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Illusion

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BIkki shera ko khichte huwe apne gaadi ke taraf le chalta hai aur shera ko dekte huwe...

BIkki: tujhe to mein jee varke pyar karunga..

Ab aage...

BBikki sherako apne saath basti ke taraf le chalta hai....aur unke admi Bikki ke piche piche horn bajate huwe aarahe thye....jiski awaaz sunkar basti wale sabhi ghar ke bahar nikalkar Gadiyon ki taraf dekhne lagte hai...

Bikki ne Basti ke bich chourahe par jaakar gaadi ko drift lagate huwe rok diya....aur gaadi se utar gaya....

Fir kuch der basti walo ki taraf ghusse se dekhte huwe gaadi ki dusri darwaza kholkar shera ko bahar khich ke nikalta hai....

Bikki(Basti walo ko dekhkar): kya isse darte ho tum log ...(Fatak ek punch Shera ke pet par)...iss kutte se darte ho(Fir ek fatak)...

Sabhi log waha par Tamasha dekh rahe thye ...jab vi Bikki shera ko maarta tha unke dil me ek thandak pahuchti thi...Chehre par ek khusi si jhalkne lagti thi...

BIkki(shera ke taraf dekhkar): Dekh be sale....Tu apne aap ko raja samajne laga tha...Hoga tu Inn namardo me sehensah par saale tune galat aadmi ke saath panga liya hai...Av tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta ...dekhle ye jindagi ki aakhri ghadi...

SHera avi vi rassi se bandha huwa tha ....Muh par patti lagi huwi thi aur kuch bol nahi paaraha tha ...par dard aur dar ka mishran uske chehre se saaf jhalak rahi thi....Rehem ke liye aankhe taras gaye thye par Kya usko rehem milna tha...Obviously not...coz its Bikki

Bikki(sashank ke taraf dekhke): bhai zara ek razor blade do...

Sashank Bikki ko ek dharila razor ka blade pakadwa deta hai....aur Bikki uss razor ko pakadke shera ke taraf dekhke ghusse se ek mukka jad deta hai...

Avi kuch second hi huwa tha ki Bikki shera ka pehna huwa kapda pura ka pura faad deta hai...Underwear ko xodke

Shera nam aankho ke saath Bikki ko dekh raha tha...Aage uske saath kya hone wala hai soch sochkar hi Underwearme pishav nikal chuka tha...

Bikki: saale mut raha hai .... teri maa ki(kehte huwe sherake muh par ek mukka jad deta hai jisse uski aage ki do daat jameen par gir gayi)

SHera dard se haanf raha tha .... par shaitan ke aage ye sab kaha chalne wali thi....jab unn nanhi se bacho ko jindaa jala diya tha tab kitna dard hua hoga....jab factory par laasho ki line lagayi thi tab unke bache par kaisa bita hoga...Shera sachme rehem ke layak vi to nahi tha

Bikki shera ko wahi jameen par gira deta hai aur uske sar ko majbuti se pakadkar jameen par ghisne lagta hai...jisse uske chehre se khaal noch gayi thi....khoon ka katra katra beh raha tha ....Basti walo jo avi tak Khus hokar shera ka tadapna dekh rahe thye ab Khusi to mano kayi gum ho gayi thi...shera ko yesi halatme dekhke unke insaniyat jag gayi thi par roke to rokega koun .... wo log chahte thye shera ko buri tarah se maarna par ye buri tarah iska meaning kya tha .... ye unnlogo ke samaj se pare thi...aur aaj itni behremi ko dekhke wo log khud ke sarir par vaari hone jaisa aavas hone lagta hai....Par ye to just suruwati khel hi tha aur aage kya hone wala hai ye to unlogo ne kabhi socha tak nahi tha.....

Bikki fir waha se nikalkar basti ke taraf chala jata hai aur Khiye lage huwe kil aur ek patthar ko lekar fir wapas chala aata hai...

Aate hi Shera ko apne muthi se pakadkar chehra upar ke taraf karke Uss kileko aankhe par gad deta hai....jisse uski aankhe fat gayi thi aur khoon aankho se hote huwe behkar jameen par tapak ke gir rahi thi....shera dard se xatpata raha tha aur udhar basti ke logo me vi ek cheekh nikal jati hai mano ki ye saav unke upar horaha ho....wo log dar ke maare kaampne lage thye ...shera ka haal dekhke kisike paas vi hilne ki sahas nahi jut rahi thi....shaitaniya khel jisko dekhke shaitan ka rooh vi kaamp jaye par yeha bikki ke chehre par ek vi bhaaw nahi dikh raha tha....Av khud hi socho ki murgi ko halal karte wakt unn murgi kaatne walo ko koi asar padta hai bas yesa hi haal Bikki par tha ....fark sirf itna tha ki wha par murgi nahi thi balki ek jinda aadmi tha....

BIkki ek ek karke sheraki dono aankhe afod deta hai....shera dard ke mare Per idhar udhar maar raha tha par iski jehen me itni sakti kaha thi ki wo waha se xut nikle....

