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[Sonika]

Update 42
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AVi Bikki ki gaadi karib 200 metre ki duri par thi....jav basti par apna dhyan lagaya to paya ki waha par logo ki vid khadi hai.....Vid ko dekhke Bikki ka haal aur kharav hone laga tha....to wo aur paas aakar gaadi rok deta hai aur vid ko cheerte huwe aage badne lagta hai.....savhi log Bikki ko dekhke aashu bahane lage thye....aur atmaglani se Bikki ke taraf dekh rahe thye....avi tak Bikki ko innlogo ka behwaar kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha par jav bheed ko chirte huwe aage dekha to Bikki tej awaazke saath chillane laga ....aankho me se paani behne lage ......aur theek usiwakt ek tej baarish THAP THAP.... saath me toffani hawa SIIIIIIIIIIII .....karke ek saath behne laga

Ab aage...

Aage ka drisya dekhke Bikki ki per ne maat dedi thi aur wo ladkhadar wahi zameen par ghutno ko tek ke beth jata hai....rehrehkar uss pyari bachika khilkhilata huwa chehra najar aarahi thi .....Maa ka pyar najar aa rahi thi aur ek bhai ka dular najar aa rahi thi....kaise wolog mere sahare se khus lag rahe thye aur av mere karan ye kya huwa...sochte sochte Bikki ke aankhon me se aashuon ka barsaat hone lagi thi

Baarish ke pani Bikki ke sar se hokar gaalo se sarakkar zameen par tap tap karke gir raha tha....ye sirf paani thi ki Bikki ke aashu ye kehna bahut mushkil tha

10 min hochuke thye Bikki ne ek sabd vi nahi kaha tha aur naahi koi harkate kar raha tha.....Bikki ko aise dekhke Buddha Bikki ke kandhe par hat rakhke dilasa dene lagta hai....

Buddha: Beta tum chale jao yehase....tum ek nek dil ke insaan ho ....tumhari gum ham sehen nahi kar payenge ....tum jao yehase hum sab samhal lenge....humse bada paap hogaya hai av firse ye paap dohrana nahi chahte agar tumko vi kuch hogaya to nark me vi jagah nahi milegi ....chale jao beta kahi dur jisse humlogo ka saya vi tumhare upar na gire...

Bikki Buddhe ka haat jo iswakt Bikkike kandhe par thye jhatke se hata deta hai....aur Buddhe ke taraf ghusse se dekhke

Bikki: mat xuo mujhe saalo hijado....agar firse ek baar haat lagaya to kasam hai devi maiya ki tum saav ko yehi zameen par zinda dafna dunga....

Buddha: To tum kya chahte ho beta.....hamara balidan chahte ho to vi hum khusi khusi apni jaan kurbaan kardenge par Tum yehase chale jao beta....Av ya to aar hoga ya fir paar....hum avi chalte hai shera ke paas aur pura hisaab chukta karke hi waapas aayenge ya fir Hamare laash lout kar aayenge...par jo vi ho av hum chup nahi rehne wale..

Bikki Buddhe ke baate sunkar boukhla jata hai aur Kisi paagal ki tarah Buddhe ko dekhke hasne lagta hai....

Bikki: haha Salo namardo ....jab wakt aaya to saalo apni maa ki gand me chupne chale gaye aur av dekho to saalo bahaduri dikhane ka baat kar rahe hai....

Utne me hi waha betha ek aadmi ghusse se Bikkike upar chillana lagta hai....

Aadmi: Tum kya samajte ho aapne aapko.....kya hum usko bachana nahi chahte thye ...Hum ek kisan hai tumhari tarah goonda nahi....hamare haat me aaujar hote hai fasal lagane ka ...tumhari tarah kisi nihatte ko jaan se maarne wala banduk nahi....Hum din raat mihenat karke do wakt ka rotike liye mihenat kartey hai....ladjhagad kar dusro ko lootke apna pet puja karne wale tum kya samajoge.....humare vi baal bache hai ...agar mujhe kuch hogaya to unka haal vi kuch aisa hi hoga ....ye mein har kish nahi chahta ..... acha hoga agar tum yehase chale jao

Bikki jo uski baatko dhyaan se sun raha tha Buddhe ke taraf dekhke...

