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[Rahul]

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Update 40
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Fir ek din ....humare basti me ek insaanme prawesh kiya jo hamare liye mashiha banke aaya tha ... wo aur koi nahi....

Wo Tha BIKKI

Ab aage...

Buddha: Bikki beta ne aate hi saav thik kardiya....

Pooja: par unlogo ko to virus ne mara tha na to fir Bhaiya ne kya kiya.....iska credit toh virus ko dena tha na(Bichari nasamajh thi Virus ke baareme)

Par sona saav samajh chuki thi ....wo to janti thi ki virus ka leader hi Bikki tha par wo ye baat apne jaan si pyari saheli ko vi batana nahi chahti thi....wo ye nahi chahti thi ki bhaiya ka image poojake saamne kharab ho to chup rehna hi behtar samajti hai....

Buddha: haa Bikki ne Virus ki madat li thi iss kaam me....Unlogo ko to virus ne hi mara tha

Pooja: kya cool hai na bhaiya....Virus ke saath vi dosti kar rakhi hai..usswakt vi hame bachane ke liye Virus aaya tha...sach me bhaijaan Bahut takatwar hai ...Hai na sona?

Sona apni soch me gum thi aur pooja ki baate sunkar wo aatpati se haan mein jawab deti hai....

Buddha: To fir tum log aaram karlo.....aaj hamare yeha hi rehjaao ....Binti hai tumlogo se?

SOna : arey aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho ..... aap plz hamse yese baat naa kijiye hum to aapke beti hai naa to fir aap humse binti kyui kar rahe ho?

Buddha : Maaf karna beti...par mein dil se yehi chahta hu ki tum log aaj yehi par ruk jao...

SOna : aaj jo vi ho mein to yeha se jane wali nahi hu, aap nischint raho

Pooja : wo to thik hai par aap hame saav kuch kyui nahi bata rahe ho....aur sona tu bas ye sunne ke liye itna natak kar rahi thi..?

Sona: mujhe nahi sunna hai purani baate saav vul jao!(natak kar rahi thi)

Pooja : par mujhe to sunna hai ....bataiye na Uncle aage kya hua?

Buddha : Bas kuch khas nahi Bikki aaya aur Virus ki madat se hamari sab musibat ko dur kardiya....

Pooja : Aap vi Bilkul boring ho yar .....aur haan Bhaiya aap logo se kyui naraaz hai ye vi bata dijiye na?

Buddha : ye mein tumko nahi bata paunga beti....muje maaf kardo

Pooja : Boring boring boring.....chalo koi baat nahi dheere dheere bhaiya ka naarazgi vi dur ho jayegi

Buddha: aasha hai beti....

Pooja : Ok uncle hamare room kaha par hai...mujhe to bahut neend aarahi hai

......

JAdibutiyo ko khojkar mein vaagta huwa buddhe ke pass gaya to meine dekha ki sona av jaag chuki hai ....meri to khusi ka thikana nahi tha aur mein jadibutio ko wahi jameen par rakhke sona ko doudte huwe gale se laga liya....sona mere iss pyar ko sehen kar nahi payi aur foot foot ke rone lagi...

Sona: saab theek hai bhaiya....mein theek hu

Mein: sona kuch nahi hoga tujhe .....mere jiteji tujhe mein kuch hone nahi dunga ....plz sonaa plz mere liye ...sirf mere liye tum aapna dhyaan rakho mujhe aur kuch nahi chaiye...

SOnake aankhon me se aashu tap tap karke gir rahe thye to mein uske aashuon ko poochte huwe....sona ko dekhne laga par sona najre jhukaye beth rahi thi...

SOna : mein kitni buri hu na bhaiya...aap mujse itna pyar karte ho par mein ....(stop)

Main: Tum bilkul vi buri nahi ho....U r the sweetest

Abhi hamara pyar ka khel kuch der tak aur chalne wali thi par pooja bich me tapak padi...

Pooja : bhaiya av bas vi karo sona bilkul theek hai bas thoda aaram karne do...(sona ko ghusse se ghoorte huwe)

Bikki: kaisi baat kar rahi ho pooja ....dekha nahi tumne sonako kya hogaya tha

Pooja : av theek hai pucho to sona se....

SOna haan me sar hila deti hai....

Mein: theek hai aaj tum log rest karo ..... hum aaj yehi par rukenge

Buddha jo kaafi der tak hamari baate sun raha tha av bahut khuss lag raha tha...

Buddha : beta aaj hamare saath hi rehlo....

Bikki: nahi hum kisi hotel me chale jayenge...

Pooja: bhaiya plzz naa .... uncle kitna request kar rahe hai aur sona ko raat me fir tabiyat kharav hogi to wo ilaaj kardenge naa ....

Av fir se poojane behen ki baat xed di thi to man naa karte huwe vi haan mein sar hila diya .....

Buddha hamare liye kamra tayar karke hume aaram karne ke liye bhej diya....to mein room me jate hi so gaya ....thakan mere sar par bhaari hogayi thi...dinbhar ki mehenat aur jadibuti khojnee ke liye khaye thokare se badan me dard sa hone laga tha to kuch hi xen me hi mereko neend ne aapne aaghos me leliya....

UDhar pooja vi room par jaate hi so gayi thi....par sona ke aankhon me neend ki koi nisaani tak dikh nahi rahi thi.....usko kuch vi ho yehapar kya huwa tha janna hi tha aur pooja ke sone ka hi intzaar kar rahi thi...jab pooja puri tarah se sone ka aabhas hua to wo uthkar buddhe ka kamra ko dhakdhakane lagti hai....

Buddha darwaza kholkar ....

Buddha : kya huwa beti kuch chaiye kya...?

Sona: uncle mein aapse sidha sidha hi kehti hu!

Buddha : baat kya hai beti?

