Adultery LLL- Love , Life & Luck (tragedy of life)

[sachin71]

Hello guys ...ye main new story start krne jaa rha hu ...iska plot maine soch rakha hai ...ye simple story hogi ...jisme naam (story) se pata chal gaya hoga

Aur is baar ummeed yahi hai ki aap log bore nahi honge ...
Mobile se likhta hu na to time lagta hai ...
Plot k baare me batata hu - is story me ye hoga ki ek middle class banda survive krta hai ghar me ,college me , naukri pesha me , aur love life me ....apne mind k jariye kya se kya ban jaata h vo ...
Usme kaha luck sath dega aur kahan love ....kyuki dhokha har jagah hota hai isme bhi yahi dikhaya jayega lekin haar kr bhi jeetna hi jindagi h mere dosto ...

Is baar yahi likhunga

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Introduction

Ghar ka mukhiya - Thakur Shivraj Singh
Ye sabse chhote bete the apne bhaiyo me ...aur sabke chahete bhi ...

Ye ek aise shakhs hai jo Apne bhaiyo me sabse chhote hai ....lekin inka rutba unse kahi jyada hai . Kyuki ye bade hi samajhdaar aur shant aadmi hai ...shant se matlab hai ki bina soche samjhe ye koi faisla nahi lete ...bade hi gehre insaan hai

Patni -: Raghubiri devi

Bada Beta : thakur vikram singh
Patni - maala
Beta -ajay


majhla Beta : thakur raghuvir ,Police me hai
Patni - sushila
Beti : seema

Chhota beta : thakur Ravindra singh
Patni : sushma
Dusri patni :padma
Beta - rohit bada beta hai
Beta : avi hero hai
Beti : pooja

Sabse chhoti beti : thakur rajkumari
Pati : subhash thakur

Beti : reeta

2.Bade bhai : thakur baldev singh

Patni : roopwati ..

Naam ki tarah roopwan ...inhe ghamand hai apne roop ka ...kyuki inki shadi bhi thakur baldev k pita ne mang ker ki thi bahu k roop me ...

Baldev ka Bada beta : thakur omkaar singh

Patni : madhu

Beta -ajeet
beti -radha

,..


Baldev ka Chhota beta : thakur veer singh

Patni - bhanu

Beta - subham .(subbu )

...

Baldev ki..Beti : thakur megha singh
Pati : rajendra ... professor hai

Beta : viraat

Beti : shaalu



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3.sabse.. bade bhai : thakur gyaan Singh

Inki Patni : thakur hema singh

Beta : thakur kuwar singh

Inko shadi ho chuki hai ...aur ye apne chacha ko bahut maante h .. pehelwani ka shauk rakhte hai .
Seedhe h ...bailbuddhi .

Kuwar ki Patni : surekha

Inhe koi beta nahi h


Gyan singh ki Beti : thakur prabha singh

Pati - suryapratap singh chief minister

Beti - laxmi



Other characters
Rakesh fauji ...iska parivaar nhi h
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Billu ... avi ke mama ka ladka
Ramendra avi ka mama

Kashmiri avi ki mami
Jahnvi ..maama ki ladki

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Somendra ka parivaar
Biwi -mar chuki hai ..8ve bete ko janm dene ke baad

1. Beta -kallu chaudhary ...dead

Iski biwi ratna ...
Beti -naina
Beta -sunder

2 . Beta -kapil ...dead
Biwi -revti
Beta -rajat
Rajat ki biwi - shalini
Ek chhota beta hai abhi


3 . Beta -sadhu chaudhary
Biwi : jamuna
Beta : surjeet

Surjeet ki wife - jyoti
Inko ek beti hai

Sadhu ki Beti-- soni

4. Beta - rajendra chaudhary
Biwi - shanti
Beta - shravan chaudhary
Beti : raakhi

5.jagdish chaudhary
Biwi : suparna
Beta -aashu
Beta - rajneesh

6.munna chaudhary
Biwi - shashi
Beta - lakhan
Beti - Avni

7. Sambhu chaudhary

Biwi -minaxi
Beta - nitin

8- raajan chaudhary
Abhi tak kunwara tha ab nahi hai ...

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Dilbaagh singh bhaan singh
Dono thakur bhai hai ..uttar Pradesh ke mirjapur se aaye hue ...
Bhaan ka beta jayveer aur manbeer
Patni -rajbala




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District magistrate ki family
naam - mohanlaal singh
Biwi - prabha
beti - rajni
beti - juhi
beta -Ankit

Rajni ka mama - gajendra chauhan
Gajendra ka beta - gaurav , anil
Gajendra ki biwi - poonam
Beti - swati

__________&__________
Ritika mehra
Dhananjay mehra father
Doly mehra mother
Jeetu mehra brother of ritika
Wife ruby

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Jagannath singh (Raghubiri ka bhai ) wife dead
Iska beta bheem singh Thakur _-_iski patni -Somwati
Bheem ka beta bheeshma

Jagannath ka bhai - sahdev singh
Wife dead

Beta - sudesh thakur
Beta -aadesh thakur
Beti - jugni thakur

Nice start

 

[Mr.x 2.0]

Hello guys ...ye main new story start krne jaa rha hu ...iska plot maine soch rakha hai ...ye simple story hogi ...jisme naam (story) se pata chal gaya hoga

Aur is baar ummeed yahi hai ki aap log bore nahi honge ...
Mobile se likhta hu na to time lagta hai ...
Plot k baare me batata hu - is story me ye hoga ki ek middle class banda survive krta hai ghar me ,college me , naukri pesha me , aur love life me ....apne mind k jariye kya se kya ban jaata h vo ...
Usme kaha luck sath dega aur kahan love ....kyuki dhokha har jagah hota hai isme bhi yahi dikhaya jayega lekin haar kr bhi jeetna hi jindagi h mere dosto ...

Is baar yahi likhunga

Need some Support
Ab bas itna hi kahunga ki aaplog pareshan nahi honge .. mujhe likes ya cmnts ki itni chahat hai ...kyuki page badhte hai ...phir update Dene ko man krta h ... comments karo yaar aur
phir likes to bante hai taaki ye pata chal sake ki meri story read ho rhi hai


Introduction

Ghar ka mukhiya - Thakur Shivraj Singh
Ye sabse chhote bete the apne bhaiyo me ...aur sabke chahete bhi ...

Ye ek aise shakhs hai jo Apne bhaiyo me sabse chhote hai ....lekin inka rutba unse kahi jyada hai . Kyuki ye bade hi samajhdaar aur shant aadmi hai ...shant se matlab hai ki bina soche samjhe ye koi faisla nahi lete ...bade hi gehre insaan hai

Patni -: Raghubiri devi

Bada Beta : thakur vikram singh
Patni - maala
Beta -ajay


majhla Beta : thakur raghuvir ,Police me hai
Patni - sushila
Beti : seema

Chhota beta : thakur Ravindra singh
Patni : sushma
Dusri patni :padma
Beta - rohit bada beta hai
Beta : avi hero hai
Beti : pooja

Sabse chhoti beti : thakur rajkumari
Pati : subhash thakur

Beti : reeta

2.Bade bhai : thakur baldev singh

Patni : roopwati ..

Naam ki tarah roopwan ...inhe ghamand hai apne roop ka ...kyuki inki shadi bhi thakur baldev k pita ne mang ker ki thi bahu k roop me ...

Baldev ka Bada beta : thakur omkaar singh

Patni : madhu

Beta -ajeet
beti -radha

,..


Baldev ka Chhota beta : thakur veer singh

Patni - bhanu

Beta - subham .(subbu )

...

Baldev ki..Beti : thakur megha singh
Pati : rajendra ... professor hai

Beta : viraat

Beti : shaalu



..
.

3.sabse.. bade bhai : thakur gyaan Singh

Inki Patni : thakur hema singh

Beta : thakur kuwar singh

Inko shadi ho chuki hai ...aur ye apne chacha ko bahut maante h .. pehelwani ka shauk rakhte hai .
Seedhe h ...bailbuddhi .

Kuwar ki Patni : surekha

Inhe koi beta nahi h


Gyan singh ki Beti : thakur prabha singh

Pati - suryapratap singh chief minister

Beti - laxmi



Other characters
Rakesh fauji ...iska parivaar nhi h
********""""""""


Billu ... avi ke mama ka ladka
Ramendra avi ka mama

Kashmiri avi ki mami
Jahnvi ..maama ki ladki

+++++++++++#######


Somendra ka parivaar
Biwi -mar chuki hai ..8ve bete ko janm dene ke baad

1. Beta -kallu chaudhary ...dead

Iski biwi ratna ...
Beti -naina
Beta -sunder

2 . Beta -kapil ...dead
Biwi -revti
Beta -rajat
Rajat ki biwi - shalini
Ek chhota beta hai abhi


3 . Beta -sadhu chaudhary
Biwi : jamuna
Beta : surjeet

Surjeet ki wife - jyoti
Inko ek beti hai

Sadhu ki Beti-- soni

4. Beta - rajendra chaudhary
Biwi - shanti
Beta - shravan chaudhary
Beti : raakhi

5.jagdish chaudhary
Biwi : suparna
Beta -aashu
Beta - rajneesh

6.munna chaudhary
Biwi - shashi
Beta - lakhan
Beti - Avni

7. Sambhu chaudhary

Biwi -minaxi
Beta - nitin

8- raajan chaudhary
Abhi tak kunwara tha ab nahi hai ...

*********************
Dilbaagh singh bhaan singh
Dono thakur bhai hai ..uttar Pradesh ke mirjapur se aaye hue ...
Bhaan ka beta jayveer aur manbeer
Patni -rajbala




+#+#+#+#++#&&&####-

District magistrate ki family
naam - mohanlaal singh
Biwi - prabha
beti - rajni
beti - juhi
beta -Ankit

Rajni ka mama - gajendra chauhan
Gajendra ka beta - gaurav , anil
Gajendra ki biwi - poonam
Beti - swati

__________&__________
Ritika mehra
Dhananjay mehra father
Doly mehra mother
Jeetu mehra brother of ritika
Wife ruby

_______&&&&&&&&&&&______

Jagannath singh (Raghubiri ka bhai ) wife dead
Iska beta bheem singh Thakur _-_iski patni -Somwati
Bheem ka beta bheeshma

Jagannath ka bhai - sahdev singh
Wife dead

Beta - sudesh thakur
Beta -aadesh thakur
Beti - jugni thakur

Suruaat achha kiye ho ab anth dekhna hai......

