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Uske baad Bikki Goa ke liye nikal padta hai....Goa me kuch meeting thi to wo uss meeting ko pura hote hote raat hogayi thi to aaj wapas jana to possible nahi lag raha tha to wo aaj ki raat yehi par guzarna hi behtar samajta hai...

Sayad yehi uski vul thi.....

Ab aage...

Bikki basti ke raaste me nikal liya tha....bacho ko yaad karke aaj najane kyui Bikki ke maanme ek dar aur muskan ki milijuli mel thi ....Dar isliye ki uska dil bahut ghabra raha tha bacho ki safety ke liye aur muskan isliye tha ki Jab wo bachi hasti thi to Bilkul sona ki tarah hi dekhti thi .....pyare mukhde par meethi muskaan ....sona ki bachpane taaza ho raha tha....kaise khilkhilakar hasti thi...mujhe dekhte hi kaise khuss hojati thi yehi saav soch sochkar apne gaadi toofani gati par raaste me chala raha tha.....

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Udhar Bastipar shera ke aadmi Bikkiko aur uss buddhi auratko kutte ki tarah dhund rahe thye....Shera ko khabar mil chuki thi ki basti me kisine uske aadmiko maar diya hai isiliye Bikkiko pakadneke liye apne kaafi saare admiyon ko bastime bheja tha.....

BAsti walo ne buddhi aur uske bache ko ek band kathori par chupa diya taaki shera ko unki khabar naa mile....to shera ke aadmi unko kutte ki tarah har jagah dhundne lage.....ek ek jagah ko talash rahe thye jab wo kahi nahi dikha to av unnlogo ne basti walo ko dhamkana suru kiya....

S1: tum logo ko mein aakhri mauka de raha hu .....agar tum logo ne unnka thikana nahi bataya to iske badle tumlogo ko apne jaan ki keemat deni hogi

Basti walo me dar paida hochuka tha fir vi apne man ko buland rakhte huwe naa mein sar hila dete hai...

Buddha: hume nahi pata bhai....lagta hai dar ke mare wo log yeha se vag chuke hai

S2: Bewakuf samajta hai kya hame...Salo mein bas tin tak ginta hu ....aur iske baad tumlogo ke gharo me aag laga dunga .....aur tumlogo ko wahi par jindaa jala dunga

S2: 1 2 3....

Fir vi koi jawaab nahi ....

S2: saalo ruko ....kehte huwe apne jeepme se khub sara petrol nikalkar unke bastike ek ek ghar me petrol xirakne lagtey hai....

Aur matches jalakar....

S2: av bas aakhri mauka...aur iske baad yehapar saab raakh hojayega aur tum log usipe dafan hoge

Av bastiwalo mein khauf itna bad gaya tha ki wo log bina kuch soche hi Buddhi ka thikana bata dete hai....

S2: haha saalo av line par aaye ho....seedhi baat dimaag par nahi ghusti hai kya

Fir apne admiyon ko ishara karke unlogo ko bahar le aane ke liye bhej deta hai....

S1: Bhaya ye ghasti to andar dera jamaye hui thi....haha

Unnlogo ne buddhi ko khichte khichte bahar le aaye....Saalo itna bereham the ki bacho par vi koi Rehem nahi ki....laat marte huwe buddi aur uske bete betiko baahar sadak par le aaye....

S2: buddhi ...bol wo kaha hai.....kisne mara tha hamare admi ko

Buddhi: mujhe nahi pata ....mere bacho ko xod do....mein tumhare saamne bhikh maagti hu mere bacho ko jane do

S2: ye haram ke pille ko xod du...
Kehte huwe bache ko aur jor jor se laat marne lag jata hai....Dard ke maare chillana aur rona.. Bas yehi to kar saktey thye wo anbuj bache

Buddhi apne bache ke liye unke pairo par girke gidgida rahi thi par Saalo ke dil me dil ho to jane ki maa ka pyar kya hota hai....patthar dilwalo ko pyar aur humdardi kabhi samj nahi aati ....aise buddhi ka gidgidana dekhke to wo log aur vi khuss lag rahe thye... rukne ki jagah aur bedardi se maarne lage thye....