Bikki uske upar koi rehm naa dikhate huwe usko ulta karke uske pith par razor se kaatte huwe kuch likhne lagta hai....

VIRUS

Aur shera ko wohi xodke Basti waalo ke taraf dekhke....

Bikki: Tum log mujhe Avi shaitan samaj rahe hoge....kaatil soch rahe hoge...

HAA MEIN SHAITAN HU...
RAKT KI NADI BAHAUNGA....
HAIWANIYAT KO DUSRE PIDIPAR PAHUCHAUNGA...
SAALO KO JINDA NAHI XODUNGA...
AUR ANTME..
RAJA KEHLAUNGA

BIKKI: aur sun be hijado agar kisine iski maddat karne ki koshish ki ya fir koi iska sahara bana to sach kehta hu ....isse vi buri mout dunga....rehn do ise isi halatme...Mout ke liye yamaraaj ko pukarega...vagwan se binti karega ...av se iski ek ek aakhri pal jinda laash banke rahega...Tadap tadapkar marega ...ek ek xen sadiyon ki lagegi ...keede vanvanayenge....makhi kaat khayegi....kutte noch dalenge....cheekhega har pal mout ki pratikshya karega ....rehen de ise yehipar saala harami Bache ko mardiya...ek budhi aaurat ko mar diya ...saale kutte mar wahi par ..

TO BE CONTINUE...

Fantastic update bro...

Keep posting
 

Illusion

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Pichle dono update shandaar the par itni nautanki chhapna bhi jaruri nahi simple si maut do kyon apne andar ki haiwaniyat dikhakar readers ko bigaad rahe itna buri maut likhna bhi sahi na hota aut usko bilkul explain karna sahi nahi dimaag par farak padta aur waise bhi yahan teenagers padhne aate sab meri tarah adult nahi hain kuch chote bhi aate hain :)

Bhai simple nahi....Ho sake to or haiwaniyat dalna

I am fully against rahul bro
 

Sendbobsandvegana

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Bilkul sahi kiya is kutta ka sath hero na magar update chota sa diya ha dost lagta ha tumhare pass ideas khatam to nhi ho gae story ko la kar

Aisi koi baat nahi bro....idea ki line lagi hui hai par bas time nahi mil raha

Meine pehle vi kaha tha yar mein dusre writer ki tarah continously dhyan dekar nahi likh pata hu ...isiliye jab raat ka samay hota hai to thoda likh leta hu

So sorry bhai....week me ek mega update pesh karunga aur baaki dino me time nikalkar update dediya karunga...

Dhanyabaad bro
 

John Cena

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Aisi koi baat nahi bro....idea ki line lagi hui hai par bas time nahi mil raha

Meine pehle vi kaha tha yar mein dusre writer ki tarah continously dhyan dekar nahi likh pata hu ...isiliye jab raat ka samay hota hai to thoda likh leta hu

So sorry bhai....week me ek mega update pesh karunga aur baaki dino me time nikalkar update dediya karunga...

Dhanyabaad bro
Koi baat nhi dost hota rehta ha magar yar tumne aim dafa pori story ko soch ka rakh lo kya kya likhna phir baat ma asani hogi tumko
 

Sendbobsandvegana

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Koi baat nhi dost hota rehta ha magar yar tumne aim dafa pori story ko soch ka rakh lo kya kya likhna phir baat ma asani hogi tumko

Aap fikar mat karo bhai....m multi talented person so ek story ko sochna kaunsi badi baat hai...

Haha bro agar jyada bol liya hu to aap kam sun lena ....

Anyway thanks bro
 

Sendbobsandvegana

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Nice update with revenge and punishment.
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Shera ko badiya thoka aur saja di lekin ek baat samjh nhi aaye jab uss k muh pe tap lagi tha ya band tha ti uss k aage k daant kaise tut k dharti pe gire.
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Basti walo ki to pyru wast lga di bikki ne.
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Good good.
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Keep posting.
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What an amazing analyzing power u have got in urself....aapne to pakad liya mujhe..

Thanks for ur support bro....wo part me avi edit karta hu bro

 

Sendbobsandvegana

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Are aap to aise bol rahe jaise mai is story ka pahla comments kar raha hun agar aisi baat to fir bye bye :ciao:

Wah bhai kitni aashani se aapne to meri baat ka galat matlab nikal liye ho....

Mein to bas yehi kehna chahta tha ki bina koi review aap directly next update keh rahe thye....maaf karna bhai agar aapko bura laga ho to...
 
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Sendbobsandvegana

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Pichle dono update shandaar the par itni nautanki chhapna bhi jaruri nahi simple si maut do kyon apne andar ki haiwaniyat dikhakar readers ko bigaad rahe itna buri maut likhna bhi sahi na hota aur usko bilkul explain karna sahi nahi dimaag par farak padta aur waise bhi yahan teenagers padhne aate sab meri tarah adult nahi hain kuch chote bhi aate hain :)

Bhai simple nahi....Ho sake to or haiwaniyat dalna

I am fully against rahul bro

Bhai iske liye mein ek poll start karta hu ....

It depends on ur votes....
Thanks for support
 
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