Thriller LOVE or LUST

[Sabhi91]

Lajwab update sirr mere...
Ab jald se jald aage badahoye

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Lajwab update sirr mere...
Ab jald se jald aage badahoye

Thanks bhai...

Next update bas kuch hi der me ....

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Update 49
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Bikki to apne raaste par nikal gaya...par shera aur nargesh koi mamuli aadmi to tha nahi jo Bikkine nirdayise maardiya...idhar pure desh me tahalka mach gaya tha....VIRUS ke charche hi sunai de rahi thi...commisner ko Police department ke saamne maardiya...Ye koi chota kand nahi tha ....Jiske badle aaj ye tha ki sirf VIRUS ke naam se logo ki fat jati thi...

FLASHBACK ENDS HERE MY FRIEND....

Ab aage...

Back in reality....

Budhhe ne ek vi baat sonake aage chupana nahi chahta tha...Uski galti se lekar Bikki ka darawna sach sab sona ko khulkar bata diya tha....Jitna vi usko pata tha usne sona ko sab bata diya...

Sona avi vi buddhe ko dhyan se sun rahi thi .... Unn bache ko lekar sona ke upar bahut gehra jakham dil me var chuka tha.. pata nahi kyui wo khud ko gunegar samajne lagi thi .... Bhaiya ke upar itna Gehra chot lagi huwi thi aur mein apne hi duniya mein masti se reh rahi thi...sochkar hi sona ke aankhon me se aasuo ki dhara behne lage

Buddha sona ko yese dekhke maayus hojata hai ...

Buddha :Beti.... beeti baate ko vul jao ...Jo hona tha ho gaya av hum usko kabhi badal nahi sakte .... iss duniya ki ek niyam hai ki beeta huwa kal dubara mudkar nahi aati isiliye hume aage badna chaiye

SOna(rote huwe): bhaiya ko najane uss wakt kaisa laga hoga ....uss dard ko kaise jhel liya bhaiya ne...aur mein itni badnaseeb hu ki apne bhaiya par musibat aane par vi anjaan hokar khud ki duniyame hasti rahi.(itna kehte hi sona subak subak kar rone lagi)

Buddha: isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai....Saari galti humse hi suru huwi thi...sachme hum namard hi hai(niras hokar)

Sona fir najre uthakar buddhe ko dekhne lagi jo isswakt bahut maayus aur atmaglani se bhari huwi thi...

SOna: Av isme aaplog kya kar sakte thye....sayad ye saab uss upar wale ki maarji thi

Buddhe: Chalo beti av kaafi raat hogayi hai...neend puri karlo

SOna: theek hai kehte huwe apne room ke taraf chal deti hai jaha pooja ghode bichaye so rahi thi...

Sona abhi pooja ke bagal me soo hi rahi thi par neend to jaise udan chu gaye thye....Bhaiya ka fikar andar hi andar se sona ko khaye jaa rahi thi to wo bina kuch soche hi jhatke se khadi ho jati hai aur paon dabaye Bikkiki room me chali jati hai...

BIkki avi vi mast neendhra mein tha....sona Bikki ke baagal mein aakar Bikki ko ghoorne lagti hai aur Unn dard ko mehsus karne lagti hai jab Bikkiko unn nanhi si bacho ke khone se mili thi....Reh reh kar buddhe ki baate andar hi andar sona ki jehn me bas gayi thi....sona abi purani yaado mein khoye subak subak kar rone lagi thi...

Sona ki subakne ki awaaz jaise hi bikki ke kaano par padi hi thi ki Bikki jhatke ke saath Hos mein aajata hai aur sona ko aise rote huwe dekhkar aag babula hojata hai...

BIkki: kisine kuch kaha kya tumse....saalo ko jinda nahi xodunga(ghusse me)

Sona bikki ko ghussa hote huwe dekhkar Bikki ko gale laga leti hai aur Bikki ke sine par chehra xupakar halki aawaz me ..

SOna: Kuch nahi hua hai bhaiya...mein thik hu kisine kuch nahi kaha

BIkki: lagta hai firse tabiyat kharav hogayi....ruko mein avi doctor ko bulake le aata hu

Sona : Nahi bhaiya mein thik hu....Bas aapke saath rehne ka dil kar raha tha....dar gayi thi ki aap mujhe hamesha ke liye xod ke naa chale jao

Bikki (muskurakar): chal hat pagli yesa vi kahi ho sakta hai.....Tu to meri jaan hai...aur jaan se juda hokar mein kaise jee sakta hu

SOna Bikki ke pyar vari baato ko sunkar gale lagate huwe Bikki ke pith ko sehlane lagi....

BIkki: chalo avi sone jao ....Khamokha parisan ho rahi ho....kal fir Goa ke liye nikalna vi hai aur tum ho ki aaram hi nahi kar rahi

SOna: plz bhaiya aaj mein aapke saath hi soti hu naa...

Bikki sona ko yese dare hue dekhkar bachpan ko yaad karne lagta hai...jab sona vuto se darke Bikki ke saath sat kar so jati thi ....Bachpan me jab vi sona ko dar lagti to bikki ko apne se satakar so jati thi ...jab Bikki ke saaath ho to wo bina dare sukoon ki neend me chali jati thi ki mano agar Bhaiya saath mein ho to Dar to rafanchur ho jaye ...vut vi ho to Bhaiya se darke vaag jaye...yesi biswash sona ke dil me ghar kar chuki thi aur aaj firse kayi saalo baad Sona Bikkike paas raatko dari huwi aayi thi..

Bikki(haste huwe): haha Tum bhi na Pure bacho jaisi ho...Kehte huwe sonako apne bed me khichkar bagal me sula leta hai...

