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Fantasy Limitless Sword God

Xabhi

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So Guy's wait over...... Here is the First update

UPDATE - 1

Sard raat thi. jarjar jhompadee mein ek momabatti timatima rahi thi.

jhompadee ke saadhaaran aur tang kamare ke andar ek hi palang aur kursee thi. Bed ke paas, ek saadi, saphed sainy vardee pahane aur bistar par ek yuvak ko aansuon aur dard se bhare chehare ke saath ek yuva ladaki thi.

vah vyakti, jisaki peelee aur neelee aankhen band theen, koma mein pada tha.

Ek vayakti dawara dhakka dekar daravaaja khol diya gya.

daravaaje ke pravesh dvaar par ek lamba aur handsome aadamee dikhai diya.

"miss, vah shaayad pahale hi mar chuka hai! main logon ko laash ko saaph karane ki vyavastha karta hu. samay kam hai. jaldi chalo, ghar vaapas chalate hain. yadi master of house ko is akaaran anupasthiti ke baare mein pata chalata hai, to aapko aur mujhe, dono ko dand milega.

"nahin! main vaapas nahin jaoongi. main yahaan rahoongi young master ke saath, ”yuva ladakee ne kaha. Aur aisa kehte hi vah rote hue young master ki chhaati par let gai.

"kya aap apanie jimmedaariyon ko bhool gai hain? jaldi se mere saath vaapas chaliye, ”handsome vayakti ne munh pherate hue kaha.

“young master ka achaanak se accident ho gaya hai. iske alaava, main ghar vaapas aane ke baad bhi kya karoongi? jab main chhoti thi tab se young master ne mujhe ek ghar diya aur mera paalan-poshan kiya; aur ab, main unhe akela kaise chhod doon?” jaise hee yuvati ne ye shabd kahe, uski thaki hui, laal aankhon se ashruon ki varsha ho rahi thi.

tum... handsome vyakti ke chehare par gusse se bhai hansi ubhar aayi, lekin vah kuchh kah nahin paaya.

tabhee bistar par pade vyakti ke paas se halkee karaah sunai di.

hairaan ladaki ne achaanak rona band kar diya, bistar ke pass bhaag gayi, aur dekha ki patala, peela yuvak dheere-dheere apani aankhen kholane laga tha.

"kya vah jaag gaya?"

kamare mein maujood do log dang rah gaye.

vaastav mein, Su Yun pahale hee jaag chuka tha. Haalaanki, use tej sir-dard tha, isliye unsaka poora shareer is had tak kamajor mahasoos ho rha tha ki vo ek bhi muscle ko hilaane mein asamarth the.

bhale hi young master ki aavaaj ajeeb thi, lekin vah isase bahut parichit thi. ladaki dhyaan se un shabdon ko sun rahi thi jo young master ne bole the, bina ek shabd khoe.

"Qing Er? kya vah vaastav mein Qing Er hai? Asambhav! Qing Er pahale hi mar chuki hai... lekin yah aavaaj... mai ise bhool nahin sakata."

Su Yun dard ko sahate huye ateet kee ghatanaon ko yaad karata hai, to usakee bhaavanaen phoot padati hain.

"Young master ...," Qing Er chaunk gayi ne chupachaap kaha aur phir chillaayi, "kitna acchha hai! aap ant mein jaag gaye hain! ”

Su Yun ne dheere se apani aankhen kholi, aur keval ek khoobasoorat mahila ke chehare ko usaka abhivaadan karate hue dikhayi diya.

Ladaki ka chehara bedaag tha, uski aankhen keemati pattharon ki tarah jhilamila rhi thi, laal honth, aur ek saadhaaran lekin nirdosh sundarata jo kisi ko bhi mohit aur madahosh kar degi.

vah kaaphi chhoti thi, keval pandrah ya solah ki lekin usaka shareer ati sundar tha, haalaanki, yah spasht tha ki vah abhi bhi ek bachchi thi, kyonki usake chehare par crystal ki tarah ke aansoo the.

Su Yun madad nahin kar sakata tha lekin us par daya kar sakata tha.

Su Yun ne ladaki ko gaur se dekha. "Qing Er? kya sach - much tum ho?"

"yah main hoon ... young master, yah main hoon!" Qing Er ne Su Yun ke thande thande haathon ko pakad liya. "Young master, aapaka accident ho gaya tha. jaise hi mainne suna, main yahaan aa gayi. aap ab kaisa mahasoos kar rahe hain? kya aap behatar mahasoos kar rahe hain? Kya aapake shareer par kaheen aur chot lagee hai?" Qing Er ne chinta se bhare ye savaal poochhe.

"main?" Su Yun ne hairaan hokar khud ko dekha

"kya hua? parichit log; parichit drshy.

kya yah chhoti si jhopadi nahin hai jisamen chhoti Qing Er rahati thi? kya yah kamara pahale hi bik nahin chuka tha? isake alaava, Qing Er, kya vo ……...."