 

[Mr.x 2.0]

UPDATE -1

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Saal -2016

""Priya beta kaha ho ,,,

Priya : aai chachu ... homework kar rhi thi

Arvind : beta aao shaam ho chuki hai ,kahin ghumne chalte hai

priya : okay chachu

Arvind aur priya dono park me aake calony k bachcho k sath khelne lagte hai tab vaha per ek mr. Rakesh jo isi calony me rehte hai aur ek retired fouji hai Arvind ke pass aate hai ...ve bade hi ache aur nek insaan hai jo poori calony me ijjat rakhte hai

mr rakesh : aur beta kaise ho ...

Arvind : bas uncle ji sab thik h

mr rakesh : beta aapne aajtak ye nahi bataya ki aap yaha kyu rehte ho ... aapke yaha aane ka kya kaaran h ...aur ye bachchi aapko chacha kehti h matlab iske maa baap kaha h

Arvind: uncle kuch sawaal hame itna chot pahuchate h ki man krta hai sab barbaad kr de lekin sawaal poochne wala chala jaata hai usko afsos nhi hota ki usne kya kiya hai ...usne vo garm aagvus raakh me se kuredne ki kosis ki hai jo kabhi bujh nahi skti



Arvind ki baat sunke mr rakesh ko apni beijjati mehsoos hoti h kyuki aajtak kisine unse chillakar to kya najre milakar bhi baat nhi ki thi ...unka roab hi itna tha ki samne wale ko bas aawaj se dara de ..

per aaj unhone Arvind ki aankho me ek dehekti aag dekhi thi jise dekh kr unki aaj arvind se aankh milane ki kosis bhi nhi hui ...kyuki unki galti thi ..kisi anjaan se uska yun dard poochna achi baat h lekin samne wala jab jaanta ho ki vo kuch nahi kr skta tab galti hamari h ki hum na pooche ...ye duniya ek tamasha hai jisme koi chahe to kaam aaye varna sab kaam nikaal kr chale jaate h

Arvind ne aaj mr rakesh ko ek sabak de diya tha ...ki kisi ki life me tab Tak interfare na karo jabtak uske dost na ban jao kyuki har kisi ko dukh nahi batata koi ...jabtak bharosa na ho bhala koi kaise apna raaz batade ...

itne me priya bhaag kar aai aur Arvind ka hath pakad liya ...

priya : haaaaahhhhh ....aajto main bahut thak gai ...chalo chachu chalte hai ... Gharjake ab nahana hai .. garmi lag rhi h

Arvind aaj phirse kho gaya tha apni beeti yadon me ...kyuki koi bhi aake uske jakhm kured deta tha ....

raat ho chuki thi ...dono khana khake ab bistar me the ...

priya : chachu kal principal ne aapko bulaya h ..yaad se aa jana haan...nahi to sab majhpr haste h kyuki mummy papa to h nahi aap hi ho aur aap aate nhi

Arvind : beta main aa jaunga ...aur mummy papa nahi h to kya hua ..kya main apni beti ko pyar nhi krta

Priya : per chachu meri madam bolti h mere taraf se koi aata kyu nhi h ...is baar aapko aana hoga

Arvind : thik h chalo ab sote hai good night betu

priya : good night

Perents meeting ka din ...ye din arvind ko uske bachpan ki yaad me le gaya jaha per vo kabhi bada jyada khus raha krta tha ...

2008 -class -8th

""Mummy mera tiffin ...mujhe late ho rha hai ""

""Laai beta ....ye na roj ka ho gaya h ..ek tera bhai h jo kuch krta dharta nhi aur ek tu h jo bas apne me mast..mera to kisi ko kuch fikra nhi h """

Arvind: are mummy ....aap world ki best mom ho ...apne bachcho ko itna pyar krti ho ...saara din kaam krti rehti ho ..

Mom : bas kr beta ...aise hi tera baap ek din mujhe fasa liya ...ab main in chikni chupdi baato me nahi aane wali ...ye le tera tiffin aur dafa ho ...school se seedhe ghar aana ...aur koi sikayat nhi aani chahiye

Arvind : koshis karunga ..bye mom love u

Arvind k ghar se jaane ke baad uska bada bhai aankh masalta hua bahar aata h ...
Seedhiyo se utarta hua vo aalas me bhara hua tha ki uske uper muh per pani padta h ...

""""Eeeeeee.....ye kya kiya mom ...aap subah suabh hum dono bhaiyo k peeche kyu padi rehti ho ...ladaai aapki dad se h aur gussa aap hum per nikaalti ho """

Mom : beta ...time dekha h ...tera bhai kitna natkhat h lekin school k naam se aajtak bahana nhi kiya aur ek tu hai ki college me padhne laga h lekin abhi bhi aise nakhre krta h jaise chhota bachcha ho

Rohit : bachcha hi to hu main mom ...aapka bachcha


Mom : haa ..chal chal ...jaa nahake tayyar ho ...aur college k liye nikal ...din bhar insabke kaam me lage raho ...naukrani bana kr rakh diya h ...

Idhar arvind k school me aane k baad yaha ka mahol ekdum badal chuka tha ...kyuki senior aur arvind k class wale sab ladke arvind se chidhte jo the....vajah thi uska dimaag ...matlab vo ek allrounder tha ....kam umra me bhi vo athlete jaise tha ...isi vajah se senior pareshan rehte the ...

Arvind ko insab ki chinta nhi thi lekin uski najar baar baar idhar udhar hoke kisi ko dhoondh rhi thi ...ab ye ek kasbe ka school tha jaha per prayer hoti thi ...to line me khade the sab ...tab arvind ko vo dikhi ...jisko dekhte hi arvind apne aap me nahi rehta tha ...

Ye kam umra ka pyar kaho ya attraction ...lekin ye majboot hota h ..vo sunehere se aankho wali ...gore gore uske gaal ...reddish se hoth ...aur ghungharale se baal ...ek Qayamat hi thi vo ....

Arvind to itni kam umra me hi uska deewana ho gaya tha ...lekin baat krne se darta tha ..
Kuch vo baat krne isliye bhi nahi jaata tha kyuki ek to vo matlab soniya ...yahi naam tha uska ...
Vo hamesha ek group me rehti thi jisme 3 ladkiya aur 4 ladke hote the ...
Ve sab ladke arvind se jalte the kyuki Arvind ek hero tha ... allrounder hone ki vajah se kisi se darta bhi nhi tha ...ek sath 4 ko dhool chata chuka tha ....isi vajah se sab usko alag hi najariye se dekhte the ..

Uski sabse badi khasiyat ye bhi thi ki vo kisi se dhang se baat nhi krta tha ...hamesha apni masti me mast ...aur aaj bhi yahi usko le doobi ...

Hua ye ki jab ground me sab khade prayer me tab arvind ka dhyan bas soniya per tha ...isliye usko apne asspass kya ho rha hai ye pata nhi tha .. aisa aaj 3sri dafa ho rha tha .. soniya ko embarass feel hota h arvind ki is harakat ki vajah se ...kyuki pray khatam hui tab arvind per madam chillai ...lekin usko kuch sunai nhi de rha tha ...
Madam ne uski nigaah ka peecha kiya tab sabhi ne vahi dekha ...soniya ki najre jhuk gai .. tab rocky ko punishment k taur per ground me murga banke 4 chakkar lagane ka farman sunaya gaya ...

Arvind sabke jaane k baad ) haye ...jaalim duniya wale dekhne bhi nhi dete ...aakhir mera kasoor hi kya h ...

Ye kehke arvind chakkar lagakr nikal jaata hai class me ...aaj vaha per kuch khas nahi hua ... lekin jo main cheej thi vo tha school gate per wait krna ...vo bhi soniya ka ....

Soniya ek gareeb ghar ki ladki thi jo shayad apni saari icchaayon ko dil me dabaye baithi thi ...vo chup rehti thi ...uske man me na jaane kya kya chalta rehta tha ...

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Soniya k yaad aate hi na jaane arvind ko kya hua Vo utha aur ek almari me ek bottle nikaal kr sofe per baith gaya ...usko peene laga ...


Subah hui to priya arvind ko jaga rhi thi ...bottle khali sofe se niche padi thi. ..vo chhoti si bachchi ab itni samajhdar to thi ki log daru gum aur sukh me kis tarah peete h ...
Isliye kabhi usne arvind ko nahi roka ... kyuki ek vajah vo khud bhi thi jise vo kam umra me jaanti thi ...

Priya : avi chachu ....avi chachu ...utho na ...dekho mujhe school k liye late ho rha h ...madam maaregi ...

Avi : mmmm....kya beta ...sone de na ...

Priya : chachu uthte ho ya nahi ...varna main sofa geela kr dungi

Priya ke itna kehte hi vo samajh gaya ki priya ne agar mujhpe pani daala to sofa geela ho jayega . Aur jo apna time vo sofe per bitata h vo phir farsh per baithna padega jab tak sookhega nahi ..vo jaldi se utha

Avi : ha beta bolo ...kaha jaana h

Priya : aap phir se bhool gaye ...mere school me function h ...aur aapko aana h ..yadi aap nahi aaye to main school nahi jaungi

Avi : okay mera bachcha ...aap tayyar ho jao ..main nashta banata hu ...dono sath chalte h...

Dil kai marij sai start.. !!..... O oh

 

[Mr.x 2.0]

Update -2



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Subah ka nashta krke avi priya ko auto se aaj apne sath school ki taraf nikal pada ...subah ka waqt tha isliye sadak per itna traffic nahi tha ...bachche jyada dikhai pad rhe the ...

Priya : chachu vo dekho ...meri miss jaa rhi h ...yahi h jo mujhe maarti h

Main : kidhar beta

Priya : vo rhi scooty per ...

Avi dekhta h ek uski age ki ladki scooty per jaa rhi h ...helmet lagaye ...isse pehchan padti h ki vo ek strict ladki h ...jo rule jarur follow krti h kyuki khali sadak hone per bhi vo batti red hone per ruk gai ...hamara auto nikal gaya
Avi autowale se kehta h

"" Bhai aap kyu nahi ruke . signal green hone per chalna tha kisi din accident ho gaya to kya hoga ""

""Are babuji ...khali sadak h ...vaise b subah me log itna tej nahi chalate ...ab mujhe bhi subah me kamai hoti h isliye jaldi pahuchake sawari dusri jagah se leni h ""

Avi : lekin kisi din ho gaya by chance ?