Sona vi Apne bhaiya ko pyar se gale lagate huwe aankhe band karke Bikkike sine me chehra chupakar so jati hai...Bikki bade pyar se sona ke baalo ko sehla raha tha ....aur ab karib 10 min hi hua tha ki sona ko neend ne apne aaghos me leliya tha...

Bikki sona ko Sote huwe dekhkar ek bar muskura deta hai aur sona ko bagal me sulakar khud aankhe band karke sone ki koshish karta hai....Najane usko kab Neend ne apne gehrayi me sama liya Kisiko nahi malum...


Aankhe tab khuli jab Bikki ka mbl bajne laga....Subah hochuki thi ...bahar surya ki tej prakash aakashpar mandara gaya tha....Chir chir karti huwi panchiyon ka gungunana aur pass me hi behti huwi nadika kalkalauta paani ka sumadhur mishran ko xedti hui mbl ring karne lagta hai...

BIkki Bina number dekhe ghusse me phone utha leta hai...

BIkki: koun hai be ... subah subah teri maa ki arti me jana hai kya

Koi ladki thi

Phone par: hello mister....abhi tak so rahe ho kya?

BIkki(ghusse me): av itni subah sounga nahi to ghanta bajata firunga....waise kon ho tum...subah subah aur koi kaam nahi mili kya

Phone par: Hello mister....Khamokha tum mujhe daant rahe ho?

BIkki: Itni achi neend kharav kardiya ...av daantu nahi to kya tumhari aarti utaru?

Phone par: chalo thik hai phone rakhti hu..
tum aaram se so jao

BIkki: Ab neend to uda hi diye ho av bol vi do koun ho aur kyui cal kiya ?

Phone par : av to tum hume vul hi chuke ho....waise tumhe yaad diladu ki koi neelam naam ki ek friend thi jo tumse bahut pyar karti thi

Bikki(hairan hoke): oh neelam ji aap....sorry sorry meine aapko pehchana nahi usswakt ....av iss Nacheej ko aap yaad kar rahi ho to kaise pehchanuga

Neelam: Av baate banana xodo aur kaho ki kaise ho? Itne din se cal try kar rahi hu par tum to thehre bg aadmi... aur tum to mujhe vul hi gaye ho ... thik to ho naa?

Bikki: hum to mast hai neelam jee...aap kahiye kaise yaad kiya

Neelam: yaad to tum harwakt aate ho par tum ho ki mujhe vul hi gaye

BIkki: yesi koi baat nahi hai jee...mein vi aapko bahut miss karta hu....aap hi to meri sabse close friend ho bhala aapko yaad naa karu yesa kabhi hosakta hai...

Neelam: baate banana to koi tumse sikhe ....

Bikki: waise neelam ji .... koi kaam tha kya?

NEelam : nahi to....waise hi cal kiya tha ...avi tum kaha ho?

Bikki: Abhi to Mein so raha hu ...av se kuch ghante baad goa pahuch jaunga!

Neelam jaise hi goa sunti hai to ek baar khusi se uchal jati hai...

NEelam : Oh wow.....Mein vi Goa mein hi hu ...kuch kaam se aaye ho kya?

Bikki: nahi jee kaam waam to kuch nahi ...bas vacation pe apne behno ke saath nikal raha hu...aur aap GOA kyui?

NEelam : Ek seminar attend karne gayi thi....Bahut bore ho rahi thi av tum vi goa aaoge to bahut masti hogi....yahooo.. jaldi waha se niklo...tumhe dekhne ke liye aankhe taras gayi hai...

Bikki: Haha .... ruko to sahi abhi nikalta hu
Ab to aana hi padega..meri pyari sathi ne jo bula liya hai

Neelam: haan haan av jaldi karo....chalo fir Goa me milte hai...bye

BIkki: ok bye neelam ji...apna dhyan rakhna
Kehte huwe cal cut karke bagal me dekhne lagta hai jaha par sona Chain ki neend so rahi thi...Avi sona itni pyari lag rahi thi ki pucho mat ... Saanse ki apni raaftar aur palkon ko band karke sona neend mein koi khwaab saja rahi thi...

BIkki sona ko yese sote huwe dekhkar Aankhe jhapkaye bina bas sona ko pyar vari najro se dekhne lagta hai....dekhte hi dekhte kab time nikal gaya sayad hi kisi ko pata ho.....

UDhar pooja uth chuki thi aur jab baagal me sona ko nahi paayi to wo hadbada kar uth jati hai aur sona ko dhudne lagti hai....Jab sona ko dhundte dhundte Bikkike room par aayi to wo ek baar has deti hai...Sona baagal mein sorahi thi aur Bikki bas usko hi ghure jaa raha tha ...ye pyar vari ras leela ko dekhkar koi vi muskuraye bager nahi reh pata to pooja kaunsi khel ki muli thi ...wo vi ek baar muskura deti hai aur iss pyar ka session ko end karte huwe...

Pooja : Bhaiya...kya kar rahe ho?

BIkki pooja ki or dekhkar apni ungli lips me rakhkar chup rehne ka ishara karta hai...usko dar tha ki kahi sona jag naa jaye

Bikki fir bina koi shor kiye bed se uthkar pooja ke baagal me chala jata hai...aur pooja ko kheechte huwe room se bahar le chalta hai...

Pooja: hmmm bhaiya sirf sona ko hi sulao aapne saath....hum to aapke paraye hai na

BIkki: av tu mujhe blackmail naa karo...Wo raatko sona dari huwi lag rahi thi to mein usko apne saath sula liya

Pooja(chidte huwe) : Haan haan... mein to blackmail kar rahi hu

Bikki pooja ko dekhkar hasne lagta hai aur pooja ko khich kar aapne xaati me sata leta hai...

BIkki: to thik hai jee tum vi so jao mere sath ....

Pooja Bikki ke pith par halki halki mukka marte huwe: Aap vi na bhaiya kitne pyare ho...jee karta hai aapka saath yese hi soti rahu

BIkki: haha to roka kisne hai ...kehte hue poojake baalo ko sehlane lagta hai...

