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Gita aur baki savhi sab baccho ko Sula kar hall me aakar Beth gai but kisi ko bhi neend nahi AA pa rahi thi Aisa lag raha tha jaise aakhon ki neend udd gai ho sabki tavhi girish bola

girish- bhabhi ye kya ho raha hai hamare yaha kya avhi jo hum sab sune kya wo sach hai mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai kiska sath de aur kiska nahi aur ye sanskar ka bhai ronit kya Barbara raha tha kuch samajh hi nahi aaya Aisa lag raha hai bahut Dara hua hai baccha aisa kya deakh liya isne

sadhana- ha didi aur iss Gracy ki besarmi ki hadd dekhi aap kaise besarmo k jaise apne papa ko pakar ke rohan samajh k kiss karne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur to aur chilla chilla k i love you bhi bol rahi thi aur Rohan bhi kaise Gracy ki awaz sun k use i love you too bol k gale se lipat k so gya jaise ek inch ki bhi doori bardasht na ho dono ko

Gita- hum sab bhi to yahi chahte the na sadhana ki rohan aur sanskar iss Ghar k damad Bane wo chahe hamari kisi bhi beti ko pasand kare akhir damad to isi ghar ka banega na me Gracy k liye khus hu ki usne rohan ko chuna aur me iss baat se bahut khus bhi hu but ek khushi hai to ek problem bhi to hai

Girish- ji bhabhi aap sahi keh rahi hai ye teeno larkia ek hi larke ko kaise pasand kar sakti hai

Sadhana- are wo sab to thik hai nitya ya alia me se kisi ki bhi shadi agar sanskar se hoti to sanskar to isi ghar ka damad Banta na par pata nahi ye beech me dharti par bhoj jyotsana kaha se aa gai bhabhi mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai kyuki Maine jaisa jyotsana k bare me artical padhi hu ye bahut hi capebal larki hai aur ise jo pasand aa jati hai use hasil karke rehti hai chahe jaise bhi kare

Gita- sadhana tum ek angle miss kar rahi ho agar sanskar ne nitya ya alia me se kisi ek ko chunta hai to socho dusre par kya bitegi avhi tumne nitya ki baat suni thi wo kya bol rahi thi

Girish- kya bol rahi thi bhabhi

Sadhana- are aap k kaan ko to choro aapka aankh kaha the jiss time uske chehre par wo setani muskan thi aur wo jo baat bol rahi thi uski baat yaad karke to mujhe dar sa lagne laga hai Aisa lag raha hai jaise agar wo sanskar ko na pa saki to wo kahi purani nitya na ban jaye agar aisa hua to Kasam se jyotsana ho ya alia ya fir hum sab hi kyu na ho wo hum sab ko jite ji nark k darshan karwa degi

Gita- sadhana kya bake ja rahi ho pagal to nahi ho gai ho nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga me apni beti ko wo purani nitya nahi banne de sakti hu

Sadhana- but didi aapne uske muh se suna na wo kya bol rahi thi sanskar sirf uska hai agar unn dono k beech koi aaya to use jinda rehne ka koi hak nahi hai wo bhool jayegi ki Alia uski behen aur jyotsana uski bachpan ki dost hai aur,aur bhabhi wo uske face par wahi purani pagalpan sawar hote dikh rahi thi aap dekhi thi na fir bhi aap mujhe hi bol rahi ho hume kuch karna hoga didi

Gita- hum kya hi kar sakte hai sadhna mujhe to meri bacchi Alia aur nitya k liye bahut dar lag raha hai dono behno me atut pyar hai aur ab me sanskar k wajah se wo pyar tutte nahi dekhna chahti hu

Girish- par bhabhi aap ye kaise najarandaaz kar sakti hai ki Alia bhi sanskar se behad pyar karti hai suna na aapne wo kya bol rahi thi ki jis Deen wo don ka Gunda Alia ko marne wala tha uss din sanskar Alia ki jindgi me ek ummid ban k aaya tha jab duniya piche khadi Alia k mot ka tamasa deakh Rahi thi tab eklota wo aisa shaks tha Jo Alia k liye mot tak ko chkma diya ussi Deen se Alia sanskar ko apna sab kuch Maan chuki hai kaise kya karna hai kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