Bikki: dekh buddhe ye hai teri aaukat ..... hijade ka fauz ho tum log....jab tak apni baari naa aaye tum log yese hi chup rehjao......jab kisi din terw beteko bich sadak mein zinda jala diya jayega tab samajega ki saalo tum ek namard ho....vagwan ne ye haat sirf mihenat karne ke liye nahi banaye hai ...apna suraxa karne ke liye bhi banaya hai par saalo tum logo ko to kya hai ....wo tumhari beti thodi na thi ....tumhari maa thodi na thi .....thuu maderchod tere jaise ke upar bas thookna hi chaiye jaa maderchod jaakar apna hal(Aaujar) chala le....yeha par tamasha dekhkar kyui betha hai...

Buddha: Beta tum usko nahi jaante ho .....wo bahut khatarnak hai ..... uska hum kuch bigad nahi sakte hai...Beta tum isse dur raho Hum nahi chahte hi hamare karan kisi aur beguna ka jaan chali jaye

Bikki fir kuch der saant reh jata hai aur fir kuch second baad chikhte huwe...

Bikki: Kabar khodna suru karo.... aaj shera ka antim din hoga

Buddhe Bikki ki baate sunkar Bikki ko hilane lagta hai ....wo usko jagana chahta tha ....behki behki baate karke shera ke liye kabar khodne ki baat kar raha tha....

Buddhe: Beta tum chale jao ...... tum kyui apna jaan kurbaan karne pe tule ho ....

Bikki fir Buddhe ko dhakka dete huwe apna phone nikal leta hai aur kisi number par call karke....

Bikki: Shera koun hai? Aur uska exact location mujhe bhej do jaldi

Buddha: Tum samajte kyui nahi ho ..... meine kaha chale jao yehase

Bikki(ghusse me): bas chup kar ....

Aur Muh pe ungli se ishara karke chup rehne ka sallah deta hai...aur khud dur jaakar Raghu ko call kardeta hai...

Raghu: Haan Bikki bol?

Bikki : av wakt aagaya hai...

Raghu: mein kuch samja nahi aur tere labj kyui ladkhada rahe hai....kuch problem hai kya Bol to?

Bikki: av wakt aagaya hai....

Raghu: kis cheezka wakt?

Bikki: VIRUS

TO BE CONTINUE....

Nice update

 

[Sonika]

Maafi chahta hu bhaiya ji....bas time hi nahi mil rahi hai....aur raatko hi time milti hai to likhne me thoda time to lag hi jati hai...

Sorry bhaiya ji....2 am tak post kardunga yara ...

Waiging

 

[Rahul]

waiting new update bhai ji waise aaj bhi 2 am hoga aap na dui update deo aaaj

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Nice update

Waiging

Thanks sonika zee....

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Bhai let night Mt krna atlest 11.30 tk update de do bhaiya ji

Bhaiya ji ab to 4 am hone ko aaye aisa na karo bhaiya ji update jaldi deo

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waiting new update bhai ji waise aaj bhi 2 am hoga aap na dui update deo aaaj

Bhai kal ke liye maafi chahta hu.....Long trip se aaya tha to kab neend aagayi pta hi nahi chala ...

Aur rahul bhai ....do update to possible nahi hai but ek lamba update to chiaye hi chaiye....75% update tayar hogaya hai av bas thodi aur baaki hai....plz wait ...

Once again...

M sorry friends...

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Update 43(mega update)
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Raghu: mein kuch samja nahi aur tere labj kyui ladkhada rahe hai....kuch problem hai kya Bol to?

Bikki: av wakt aagaya hai....

Raghu: kis cheezka wakt?

Bikki: VIRUS

Aab aage...

Raghu: Virus kya matlab...
Bikki: pehle ye bata Shera koun hai?
Raghu: Shera tu usika baat to nahi kar raha
Bikki: kiska?
Raghu: Shera bhai....Dur reh usse ! Sala ek number ka kameena hai...politician se lekar mantri tak ..police se lekar army tak saav ko kharid rakha hai ....maderchod ise dekhke to Jalan hone lagti hai? Sala kya life hai iski ....
Bikki: aur bata?

Raghu: aur haan yaad aaya ...suna tha ki railway bomb blast me pura ka pura wo hi shamil tha par puch kyui raha hai?

Bikki: av uska aakhri din aane wala hai ...

Raghu: mein kuch samja nahi?

Bikki: Virus ko tayar rakh ye hamara pehla sikar hoga

Raghu : nashe me hai kya ...suru mein hi itna bada risk kyui molna chahta hai avi uske liye time hai!