AVi bas kuch minute hi hua tha ki Buddha ghar ka maindoor kholte huwe andar aajata hai...aur Bikki aur sona ko hall me betha huwa dekhkar..

Buddha: Uth gaye ho beta....chalo naasta banwa leta hu...tum aaram karo

BIkki: rehn do... Hum bahar se kuch kha lenge

Pooja Bikki ka yese chehra badalna dekhkar shocked hojati hai....kuch samay pehle pyare wale Bikki av koi patthar dilwala Bikki ban gaya tha...

Pooja : bhaiya .... aap naaraz kyui ho rahe ho, uncle kitne pyar karte hai aapse

Bikki pooja ke saamne kuch tamasha nahi karna chahta tha to wo chup rehna hi behtar samajta hai

Buddha bikki ke aisi kadwi baate sunkar nirash hogaya tha fir vi chaye naaste banane ke liye kitchen ki taraf chal padta hai...

Pooja: bhaiya aap uncle se itne naaraz kyui ho?

BIkki: aisi koi baat nahi hai ! Ye log isike layak hai...chodo uss baat ko aur bolo ki raat kaisi nikli

Pooja(exited hokar): Itni achi neend mujhe to aaj tak nahi aayi thi....Uff kya batau bhaiya aur aaj to hum Goa pahuch jayenge sochkar hi bahut maja aaraha hai...

Abhi bas Bikki kuch bolne hi wala tha ki Sona waha par chali aati hai...jo neend ki duniya se pare ho chuki thi...

Bikki sona ke taraf dekhkar

BIkki: Good morning betu ...chalo fir aao kuch planning karte hai...

Sona : Good morning bhaiya....(thoda muh banake pooja ke taraf dekhkar) Good morning bandarni ...aaj to hum Goa pahuch jayenge Yahoo

Pooja fir sona ke paas aakar sonako halki si mukka marte huwe..

Pooja : Bandarni hogi tu...

Sona (haste huwe): nahi tu

Pooja : nahi tu

Bikki do saheliyo ka mazaak sunke has raha tha ..... aur Bikki ko yese haste hue dekhkar Pooja Bikki ke upar chalang laga deti hai aur Bikki ke gaalo ko chumkar...

Pooja : aur aap hamare bandar bhaiya....

TO BE CONTINUE....

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Awesome update Bhai,

Bahut khob Bhai kya update diya hai padh ke maja aa gya, bus aise hi likhte jao....

Jnb acha tha update par is se b acha ho skta tha...keep it up...

superb amazing update

Mast update bhai

Superb update and wonderful revenge.
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Ye to kamal ho gya matlb police walo k saamne commissioner ko mar diya aur itne time tak na govt ne koi action liya na police force ne. Thoda over ho gya but story h koi nahi.
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Par ye police wale kaand se ek positive ye nikla ki virus k publicity sab jagah ho hi gye aur shera aur nargesh ki maut se jayada commissioner ki maut dangerous thi aur shayad issi liye ab police itni pareshan h present mai bikki ko marne aur virus ko khatam karne k liye jo unnhone sashank ko lagaya iss case par.
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Iss k alawa factory k malik ki sahi band bajayi aur jo uss ne dusro k liye kiya end mai khud ussi se mar gya superb.
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Ab dekhte h sona ka kya reaction hota h basti walo k liye air fir subah bikki ka samna kaise karti h wo.
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Keep posting.
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Awesome update bro

Superb flashback
It has ended with terror among people of country
Now eagarly waiting for reaction of sona
And Yeah The Fun times begun
GOA

Gjb bc commisner nark cla gya virus Cha gya Bhai.....story interesting mode PR hai ab to puja or Sona ke sath romance hoga

Fantastic update bro...

Keep posting

BIkki: chal thik hai ....Factory band kar aur uske baad unnlogo ko jinda kar jisne tere factoryke wajase apni jaan gawai hai...

Nargesh: ye main kaise kar sakta hu.?

BIkki: chal agar ye nahi kar sakta to tu unse maafi maang le

NArgesh: par wo log to mar chuke hai ....mein kaise maafi maang sakta hu

BIkki: tu uski chinta mat kar ....mein tujhe avi unnlogo ke paas vejta hu ....waha jaakar tu aaram se maafi maang lena

Brilliant writing bhai
Hats off

Mind blowing and fantastic update

Bahut hi zabardast update hain hur Bikki ne Virus ka sikka jamwa diya hai aur logo me ab Virus ka khof hone laga hai.
Good going, keep it up

Jitna zabardast update utna hi umda review

• Waiting
• Waiting
• Waiting
• Still waiting

Nice update

story in its own flow

Brilliant Flashback

Superb end of flashback

waiting next

Peace

Lajwab update sirr mere...
Ab jald se jald aage badahoye

Next update posted my friends ....

Ummid hai aapki sahayeta milti rahegi...

Thanks guyz...

Goodnight

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai ab dekhte hai 3no bandarni ke sath bikki kaise apna vacation celebrate karta hai

 

[Pta nhi]

Awesome update bro

 

[Johnboy11]

Update 49
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Bikki to apne raaste par nikal gaya...par shera aur nargesh koi mamuli aadmi to tha nahi jo Bikkine nirdayise maardiya...idhar pure desh me tahalka mach gaya tha....VIRUS ke charche hi sunai de rahi thi...commisner ko Police department ke saamne maardiya...Ye koi chota kand nahi tha ....Jiske badle aaj ye tha ki sirf VIRUS ke naam se logo ki fat jati thi...

FLASHBACK ENDS HERE MY FRIEND....

Ab aage...

Back in reality....

Budhhe ne ek vi baat sonake aage chupana nahi chahta tha...Uski galti se lekar Bikki ka darawna sach sab sona ko khulkar bata diya tha....Jitna vi usko pata tha usne sona ko sab bata diya...