Su Yun samajh nahin pa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai. Itana hi nahin, uske sir mein aur bhee chakkar aane lage.

"ek intermediate spirit disciple ke saath aamane-saamane ladane k baad bhi vah abi bhi nahin mara! ham! to bas itana hi hota hai ki vah ek dukhi manahoos bana rahata hai," Qing Er ke bagal mein handsome aadamee ne apani dabi huyi aawaz mein kaha.

Su Yun ne apana sir pakad liya, "yah bhayaanak dard ... yah bhaavana ... meri yaaden bahut dhundhali lagati hain."

"lagata hai ki Su Yun ke sir par bhaari chot lagi hai," handsome aadamee ne dabi aawaz mein kaha.

"Intermediate spirit disciple se ladayi ke dauran aapake shareer ke andar ki damage abhi tak eliminate nahi hyi hai . Aap kuchh dava khao aur lamba aaraam karo, aur tum kuch dinon mein theek ho jaoge," Qing Er ne kaha.

Jaise hi Su Yun ne Qing Er ke sundar, chhote chehare ko dekha, usaka dil kaamp gaya, aur vah jaane dene se inakaar karate hue achaanak Qing Er ka haath pakad liya. "mas-master ..." Qing Er pratikriya nahin de saki.

Uske reflex haath ko chhootane vaale the, lekin usaka dil aisa hi rahana chaahata tha. is drshy ne do yuvakon ke beech ek pyaara sa maahaul paida kar diya tha.

Handsome aadamee ko ye dekh kr gussa aa gya. Usne jaldi se Qing Er ka haath hata liya aur kaha, "apamaanajanak! Su Yun! tum kameene! Qing Er ko chhoone ki himmat kaise ki! main tumhen maut ke ghaat utaar doonga!" apanee baat samaapt karane ke baad, vah phir Su Yun ka sir kaatane ke lie aage badha.

Jaise hee talavaar Su Yun ke paas pahunchee, Qing Er se spirit energy ka ek bolt baahar nikal aaya aur us aadamee ko peechhe hatane ke lie majaboor kar diya aur us spirit energy ke bolt ka mukaabala karane ke lie use bhi apni sipirit energy ka upayog karane ke lie majaboor hona pada.
:congrats: for the story Bhai keep going sandar update
 

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So Guy's wait over...... Here is the First update

UPDATE - 1

Sard raat thi. jarjar jhompadee mein ek momabatti timatima rahi thi.

jhompadee ke saadhaaran aur tang kamare ke andar ek hi palang aur kursee thi. Bed ke paas, ek saadi, saphed sainy vardee pahane aur bistar par ek yuvak ko aansuon aur dard se bhare chehare ke saath ek yuva ladaki thi.

vah vyakti, jisaki peelee aur neelee aankhen band theen, koma mein pada tha.

Ek vayakti dawara dhakka dekar daravaaja khol diya gya.

daravaaje ke pravesh dvaar par ek lamba aur handsome aadamee dikhai diya.

"miss, vah shaayad pahale hi mar chuka hai! main logon ko laash ko saaph karane ki vyavastha karta hu. samay kam hai. jaldi chalo, ghar vaapas chalate hain. yadi master of house ko is akaaran anupasthiti ke baare mein pata chalata hai, to aapko aur mujhe, dono ko dand milega.

"nahin! main vaapas nahin jaoongi. main yahaan rahoongi young master ke saath, ”yuva ladakee ne kaha. Aur aisa kehte hi vah rote hue young master ki chhaati par let gai.

"kya aap apanie jimmedaariyon ko bhool gai hain? jaldi se mere saath vaapas chaliye, ”handsome vayakti ne munh pherate hue kaha.

“young master ka achaanak se accident ho gaya hai. iske alaava, main ghar vaapas aane ke baad bhi kya karoongi? jab main chhoti thi tab se young master ne mujhe ek ghar diya aur mera paalan-poshan kiya; aur ab, main unhe akela kaise chhod doon?” jaise hee yuvati ne ye shabd kahe, uski thaki hui, laal aankhon se ashruon ki varsha ho rahi thi.

tum... handsome vyakti ke chehare par gusse se bhai hansi ubhar aayi, lekin vah kuchh kah nahin paaya.

tabhee bistar par pade vyakti ke paas se halkee karaah sunai di.

hairaan ladaki ne achaanak rona band kar diya, bistar ke pass bhaag gayi, aur dekha ki patala, peela yuvak dheere-dheere apani aankhen kholane laga tha.

"kya vah jaag gaya?"

kamare mein maujood do log dang rah gaye.

vaastav mein, Su Yun pahale hee jaag chuka tha. Haalaanki, use tej sir-dard tha, isliye unsaka poora shareer is had tak kamajor mahasoos ho rha tha ki vo ek bhi muscle ko hilaane mein asamarth the.

bhale hi young master ki aavaaj ajeeb thi, lekin vah isase bahut parichit thi. ladaki dhyaan se un shabdon ko sun rahi thi jo young master ne bole the, bina ek shabd khoe.