Bikki: tere baap ki aarthi me jana hai kya time dekhke jana pade....bas tayar raakh VIRUS ko

Raghu: dekh Bikki meine ViRUS ko tayar karne me bahut kharch kiye hai aur mein nahi chahta ki ek hi pal me meraa saara paisa doob jaye

Bikki: Raghu (pyar se)

Raghu: Hmmm

BIkki: tu mere pe biswaas rakhta hai ki nahi?

Raghu: jaan se vi jyada ....

Bikki: to varosa rakh mujhpe kuch nahi hoga ....(10 sec tak silent)
Raghu ko phone par Bikki ka sisakne aawaze sun rahi thi...

Raghu: saav thik to hai na Bhai..?

Bikki(rote huwe chillane lagta hai): zinda jala diya...Mujpar kitna varosa rakhte thye aur usne zinda jala diya...unn chote chote bache jo meri aane ka raah dekhkar bethe thye....unko zinda jala diya .....ek maa ki tarah mereko bete ka ehsaas dilaya tha usko zinda jala diya....bhaiya kehte huwe mere upar bharosa rakh rahe thye wo bache use jinda jala diya shera ne...

Bikki av foot foot kar rone laga tha usko beete huwe lamhe jab wo bachi muskura kar Uski taraf dekhti thi...wo bacha dilse bhaiya kehkar pukarta tha aur wo maa jisne Bikki ko maa ki anubhuti dilayi thi....aaj wo uske hi karan mara gaya tha....aur maut vi aisi mili thi ki sunke hi dil ghabra jaye ...ye saab yaad karke Bikkika dil par ek tej dard hone laga tha....

Raghu Bikki ka haal samaj chuka tha ..... jo vi ho usne Bikki ko bachpan se lekar aaj tak apne saath rakha tha to usko Bikki ka haal janne me ek xen vi nahi laga...

Raghu : Bikki Dil chota mat kar....apne dil me patthar rakhde ye aashu tab bahana jav uss sale ka boti boti karke kutto ko khilayenge tab yaad karna unnlogo ko ....av hum dikha denge saaloko Hum se dusmani ka natija.... mein avi nikalta hu ....tu apna dhyan rakh

Bikki raghu ke baate dhyan se sun raha tha ....av usko ehsaas ho gaya tha ki aashu bahane se kuch nahi hoga .....av bas unki aatma ke santi ke liye unnlogo ko isse vi bura mout dena hoga aur chillakar..

Bikki: haramzado tumlogoko aisi mout dunga ki dekhne wale vi darke behos ho jayenge....

Aur buddhe ko apne saath lekar apni gaadi se tej raaftar ke saath shera ka adde par nikal leta hai......

Udhar ka ramjam kuch alag hi tha ..... ladkiyan nangi hokar naach rahi thi ...tej awaaz ke saaath muzic lagi hui thi...aur waha par sherake aadmi daru rum wagera pikar mast hokar ladkiyon par paise uda rahe thye....












Bikki ne aate hi hawa par do fire kardi jisko sunte hi waha par savi log chanakhu ho jate hai ..... Nach rahi ladkyan apne kapde uthakar Idhar udhar vagne lagti hai....Shera ke aadmi Apna guns uthakar Bikki ke wor dekhte huwe...

S1(shera ke aadmi): koun hai tu..? Teri itni himmat....saale tujhe hum batate hai kehte huwe Bikki ke upar Apna guns tak deta hai...

BIkki: Bikki Apna gun wahi fekkar apni jeb me kuch dhudne lagta hai...

Bikki ka surrender karte huwe dekhkar wo log Nischint hokar Bikkiko ghoorne lagtey hai ...

Par ye kya ....jaise hi Bikki ne pocket me se haat nikala to waha grenade nikai aur Bikki unnlogo ke saamne hi uska pin nikalkar tayar rehta hai....

S1: ae saale marna chahta hai kya... bahar fek usko(bomb dekhkar to fat gayi thi)

BIkki buddhe ki taraf dekhkar.: koun thye wo log?

Buddha ek ek karke saavko dekhne lagta hai....par usko wo log jo basti par aaye thye wo kahi dikhayi nahi deti ...

Buddha: wo yehapar nahi hai?

S1: kya keh raha hai ...meine kaha fek usko

Bikki: Ruk fekta hu kehkar grenade ko unki taraf fekne ka ishara karta hai jisko dekhkar wo log dar ke mare pasina pasina hojate hai....

S1: Bhai bol to sahi tujhe kya chaiye
...bekar me apne saath saath humlogo ko vi kyui lejana chahta tha

BIkki: wo log kaha par hai?

S1: koun?

BIkki: jo aaj basti par aaye thye?

S1: kailash ki baat kar raha hai kya?