Sona avi vi buddhe ko dhyan se sun rahi thi .... Unn bache ko lekar sona ke upar bahut gehra jakham dil me var chuka tha.. pata nahi kyui wo khud ko gunegar samajne lagi thi .... Bhaiya ke upar itna Gehra chot lagi huwi thi aur mein apne hi duniya mein masti se reh rahi thi...sochkar hi sona ke aankhon me se aasuo ki dhara behne lage

Buddha sona ko yese dekhke maayus hojata hai ...

Buddha :Beti.... beeti baate ko vul jao ...Jo hona tha ho gaya av hum usko kabhi badal nahi sakte .... iss duniya ki ek niyam hai ki beeta huwa kal dubara mudkar nahi aati isiliye hume aage badna chaiye

SOna(rote huwe): bhaiya ko najane uss wakt kaisa laga hoga ....uss dard ko kaise jhel liya bhaiya ne...aur mein itni badnaseeb hu ki apne bhaiya par musibat aane par vi anjaan hokar khud ki duniyame hasti rahi.(itna kehte hi sona subak subak kar rone lagi)

Buddha: isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai....Saari galti humse hi suru huwi thi...sachme hum namard hi hai(niras hokar)

Sona fir najre uthakar buddhe ko dekhne lagi jo isswakt bahut maayus aur atmaglani se bhari huwi thi...

SOna: Av isme aaplog kya kar sakte thye....sayad ye saab uss upar wale ki maarji thi

Buddhe: Chalo beti av kaafi raat hogayi hai...neend puri karlo

SOna: theek hai kehte huwe apne room ke taraf chal deti hai jaha pooja ghode bichaye so rahi thi...

Sona abhi pooja ke bagal me soo hi rahi thi par neend to jaise udan chu gaye thye....Bhaiya ka fikar andar hi andar se sona ko khaye jaa rahi thi to wo bina kuch soche hi jhatke se khadi ho jati hai aur paon dabaye Bikkiki room me chali jati hai...

BIkki avi vi mast neendhra mein tha....sona Bikki ke baagal mein aakar Bikki ko ghoorne lagti hai aur Unn dard ko mehsus karne lagti hai jab Bikkiko unn nanhi si bacho ke khone se mili thi....Reh reh kar buddhe ki baate andar hi andar sona ki jehn me bas gayi thi....sona abi purani yaado mein khoye subak subak kar rone lagi thi...

Sona ki subakne ki awaaz jaise hi bikki ke kaano par padi hi thi ki Bikki jhatke ke saath Hos mein aajata hai aur sona ko aise rote huwe dekhkar aag babula hojata hai...

BIkki: kisine kuch kaha kya tumse....saalo ko jinda nahi xodunga(ghusse me)

Sona bikki ko ghussa hote huwe dekhkar Bikki ko gale laga leti hai aur Bikki ke sine par chehra xupakar halki aawaz me ..

SOna: Kuch nahi hua hai bhaiya...mein thik hu kisine kuch nahi kaha

BIkki: lagta hai firse tabiyat kharav hogayi....ruko mein avi doctor ko bulake le aata hu

Sona : Nahi bhaiya mein thik hu....Bas aapke saath rehne ka dil kar raha tha....dar gayi thi ki aap mujhe hamesha ke liye xod ke naa chale jao

Bikki (muskurakar): chal hat pagli yesa vi kahi ho sakta hai.....Tu to meri jaan hai...aur jaan se juda hokar mein kaise jee sakta hu

SOna Bikki ke pyar vari baato ko sunkar gale lagate huwe Bikki ke pith ko sehlane lagi....

BIkki: chalo avi sone jao ....Khamokha parisan ho rahi ho....kal fir Goa ke liye nikalna vi hai aur tum ho ki aaram hi nahi kar rahi

SOna: plz bhaiya aaj mein aapke saath hi soti hu naa...

Bikki sona ko yese dare hue dekhkar bachpan ko yaad karne lagta hai...jab sona vuto se darke Bikki ke saath sat kar so jati thi ....Bachpan me jab vi sona ko dar lagti to bikki ko apne se satakar so jati thi ...jab Bikki ke saaath ho to wo bina dare sukoon ki neend me chali jati thi ki mano agar Bhaiya saath mein ho to Dar to rafanchur ho jaye ...vut vi ho to Bhaiya se darke vaag jaye...yesi biswash sona ke dil me ghar kar chuki thi aur aaj firse kayi saalo baad Sona Bikkike paas raatko dari huwi aayi thi..

Bikki(haste huwe): haha Tum bhi na Pure bacho jaisi ho...Kehte huwe sonako apne bed me khichkar bagal me sula leta hai...

Sona vi Apne bhaiya ko pyar se gale lagate huwe aankhe band karke Bikkike sine me chehra chupakar so jati hai...Bikki bade pyar se sona ke baalo ko sehla raha tha ....aur ab karib 10 min hi hua tha ki sona ko neend ne apne aaghos me leliya tha...

Bikki sona ko Sote huwe dekhkar ek bar muskura deta hai aur sona ko bagal me sulakar khud aankhe band karke sone ki koshish karta hai....Najane usko kab Neend ne apne gehrayi me sama liya Kisiko nahi malum...


Aankhe tab khuli jab Bikki ka mbl bajne laga....Subah hochuki thi ...bahar surya ki tej prakash aakashpar mandara gaya tha....Chir chir karti huwi panchiyon ka gungunana aur pass me hi behti huwi nadika kalkalauta paani ka sumadhur mishran ko xedti hui mbl ring karne lagta hai...

BIkki Bina number dekhe ghusse me phone utha leta hai...

BIkki: koun hai be ... subah subah teri maa ki arti me jana hai kya

Koi ladki thi

Phone par: hello mister....abhi tak so rahe ho kya?

