Fantasy Lord of devil (supernatural, insect, romance , thriller)

[Vaibhav]

Congratulations for new thread bro..... We all r wid u keep posting..........

 

[janu2016]

waiting for first update

 

[Stone cold]

Introduction
Pratap singh (hero's dad) -
India ke top business man , world me inki kai
Companies hain. Ye apni bibi Or bacchon se bahut pyar karte hain

Suman singh (hero ki maa) -
Ye dikhne me bahut khoobsurat hain, ye ek housewife hain par kabhi kabhi pati ki madad
Office me kar deti hain

Rohit( hero ka bada bhai) - ye abhi college pass kiya hain , Or apne dad ki madat karta hain business me. Dikhne me good looking hain

Komal singh ( hero ki badi bahan) - iski age abi 24 hain. ye dikne me bahut khoobsurat hain bilkul kisi heroine jaise par dil ki bahut aachi hain

Kavita singh ( hero ki second sister) - ye bhi Bilkul apni maa pe gayi hain. Par ye abhi college me hain iski age 22 hain

Rudra pratap singh ( hero) - Bilkul blue eyes jinme thoda red color dikhta hain dhyan se dekhne par. 8 abs body bilkul brock Lesnar jaise
( jaise jaise characters aayege unka intro aage de diya jayega)

Introduction to badhiya hai Bhai

 

[John Cena]

Story ka title hi boht tagra ha boss
First update ka intzar rahega

 

[Hatelover]

Update-1
Ye story ek kali raat se shuru hoti hain vo raat amavasya ki raat thi. Kareeb aadhi raat ko
Ek hospital me halchal tej thi or ek mahila ko jo pregnent thi pet me tej dard oth raha tha .
Vahi dooshri jagah heven me sabhi devta ikkthe the Or bahut gahan chintan me the.
Dev1 - wo aaa raha hain
Dev2 - kyon
Dev1- wahi jiske naam se hi poora brahmand darta hain , jiska naam bhi lene se log darte hain
Dev2 - tumahara matlab ussee to nahi
Dev1- ha tum sahi soch rahe ho abki baar usse koi nahi rok sakta kyoki vo isss baar or shaktishali hoga
Dev3 - to ab hum kya kare, gurudev kripa karke iss samasya ka koi samadhan bataye
( ji ha dev1 in sab ka guru hain)
Dev1- ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte , ye sab ab samay pe chod do
Dev2- par gurudev.......
(Dev1 ne beach me hi rok diya)
Dev1- kuch karne ki socha bhi nahi verna bahut pactaoyge aap sab. Maine kaha sab ab samay pe chod do.

Doosri taraf

Ussi hospital me ek admi bahut pareshan tha kyoki uski wife ki deliveri ho rahi thi andar.
Vahi bahar ka mousham bahut hi daravna ho gaya tha tej barish ho rahi thi jaise vo aaj hi poore sahar ko vaha le jayegi tej lighting ho rahi thi jaise - jaise raat gahri ho rahi thi mousham Or daravana hota ja raha tha
Vahi theek adhi raat ko ek tej bijle kadki issi ke saath ander uss orat ne ek bacche ko janm diya vo baccha janm ke baad roya nahi balki ek rahsmayi muskan uske chehre per thi.
Uski eyes bilkul blue the jinme koi dekhe to unme kho gaye doctor's bhi usko dekne me kho gaye. Bahut der baad doctor's ko hos aaya to doc ne dekha vo baccha ek side dekh ke bahut has raha tha doc ne vaha koi dhyan nahi diya ye sochkar ke baccha hain vaise hi has raha hoga. Par us side ek kali parchayi thi
Doctor's uss bacche ko us mahila ke bagal me leta dete hain.
Or bahar aate hain to uss admi ko dekhkar kahte hain congratulations ms pratap aapke yaha ek ladke ne janm liya hain.
(Ji haan ye admi pratap hi hain or ander jo orat hain vo suman hain)
Ye sunkar pratap ko jyada khushi to nahi hui fir bhi usne doc se pucha
Pratap- doctor suman kaise hain
Doctor - vo bilkul fine hain 2 din baad unhe discharge kar diya jayega
Pratap - thanks doctor
2 ghante baad doctor usse ander jaane ki permission de dete hain to vo ander jata hain
To vo ander dekhta hain ki suman leti hain or uske pass me ek baccha leta hain
Pratap unke pass jata hain
Pratap - kaisi ho suman
Suman - theek hu ( rukhi aavaj me)
( yaha me bata du suman Or pratap ye baccha nahi chahte the kyoki unke pahle se hi 3 bacche the par bhagwaan ko kuch or hi mangoor tha)
Pratap Or suman me esi hi kai baate hoti rahti hain .
2 din baad suman hospital se discharge ho jati hain to pratap Or suman ghar ki or nikal jate hain jaha unke baki bacche unka intzar kar rahe the

