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Update 9(mega update)
Aaj sona subah 4 am par hi uth gayi thi....aaj puja ka bthday jo tha isiliye sona jyada hi exited thi jiske karan uski neend naa hone ke barabar hi tha.... agar koi vi Jyada exited ho kal ke liye to usko kaisi neend aati hai wo to aap vi samajh hi chuke honge....
Fir sona fresh honeke liye bathroom me chali jati hai aur nahane lagti hai..aur shower ke baad apne kapde pehenkar kitchen se chaye banakar pine lagti hai itne mein 5:30 ho chuka tha....to wo apne bhai ke liye vi chai garam karne lagti hai chai cup me rakhkar Bikki ke room me chali jati hai...avi vi Bikki neend mein lambi lambi saase lekar so raha tha...
Sona Bikki ke pass jakar Bikki ko hilakar uthane lagti hai
Sona: Uthiye na bhaiya subah ho chuke hai
Bikki avi vi neend mein hi bolne lagta hai: sone de na betu
Sona fir vi bikki ko hilane lagti hai fir jaise hi sonaka haath bikki ko lagti hai bikki sona ke haat ko pakadkar apni takiye banakar usike upar sar rakhkar so jata hai Bikki avi vi Gehri neend mein soya huwa tha
Sona Bikki ko aise soya hua dekhkar muskurane lagti hai aur Bikki ko gor se dekhne lagti hai.....wo najane kitne wakt se sirf Bikki ko aise hi dekhne lagti hai aur maan mein sochne lagti hai
Sona(man me): kitna masum sa chehra banakar so rahe hai....kitna pyara hai na vaiya mujko kabhi taklif mein dekh nahi sakte usko wo baat yaad aa jati hai jab uska pehla mensuration huwa tha tab Sona ko bahut pet dard huwa tha aur rone lagti hai utne mein hi bikki aa jata hai
(Flash back)
Bikki: Betu kya huwa betu kuch to bol mein saav thik kardunga
Sona: Bhaiya pet bahut dukh raha hai kehkar rone lagti hai
Jab sona ke aakhon se aasu niklane lagte hai to Bikki to jaise wahi par tham jata hai....usko kuch samaj nahi aata aur khud ba khud Bikki ke aakhon se vi aasu ki dhar beh jata hai aur jaldi jaldi apna haat sona ke pet mein rakhkar sehlane lagta hai....
Bikki:ku...kuch nahi hoga betu mein hoo na...kuch nahi hoga (Bikki ki to jaise jaban hi atak gaye thye)
Sona jav Bikki ko aise dekhti hai to Sona apna dard hi bhul jati hai aur vaiya ko rote hue dekhkar wo aur jyada rone lagti hai
Sona: kuch nahi huwa vaiya mein theek hoo....mera dard chala gaya hai vaiya aap roiye mat ...
Aur bikki sona ke aakhon mein dekhne lagta hai...aur sonaki behte aasu ko dekhkar usko aur rona aa jata hai aur rote huwe hi wo sonake aakhon ka aasu saara pi jaata hai.....
Bikki:kuch nahi hoga Sona tujhe mein hoon naa saav thik kardunga (Bikki sona ko sona tabhi bulata hai jab wo bahut daar gaya hota hai ya fir usko sonase kuch jaruri kaam ho ) Ye baat sona ko vi acchi tarah se yaad tha aur Bikki ko aise dara huwa dekhkar wo Bikki ko jor se gale laga deti hai....aur kuch der yese hi reh jaate hai dono fir Bikki dard kaam karne wali medicine lene ke liye jaise hi uthta hai Sona ke salwar mein thoda sa khoon dekh leta hai jo mens hone ke baad aata hi tha Par Bikki ko ye baat abtak pata nahi tha...aur wo to intna daar jata hai ki usko kuch bhi samaj nahi aata aur sona ko waisi hi halaatmein uthakar apni jeepmein rakhkar sidha hospital pahuch jata hai....
Bikki
octor doctor....jaldi se aajao ....kaha ho tum log Sona ko to abtak apni salwar mein khoon ke dhabbe nahi dikhe the to wo Bikki ko aise dekhkar aakhe faad ke dekhne lagti hai....jab kafi der se doctor nahi aaya to Bikki bahut jyada gussa ho jata hai aur dahar kar bolta hai....