Bikki: Koun kailash aur bata wo kaha par milega?

S1: Wo abhi factory ke saath bane huwe Gharme hoga ....avi nikla hai yehase ek xokri lekar!

Bikki : aur wo dusra koun hai jo uske saath aaya tha aur wo baaki ke log kaha par milenge?

S1 : wo log to bahar jaa chuke hai bhaiya se milne avi bas kailash hi hai yehapar!av to fek de ye .....

Bikki usko koi jawaab nahi deta aur Buddhe ko apne saath chalne ke liye kehkar gaadike taraf nikal jata hai....

Waha par sherake aadmiyon me ghamagham discussion ho rahi thi avi ka haadseko lekar aur isike saath BOOOOOOM....tej dhamaka puri ki puri Building titar bitar hogaye ....laasho ki tukde tukde hawa par Udne lagi.....

Huwa ye tha ki Bikki ne bahar nikalte hi wo Bomb waha per fek diya tha to dhamaka to hona hi tha!

BIkki ye saav dekhne ke liye vi nahi ruka aur gaadi nikalkar factory ke taraf chalne laga .... Buddha ye saav fati aankho se piche mudkar dekh raha tha

Factory par pahuchte hi Bikki wo ghar dhudne laga jo factory se sat kar bani huwi thi ....chota sa ghar tha sayad ye ghar bas isikaam ke liye hi banaya ho ki ladkiyon laakar chodne ke liye...

Ghar ke andar abhi ghamasam chudai ka khel ho raha tha....kailash kisi ladki ke upar chada huwa tha aur bahut jor jor se usko pel raha tha....

Kailash : Sali randi Khuli hui choot hai....kab andar ho ya kab bahar pata hi nahi chalta...

Ladki: sale teri aaurat thodi na hu ..... itne se paise se tujhe kya koi kunwari ladki milegi....jaa jakar khudki maa chod le

Kailash : Sali ghasti maa par jati hai
...kehte huwe karara shot marne lagta hai..jisse wo Sali randiko vi thoda thoda dard hone laga tha...

Ladki: sala maderchod dheere kar ....




Kailash kisi bullet train ki tarah chalu horaha tha ..... upar niche hoke jhatke pe jhatke de raha tha ...
Av karib karib wo jhadne laga tha ...aur karara jhatke marke jhadne hi wala tha ki dhadam se darwaza tut jata hai ....usko koi samaj nahi aaraha tha ki kisne darwaza tod diya...to wo piche mud ke dekhne hi wala tha ki Bikki ne apni mutthi kaske kailash ke sarpe mar deta hai jisse wo wahi behos ho gaya tha...wo ladki kailash ke behos hote hi kapde uthakar vaag jati hai...

Karib karib 15 min baad kailash ko hos aata hai aur jaise hi aankhe khuli to khud ko kisi chair pe bandhe hone ka aaabhas hota hai....

Kailash : koun hai tu .? Aur tu merese kya chahta hai

Bikki kailash ke wor dekhke ek mukka fir mar deta hai jisse uske naak ki haddi tut gayi thi aur khoon behne laga tha....

Bikki ek marker leke Uske chehre ke side side me kuch kermer karne lagta hai....

Kailash( dard se tadapkar): kya kar raha hai...? Xod mujhe ...tu jaanta nahi mein koun hu

BIkki apne hi dhun me marker se uske chehre par ek nisaan bana raha tha.
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Buddha vi andar aachuka tha aur wo bikki ko aisa karte huwe dekhne lagta hai....

Kailash: saale buddhe ise bol ki mein koun hu.... jinda nahi xodunga tumlogoko

Buddha : Tu hame zinda kaise nahi xodega jab ki tu kuch hi der me marne wala hai...

AUr bikki ke taraf dekhke ..

Buddha: Beta tum kya kar rahe ho....aise kya bana rahe ho iske chehre par

Bikki Buddha ko dekhke ek khoufnak hasi jhad deta hai jisko dekhke Buddhe ko vi dar lagne laga tha aur chup hona hi behtar samajta hai...

ABhi lagvag lagvag bikki ne uske chehra par apna art kor chuka tha ....Kailash chilla raha tha aur Buddhe usko aise chillana dekhkar man hi man khuss ho raha tha...

Bikki fir ek bar apne car ki taraf chala jata hai ....

Kailash : koun hai ye? Bata saale ...tum dono ko mein zinda nahi xodunga

BUddhe : Teri kukarmo ko saja dene ke liye ek farishta aaya hai...Uss farishte ka naaam hai BIKKI..