Gita- humne savhi ki bato ko suna but sanskar k man me kya hai wo kise pasand karega ya kisi aur ko pasand karta hai hum Bina Jane kaise koi action le sakte hai agar sanskar nitya aur Alia k jindgi se nikal k jyotsana k jindgi me chala jaye to hamari family me koi darar nahi aayegi

Sadhana- par didi fir nitya jyotsana k piche pad jayegi hath dho kar aap janti ho uske hadd ki koi seema nahi hai aur unn dono ka larai ka natiza pura desh ko jhelna hoga desh ki economy ko pura tehes nehes kar sakti hai in dono ki larai hum sirf apne ghar ko bachane k liye pure desh ko daw par nahi laga sakte hai ye to sawarth hoga hum sab ka

Gita- to kya karu me sadhana kya karu tu hi bata kya apni betiyo ka gum dekh paungi aur sayd sanskar jyotsana k sath khus rahe to ye dono bhi baat ko samajh Jaye Aisa hone k chances to hai na sadhna

Sadhana- Alia k liye to me bol sakti hu ki ek baar wo sanskar ko khus deakh kar khud k pyar ko bhula sakti hai but nitya ka kya didi hum to kya use koi bhi control nahi kar sakta hai aur agar usne apna aapa kho diya to heyy bhagwan fir to wo bina kuch soche samjhe hi savhi ko nark k aag me jhok degi bhool jayegi ki koi family bhi hai uski

Girish- bhabhi ye vidhi ka vidhan hai hum upar wale ka likha nahi badal sakte hai ab jo aage hone wala hai hume uske liye tyaar rehna hoga agar sanskar nitya ko pasand karta hai to ek beti k aasu ko pochne k liye ready rehna hoga agar sanskar alia ko pasand karta hai to hume Dil par patthar rakh kar Alia ko nitya se bachana hoga aur agar sanskar jyotsana ko pasand karta hai to fir ram naam Satya hai samajh lijia iss desh ko khokla hone se koi bhi nahi rok payega isliye jo bhi ho hume sahi waqt ka intezaar karna hoga filhaal avhi hum itna hi kar sakte hai ki upar wale se ye dua kare ki jo bhi bas acha hi ho

Sadhana- ha didi iske alawa hum aur kuch kar bhi nahi sakte hai ha me ye baat bhi jaanti hu ki aage kafi Kali andehri raat aane wali hai par wo raat jab aayegi tab dekhenge avhi to filhaal hum baccho k khusi ko to Kam nahi kar sakte hai na

Gita- kahi na kahi tum dono sahi ho hum avhi chah k bhi kuch nahi kar sakte hai jo niyati ko manjoor hoga wo hume har haal me apnana hoga

Girish- in sab bato me ronit k bare me to bhool hi Gaye bhabhi wo baccha bahut Dara hua hai nase me bhi bas kisi parchai ki baat kar raha hai

Gita- ha usse kal subha baat karungi ki usne aisa kya dekh liya ki itna jyada Dara hua hai baccha bahut masoom hai uss par koi problem nahi aane de sakte hai hum akhir wo sanskar aur Rohan ka ladla hai

Idhar savhi bare baato me Lage hue the iss baat se anjaan ki koi inhe gor se sun raha hai

Subha ki pehli kiran k sath sanskar ki aakh khuli wo uth k beth gya aur charo bagal dekhne laga uska pura sar ghum raha tha usne apne aap me kaha me to kavhi pita nahi hu fir ye kya hai aur me kaha hu lag raha hai pura sareer Tut Raha hai mera fir sanskar idhar udhar dekhne laga aur apne ek side nitya aur ek side Alia aur pair k paas jyotsana thi use to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya jaldi se uth k room k bahar gya to use rohan ek room se niklta dikha aur wo rohan k paas gya

Sanskar- are tu bhi itne late se utha aur ye itna sar kyu ghum raha hai

Rohan- are mujhe kya pata yaar jab me utha to dekha ki Gracy se lipat k so Raha tha me kisi tarha bachte bachate nikla hu agar kisi ko pata chal jata to meri kya izzat reh jati aur faltu ka badnami alag

