Fantasy Lord of devil (supernatural, insect, romance , thriller)

[Hayaan]

i think Close..

 

[ashish_1982_in]

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[tpk]

waiting

 

[Kamra510]

Waiting for the nExt Update Bhai

 

[Xabhi]

दशहरे की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ भाई

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
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[Smith_15]

Update

 

[Xabhi]

Introduction
Pratap singh (hero's dad) -
India ke top business man , world me inki kai
Companies hain. Ye apni bibi Or bacchon se bahut pyar karte hain

Suman singh (hero ki maa) -
Ye dikhne me bahut khoobsurat hain, ye ek housewife hain par kabhi kabhi pati ki madad
Office me kar deti hain

Rohit( hero ka bada bhai) - ye abhi college pass kiya hain , Or apne dad ki madat karta hain business me. Dikhne me good looking hain

Komal singh ( hero ki badi bahan) - iski age abi 24 hain. ye dikne me bahut khoobsurat hain bilkul kisi heroine jaise par dil ki bahut aachi hain

Kavita singh ( hero ki second sister) - ye bhi Bilkul apni maa pe gayi hain. Par ye abhi college me hain iski age 22 hain

Rudra pratap singh ( hero) - Bilkul blue eyes jinme thoda red color dikhta hain dhyan se dekhne par. 8 abs body bilkul brock Lesnar jaise
( jaise jaise characters aayege unka intro aage de diya jayega)

Update-1
Ye story ek kali raat se shuru hoti hain vo raat amavasya ki raat thi. Kareeb aadhi raat ko
Ek hospital me halchal tej thi or ek mahila ko jo pregnent thi pet me tej dard oth raha tha .
Vahi dooshri jagah heven me sabhi devta ikkthe the Or bahut gahan chintan me the.
Dev1 - wo aaa raha hain
Dev2 - kyon
Dev1- wahi jiske naam se hi poora brahmand darta hain , jiska naam bhi lene se log darte hain
Dev2 - tumahara matlab ussee to nahi
Dev1- ha tum sahi soch rahe ho abki baar usse koi nahi rok sakta kyoki vo isss baar or shaktishali hoga
Dev3 - to ab hum kya kare, gurudev kripa karke iss samasya ka koi samadhan bataye
( ji ha dev1 in sab ka guru hain)
Dev1- ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte , ye sab ab samay pe chod do
Dev2- par gurudev.......
(Dev1 ne beach me hi rok diya)
Dev1- kuch karne ki socha bhi nahi verna bahut pactaoyge aap sab. Maine kaha sab ab samay pe chod do.

Doosri taraf

Ussi hospital me ek admi bahut pareshan tha kyoki uski wife ki deliveri ho rahi thi andar.
Vahi bahar ka mousham bahut hi daravna ho gaya tha tej barish ho rahi thi jaise vo aaj hi poore sahar ko vaha le jayegi tej lighting ho rahi thi jaise - jaise raat gahri ho rahi thi mousham Or daravana hota ja raha tha
Vahi theek adhi raat ko ek tej bijle kadki issi ke saath ander uss orat ne ek bacche ko janm diya vo baccha janm ke baad roya nahi balki ek rahsmayi muskan uske chehre per thi.
Uski eyes bilkul blue the jinme koi dekhe to unme kho gaye doctor's bhi usko dekne me kho gaye. Bahut der baad doctor's ko hos aaya to doc ne dekha vo baccha ek side dekh ke bahut has raha tha doc ne vaha koi dhyan nahi diya ye sochkar ke baccha hain vaise hi has raha hoga. Par us side ek kali parchayi thi
Doctor's uss bacche ko us mahila ke bagal me leta dete hain.
Or bahar aate hain to uss admi ko dekhkar kahte hain congratulations ms pratap aapke yaha ek ladke ne janm liya hain.
(Ji haan ye admi pratap hi hain or ander jo orat hain vo suman hain)
Ye sunkar pratap ko jyada khushi to nahi hui fir bhi usne doc se pucha
Pratap- doctor suman kaise hain
Doctor - vo bilkul fine hain 2 din baad unhe discharge kar diya jayega
Pratap - thanks doctor
2 ghante baad doctor usse ander jaane ki permission de dete hain to vo ander jata hain
To vo ander dekhta hain ki suman leti hain or uske pass me ek baccha leta hain
Pratap unke pass jata hain
Pratap - kaisi ho suman
Suman - theek hu ( rukhi aavaj me)
( yaha me bata du suman Or pratap ye baccha nahi chahte the kyoki unke pahle se hi 3 bacche the par bhagwaan ko kuch or hi mangoor tha)
Pratap Or suman me esi hi kai baate hoti rahti hain .
2 din baad suman hospital se discharge ho jati hain to pratap Or suman ghar ki or nikal jate hain jaha unke baki bacche unka intzar kar rahe the

Update-2
Jab suman Or pratap apne ghar pahucte hain to unke baki ke bacche doud ke unke paas aate hain . Sabse pahle komal unse poochti hain
Komal - mummy bhai kaha hain
Suman haskar apni goud me dikhate hue ye raha.
Komal Or kavita apne chote bhai ko dekhkar bahut kush ho jati hain.
Komal & kavita - ek saath kahti hain mummy hum eeske sath khelege.
Suman - haaa meri bacchiyo khel lena
Or Suman or pratap bacche ko lekar ander jate hain or bate karne lagte hain.
Pratap - Suman guruji ko kab bulau
Suman - kis liye
Pratap - iss bacche ka naam rakhne ke liye
Suman - aap to jante hain hum isss bacche nahi chahte the fir bhi
Pratap - vo to theek hain par hain to humara hi baccha
Suman - theek hain jaisa aapko aacha lage
Pratap - to kal hi gurujii ko bula leta hu
Suman- theek hain
Pratap kal gurujii ko ghar aane ka niyota de deta hain.

