Hello Asura ji, pehle toh aapna Naam bada hi anokha hai,
Dusri baat aap har post ko bade hi khubsurat tarike se likhte hai, maine kafi arse baat koi kahani padi hai aur sach main bahut khubsurat likh rahe hai aap, pad k dil khus ho gaya aur niche ek choti si Barish bhi ho gayi
Waise toh aapki kahani bahut khubsurat hai ese aise hi likhte rahiye par agar koi suggestion du hi toh yahi kahungi ki aur jada logo ko mat jodiye,
Kahani ko Lalita pe hi rakhiye bus, ho sake toh dusre extra logo ki kisi tarah kam kar dijiye
Waise wo Mohan yani nakli Sadhu wali soch bahut khubsurat hai, par wo bhi abhi k liye mat jodte toh jada acha rehta qki kahani ka asli maza lalita aur charo Dosto main hi hai
Waise ye aapki kahani hai toh jaisa aap behtar samjhe
Ummid karti hu mere jism ki garmi ko aap yu hi apni kalam se badate rahenge