Sanskar- ha aur me jo teeno larkio k beech me soya hua tha are yaar kya batau tujhe situation ka me to saram se pani pani ho gya acha hua hume kisi ne dekha nahi warna wahi puri film ban jati sanskar ki raas-leela

Rohan- ha chal dekhte hai kaha hai hum fir dono ek dusre se takkar khate hue hall me pahuche jaha Gita aur sadhna bethi hui thi ye dono bhi jhulte hue usi tarf chal diye

Sadhana- dono k dekhti hui) are waah uth gaye dono deemag thikane hai ya aur shot mangwa du

Rohan- are aunty kaisi baat kar rahi hai aap hum sab pine Wale nahi hai isliye to ye haal hai

Sanskar- ha aunty aur humne to sirf ek hi dirink Piya tha lagta hai kisi ne drink spike Kiya tha isliye hume kuch yaad bhi nhi

Gita- ha ha sab pata hai tum baccho ki badmasiya chalo aao betho yaha aur Aram se ye nimbu pani ko pi jao pura taki tum sab ki deemag thikane aa jaye

Dono beth k nimbu pani pi e lage par pite hi dono ek sath yakkk ye kya isme to pani hai hi nhi sirf nimbu ka ras hai

Sadhana- to tumhe kya laga tumhare deemag ko thikane lagane k liye hum sach me nimbu pani denge chup chaap se piyo warna fir dekho Mera gussa se bhara roop

Sanskar aur Rohan muh ko bund karke chup chaap wo pura ka pura nimbu gatak gaye tavhi hall me ronit simmi ko sahara dete hue aa raha tha

Sadhana- ye lo Didi ek aur toli aa gai aa jao baccho ab tumhari bari hai aur ye bol k unn dono ko bhi ek ek glass pakra di

Ronit aur simmi bhi pehle pine se saaf mana kar diye but sadhna aur Gita ka ghusse se bhara roop deakh kar wo dono bhi na chahte hue bhi piye aur yakkkkkkk chiiiiii ye kya tha

Sadhana- takila shot beta ji takila shot ab aap sab ko akal aa jayegi fir ek ek karke sab pahuche aur sabko nimbu pani ka maja mila savhi ka nasa pura Tarik se toot chuka tha aur kisi ko kuch bhi yaad nahi tha savhi fresh ho kar bahar aaye

Gita- chalo ab sab bahar breakfast par aa jao Rohan kuch bolne wala tha ki Gita bich me rokti hui chup aur ek dum chup chaap yaha aakr beth jao sab k sab Aaj me bahut gussa hu tum sab se

Aur fir savhi ek line se table par beth gaye aur ek dusre ko deakhne lage tavhi sadhna aai aur fir hua in savhi ka class start



To be continue.............................

Superb update per aap continue diya kare ya 2 3 din ka fix gap sir warna sahi se nahi ho pata so aapse shayd me pahala bhi kha chuki hu dubra khati hu ek bhot pyari khani ha so besabri se intazar rahata ha so plese timely update diya kare...

 

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Superb update per aap continue diya kare ya 2 3 din ka fix gap sir warna sahi se nahi ho pata so aapse shayd me pahala bhi kha chuki hu dubra khati hu ek bhot pyari khani ha so besabri se intazar rahata ha so plese timely update diya kare...

Sorry late update k liye thoda busy tha but kal tak update daal dunga and thanks for your important review

 

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Update 16

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Gita- chalo ab sab bahar breakfast par aa jao Rohan kuch bolne wala tha ki Gita bich me rokti hui chup aur ek dum chup chaap yaha aakr beth jao sab k sab Aaj me bahut gussa hu tum sab se

Aur fir savhi ek line se table par beth gaye aur ek dusre ko deakhne lage tavhi sadhna aai aur fir hua in savhi ka class start

Ab aage........