Suman or pratap ne ek baat par notice nahi kiya ki wo baccha kabhi aam baccho ki tarah nahi roya tha wo to bus kuch dekh kar din bhar hasta rahta tha.
agle din gurujii aate hain suman Or pratap unke charan chute hain or unka aadar satkar karte hain
Guruji suman se uss bacche ko magte hain suman bacche ko deti hain
Guruji bacche ko jaise hi dekhte hain to unke pasine chutne lagte hain or vo ekdam hadbada jate hain.
Jab pratap Or suman dekhte hain ki baccha has raha hain or guruji ke chehre pe dar Or chinta ko lakeere saf saf dekhi ja sakti thi pratap guruji se poochta hain guruji kya hua
Guruji - ( hadbada kar) ye baccha aam baccha nahi hain .
Ye sun ke pratap Or suman chonk jate hain .
Pratap - iska kya matlab hain gurujii....
Guruji - ye baccha saakchat mahakal ka roop hain..., ye baccha bhagwan shiv ke roudra roop veerbadra ke samaan krodhi ,shaktishali Or mahatejswi hoga. Par.....
Pratap Or suman apne bacche ke baare me sun ke kush hote hain tabhi par ko sunkar pareshan ho jate hain..
Pratap & suman - par kya guruji
Guruji - isss bachche ka gussa samay ke saath badta hi jayega ek samay eesa aayega ki tum dono ka ek galat decision duniya ko bahut bade khatre me daal dega .

Ye sun kar pratap Or suman bahut gabara jate hain or kahte hain
Suman - guruji hum galat decision kabhi nahi lege
Guruji - ye to vidi ka vidhan hain baccho isse koi nahi badal sakta. Or eek baat or dhyan rakha esa bacche ko koi nukshaan pahuchane ki kosis na kare nahi to ye uss ke liye bahut ghatak hoga.
Essi hi kuch or baate hoti hain ( jo aage chal ke pata chalegi)
Guruji - kyoki yah bhagwaan shiv ke rudra roop ka ansh hain to iss ka naam hoga rudra
Pratap or suman ye naam sunke bahut khus ho jate hain
Or thodi der baad guruji chale jaate hain
Guruji ke jane ke baad suman Or pratap man hi man ek decision lete hain
Jo aage chal ke pata chalega

Sandar intro Jabardast suruvat hai rudra ka tandav Lagta hai jald hi dekhne milega...

 

[Xabhi]

Update -3

Esse hi time nikalta gyaa, ab suman Or pratap rudra ka poora khyaal rakhte. Par unhone ek baat notice ki rudra apni family ke alaava kisi se jyada baat nahi karta bas apne hi magan rahta Or saath saath me uska gussa bhi lagatar badta ja raha tha.

After a 5 year
Ab rudra 5 saal ka ho gaya tha ab uska admission ek bade Or acche school me ho gaya jisme uske bahan bhai pahle se hi study karte the. Ab rudra school roj jata par apne sisters Or bhai ke alawa kisi se bhi nahi bolta tha .
Class me ek - do boys &girls ne rudra se friendship karne kikosis ki par usse sabhi ko reject kar diya. Esse hi din nikal rahe the ab suman Or pratap thoda relex ho chuke rhe ye soch ke ki guruji ka bas ek vaham hoga. Kyoki unhone rudra me gusse ke alawa guruji ke bataye ek bhi quality nahi dekhi thi.

After a 2 year's

Ab rudra 7 saal ka ho gaya tha or usme kai changes aaye jaise ki wo apni age ke baccho se kahi bada lagta tha or uske body bhi theek thak ho gayi the . Ek baat bhi hui jo usne kissi ko nahi bataye ki usse raat me kai sapne aate jinhe ajeeb tarah ke jeevo ke samne koi ladka khada hua hain or vo sabhi uske saamne jhuke hue hain or usski Jay Jay kaar kar rahe hain. Shuru shuru me to wo bahut dar jata tha par ab usse essa lagta ki vo ladka koi or nahi balki vo khud hain.

Esse hi time gujar raha tha ek din rudra apne bhai ke saath khelte time uske bhai ne usse bat maar diya jisse uske hend me lag gayi jisse rudra ko bahut tej gussa aa gaye jisse usne gusse me apne bhai ke upar Flowerpot de ke mara jisse uske head me chot lag gayi or uske sar se blood nikalne laga. Or itne me suman Or komal & kavita aaa gayi to suman rohit ke sar se bleeding dekhkar harbara gayi or usne kuch bhi na soch samajh kar sidha rudra ko maarne lagi usse to ye bhi nahi pata chala ki rudra ke hend me chot lagi hain or uske hend me thoda khoon bhi nikal raha tha ( kyoki bhaiyo jimmedaari or kartavya me jameen aasman ka difference hota hain vo bas rudra ko apni jimmedaari samajhte thi jo ek galti ke karan usse mili hain usne rudra koapna beta kabhi nahi maana)
jaldi- jaldi suman ne pratap ko phone lagaya Or rohit ko hospital leke chali gayi .
Doc - jyada tension lene ki baat nahi hain chot ghari nahi hain me kuch medicine likh raha hu le lena theek ho gayega.
Suman - ( tension free hokar) Thank doctor

Vahi doosre taraf Ghar per
Suman or rohit ke hospital jate hi komal & kavita doud ke aayi or unnhone rudra ko utaya
Kyoki rudra abhi gussa tha to ussne ne un dono ko dhakka de diya or vo dono gir gayi or rudra bhaag kar apne room me chala gaya.
Kavita & komal pareshan ho gayi kyoki rudra ab unki bhi nahi sun raha tha vaise aamtor per vo kavita & komal ko kabhi nahi chot phuchaphuchata tha.