Sona: yeha par kya huwa tha mujhe sach sach batadijiye! Chaye wo baat choti si hi kyui na ho par aap mujhe saav sach bata dijiye...

Buddha : tum kya sunna chahti ho beti?

SOna : mein sab janti hu virus kya hai aur Virus ko kisne banaya hai! Mein usswakt chup isliye bethi thi ki wo baat pooja ko pata naa chal paye ....par mujhe av janna hi hai aakhir yeha par huwa kya tha?

Buddha : Beti tum sun nahi paogi...? Behtar hoga tum iss baatko yehi par khatam kardo

SOna : Aap plz mujhe bata dijye ....Jo vi ho mein saab janna hi chahti hu..! Agar mein khud ki bhaiya ke baareme jaan naa payi to laanat hai mujhe unke behen hone pe

Buddha : ek baar fir soch lo..

SOna: sochkar hi aayi hu...

Buddha: andar aajao!

Sona vi buddhe ke piche piche unke kamre par chali jati hai aur bedpe bethke...

SOna : av batadijiye...

Buddha fir kamre ko theek se band karke sona ke pass chala jata hai ...

Buddha fir detailly sona ko sabkuch batane lagta hai....

Aaj Bikki ne iss basti par pehla kadam rakha tha....Sayad usko kahi jana tha isi raaste se hokar par uski buri kismat se ho ya fir hamari pukar se aaj Bikki isi basti me rehgaya ....hua ye tha ki yeha se thodi dur road band hojane se usko yeha rukna hi pada...

.....FLASHBACK IN DETAIL....

Bikki : hait sala .... av to road vi block hai aaj to Goa jana hi tha par futi kismat....

BIkki rasta band hone se niraash lag raha tha aur fir wapas basti ke taraf chala aaya ....aur yehi pass ke hotel me chaye aur ek cigratte maga liya..

Avi bas Bikki ne cigrate ko jalaya hi tha ki utne me shera ka aadmi aagaya aur ek budhi si aaurat ko maarne laga .....ye aaurat hamare hi basti ki thi par hamari itni himmat nahi thi ki hum usko kuch keh sake....Bikki ye saab dekhke ghusse se usko dekhne laga par kaha kuch nahi ...aur naahi uski madaat karne ke liye aage bada

Avi kuch der hi huwa tha ki uss buddi ka beta aur beti rotey huwe unki maa ko xutane aaye par wo sala kutta kaha manne wala tha ...usne uss bachi ko uthakar fek diya jisse uske sarmae chot lagne se behos hogayi .... Bikki ye saav dekh rahaa tha par fir vi kuch kar nahi raha tha

Jab uss bachiko chot lagi to uska wo bhai usko dekhne gaya jo avi vi behos thi.....

Bacha : neetu tujhe kuch nahi hoga....khoon beh raaha hai...koi to bachalo meri behen ko ....
Itna kehkar wo fut fut kar rone laga ....ye saav dekhke Bikkiko apni bachpan ki yaade taaza hone lagi tha....

Bikki ghusse me uthkar uss bache ke pass chala jata hai .....aur bache ko ek thappad marke ....

BIkko: roo kyui raha hai.....(khukuri dekar)utha hatiyar aur maar de iss kutte ko....Sali ye duniya bahut zalim hai teri madat ke liye koi nahi aayega agar apni behen se pyar karta hai to khud bacha le apni behen ko ....koi nahi aayega tere liye koi nahi aayega (Bikki ke aankho me se aashu beh raha tha)

Shera ka aadmi Bikki ko ghoorte huwe...

S1: saale koun hai tu.....lagta hai bahar se aaya hai...tu sayad hame janta nahi

BIkki koi jawaab nahi de raha tha....jisse wo aur jyada bhadak gaya aur Bikki ko maarne aaya hi tha ki bacha khukuri uthakar uske upar hamla karne hi wala tha ki wo uske haat se khukuri chinke usko dhakka dete huwe hasne lagta hai....

S1: sala harami mujhe maarne aaya hai....aur tu ruk maderchod tujhe to main avi dikhata hu tune kiske saath panga liya hai....kehte huwe wo Bikkika color pakadke Bikkiko ek mukka jhad deta hai.....

Bas itna hi huwa tha ki Bikki apni jeb me se revolver nikal kar dham dham dham dham se uske upar pura revolver khali kardeta hai....jisse wo wahi jameen par ludak chuka tha

Kuch hi xen me yeha par kya huwa savi ke savi log ektak lagake dekh rahe thye aur samajne ke kosish kar rahe thye....Bikki ko savi log ek sawaliya nazar se dekh rahe thye utne me hi wo aurat Bikki ke saamne aakar...

Aaurat: Beta tum koun ho?

BIkki : ek raha chalta musafir...

Aaurat: Tum chale jao yehase...warna wo log tumhe vi mar denge....tumne hamari madat ki hai iske liye mein tumko kuch de nahi sakti par mera ashirwaad tumhare saath har pal saath rahega

Av bachi vi jaag chuki thi aur dono bache Bikki ke pass aakar...

Bache: Thank you bhaiya....kehte huwe muskurane lagtey hai

Uss bachike sar pe chot lagi thi fir vi muskura rahi thi sar se khoon beh raha tha fir vi muskura rahi thi aankhon me se dard saaf jhalak raha tha fir vi muskura rahi thi....jisko dekhke ye pata lagana der nahi lagta ki ye log bahut parisaniyon aur dard me hai....ye dard itna gehra tha ki sarir ke jhakham vi iske saamne kuch nahi tha

BIkki ko uss bachiko dekhke apne behen sona ki yaad dila rahi thi....jab sona choti thi to mujhe dekhke wo aise hi muskurati thi bas yehi baate Bikki ke sar par ghoom raha tha...