BIkki(ghusse me): av itni subah sounga nahi to ghanta bajata firunga....waise kon ho tum...subah subah aur koi kaam nahi mili kya

Phone par: Hello mister....Khamokha tum mujhe daant rahe ho?

BIkki: Itni achi neend kharav kardiya ...av daantu nahi to kya tumhari aarti utaru?

Phone par: chalo thik hai phone rakhti hu..
tum aaram se so jao

BIkki: Ab neend to uda hi diye ho av bol vi do koun ho aur kyui cal kiya ?

Phone par : av to tum hume vul hi chuke ho....waise tumhe yaad diladu ki koi neelam naam ki ek friend thi jo tumse bahut pyar karti thi

Bikki(hairan hoke): oh neelam ji aap....sorry sorry meine aapko pehchana nahi usswakt ....av iss Nacheej ko aap yaad kar rahi ho to kaise pehchanuga

Neelam: Av baate banana xodo aur kaho ki kaise ho? Itne din se cal try kar rahi hu par tum to thehre bg aadmi... aur tum to mujhe vul hi gaye ho ... thik to ho naa?

Bikki: hum to mast hai neelam jee...aap kahiye kaise yaad kiya

Neelam: yaad to tum harwakt aate ho par tum ho ki mujhe vul hi gaye

BIkki: yesi koi baat nahi hai jee...mein vi aapko bahut miss karta hu....aap hi to meri sabse close friend ho bhala aapko yaad naa karu yesa kabhi hosakta hai...

Neelam: baate banana to koi tumse sikhe ....

Bikki: waise neelam ji .... koi kaam tha kya?

NEelam : nahi to....waise hi cal kiya tha ...avi tum kaha ho?

Bikki: Abhi to Mein so raha hu ...av se kuch ghante baad goa pahuch jaunga!

Neelam jaise hi goa sunti hai to ek baar khusi se uchal jati hai...

NEelam : Oh wow.....Mein vi Goa mein hi hu ...kuch kaam se aaye ho kya?

Bikki: nahi jee kaam waam to kuch nahi ...bas vacation pe apne behno ke saath nikal raha hu...aur aap GOA kyui?

NEelam : Ek seminar attend karne gayi thi....Bahut bore ho rahi thi av tum vi goa aaoge to bahut masti hogi....yahooo.. jaldi waha se niklo...tumhe dekhne ke liye aankhe taras gayi hai...

Bikki: Haha .... ruko to sahi abhi nikalta hu
Ab to aana hi padega..meri pyari sathi ne jo bula liya hai

Neelam: haan haan av jaldi karo....chalo fir Goa me milte hai...bye

BIkki: ok bye neelam ji...apna dhyan rakhna
Kehte huwe cal cut karke bagal me dekhne lagta hai jaha par sona Chain ki neend so rahi thi...Avi sona itni pyari lag rahi thi ki pucho mat ... Saanse ki apni raaftar aur palkon ko band karke sona neend mein koi khwaab saja rahi thi...

BIkki sona ko yese sote huwe dekhkar Aankhe jhapkaye bina bas sona ko pyar vari najro se dekhne lagta hai....dekhte hi dekhte kab time nikal gaya sayad hi kisi ko pata ho.....

UDhar pooja uth chuki thi aur jab baagal me sona ko nahi paayi to wo hadbada kar uth jati hai aur sona ko dhudne lagti hai....Jab sona ko dhundte dhundte Bikkike room par aayi to wo ek baar has deti hai...Sona baagal mein sorahi thi aur Bikki bas usko hi ghure jaa raha tha ...ye pyar vari ras leela ko dekhkar koi vi muskuraye bager nahi reh pata to pooja kaunsi khel ki muli thi ...wo vi ek baar muskura deti hai aur iss pyar ka session ko end karte huwe...

Pooja : Bhaiya...kya kar rahe ho?

BIkki pooja ki or dekhkar apni ungli lips me rakhkar chup rehne ka ishara karta hai...usko dar tha ki kahi sona jag naa jaye

Bikki fir bina koi shor kiye bed se uthkar pooja ke baagal me chala jata hai...aur pooja ko kheechte huwe room se bahar le chalta hai...

Pooja: hmmm bhaiya sirf sona ko hi sulao aapne saath....hum to aapke paraye hai na

BIkki: av tu mujhe blackmail naa karo...Wo raatko sona dari huwi lag rahi thi to mein usko apne saath sula liya

Pooja(chidte huwe) : Haan haan... mein to blackmail kar rahi hu

Bikki pooja ko dekhkar hasne lagta hai aur pooja ko khich kar aapne xaati me sata leta hai...

BIkki: to thik hai jee tum vi so jao mere sath ....

Pooja Bikki ke pith par halki halki mukka marte huwe: Aap vi na bhaiya kitne pyare ho...jee karta hai aapka saath yese hi soti rahu

BIkki: haha to roka kisne hai ...kehte hue poojake baalo ko sehlane lagta hai...

AVi bas kuch minute hi hua tha ki Buddha ghar ka maindoor kholte huwe andar aajata hai...aur Bikki aur sona ko hall me betha huwa dekhkar..

Buddha: Uth gaye ho beta....chalo naasta banwa leta hu...tum aaram karo

BIkki: rehn do... Hum bahar se kuch kha lenge

Pooja Bikki ka yese chehra badalna dekhkar shocked hojati hai....kuch samay pehle pyare wale Bikki av koi patthar dilwala Bikki ban gaya tha...

Pooja : bhaiya .... aap naaraz kyui ho rahe ho, uncle kitne pyar karte hai aapse

Bikki pooja ke saamne kuch tamasha nahi karna chahta tha to wo chup rehna hi behtar samajta hai

Buddha bikki ke aisi kadwi baate sunkar nirash hogaya tha fir vi chaye naaste banane ke liye kitchen ki taraf chal padta hai...

