Thriller LOVE or LUST

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Haha bhai aap galat vi ho sakte ho....Confident mat hojana par sahi vi hosakte ho bhai ......iske liye aage ka intzaar karna padega....

Waise avi tak aapko story kaisi lagi hai ye batadijiye sayad kuch changes lana ho to zarror try karunga....

Story mind-blowing Bhai hai Avi tk speechless bro..puja ka no.jaldi lgana padega ye alag BT hai bc apna hero puja ko dekh KR excited nhi hua but bc aajkl bikki ka sex ki parti jaise inrest badha hai aage bc kuch v ho skta hai Sach Mai fast thrill story mujhe itna pasnd aai hai ..diamg ka dahi KR Diya hai..Jahan tk story ka title hai isse to itna idea hai Jo koi villan hoga wo bikki ko ache se janta hoga or bikki v ..kiw ki kuch v ho skta hai love or lost ..

 

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Flash back dwara kuch samjhana chahata tha sayad mujhe abhi tak samajh nahi aaraha hai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Sayad bikki aur sasank ki dosti dikhana chahata ho

shashank v kamal ka banda nice one

Bhai yehi samjana chahta tha par sayad meine likhne me thodi vul ki hai jo aapko samaj nahi aayi hogi....

Anyway bro....thanks for ur review

 

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shashank v kamal ka banda nice one

Thanks for ur review bro....Hope I can met ur expectation

 

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Sashank is also very dangerous....

Super flashback

Thanks for ur review bro....Hope I can met ur expectation

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Bhaiji pehle to bahot thanks mere review ko itna importance dene k liye aur aap ko to pta hi h jiss tarah writer ko apni story pe reader ka review jitna pasand hota h vaise h readers ko bhi writer ka apprication same feeling deta h.
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Aur ab baat update ki to it was good.
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Abhi tak to sashank ka character true friend wala hi rha h jiss mai wo bikki ka dukh aur sukh mai saath deta aaya h aur uss k illegal bussiness ko itna safal bnane mai main role play kiya h.
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Sourya ki moti buddhi k aage sashank ki tej buddhi jeet gye. Aag mai tap kr sourya k demag ka bhusa aur gobar bhi jal k raakh ho gya aur fir sashank ne uss khali dibbe ka dhakkan khol diya.
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Jaisa ki kha jata h jo insan ki kamjori hoti h wahi usski takat bhi hoti to jha iss flashback mai bikki sona aur pooja k pyar or care ki wajah se kamjor padta dikha wahi chupe hue dushman k milne par yahi dono bikki ko majbut banne mai madad karegi.
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Keep posting.
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Shukriya brotha....

Aapka saath paakar khusi milti hai...

Nice review bhai...

 

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Nice update biradar

Thanks for ur review bro....Hope I can met ur expectation

 

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Story mind-blowing Bhai hai Avi tk speechless bro..puja ka no.jaldi lgana padega ye alag BT hai bc apna hero puja ko dekh KR excited nhi hua but bc aajkl bikki ka sex ki parti jaise inrest badha hai aage bc kuch v ho skta hai Sach Mai fast thrill story mujhe itna pasnd aai hai ..diamg ka dahi KR Diya hai..Jahan tk story ka title hai isse to itna idea hai Jo koi villan hoga wo bikki ko ache se janta hoga or bikki v ..kiw ki kuch v ho skta hai love or lost ..

Thanks bhai ....ummid karta hu ki aage vi aapko ye story pasand aayegi

 

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Thanks for waiting yaaro....

Update kal raat tak....

 

[amita]

Superb update

Update 36

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SAshank bas aankhe jhukake betha hua tha.....Bikki sashank ke pet me ek jor ka mukka deke....

Bikki: HUM HUM HAI BAAKI SAAB PAANI KAM HAI....


Ab aage...


Sashank ke upar Bikki khud se vi jyada varosa karta tha aur sashank se apne saari parisaniyon ko share karke av thoda halka vi hogaya tha....Yesa koi kaam nahi tha jo sashank ne karke nahi dikhaya.....Jab vi koi masla ho jata tha Bikki se lekar Bikki ke saare log Sashank ko hi yaad karte the....Bikki sashank ke karnamo ko yaad karne lagta hai....

FLASHBACK..

Baat karib 4 saal pehle ki hai....jab usswakt Virus Ka naam koi janta tak nahi tha aur naa hi Virus ne koi hungama hi kiya ho...

BIkki apne kisi business proposal leke Sourya se milne gaya tha....jaha sashank vi saath chala huwa tha
Thoda bahut Intro...