BIkki : av mein aagaya hu tumko kuch nahi hone dunga betu(ghoom ghoom kar uss bachika face sona se jud jati thi)

BAchi vi Bikki ko gale lagakar Bikkika sahara lete huwe aasu bahane lagi thi .....

Bikkiko avi bahut bura lag raha tha uski haalat dekhke to fir chillane lagta hai...

BIkki: doctor yehapar koi doctor nahi hai kya?

Fir wo buddha bikki ke pass aakar ....

Buddha : beta yehapar doctor to nahi hai par mein yeha ka baidh hu...

Bikki: to fir ilaaj karo aise ghoor ghoor ke kya dekh rahe ho?

Buddha : mein ye nahi kar sakta agar mene iska ilaaj kiya to wo log mujhe vi maar denge...

Bikki(ghusse mein): agar tune ilaaj nahi ki to mein avi tujhe maar dunga ....

Buddha av bahut dar gaya tha Kahise vi Bikki majaak nahi kar raha tha agar sachme wo ilaaj nahi karta to wo buddha ko jaan se maarne ka hi irademe tha.....

Buddha : theek hai kehkar uska ilaaj kar deta hai...

Buddha: Beta tumne bahut badi vul kar di hai...av ye log tumhe vi jaan se mardenge

BIkki : sale yese chup chupkar rehne se to marna behtaar hai namardo....salo ek buddhi aaurat ko koi mar raha hai tum log haatme chudiya pehenkar bethe thye ek bachi ko mar raha tha to pairo par pauju baandkar bethe thye namard salo ....mar jao tum sab ...sale khaak ji rahe ho... isse behtar to Mar jana thik hoga

Buddha :tum usko jante nahi ho beta ....jab tum usko janoge to ye baat firse kabhi nahi kahoge...

BIkki: thu sala lanat hai tere jaise se...Bikki ghusse me unn bacho aur aurat ko apne saath lekar hotel me chala jata hai....

Waha par bethe sav log ne laash ka thikana laga diya tha ...agar wo laash ke bareme shera ko pata chala to Bikki ke saath saath unlogo par vi musibat aasakti thi ...

Raat dhal gayi aur nayi din ki suruwat horahi thi ....

BIkki uthte hi uss bachiko sote huwe dekhkar sona ko yaad karne lagta hai.....aur muskurakar khanee pine ka thikana lagane lagta hai...

Av road block khul chuki thi to Bikki ko waha se jana tha ....to wo uss bachi aur bache ko dekhkar...

BIkki: mein avi Goa ke liye nikal raha hu....aur loutte wakt tumlogo ko saath me lekar chalunga....ok

DOno hi khuss hokar haa mein sar hila dete hai....

Uske baad Bikki Goa ke liye nikal padta hai....Goa me kuch meeting thi to wo uss meeting ko pura hote hote raat hogayi thi to aaj wapas jana to possible nahi lag raha tha to wo aaj ki raat yehi par guzarna hi behtar samajta hai...

Sayad yehi uski vul thi.....

TO Be continue....

Brilliaant update

 

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Waiting

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Nice one bro
Flashback was skip for pooja
then continue for sona's request
Looks like in this way slowly slowly Bikky's past will reveal before sona
In this flashback showed Bikky have a great leadership
Keep it up bro
Waiting for next traumatic moments

 

[Johnboy11]

Update 40
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Fir ek din ....humare basti me ek insaanme prawesh kiya jo hamare liye mashiha banke aaya tha ... wo aur koi nahi....

Wo Tha BIKKI

Ab aage...

Buddha: Bikki beta ne aate hi saav thik kardiya....

Pooja: par unlogo ko to virus ne mara tha na to fir Bhaiya ne kya kiya.....iska credit toh virus ko dena tha na(Bichari nasamajh thi Virus ke baareme)

Par sona saav samajh chuki thi ....wo to janti thi ki virus ka leader hi Bikki tha par wo ye baat apne jaan si pyari saheli ko vi batana nahi chahti thi....wo ye nahi chahti thi ki bhaiya ka image poojake saamne kharab ho to chup rehna hi behtar samajti hai....

Buddha: haa Bikki ne Virus ki madat li thi iss kaam me....Unlogo ko to virus ne hi mara tha

Pooja: kya cool hai na bhaiya....Virus ke saath vi dosti kar rakhi hai..usswakt vi hame bachane ke liye Virus aaya tha...sach me bhaijaan Bahut takatwar hai ...Hai na sona?

Sona apni soch me gum thi aur pooja ki baate sunkar wo aatpati se haan mein jawab deti hai....

Buddha: To fir tum log aaram karlo.....aaj hamare yeha hi rehjaao ....Binti hai tumlogo se?

SOna : arey aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho ..... aap plz hamse yese baat naa kijiye hum to aapke beti hai naa to fir aap humse binti kyui kar rahe ho?

Buddha : Maaf karna beti...par mein dil se yehi chahta hu ki tum log aaj yehi par ruk jao...

SOna : aaj jo vi ho mein to yeha se jane wali nahi hu, aap nischint raho

Pooja : wo to thik hai par aap hame saav kuch kyui nahi bata rahe ho....aur sona tu bas ye sunne ke liye itna natak kar rahi thi..?

Sona: mujhe nahi sunna hai purani baate saav vul jao!(natak kar rahi thi)

Pooja : par mujhe to sunna hai ....bataiye na Uncle aage kya hua?

Buddha : Bas kuch khas nahi Bikki aaya aur Virus ki madat se hamari sab musibat ko dur kardiya....

Pooja : Aap vi Bilkul boring ho yar .....aur haan Bhaiya aap logo se kyui naraaz hai ye vi bata dijiye na?

