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Adultery LLL- Love , Life & Luck (tragedy of life)
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Bahut badhiya update bhai....lag rha koi bada kand hone wala h ..... waiting for your next update....Aaj jaldi dena bhai
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Hello dosto kaise ho ...aap sab ... story ko slow mode me le jaana chahta hu ...thoda fast hui h kyuki reason dikhana pada ...lekin ab jo hoga vo sochne ke nhi ...dekhne ke laayak hai ... imagination ... review b dijiye jo samajh na aaye ...aur jo aapko lage saaf likh dijiye ...mera man ye nice update yaa gajab update dekhke likhne ko nahi karta ...jab aap review dete ho ...ki story me aisa hua tab mujhe naye idea aate hai ...story maine pehle se nahi likhi hui ...story ko apne mind me socha hua hai ..lambi krna to mind sath sath idea deta hai ...kuch cmnt krte the ab ve shayad story per aate nahi hai ...kuch silent reader b hai ...page na badhe isliye main thanks nahi likhta ... lekin jab story me page jyada hote h tab new reader open krte hai ..ki shayad lambi story hai ...mera khud ka experience hai ...ek story hai pyar 
baar ..jab usme 200 page the tab maine open nahi ki ...mujhe kisine usko padhne ko bola lekin din maine dekha story 1000 page paar kar chuki h . .tab maine padhi ...aap dekhiye main us writer ka fan ho gaya ...tareef k liye shabd kam hai ...
To dosto page badhana mera kaam isliye hai ...jab story 500 page paar kr jayegi tab page automatically badhenge ...aur phir main sirf daubt clear karunga ...kyuki mere viewers mera sath denge ...ek writer demand rakhta hai maine dekha h uska naam nhi lunga ...usi ki vajah se maine story likhni shuru ki h ...samne hota to maarta main usko ... meerut wale log kaise hote h usko batata main ...badmashi sikha deta ...is site per usne mujhse badtameeji ki ...ab aap log tay karenge ...main jis din computer per likhna shuru karunga us din is site per bata dunga ...bakchodi ...maine master & graduation ki h bakchodi (philosophy ) me....
Dosto story ko badhaiye ...aap sabko main dhanyawad karta hu abtak aap log mere sath bane rahe ...love u all
baar ..jab usme 200 page the tab maine open nahi ki ...mujhe kisine usko padhne ko bola lekin din maine dekha story 1000 page paar kar chuki h . .tab maine padhi ...aap dekhiye main us writer ka fan ho gaya ...tareef k liye shabd kam hai ...To dosto page badhana mera kaam isliye hai ...jab story 500 page paar kr jayegi tab page automatically badhenge ...aur phir main sirf daubt clear karunga ...kyuki mere viewers mera sath denge ...ek writer demand rakhta hai maine dekha h uska naam nhi lunga ...usi ki vajah se maine story likhni shuru ki h ...samne hota to maarta main usko ... meerut wale log kaise hote h usko batata main ...badmashi sikha deta ...is site per usne mujhse badtameeji ki ...ab aap log tay karenge ...main jis din computer per likhna shuru karunga us din is site per bata dunga ...bakchodi ...maine master & graduation ki h bakchodi (philosophy ) me....
Dosto story ko badhaiye ...aap sabko main dhanyawad karta hu abtak aap log mere sath bane rahe ...love u all
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Gajab bhai ...bilkul sahi review h aapka ..har koi apni chaal chal raha hai ... thanks
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Thanks bro ...love unice update ..to bheeshma ki entry ho gayi aur aate hi bhaan aur dilbhag ko unki aukaat dikha di ..
avi ko ab chashma lag gaya hai ,,aur dada ji usko har tarah ka gyan de rahe hai..
aur isi wajah se omkaar aur teen ladke chid rahe hai ..
kahi ye ghar ke bhedi hi naa ban jaaye..
ab naina bhi maa bannewali hai..
rajni ne bhi apni maa ko mana liya hai arvind se shadi ke liye
par somendra ko pata chal gya ki contract khatm ho gaya hai to wo kya karega aur shivraj apne bachaw me kya karega dekhte hai .
Waiting bro...jaldi chhapo yaar sabar nhi ho rha