Kailash : Saalo ruk tumlogo ko to mein apne haato se marunga ....

Buddha avi kuch bolne hi wala tha ki Bikki haatme ek chota sa chaku lekar andar aajata hai....

Kailash Bikki ko apne haat me chaku dekhkar dar raha tha fir vi akad dekhana chalu hi tha...

Kailash : xod mujhe kutte ....tune shera bhai ke khas aadmi ko yeha baandkar rakha hai....iska anzaam bahut bura hoga...

Bikki avi vi kuch bol nahi raha tha ..... aur Kailash ke paas aakar ek mukka fir se jad deta hai...naak se khoon tap tap karke uske tshirt par behna suru ho gaya tha....

Kailash : xod mujhe haramzade

Bikki fir ek lambhi saas khichte huwe Kailash ke najdik aakar marker ke nishan pe chakuse kaatne lagta hai....kailash waha tadapkar chilla raha tha aur udhaar Bikki uss marker ke bane huwe ghere par gehra gehra ghau banakar kat raha tha.....khoon ki tej dhar behrahi thi.....Kailash ka haal bahut bura lag raha tha aur chillate huwe madat mag raha tha par madat karne wala sayad hi koi tha...

Buddha kailash ko aise dekhke khus to bahut tha par dar usse vi jyada ....khoonki holi horahi thi aur Bikki kisi machli ko jaise Kailash ko kaat raha tha....

Marker ke ghere par pura kat chuka tha aur rakt ka dhara behne laga tha....kailash cheekh cheekh ke guhar raha tha aur kamre me ek vayankar darawna maahol ban chuka tha....

Jab chehre par bane pure ghere ke upar kat liya to Bikki fir apne car ki taraf chala jata hai....

Buddha : Bacho ko jinda jala diya tha tune....aur cheekh haramkhor....aur cheekh kutte teri pukar sunneke liye koi nahi aayega...hamare bhaiyon ko kaise mara tha yaad kar ....aaur cheekh kutte

Kailash av kuch bolne ki halat me nahi tha.....to wo tadapkar wahi rehjata hai....itne me hi Bikki haatme ek kaichi(scissors) aur ek gloves lekar firse waapas aajata hai

Aatey hi Bikki kailash ka sar upar karke dhyan se dekhne lagta hai....dekh raha tha ki kahi xut to nahi gayi katne me...

Kailash Bikki ko chot khaye kutte ki tarah dekh raha tha.....uske saamne dayake liye bheekh maag raha tha...par Sayad ye Rehem naam ki cheez bikki ke dictionary me tha hi nahi

Bikki fir usko dhyan se dekhke haatme gloves laga leta hai aur scissor ko uske kate huwe vaagme ghusa deta hai.....aur scissor ko waha ghusate hi usko mod kar uske xaale ko baahar nikalne lagta hai....

AV to dard ki koi sima nahi bachi thi...ye wakt yesa tha ki Dekhne walo ko hi dard hone lage aur rahi baat jiske upar ye horaha tha uska haal to kuch kehne layak hi nahi tha.....dard se chilla raha tha...maut ke liye yamaraajko yaad kar raha tha par mout itni aasani se thodi na milni thi uss haram ke pilleko

Bikki ek ek karke kailash ke chehre ke wo xaale(skin) ko bahar khichne lagta hai....maut ka dardnak khel dekhna av buddhe ki bas ki baat nahi thi to wo aankhe jabarjasti bheench ke rakhta haiaur kaano ko haat se jor se band karne lagta hai par Cheekhe itni jyada thi ki uska cheekhna uss buddhe ki kaano par pad jati thi ....ye sunke hi buddhe ka pair tharthar karke kaampne laga tha

BIkki ne uska chehre ke saare xaale xil diya tha ....ab koi awaaz nahi aarahi thi iska matlav wo wahi par behos ho chuka tha par saanse avi vi chal rahi thi....

Bikki firse ek baar bahar car ki taraf chala jata hai....jab Bikki bahar gaya toh Buddha thoda sa aankh kholke kailash ke upar dekha hi tha ki Buddha wahi par dher hojata hai ....kailash ka chehra av aisa tha ki koi vutiya flm me dikhata ho....ek vi xaale nahi bachi thi uske chehrepar...daante(teeth) baahar se pure dikh rahi thi ....isse bada dil dehlane wala scene sayad hi kisine dekhi ho ....khoon tap tap karke beh raha tha....av yesa kuch dekhke to koi vi behos hojata to buddha kaunsi khet ki muli tha jo ye sehen kar pata...