Pooja: bhaiya aap uncle se itne naaraz kyui ho?

BIkki: aisi koi baat nahi hai ! Ye log isike layak hai...chodo uss baat ko aur bolo ki raat kaisi nikli

Pooja(exited hokar): Itni achi neend mujhe to aaj tak nahi aayi thi....Uff kya batau bhaiya aur aaj to hum Goa pahuch jayenge sochkar hi bahut maja aaraha hai...

Abhi bas Bikki kuch bolne hi wala tha ki Sona waha par chali aati hai...jo neend ki duniya se pare ho chuki thi...

Bikki sona ke taraf dekhkar

BIkki: Good morning betu ...chalo fir aao kuch planning karte hai...

Sona : Good morning bhaiya....(thoda muh banake pooja ke taraf dekhkar) Good morning bandarni ...aaj to hum Goa pahuch jayenge Yahoo

Pooja fir sona ke paas aakar sonako halki si mukka marte huwe..

Pooja : Bandarni hogi tu...

Sona (haste huwe): nahi tu

Pooja : nahi tu

Bikki do saheliyo ka mazaak sunke has raha tha ..... aur Bikki ko yese haste hue dekhkar Pooja Bikki ke upar chalang laga deti hai aur Bikki ke gaalo ko chumkar...

Pooja : aur aap hamare bandar bhaiya....

TO BE CONTINUE....

Too akhir kar purani baate khatam ho hi gye.
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Bikki ka dard sona k dil tak pahuch hi gya aur uss dard ne pyar ko dil ki aur gehraiyo tak pahucha diya aur ye sab tarah ka pyar lagta h.
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Ye nye subah to bikul blue eyes wali neeli hue neelam k saath jissmai bikki k character ka har roop saamme aaya.
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Pehle chidne wala fir pyar wala flirt k saath neelam se baat kar k fir sona ko sote hue dekh kar brotherly aur parental love fir puja k hasene se care aur uss ko manane aur end mai buddhe par gussa to overall feelings wala update jiss mai bikki ko pura open kar diya.
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Puja to bahot excited ho gye goa k liye aur bechare buddhe ko bacha liya bikki k gusse se.
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Ab to goa mai teen ladkiyo k beech mai h beach par bikki babu h kya hota h dekhte h.
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Keep posting.
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Bikki to apne raaste par nikal gaya...par shera aur nargesh koi mamuli aadmi to tha nahi jo Bikkine nirdayise maardiya...idhar pure desh me tahalka mach gaya tha....VIRUS ke charche hi sunai de rahi thi...commisner ko Police department ke saamne maardiya...Ye koi chota kand nahi tha ....Jiske badle aaj ye tha ki sirf VIRUS ke naam se logo ki fat jati thi...

FLASHBACK ENDS HERE MY FRIEND....

Ab aage...

Back in reality....

Budhhe ne ek vi baat sonake aage chupana nahi chahta tha...Uski galti se lekar Bikki ka darawna sach sab sona ko khulkar bata diya tha....Jitna vi usko pata tha usne sona ko sab bata diya...

Sona avi vi buddhe ko dhyan se sun rahi thi .... Unn bache ko lekar sona ke upar bahut gehra jakham dil me var chuka tha.. pata nahi kyui wo khud ko gunegar samajne lagi thi .... Bhaiya ke upar itna Gehra chot lagi huwi thi aur mein apne hi duniya mein masti se reh rahi thi...sochkar hi sona ke aankhon me se aasuo ki dhara behne lage

Buddha sona ko yese dekhke maayus hojata hai ...

Buddha :Beti.... beeti baate ko vul jao ...Jo hona tha ho gaya av hum usko kabhi badal nahi sakte .... iss duniya ki ek niyam hai ki beeta huwa kal dubara mudkar nahi aati isiliye hume aage badna chaiye

SOna(rote huwe): bhaiya ko najane uss wakt kaisa laga hoga ....uss dard ko kaise jhel liya bhaiya ne...aur mein itni badnaseeb hu ki apne bhaiya par musibat aane par vi anjaan hokar khud ki duniyame hasti rahi.(itna kehte hi sona subak subak kar rone lagi)

Buddha: isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai....Saari galti humse hi suru huwi thi...sachme hum namard hi hai(niras hokar)

Sona fir najre uthakar buddhe ko dekhne lagi jo isswakt bahut maayus aur atmaglani se bhari huwi thi...

SOna: Av isme aaplog kya kar sakte thye....sayad ye saab uss upar wale ki maarji thi

Buddhe: Chalo beti av kaafi raat hogayi hai...neend puri karlo

SOna: theek hai kehte huwe apne room ke taraf chal deti hai jaha pooja ghode bichaye so rahi thi...

Sona abhi pooja ke bagal me soo hi rahi thi par neend to jaise udan chu gaye thye....Bhaiya ka fikar andar hi andar se sona ko khaye jaa rahi thi to wo bina kuch soche hi jhatke se khadi ho jati hai aur paon dabaye Bikkiki room me chali jati hai...

BIkki avi vi mast neendhra mein tha....sona Bikki ke baagal mein aakar Bikki ko ghoorne lagti hai aur Unn dard ko mehsus karne lagti hai jab Bikkiko unn nanhi si bacho ke khone se mili thi....Reh reh kar buddhe ki baate andar hi andar sona ki jehn me bas gayi thi....sona abi purani yaado mein khoye subak subak kar rone lagi thi...

Sona ki subakne ki awaaz jaise hi bikki ke kaano par padi hi thi ki Bikki jhatke ke saath Hos mein aajata hai aur sona ko aise rote huwe dekhkar aag babula hojata hai...