Esse hi poora din nikal gaya rudra room se bahar nahi nikla ess douraan Suman or pratap bhi aa gaye rohit ko hospital se lekar aa gaye unhe bhi komal & kavita ne sab bataya. Pratap & suman ko ye sunkar koi jyada fark nahi pada.
Pratap - usse jab bhook lagegi to khud hi neeche aa jayega
Suman - badhiya hain me to ye chahti hu vo kahi chala jaye or kabhi laut ke nahi aaye.
Pratap - ( gussa ho kar) suman janti ho tum kya kah rahi ho
Suman - ha janti hu
Pratap - fir bhi ye kah rahi ho ......
Suman - ha vaise bhi me nahi chahti thi usse vo bas ek galti ka parinaam hain.
Pratap - mujhe pata hain suman par gurujii ki baat yaad karo. Or ye tumahare or hum sab ke liye accha hoga.

Inside the room -
Jaise hi rudra ko uske maa ne mara to gusse me Or rota hua apne room me chala gaya or rote - rote gehri need me chala gaya. Car ki aawaj sunkar vo bahar nikla to ussne pratap & suman ki sab baate sun li or vo rone laga.
Rudra ( man me ) - maa ye kya kah rahi hain vo mujhse pyar nahi karti. Vo bas bhai ko hi pyar hi karte hain
( or yahi sab sochte - sochte vo behosh ho jata hain)

Vahi bahar-
.suman - ab me usse or nahi jhel sakti usse aap hostel bhej de ya kahi door bhej de.
Pratap - theek hain me abhi kuch karta hu . Me rudra ke usa jane ki poori vyavastha karta hu.

Ye sunkar komal & kavita rone lagi unnhone socha ki rudra unse door chala jayega or kabhi lout kar rahi aayega.
Komal - maa bhai kahi nahi jayega vo yahi rahega mere pass.
Suman (gusse se) - komal maine kaha na jayega to jayega
Komal &kavita ( rote hue) - maa nahi bhejo na usse hum samjhayege usse to vo gussa nHi karega. Par bhai ko yahi rehne do na....
Suman - maine kaha na chupchap apne room me jao ...




Ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hain

Update -4

Jaisa ki aap sab ne pichle update me pada ki pratap se suman rudra ke USA jane ki baat karti hain or pratap rudra ko bhejne ke liye tiyar ho jata hain..

Ab aage

Pratap rudra ke USA jane ki puri vyavastha kar deta hain. Vahi rudra in sab se bekabhar room me rote -rote so gaya tha.
Subah rudra ko uske naa chahte hue bhi USA bejh diya jata hain . ab rudra duniya se poori tarah se alag ho gaya tha ab vo din bhar apne me hi gum rahta Sare jaha me kya ho raha hain sab se bekhabar.
Pratap rudra ko Miami ke ek school me admission kara deta hain or vahi hostel me uske rehne ki poori vyavastha kar deta hain.
Ider jab India se USA rudra ko le jaya gaya to kahi Dooshre or ek sadhu baba ki eyes open ho jati hain jo dhayan me baite the.
Sadhu baba - (man me) ye tumne kya kiya pratap & suman tumne anjane me hi sahi par tumne vahi kiya jisse maine tum dono ko karne se roka tha.
( ji ha ye vahi gurujii hain jinhone hero ka naamkaran kiya tha)
Guruji turat uth kar kahi lupt ho jate hain or jab pratap hero ko USA chod kar vapas aata hain ussi ke dooshre din gurujii uske ghar aate hain...
In USA
Hero khoob rota hain or man me pratigya karta hain ki jis family ne usse sirf dukh diya hain wo kabhi uss family me lout ke nahi jayega
Or wo itna powerfull banega ki usske naam se hi duniya kaapne lage wo itna powerfull banega ki wo duniya ko dikha sake ki wo kya kar sakta hain. ( ye sab sochte samay uski eyes red ho chuki thi jiska pata bhi usse nahi tha)

In india
Guruji pratap ke ghar pahucte hain to unka swaagat kiya jata hain par wo iss sab ke liye mana kar dete hain or kahte hain.
Guruji -( gusse me) rudra kaha hain
Guruji kyo iss tarah gusse me dekh pratap & suman sakpaka jate hain.
Pratap - ( sambhalte hue) guruji usse to humne USA bhej diya hain padne ke liye.
Guruji- mujhe pata hain. Main ye poocha raha hu rudra kaha hain.
Pratap- guruji abhi to bataya usa me hain.
Guruji - (gusse me) phone karke pata kar ki vo kaha hain.
Suman - guruji aap ka kya matlab hain.
Guruji - matlab rudra vaha nahi hain.
!( guruji ne ye bolkar jaise un sab pe bomb phod diya)
Guruji ke bolne ke baad pratap phone lagakar poochta hain to usse bhi pata chal jata hain ki rudra la pata hain vo suman Or baki sab ko batata hain.
Suman Or kavita & komal ye shun ke rone lagti hain. Suman bhale hi rudra ko pasand nahi karti thi par thi to maa hi ab usse rudra ki yaad aane lagti hain.