Itna mar khake to koi hattakatta aadmi vi gir pade ye to chote bache hi to thye aur ye sehen kar pana unlogo ki bas ki baat nahi thi to wo bache rote huwe hi behos ho gaye....par zaalimo ne behos hone ke bawajud vi koi rehem nahi dikhayi aur maarte chale maarte gaye .......

Apne bete aur beti ka yesa haal dekhke wo waha par bethe logo se madat ke liye guharne lagi ..... par uski madat karne koi aage nahi bada ..... naamardo ki tarah sar jhukaye tamasha dekh rahe thye....

Waha par bas teen chize sunne ko mil rahe thye...
1: ek maa ki pukar
2: unn zalimo ka hasi
3: Baadal garazna jaise ki yeha par bhayankar tufaan aane wali ho....

S2: arey bhaya dekh kya rahe ho ..... jaakar kuch paani waani le aao

S1: haha bhaya samaj gaya ....

KEhte huwe 1 bada sa bottle leke aata hai jisme se petrol ka baas aarahi thi....

S2 bacho ke upar petrol xidakne lagta hai jisko dekhte hi unki maa ki per tharthar kaampne lagtey hai....saanse thamne lagti hai aur s2 ko kisi dayan ki tarah jhapatne wali hi thi ki s1 aake usko apne baajuo mein majbuti se jakad leta hai.....

Aur bas kuch 2 min hi huwa tha ki ek jaljali si aag unke aankhome roshni ka prakash xod jati haai jo roshni dard bhaya aur haiwaniyat se vari huwi thi....

Unm zalimo ne unn nadan si bache ko jinda jala diya tha.....isse bhayanak drisye to nark mein vi dekhne ko naa mile ....

Ek maa ka tadapna aur cheekh cheekh ke vagwan ko guharna ...... bhayanak aur dardnak cheekhe aur badalo ka garazna ....ye kisi anhoni hone ka sanket derahi thi....

Apne bache ko jinda jal raha dekhke unki maa s1ko dhakka dete huwe khud uss aag me jhapak kar kud jati hai....maa ki mamta aur pyar iss had tak hoti hai ki wo apne bache ko khud se alag kabhi dekh nahi sakti aur Jalti huwi aag ke upar chalang lagana ye sayad maa ki mamta hi to thye...

Bas 5 min ke antraalme waha par 3 log zinda aag me raakh hochuke thye.....waha dekh rahe sabhi log aapne aapko kosh rahe thye....aankho me se aashuo ki dhara beh rahe thye .....atmaglani se bhare huwe chehre aur behte huwe aasu tap tap karke jameen par girne lage thye.....unlogo ko aaj khud ki paida hone se dukh ho raha tha....aakho ke saamne 3 nihatte maa bacho ka khoon hogaya tha wo vi itni haiwaniyat se jisko dekhke unnlogo me jine ki khusi se jyada gam hone laga tha.....

Par udhaar shera ke aadmi khilkhilakar has rahe thye.....wo log yese has rahe thye ki jaise unlogo ne ek jung jiti ho .... ek awla nari aur unke do nanhi bacho ko markar yese has rahey the ki mano wo koi sourbir kehlayenge....

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Udhar Bikki raaste me hi tha .....dil bahut ghabra raha tha to wo full speed se gaadi vagane lagta hai.....badalo ka garazna aur panchiyon ka fadfadana raaste var dekh raha tha jisko dekhke Bikki ka per aapne aap kaampne laga tha....

AVi Bikki ki gaadi karib 200 metre ki duri par thi....jav basti par apna dhyan lagaya to paya ki waha par logo ki vid khadi hai.....Vid ko dekhke Bikki ka haal aur kharav hone laga tha....to wo aur paas aakar gaadi rok deta hai aur vid ko cheerte huwe aage badne lagta hai.....savhi log Bikki ko dekhke aashu bahane lage thye....aur atmaglani se Bikki ke taraf dekh rahe thye....avi tak Bikki ko innlogo ka behwaar kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha par jav bheed ko chirte huwe aage dekha to Bikki tej awaazke saath chillane laga ....aankho me se paani behne lage ......aur theek usiwakt ek tej baarish THAP THAP.... saath me toffani hawa SIIIIIIIIIIII .....karke ek saath behne laga

TO BE CONTINUE.....

