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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai hemya bhai....UPDATE 7
Main gaadi chala raha tha ki tabhi mujhe gaadi ke aaine mein do bike mere piche pichhe aati hui dikh rahi thi. Shak to mujhe nahi hota, par unke haatho mein hatiyaar the.
Aage ....
Charo aur raste ki bheed ki aawaz aa rahi thi, par mujhe to jaise kuch sunayi hi nahi de raha tha, lekin samne se traffic thi. Main bhagwan se dua kar raha tha ki vo jo log piche hai vo mera pichha na kar rahe ho. Isi ummeed mein bina dare maine gaadi signal par rok di.
Tabhi mere piche koi baith gaya, maine gusse mein chillate hue piche dekha, mere aas paas ke log meri taraf dekh rahe the aur tabhi piche baithe insaan ne dusri aur ishara kiya jahaan par do bike par baithe log gun liye hue the.
Aas paas ke log bhi shant ho gaye, usne mere kaan mein kaha, "Agar zinda rehna hai to main jaise batau us taraf gaadi ghuma dena." Uska chehra to dekh nahi paaya par uske lambe baal the ye aaine mein dikh raha tha.
Main kuch bolne ki halat mein nahi tha, maine uske kahe anusar gaadi ko ghumaana shuru kiya. Mujhe kuch der gaadi chalane ke baad mere kaano mein aawaz aayi, "Haa yahi," ye sunne ke baad aage ka kuch barabar sunai nahi diya, aankho ke saamne jaise kuch ghum raha ho aisa hua. Aur mere na chahte hue bhi aankhein band hone lagi.
Achhaanak mujhe mere haatho aur pairo mein bahut hi dard mahsoos ho raha tha, meri aankhen dheere dheere khulne lagi, saamne dhimi roshni mein kuch log khade the, main niche gira hua tha, ya phir giraya gaya tha. Mere sar ko thodi si chot lagi hui thi, mere haath pair bande hue the.
Achhaanak se mere kaano ke neeche ek jordaar thappad pada. "Bata saale kon hai tu, uth kon hai bata," ye vahi lambe baal wala insaan tha jo mere piche baitha hua tha. Usne mere gaal par ek aur thappad jad diya jisase lagbhag mere jabda dard karne laga. "Uth varna gaand me goli maar dunga."
"Kon hai aap mujhe yahaan kyu laya hai aapne?"
"Abe lavde shana banta hai, tujhe kya laga tu Raghu ko maar kar bach jayega? Abe tu patal me bhi hamse nahi bach pata aur ye to hamara shahar hai," ye kahte hue usne meri collar pakad li aur mujhe apni taraf khicha jo ki mere pair ek kursi se zameen se na touch hue upar bande hue the, to kursi bhi thodi uth gayi.
"Bol lavde vo aurat kon thi jiske sath tu collection line se gaya tha, bata de jaan bakshi jaayegi."
Uski baat sunkar main chauk gaya, isne kaise dekh liya vo ilaka to puri tarah se sunsaan tha us waqt.
Mere chehre par prashn ka bhav dekh vo muskuraya aur mujhe usne chhod diya. "Tujhe laga hoga ki koi tumhe pakad nahi payega lekin bade bade gunahgaar pakade jaate hai, ye hamse behtar koi nahi jaanta aur tu to khule aam us aurat ke sath ghuma tha to tujhe kya laga ki koi dekh nahi paaya."
Uski baate sunkar mera gala sunkhne laga. Main yahaan se kaise niklu is dvidha mein pagal ho raha tha.
Mujhe is tarah shant dekhkar vo phirse gussa ho gaya aur meri collar phir pakad li aur usi tarah se utha liya.
"Bata kon thi vo aurat, jyada gussa mat dila varna maar dunga." Usne ek haath se phirse mukka mere gaalo pe maara, mera is baar sidhe muh se khoon nikal gaya. Dard ki to koi sima nahi thi. Mere liye saans lena bhi mushkil ho raha tha, is tarah se mere chehre ka haal ho gaya tha.
"Raju bhai lagta hai, ye ladka aise nahi manega, iski ungliyaan katate hai phir ise samajh aayega," uske paas khade ek aadmi ne kaha.
"Arey itni kya jaldi hai, thoda tadpate hai, vo chamiya bhi kaha jayegi, maine us aurat ko dekha hua hai bass ab uthane ki bari hai vo bhi isi shahar mein hogi."