"" Fikra not ...apna insurance nikala h apun "

Avi : unka kya jo aapke auto me jaate h ..ve to bechare mar jayenge ...vaise bhi insurance jaan bachane k liye nhi ...keh skte h lekin jaan se jyada nhi hota ...usme paise milte h ...sharir wk baar kharab hua to pehle jaisa nahi rehta mere bhai ...kisi apne ki maut ka dukh tab pata chalega jab kisi ko kho doge ...tab jaan ki keemat samajh aayegi

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" Babuji .. aage se dhyan rakhunga ...gareeb hu na .. jyada kamane k chakkar me bawra ho gaya tha ..aage se nahi hoga ""

Avi : ye hui na baat ..

Avi priya ko leke uske school pahuch jaata h jisme ve function ki tayyari dekh kr khus ho jaate h ...sab bachche hall me apne apne relative k sath baithe hue the ...avi bhi ek seat per baith jaata h ...tab mic per ek aadmi aake start krta hai ...to avi ki najar us madam pr padti h jo ek dress code k jaise sabhi madam ki tarah saree me hoti h ...

Avi : betu ...aapko miss k naam kya h

Priya : kyu chachu. Pasand aa gai kya ?

Avi : nahi nahi ...vo to main isliye pooch rha tha aaj mai iski class leni h . Meri pyari betu ko maarti jo hai

Priya : main sab samajhti hu .. acha chhodo ...mera dance ka program h ...jaana nahi yaha se ..varna dekh lena

Avi : okay


Priya ka dance dekhke avi ko bahut khusi hoti h ..aaj vo kitni pyari lag rhi thi ...dress change jo kr diya tha ....dekh kar lag rha tha jaise usko sab pyar krte hai. ..priya ne sabka dil jeeta hua h ...yaha tak ki jis madam ki vo buraai krti h vo strict jarur h lekin vo priya ko hi sabse jyada pyaar krti h ...

Priya ko jab award milta h ..tab priya thanks bolne k liye avi ko apne pass bulati h ...mic me bolte hue

Priya : mera naam priya h ...is duniya me mera maa baap bhai behen sirf ek hi h .. vo hai mere chachu . Jo mujhe sabse jyada pyaar krte h ...mujhe mere mummy papa ka nahi pata ... lekin mujhe kisi ko jarurat nhi h ...mera sabkuch mere chachu ... chachu pls come ...vo rahe mere chachu ...

Avi aaj khud ko sabse ameer mehsoos kr rha tha ...avi bina baap bane bhi aaj ek pita tha.aakhir priya hi to sabkuch thi jiske liye vo ghar chhod kar yaha aa gaya tha apne maa baap se door ..
Jab vo stage per jaa rha hota h

Priya : mere chachu ne kabhi bhi mujhe nahi daanta ...meri galtiyon ko hamesha chhupate rahe .. main 5th standard me hu ...mere sabkuch mere chachu h ...ek bachchi ko aur kya chahiye ...mujhe chalna mere chachu ne sikhaya hai ...inki aankho se hi mujhe duniya dekhni h ...

Itna kehke priya daudti hui avi k pass jaati h ...aur gale lag jaati h ...avi bhi usko gaud me utha leta h .. dono ro rahe the. ..tab principal aati h .. aur mic avi ko deti h ...

Avi : meri nanhi pari itni badi badi baate krne lagi hai mujhe pata hi nahi tha .. main aap sabse dhanyawad kehna chahunga ....main bas itna kehna chahta hu ki i love my angle

Avi aur priya ko dekh kar kuch log khud bhavuk ho chuke the ...lekin ek family jo bachcha gaud leke rakhi thi unhe priya bahut achi lagti h ...ve sochte h ek kunwara ladka iski parvarish kaise kr rha h .. ve arvind ke baare me kaafi poochtaach krte h tab unko ye to pata nahi chalta h ki avi kaha se aaya h lekin ye jarur pata chal jaata h arvind ek chhote se flat me rehta h kiraye per ...aur bachchi ko padha bhi rha h .. emotional bhi h lekin gareeb halat me h saari kamai isi me chali jaati h ...bachchi ki fee bhi pending h ...

Unko lagta h ve usko adopt kar skte h ...unki khud ko aulaad nahi hui thi .. kaafi ameer log the ...naam tha mr manik rao ...

Avi jab function khatam hota h tab priya ko hath pakad kr bahar aa raha hota h tab ek car school k bahar khadi hoti h ...

Mrs manik avi k pass aati h aur kehti hai
"" Hello beta ...arvind naam h aapka ...main mr manik rao ki patni ...manik rao and sons company ki malkin ...mujhe aapse baat krni thi ...bura na maane to hum kahi baith k baate kare ""

Avi : ji jarur

Manik rao ki car me baith k avi aur priya unke sath nikal chalte h ...tab bas mrs manik avi se uske baare me poochti h ki vo kya krta h .. kitna kamata h ...kaha rehta h ... kitna padha likha h ... jaldi hi ek aalishan ghar me entry hoti h ...

Mrs manik : haa tum baitho ...main change krke aati hu ...(kaka ..jara mehmano ko coffee dena )

Priya : chachu ...aakhir ye aunty hame yaha kyu leke aai ...kahi ye hamara khoon to nahi nikalkar bechne wali

Avi : chal nautanki ...

Priya : bach ke rehna chachu ...

Itne me avi aur priya ne coffee pi tab mrs manik aai aur baith gai pass me ...mr manik bhi sath the ab ..

Mr manik : hello young man ...

Avi : hello sir

Mr manik : beta bura mat manna ... lekin ..main kaise kahu ye baat. ..ajeeb lag raha h ...per hum chahte h tum priya ko hame dedo ... meri biwi maa nahi ban skti ..

Avi chaunk jaata h....kyuki vo kuch aur sochke aaya tha .. ki shayad ye koi kaam karwana chahta hoga lekin ye to usse uski vo keemti jaan maang rha tha jiske sahare avi abhi bhi sahi tha varna jaisi situation me se vo nikal kar aaya tha aise me log daru pike apni halat kharab kr lete h ...

Avi : ye aap kya keh rhe h sir ...

Mr manik : beta tum bilkul chinta mat karo ...main tumhe paise dunga ...job bhi dunga. . meri biwi ko na jaane kyu is pyari bachchi se lagaav ho gaya h ...

Avi : sir bas ...hum chalte h ...kaafi time ho gaya ...coffee k liye thanks ...

Mrs manik: beta ...main ek abhagan hu ...jise log baanjh kehte h . Humne ek beta gaud liya hua h .. agar ek beti aur ho tab hamara parivaar poora ho jayega ...

Avi : to madam ...anaath bachcho me se kyu nahi le aate aap ...priya meri beti h ...aur abhi iske sir per ek baap ka saaya h ...un bachcho ka sochiye jinke maa na baap ....vaha se kyu nahi laate aap ...

Mr manik : apni hadd me raho bachche ..tum jaante nahi kisse baat kr rhe ho

Avi : uncle yadi aapko pata chal gaya na ...ki main kaun hu ...to aap jis hadd ki baat kr rhe h yaha tak nahi jaate ...

Mr manik : akahirkaar kaun ho tum ...

Avi : ye baat aapke kaam ki nahi ...

Itna keh kar avi uthke bahar aa jaata h ...
Aur nikal jaata h ghar k liye ...

Idhar manik ek phone milata h ...jo pick kar liya jaata h
"" Haan manik rao bolo ...kya bataya ""

Manik : are rakesh ji ...ye ladka to bada hi dheeth h. ..mujeh laga ye ladki ko de dega.ya ..gusse me aake bata dega ki ye kaun h kaha se aaya h ...mujhe to vaise hi dar lag gaya tha ...jab isne kaha ki aapko pata chala main kaun hu .. are rakesh ji ...maine jindagi me pehli baar itni sard aawaj suni h ...dar meri nas nas me daud gaya ...aaj ke baad koi aisa kaam na dijiyega....

""Are yaar manik ...main fauji hu ..aajtak dushman se b nahi ghabraya ...lekin us din isne mujhe park me jab gussa dikhaya tab main bhi aisa ho gaya tha .. pata nhi kyu mujhe is ladke me intrest h. Jarur pata laga ker rahunga ki aakhir ye hai kaun aur aisa kya hua jo ye yaha h aur kisi ko iske baare me nahi pata. Chaliye rakhta hu ..bye""

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Priya : chachu ..vo uncle agar aapko paise denge tab aap mujhe unhe de doge kya ...

Priya ne ye baat bade hi pyar se dare hue lehje me poochi ..avi k chehre ko dono hatho me pakad kr ...

Avi : betu aapko kya lagta h ..main thode se paise k liye apni betu ko unhe de dunga

Priya : aur koi jyada paise de to ?

Avi : tu na ..bahut badmaas ho gai h ...beta dekh ...yaha kisi ko nahi pata h hum kaun h ...tu bhi mat batana ..sabko yahi lagna chahiye ki hum shuru se sath h ...kisi ko bhi hamari purani jindagi ke baare me pata nahi chalna chahiye ..varna tera mama ...kuch bhi kar skta h ...aur maine teri maa ko vachan diya h ki main uske parivaar ko jabtak kuch nahi kahunga jab tak vo apni hadd me rahe ...main apna bhai kho chuka hu ...ab main laasho ke dher per ghar nahi banana chahta ...

Priya : chup ho jao chachu ...deewaro k bhi kaan hote h ...main promise krti hu ..kabhi kisi ko nahi bataungi ...

Avi : okay beta .. chalo khana khate h ...tum nahake fresh ho jao tab tak main acha sa khana bana leta hu ...

Shaam k waqt aaj phir rakesh ,avi aur priya ko khelta dekh rha tha ..lekin uski himmat na hui ki vo inke pass bhi aaye ...
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Agli subah
Avi uthke fresh hua aur nashta tayyar krke priya ko uthaya ...priya khus hui ki aaj avi jaldi uth gaya h ...
Dono nashta kr rhe the ki ghanti baji ...

Priya : chachu dekho kaun h bahar

Avi : main nhi tu dekh jara ..

Priya : aalsi chachu ..

Priya ne jaake darwaja khola ...to dekha uski miss khadi h ...jise dekh vo shant ho gai ...chupchap ander aa gai bina kuch bole ...

Miss : are ...priya tum itni careless kaise ho sakti ho ...tumhari miss idhar tumse milne aai h ...aur tum bina kuch bole aise ghar k ander chali gai ...

Priya : vo kya h miss ...vo aaj humne ghumne ka plaan banaya h ...aur aap ke aa jane se hamara plan cancel ...

Miss : ohh acha ...koi baat nhi ...tum jao ghumne ..lekin tumhare uncle kidhar ..mujhe unse milne ka h

Priya : aapko dekh kr chhup gaye h miss

Miss ne priya ko ghoor k dekha aur dhoondhne lagi ...avi ko bathroom me chhipe hue kuch hi waqt hua tha ..
Miss : idhar kaahe chhipe ho ...bahar aao ...mereko baat krni h

Avi chupchap bahar aata h ...aise khada ho jaata h jaise priya ki nahi aaj avi ki class lagne wali h ...
Itna masoom shakal banake khada hua avi ab soch rha tha ki kaise madam se bacha jaaye ...