Bhai what a brilliant update.....I really want to see this story in a movie
BRO u have done really nice work
 

Sonika

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Update 41
Uske baad Bikki Goa ke liye nikal padta hai....Goa me kuch meeting thi to wo uss meeting ko pura hote hote raat hogayi thi to aaj wapas jana to possible nahi lag raha tha to wo aaj ki raat yehi par guzarna hi behtar samajta hai...

Sayad yehi uski vul thi.....

Ab aage...

Bikki basti ke raaste me nikal liya tha....bacho ko yaad karke aaj najane kyui Bikki ke maanme ek dar aur muskan ki milijuli mel thi ....Dar isliye ki uska dil bahut ghabra raha tha bacho ki safety ke liye aur muskan isliye tha ki Jab wo bachi hasti thi to Bilkul sona ki tarah hi dekhti thi .....pyare mukhde par meethi muskaan ....sona ki bachpane taaza ho raha tha....kaise khilkhilakar hasti thi...mujhe dekhte hi kaise khuss hojati thi yehi saav soch sochkar apne gaadi toofani gati par raaste me chala raha tha.....

...


Udhar Bastipar shera ke aadmi Bikkiko aur uss buddhi auratko kutte ki tarah dhund rahe thye....Shera ko khabar mil chuki thi ki basti me kisine uske aadmiko maar diya hai isiliye Bikkiko pakadneke liye apne kaafi saare admiyon ko bastime bheja tha.....

BAsti walo ne buddhi aur uske bache ko ek band kathori par chupa diya taaki shera ko unki khabar naa mile....to shera ke aadmi unko kutte ki tarah har jagah dhundne lage.....ek ek jagah ko talash rahe thye jab wo kahi nahi dikha to av unnlogo ne basti walo ko dhamkana suru kiya....

S1: tum logo ko mein aakhri mauka de raha hu .....agar tum logo ne unnka thikana nahi bataya to iske badle tumlogo ko apne jaan ki keemat deni hogi

Basti walo me dar paida hochuka tha fir vi apne man ko buland rakhte huwe naa mein sar hila dete hai...

Buddha: hume nahi pata bhai....lagta hai dar ke mare wo log yeha se vag chuke hai

S2: Bewakuf samajta hai kya hame...Salo mein bas tin tak ginta hu ....aur iske baad tumlogo ke gharo me aag laga dunga .....aur tumlogo ko wahi par jindaa jala dunga

S2: 1 2 3....

Fir vi koi jawaab nahi ....

S2: saalo ruko ....kehte huwe apne jeepme se khub sara petrol nikalkar unke bastike ek ek ghar me petrol xirakne lagtey hai....

Aur matches jalakar....

S2: av bas aakhri mauka...aur iske baad yehapar saab raakh hojayega aur tum log usipe dafan hoge

Av bastiwalo mein khauf itna bad gaya tha ki wo log bina kuch soche hi Buddhi ka thikana bata dete hai....

S2: haha saalo av line par aaye ho....seedhi baat dimaag par nahi ghusti hai kya

Fir apne admiyon ko ishara karke unlogo ko bahar le aane ke liye bhej deta hai....

S1: Bhaya ye ghasti to andar dera jamaye hui thi....haha

Unnlogo ne buddhi ko khichte khichte bahar le aaye....Saalo itna bereham the ki bacho par vi koi Rehem nahi ki....laat marte huwe buddi aur uske bete betiko baahar sadak par le aaye....

S2: buddhi ...bol wo kaha hai.....kisne mara tha hamare admi ko

Buddhi: mujhe nahi pata ....mere bacho ko xod do....mein tumhare saamne bhikh maagti hu mere bacho ko jane do

S2: ye haram ke pille ko xod du...
Kehte huwe bache ko aur jor jor se laat marne lag jata hai....Dard ke maare chillana aur rona.. Bas yehi to kar saktey thye wo anbuj bache

Buddhi apne bache ke liye unke pairo par girke gidgida rahi thi par Saalo ke dil me dil ho to jane ki maa ka pyar kya hota hai....patthar dilwalo ko pyar aur humdardi kabhi samj nahi aati ....aise buddhi ka gidgidana dekhke to wo log aur vi khuss lag rahe thye... rukne ki jagah aur bedardi se maarne lage thye....