Bikki: maderchod Mein 3 ginta hu aur agar 3 ginne se pehle yeha doctor nahi aay to iss hospital ka naamo nishaan nahi bachega(Bikki kabhi vi apni behen ke saamne yesi word use nahi karta tha aur aaj usko najane kya ho gaya tha wo hos mein hi nahi tha ....apni behen ke itne fikar ho rahi thi ki wo kuch samajh nahi paa raha tha)
Bikki ko yese ghurrakar bolne se waha ke sabhi logo ke to jaisi gand fat gayi thi aur reception mein bethi ladki jaldi se daudkar doctor neelam ko bulane lagti hai.....
Receptionist: Dr. Neelam jaldi aap counter pe aajaiye urgent hai
Neelam vi daudkar sidha counter par aajati hai aur waha ka situation ko samajne ki koshish karti hai par jaise hi Aapron mein bethi ladki ko Bikki dekhta hai sidha unke pairon par gir jata hai
Bikki: doctor kuch kijiye meri behen bahut taklif mein hai
Dr.neelam: ok aap patient ko icumein lekar aaiye mein dekhti hu itna hi bola tha ki Bikki jaldi se uthkar sona ko god mein utha leta hai aur jaldi se icu ke taraf vagne lagta hai....
Sona ki to jaisi aakhe fati ki fati reh gayi thi apne bhaiya ko dekhkar
Dr. Neelam vi uske puche piche jaldi jaldi chali jati hai icu mein fir puchti hai...
Dr. Neelam :waise huwa kya hai
Bikki: meri behen ke pet mein bahut dard ho raha hai aur khoon vi beh raha hai
Sona jaisi hi khoon word sunti hai to fir apne aap ko dekhne lagti hai aur jab uske niche salwarmein khoon ke dabbe dikhayi deti hai to wo saari baate samajh jati hai aur sarmakar wahi farsh par beth jati hai
Doctor neelam vi saav baate samaj gayi thi isiliye neelam hasne lagti hai...
Bikki ko jav doctor hasne lagti thi to bahit ghussa aata hai....
Bikki: Meri behen waha taklif me hai aur tujhe hasi aa rahi hai lagta hai tumhe aapni jaan pyari nahi hai dhamki dene ke lehje mein bolta hai
Doctor neelam vi baat ko samajkar apni dono haat Bikki ke dono gaalo par laga deti hai aur....
Neelam: How cute....bahut pyar karte ho apni behen se
Bikki: jaan se vi jyada
Neelam: hmmm...to fir thik hai tumhe tenson lene ki jarurat nahi hai saav thik hai
Bikki: kaisi behki behki se baate kar rahe ho....dekh nahi rahi meri behen kitne taklif mein hai
Neelam: Taklif...but where?
Bikki: aakh mein se ye chasma hata do...kehkar wo sonake taraf dekhne lagta hai par ye kya sona najre jhukaye wahi beth rahi thi aur salwar pe lage khoon ke dhabbe haath se chupane ki naakam koshis kar rahi thi
Bikki bas usko hi ghurne lagta hai aur aakho se kya huwa ka ishara karta hai.....
Sona fir vi najre jhukaye apni pair ki panjo se jameen kuredne lagti hai
Fir dr neelam bolti hai: arey mere Bhondu raja .....Unko kuch nahi huwa
Bikki: bata na betu tuje kya huwa hai
Neelam:haha avse aapke betu betu nahi rahi av wo baadi ho gayi hai aur ye usika nisan hai
Bikki:matlab?
Neelam: Apne kabhi mensuration ke bareme suna hai....
Bikki kuch nahi bolta bas hmmm hi boldeta hai
Neelam: av aapki behen jawani ki pehle sidi chadh chuki hai ....aur ye usika jeeti jagti sabut hai and by the way its natural aur har ladki ko ye phase se gujarna hi padta hai
Bikki av baate samaaj chuka tha kyui ki usne vi mensuration cycle ko achi tarah se pada tha aur Bikki ghor se sona ke taraf dekhne lagta hai par kuch nahi bolta.....aur neelamko dekhkar thank you doctor kehne lagta hai
Neelam :hmm..waise aapka naam kya hai
Bikki: Bikki aur wo meri behen sona aur aapka
Neelam : myself dr. Neelam but u can call me just neelam
Bikki:thank you neelam ji...
Neelam ko unke upar bahut pyar aa raha tha....