Buddha : ye mein tumko nahi bata paunga beti....muje maaf kardo

Pooja : Boring boring boring.....chalo koi baat nahi dheere dheere bhaiya ka naarazgi vi dur ho jayegi

Buddha: aasha hai beti....

Pooja : Ok uncle hamare room kaha par hai...mujhe to bahut neend aarahi hai

......

JAdibutiyo ko khojkar mein vaagta huwa buddhe ke pass gaya to meine dekha ki sona av jaag chuki hai ....meri to khusi ka thikana nahi tha aur mein jadibutio ko wahi jameen par rakhke sona ko doudte huwe gale se laga liya....sona mere iss pyar ko sehen kar nahi payi aur foot foot ke rone lagi...

Sona: saab theek hai bhaiya....mein theek hu

Mein: sona kuch nahi hoga tujhe .....mere jiteji tujhe mein kuch hone nahi dunga ....plz sonaa plz mere liye ...sirf mere liye tum aapna dhyaan rakho mujhe aur kuch nahi chaiye...

SOnake aankhon me se aashu tap tap karke gir rahe thye to mein uske aashuon ko poochte huwe....sona ko dekhne laga par sona najre jhukaye beth rahi thi...

SOna : mein kitni buri hu na bhaiya...aap mujse itna pyar karte ho par mein ....(stop)

Main: Tum bilkul vi buri nahi ho....U r the sweetest

Abhi hamara pyar ka khel kuch der tak aur chalne wali thi par pooja bich me tapak padi...

Pooja : bhaiya av bas vi karo sona bilkul theek hai bas thoda aaram karne do...(sona ko ghusse se ghoorte huwe)

Bikki: kaisi baat kar rahi ho pooja ....dekha nahi tumne sonako kya hogaya tha

Pooja : av theek hai pucho to sona se....

SOna haan me sar hila deti hai....

Mein: theek hai aaj tum log rest karo ..... hum aaj yehi par rukenge

Buddha jo kaafi der tak hamari baate sun raha tha av bahut khuss lag raha tha...

Buddha : beta aaj hamare saath hi rehlo....

Bikki: nahi hum kisi hotel me chale jayenge...

Pooja: bhaiya plzz naa .... uncle kitna request kar rahe hai aur sona ko raat me fir tabiyat kharav hogi to wo ilaaj kardenge naa ....

Av fir se poojane behen ki baat xed di thi to man naa karte huwe vi haan mein sar hila diya .....

Buddha hamare liye kamra tayar karke hume aaram karne ke liye bhej diya....to mein room me jate hi so gaya ....thakan mere sar par bhaari hogayi thi...dinbhar ki mehenat aur jadibuti khojnee ke liye khaye thokare se badan me dard sa hone laga tha to kuch hi xen me hi mereko neend ne aapne aaghos me leliya....

UDhar pooja vi room par jaate hi so gayi thi....par sona ke aankhon me neend ki koi nisaani tak dikh nahi rahi thi.....usko kuch vi ho yehapar kya huwa tha janna hi tha aur pooja ke sone ka hi intzaar kar rahi thi...jab pooja puri tarah se sone ka aabhas hua to wo uthkar buddhe ka kamra ko dhakdhakane lagti hai....

Buddha darwaza kholkar ....

Buddha : kya huwa beti kuch chaiye kya...?

Sona: uncle mein aapse sidha sidha hi kehti hu!

Buddha : baat kya hai beti?

Sona: yeha par kya huwa tha mujhe sach sach batadijiye! Chaye wo baat choti si hi kyui na ho par aap mujhe saav sach bata dijiye...

Buddha : tum kya sunna chahti ho beti?

SOna : mein sab janti hu virus kya hai aur Virus ko kisne banaya hai! Mein usswakt chup isliye bethi thi ki wo baat pooja ko pata naa chal paye ....par mujhe av janna hi hai aakhir yeha par huwa kya tha?

Buddha : Beti tum sun nahi paogi...? Behtar hoga tum iss baatko yehi par khatam kardo

SOna : Aap plz mujhe bata dijye ....Jo vi ho mein saab janna hi chahti hu..! Agar mein khud ki bhaiya ke baareme jaan naa payi to laanat hai mujhe unke behen hone pe

Buddha : ek baar fir soch lo..

SOna: sochkar hi aayi hu...

Buddha: andar aajao!

Sona vi buddhe ke piche piche unke kamre par chali jati hai aur bedpe bethke...

SOna : av batadijiye...

Buddha fir kamre ko theek se band karke sona ke pass chala jata hai ...

Buddha fir detailly sona ko sabkuch batane lagta hai....

Aaj Bikki ne iss basti par pehla kadam rakha tha....Sayad usko kahi jana tha isi raaste se hokar par uski buri kismat se ho ya fir hamari pukar se aaj Bikki isi basti me rehgaya ....hua ye tha ki yeha se thodi dur road band hojane se usko yeha rukna hi pada...

.....FLASHBACK IN DETAIL....

Bikki : hait sala .... av to road vi block hai aaj to Goa jana hi tha par futi kismat....

BIkki rasta band hone se niraash lag raha tha aur fir wapas basti ke taraf chala aaya ....aur yehi pass ke hotel me chaye aur ek cigratte maga liya..

Avi bas Bikki ne cigrate ko jalaya hi tha ki utne me shera ka aadmi aagaya aur ek budhi si aaurat ko maarne laga .....ye aaurat hamare hi basti ki thi par hamari itni himmat nahi thi ki hum usko kuch keh sake....Bikki ye saab dekhke ghusse se usko dekhne laga par kaha kuch nahi ...aur naahi uski madaat karne ke liye aage bada

Avi kuch der hi huwa tha ki uss buddi ka beta aur beti rotey huwe unki maa ko xutane aaye par wo sala kutta kaha manne wala tha ...usne uss bachi ko uthakar fek diya jisse uske sarmae chot lagne se behos hogayi .... Bikki ye saav dekh rahaa tha par fir vi kuch kar nahi raha tha

Jab uss bachiko chot lagi to uska wo bhai usko dekhne gaya jo avi vi behos thi.....