Bhabhi in chijo ko jitni lightly le rahi thi us ke aas paas bhi ye chij nahi thi. Unki vajah se meri jaan jane wali hai. Bata du unke bare mein par, uske baad bhi jinda thodi rakhenge mujhe.
Main dard se karah raha tha , mujhe kuch nahi pata is tarah ki guhar laga raha tha, par ye sab sirf mujhe dard bayan karke use kam karne ki jhuti madat meri chikhen kar rahi thi .vo bhi band ho gayi jab mera muh unhone band kar diya.
Us kamre me koi nahi bass me tha ek taraf se roshni aa rahi thi , jaise ummid ki kiran ho par
Yaa phir jangal me lagi hui aag .
Kyuki us darawaje ke bahar vo hi log ho sakte hai .
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" Ye ab tak kyu nahi aaya , kitni der ho chuki hai . Khana khaya leta mujhe phir koi kaam nahi rahta ab bartan uske aane ke baad dhone padenge " Rukhmini Aaditya ke late aane ke vajah se bahut pareshan thi . Use to lag raha tha ki Aaditya doston ke sath ghum raha hoga yahi soch rahi thi .
Lekin Jaise jaise shyam hoti gayi use ab dar satane laga ki kahi kuch ho to nahi gaya. Phone to kar deta kab se call kar rahi hu call hi nahi lag raha hai .
Uske kisi dost ka bhi phone number nahi hai .Kaha hoga vo itni der phone switch off karke kon rakhta hai . Kahi ? .. nahi aisa nahi ho sakta , lekin use koi kyu chot pahuchana chahega .
Ab kaushik bhi ghar par aa gaya tha , usne puchha Aaditya ke baare me to vahi chinta Rukhmini ne jatayi .
Kaushik " tum tension mat lo , vo aa jayega dosto ke sath hoga Ab college me hai to dosto ko mana nahi kar sakta koi "
Rukhmini " Lekin phir bhi uski jimmedari Ham par sop rakhi hai dadaji ne agar kuch"
Kaushik Rukhmini ki baat sunkar chinta me aa gaya aur agale hi pal " ye ladka bhi na use samajh aana chahiye ki itni der ho gayi sab log pareshan hoge abhi tak nahi aaya ."
Kaushik bolta raha par Rukhmini ka dhyan puri tarah se Kaushik ki baato par nahi tha . Vo Apne hi vicharo me khoyi hui thi .
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Idhar nandkishor aadarsh ke sath bahar ghumane aaya hua tha .
" Aadarsh tumhe kya lagta hai vo Sadashiv bharose ke layak hai "
Aadarsh ne ek baar nandkishor ki taraf dekhkar muskurate hue cigarette ka kash lagaya .
" Netao par kabhi bharosa karna nahi chahiye ,main kitne saalo se vakalat kar raha hu netao ke liye inki party ke liye par abhi tak koi bharosemand ho aisa dekha nahi, aap bhi to kitne saalo se is profession me hai aap ko bhi pata hai , Jijaji "
" Haa , vastad gang ko khatam karna netaji udeshya samajh aa raha hai par uske liye vo Us aurat ki bali chadhayenge " Nandkishor apni gaadi jo ki road ke side pe ruki hui thi, vaha se aas pas dekh kar kash marne laga.
"Konsi aurat?"
"Are hame khabar mili hai ki ek aurat thi jo ki raghu ke sath bahut baar dekhi jaa chuki hai .usi ka hath hai Raghu ki murder me"
" To aap us aurat ko nahi pakdne vale "
" Are pakadunga, lekin usase pahle vastad gang ko us aurat ko pakad vand dunga aur phir ek sath sabhi khatam " phir aadarsh aur nandkishor dono hasne lage .
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Kamra buri tarah se kabad se bhara hua tha , Main garmi me puri tarah se bhig chuka tha .mere pura sharir bhuk aur pyas se tadap raha tha. Sharir pe maar ka dard upar se.
Ek taraf se darwaze ke bahar se aavaj aa rahi thi matlab bahar to Abhi abhi koi tha .
Paseena mujhe is vajah se aaya tha kyuki mere pair jo ki kursi ke pero se bandhe hue the , vo do tin baar kursi ke sath mujhe uthaya gaya tab mene ghis ghis kar rassi ko adjustable badi thi jisase mere pair ab jamin se touch ho rahe the.
Ab kuch to tarkeeb lagani hi thi . Vo kahte hai na ki bachhe ko bhi Samandar me fek do vo bhi hatper marne lagta hai .usi tarah se Ab marna hai to risk to lene me kya burai.
