ABHISHEK TRIPATHI
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Introduction
India ke Metro City me Ek bada alishan luxurious Mansion, Jisme raheti hai Ek Family jo ki India ki one of the most Richest Family me se ek hai.
So Short me Jaan lete hai Is Family ke sabhi Members ke bare me.
Adesh (Age - 48)
India ke jane mane Business Tycoon.
Aur is Family ke Head.
Jeet (Age - 24)
Adesh ka Beta.
MBA kiya hai aur abhi Adesh se Business sikh rahe hai.
Paridhi (Age - 21)
Jeet ki Wife.
Pahele yeJeet ki secretary thi. Jeet ko Is se pyar ho gaya to Jeet ne Jeed karke Paridhi se shadi kar li.
Tanisha (Age - 22)
Adesh ki Beti.
Filhal MBA kar rahi hai aur sath hi Business bhi sikh rahi hai.
Aanya (Age - 18)
Adesh ki chhoti beti.
Filhal Software Engineering ke first year me hai.
Kavya (Age - 36)
Adesh ki Second wife.
Ye bhi Business me Adesh ka sath deti hai.
Kaveri
Adesh ki paheli Wife. Jiski kuch saalo pahele rahasyamay Death ho gai.
Sushmita (Age - 42)
Adesh ki Chhoti Bahen.
Sath me Ye business Partner bhi hai.
Kaafi saalo pahele Divorce ho chuka hai aur tab se Mansion me Adesh ke family ke sath raheti hai.
Janhvi (Age - 22)
Sushmita ki Beti.
Tanisha ke sath MBA kar rahi hai.
Yuvraj (Age - 20)
Sushmita ka Beta.
Filhaal Engineering ke Second Year me hai.
Misha (Age - 18)
Sushmita ki Chhoti Beti.
Ye Aanya ke sath hi Software Engineering ke first year me hai.
Ye Filhal Jis Mansion me rahete hai usme kai sare rooms hai. Aur Luxury ki sabhi chije moujud hai.
Ground Floor pe Bada sa lounge, Hall, Kitchen, Dining Room, 1 Master Bedroom, Bad sa Office, Gym aur Theater hai.
Ye 1 Master Bedroom koi use nahi karta. Jab Kaveri Zinda thi tab Adesh aur Kaveri ye Master Bedroom ka use karte the.
1st Floor pe bhi 6 Master Bedrooms hai usme se Ek Adesh use karta hai, Ek Sushmita use karti hai aur Ek Kavya Use karti hai.
2nd floor pe bhi 6 Master Bedrooms hai jisme se Ek Jeet aur Paridhi use karte hai, Ek Tanisha use karti hai, Ek Aanya Use karti hai. Ek Jahanvi use karti hai, Ek Yuvraj use karta hai aur Baki bacha ek Master Bedroom Misha use karti hai.
3rd floor pe bhi 4 Master Bedrooms aur Kuch rooms hai jaha Kuch jaruri files aur saman rakha hua hai.
Introduction me Meine Character ko jyada Detail me nahi bataya hai kyunki Mein sabhi bata dunga to Suspense Thik se nahi rahega. Aur Galat bataunga to wo to readers ko ulta ghumane wali baat hui. So better hai ke har updates bad Dhire dhire Aap Readers hi characters ko khud hi judge karo.
Aur Haan, Story me Baki aur Characters bhi honewale hai to Inka Intro bhi aage story me dikhne ko milega jab unka appearance hoga story me tab.
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Update 1
Subah ke 8:30 Baj rahe the. Mansion me Family ke sabhi Members bade se Dining Table pe sath me Breakfast kar rahe the.
Mansions me bas kuch Chuninda Servants ko hi kaam ke liye rakha gaya tha jispe Adesh ko bharosha hota tha. Ese hi 2 log the, Chandan aur Karuna.