Neelam : aur ye ji si hataiye ....aur ye leejiye mera number aapko kaisi vi parisani huwi to mujko bata dena mein aa jaya karungi
Bikki: nahi neelam ji ....aap khamokha kyui parishan hoti rahogi hamare liye
Neelam: agar ye ji nahi hataye to jarror pareeshan ho sakti hu
Bikki : ok neelam....aap pareeshan mat hoyiye
Neelam: isme parisani wali kaunsi baat hai....I just like u if u need any kind of help from me...plz just inform me ok Bikki
Bikki: aapka bahut bahut dhanyabaad kehkar wo neelam se unka num lekar waha se bida hota hai
Aur aaj neelam Bikki ka family doctor hai ...
Now back in reality
Sona ko jab ye baate yaad aati hai wo thoda sa muskurakar Bikki ke dono gaal par apni haat rakh deti hai aur sehlaane lagti hai....avi kuch der hi huwa tha ki najane sona ko kya huwa wo jaldi se apne vaiya ke forhead ko chumne lagti hai aur jaise hi chumna suru kiya tha ki sona bahut madhosh ho jati hai aur bikki ke maathe ko joro jor se chusne lagti hai ....sona bikki ke forhead ko aise chus rahi thi ki wo bikki ka sar na hokar ek honey ka dibba ho ...jisme bahut sara honey laga hua ho ....aur bikki ko forhead mein aate pasina sayad sonake liye honey ki hi kaam kar rahi thi ...wo aur jyada bikki ke mathe ko jor jor se chusne aur chatne lagti hai...fir kuch der baad Bikki ke mathe ko xodkar wo bikki ke gaalo ko vi chusne lagti hai aur usme vi jibh lagakar geela karne lagti hai.....sayad aaj pehli dafa ho raha tha ki Sona apne hosh mein hi naa ho nahi to wo bahut satarkata panya karti thi...unka jee to always yehi chata tha ki bhaiya ko bahut jyada pyar kare unko chume chate uska dil to bahut karta tha par wo abhi tak sayad wo baat apne tak hi rakhne ke liye safal vi huwi thi par aaj usko koi hos hi nahi tha aapne aapmein control kho chuki thi aur bahut jyada bikki ke gaal ko chuss rahi thi jisse bikki ka neend to kaafi pehle hi vang ho chuka tha...aur wo aakhe faadkar apni behen ko aisa karte huwe ghurne lagta hai.....jab sona ke aakhon mein dikhne ke liye Bikki thoda sa sar uthata hai yehi isne galti kardi aur jaise hi Bikki apna sar hilata hai sona to sapno ki duniya se lautkar isi duniya me aa pahuchi .....Aur unka lips wahi vision ke gaal par ruk gaya.....av to sona ke pasine pasine ho gaye thye....jab emotionse bahar aane ke baad apne kiye kartut par sochti hai to wo bahut dar jaati hai.....bhaiya ka naaraz hone ka daar sonako bahut saha rahi thi...
Jab sona wahi tham gayi aur uska paseena Bikki ke muh mein girne laga tav bikki ko bahut samaj aagayi aur sona ka itna darna usko bahut bura laga isiliye wo sona ko apne niche letakar khud sona ke upar aagaya...
Bikki: Betu avi tum kya kar rahi thi
Sona to chup chap atmaglani se darwaje ke taraf muh karke bethi huwi thi
Bikki:Bol na betu...avi kya kar rahi thi
Ku .kuch nahi sona jaise taise itna to bol deti hai...aur Bikki muskurane lagta hai
Aur bikki aao dekha na taav sona ke gaalpar daat gaad deta hai.....Bikkki: sayad meri behen ye karrahi thi kehkar daat ke gad jane se gaal par huwa thoda sa gaddha ko chatne lagta hai ....sona ki to jaise jaan hi jaa chuki thi fir Bikki ko bolti hai
Sona: xodiye na bhaiya kya kar rahe ho .....
Bikki: Wohi kar raha hu jo meri betu mere saath kar rahi thi kehkar dusre gaal par vi daat gadkar wahi saav karne lagta hai
Kuch der baad Sona bikki ko jor se dhakel deti hai aur uthkar Bikki ke taraf dekhnw lagti hai...
Aur kaafi der tak room mwin sannata cha gaya tha fir sona hi iss sannate ko todte huwe...
Sona: Bhaiya uthiye na bahut der ho gayi hai ...aaj puja ka birthday par vi jana hai kehkar waha se jaldi se apne room mein vaag jati hai......
Sorry for the late update....Hope u will like this
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Sorry for my inconvinience....
And thnks for ur good support ....
Update posted check it out
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