 

[John Cena]

Lo g lagta ha hero sab ki band baja dega bare hoka

 

[Hatelover]

Update-2
Jab suman Or pratap apne ghar pahucte hain to unke baki ke bacche doud ke unke paas aate hain . Sabse pahle komal unse poochti hain
Komal - mummy bhai kaha hain
Suman haskar apni goud me dikhate hue ye raha.
Komal Or kavita apne chote bhai ko dekhkar bahut kush ho jati hain.
Komal & kavita - ek saath kahti hain mummy hum eeske sath khelege.
Suman - haaa meri bacchiyo khel lena
Or Suman or pratap bacche ko lekar ander jate hain or bate karne lagte hain.
Pratap - Suman guruji ko kab bulau
Suman - kis liye
Pratap - iss bacche ka naam rakhne ke liye
Suman - aap to jante hain hum isss bacche nahi chahte the fir bhi
Pratap - vo to theek hain par hain to humara hi baccha
Suman - theek hain jaisa aapko aacha lage
Pratap - to kal hi gurujii ko bula leta hu
Suman- theek hain
Pratap kal gurujii ko ghar aane ka niyota de deta hain.

Suman or pratap ne ek baat par notice nahi kiya ki wo baccha kabhi aam baccho ki tarah nahi roya tha wo to bus kuch dekh kar din bhar hasta rahta tha.
agle din gurujii aate hain suman Or pratap unke charan chute hain or unka aadar satkar karte hain
Guruji suman se uss bacche ko magte hain suman bacche ko deti hain
Guruji bacche ko jaise hi dekhte hain to unke pasine chutne lagte hain or vo ekdam hadbada jate hain.
Jab pratap Or suman dekhte hain ki baccha has raha hain or guruji ke chehre pe dar Or chinta ko lakeere saf saf dekhi ja sakti thi pratap guruji se poochta hain guruji kya hua
Guruji - ( hadbada kar) ye baccha aam baccha nahi hain .
Ye sun ke pratap Or suman chonk jate hain .
Pratap - iska kya matlab hain gurujii....
Guruji - ye baccha saakchat mahakal ka roop hain..., ye baccha bhagwan shiv ke roudra roop veerbadra ke samaan krodhi ,shaktishali Or mahatejswi hoga. Par.....
Pratap Or suman apne bacche ke baare me sun ke kush hote hain tabhi par ko sunkar pareshan ho jate hain..
Pratap & suman - par kya guruji
Guruji - isss bachche ka gussa samay ke saath badta hi jayega ek samay eesa aayega ki tum dono ka ek galat decision duniya ko bahut bade khatre me daal dega .

Ye sun kar pratap Or suman bahut gabara jate hain or kahte hain
Suman - guruji hum galat decision kabhi nahi lege
Guruji - ye to vidi ka vidhan hain baccho isse koi nahi badal sakta. Or eek baat or dhyan rakha esa bacche ko koi nukshaan pahuchane ki kosis na kare nahi to ye uss ke liye bahut ghatak hoga.
Essi hi kuch or baate hoti hain ( jo aage chal ke pata chalegi)
Guruji - kyoki yah bhagwaan shiv ke rudra roop ka ansh hain to iss ka naam hoga rudra
Pratap or suman ye naam sunke bahut khus ho jate hain
Or thodi der baad guruji chale jaate hain
Guruji ke jane ke baad suman Or pratap man hi man ek decision lete hain
Jo aage chal ke pata chalega

