf kar de Sakshi.....
Sakshi: Tu... Tu mafi kyu mang raha he? Me tujhe galat nahi keh rahi hu, lekin kya tu... Kuch din tak.....
Wo Aksh ke haath niche leti hui apni adhuri baat kehti he, lekin Aksh uski baat samajh jata he.
Aksh: Done..... Agle 4 dino tak koi kaam nahi..... Tere liye kuch surprise hone wala he....
Sakshi: Surprise? Nahi mujhe koi Surprise nahi chahiye ab....
Wo apna muh fulaye sar naa me hilate hue kehti he.
Aksh: tu chup kar yaar.... Or chal bahar Aai Baba kabse wait kar rahe honge...
Fir wo Sakshi ke saath bahar ajata he, Radha or Santosh to Sakshi ko dekhte hi reh gaye the, Dress se le kar chain or earrings se le kar Sakshi ki Ring... Har chiz Sakshi par jach rahi thi. Sakshi sharmate hue wahi khadi thi.
Radha: Deva... Deva.... Dekho to Sakshi ko.... Kisi ki nazar na lage tujhe.....
Wo Sakshi ke nazdeek akar kala tika karte hue kehti he.

Fir kuch der baad sablog bahar chale jate he Dinner ke liye, aaj inka pura pariwar behadd khush tha. Ghar akar sablog apne apne kamre me chale jate he.

To dosto aaj ke Update me bass itna hi, ab aage dekhna interesting hoga, kya Sakshi ki feelings uspar overpower hogi ya Sakshi use sambhal legi? Aksh ke behtarin Idea ko jesa push milna chahiye tha waisa hi push mil gay, lekin ab kya Aksh is se ek kadam or badhayega? Kyu ke Aksh ki personality aisi thi ke wo thode me samane wala nahi tha, aage uske kya plans honge? Or jis surprise ki baat usne ki he Sakshi se wo kya hogi? Jaan ne ke liye bane rahiye.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

Romantic emotional update❤❤❤ loved the update from start to end it was all about sakakash moments.
Sakshi is not wrong on her part she is trying to control her emotions but it is very difficult to control our emotions especially if it is true it only grows stronger and stronger on the other hand akash might also be thinking about the same not sure bit feels thou. Well new character shahid sounds to be interesting he appears to be more mature with his thoughts let's what happens next....
Waiting...
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Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum​

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[Pta nhi]

Awesome updated

 

[Rashu17]

Excellent Update brother
Aaj sachme maza agaya padhne mai, aksh ka business successful raha ye dekh kar bahut khushi hui bhai. Sakshi apne dil me chal rahi uljhan samajh gayi hai lekin wo ise shayad maan'na nahi chahti lekin sach kahe to sakahi ki zindagi me aksh ke siwa or kisi ka enter karna namumkin hai.

Aksh: Done..... Agle 4 dino tak koi kaam nahi..... Tere liye kuch surprise hone wala he....
Sakshi: Surprise? Nahi mujhe koi Surprise nahi chahiye ab....
Wo apna muh fulaye sar naa me hilate hue kehti he.

Yaar ye ladki bahut hi cute he
Ab jyada intezar nahi hota agla update padhne ke liye. Eagerly Waiting For Next Update.

 

[Vm121398]

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h

 

[Aakash.]

The beginning of the day is filled with love, it seems like all the days will be lovely. By the way, whenever Aksh teases Sakshi, I feel very good. Sakshi cannot understand her own feelings but the truth is that she loves Aksh.
What happened between Mansi and Shahid that Mansi is angry at him and on seeing Shahid it seems that he loves Mansi but seeing Mansi it does not seem so?
I am very happy that Aksh is getting benefit from his work and the family is happy, this is the happiest thing, heart is happy after reading the update.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[mashish]

waiting for next

 

[Qaatil]

Bht hi sunder update

Awesome updated

waiting for next

Thank You So Much Dosto
Agla Update jald hi post kar dunga, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Bdiya pyara update bhai
Vo scene jab aksh apne gharwalo ke liye gifts laya, pucho hi mat

Aksh ne sakshi ko bachpan me bhi kha tha ki vo aai baba se mehngi chize na mange, jab aksh kmane lgega to vo khud hi sakshi ke liye sab lakar dega
Finally wo din aa hi gya, sakshi ko apni kmai se aksh ne mehnge gifts diye h vese sakshi to ek dress me hi khus thi (gifts mehnge ya saste mayne nhi rakhte sakshi ke liye)





Really bhut hi pyara update tha bhai, sakshi ko bhi ab sayad puri trah se hi aksh ke bare me uski jo feeling h, uska pta lag gya h


Waiting for next update

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review

Bhai hota he na kuch log bass apna ek wada pura karne ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak ja sakte he, to bass itna samajh lo Aksh bhi usme se hi ek he, baki sahi kaha ke Sakshi ke liye sasti ya mahengi chize mayne nahi rakhti, uske liye to shayad sirf Aksh ka saath hi sabse kimti chiz he. Or sahi kah ke Sakshi ko apni feelings ka andaza lagg chuka he, lekim is society ke khilaf jakar wo kese in sabko maan le... Baki dekhte he aage kya hoga, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

R

Romantic emotional update❤❤❤ loved the update from start to end it was all about sakakash moments.
Sakshi is not wrong on her part she is trying to control her emotions but it is very difficult to control our emotions especially if it is true it only grows stronger and stronger on the other hand akash might also be thinking about the same not sure bit feels thou. Well new character shahid sounds to be interesting he appears to be more mature with his thoughts let's what happens next....
Waiting...
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Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum​

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Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Comment
Sahi kaha bhai, Sach ko kitna bhi dabane ki koshish karlo, lekin ye mumkin nahi he, Sakshi ke saath bhi wahi ho raha he. Or ha Aksh ki feeling bhi abhi puri tarah humare samne nahi ayi he, lekin bass jude rehna, jald hi Story me kuch ehem mod ane he.... Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​