Bacha : neetu tujhe kuch nahi hoga....khoon beh raaha hai...koi to bachalo meri behen ko ....
Itna kehkar wo fut fut kar rone laga ....ye saav dekhke Bikkiko apni bachpan ki yaade taaza hone lagi tha....

Bikki ghusse me uthkar uss bache ke pass chala jata hai .....aur bache ko ek thappad marke ....

BIkko: roo kyui raha hai.....(khukuri dekar)utha hatiyar aur maar de iss kutte ko....Sali ye duniya bahut zalim hai teri madat ke liye koi nahi aayega agar apni behen se pyar karta hai to khud bacha le apni behen ko ....koi nahi aayega tere liye koi nahi aayega (Bikki ke aankho me se aashu beh raha tha)

Shera ka aadmi Bikki ko ghoorte huwe...

S1: saale koun hai tu.....lagta hai bahar se aaya hai...tu sayad hame janta nahi

BIkki koi jawaab nahi de raha tha....jisse wo aur jyada bhadak gaya aur Bikki ko maarne aaya hi tha ki bacha khukuri uthakar uske upar hamla karne hi wala tha ki wo uske haat se khukuri chinke usko dhakka dete huwe hasne lagta hai....

S1: sala harami mujhe maarne aaya hai....aur tu ruk maderchod tujhe to main avi dikhata hu tune kiske saath panga liya hai....kehte huwe wo Bikkika color pakadke Bikkiko ek mukka jhad deta hai.....

Bas itna hi huwa tha ki Bikki apni jeb me se revolver nikal kar dham dham dham dham se uske upar pura revolver khali kardeta hai....jisse wo wahi jameen par ludak chuka tha

Kuch hi xen me yeha par kya huwa savi ke savi log ektak lagake dekh rahe thye aur samajne ke kosish kar rahe thye....Bikki ko savi log ek sawaliya nazar se dekh rahe thye utne me hi wo aurat Bikki ke saamne aakar...

Aaurat: Beta tum koun ho?

BIkki : ek raha chalta musafir...

Aaurat: Tum chale jao yehase...warna wo log tumhe vi mar denge....tumne hamari madat ki hai iske liye mein tumko kuch de nahi sakti par mera ashirwaad tumhare saath har pal saath rahega

Av bachi vi jaag chuki thi aur dono bache Bikki ke pass aakar...

Bache: Thank you bhaiya....kehte huwe muskurane lagtey hai

Uss bachike sar pe chot lagi thi fir vi muskura rahi thi sar se khoon beh raha tha fir vi muskura rahi thi aankhon me se dard saaf jhalak raha tha fir vi muskura rahi thi....jisko dekhke ye pata lagana der nahi lagta ki ye log bahut parisaniyon aur dard me hai....ye dard itna gehra tha ki sarir ke jhakham vi iske saamne kuch nahi tha

BIkki ko uss bachiko dekhke apne behen sona ki yaad dila rahi thi....jab sona choti thi to mujhe dekhke wo aise hi muskurati thi bas yehi baate Bikki ke sar par ghoom raha tha...

BIkki : av mein aagaya hu tumko kuch nahi hone dunga betu(ghoom ghoom kar uss bachika face sona se jud jati thi)

BAchi vi Bikki ko gale lagakar Bikkika sahara lete huwe aasu bahane lagi thi .....

Bikkiko avi bahut bura lag raha tha uski haalat dekhke to fir chillane lagta hai...

BIkki: doctor yehapar koi doctor nahi hai kya?

Fir wo buddha bikki ke pass aakar ....

Buddha : beta yehapar doctor to nahi hai par mein yeha ka baidh hu...

Bikki: to fir ilaaj karo aise ghoor ghoor ke kya dekh rahe ho?

Buddha : mein ye nahi kar sakta agar mene iska ilaaj kiya to wo log mujhe vi maar denge...

Bikki(ghusse mein): agar tune ilaaj nahi ki to mein avi tujhe maar dunga ....

Buddha av bahut dar gaya tha Kahise vi Bikki majaak nahi kar raha tha agar sachme wo ilaaj nahi karta to wo buddha ko jaan se maarne ka hi irademe tha.....

Buddha : theek hai kehkar uska ilaaj kar deta hai...

Buddha: Beta tumne bahut badi vul kar di hai...av ye log tumhe vi jaan se mardenge

BIkki : sale yese chup chupkar rehne se to marna behtaar hai namardo....salo ek buddhi aaurat ko koi mar raha hai tum log haatme chudiya pehenkar bethe thye ek bachi ko mar raha tha to pairo par pauju baandkar bethe thye namard salo ....mar jao tum sab ...sale khaak ji rahe ho... isse behtar to Mar jana thik hoga

Buddha :tum usko jante nahi ho beta ....jab tum usko janoge to ye baat firse kabhi nahi kahoge...

BIkki: thu sala lanat hai tere jaise se...Bikki ghusse me unn bacho aur aurat ko apne saath lekar hotel me chala jata hai....

Waha par bethe sav log ne laash ka thikana laga diya tha ...agar wo laash ke bareme shera ko pata chala to Bikki ke saath saath unlogo par vi musibat aasakti thi ...

Raat dhal gayi aur nayi din ki suruwat horahi thi ....

BIkki uthte hi uss bachiko sote huwe dekhkar sona ko yaad karne lagta hai.....aur muskurakar khanee pine ka thikana lagane lagta hai...

Av road block khul chuki thi to Bikki ko waha se jana tha ....to wo uss bachi aur bache ko dekhkar...