 

[Stone cold]

Update-2
Jab suman Or pratap apne ghar pahucte hain to unke baki ke bacche doud ke unke paas aate hain . Sabse pahle komal unse poochti hain
Komal - mummy bhai kaha hain
Suman haskar apni goud me dikhate hue ye raha.
Komal Or kavita apne chote bhai ko dekhkar bahut kush ho jati hain.
Komal & kavita - ek saath kahti hain mummy hum eeske sath khelege.
Suman - haaa meri bacchiyo khel lena
Or Suman or pratap bacche ko lekar ander jate hain or bate karne lagte hain.
Pratap - Suman guruji ko kab bulau
Suman - kis liye
Pratap - iss bacche ka naam rakhne ke liye
Suman - aap to jante hain hum isss bacche nahi chahte the fir bhi
Pratap - vo to theek hain par hain to humara hi baccha
Suman - theek hain jaisa aapko aacha lage
Pratap - to kal hi gurujii ko bula leta hu
Suman- theek hain
Pratap kal gurujii ko ghar aane ka niyota de deta hain.

Suman or pratap ne ek baat par notice nahi kiya ki wo baccha kabhi aam baccho ki tarah nahi roya tha wo to bus kuch dekh kar din bhar hasta rahta tha.
agle din gurujii aate hain suman Or pratap unke charan chute hain or unka aadar satkar karte hain
Guruji suman se uss bacche ko magte hain suman bacche ko deti hain
Guruji bacche ko jaise hi dekhte hain to unke pasine chutne lagte hain or vo ekdam hadbada jate hain.
Jab pratap Or suman dekhte hain ki baccha has raha hain or guruji ke chehre pe dar Or chinta ko lakeere saf saf dekhi ja sakti thi pratap guruji se poochta hain guruji kya hua
Guruji - ( hadbada kar) ye baccha aam baccha nahi hain .
Ye sun ke pratap Or suman chonk jate hain .
Pratap - iska kya matlab hain gurujii....
Guruji - ye baccha saakchat mahakal ka roop hain..., ye baccha bhagwan shiv ke roudra roop veerbadra ke samaan krodhi ,shaktishali Or mahatejswi hoga. Par.....
Pratap Or suman apne bacche ke baare me sun ke kush hote hain tabhi par ko sunkar pareshan ho jate hain..
Pratap & suman - par kya guruji
Guruji - isss bachche ka gussa samay ke saath badta hi jayega ek samay eesa aayega ki tum dono ka ek galat decision duniya ko bahut bade khatre me daal dega .

Ye sun kar pratap Or suman bahut gabara jate hain or kahte hain
Suman - guruji hum galat decision kabhi nahi lege
Guruji - ye to vidi ka vidhan hain baccho isse koi nahi badal sakta. Or eek baat or dhyan rakha esa bacche ko koi nukshaan pahuchane ki kosis na kare nahi to ye uss ke liye bahut ghatak hoga.
Essi hi kuch or baate hoti hain ( jo aage chal ke pata chalegi)
Guruji - kyoki yah bhagwaan shiv ke rudra roop ka ansh hain to iss ka naam hoga rudra
Pratap or suman ye naam sunke bahut khus ho jate hain
Or thodi der baad guruji chale jaate hain
Guruji ke jane ke baad suman Or pratap man hi man ek decision lete hain
Jo aage chal ke pata chalega

Fantastic Update Bhai

Apna hero devtao Ka avatar bhi hai aur sath Mai devil bhi...

Ab age Dekhte hai akhir kyu iske janm se devta log dar Gaye aur Kya galat decision lenge iske Maa baap jo puri duniya khatre Mai ayegi

Eagerly waiting 4 next update

 

[123fuckerprince]

Update to mast hai Bhai. Bhai aur bada update doge to achha hoga

 

[dead man143]

Congratulations for new story bro

Nice story waiting for next update