BIkki: kisine kuch kaha kya tumse....saalo ko jinda nahi xodunga(ghusse me)

Sona bikki ko ghussa hote huwe dekhkar Bikki ko gale laga leti hai aur Bikki ke sine par chehra xupakar halki aawaz me ..

SOna: Kuch nahi hua hai bhaiya...mein thik hu kisine kuch nahi kaha

BIkki: lagta hai firse tabiyat kharav hogayi....ruko mein avi doctor ko bulake le aata hu

Sona : Nahi bhaiya mein thik hu....Bas aapke saath rehne ka dil kar raha tha....dar gayi thi ki aap mujhe hamesha ke liye xod ke naa chale jao

Bikki (muskurakar): chal hat pagli yesa vi kahi ho sakta hai.....Tu to meri jaan hai...aur jaan se juda hokar mein kaise jee sakta hu

SOna Bikki ke pyar vari baato ko sunkar gale lagate huwe Bikki ke pith ko sehlane lagi....

BIkki: chalo avi sone jao ....Khamokha parisan ho rahi ho....kal fir Goa ke liye nikalna vi hai aur tum ho ki aaram hi nahi kar rahi

SOna: plz bhaiya aaj mein aapke saath hi soti hu naa...

Bikki sona ko yese dare hue dekhkar bachpan ko yaad karne lagta hai...jab sona vuto se darke Bikki ke saath sat kar so jati thi ....Bachpan me jab vi sona ko dar lagti to bikki ko apne se satakar so jati thi ...jab Bikki ke saaath ho to wo bina dare sukoon ki neend me chali jati thi ki mano agar Bhaiya saath mein ho to Dar to rafanchur ho jaye ...vut vi ho to Bhaiya se darke vaag jaye...yesi biswash sona ke dil me ghar kar chuki thi aur aaj firse kayi saalo baad Sona Bikkike paas raatko dari huwi aayi thi..

Bikki(haste huwe): haha Tum bhi na Pure bacho jaisi ho...Kehte huwe sonako apne bed me khichkar bagal me sula leta hai...

Sona vi Apne bhaiya ko pyar se gale lagate huwe aankhe band karke Bikkike sine me chehra chupakar so jati hai...Bikki bade pyar se sona ke baalo ko sehla raha tha ....aur ab karib 10 min hi hua tha ki sona ko neend ne apne aaghos me leliya tha...

Bikki sona ko Sote huwe dekhkar ek bar muskura deta hai aur sona ko bagal me sulakar khud aankhe band karke sone ki koshish karta hai....Najane usko kab Neend ne apne gehrayi me sama liya Kisiko nahi malum...


Aankhe tab khuli jab Bikki ka mbl bajne laga....Subah hochuki thi ...bahar surya ki tej prakash aakashpar mandara gaya tha....Chir chir karti huwi panchiyon ka gungunana aur pass me hi behti huwi nadika kalkalauta paani ka sumadhur mishran ko xedti hui mbl ring karne lagta hai...

BIkki Bina number dekhe ghusse me phone utha leta hai...

BIkki: koun hai be ... subah subah teri maa ki arti me jana hai kya

Koi ladki thi

Phone par: hello mister....abhi tak so rahe ho kya?

BIkki(ghusse me): av itni subah sounga nahi to ghanta bajata firunga....waise kon ho tum...subah subah aur koi kaam nahi mili kya

Phone par: Hello mister....Khamokha tum mujhe daant rahe ho?

BIkki: Itni achi neend kharav kardiya ...av daantu nahi to kya tumhari aarti utaru?

Phone par: chalo thik hai phone rakhti hu..
tum aaram se so jao

BIkki: Ab neend to uda hi diye ho av bol vi do koun ho aur kyui cal kiya ?

Phone par : av to tum hume vul hi chuke ho....waise tumhe yaad diladu ki koi neelam naam ki ek friend thi jo tumse bahut pyar karti thi

Bikki(hairan hoke): oh neelam ji aap....sorry sorry meine aapko pehchana nahi usswakt ....av iss Nacheej ko aap yaad kar rahi ho to kaise pehchanuga

Neelam: Av baate banana xodo aur kaho ki kaise ho? Itne din se cal try kar rahi hu par tum to thehre bg aadmi... aur tum to mujhe vul hi gaye ho ... thik to ho naa?

Bikki: hum to mast hai neelam jee...aap kahiye kaise yaad kiya

Neelam: yaad to tum harwakt aate ho par tum ho ki mujhe vul hi gaye

BIkki: yesi koi baat nahi hai jee...mein vi aapko bahut miss karta hu....aap hi to meri sabse close friend ho bhala aapko yaad naa karu yesa kabhi hosakta hai...

Neelam: baate banana to koi tumse sikhe ....

Bikki: waise neelam ji .... koi kaam tha kya?

NEelam : nahi to....waise hi cal kiya tha ...avi tum kaha ho?

Bikki: Abhi to Mein so raha hu ...av se kuch ghante baad goa pahuch jaunga!

Neelam jaise hi goa sunti hai to ek baar khusi se uchal jati hai...

NEelam : Oh wow.....Mein vi Goa mein hi hu ...kuch kaam se aaye ho kya?

Bikki: nahi jee kaam waam to kuch nahi ...bas vacation pe apne behno ke saath nikal raha hu...aur aap GOA kyui?

NEelam : Ek seminar attend karne gayi thi....Bahut bore ho rahi thi av tum vi goa aaoge to bahut masti hogi....yahooo.. jaldi waha se niklo...tumhe dekhne ke liye aankhe taras gayi hai...

Bikki: Haha .... ruko to sahi abhi nikalta hu
Ab to aana hi padega..meri pyari sathi ne jo bula liya hai

Neelam: haan haan av jaldi karo....chalo fir Goa me milte hai...bye

BIkki: ok bye neelam ji...apna dhyan rakhna
Kehte huwe cal cut karke bagal me dekhne lagta hai jaha par sona Chain ki neend so rahi thi...Avi sona itni pyari lag rahi thi ki pucho mat ... Saanse ki apni raaftar aur palkon ko band karke sona neend mein koi khwaab saja rahi thi...