Guruji - suman jiss karan tumne ye decision liya uski sacchai nahi janna chahogi.
Suman - kaise sacchai.......
Guruji - poocho apne bade bete se ki galti kiski thi. Tumahare bade bete ne pahle rudra ke haath pe bat mara tha jisse uske haath se blood niklne laga. Tab usne gusse me rohit ko mara or ek baat Maine pahle hi kaha tha jo usse chot pahuchayega uske liye accha nahi hoga...

Suman - (shock se) kya rohit ye sahi hain.
Rohit haa me gardan hila deta hain.
Guruji - Or tumne Suman ye bhi nahi dekha uske haath me chot hain tumne usse maara jiske chot uske sharir pe nahi uske aatma Or man par lagi.
( Suman rone lagti hain)
Guruji - yaad karo maine kya kaha tha tum dono se

Flaceback
Guruji - yaad rakhna tum dono isse kabhi apni betiyon Or iski bahno se alag mat karna kyoki isse abhi ye dono hi shant kar sakti hain.
Pratap - guruji essa kya hain mere bete me. Jo aap itne dare hue hain.
Guruji - samay aane pe sab pata chal jayega abhi bas itna jaan lo ki tumhare bete jaisa iss puri duniya me koi nahi hain. Ye krodh me mahakal ka shakchat roop hoga or bina krodh ke ye nirmal man ka hoga sab ki madat karega.

Back to story
Guruji - lagta hain sab batane ka sahi samay aaa gaya hain.
Pratap - kya gurujii????
Guruji - rudra tumahara beta bas issliye hain kyonki usne tumhaari patni ke garb se janam liya hain. Balki sacchai kuch or hain.
Suman & pratap - kya????
Guruji - rudra wo hain jiske adheen swayam mout hain . Jo uske charno me rahti hain. Wo lord of hell hain, wo lord Or devil hain . Wo vah hain jiske under duniya ki aseemit urja hain fir chahe vo kali ho ya white.
(Ye sunkar suman Or pratap bahut shock ho jate hain )
Guruji - vo shwam mahadev ka ansh hain wo mahadev ke roudra roop beerbadra ke saman Vidbhanskari , krodhi Or shaktishali hain.
( ye sunkar pratap Or suman ko lagbhag heart attack aaa gaya tha. Vahi baccho ki samajh me kuch nahi aaa raha tha ki ye sab kya ho raha hain )

Suman -(man me) me kitni papi hu jo mahdev ke ansh ka khyal bhi nahi rakh paayi Or na hi usse pyaar diya ek bete wala.

Pratap -( man me) ye maine kya kar diya maine itna bada paap kaise kar diya. Ab me kya karu.
Pratap - guruji ab hum kya kare.
Guruji - bas prathna karo baghwan se jo me soch raha hu vo na ho unaytha jo main soch rha hu wo hua to poore duniya me hahakar machega. Sab jagah khoon hi khoon hoga. Mout ka nanga naach hoga.
( ye sun ke prataap Or suman dar jate hain)
Pratap - guruji ab hum rudra ko kaise dhoode.
Guruji - koi kuch nahi kar sakta ab.
Pratap- to rudra milega kaise ab.?
Guruji - wo jarur lout kar aayega Or jab wo aayega sab se pehle tumhari betiyo ko hi milega tab tak kuch nahi kiya ja sakta .
Or guruji chale jate hain.


Ab dekte hain aage kya hota hain

Update -5

Ab tak aap sab ne read kiya ki guruji pratap Or suman ko rudra ki identity batate hain.

Ab aage
Esse hi time nikalta gaya pratap ne bahut pata karne ki kosis ki par vo rudra ka pata nahi kar paya.

Vahi uk main ek ladka apne ghar me soo raha tha actually isse ghar kahna galat hoga yeh tob ek banglo tha. Per ek ajjeb baat thi uske ghar ke under koi nahi tha sirf security ke alawa jo ki ghar ke charo Or thi. Ji ha jaisa aap sab soch rahe ho vo sahi hain ye apna hero rudra hi hain.
( rudra uk me hain issi karan pratap usse nahi dhud paya kyoki vah usse USA me dhud raha tha)
Rudra ne apni akele ki dum pe poora business ampire khada kar liya tha. Usne apni company ka naam R. group rakha tha. Jaise ki aap sab jante hain rudra kam baat karta hain sabse to R group ke onwer ko kam hi log jante the.

Rudra ni ees time tak business management ke master kar raha tha . Ussne kabhi apne dost nahi banaye. Jyada logo ko aaspas dekh ke usse gussa aata tha issi chakkar me usne kai logo ko buri tarah mara tha . Jisse ab sab usse kam hi baat karte the ya yu kahu ki vo kisi se baat nahi karta tha.

Ek raat rudra ghari need me tha to usse ek sapna aaya....
Ki ek anjhan saks usse kuch kah raha hain. Usne usse dhyan se sunne ki kosis ki to usse aab sab saaf saaf sunai dene laga.