"Qing Er? kya vah vaastav mein Qing Er hai? Asambhav! Qing Er pahale hi mar chuki hai... lekin yah aavaaj... mai ise bhool nahin sakata."

Su Yun dard ko sahate huye ateet kee ghatanaon ko yaad karata hai, to usakee bhaavanaen phoot padati hain.

"Young master ...," Qing Er chaunk gayi ne chupachaap kaha aur phir chillaayi, "kitna acchha hai! aap ant mein jaag gaye hain! ”

Su Yun ne dheere se apani aankhen kholi, aur keval ek khoobasoorat mahila ke chehare ko usaka abhivaadan karate hue dikhayi diya.

Ladaki ka chehara bedaag tha, uski aankhen keemati pattharon ki tarah jhilamila rhi thi, laal honth, aur ek saadhaaran lekin nirdosh sundarata jo kisi ko bhi mohit aur madahosh kar degi.

vah kaaphi chhoti thi, keval pandrah ya solah ki lekin usaka shareer ati sundar tha, haalaanki, yah spasht tha ki vah abhi bhi ek bachchi thi, kyonki usake chehare par crystal ki tarah ke aansoo the.

Su Yun madad nahin kar sakata tha lekin us par daya kar sakata tha.

Su Yun ne ladaki ko gaur se dekha. "Qing Er? kya sach - much tum ho?"

"yah main hoon ... young master, yah main hoon!" Qing Er ne Su Yun ke thande thande haathon ko pakad liya. "Young master, aapaka accident ho gaya tha. jaise hi mainne suna, main yahaan aa gayi. aap ab kaisa mahasoos kar rahe hain? kya aap behatar mahasoos kar rahe hain? Kya aapake shareer par kaheen aur chot lagee hai?" Qing Er ne chinta se bhare ye savaal poochhe.

"main?" Su Yun ne hairaan hokar khud ko dekha

"kya hua? parichit log; parichit drshy.

kya yah chhoti si jhopadi nahin hai jisamen chhoti Qing Er rahati thi? kya yah kamara pahale hi bik nahin chuka tha? isake alaava, Qing Er, kya vo ……...."

Su Yun samajh nahin pa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai. Itana hi nahin, uske sir mein aur bhee chakkar aane lage.

"ek intermediate spirit disciple ke saath aamane-saamane ladane k baad bhi vah abi bhi nahin mara! ham! to bas itana hi hota hai ki vah ek dukhi manahoos bana rahata hai," Qing Er ke bagal mein handsome aadamee ne apani dabi huyi aawaz mein kaha.

Su Yun ne apana sir pakad liya, "yah bhayaanak dard ... yah bhaavana ... meri yaaden bahut dhundhali lagati hain."

"lagata hai ki Su Yun ke sir par bhaari chot lagi hai," handsome aadamee ne dabi aawaz mein kaha.

"Intermediate spirit disciple se ladayi ke dauran aapake shareer ke andar ki damage abhi tak eliminate nahi hyi hai . Aap kuchh dava khao aur lamba aaraam karo, aur tum kuch dinon mein theek ho jaoge," Qing Er ne kaha.

Jaise hi Su Yun ne Qing Er ke sundar, chhote chehare ko dekha, usaka dil kaamp gaya, aur vah jaane dene se inakaar karate hue achaanak Qing Er ka haath pakad liya. "mas-master ..." Qing Er pratikriya nahin de saki.

Uske reflex haath ko chhootane vaale the, lekin usaka dil aisa hi rahana chaahata tha. is drshy ne do yuvakon ke beech ek pyaara sa maahaul paida kar diya tha.

Handsome aadamee ko ye dekh kr gussa aa gya. Usne jaldi se Qing Er ka haath hata liya aur kaha, "apamaanajanak! Su Yun! tum kameene! Qing Er ko chhoone ki himmat kaise ki! main tumhen maut ke ghaat utaar doonga!" apanee baat samaapt karane ke baad, vah phir Su Yun ka sir kaatane ke lie aage badha.

Jaise hee talavaar Su Yun ke paas pahunchee, Qing Er se spirit energy ka ek bolt baahar nikal aaya aur us aadamee ko peechhe hatane ke lie majaboor kar diya aur us spirit energy ke bolt ka mukaabala karane ke lie use bhi apni sipirit energy ka upayog karane ke lie majaboor hona pada.
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Wait is over but after one update there is no responce from your side and where is second update bro
 
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ashish_1982_in

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Hello Guyss

I am starting the new story. Previously i was a silent reader now i wish for writing my own story.

Hope i will get so much support from all of you.
congrats
 
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