Sourya kaale vais jaisa ....Naam to sirf sourya tha par saavi logome unka khauf itna tha ki soura bhai se jana jata tha....Sourya aagka gola aisa kuch nahi tha par haa jab koi aadmiko aagme jala diya jaye aur uss aag ko bujake jo uss aagse bahar nikalta hai wohi tha sourya ....kala face aur Muh par vi bahut daag ke dhabbe thye aur gaal par ek nisan tha ...kehta to wo ye tha ki bachpanme use kisine chaku se mara gaya tha par ye tha nahi....Balki ek din jab wo bahar ghoomne chala gaya tha raaste me bane gadde me gir gaya tha jisse uska dono pair fracture hokar muh kisi patthar me lag gaye thye aur wo usi ka nisaan tha....Jaisa sakal waisa hi akal aur bahut bada kameena ....kameenepan me agar koi degree hota to ye sala Phd kar bethta...

BIkki sourya ke adde me chala jata hai .
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Sourya: kaun hai ye londa....sale tere yeha aane ki himmat kaise huwi

Bikki: Tujse milne aaya hu ..... meri baat dhyanse sun aur teri ye saanpati apne saath rakhle warna ...

Sourya: warna kya ...? Saale dhamki de raha hai yeha aakar...

Baat bigad rahi thi to sashank hi baat ko aage badne nahi deta...

SAshank: cool guyz...saav thik hai hum tumse sirf baat karne ke liye aaye hai

SOurya: to isko bata de ki main koun hu aur merese kaise baat karna hai....

Sashank uski baate sunkar has raha tha....

Sourya: has kyui raha hai bey....

SAshank: chal koi nahi beth kuch baate karte hai....

BIkki bas shourya ko ghure jaa raha tha wo kya maksad se yeha aaya tha par shourya ka akad dekhke av ghussa satwe aasman par chad raha tha....aur teeno hi unke cabin me chale jatey hai aur kuch guns ki smuggling ke baareme baat karne lagte hai...

SAshank: to bol shourya tu hamara saath dega....

Shourya : Wo saab to thik hai par isko bol merese maafi maang le....

Bikki ko to itna jyada ghussa aagaya tha ki Khukuri bahar nikal chuka tha....Sashank Bikki ko dekhke...

Sashank: Control Bikki Control....

Shourya : saale ghoor kyui raha hai...tujko jinda nahi rehna hai kya saale....av sirf maafi nahi.....isko bol mere per pakar ke maafi mang le .

Bikki: Sashank isko samja de ..... ye kuch jyada bol raha hai....

Shourya: kya kaha rey tune
Kehke Bikki ka color pakad leta hai....Bas itna hi kaafi tha Bikki ka dhairye khatam hone ke liye...Khukuri se ek jhatka Shourya ke sar me maarne hi wala tha ki Sashank Bikki ko dhakka dete huwe Piche dhakel deta hai.....

SAshank: yar ruk vi jaa ....mein isko samja deta hu

Shourya: tu kya samajyega bey....saale tum dono ko to mein yehi zinda dafna deta hu aaj ruk bhosdike

Sashank baat nahi banne wali samajkar Bikkiko Wapas chalne ke liye Kehta hai par Shourya aise hi thodi na jane dene wala tha....

SAch me mrityu ....ye kaal kab aata hai pata nahi .....Ek banda 10 male ke building se gir kar vi jinda wapas aata hai to fir dusra banda bas Sidiyon se girne se hi ludak jata hai....mrityu kaise kab aur kis ko aajaye kisiko nahi malum

Aur ye bhala dheela akal wala shourya ko kaise malum hota ki aaj uska aakhri din hai....isiliye to Wo Bikki par hamla karne hi wala tha ki Sashank usko piche se jakad leta hai aur usko wahi jameen par gira deta hai....Aur bikki ke taraf dekhke...

Sashank: Bhai ...log marne ke liye itna betaab kyui hote hai yarr....kehte hue apna gun nikaalkar shourya ki kanpatti me rakhke bas 1 second me shouryako yamalog bhej deta hai....

BOOM aur isike saath Shourya ke aadmi Andarka haal dekhne chale aate hai....jaha unka boss khoon se latpat hokar gira pada hua tha.....
1(shourya ke aadmi)
1(Chillakar): Isne bhai ko maar diya hai.....bhoond dalo saaloko ....

kEhte huwe Bikki or sasank ke upar andha dhund firing karne lagta hai par ... jaisa hi wo boukhla kar fire karne laga tha dono hi table ke piche jaakar apne aapko cover karlete hai....

Bas kuch hi derme waha shourya ke saare admi pohuch jate hai.....aur Bikki or Sashank ke upar hamla karne lagtey hai....