Miss : tumko sharm nahi aata h ...aise bachcha jaise harqat karte hue .. hum priya ka miss h aur tumse milne ko aaya h ...iska fee abhi baaki h ..kab bharega ..

Avi : vo miss is baar ghar ka rent diya h ...agli 15 ko de dunga main

Miss : haa ...dekhna jarur ..abhi main bhar deta h ...baad tum humko dena ..

Avi : vo kyu miss

Miss : priya padhai me acha h ..tumhare sath rahega to bigad jayega ...main iska fees bhar deta h tum pakka mereko de dena ..varna ..

Avi : ji miss ho jayega ...

Ye kehke miss bahar gai aur avi ne priya ko dekha jo table k niche thi ...usko pata tha ab avi gussa hoga ...aise hi ye dono jindagi jee rhe the hasi khusi ..kyuki past me jo tha ...usko jitna aam ab dikhai de rha h usse to kahi adhik dar aur dard chhupa hua h ...avi ek bhayankar aag dil me dabaye baitha h ...

Aaj avi ghumne k liye ek pass ke hi bachcho ka park tha usme gaya ..vaha per jhoole bhi the ...bachcho k khelne k liye kaafi cheeje thi....arvind priya ko leke sehej rehta tha lekin aaj vo uske sath bachcha bante hue khus ho rha tha ...bahut sare bachche vaha khel rhe the ...jinke beech priya bhi thi....avi usko bachcho k beech dekh rha tha sabhi idhar udhar bhaag ke khelne lage to avi ka dhyan uspe se hat gaya ...aur vo ek jagah aake bench per baith gaya ...

Aankhe moonde vo soch rha tha ki ye jindagi kab tak aise hi chalti rahegi ...ki tabhi kuch lady chillane lagi ...
"Are hamara chintu mil nahi raha hai ...jara dekho kidhar gaya. .."
" Are hamara subham bhi gayab h. Jara dekho ...mera bachcha kaha gaya abhi to yahi tha "

""Ye raju kidhar chala gaya ab ...aye chhutki ..dekh tera bhai kidhar gaya....abhi to yahi khel raha tha ...aane de isko ..bahut bigad gaya h jara us jhoole k pass dekh ""


Arvind bhi uthke dekhne lagta h aakhir ho kya rha h...bachche gaye kidhar ...lekin sabse pehle usko apni priya ko dekhna tha jo dikhai nhi de rhi thi. ..avi usko charo taraf dekh aaya tha ...parke khalabali mach gai thi ...avi ne aankhe band krke realize kiya ki thodi der pehle ...park me chips aur cold drink ,khaane peene ka chhota mota samaan bechne wale aaye the ...jinme 2 aadmi aur 4 aaurate thi ...yahi ek kaaran tha ...kyuki ve ab kahi bhi dikhai nahi pad rhe the ...

Avi vaha se bhaagta hua sadak par aaya ...park me ab jinke bachche gayab the ...ve log rone lage the ...police bhi aa gai thi lekin main cheej jo thi ki ab kya ho ...kyuki cemera jab check kiya gaya to pata chala cemera pehle taar kaata gaya h ...tab jaake bachche kidnap hue h ...

Avi pagalo ki tarah charo taraf dekh rha tha ...jo gussa usne 2 saalo ke ander dabaya hua tha aaj vo bahar aane k liye betaab tha ..kaaran aaj phir se vahi tha ....ki uski family per jo bhi aankh rakhega ...uska naam-o-nishan mita diya jayega .. avi ke pita kehte the ki sabse important family hai ...aaj usi family per kisine anjane me hath daal diya tha ..

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"Aye chup ...ro kya reli hai ...tereko ek baar ki samajh nahi aata kya ...aye isko sambhaal re ..ye kabse chacha chacha kar reli h ...dekh baaki bachcho jaise chup hoja ...varna tereko injection lagayegi apun ""

Priya : chhod de ... tum jaanti nahi ho mere chacha kitne khatarnaak h ...

""Kaun hai re tera chacha ...bitte bhar ki tu jubaan itti lambi hai teri .. kya badi toup hai tera chacha """

Priya : haan ...toup se bhi bada ...jab aayega na ... tum sabki narak jaane ki sawari tayyar milegi ...

""Aisa kya h tere chacha me ...bata jara kya naam h tere chacha ka ...don h kya koi ...akkha haidrabad me tere chache jaise saikdo pade h ...gali gali gundo se bhari padi h ...tera chacha kya ukhaad lega ."""


Priya : kabhi thakur arvind ka naam suna h kya ?


"" Aye arvind kaun h re. (apne aadmi se ) jara pooch to sahi ...kaniye ko phone laga to jara. ..kaun h ye ""

Kaniya : hello didi ...aaj kaise yaad kr liya apun ko ...

""Aye jara dekh to re ...ye thakur arvind kaun h ...""

Kaniya : diiddii ...akkha hariyana me jiska naam chalta h ..vo thakur arvind h ..tu kayko pooch reli h


"" Vo ek chhokri apun uthai h ...bol reli h uska chacha h koi thakur arvind """'


Kaniya sir per hath rakhke aur jeebh daanto tale dabake pehle sir ko jhatka aur phir bola

Kaniya : aye saali bhadwi ...kya apne sath mereko bhi marwane ka iraada banake aai kya ... jaldi phone kaatke mera number delete maar ...aai saali ..ek mufat ki salaah de rela hu ...us ladki ko jaha se laai h vaha chhodke aaja ...varna duniya me kahi b chhup jaana vo nahi chhodega tujhe ...

""Aye jabaan sambhaal apni ...tu jaanta h na kisse baat kr rha hai ...tere tukde tukde kar dungi ...aane de ...kaanta baai kachchi goliyan nahi kheli hai ...aise chhokre yun gayab kiye h maine ...aise hi nahi itna bada karobaar khada kiya h """

Kaaniya : dekh apun tereko samjharela tha bas ..baaki tu jaane ...haan mera number dhyan se delete kr diyo ...keh de rha hu ...varna sab raaj ugal dunga ...saali khud to maregi mujhe bhi marwayegi ..

Kanta baai : tu pehle mereko didi bolta tha aaj kya ho gya re terko ...aur tu darta kyu h ... apna chhota wala akkha haidrabad apun k kabje me hai ...aane de usko ..

Ye sunke kaaniya ne phone kaat diya. . aur sim band krke bag pack karke bhaag gaya .. uska yun gayab hona darshata tha ki thakur arvind kis dehsat ka naam hai ...isse pata chalta h ki kitna bada khel hua hoga . Ek kurukshetra tha jo kabhi laal hua tha ...aur ek ye hai ...dehsat kisi ki aisi hi nahi hoti ...jarur past (bhootkaal) ke panne me kuch bada chhipa hua h ..

Oh guru mast update diye ho.........

 

[urc4me]

Bhai kahani to adhuri hi hai. Avi abhi to Rajasthan pahuncha hi hai. aage badhaye. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[Bangla Choti Reader]

bohut sare characters hay is story pe

 

[Mr.x 2.0]

Update -3




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Avi sadak per yun bhatak raha tha ...aaj usko phir se vo banne per majboor kr diya tha is chhoti si ghatna ne ...avi taxi walo se poochta ki kisi bachchi ko dekha h ...usne mobile nikaala aur kai logo se poocha ...photo dikhake ...is ladki ko kahi dekha kya bhaisahab ...

Sab jagah nirasha hath lag rahi thi ...aur jaise jaise time badhta jaa rha tha ...vaise hi uska gussa badhta jaa rha tha ..
Raat ho chuki thi ...avi abhi bhi sadak per tha ...ek gali me mudte hi samne se aarhe vyakti per uski najar ek sharabi per padi jo purse cheen k bhaag rha tha ladkhadata hua. Uske peeche police lagi thi.

Vo ek khadi hui car k peeche chhip gaya ...police ki gaadi aa rhi thi ..jo avi k pass ruki ...

""Aye ..itni raat ko yaha kaha ghoom rha h ...tujhe dar nahi lagta ...haydrabaad h ye .. yaha raat ko kaat dete h logo ko ...vaise shareer to tera tagda lagta h ...kahi tu koi gang ka aadmi to nahi ...jara dekh to re ...munna gang ki list me se to nahi h ye koi ...vaise bhi aaj park me se phir ek baar bachche chori ho gaye ...pehle us park k nhi mile ..aaj isme bhi chori ho gaye ...saala bachcho ko ghar per kyu nahi rakhte ye log ""


Avi : sir meri beti priya ...(photo dikhake ) ye bhi aaj usi park me se gayab ho gai h ...main isi ko dhoondh rha hu ...sir plss meri priya ko mujhe dhoondh k de do ... meri jindagi h vo

Ye kehke avi ki aankho me aanshu aa gaye the ...laal aankho me aanshu dekhkar policewala bhi dar gaya ....vo gaadi se utra aur avi k kandhe per hath rakha ...

SI : dekho beta ...hum poori kosis kar rhe h ...bache khoye nahi h ... planning se chori hue h. ..tumne dhyan nahi diya .. cemera k wires kate hue the ..beta itni raat ko ghoomna khatre ki nishani h ...ye ilaaka thik nhi h ...tum ghar jao aur kal station aake report likha dena ek photo k sath ..thik h beta ""
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Ye kehke policewala chala gaya ...
Idhar avi ne us aadmi ko pakad liya tha lekin vo sharabi abhi sadak per hi khada avi ko jaate dekh rha tha .. phir jab usse raha nahi gaya . .to usne avi ko aawaj maari ...

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Police wala : ufff...shinde gaadi ghumake tapri per le ...ek chay aur ek cigarette ki talab ho rhi h yaar ...kya banda tha ...

Shinde : sahab aisa lag rha tha jaise toofan ek kamre me band ho ..agar darwaja khula to sab tabaah ho jayega ...

Police-SI : shinde ...maine apne poore carrier me bahut gunde badmaash dekhe h ...lekin ye aankhe mujhe jaani pehchani lagi ...ek aadmi tha thakur shivraj ...aisi aankhe maine uski dekhi thi ...us aadmi ki aawaj se sab kanp jaate the .. ek baar mantri ji k sath gaya tha hariyana ...tab dekha tha maine itna roab ...kisi ke chehre per janchta nahi tha. Jitna us shakhs ke chehre per tha. Khud chief minister khade ho gaye the jab vo gaadi se aaya tha. Aaj ye mila ...khoonkhar sher ...us se bhi jyada. Lekin alag. Chehra masoom ...aankho me aag ...aawaj me sard dhamki ...shinde ...aaj phir se yaad aa gaya vo din .CM bhi beech me na bol saka tha us din ..kyuki us aadmi ne jis tarah thandi aawaj me kaha tha to kisi ki himmat na hui thi ki kuch sawal krde ..chal tu gaadi tapri per laga .