BIkki sona ko yese sote huwe dekhkar Aankhe jhapkaye bina bas sona ko pyar vari najro se dekhne lagta hai....dekhte hi dekhte kab time nikal gaya sayad hi kisi ko pata ho.....

UDhar pooja uth chuki thi aur jab baagal me sona ko nahi paayi to wo hadbada kar uth jati hai aur sona ko dhudne lagti hai....Jab sona ko dhundte dhundte Bikkike room par aayi to wo ek baar has deti hai...Sona baagal mein sorahi thi aur Bikki bas usko hi ghure jaa raha tha ...ye pyar vari ras leela ko dekhkar koi vi muskuraye bager nahi reh pata to pooja kaunsi khel ki muli thi ...wo vi ek baar muskura deti hai aur iss pyar ka session ko end karte huwe...

Pooja : Bhaiya...kya kar rahe ho?

BIkki pooja ki or dekhkar apni ungli lips me rakhkar chup rehne ka ishara karta hai...usko dar tha ki kahi sona jag naa jaye

Bikki fir bina koi shor kiye bed se uthkar pooja ke baagal me chala jata hai...aur pooja ko kheechte huwe room se bahar le chalta hai...

Pooja: hmmm bhaiya sirf sona ko hi sulao aapne saath....hum to aapke paraye hai na

BIkki: av tu mujhe blackmail naa karo...Wo raatko sona dari huwi lag rahi thi to mein usko apne saath sula liya

Pooja(chidte huwe) : Haan haan... mein to blackmail kar rahi hu

Bikki pooja ko dekhkar hasne lagta hai aur pooja ko khich kar aapne xaati me sata leta hai...

BIkki: to thik hai jee tum vi so jao mere sath ....

Pooja Bikki ke pith par halki halki mukka marte huwe: Aap vi na bhaiya kitne pyare ho...jee karta hai aapka saath yese hi soti rahu

BIkki: haha to roka kisne hai ...kehte hue poojake baalo ko sehlane lagta hai...

AVi bas kuch minute hi hua tha ki Buddha ghar ka maindoor kholte huwe andar aajata hai...aur Bikki aur sona ko hall me betha huwa dekhkar..

Buddha: Uth gaye ho beta....chalo naasta banwa leta hu...tum aaram karo

BIkki: rehn do... Hum bahar se kuch kha lenge

Pooja Bikki ka yese chehra badalna dekhkar shocked hojati hai....kuch samay pehle pyare wale Bikki av koi patthar dilwala Bikki ban gaya tha...

Pooja : bhaiya .... aap naaraz kyui ho rahe ho, uncle kitne pyar karte hai aapse

Bikki pooja ke saamne kuch tamasha nahi karna chahta tha to wo chup rehna hi behtar samajta hai

Buddha bikki ke aisi kadwi baate sunkar nirash hogaya tha fir vi chaye naaste banane ke liye kitchen ki taraf chal padta hai...

Pooja: bhaiya aap uncle se itne naaraz kyui ho?

BIkki: aisi koi baat nahi hai ! Ye log isike layak hai...chodo uss baat ko aur bolo ki raat kaisi nikli

Pooja(exited hokar): Itni achi neend mujhe to aaj tak nahi aayi thi....Uff kya batau bhaiya aur aaj to hum Goa pahuch jayenge sochkar hi bahut maja aaraha hai...

Abhi bas Bikki kuch bolne hi wala tha ki Sona waha par chali aati hai...jo neend ki duniya se pare ho chuki thi...

Bikki sona ke taraf dekhkar

BIkki: Good morning betu ...chalo fir aao kuch planning karte hai...

Sona : Good morning bhaiya....(thoda muh banake pooja ke taraf dekhkar) Good morning bandarni ...aaj to hum Goa pahuch jayenge Yahoo

Pooja fir sona ke paas aakar sonako halki si mukka marte huwe..

Pooja : Bandarni hogi tu...

Sona (haste huwe): nahi tu

Pooja : nahi tu

Bikki do saheliyo ka mazaak sunke has raha tha ..... aur Bikki ko yese haste hue dekhkar Pooja Bikki ke upar chalang laga deti hai aur Bikki ke gaalo ko chumkar...

Pooja : aur aap hamare bandar bhaiya....

TO BE CONTINUE....

Shandar starting of fun begin

Now neelam will join Bikki in this fun trip

Too much goosebumps for this vacation

Brilliant writing

Hats off

 

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Too akhir kar purani baate khatam ho hi gye.
.
Bikki ka dard sona k dil tak pahuch hi gya aur uss dard ne pyar ko dil ki aur gehraiyo tak pahucha diya aur ye sab tarah ka pyar lagta h.
.
Ye nye subah to bikul blue eyes wali neeli hue neelam k saath jissmai bikki k character ka har roop saamme aaya.
.
Pehle chidne wala fir pyar wala flirt k saath neelam se baat kar k fir sona ko sote hue dekh kar brotherly aur parental love fir puja k hasene se care aur uss ko manane aur end mai buddhe par gussa to overall feelings wala update jiss mai bikki ko pura open kar diya.
.
Puja to bahot excited ho gye goa k liye aur bechare buddhe ko bacha liya bikki k gusse se.
.
Ab to goa mai teen ladkiyo k beech mai h beach par bikki babu h kya hota h dekhte h.
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Keep posting.
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All the expression shown in this update by Bikki is all he have got in himself..
Wow bhai U have hit it

Brilliant review

 

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Mast update bhai ab dekhte hai 3no bandarni ke sath bikki kaise apna vacation celebrate karta hai

Ok bhai lets c.
..and hope for excitement