Ye Dono Pati-Patni the aur Kaafi saalo se Adesh ke waha kaam kar rahe the. Vese to Adesh ke gaav se hi belong karte the to Ye bhi ek vajah thi Adesh ke unpe bharosa karne ki.
Dono kuch 45-48 saal ke the. Dono ko 1 beta tha aur Ek beti thi jiski shadi ho chuki thi. Beta bhi Dusre shahar me Adesh ki hi Company me Driver ki job karta tha.
Chandan aur Karuna sab ko Breakfast serve kar rahe the.
Adesh : Sabhi Log Dhyan se suniye. Aaj Ek bade Tender ka result announce hone wala hai. Jeet ne kaafi mehnat ki hai is Ke piche. Aur Mujhe Jeet ki Mehnat dekhkar pura bharosa hai ke Jeet ko hi ye Project milega.
Jeet : Thank You Dad.
Sabhi ke chahere pe Khushi thi Adesh ki ye baat sunkar. Halanki ye khushi kuch logo ke chahere pe sachchi thi to kuch logo ke chahere pe juthi.
Adesh : So Aaj ka Dinner special hone wala hai.
Tanisha : Wow Dad. Aapne kuch Surprise Plan kiya hai kya?
Adesh : Yes Tanu, Surprise to hai.
Tanisha : That's Great Dad.
Janhvi : Vaise Mamu, Bataiye to sahi ke Surprise hai kya?
Adesh : Are Bhai Surprise bata diya to wo Surprise thode rahega?
Janhvi : Haan, But Mujhe to bata dijiye. Mein na surprise ka jyada wait nahi kar sakti.
Adesh : Jyada kaha, Bas kuch Ghante ka intezar hai. Vaise bhi Intezar ka apna hi maza hota hai.
Janhvi : Ye baat to Aapki 100 percent sahi hai.
Sushmita : Vaise Man na padega Bhai, Jeet bhi bilkul aap hi ke jese ek successful Businessman ban ne wala hai.
Adesh : Mere jaisa kyu? Mein to Sure hu ke Jeet Mujh se bhi jayada Successful Businessman banega.
Jeet : Dad, Aap ke jaisa ban na hi Mere liye badi baat hai. Aaj bhi Mein Jo hun, Wo aapki vajah se hu.
Sushmita : Jeet Beta, Jara Mere Bete ko bhi thoda apne sath rakhna taki Ye bhi Tumse kuch sikhe.
Jeet : Are Bilkul. Akhir Yuvi to Mera Bhai hai. Ab Usko Mere sath nahi rakhunga to kisko rakhunga.
Janhvi : Aur Mujhe mat bhulna. Mujhe bhi Business women banna hai. Bilkul Mom ke jaisa.
Jeet : Uske liye to Tumhe Bua ke sath hi rahena padega. Abhi to Mein bhi unke level ka nahi hua.
Sushmita : Hue nahi to Ho jaoge Beta. Jis tarah se Tum mahenat kar rahe ho, Bas kuch der aur. Fir to Tumhare Examples diye jayege sab ko.
Adesh : Mera Beta apne Name ko Bakhubi Proove kar raha hai. Jeet. Kaveri ne aur Maine milkar kaafi Khushi se Ye name rakha tha.
Adesh ke Ankho me ye baat bolte hue anshu aa gye.
Tanisha aur Jeat, Adesh ki nam aankhe dekhkar turant hi Aadesh ke pass pahunch gye aur Adesh ki ankho se anshu ponch diye.
Tanisha : Dad, Aaj Khushi ka mauka hai. Aap ese Mayush mat hoiye.
Adesh : Beta, Aaj Kaveri hoti to kitna khush hoti na. Jeet ko Jeet ta hua dekhkar.
Jeet : Aapki baat sahi hai Dad, Par Ab Humare ese Mayush hone se Mom wapas to nahi aa jayegi na.
Adesh : I'm Soory Bachcho. Meine Tum sab ka mood kharab kar diya.
Tanisha : Esi koi baat nahi hai Dad.