Shinde : lekin sahab ...agar iski beti na mili to ?

Police -Si : ye aag laga dega is jile ko ...mujhe lag rha h isse mulakaat dobara hogi


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""" Aye bhai ...o pehelwan ...are rukja bhai tujhe hi keh rha hu """..

Avi dekhta hai vo sharabi usko bula raha h lekin avi uska dhanyawad nahi sunna chahta tha ...isliye aage badhta raha.

""Bhai mujhe pata h bachchi kaha milegi ""
Avi ne jaise hi ye suna ...vo bhaagke aaya uske pass aur uske hath pakad liye ...jaise jindagi kurabaan kar dega aaj vo ...sharabi bhi dekh kar ek baar rone jaisa ho gaya .

Avi : bhaiyya. . mera sabkuch lelo ..lekin meri bachchi ko mujhe dilado .....

"" Bhaiyya yaha ek aadmi h madan pal ...vo bachcho ki shareer k ang nikaal kr bechta h. Jiska market me acha daam milta h aisa suna h .. vo kisi munna ka aadmi h .. aur bachcho ko jaha rakha jaata h vo hai kanta bai ka adda ...bhai jaldi karo. .varna bachchi ki laash bhi nahi milegi ""


Avi ne ek hath se pakad kar usko dharti se upar utha diya . Aur phir jo aawaj sharabi ne suni ..uska peshab nikal gaya ...

""Aagggaarrrrr mmeeerriiii bbbeeetttiii kkkoooo kkkuucchhhh bbbhhii hhhuuuaa ...iiiss sseehhheerr kkooo jjallaaa kkkaarrrr rrraakkhhh kkkaarrr ddduunnngggaaaaa""


Daant bheench kar avi ne jab ye baat kahi to sharabi ka nasha furr ho gaya aur uski patloon geeli ho gai ...usko bhi aaj pata chal gaya tha ki usne aaj jo sach bataya h ab is seher ki aabohawa badal jayegi ...

Avi : ye munna kaha milega

Sharabi darte hue "": bhaiiya mujhee naa paata. Naam pata the bas ...mujhe chhod do ..main gareeb aadmi hu


Avi ne usko jeb se 2000 rs thama diye nikaal kr. . aur nikal pada aaj phir kisi ko tabaah karne....
Avi ne mobile nikaal kar ek number dial kiya ..aur call uthate hi na hi na hello seedha ek naam

"""Billu ...

Billu aawaj sunte hi hadbada kr phone ko kaske pakad liya aur jaldi se khusi se bola

Billu : chhote bhaiiya ...kaha ho aap .. sab aapko dhoondh rhe h bhaiiyyya

Avi : billu ... haydrabaad me munna ka AtoZ pata chahiye abhi k abhi ...

Billu : abhi lijiye bhaiyya

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Billu idhar jaldi me tha ...aur lag gaya computer per .. billu ek aisa banda tha jo police ke chhodo kahi ka bhi network hack krle bas aajtak kabhi army aur raw ka nhi kiya ...lekin jab karta tha jab usko jarurat hoti thi ...aur usne turant search kar liya ...phir ek call milai aur usse thodi poochtaach ki ...phir se call lagai avi ko

Billu : bhaiyya ... haydrabaad k ghatkesar side me unka adda h ...ve illegal kaam krte h ...unhe chhote bachcho ka bone marrow chahiye hota h ..jisse chot lage -apahij aadmi ko thik kiya jaa sake ..kisi aadmi ko agar koi ang kharab ho jaye kaam karna band kar de to jaldi thik krne ka upaay h ye. Ye baccho ko kidnap karte h aur unke sath ...bhai bahut time se inka dhandha chal rha h ye ...isme list aapko send kr rha hu .

Avi k liye itni jankari kaafi thi ...avi ne sadak per jaake ek car ko aate hue roka aur usko apna card dikhaya. ..jisko deke avi ne car usse leli. Aadmi ne car isliye de di kyuki banda vapis krne ki baat kr rha h varna log cheen k le jaate h aur pata nahi chalta ..
Avi me daudadi car ghatkesar ki taraf. ..is jagah jaane me avi ko 2 ghante lage sirf ...

Jeevan me aisa kabhi hua h jab samne sab bandook liye khade ho aur ek aadmi nihattha unse ladne chala jaaye ... namumkin sa lagta h lekin ye kai baar ho chuka h .. powerfull people come from powerful places ...

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Kanta : aye .. munna aa gaya h ...dekh aajto bilkul vaisa hi maal mila jaisa humko chahiye tha. Ye sab **-** umra k bachche h ...inme se kaafi acha maal milega kai ka ...

Munna : waah behna ...aaj to tanne kamal kr diya ...ye hi to chahiye tha .. chalo jija kaha h

Kanta : aata hi hoga ...

Tabhi madanpal ki entry hoti h . Jo shareer per doctor jaisa libaas pehne ander aata h ...hath me glubs pehnta hua ...

Madanpal : are munna .. chal bata kisse shuru karu ...

Munna : are jija ...jo man kare usse kardo .. aapka to man lage h bachcho ki jaan lene me

Kaanta : vo chhori ko chhodke karna .. vo keh rhi thi ki uska chacha koi bada top hai . ..dekhte h isko bacha paata h ya nahi ...

Munna : are behna kiski majaal jo hamare adde per aaye ...100 log hai yaha jinke hatho me maine pichle mahine hi machingun di h ... trigger dabate raho bas ...dushman ke chithde uda deti h

Munna aur madan pal jaane lagte h haste hue. ..kaanta bhi haste hue kehti hai

Kanta : bol rhi thi koi thakur hai ...thakur arvind

Munna ki to gaand fat gai sunte hi .madan pal abhi bhi has raha tha

Madanpal : tujhe kya hua ..

Munna : kaa boli didi ...jara ek baar aur batana

Kaanta ki hasi ruk gai thi. Kyuki munna k chehre per itne me hi paseene ki boonde saaf dekhi jaa skti thi ..

Kaanta :: tthha thhaakur

Munna : are bata na jijji

Kaanta : thakur arvind singh

Munna thook gatakate hue ...kanta ki taraf dekha aur phir bola
"""Jijji ...sach me thakur arvind hai kya ??""


Munna ko jaise abhi bhi yakeen nahi aa rha tha ...usko is naam se rubaroo karane wali aaj uski behen usko chita per leti hui dikh rhi thi . Apni laash bhi kisi kone me padi dikh rahi thi ... apne jija k to tukde dikhai de rhe the ...jiski taraf vo dekhta usi ka mara hua chehra usko dikhne laga tha. ..munna yaha per ek aisa shakhs tha jo pehle is arvind naam ki aandhi se bach gaya tha . Usko pata tha ki maut ka manjar apni aankho se kaisa lagta h

Munna : jijje bhaag ...jaan bachake bhaagle ...vo raste me hoga ...uska luck hi hai jo aajtak uske naam k charche hote h ... Maut bhi uska raasta chhod deti h jaise uski gulaam ho ...bhaagle jijja

Madanpal ko to yahi samajh nahi aa rha tha ki aakhir munna ki itni fati kyu hai ye naam sunkar ...vo kabhi kaanta ko dekhta jo munna ko dekh rhi thi. Kabhi munna ko dekhta . Ki aakhir itne saal se banaya hua ye samrajya ...aur ek naam ki vajah se uska saala usko bhaagne ko bol rha h ...aakhir hai kya vo. ..
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Itne me bahar goliyan chalne ki aawaj aati h jisse munna ki dhadkan jo badhi hui thi aue bhi tej ho jaati h. ..
Munna peeche k gate se bhaagne lagta hai tab madanpal uska hath pakad leta h ...

Madanpal : abe kidhar jaa rha h tu . Aa gaya h to dekh lenge. . madanpal kasai hu main ...

Munna : abe hath chhod saale ...tu kasai h to vo tera baap h ...jab tera number aayega tab pata chal jayega ...pant me moot dega tu ...

Munna hath chhudake bhaag liya vaha se ...

Idhar avi jab car se utarta hai to sher ki chaal chalte hue vo band padi factory ke gate per jaata h jaha per pehle se kuch log khade the.

"" Aye kidhar jaa rha hai ...yahi ruk ander kaha ghus raha hai """

Avi ne bas usko ghoora ...jawab nahi diya tab usne
Avi ka girebaan pakad liya ...aur dhakka dene k liye jor lagaya tha ki ek mukka pet me pada ...vo bhi is tarah ka ki aadmi mare nahi ...bas pet ka system hil jaaye .. hua bhi aisa hi ...
Avi ne hath ko mukka ko shape me karke jab uske pet tak le gaya tab mukke ko ghuma diya ...aur pet me maara ...pet me lagke mukka jab ghumavdaar hua tab us admi ko gaand faad dard hua lekin jubaan to jaise lock ho gai thi .. vo ulta hi gir gaya aur pade pade ultiyan karne laga. ..

Dusre ne turant uspe gun taan di ...avi ne turant uski gun ki nali pakad kar is tarah rotate hua jaise kisi aadmi ko bandook deke nishana lagana sikhate h ...ek second me avi us aadmi k peeche tha....aur trigger per ungliyan avi ki thi ..vo aadmi to bas bandook ka vajan sambhale hua tha ...
Avi ne nishana lagate hue jitne aadmi dikhe sabke uper goliyan chalai ...jisse ve sab vahi maare gaye ...
Ander jab firing ki aawaj gai to sab chaukanne ho gaye ..aur apni apni jagah chhipne lage war krne k liye ...
Avi ne abhi ander kadam nahi rakha tha ...goliyan bhi khatam ho gai thi ...ab filmy style to tha lekin ye nahi ki hero chutiya bane ...avi ne us aadmi ki gardan marod kr usko maar daala ...aur niche se ek mare hue aadmi ki load AK-56 uthai ..avi hairan to hua ki aisi bandooke yaha per aai kaise ... lekin jo itna bada racket chala skte h vo bandook rakhe isme Shaq karne jaisi baat nahi ...