AV to bachna namunkin hi lag rahi thi aur Bikki ko to av kuch aas vi nahi bacha tha aur apna maut ka intzaar kar raha tha....par udhar sashank cool dekh rakh raha tha jispar jaise hi Bikki ne sashank ko dekha to wo ek pal ke liye Achamvit pad jata hai....Sashank ka chehra dekhke aisa kuch nahi lagta tha ki unlogo ka av aakhri pal hai wo to bahut cool dikh raha tha....Idhaar Bikki ka to bura haal hochuka tha apne jaan se jyada usko apne behno ka fikar sata rahi thi .....Av sona kya karegi yehi Dimaag par ghoom raha tha.....sayad ye hi ek diffrence sashank aur Bikki me thi....Bikki vi apna mout se nahi darta tha aur nahi sashank par Bikki apne behno ka kuch hojane se bahut darta tha par sashank ko nahi kyuiki wo to akela tha nahi koi pyar karne wala tha aur nahi kisise pyar karta tha.....A true meaning of complete warrior

Jab Bikki ko ghurte huwe sasank ne dekh liya to wo bas muskurake theher jane ke liye ishara karta hai....aur ek uchi awaazme...

SAshank: Saalo Akal ke dusman .....tum log ko kya lagta hai ki hum yehapar aise hi aaye hai....kuch to socho saalo

Thodi der ke liye firing ruk jati hai....

1: tu kehna kya chahta hai....?
Sashank: agar hum tere adde par aakar tere Boss ko uda diye hu to soch saale humne kuch planning to ki hogi na


1: Ab marne se daar raha hai aur baate banane laga hai....

Sashank(confidence ke saath): To saalo hum to marenge hi marenge par tum logo ko saath lekar hi marenge

Av sashank ka confidence dekhkar to saavke saav darne lage thye....

1: tu kehna kya chahta hai?

Sashank: jab hum me se koi 1 vi marega to dekh le yeha par 3 km radius tak sav tabah ho jayegi .....ek bada dhamaka hoga aur isse bachna asambhav hai ...par agar tum risk lena chahte hai to thik hai yaaro....humara kya hai akele aaye thye par kitno ko saath lekar jayenge...isse khusi hume kya hosakta hai

Av to sachme unn logo ki faat gayi thi....Bikki vi shocked hokar Sashank ko badi badi aankh karke dekh raha tha...Aakhir ye kya keh raha tha ....yesa kuch to nahi tha fir ye kya bol raha hai samaj me nahi aaraha tha

1(darke): tu jhooth bol raha hai?

Bas uske itna kehte hi Sashank muskura ke khada hojata hai bina cover ke....

SAshank: to khud dekh le....maar goli sidha yeha maarna xaati pe .....Mard hai hum iss jaan ke saath to hum bachpan se khelte aaye hai

Av Sashank ka confidence ko dekhte huwe kisiki himmat nahi horahi thi Unke upar goli chalane ko....

SAshank fir unlogo ko dekhke jor jor se hasne lagta hai....

Sashank: saalo fat gayi kya....ek baar try to kar sayad mein jhut bol raha hu ki..(Jor jor se haske)

Av maut ko aage dekhkar bina tayari aise koi has nahi sakta tha ....sabhi log yehi soch rahe thye aur sashank ke upar varosa vi kar liya...aur ghoor ghoor ke dhohri bichaar leke sashank ko ghoorne lagte hai....

Sashank: Hume markar tumlogo ko kya milega....GHANTA....av to tera koi boss vi nahi bacha av tere ko paise dene wale vi koi nahi hoga Hume markar khud vi marjane se jyada humse haat mila le...

Av sashank ke baat me dam thi ....

SAshank: Hum aapne saathiyo ke liye hatiyar lene aaye thye jo tumlogo ke pass hai mein chahta hu ki tumlog wo hatiyar hume dedo aur hum tumhe dher saari paise denge jo tum log aapas me baad lo ....saavko karib 30 lakh milenge ....agar hum yehi par mar jayenge to tum vi maroge aur tumhara ghanta kuch hoga par soch lo haath milaoge to tum aur hum dono ko bas faida hi hoga

AV sashank ka prastav sachme unn log ko bhaa gayi thi....aur sabhi ke saabhi Bikki se haat milane ke liye tayar hojatey hai....

Sashank : to thik hai tum log apna saaman hume bhej do hum saav ko Cash denge no cheque ......sabhi ke sabhi ke haato me paisa hoga

1: Par iska guarentee kya hai tum hume dhoka nahi doge....

SAshank: iska guarentee main hu ....jab tak hamara deal success nahi hoga main tumhare saath rahunga bina hatiyar ....soch le ye chance dubara nahi milega ....

Av saav ko pakka hogaya tha ki sashank jhut nahi bol raha tha.....

Fir deal final karke Bikki Sashank se akele me milne chala jata hai...

Bikki: What the fuck....? Kamal kar diya bhai tune to....Itni kam price me hume guns vi milenge aur hamara jaan vi bach gaya hai....U r amazing ....Tera koi jawaab nahi sashank...

sAshank : chal rehen de....av deal jaldi se jaldi over and out karle nahi to inn saalo ke saath jyada din tak rukna padega....

Bikki fir sashank ko dekhke hasne lag jata hai....aur 2 dinme Av Deal vi pakka ho chuka tha aur sashank vi wapas lout chuka tha as promised....

Flashback over....

To be continue....

 

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