Vo aadmi - mere malik aap ke loutne ka vakt ho gaya hain aap ko loutna hoga.
Rudra - kyon ho tum.
Vo aadmi - malik aap ka ek gulam. Malik aap ke loutne ka vakt ho gaya hain aap ko aana hoga.

Or vo aadmi kahi kho jata hain. Or rudra ki need khul gayi. Rudra usse bas ek bura sapna samajh ke bhool gaya.
Or fir need me chala gaya. Phir 4 baje utthkar apni exercise me lag jata hain. Exercise se nipat kar vo sidha apni company ko nikal jata hain

Update-6

Rudra office pahuch jata hain or apni personal Secetiory ko bulata hain.
Rudra - london wale project ka kya status hain.
Sweta - sir kaam chal raha hain time par project poora ho gayega.
( sweta rudra ki personal Secetiory hain)
Rudra - good.
Sweta - sir me jau...?
Rudra - haaa. Turant kuch yaad aata hain..
Are haaa sweta Manchester me jo tender nikla hain smith & jhon company ka uska kya hua.?
Sweta - sir tiyar hain aap kahe to lau.
Rudra - yes please.
Fir sweta chali jati hain todhi der baad presentation ki file le ke aati hain or rudra ko deti hain or chali jati hain.
Rudra presentation ko dekhta hain or usme thode changes karta hain. Or fir thodi der baad nikal jaata hain ghar ko kyoki usse college bhi jana tha.
Fir rudra apni Jaguar le ke college nikal jata hain.
Jaisa ki maine bataya rudra kisi se jyada baat nahi karta tha even teachers se bas apne kaam se kaam rakhta tha.
Jab rudra college pahucta hain to bahut dashing lag raha tha. Ladkiya gili ho rahi thi usse dekhkar Or ladke jal rahe the usse. Rudra in sab ko ignore kar apni class ke liye nikal jata hain.
Fir apni classes ko attend karta hain. Recess me canteen me aaa jata hain. Jaha usse ek ladka Or ladki milte hain.
Ladka - raj malhotra
Ladki - sonam arora
Dono aapase me pyar karte hain. Ye rudra ke saath tab se hain jab se rudra uk aaya tha. Bus ye hi do the jinse rudra baar karta tha.
Raj - Or rudra bhai kaise ho.
Rudra - badhiya hu tu bata.
Raj - kya bataye kisi ke pyar me pagal hain dil hi nahi lagta kahi.
Rudra muskura deta hain vahi sonam sharma jati hain.
Sonam - shut up Raj.
Sonam - rudra aaj kal kam hi college aate ho kya baar hain.
Rudra - kuch nahi yaar tabiyat theek nahi thi to bus.
Sonam or Raj samajh jate hain ki rudra kuch chupa raha hain par unnhe pata tha ki agar rudra kuch nahi bata raha to usse koi kuch pata bhi nahi kar sakta.
Raj - chod sab. Aaj free hain.
Rudra - kyu?
Raaj - party karege Tu bhool gaya bhai ka birthday hain.
Rudra - ohh sorry happy birthday bro
Raaj - are yaar chod tu bata chalega naa.
Rudra - theek hain chaluga
Eesse hi bahut si baate hoti rahti hain fir rudra class me aaa jata hain or college finish kar ghar pahuch jata hain.
Raat ko sabhi party karte hain fir sab apne - apne ghar vapas aaa jate hain.
Raat ko fir vahi aadmi rudra ke sapne me aata hain to rudra usse dekhkar poochta hain.
Rudra - kyon ho tum.
Admi - tumhaara subhcintak
Rudra - kyu mere sapne me roj aate ho aao.
Aadmi - sab pata chal jayega. Or ab tumhe tiyar hona hoga kyoki ab sabhi tumahare shatru hain fir chahe dev ho ya danav.
Rudra - aap kya kah rahe hain. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaa raha hain.?
Aadmi - rudra me tumhara guru hu or apna uttardaitya purna karne aaya hu jo swam mahakal ne diya hain.
Rudra - parrr.......... (Aadmi rudra ko beech me tokte hue)
( ab usss aadmi ko guru2 kahuga)
Guru2 -ab dhyan se suno itna to tumhe ahssas hoga hi tum kuch khass ho. Kyoki itni badi company itni se age me kadhi karna or usse chalana aam logo ke bus ki baat nahi hain. Tum jo bhi ek baar dekte ya padte ho tumhe yaad ho jaati hain .
Rudra - (man me) kah to sahi rahe hain ye or inhe kaise pata ki main ikk baar me sab yaad kar leta hu.
Guru2- kya hua rudra?
Rudra - (ekdam se) haaa
Guru 2 - rudra tum nahi jante tum kyon ho or kya kar sakte ho tumhe ab tiyar hona hoga.
Rudra- kaise???
Guru2 - main batata hu tum kal se roj subah utth kar sabse pahle dhyan lagayoge fir tum apne ghar ke peeche ke jangal me jakar ek khanddar hain usse dhudhoge ussi ke pass ek ped hoga bargad ka vaha khudai karoge vaha kuch milega usse tum nikalo baki main kal batayuga.
Or isse ke saath rudra ki need khul jati hain

Update-7

Rudra ki subah jaldi need khul jati hain or vo guru2 ke khane ke anushar dhyan lagata hain per usse bahut dikkat ho rahi thi. Rudra jab dhyan lagata to usse apni puraane yaadein yaad aane lagti hain jisse uska dhyan bar bar tut raha tha. Esse hi bahut der tak kosis karta hain per usse koi safalta nahi milti. To wo thak haar kar uttar khada ho jata hain or running karne ke liye bahar nikal jata hain. Fir ekdum usse jangal ki yaad aati hain to wo sochta hain ja ker dekhna chahiye ki essa kya hain waha ki guru2 kah rahe the waha jaane ki.