Ak-56 utha kar avi ne sabse pehle ek patthar utha ke darwaje per maara to kuch log deewar ke peeche se nikal ke aaye aur darwaje per fire krne lage. Unhe kaha pata tha ki avi to darwaje ki jagah dusri side khada h ek jeep k uper ...jaise hi ve bahar aaye avi ne unpe firing ki ...ek ek me hi ve maare gaye. Kyuki nishanebaaji dada se seekhi thi avi ne ...

Unke maare jaane k baad kuch log strategy banane lage ...aur ishare se idhar udhar commando style me jaane lage ...lekin avi to avi tha ...ander ek gadi khadi dikhi .. jiske peeche 2 admi chhupe the ...avi ne uske tel k tank per goli maari ...dusri goli chalte hi gaadi hawa me udd gai ... jiski vajah se sabka dhyan us taraf gaya ...avi ne iska fayda uthaya aur ander bhaagke gaya ...unke beech jaake khada ho gaya ... deewar k peeche kareeb 20+ log the ...jo gaadi ko dekh rhe the ...jo ab niche gir chuki thi .. lekin jaise hi avi ne khaanskar bataya ki main yaha hu ...
Sabne peeche dekha aur phir vaha goliyan chalne lagi ...50+ admiyo ka aise bichauna sa bichhaya jaise sab so gaye ho ...ek dusre ke uper ...koi bhid dekhe to ye na kahe ki ye sab mar chuke hai ...

Ab vaha per kaafi log bache hue the jo ander se aa rhe the ....aur kaanta baai order de rhi thi ...ki jao maardo saale ko ...usko ye nahi pata tha ki vo akela aaya hai ...usko lag rha tha jaise kaafi aadmi aaye honge ...kaanta ne priya ko uthake apne pass rakkha aur jabardasti pakda hua tha .. kyuki agar avi yaha tak aata h to vo iske jariye usko maar skti h . Sabhi villain aisa hi to karte hai ...

Idhar avi ab ground se factory me jaa chuka tha ...jaha per machines thi .. unke peeche log dubke hue the .. avi jaise hi gate per aaya ek goli uske kandhe ko chhu ke nikal gai .. vo kooda ek taraf machine k peeche ...aur gun ko set krke usne fire shuru ki ...tab rukne k baad sab shant the to usne idea lagaya aur dusri machine k pass jaane k liye ek cheej uthake dusri taraf fenki aur jaise hi unka dhyan us taraf gaya avi ne teji se ek aadmi k peeche jaake baith gaya. Jab shant hua mahol tab us aadmi ko mehsoos hua ki jaise koi baitha h uske peeche ....


Usne ghoom kr dekha hi tha ki avi ne uski gardan tod di .. uski pant me ek chaku laga hua tha jo avi ne nikaal liya ...aur AK56 ko chalaya dobara tab ve log confuse the ...kyuki unke pass hathiyar achi quality k the lekin the to ve log local gunde hi ...
Isliye avi ko jyada kuch nahi krna pada ....jeb se chillar(sikke) nikaal kr bahar ki taraf fenke ...jissw unlogo ka dhyan un aawaj krte sikko ki taraf gaya avi ne machine ki peeche ki taraf daud laga di .. aur sabko maar daala ek side me ...

Ab dusri side ka number tha ...jisse koi aawaj nahi aa rhi thi ... factory me kahin paani ki boond gir rahi thi ...jiski aawaj saaf sunai pad rhi thi ki avi ne jalti hui light ko nishana banaya aur andhera kar diya ..ab sab jagah andhera ho chuka tha un logo ki fat rahi thi ...kahi teji se goli chalti to kahi aawaj aati "mar gaya ...aaaahhhhh"".

Sablog aaj jaise ek dehsat me aa chuke the ...kyuki avi ne chaku se unke pet ko is tarah kaata tha ki ve katne k 10 minute tak jinda reh sake ...unki pet ki uper ki chamdi ko nikaala tha bas ...uske 2 hisse krne k baad usme se maans ki rassiyan alag dikhai pad rhi thi ...kisi kisi ka to dil bhi alag hi dikhai pad rha tha dhadakta hua .....

Itni darindagi dikhati thi ki is bande ne kya kuch saha hoga jo itna nirdayi ban gaya tha ye ....ab us side wale bande bhi mar chuke the ...is 1 ghante ke ander kareeb 80+ log mar chuke the ... Abhi bhi baaki the ...lekin 20-25 hi bache the ...madanpal ek aisi jagah chhupa hua tha jaha per use koi dekh nahi paata lekin mehsoos kr skta tha. Aur mehsoos krne ki kala har kisi k pass nahi hoti ...

Factory k baad rooms start hote h jaha per kabhi file work hota tha lekin aaj k time vaha per kachra aur gundo ke rehne ki vajah se ye jagah kharab padi thi ... Purani ho chuki jagah per kuch log chipe hue the jinke hatho me lohe ki rod thi ...ve deewar k peeche chipe hue the ..
Avi ko mehsoos ho rha tha ki yaha per koi hai ...kyuki har kisi ke pass koi na koi gun jarur hota h lekin avi allrounder tha ...usko sans ki aawaj bhi saaf sunai de rhi thi us jagah. Kyuki shant mahol tha ...

Avi dheere dheere aage badh rha tha jaise hi vaha pahucha ek kadam rakhke peeche hat gaya aur samne wale ne jaise waar kiya us rod ko uper se niche maarne ki tarah jisse rod sir me lage ....vo usi k ghutno me lagi ...jiski vajah se vo jhuka ...per itne me hi avi me chaku uske sir me ghonp diya ...dusra samne aaya ...usne left se right side ko hath ghumaya ...avi ne jhuk k uski jaangh me chaku maara ...aur nikaal kar uske thodi (chin) k niche se uper ki taraf ghusa diya ...

Ab agla banda aaya ...aur usne pehle hi ye manjar dekhke moot diya tha ...lekin vo hamla krne aaya lekin chillata hua ...aur uska bhi vahi haal hua ...ab samne 6 bande khade the ...jinme se avi itni speed se nikla jaise ek second me ho jaata h sabb...
Ve mundi ghuma bhi nahi ...bas rodes chhodke apna gala pakad liye ...kyuki 6 ke 6 bande is tarah khade the jaise avi ne slow motion me pehle right wale ki gardan per chaku fera jaise halaal kr dete h. ..phir left phir right ...aise hi 6 bande ...
Normal situation aisi thi ki ve gala pakad ke niche gir gaye aur tadap kar mar gaye ...

Is saare manjar ko madanpal chhupkar dekh rha tha ...uska roya royan kaanp rha tha .. kanta bhai ab khule me khadi thi ...avi us gali type se last k kamre k gate jaise jagah per khada tha ...aur yaha per lohe ki ek library jaise saman rakhne ki hoti h vo thi ...yahi madanpal khada tha ...jiske hath me operation karne wala blade tha ....

Avi ne dekha kaanta priya ke gale per chaku jaisa ek hathiyar lagaye khadi h jo south me famous hathiyar h ...hansiya jaisa ...

Avi : kaantttaaa....chhoddd dddee isskoo ...


Kaanta : aye ..aye ...tu door rehna samjha kya ...main maar degi isko ...mai maar degi ...mereko jaane de ...sabko leja tu ..varna main maar degi ..

Itne me madanpal ne jaise hi vo opr. blade avi ko kamar se gardan me marna chaha vaise hi ek aadmi avi ko maarne k liye chupchap uske peeche aaya .. jiska avi ko pata tha ...aur madanpal ko bhi ...madanpal ne chaku us aadmi ki gardan me ghusaya ...aur avi ne madanpal k pet me ...aur dusre hath se madanpal ko uthake dharti per litaya ..

Aur chaku uske uper tak kheech kr nikaal diya .. nichle jabde ko chhute hue chaku bahar aaya. . saari aant aur chhati ki pasliyan kat chuki thi ...jaise inka experience tha avi ko ...
Madanpal bas tadapta raha ....

""" Bahut shauk tha na ...aise pet faadkar nikaalne ka tujhe . Jinda bachcho ka operation karne ka ...aaj tu tadap mehsoos kar ..."" ..
Avi ne madanpal ki dobara se khal jo ukhad gai thi usko band kr diya taaki madanpal is dard ko aur jyada der tak mehsoos kar sake ...

Baaki bachche cheekh rahe the ...aur jab unhone kaanta ki cheekh suni ...unhone kuch nhi dekha tha ...kyuki ve dusri side band the ...ek pinjare me ...lekin idhar priya ki aankh me se aanshu nikal rahe the ...aur aankhe band thi .. kaanta bhi muh ek side krke rone lagi thi ...lekin jaise hi kaanta ne hansiya priya ki gardan per ghumana chaha ...chaku uske gale k aar paar ho gaya ..

""Aakkkkkkk""

Ye aawaj hui aur kaanta k hath pair dheele ho gaye ...

******"""You can win the battle with someone strong But you can never win the battle with someone lucky """******


Priya ko gaud me uthaya aur usko jo dar laga tha kyuki bhale hi avi uska chacha ho lekin thi to vo ek bachchi hi ...madan pal abhi bhi tadap raha tha ...lekin hil nahi paa rha tha ...

Baaki bachcho ko leke avi us jagah se bahar aa gaya aur sabko usi park k pass le gaya ...jaha per raat ko bhi kuch log baithe ro rhe the ...sab bachche apne apne mummy papa k pass chale gaye ...aur jab unlogo ne poocha ki aap kaha the mere bachche to sab bachcho ne us taraf ungli kar di ...

Sunsaan sadak per ek aadmi ek bachcho ko kande se lagaye jaa rha h jiski sirf peeth un logo ko dikhai pad rhi thi .....

Nice bro bahut achaa tha..,......... 🕵

 

[Mr.x 2.0]

Update -4






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Avi : priya beta ...chalo jaldi apna samaan bandho ...mujhe us aadmi se apna card bhi lena h

Priya : chachu ab kaha jayenge hum

Avi : beta ab koi aisi jagah jayenge jaha per shanti se reh sake

Priya : lekin chachu sab jagah aise log rehte h ...kyu na hum tau ji ke pass chalein

Avi : nahi beta . Tumhari dadi ko nahi pasand ... isliye main nahi jaa skta ...maa jis din mujhe muaf kr dengi us din main vaha per chala jaunga

Priya : lekin chacha dadi aisi kyu h ...vo to aapko sabse jyada pyar krti thi ?

Avi : beta aapki dadi aapko aur mujhe dono ko pasand nahi karti ...kya kar sakte h ...vaise bhi main apni betu k sath khus hu

Priya : aap rajni chachi se shadi krke unhe bhi le aao phir ...

Avi : ab uske baare me baat mat krna ...main sirf dard de skta hu ...main manhoos hu na ...jaha bhi jaata hu vahi log dar se jeete h ...