BIkki: mein avi Goa ke liye nikal raha hu....aur loutte wakt tumlogo ko saath me lekar chalunga....ok

DOno hi khuss hokar haa mein sar hila dete hai....

Uske baad Bikki Goa ke liye nikal padta hai....Goa me kuch meeting thi to wo uss meeting ko pura hote hote raat hogayi thi to aaj wapas jana to possible nahi lag raha tha to wo aaj ki raat yehi par guzarna hi behtar samajta hai...

Sayad yehi uski vul thi.....

TO Be continue....

Nice update bhai.
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Bda update tha to lga thukam thukai chalu ho jayegi lekin yha to bas ek hi mra chalo koi baat nhi shurywat to hue.
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Pooja ko to gussa hi aagya sona par bechari samajh rahi h bina matlb k natak kiya aur uss k dil bikki ko rula diya.
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Bikki the virus head k dil mai sirf darindgi nhi insaniyat bhi h par sirf accho k liye.
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Raat mai lagta h dhatki tiki hone wali h or bikki ne shayad virus members ko pehle hi active kr diya tha goa mai kyoki usse pta tha ki itni aasani se wo dono baccho ko apne saath nhi leja sakta h.
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Shera k shikar ka samaya aagya re baba apna bikki shikari tayar h.
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Buddha apna imporantness chupa rha tha story nhi bta k par kya kare kitna bhi chupa lo pta to chalna hi h .
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Keep posting.
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[amita]

Bahut hi umda update, bahut sari bhavnao ka samavesh hai.

Update 40
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Fir ek din ....humare basti me ek insaanme prawesh kiya jo hamare liye mashiha banke aaya tha ... wo aur koi nahi....

Wo Tha BIKKI

Ab aage...

Buddha: Bikki beta ne aate hi saav thik kardiya....

Pooja: par unlogo ko to virus ne mara tha na to fir Bhaiya ne kya kiya.....iska credit toh virus ko dena tha na(Bichari nasamajh thi Virus ke baareme)

Par sona saav samajh chuki thi ....wo to janti thi ki virus ka leader hi Bikki tha par wo ye baat apne jaan si pyari saheli ko vi batana nahi chahti thi....wo ye nahi chahti thi ki bhaiya ka image poojake saamne kharab ho to chup rehna hi behtar samajti hai....

Buddha: haa Bikki ne Virus ki madat li thi iss kaam me....Unlogo ko to virus ne hi mara tha

Pooja: kya cool hai na bhaiya....Virus ke saath vi dosti kar rakhi hai..usswakt vi hame bachane ke liye Virus aaya tha...sach me bhaijaan Bahut takatwar hai ...Hai na sona?

Sona apni soch me gum thi aur pooja ki baate sunkar wo aatpati se haan mein jawab deti hai....

Buddha: To fir tum log aaram karlo.....aaj hamare yeha hi rehjaao ....Binti hai tumlogo se?

SOna : arey aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho ..... aap plz hamse yese baat naa kijiye hum to aapke beti hai naa to fir aap humse binti kyui kar rahe ho?

Buddha : Maaf karna beti...par mein dil se yehi chahta hu ki tum log aaj yehi par ruk jao...

SOna : aaj jo vi ho mein to yeha se jane wali nahi hu, aap nischint raho

Pooja : wo to thik hai par aap hame saav kuch kyui nahi bata rahe ho....aur sona tu bas ye sunne ke liye itna natak kar rahi thi..?

Sona: mujhe nahi sunna hai purani baate saav vul jao!(natak kar rahi thi)

Pooja : par mujhe to sunna hai ....bataiye na Uncle aage kya hua?

Buddha : Bas kuch khas nahi Bikki aaya aur Virus ki madat se hamari sab musibat ko dur kardiya....

Pooja : Aap vi Bilkul boring ho yar .....aur haan Bhaiya aap logo se kyui naraaz hai ye vi bata dijiye na?

Buddha : ye mein tumko nahi bata paunga beti....muje maaf kardo

Pooja : Boring boring boring.....chalo koi baat nahi dheere dheere bhaiya ka naarazgi vi dur ho jayegi

Buddha: aasha hai beti....

Pooja : Ok uncle hamare room kaha par hai...mujhe to bahut neend aarahi hai

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JAdibutiyo ko khojkar mein vaagta huwa buddhe ke pass gaya to meine dekha ki sona av jaag chuki hai ....meri to khusi ka thikana nahi tha aur mein jadibutio ko wahi jameen par rakhke sona ko doudte huwe gale se laga liya....sona mere iss pyar ko sehen kar nahi payi aur foot foot ke rone lagi...

Sona: saab theek hai bhaiya....mein theek hu

Mein: sona kuch nahi hoga tujhe .....mere jiteji tujhe mein kuch hone nahi dunga ....plz sonaa plz mere liye ...sirf mere liye tum aapna dhyaan rakho mujhe aur kuch nahi chaiye...

SOnake aankhon me se aashu tap tap karke gir rahe thye to mein uske aashuon ko poochte huwe....sona ko dekhne laga par sona najre jhukaye beth rahi thi...

SOna : mein kitni buri hu na bhaiya...aap mujse itna pyar karte ho par mein ....(stop)

Main: Tum bilkul vi buri nahi ho....U r the sweetest

Abhi hamara pyar ka khel kuch der tak aur chalne wali thi par pooja bich me tapak padi...

Pooja : bhaiya av bas vi karo sona bilkul theek hai bas thoda aaram karne do...(sona ko ghusse se ghoorte huwe)

Bikki: kaisi baat kar rahi ho pooja ....dekha nahi tumne sonako kya hogaya tha

Pooja : av theek hai pucho to sona se....

SOna haan me sar hila deti hai....