Sushmita : Bhai, Aap esa mat socho. Hum ek family hai. Hum sab Apne hai. Esi baat Apne Man me mat laiye.
Janhvi : Haan Mamu, We are the Family.
Adesh : I love you all. Tum sab Mere liye sab se badhkar ho.
Sushmita : Bhai, Hume ab jaldi nikalna bhi chahiye. Wha Program start ho jayega.
Adesh : Haan, Sab Jaldi se ready ho ke aa jao. Fir Nikalte hai sabhi.
Adesh itna bolkar Apne Room me chala jata hai. Baki sab bhi apne Room me ready hone chale gye.
In Jeet's Room
Paridhi : Jaanu, Aaj Mein bahut Khush hu Tumhare liye.
Jeet : Achha Jee.
Paridhi : Haan Ji.
Jeet (Paridhi ko baho me bharte hue) : Mere liye Tum kaafi Lucky ho jaan.
Paridhi : Nahi Ji, Ye to Aapki Mehnat ka Natija hai.
Jeet : Esa Ji. Vaise Aaj Raat ko bhi Mehnat karni hai Mujhe.
Paridhi : Raat ko koi Meeting hi kya koi?
Jeet : Haan. Meri Sexy Wife ke sath.
Paridhi : Mujh se Appointment to li nahi Aapne?
Jeet : Achha, To Ab Tumhari Appointment leni padegi?
Paridhi : Just Joking, Mein to Aap hi ki hun.
Jeet : Naseeb Mere.
Paridhi : Mere bhi.
Fir Jeet ne apne Hoth Paridhi ke hotho pe rakh diye aur use chusne laga. Paridhi bhi Jeet ka pura sath dene lagi. Dono kaafi Madhosh hokar ek dusre ke Hotho ko chuse jaa rahe the. Dono ke bich ka ye passionate Kiss kuch minutes tak chala aur Fir Dono alag hue.
Paridhi : Bas kuch der aur Sabra karo Jaan. Aaj Raat humari hi hai, Special Night.
Jeet : Haan Jaan.
Paridhi : To ab Ready ho ke chale?
Jeet : Haan. Bilkul.
Fir Dono Ready hone lagte hai.
Kavya's Room
Kavya Ready ho chuki thi. Usne Ek Black colour ki Saree paheni thi jisme wo bala ki khubsurat lag rahi thi. Wo Ayne ke samne khadi hokar khud ko nihar rahi thi.
Tabhi Room me Adesh aa jata hai.
Adesh : Kavya.
Kavya Adesh ki awaj sun kar palat ke Adesh ke taraf dekhne lagti hai. Adesh aur Kavya Married to the par name ke hi. Dono ke rooms bhi alag the. Dono office bhi sath me nahi jate the. Adesh ke room me jane ki Kavya ko permission bhi nahi thi. Aur Adesh bahut hi kam baar Kavya ke room me aaya tha.
Kavya : Ji Kahiye.
Adesh : Suno, Aaj Tum Mere sath Mere car me aaogi. Mein nahi chahta Hum dono ko alag dekh ke Media ko free ka masala mile.
Kavya : Ji Thik hai.
Adesh : Hmm, Ab jaldi karo. Der nhi honi chahiye.
Fir Adesh wha se nikal jata hai. Adesh ke piche Kavya bhi apna Purse aur Mobile leke chalne lagti gai.
Kuch hi Der me sab Ready ho chuke the. Mansion ke samne kai luxurious cars khadi thi. Fir Sabhi Apni apni Cars me beth gye aur Cars nikal padi us Company ke Office ke or jha Project ka Tender ka result announce hone wala tha.
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Bhai kya bolu in logo ka family planning ke bare main pata nahi tha kya jo cricket team bana ke gahum rahe the waise congress to the new thread and waiting for new update
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Bhai par Ismail hero kon hai...nam bhi nahi bataya...
Btw nice intro
Btw nice intro