Sadhana- to naseriyo ab jab sab ka nasa utar chuka hai to batao ki kisne tum sab ko u nase me dhoot hone ko kaha tha ki tum sab ko koi hosh nahi tha bodyguards nahi hote to pata nahi koun se kude kachre me pare milte tum sab

Jyotsana- apna sar pakrte hue wo aunty mujhe thoda bahut yaad hai baki ka inn sab ko yaad ho sayd

Sadhana- to apna ye muh kholne ka kya logi apni sari property likh du kya tumhare naam

Jyotsana- haste hui) are nahi nahi aunty ye kaisi baate keh di aapp me batati hu na darshal hua ye tha ki me, sanskar ,Rohan aur nitya ek jagha bethe hue the baki sab maje kar rahe the fir achanak hi rohan jid karne laga ki chalo dance karte hai hum sab ne mana kar diya fir rohan chala gya aur uske baad Kiya hua mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai

Sadhana- acha to uske baad tujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai

Jyotsana- puppy face banate hue) Kasam se aunty me to bahut hi masoom si larki hu

Gita- ha kitni masoom hai tu wo raat me hum sab ko dikh gya tha sadhana iss masoom gudiya ko choor aur uss notankibazz rohan se puch ki aage kya hua tha

Rohan- harbarte hue) aunty me kuch nahi janta hu me to dance karne chala gya tha sayd sanskar ko kuch yaad hoga

Sanskar man me sala apna picha chudane k liye mujhe fasa diya ab kya kahu inse kher choro jo sach hai wo hi bata deta hu

Sadhana- are wah kis soch me dub gaye iss group k sabse Sharif bacche ab no aaya hai to jawab to Dena hi hoga

Gita- ha mujhe sanskar se umid hai ye kavhi jhoot nahi bolega bola baccha sach kya hai warna tum mera chandi rup nahi dekhna chahoge

Sadhana- aur mera bhi isliye ek ek baat sach sach uglo warna..,..........

Sanskar- me batata hu na aap dono ko Durga chandi banne ki koi jarurat nahi hai hum charo(sanskar,rohan, jyotsana,nitya) jab ek sath bethe the to hum sab me se kisi ne bhi ek ghoot bhi alcohol nahi Piya tha fir achanak rohan jid karke uth k chala gya aur udhar se ronit k sath aa gya fir ronit ne sabko apna special takila shots offer kiya aur bola bas ek ek shot fir rohan Alia aur simmi aur Gracy ko bhi le aaya fir hum sab ne wo shot Piya uske baad mujhe bhi kuch yaad nahi hai

Sadhana- bahut ache bete ko tumne sach kaha ab ye ronit baccha kaha hai kaha ho beta

Ronit- sari bate sun k use ahesaas hua ki ab uski lagne wali hai isliye wo patli gali se niklne ki kosis karne laga aur dhire dhire table k under ghus k bhagne laga but nasib khrab ho to kuch bhi sahi nahi hota hai aur fir Jake wo sidha gita k pair se takra gya

Gita jab table k under jhaki to ronit ko ko deakh kar jhat se pakr li aur boli sadhna ye deakh ye masoom bachha yaha se khiskne k firaak me hai

Ronit- k paas ab koi chara nahi tha wo bhi table k upar aake apne chair par beth gya

Sadhana- ha to chote ustaad kaha bhagne k firaak me the aap ab aap muh kholenge ya me apni taraf se kuch kosis Karu

Gita- ha chote ustaad ab bol bhi digia sach warna hume ache se bulwana aata hai sach

Ronit- darte hue) are nahi nahi aunty isme meri koi galti nahi sav galti rohan bhaiya ki hai jo inhone bola wo me kar diya akhir bare bhai ki baat ko taal bhi to nahi sakta tha na

Rohan- Abe jhoot bolta hai khud bachne k liye mujhe fasa raha hai aunty ye bahut badmaas hai savhi jante hai iss baat ko aap kisi se bhi pooch lo isne hi drinks me drug powder milaya tha

Sadhana- ek minute jab ronit ne drink me powder milaya tha to tumne kisi ko bataya kyu nahi aur jab tumse me puchi to bole ki kuch yaad nahi avhi kaise yaad aa gya

Sab rohan ko ghurne lage

Rohan- are yaar khud k pair par hi kulhari maar Li Maine

Ronit- ha ab sach niklega samne mujhse hosyari ha

Jyotsana- yaar nitya tum bilkul sach keh rahi thi iss ronit k bare me ye to chalta firta aafat hai pata nahi koun sa drug milaya tha ek shot me hi duniya bhoola diya

Nitya- ha janti to thi me ki ronit jarur koi na koi badmasiya karega but uska sath rohan dega ye nahi janti thi isliye me bhi fas gai