Priya : okay ab main kabhi rajni ka naam nhi lungi ..
..ooops .aap ye daadhi katwalo ...pehle hero jaise lagte the. Ab dekho kaise khatarnaak janwar jaise lagte ho ..

Avi : hahahah ...chalo jaldi kahin police yaha na aa jaye .. us aadmi k ghar chalte h jiski car humne li thi

Priya : uske ghar ka kaise pata hoga chachu ...

Avi : uski car ke pepars se ...chalo ab detective mat bano ...

Dono ne jo saman lena tha vo liya aur baaki jo saboot the vo mita diye ...Avi priya ko leke nikal pada ...ek ghar me pahucha aur usko uski car vapis krke samajhaya ki us raat ko bhool jaye ...agar koi kahe to bol dena main usko nahi jaanta ...

Aur avi apna Identity card leke chal pada priya ko leke ek nayi jagah ...abhi vo train ka wait kr rha tha ki vaha per mr rakesh aa gaye ...

Rakesh : hello young boy

Avi : aap yaha kya kar rhe h ...kyu aap mere bare me janna chahte h

Rakesh : itna bada kaand krne wale ko main bhala kaise chhod skta hu

Avi : aapko kaise pata

Rakesh : daro mat fauji hu ...vo log galat the lekin aaj desh bhar me sirf usi ka jikra hai ...sab dhoondh rahe h ki ye kaam aakhir kisne kiya ...itni berehmi se maar kaise diya tumne un logo ko ...

Avi : aapko kya lena dena h ...

Rakesh : mujhe tumhari madad chahiye ...

Avi : main anjan aadmiyo se baat nahi krta ..jaiye yaha se ..

Rakesh : to main batadu ki tum hi vo ho jisne in bachcho ki jaan bachai h ...vaise ek baat batadu ...raat jin logo ko tumne maara h unme 6 aurat thi . Jo pakdi gai h ...ve ek kamre me band thi ...police ne unko bhi maar dala ...ye bhi mujhe pata h ...

Avi : to aap kyu mera sir kha rahe h ...

Rakesh : beta ...tumhari aankho me maine kuch dekha h ...main sirf tumhari madad krna chahta hu

Avi : aap abhi khud mujhse madad mang rhe the ...meri madad kya karenge ...

Rakesh : hahaha ...yahi madad to chahiye thi ki tum mujhse kuch mango ...

Avi : ab mujhe aap gussa dila rahe h

Rakesh : army join karoge

Avi : nahi ... dhanyawad ...aur aap jo soch rhe h main nahi batane wala ...pls aap mera peecha chhod dijiye ...siway dard k kuch hasil nhi hoga. ..

Rakesh : mujhe janna h ...phir bhi ....main hamesha jindagi bas ghar aur border per raha hu ...ab retired hu to life me kuch hai nahi karne ko ...maine apna jawan beta khoya h ... ...tumhe lagta hoga main ab bhi tumse majaak kr rha hu ...ye dekho mere bete ki photo ...chahe to pata kar skte ho ...mujhe tumhare ander ek khus insaan dikhai deta h ...jisko tum duniya se chhipaye baithe ho ...

Avi chup ho jaata h ...kyuki usko apne baap ki yaad aati h ki ek uska baap tha jo hamesha apni jimmedaari se bhaagta raha ...aur ek ye hai jo marne k baad bhi apne bete k liye ro rha hai ...
Avi sochta hai ki is insaan ko kyu dard du ...phir ek kosis karta h ...usko rote hue fauji ko dekhke ...kyuki hamare desh me kya sab desho me faujiyo ki itni ijjat ki jaati h ...avi usko ab aur rulana nahi chahta tha ...

Avi : aap ghar jaiye uncle ...mere bare me jaankar khusi nahi hogi. ..

Rakesh : beta main dard se is tarah juda hua hu ...jis tarah tum ho ...maine apne parivaar ko khoya hai ....naksali hamle me mera parivaar kho gaya ...mere bete ki laash k alawa mujhe kuch nahi mila ...aur tum kehte ho ki mujhe dukhi nahi karna chahte ...kya mere dard se bhi bada h tumhara dard ...

Avi ab apni yadon ka pitaara kholna chahta tha ...jee bharke rona chahta tha. Isliye vo kehta hai ...chaliye ...aapko main batata hu ki main kaun hu ...

Avi rakesh aur priya ko leke train me baith jaata h ...
Rakesh bhi avi ka peecha kar rha tha apne ghar ka taala lagake bas avi ke peeche rehta tha ..usko avi ke baare me pata nhi kya dilchaspi hui thi ...poori raat ka kand usne apni aankho se dekha tha. Bas jaha light band hui thi vo nahi dekh paaya ..lekin laashein bhi dekhi thi .. aur baad me un aurato ko maarne wala bhi rakesh tha avi ne chhod di thi ya usse bach gai thi ...kyuki unko is kaam ki aadat lag gai thi .. jis vajah se yaha se jaane ke baad ve bahar bhi yahi karti ...isliye rakesh ne maut k ghaat utaar diya unhe bhi ...fauji tha to daya nahi aati thi lekin nirdayi nahi tha ...jisko maut di ..jhatke se dedi ...tadpa ke nahi maara ...


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Billu : ajeet bhaiyya ...avi bhai haydrabaad me hai ..unka phone aaya tha ...jara news channal lagake dekho ...

Ajeet news channal lagake dekhta hai ...jisme live telecast chal raha tha ...news anchor bawre hue pade the ...""dekhiye kitna bhayank manjar hai yaha ka ...laashe gajar muli ki tarah kaat di gai hai. Sochiye jab inhe maara gaya hoga tab kitna marmik drishya raha hoga ..."""

Ajeet : billu ...ye kaam apna avi hi kar skta hai ...dekha tha maine ek baar usko ...uski najar aur uska hath. ...jab chalta tha khoon hi khoon ...chalo ...hame avi ko laana hoga ...dadaji ne to bistar hi pakad liya hai jabse vo gaya hai ...pata nhi kyu chachi aur daadi ne usko ghar se nikaal diya ...bhala isme avi ki kya galti ...vo to bas badla le rha tha ... apne bhai ki madad kr rha tha ... akhir Rohit bhaiiya ne galti hi kya ki thi ...dusri caste me pyar krna gunaah to nahi ...ye samaaj aur iske kanoon ...chal billu ...subbu aur ajay ko bhi bulala .. chalte hai charo ...
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Inki to gaadi nikal padi ... haydrabaad ke liye. Jabki avi train me baith kar jaa rha tha. ..delhi ke liye. Usne soch liya tha ...ab vo kaashi jayega....jaha par usko shanti mil sake ...Mr rakesh bhi utaawle ho rhe the ....

Rakesh : arvind ab to batado ...safar bhi lamba hai ab kyu na baat shuru ki jaaye .. aise me safar bhi kat jayega

Priya : chachu aap inko batao ...main so jaati hu ...

Rakesh : dekha bachchi samajhdaar hai ...

Avi : haan ...ye samjhdaar hai ...kyuki usko pata hai jo bhi hua hai usme kahi na kahin iska bhi utna role hai jitna mera ...

Rakesh : phir to bachchi ko sone do ...tab tak main wait krta hu ...

*****""""*****
Saal 1980
( Samay ke sath umra badhegi ... confuse mat hona .. shuru se likh rha hu ...jab beto ki shadi hui thi .. avi k bachpan bhi dikhega. Lekin story ka focus kaafi logo per rahega )

Ghar ka mukhiya (sabse chhota )- thakur Shivraj singh...Age-44

Ye ek aise shakhs hai jo Apne bhaiyo me sabse chhote hai ....lekin inka rutba unse kahi jyada hai . Kyuki ye bade hi samajhdaar aur shant aadmi hai ...shant se matlab hai ki bina soche samjhe ye koi faisla nahi lete ...bade hi gehre insaan hai ...inko jab galat hota dikhta hai tab ye kisi apne ko bhi nahi bakhstey .. kyuki inke liye apni maan maryada sabse jaruri hai ...

Patni -: Raghubiri devi :Age :42

ye bhi thakur shivraj se kam nahi hai ...ye inki patni hai. Aur vaisa hi rasookh hai .. thakur Shivraj aajtak inke samne kabhi bhi jyada nahi bolte ...kyuki ve inko bada pyar krte hai . Ye bhi unke sukh dukh me hamesha unki dhaal ki tarah rahi hai ....aur nidar to itni ki agar koi inki baat ko kaat de to usko taare dikhane me der nahi karti ...inko bhi jaise vardaan mila hai ...sahi aur galat pehchanne ka ...jiski vajah se inka samman bahut tha . Aur patni to thi hi ye thakur shivraj ki ...

Bada beta : thakur vikram singh ,Age- 25

Ye ghar me sabse bada hai ...aur seedha hai ... apney pita ki bahut ijjat krte hai. Aur unhi ke sath rehte hai. Chahete jo hai. .. kyuki inhe apne pita ke jaisa hi banna hai ...

majhla Beta : thakur raghuvir ,Age-23

Ye naam inko maa se mila hai ...aur ye mastmaula hai ...shareer banane ka shauk hai ...inhe police me jaana h ...kyuki ye apne ek mama se prabhavit rahe hai .. ve ek dushman ki goli se mar gaye the ...jinki vajah se inhe bhi kanoon ki vardi pehnni hai ...

Chhota beta : thakur Ravindra singh ,Age -21

Ye nikamma hai is ghar ka ...aur hamesha ghar se bahar rehta h. ..nasha nhi krta hai ...bas iska ghar me man nahi lagta. . inki maa inhe laad pyaar itna karti hai jiski vajah se ye pitaji ki maar se bach jaate hai. Lekin Raghubiri ji jab isko daant padti h to inka paksh nahi leti . Kyuki unko pata hai ab ye jawan ho chuka hai .. lekin inhe apne gharwale jaise ache nahi lagte ... apni man marji krte h . Apni jimmedaari se bhaagte h hamesha ...

Ye teeno abhi kunware hai ...

Sabse chhoti beti : thakur rajkumari ,Age - 18

Ye apne bhaiyo ki chaheti h ... lekin ravindra k sath ladti rehti hai kyuki vo hamesha isko pareshan karta hai . .bholi hai ...jyada batcheet nahi karti.... apne aap me rehne wali hai ...