Buddha wahi par behos ho chuka tha...av isswakt kamreme do aadmi yese thye jo Behos pada huwa tha ....

BIkki haatme ek bada sa dibba lekar room par chala aata hai aur buddhe ko wohi behos paakar ek baar katilana muskaan jhad deta hai....

AUr kailash ke najdik aakar ek laat kailash ke xaati par maar deta hai....jissekailash ke saath saath chair vi wahi jameen par gir jata hai aur isike saath kailash ko firse ek baar hos aajati hai....

Aankhe kholkar Bikkiko ek tak lagaye dard ke maare si si kar ke Bikki ko dekhne laga tha...aur Bikki usko yesa tadapte huwe dekhkar ek chota sa hasi muh pe laakar....uske muh par wo bada sa dibbe pe laaya huwa tel xirak deta hai....Bikki yese saavdhani se ye saav kar raha tha ki wo tel bas uske muh par hi gir rahi thi....

BIkki petrol ko uske muh par xidak ke lighter jala deta hai aur ek baar upar ki taraf dekhke....

BIkki: Behen mein isko nark bhej raha hu.... tere khoonka badla ek ek se lunga....innlogo ko yesi buri maut dunga ki tere aatma ko santi milegi....tumlogo mujhe xodke to chaale gaye ho par apna dhyan rakhna....mein marte dam tak tumlogo ko vul nahi paunga...

KEhkar uss jalti hui aag ko uske muh par fek deta hai....aur kailash huuuu huuuu karke tadap tadap kar wahi ludak jata hai.....kailash ka sirf chehra hi jala hua tha aur uske kate huwe xaale ko wahi table pe raakhkar Bikki buddhe ko uthane lagta hai....

Bikki buddhe ko laat marte huwe...

Bikki: uth sale ..... warna tujhe vi yehi pe zinda jala dunga

BUddhe bikkika laat khake uth chuka tha aur bikkike haiwaniya saakal dekhke bahut dar gaya tha to wo Bikki ke saath saath waha se nikal jata hai....

TO BE CONTINUE...

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

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Agree with your comments

Superb, fantastic and emotional update, so now would know about first encounter of Virus
Good going

But Liked your update and what Happened to you, any problem.
Could I be any help to you, please let me know
Thanks

Welcome

Your way of writing is wonderful

Always with you and can't miss such a good story

No problem, will wait for your updates
First you take care of other things.
Happy Journey

Nice update bhai aage update me sirf or sirf action chalega

Nice update

Always Welcome

Zabardast update bhai

Bikki ka gussa jayj hai bc jo Jo bikki bola wo bilkul Sach hai ....
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Virus ....ki entry yahi SE hi thi....ab malum clega asal Mai virus Kiya hai....
Waiting for next update

waiting new update bhaiya ji

Brilliant update

Virus Infection will start now

Bhayankar darwana update yrrr.
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Esa to koi dictator bhi nhi karta jo factory k accche k liye shera aur uss k kutte kr rahe h.
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Bahot khaufnaak aur dardnaak mout mili h becare logo ko.
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Sahi nafarat karta h bikki inn basti wala hijdo se jinhone aapne teen lasho par bachaye h.
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Sona to ye sun kar tut hi jayegi aur uss k maan mai bhi basti walo k liye wahi bhav paida ho sakte h ya nhi bhi.
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Iss liye ye buddha nhi bta rha tha apne kukarmo ko.
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Shera tu to gyo.
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Sorry bro for late review.
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Congrats for an entertaining century and go on on for more like rohit and kohli and sir sachin.
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Bhaitake a chill pill kam karte raho shanti se aur jab accha aur suitable man ho to update dedo bas aap ka intjar hoga full support k saath.
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Keep posting.
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Yup bro
Take a chill pill and give us more thrill...

Waiting for next ---

Bhai update kabtk aayga?

Bhai let night Mt krna atlest 11.30 tk update de do bhaiya ji

Bhaiya ji ab to 4 am hone ko aaye aisa na karo bhaiya ji update jaldi deo

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.................. update ..............?

Nice update

Waiging

waiting new update bhai ji waise aaj bhi 2 am hoga aap na dui update deo aaaj

Update posted mie frenzz....

Hope u would like it and give me ur precious reviews...

Mein aapka dost
#$B&V

 

[Sanju]

Bahut hii darbana dayak mrityu diya bhai parte samay aisa lag raha tha samne dekh raha huu mast update bhai