Mein: theek hai aaj tum log rest karo ..... hum aaj yehi par rukenge

Buddha jo kaafi der tak hamari baate sun raha tha av bahut khuss lag raha tha...

Buddha : beta aaj hamare saath hi rehlo....

Bikki: nahi hum kisi hotel me chale jayenge...

Pooja: bhaiya plzz naa .... uncle kitna request kar rahe hai aur sona ko raat me fir tabiyat kharav hogi to wo ilaaj kardenge naa ....

Av fir se poojane behen ki baat xed di thi to man naa karte huwe vi haan mein sar hila diya .....

Buddha hamare liye kamra tayar karke hume aaram karne ke liye bhej diya....to mein room me jate hi so gaya ....thakan mere sar par bhaari hogayi thi...dinbhar ki mehenat aur jadibuti khojnee ke liye khaye thokare se badan me dard sa hone laga tha to kuch hi xen me hi mereko neend ne aapne aaghos me leliya....

UDhar pooja vi room par jaate hi so gayi thi....par sona ke aankhon me neend ki koi nisaani tak dikh nahi rahi thi.....usko kuch vi ho yehapar kya huwa tha janna hi tha aur pooja ke sone ka hi intzaar kar rahi thi...jab pooja puri tarah se sone ka aabhas hua to wo uthkar buddhe ka kamra ko dhakdhakane lagti hai....

Buddha darwaza kholkar ....

Buddha : kya huwa beti kuch chaiye kya...?

Sona: uncle mein aapse sidha sidha hi kehti hu!

Buddha : baat kya hai beti?

Sona: yeha par kya huwa tha mujhe sach sach batadijiye! Chaye wo baat choti si hi kyui na ho par aap mujhe saav sach bata dijiye...

Buddha : tum kya sunna chahti ho beti?

SOna : mein sab janti hu virus kya hai aur Virus ko kisne banaya hai! Mein usswakt chup isliye bethi thi ki wo baat pooja ko pata naa chal paye ....par mujhe av janna hi hai aakhir yeha par huwa kya tha?

Buddha : Beti tum sun nahi paogi...? Behtar hoga tum iss baatko yehi par khatam kardo

SOna : Aap plz mujhe bata dijye ....Jo vi ho mein saab janna hi chahti hu..! Agar mein khud ki bhaiya ke baareme jaan naa payi to laanat hai mujhe unke behen hone pe

Buddha : ek baar fir soch lo..

SOna: sochkar hi aayi hu...

Buddha: andar aajao!

Sona vi buddhe ke piche piche unke kamre par chali jati hai aur bedpe bethke...

SOna : av batadijiye...

Buddha fir kamre ko theek se band karke sona ke pass chala jata hai ...

Buddha fir detailly sona ko sabkuch batane lagta hai....

Aaj Bikki ne iss basti par pehla kadam rakha tha....Sayad usko kahi jana tha isi raaste se hokar par uski buri kismat se ho ya fir hamari pukar se aaj Bikki isi basti me rehgaya ....hua ye tha ki yeha se thodi dur road band hojane se usko yeha rukna hi pada...

.....FLASHBACK IN DETAIL....

Bikki : hait sala .... av to road vi block hai aaj to Goa jana hi tha par futi kismat....

BIkki rasta band hone se niraash lag raha tha aur fir wapas basti ke taraf chala aaya ....aur yehi pass ke hotel me chaye aur ek cigratte maga liya..

Avi bas Bikki ne cigrate ko jalaya hi tha ki utne me shera ka aadmi aagaya aur ek budhi si aaurat ko maarne laga .....ye aaurat hamare hi basti ki thi par hamari itni himmat nahi thi ki hum usko kuch keh sake....Bikki ye saab dekhke ghusse se usko dekhne laga par kaha kuch nahi ...aur naahi uski madaat karne ke liye aage bada

Avi kuch der hi huwa tha ki uss buddi ka beta aur beti rotey huwe unki maa ko xutane aaye par wo sala kutta kaha manne wala tha ...usne uss bachi ko uthakar fek diya jisse uske sarmae chot lagne se behos hogayi .... Bikki ye saav dekh rahaa tha par fir vi kuch kar nahi raha tha

Jab uss bachiko chot lagi to uska wo bhai usko dekhne gaya jo avi vi behos thi.....

Bacha : neetu tujhe kuch nahi hoga....khoon beh raaha hai...koi to bachalo meri behen ko ....
Itna kehkar wo fut fut kar rone laga ....ye saav dekhke Bikkiko apni bachpan ki yaade taaza hone lagi tha....

Bikki ghusse me uthkar uss bache ke pass chala jata hai .....aur bache ko ek thappad marke ....

BIkko: roo kyui raha hai.....(khukuri dekar)utha hatiyar aur maar de iss kutte ko....Sali ye duniya bahut zalim hai teri madat ke liye koi nahi aayega agar apni behen se pyar karta hai to khud bacha le apni behen ko ....koi nahi aayega tere liye koi nahi aayega (Bikki ke aankho me se aashu beh raha tha)

Shera ka aadmi Bikki ko ghoorte huwe...

S1: saale koun hai tu.....lagta hai bahar se aaya hai...tu sayad hame janta nahi

BIkki koi jawaab nahi de raha tha....jisse wo aur jyada bhadak gaya aur Bikki ko maarne aaya hi tha ki bacha khukuri uthakar uske upar hamla karne hi wala tha ki wo uske haat se khukuri chinke usko dhakka dete huwe hasne lagta hai....

S1: sala harami mujhe maarne aaya hai....aur tu ruk maderchod tujhe to main avi dikhata hu tune kiske saath panga liya hai....kehte huwe wo Bikkika color pakadke Bikkiko ek mukka jhad deta hai.....