Itna mar khake to koi hattakatta aadmi vi gir pade ye to chote bache hi to thye aur ye sehen kar pana unlogo ki bas ki baat nahi thi to wo bache rote huwe hi behos ho gaye....par zaalimo ne behos hone ke bawajud vi koi rehem nahi dikhayi aur maarte chale maarte gaye .......

Apne bete aur beti ka yesa haal dekhke wo waha par bethe logo se madat ke liye guharne lagi ..... par uski madat karne koi aage nahi bada ..... naamardo ki tarah sar jhukaye tamasha dekh rahe thye....

Waha par bas teen chize sunne ko mil rahe thye...
1: ek maa ki pukar
2: unn zalimo ka hasi
3: Baadal garazna jaise ki yeha par bhayankar tufaan aane wali ho....

S2: arey bhaya dekh kya rahe ho ..... jaakar kuch paani waani le aao

S1: haha bhaya samaj gaya ....

KEhte huwe 1 bada sa bottle leke aata hai jisme se petrol ka baas aarahi thi....

S2 bacho ke upar petrol xidakne lagta hai jisko dekhte hi unki maa ki per tharthar kaampne lagtey hai....saanse thamne lagti hai aur s2 ko kisi dayan ki tarah jhapatne wali hi thi ki s1 aake usko apne baajuo mein majbuti se jakad leta hai.....

Aur bas kuch 2 min hi huwa tha ki ek jaljali si aag unke aankhome roshni ka prakash xod jati haai jo roshni dard bhaya aur haiwaniyat se vari huwi thi....

Unm zalimo ne unn nadan si bache ko jinda jala diya tha.....isse bhayanak drisye to nark mein vi dekhne ko naa mile ....

Ek maa ka tadapna aur cheekh cheekh ke vagwan ko guharna ...... bhayanak aur dardnak cheekhe aur badalo ka garazna ....ye kisi anhoni hone ka sanket derahi thi....

Apne bache ko jinda jal raha dekhke unki maa s1ko dhakka dete huwe khud uss aag me jhapak kar kud jati hai....maa ki mamta aur pyar iss had tak hoti hai ki wo apne bache ko khud se alag kabhi dekh nahi sakti aur Jalti huwi aag ke upar chalang lagana ye sayad maa ki mamta hi to thye...

Bas 5 min ke antraalme waha par 3 log zinda aag me raakh hochuke thye.....waha dekh rahe sabhi log aapne aapko kosh rahe thye....aankho me se aashuo ki dhara beh rahe thye .....atmaglani se bhare huwe chehre aur behte huwe aasu tap tap karke jameen par girne lage thye.....unlogo ko aaj khud ki paida hone se dukh ho raha tha....aakho ke saamne 3 nihatte maa bacho ka khoon hogaya tha wo vi itni haiwaniyat se jisko dekhke unnlogo me jine ki khusi se jyada gam hone laga tha.....

Par udhaar shera ke aadmi khilkhilakar has rahe thye.....wo log yese has rahe thye ki jaise unlogo ne ek jung jiti ho .... ek awla nari aur unke do nanhi bacho ko markar yese has rahey the ki mano wo koi sourbir kehlayenge....

........

Udhar Bikki raaste me hi tha .....dil bahut ghabra raha tha to wo full speed se gaadi vagane lagta hai.....badalo ka garazna aur panchiyon ka fadfadana raaste var dekh raha tha jisko dekhke Bikki ka per aapne aap kaampne laga tha....

AVi Bikki ki gaadi karib 200 metre ki duri par thi....jav basti par apna dhyan lagaya to paya ki waha par logo ki vid khadi hai.....Vid ko dekhke Bikki ka haal aur kharav hone laga tha....to wo aur paas aakar gaadi rok deta hai aur vid ko cheerte huwe aage badne lagta hai.....savhi log Bikki ko dekhke aashu bahane lage thye....aur atmaglani se Bikki ke taraf dekh rahe thye....avi tak Bikki ko innlogo ka behwaar kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha par jav bheed ko chirte huwe aage dekha to Bikki tej awaazke saath chillane laga ....aankho me se paani behne lage ......aur theek usiwakt ek tej baarish THAP THAP.... saath me toffani hawa SIIIIIIIIIIII .....karke ek saath behne laga

TO BE CONTINUE.....

Its like watching a movie

Brilliant work writer zee
 
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