Bass dikkat ye thi ki main tha thaka hua aur mujhe aage kursi ke sath hokar kisi nukili chij se rassi katni hai jo ki abhi abhi mushkil kaam hi tha.
Maine dhire se pairo par jo der kar kursi samet thoda khada hua .puri tarah se khada hona to namumkin hi tha.aage aaya kabad ki taraf, Tabhi mera tol thoda sa bigada
Aur Tap aisa kar aavaj hua jo ki kursi jamin par tikane ki vajah se tha .
Aavaj aate hi bahar se do log dekhne aaye .Aakar andar dekha to paaya ki me kursi par baitha hua tha aur muh , hath par bandhe hue the .use dhyan me nahi aaya ki pair thode dhile ho chuke hai niche se.
Aage ki aur ek lagdi ka nukila tukda tha shayad usi se kuch kaam ho Jaye.
Mene kaise taise kar ke us tukde ko apne bandhe hatho me liya ,aur dhire se kursi par bandhe bandhe katne laga rassi jo ki bahot hi mushkil kaam tha . Rassi ko kalaiyon par bandhe hath se usi hath me vo liya hue tukde se katne ki koshish karne laga.
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"Mujhe vaha jaakar dekhna hoga jaroor , Aaditya ko vahi lekar gaye honge , par Aaditya ko kyu nuksan pahunchana chahega koi " Rukhmini Isi soch me padi hui thi ki vastad gang ke adde par Jaa kar dekhe ki nahi , par use pata tha vo vaha gayi to uski Jaan ko khatra hai .
Par usi ki vajah se to Aaditya ki jaan khatre me hai , jarur us chai vale ne bataya hoga .Meri hi vajah se mujhe thoda sochna chahiye tha . Mene sab kuch Apne swarth ke liye socha hai , par mujhe thodi pata tha ki mere kaam me koi aur bhi galti se involve ho jayega .
Agar sach me Aaditya ko unhone hi kidnapped kiya hai , to jarur mujhe raghu jis adde ke bare me bata tha ye vahi hoga . Par me gayi to meri jaan jarur jayegi .
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Aadarsh nandkishor ke sath baitha hua tha tabhi Nandkishor ke phone par call aa jata hai .
" Haa bolo"
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" Khabar pakki hai na "
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" Thik hai ,tum log vaha par aajao me bhi nikalta hu"
" Kya hua?" Aadarsh nandkishor ko gadbadi me gaadi me baithate hue dekhkar.
" Are tum bhi chalo jaldi , us aurat ka pata chal chuka hai "
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Ab puri tarah se andhera tha , thodi si bahar ki dim light thi .meri saanse bahut hi bhari ho gayi thi . Haato me dard to asahaniy ho gaya tha . Kach kach ke sath rassi katne ko aayi . Vaise hi ek hath jaise hi chuta .
" Ye kya kar raha hai, aur ye rassi kaise chhuti" vo aadmi chillate hue mere hath ko pakadne aaya , vaise hi mene uske hath par nukili lakdi se baat kar diya aur vo chillane laga . Ab meri dhadkane daudne lagi thi kyuki bahar se halla hote hue kuch log andar aa rahe the .
Us aadmi ne phir se lakdi chhinne ki koshish ki tab tak dusra hath chhut chuka tha aur mene use lakdi sar pe fek ke maari vo thoda pichhe hua aur kabad par gir gaya , mere pair chhutate tab tak bahar se gun ki aavaj aayi .
Mene vaha se ek danda liya , aur darwaje ki roshni se mujhe koi aata dikha to mene sidhe uspar hamla bol diya . Tabhi banduko ki Aavaje aane lagi . Mujhe saamne se do t
in police vaale aate hue dikhe jo ki hathiyar liye hue the . Aur niche lashe padi hui thi .
To ye rahi update, agali update do tin dino me aayegi , pichli uske agle din hi bola tha par thoda sa hi likhna baaki tha vo abhi likha hai . Aur story aage kaise jaani chahiye bata dena . Thanks
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mujhe samaj to nahi aaya aapne kya kaha par . Lekin aapko behtreen lagi Isiliye me shukragujar hu.
Thanks, Mujhe koi successful story nahi likhni hai , bass kuch log padhle , jo padh rahe hai unhe pasand aaye bass,.mere man plot to hai hi par story ka basic idea ko 25 update, itne nahi lagenge . Mere pass jitne idea us hisab se basic idea story ka jald hi samaj aa jayega.