Rudra running karta hua uss jangal me pahuch jata hain. Jungle dekhne me bahut bhayanak tha. Rudra himmat karke aage badta ja raha tha. Rudra waha bahut dhundta hain per Waha koi khander usse nahi milta. To wo yah sochta hain ki wo bus sapna hi ho sakta hai. Or loutne lagta hain. Tabhi wo sochta hain ki jab me jangal me ander aaa hi gaya hu to mujhe or aage ja ke dekhna chahiye or vo jungle me aage badne lagta hain.

At the last usse ek khander milta hain. Wo khander jungle ke center me tha or dekhne me bhi bahut khatarnaak bhi tha. To rudra aage jata hain or sochta hain ki ye khander yaha kaha se aaya. Or wo usse ander ja ke dekhne lagta hain. Usse kgander ke aas pass kai bargad ke ped dikhe to wo sochne laga ki yaha to bahut bargad ke ped hain inme se vo ped kyon sa hoga.

Thodi der sochne ke baad uske chehre per muskurahat aaa jati hain. Or ek or badne lagta hain . Or ek jagah jaa ke ruk jata hain usse waha per ekk bahut purana barged ka ped dikta hain or vo ussi ke niche khudai kerne lagta hain. To thodi der khudai karne ke baad usse waha kuch milta hain .

Ye ek chota sa box tha jiske under kuch tha. Rudra ne uss box ko khola to usme kuch ajjeb se roshne nikal rahi the jo uske chute hi rudra ke under sama gai. Or rudra ko bahut dard hone laga or wo bahi baith gaya.
Vahi dushri or.......
Rudra kr uss box ko chutte hi jaise hi vo roshni uske under samayi vaise hi yaha eek sadhu ne aakhaen kholi Or unke chehre per muskurahat aa gayi. To aakhir rudra tumne aage badhna shuru hi ker diya.
( ji haan ye guru2 hain)
Guru2 - ab samay aaa gaya hain ki tum apni sakti ka parichay paoo Or usse dharan karo or apne kartavya ko ekk baar phirse nibho or usse purn karo.

Guru 2- ab samay aaa gaya hain ki sampurna sansaar ek baar tumhaari shakti ka anubhav kare or jo log apne kartavya se bhimukh ho gaye hain unhe fir se marg pe lai.

Or wo uttker kahi lupt ho jate hain.

Vahi rudra dard ke maare behosh ho gaya tha tabhi vaha guru2 ek roshni ke saath prakat ho jaate hain. Or vo rudra ke ser pe haath rakhte hain or eek matra padne lagte hain or thodi der baad unke haath se ek roshni nikalti hain or rudra me chali jati hain. Or rudra ka sharir jatke khane lagta hain or thodi der baad jatke khaane band ker deta hain.

Fir guru2 usse leker gayab ho jate hain or rudra ke bedroom me prakat ho jaate hain or rudra ko usske bed pe leta ker gayab ho jate hain.

Update -8

Jab rudra ko hos aata hain . To upne aap ko apne room me pakar surprise ho jaata hain or sochta hain me yaha kaise aaya. Thoda or apne dimak pe jor dalne ke baad usse yaad aaa jata hain ki vah behosh ho gaya tha.
. Tabhi usse kahi se aawaj aaye jyada na socho me laya tha tumne ghar. Rudra aawaj ko pehchan jata hain or upne dimak ko jhatak deta hain.
Or utth jata hain or fresh ho jata hain. Or collage nikal jata hain kyoki vo late ho gaya tha. Aaj rudra poore ban than kr college aaya tha.
Idhar college me koi pehli baar aaya tha. Balki india ke college Or rudra ke college ke joint compilation type tha. Per compilation nahi tha kyoki unka aim apne best students ko ekk dusre ke study Or culture ke baare me samajh sake.

Wo log abhi college ke ander pahuche hi the. Tabhi ek Lamborghini bahut speed me college ke gate se entry leti hain. Or wo unke just saamne drift marti hue parking me chali jati hain. Sabhi student usss or dekhne lagte hain ki kyon hain ye banda. Tabhi uss me se rudra nikalta hain.

Rudra ko dekha college ke student tarah - tarah ki baate karne lagte hain.
In boys -
Boy1- are ye to akdu hain.
Boy2- bhai chal kya pata kis mood me ho.
Bhai 3 - sahi keh raha hain tu iska kuch bharosha nahi kya ker de.
Or eese ke saath hi sabhi ladke khishkane lagta hain.
In girls -
Girl1- are ye to akdu hain. Dekho itna hot and sexy ban ker college aaya hain.
Girl 2- keh tu to sahi rahi hain. Per ek no akdu hain seedhe muh kisi se baat nahi karta.