Bas itna hi huwa tha ki Bikki apni jeb me se revolver nikal kar dham dham dham dham se uske upar pura revolver khali kardeta hai....jisse wo wahi jameen par ludak chuka tha

Kuch hi xen me yeha par kya huwa savi ke savi log ektak lagake dekh rahe thye aur samajne ke kosish kar rahe thye....Bikki ko savi log ek sawaliya nazar se dekh rahe thye utne me hi wo aurat Bikki ke saamne aakar...

Aaurat: Beta tum koun ho?

BIkki : ek raha chalta musafir...

Aaurat: Tum chale jao yehase...warna wo log tumhe vi mar denge....tumne hamari madat ki hai iske liye mein tumko kuch de nahi sakti par mera ashirwaad tumhare saath har pal saath rahega

Av bachi vi jaag chuki thi aur dono bache Bikki ke pass aakar...

Bache: Thank you bhaiya....kehte huwe muskurane lagtey hai

Uss bachike sar pe chot lagi thi fir vi muskura rahi thi sar se khoon beh raha tha fir vi muskura rahi thi aankhon me se dard saaf jhalak raha tha fir vi muskura rahi thi....jisko dekhke ye pata lagana der nahi lagta ki ye log bahut parisaniyon aur dard me hai....ye dard itna gehra tha ki sarir ke jhakham vi iske saamne kuch nahi tha

BIkki ko uss bachiko dekhke apne behen sona ki yaad dila rahi thi....jab sona choti thi to mujhe dekhke wo aise hi muskurati thi bas yehi baate Bikki ke sar par ghoom raha tha...

BIkki : av mein aagaya hu tumko kuch nahi hone dunga betu(ghoom ghoom kar uss bachika face sona se jud jati thi)

BAchi vi Bikki ko gale lagakar Bikkika sahara lete huwe aasu bahane lagi thi .....

Bikkiko avi bahut bura lag raha tha uski haalat dekhke to fir chillane lagta hai...

BIkki: doctor yehapar koi doctor nahi hai kya?

Fir wo buddha bikki ke pass aakar ....

Buddha : beta yehapar doctor to nahi hai par mein yeha ka baidh hu...

Bikki: to fir ilaaj karo aise ghoor ghoor ke kya dekh rahe ho?

Buddha : mein ye nahi kar sakta agar mene iska ilaaj kiya to wo log mujhe vi maar denge...

Bikki(ghusse mein): agar tune ilaaj nahi ki to mein avi tujhe maar dunga ....

Buddha av bahut dar gaya tha Kahise vi Bikki majaak nahi kar raha tha agar sachme wo ilaaj nahi karta to wo buddha ko jaan se maarne ka hi irademe tha.....

Buddha : theek hai kehkar uska ilaaj kar deta hai...

Buddha: Beta tumne bahut badi vul kar di hai...av ye log tumhe vi jaan se mardenge

BIkki : sale yese chup chupkar rehne se to marna behtaar hai namardo....salo ek buddhi aaurat ko koi mar raha hai tum log haatme chudiya pehenkar bethe thye ek bachi ko mar raha tha to pairo par pauju baandkar bethe thye namard salo ....mar jao tum sab ...sale khaak ji rahe ho... isse behtar to Mar jana thik hoga

Buddha :tum usko jante nahi ho beta ....jab tum usko janoge to ye baat firse kabhi nahi kahoge...

BIkki: thu sala lanat hai tere jaise se...Bikki ghusse me unn bacho aur aurat ko apne saath lekar hotel me chala jata hai....

Waha par bethe sav log ne laash ka thikana laga diya tha ...agar wo laash ke bareme shera ko pata chala to Bikki ke saath saath unlogo par vi musibat aasakti thi ...

Raat dhal gayi aur nayi din ki suruwat horahi thi ....

BIkki uthte hi uss bachiko sote huwe dekhkar sona ko yaad karne lagta hai.....aur muskurakar khanee pine ka thikana lagane lagta hai...

Av road block khul chuki thi to Bikki ko waha se jana tha ....to wo uss bachi aur bache ko dekhkar...

BIkki: mein avi Goa ke liye nikal raha hu....aur loutte wakt tumlogo ko saath me lekar chalunga....ok

DOno hi khuss hokar haa mein sar hila dete hai....

Uske baad Bikki Goa ke liye nikal padta hai....Goa me kuch meeting thi to wo uss meeting ko pura hote hote raat hogayi thi to aaj wapas jana to possible nahi lag raha tha to wo aaj ki raat yehi par guzarna hi behtar samajta hai...

Sayad yehi uski vul thi.....

TO Be continue....

 

[amita]

Nice one bro
Flashback was skip for pooja
then continue for sona's request
Looks like in this way slowly slowly Bikky's past will reveal before sona
In this flashback showed Bikky have a great leadership
Keep it up bro
Waiting for next traumatic moments

Good review

 

[amita]

Nice update bhai.
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Bda update tha to lga thukam thukai chalu ho jayegi lekin yha to bas ek hi mra chalo koi baat nhi shurywat to hue.
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Pooja ko to gussa hi aagya sona par bechari samajh rahi h bina matlb k natak kiya aur uss k dil bikki ko rula diya.
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Bikki the virus head k dil mai sirf darindgi nhi insaniyat bhi h par sirf accho k liye.
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Raat mai lagta h dhatki tiki hone wali h or bikki ne shayad virus members ko pehle hi active kr diya tha goa mai kyoki usse pta tha ki itni aasani se wo dono baccho ko apne saath nhi leja sakta h.
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Shera k shikar ka samaya aagya re baba apna bikki shikari tayar h.
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Buddha apna imporantness chupa rha tha story nhi bta k par kya kare kitna bhi chupa lo pta to chalna hi h .
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Keep posting.
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Good review and forecast

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Nice update bhai lagta hai un tin ko mar diya tha shera ne aur bikki shera ko

Thanks bhai for ur review....