Alia- me jab bhi sochti hu ki ye larka ab sudhar jayega but nahi har baar me hi bewakoof ban jati hu ye apni badmasiya kavhi nahi choor sakta hai

Simmi- rohan bhaiya ye ronit to hai hi ek no ka badmaas but aap iska sath kaise de gaye

Rohan- are me kiya karta me to iss Kam deemag wale ronit ko sabko sirf dance stage tak le jane ko kaha tha mujhe kiya pata tha iske deemag me kuch aur hi chal raha hai ye kab Kiya sochta hai wo to bhagwan bhi nahi jaan sakte hai to fir me kaise jaan jata hai

Savhi ek sath ronit ko ghurne lage ab ronit samajh chuka tha ki ab sari saja use hi milegi fir ronit ki najar Gita aur sadhna par gai jinke aakho me pura gussa tha fir ronit puppy face banate hue

Ronit- nitya di, Alia di, Gracy di, aur jyotsana ki taraf dekhte hue jyotsana di aap sab k aakhon k samne aapke chote bhai ki pitai hogi aur aap sab ye sehen kar logi koi aapke chote bhai ko berehmi se marega to kya aap sab mujhe maar khane dogi

Ronit k iss emotional darama ko deakh kar sabki hasi chut gai Gita aur sadhna ka gussa bhi furrrr se gyab ho gya fir jyotsana boli

Jyotsana- kal raat tak to me sirf ek beautiful ladki thi aur aaj didi ho gai ye itna jaldi badlaw kaise

Nitya- jyotsana k kaan me) me keh rahi thi na bas kuch time ki baat hai me apne in do Anmol ratna ko ache se janti hu khaas karke to iss ronit ko

Ronit-wo kal ki baat thi waise bhi aap mere type ki nahi ho

Ronit ki baat sun kar ek baar fir sabki hasi nikal gai

Nitya ronit ko gale se lagati hui tumhe lagta hai mere hote hue tum par koi ungli bhi utha sakta hai aur mere hi kya agar Alia Gracy k samne bhi koi tumhe ya simmi ko kuch bol de to hum unka raam naam Satya kar denge akhir tum dono hum sab k ladle ho

Jyotsana- mujhe mat bhoolo mere rehte to inke upar ek parinda bhi Parr nahi maar sakta hai

Fir sab ronit aur simmi ko gale se laga k pyar karne lage

Sanskar- ye tum sab kya kar rahi ho usne galti ki hai use saja dene k badle me use pyar kar rahi ho isse to wo aur shetan ho jayega hatho tum sab Aaj me iss ronit k bacche ko jab tak 2,3 baar patak nahi deta mujhe chain nahi aayega had hoti hai badmasiya ki

Rohan- ha hato tum sab me bhi ise Aaj sabak sikhana chahta hu bahut badmaas ho gya hai ye

Gracy- rohan se)tum to kuch bole hi mat isme galti tumhari thi na ki ronit ki agar tum use idea nahi dete to wo aisa kuch kavhi karta hi nahi

Rohan to bilkul butt ban k betha Raha but sanskar fatak se utha meri to koi galti nahi thi me to ise sabak sikha k hi rahunga aur jaise chair se uthne wala tha ki tabhi savhi larkia jor se chilla uthi koi bhi ronit ko kuch nahi bolega ya karega hamare rehte to bilkul bhi nahi

Sanskar sab ka ye roop deakh kar chup chaap beth kar nasta karne laga sab larkia ka ye roop deakh kar fir to Gita aur sadhna bhi kuch na kar pai aur ronit sabko deakh kar bahut khus tha ki wo Bach gya Aaj uski behne uska suraksha kawach ban bethi thi aur fir isi tarha savhi hassi majak karte hue nashta karne lage tabhi unke ghar par ambulance k aane ki aawaz aai aur savhi ek dusre ko dekhne lage ki ye ambulance yaha kyu aai hogi aur savhi nashta chorkar aage ambulance ki aur chal diye

Ab aage koun sa kaand hona hai ye to next update me pata lagega kyuki time Kam tha isliye chota update daal paya hu iski penalty k tor par kal ek bara update daal dunga




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