Vahi dusre college ke group ke ladke rudra se jal rahe the. Vahi ladkiyon me to rudra ko dekhne ki hod lagi hui thi . Unme se hi ek ladki thi jo rudra ko lagatar dekh rahi thi. Or usme koi hui thi.
Intro-
Purvi thakur - ye delhi me ek bade college me padti. Hain or yah dekhne me bahut cute hain .par saath hi bahut jiddi hain isse jo cheez chahiye usse pae bina manti nahi. Per nature ki bahut aachi hain.
Swati singh- ye bhi nature ki acchi hain saath hi bahut sunder bhi hain
Sana malhotra- ye bahut sexy &hot hain. Dosto se bahut pyar karti hain. Purvi se bahut banti hain iski.
Vapas story pe aate hain.
Purvi lagatar rudra ko dekh rahi thi bina palke japkae. Purvi kya sabhi hi rudra ko ghoor rahe the.
Par yaha rudra bhai apne me hi mast . Bina kisi or dekhe bina. Poore attitude me bina kisi ko dekhe chala gaya.
Rudra ke jaane ke baad sabhi ladkiyon ko hos aati hain unki halat buri ho gayi thi per ker bhi kya sakti thi . Swati Or sana ne dekha purvi
Lagatar ussi Or dekhe jaa rahi thi . Swati purvi ko hilati hain tab usse hos aata hain. Tab sana Or swati poochti hain
Sana - kya hua purvi ( Or hasne lagti hain)
Purvi ko to jaise koi fark hi nahi pada.
Purvi - ( apni hi dhun me) i want him..
Swati - oye kya hua vo kya koi khilona hain jo tujhe chahiye or hum shop se laa ke de dege.
Purvi - nahi yaar me usse pyar karne lagi hu.
Sana - (haste hue) oye hoye pahli najar ka pyar.
Swati - Tu to ek hi baar me flat ho gayi mujhe believe nahi ho raha Tu vahi purvi hain jo ladko ko apne aas pass bhi nahi aane deti thi.
Purvi - Tu nahi samjhegi. Per mujhe ye chahiye.
Swati & Sana - haa yaar dekh lege pahle uske baare me jaan le vo kaisa hain kya karta hain. Or uske liye hame college me ander to chalna hi padega.
Purvi- (jaldi se) ha to chalo to maine kab mana kia

Update-9

Rudra college me enter ker sidha apni class me chala jata hain. Vaha abhi kam hi student aaye the. Thodi der baad professor bhi aaa jate hain or padai shuru ho jati hain. Thodi der baad ek student aata hain.
Ladka - may I come in sir.
Professor - come in. Kya kaam hain.
Ladka- sir yaha rudra kyon hain usse principal sir bulaa rahe hain.
Professor - okk tum jao.
Uske jane ke saath hi rudra khada hoke principal office ki or nikal jata hain. Principal office ke bahar pahuch kar.
Rudra - sir me i come in....
Principal - yes come in.. , if I am right rudra.
Rudra - yes sir. Aapne bulaya sir kuch kaam tha.
Principal - are pehle baitho . Rudra actually baat yah hain ki yaha india ke delhi ke college Or humara college ne student program ke threw ek competition ya yeh kahu education program samajh lo.
Rudra - ye to accha hain. Per isme sir me kya karu.
Principal - actually maine sabhi ke documents dekhe to maine select kiya kyoki tumne her exam me uk top kiya hain . To me chahta hu ki tum apne college ko represent karo.
Rudra - sir me ye nahi ker sakta kyoki mujhe kuch kaam hain.
Principal - mujhe pata tha tum yahi kahoge. Maine tumahare baare me jitna suna tha me iss jawab ke liye poora tiyar tha.
Rudra - sir essa kuch nahi hain.
Principal - are chodo sab me chahta hu tum dono collages ke joint study session me tum lecturer to.
Rudra - (surprise hoke) main kaise sir....
Principal - abhi baat poori nahi hui me chahta hu tu computer per lecture do. Every thing including languages, data structure.
Rudra - sir per me kaise..., I mean computer ke professor bhi to hain unhe bura nahi lagega..
Principal - don't worry rudra. Maine sab se baat ker li hain . Actually tumahra naam tumahare computer ke professor ne hi suggest kiya.
Rudra - sir... Ne kaise ker pauga.
Principal - mujhe poora belive hain tum ker paayoge.
Rudra - theek hain sir i will give my 100,℅
Principal - theek hain rudra to phir kal se joint classes shuru hain or kal tum apna pehla lecture doge.
Rudra - per sir meri classes...( abhi rudra apni baat poora ker pata ki beech me hi principal bol padta hain..)
Principal don't worry tumahara lecture tumahare classes ke baad hoga
Phir rudra principal office se likal ker sidha apne class me jata hain or apni classes leta hain or classes poora karke sidha apne company nikal jata hain .

Vahi doosri taraf.
Rudra ke college ke ander jaane ke baad. Purvi apni dosto ke saath ander aati hain.
Or rudra ko dhudhne lagti hain or poore college me dekhti hain. Jab bo rudra ki class ke pass aati tab tak rudra principal ke office me ja chuka tha. Vo poore college me dhudti hain per unhe rudra kahi nahi milta.to vo bahar canteen me aaa jati hain.