Bade bhai: thakur baldev singh Age-50

Naam ki tarah bal bahut h sareer me ...lekin swabhav bahut hi alag ...bas apni mauj me rehte h. Aur hamesha apni patni ki sunte h jo thodi teekhi h. Lekin achi h ...ye bas apne kaam se kaam rakhte h ..lekin parivaar ke liye hamesha tayyar. . aur sabse badi baat jab baat parivaar per aati h tab inka gussa itna hota h ki shivraj bhi darte hai. Aisa kabhi kabhi dekhne ko milta hai

Patni : roopwati .. age-48

Naam ki tarah roopwan ...inhe ghamand hai apne roop ka ...kyuki inki shadi bhi thakur baldev k pita ne mang ker ki thi bahu k roop me ...kadwi baate krna aur dusre se jalna jaise khoon me hai ...lekin darti bhi hai kyuki raghubiri chhoti bhale ho jab sunati hai tab bolti band kr deti h. Har baar inke beech ki ladaai sirf sabse badi hema bacha leti h jo raghubiri ko le jaati h ...

Bada beta : thakur omkaar singh ,Age - 27

Swabhav se thode teekhe h . Kyuki har baat kanto se bhari hoti h lekin sach bolte h ...jo kadwa hota hai. Vaise to koi inko chhedta nahi h lekin nyaay darshan jarur karwa dete hai.. jab koi inko chhed deta hai. Kisi ko nahi bakhstey.

Chhota beta : thakur veer singh ,Age - 25

Ye thode aalsi hai ...kheti me dhyan rakhte hai. Aur majdooro ka khayal rakhte hai
Lekin kisi ka dil nhi dukhate. Jo bhi karte hai dil se .. inhe ghar se jyada khet me rehna pasand hai

Beti : thakur megha singh Age - 23

Ye apni maa ki laadli hai ...aur apne yaha per sabse jyada padhi likhi ... isliye ghar me isko alag hi darja dete h . Inka attiude bahut jyada h. Matlab nakchadhi hai. Koi agar kuch keh de to sikayat kr deti h.


Sabse bade bhai : thakur gyaan Singh age-52

Ye thode nasedi hai ... thakur hai na ...to inko apni hadd nahi pata ...bas mauj masti krte hai .. aur parivaar me inka naam se darte h lekin ye shivraj se darte hai kyuki vo inke galat kaamo ko andekha kr dete h per samjhate bhi hai ...


Patni : thakur hema singh ,age -49

Ye ghar ki badi h isliye koi bada kaam ho to inko batake kiya jaata hai. Baad me ye raghubiri per nirnay chhod deti h . Ghar ko ek karke chalne me inka bahut bada yogdaan raha hai. Ye raghubiri per bahut viswas karti h. Unke sath inki banti bhi h.


Beta : thakur kuwar singh ,age - 30

Inko shadi ho chuki hai ...aur ye apne chacha ko bahut maante h .. pehelwani ka shauk rakhte hai .
Seedhe h ...bailbuddhi . .inke apni pasand ke kaam karna aur khana bahut pasand hai ...jyada kisi ke muh nahi lagte ...seedhe hone ki vajah se baato me aa jate hai . Jiska faayda log uthate rehte h. Ghar aake inhe daant padti h. Lekin ye kabhi bura nahi maante. ..chup sunte hai ...chacha ke chahete hai ...

Patni : surekha . Age - 28

Ye bas ghar ke kaamo me vyast rehti hai...inhe bhi khana banane me aanand milta hai jab inke pati chaav se khate hai .. sabhi ko inke hath ka khana pasand hai . Ghar ki bahu ke roop me abhi tak akeli hone ke kaaran sab ki pyaari hai ..




Beti : thakur prabha singh ,age - 26

Inki bhi shadi ho chuki h aur apne sasural me rehti h ..inke pati MLA hai .. hariyana me ...jiski vajah se inhe ghamand hai .. aur kabhi kabhi faaltu bol jaati h . Lekin galti nahi maanti ...


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""Maa bhookh lagi hai ...khana de do ""

Raghubiri : beta kabhi ye bhi dhyan rehta hai ki ghar me kya ho rha h ...ya aawaragardi me hi rehta h . Kisi din tere chakkar me tera baap mujhe ghar se nikaal dega.
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Ye tha thakur ravindra jo bahar se aake seedhe maa se khana maang raha tha. Raghubiri ji har baar inhe samjhane ki kosis krti thi ...lekin ye to bas taane samajhte the insab k kehne ko ...inhe lagta tha ki koi inko pyar nhi krta ...bas sab inke peeche pade rehte hai ...isi vajah se ye hamesha chidchidhe rehte h ... apne man ki karna chahte hai. ..

Ravindra : maa ..khana dena hai ya nahi . Ya aate hi mujhe bas sunana shuru kar di ho ...

Raghubiri : beta main tere bhale ke liye hi kehti hu. Dekh bahar wale bhi tujhe nikamma samajhte hai ...aur tu hai ki sunta nahi hai

Ravindra : koi samne se keh ke to dekhe ... jubaan na kheech lunga main un sabki ...

Raghubiri : bas bas. Aata hi kya h tujhe ..bas ladna jhagadna . Apne bhai k sath chala jaya kar ...kamsekam kuch seekhega. Padhai me bhi tera man nahi lagta....

Ravindra : maa padhta to hu ...dimaag me nahi ghusta to kya karu ...

Raghubiri : le chal .. chupchap khana kha. .


Tabhi ghar me shivraj ji aate hai ...aur ravindra ko khata hue dekhte hai. Isliye kuch nahi kehte.
Din bhar beta bahar rehta hai ...shaam ko daant padti hai ...roj ka kaam hai ...shivraj ji dinbhar logo ki baate sunte hai .. unka dukh aur samasya .....jiski vajah se dinbhar busy rehte h. Jameen jaydaad ki kami nahi h isliye sabki madad krte hai ...

Shivraj : bhagwaan laao khana de do .. phir nikalna h . Pass ke ganv me panchayat hai ...raat ko vaha jaana hai .dekh vikram kaha reh gaya. Usko bhi sath jaana h mere ...

Raghubiri : ji abhi laai ...vaise panchayat kisliye hai

Shivraj : vo do bhaiyo me jhagda ho gaya h ghar ke batware ke liye . Ek kehta h main purana Makan lunga tu khaali jameen le ...dusra kehta hai ki yaa to makaan de ya kaali jameen jyada de... makaan banane ke paise de nahi to ... chalo main dekh lunga ...

Raghubiri : dekhiye ji . In faislo ko jara dekhkar kijiyega.. jab faisla hota h aur koi nakhus hota h to vo dushman ban jaata h

Shivaraj : are bhagwaan mera koi kya bigaad lega jab mere 2 sher mere sath rehte h ...vaise bhi abhi tak koi mere barabar ka nahi h jo mujhe chot pahuchane ka soch bhi sake ...

Raghubiri : haan ...lekin phir bhi ...seedhe sher se takkar lena aashan hota h lekin bhediya kab waar karde pata nahi hota ji ...bata de rhi hu ..

Shivraj bhi bas muskura ker reh jaate the ...jiski vajah se ravindra khana khate hue bhi hasta rehta h kyuki usko pata h ...sabke samne uska baap chahe kuch bhi ho ..lekin uski maa ke samne bheegi billi jaisa h.
Ravindra khana khake chupchap bahar chala jaata h . Shivraj dekhta h lekin apni patni se kuch nahi poochta ..

Ravindra apni taai k pass chala jaata h ...jo bahar aangan me baithi h aur hukka gudguda rahi h ..
Ravindra jaake taai ke pass baith jaata h ...roopwati dekhti h ...ki Ravindra aaj thoda khus hai ...

Roopwati : aa gaya tu.. khana kha liya .. yaa aaj bhi daant khake aaya h apne baap se ..

Ravindra : naa taai .. aaj to pher maa ne pitaji ko lapet diya .

Roopwati : teri maa jitna bole h na ...itna bilna shobha na deta ...per kya karu ... chhhoot hi itni de rakkhi h ...chal tu bata .. jo manne kaha tha vo karke aaya kya ?

Ravindra : haa taai ...vo chhori badhiya h ...per dekh taai ..pitaji ne dekh liya to main tera naam le dunga

Rooowati : tu bhi darpok nikla ...mera kya h pher ek baar keh dungi main to ki nyara ghar dedo .. main to tere bhale ke liye keh rhi thi. . nahi to beta to mere bhi h ...per main to tujhe chahu hu ...mujhe tu sabse pyaara h is ghar me ...jab tu hua tha na manne tera sabse jyada dhyan rakkha tha. Teri maa to ghar ke kaam me lagi rehve thi. Main tujhe apni chhati te lagake rakkha karu thi.

Ravindra : taai pher aisi baat karan laggi ...main aaj usse milke aaya hu....vo keh rhi thi ki rishta bhej du uske gharaa me ...uska baap manega na ..

Roopwati : tu ek ber apni maa te kehke dekh .. agar baat Bani to theek varna main to teri gail hu hi ..nu bata mere jaisi sohni to hai ya nahi .

Rabindra : taai aap jyada sohni ho usse . Lekin aapke baad vo hi ek hai jo aapko takkar de sake hai ..

Roopwati : haa to ...gareeb chhori hai ..kehde apne baap se. Isi se byaah karunga main ...varna beta us chhori ka dil toot jaaga ...aisa na kariye kisi ke dil ko tode na karte ..ek baar byaah pacche tere kadmo me hogi vaa...

Ravindra : taai abhi vo chhoti se ..uske gharwale manenge nahi ...

Roopwati : haa to tu mauj kar itne ...vaise bhi abhi tere bhai bhi reh rahe hai ...shadi bagair ...log baat banavenge. Ki thakur ka chhora uske hath te likad gaya ..

Ravindra : thik hai taai ...


Hua ye tha ki roopwati ne ravindra ko chaal me leke ek ladki ko patane bheja tha ...isi vajah se din bhar bahar rehta tha ...vo gareeb ghar ki ladki thi .. seedhi thi kaafi ...jiski vajah se vo ravindra ki baato me aa gai ... roopwati jitni ghaagh hai h ye sab jaante h ...aur sabko pata hai ravindra ko bigaadne me iska hath hai ... roopwati ko apne baap ke paise ka ghamand tha.aur roopwaan to thi hi .. Jiski vajah se ye ghar me sab per roab chalati thi lekin jab se shadi hui h is ghar me aai h to dekhti h shivraj ki hi chalti h .. usko nicha dikhane ke liye isne plan banaya h taaki ravindra apne baap ka samna kare . Aur gareeb ki ladki se shadi krle ... thakur hone ki vajah se jaat paat ka keeda bhi h . To thakur shivraj ka sir nicha ho jayega ...iski itni tagdi planning h jiska kisi ko pata nahi h ...

Nice update bro....

 

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[The Immortal]

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"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

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