Canteen me aaker aapas me baate kerne lagti hain.
Purvi - yaar poore college me dhudh liya kaha gaye vo..
Swati - pata nahi yahi kahi hoga mill jayega abhi thodi der me..
Sana - yaar me kya kehti hu kisi se poochhte hai uske baare me.
Purvi- per kya sab usse jante hoge .
Sana - yaar jaise sab usse dekh rahe the to mujhe lagta sab usse jante hoge.
Swati- sahi kaha tune.
Purvi, swati Or sana canteen main yaha vaha dekhti hain to vaha unhe ek indian ladki dikhti hain. To vo sab uske pass jati hain.
Purvi - hiii
Ladki- hiii
Swati - kya tum meri help ker sakti ho.
Ladki - kaise help.
Sana - hame tumse kuch janna hain
Ladki - kya.???
Sana - wo subah jo ladka aaya tha kya tum uske baare me janti ho.
Ladki - kyon vo akdu.
Purvi- kyon akdu....
Ladki - vo subah red car se aaya tha.
Purvi - tum usse akdu kyu kaha rahi ho.
Ladki - kyoki kisi se vo sidhe muh baat nahi karta. Gussa uske naak pe rehta hain. To sabhi ne uska naam akdu rakh diya.
Purvi ko ye sun ke bura lagta hain per vo kya ker sakti thi. Or fir vo ladki chali jati hain..
Tabhi un sab ke pass ek ladki aati hain unke hi college ki or batati hain ki kal se joint classes hogi.

Update -10
Rudra college se nikal ker sidha apni company ke liye nikal jata hain. Vaha vah sidha Apne cabin me jata hain or sweta ko bulata hain.
Sweta - sir aapne bulaya.
Rudra - sweta me kal Manchester ke liye nahi aaa pauga tander me to me chahta hu ki tum vaha jao or tander lo.
Sweta - okk sir. Per sir me ye sab ker paaugi.
Rudra - mujhe poora bharosha hain tum pe. Mujhe tumhaari business agility pata hain issi liye bol raha hu.
Sweta - thank you sir me jarur puri kosis karugi.
Rudra - good. Ab jao or tiyari karo jaane ki.
Or sweta chali jaati hain or rudra apne kaam me lag jata hain jo der raat tak chalta hain. Or apna kaam nipta ke apne ghar ke liye nikal jata hain.
Vahi dushri taraf.
College se nikal ker purvi & friends sidha apne hotel me jaati hain. Sab log fresh ho jaate hain.
Purvi bas khoi hui thi. Ki tabi-
Sana - oye hoye ik baar dekha hain hai or madam uski yaadon me khoi hui hain.
Purvi - are essa kuch nahi hain.
Swati - to kaisa hain ager wo aacha na laga ho to hum try kare ( bade hot andaaj me) kitna hot , sexy hain me to kehti hu purvi Tu rehan de me pata leti hu usse..
Purvi- ( gusse me) sochna bhi mat nahi to teri ye taangon ko tod dugi Or uski aankhon ko fod dugi. Naa vo dekh payega naa tu usse pata payegi.

Uski baate sunker dono Sana & swati hasne lagti hain . Eesse hi raat me dono purvi ko chedti rehti hain or phir sab so jaate hain kyoki kal college jana tha.

Ider rudra apne ghar pe pahuch ker sidha dinner kerta hain or apne room me jaa ke college ke class ke liye Preprestion karke so jata hain kyuki wo bahut thak gaya tha.

Subah theek time pe jaag ker or fresh ho ker jo guruji ne bataya tha uss hisab se dhyan me baith jata hain .
Thodi der kuch nahi hota rudra puri kosis karta hain but at the last rudra kaamyaab ho jata hain.
Ab rudra poori tarah se dhyaan me tha ( aap soch rahe hoge ki rudra itne jaldi dhyaan lagane me kaamyab kaise ho gaya to me bata du rudra me bachpan se hi ye ability hain ki ko her kaam jaldi seekh jata hain.) Rudra ko abhi thodi der gi hi hui the ki usse kuch feel hone lagta hain wo apne ander bahut jayada takat ka anubhav karne lagta hain. Or thodi der baad usse dard hone lagta hain bahut kosis ke baad bhi wo upne aap ko dhyan me nahi rakh pata or uski ankhein khul jati hain. Vo poora paseene se bheega hua tha

Tabhi uske man me guru2 ki awaj aati hain.
Guru2 - bahut aache tum jaisa ker rahe ho mujhe barosha hain ki tum jaldi hi sab seekh loge.
Rudra -( man me) par gurudev mujhe ittna dard kyu ho raha tha. Dhyaan lagate vakt.
Guru 2- vo iss liye kyoki ye tumhaari shuruaat hain or tumhara sharir poori tarah tiyar nahi hain unn saktiyo ko daran karne ke liye ess liye tumhe ittna darddard hua.
Rudra - to phir me kya karu apne sarir ko isske liye tiyyar karne me.
Guruj2ii - kuch nahi tumhaari saktiya tumahare sarir ko apne kabil khud bana legi. Bas maine jo bola hain vo karo .
Rudra - ji gurujii.
Or rudra bahar nikal jata hain or apne hatiyaaro se jo ussne guru2 ke kehne pe maagaein the unse practice karta hain.
Or end me apni exercise poori karta hain or tiyar hone ke liye ghar me pahunch ker sidha bathroom me ghus jata hain. Or tiyar hota hain or nasta karke college ke liye nikal jata hain.

Are Ye kya ye to 26 mahine se band padi hai Lagta hai writer ke hatho ki khujli khatm ho gyi hai isliye update nhi aaye aage ke... Pr jo purane update the vo sandar or kabile tarif the...

 

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We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

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