Adultery Loyal to whore - Radhika

[Aaryapatel]

Waiting next update bro

 

[Madybhai]

Aap logo ki. Ummedo par khara na utar pane ka mujhe dukh hai

Bhai aap Sahi chal Rahe ho...bohot Accha tha update

 

[Yash420]

Aap logo ki. Ummedo par khara na utar pane ka mujhe dukh hai

Bhai Humesha Dil ki suno
Or Dukhi hone ki wajah kosis Karo Kyun ki hum sirf kosis hi Kar sakte Hain
I think you got it

 

[ARYAAA]

Aap logo ki. Ummedo par khara na utar pane ka mujhe dukh hai

Don't feel about comments
Plz ..
U r a perfect writer .. keep it..

 

[A run93]

Bhai Humesha Dil ki suno
Or Dukhi hone ki wajah kosis Karo Kyun ki hum sirf kosis hi Kar sakte Hain
I think you got it

Right....try best

 

[luckysearch12]

Bhai ekdum se raand nhi banani.
Me ye kahani lambi Or slow le jana chahta hu.
Sirf radhika ko chudai karva use ekdum raand bana diya to ye story bhi baki stories ki tarah ho jaigi

Bhai hume bhi ekdum se rand nahi chahiye.. aapki kahani shuru se acchi chal raha hai.. bas kuch points aap contradict kar dete ho.. jaise radhika ka oppose shuru se hi kam tha

Phir wo school ke doosre watchman kaka ka khada na hona
Phir wo kunal ki gf ka ekdum se gayab ho jana..
Hamara kehna bas ye hai ki aap aur jayda behtar kar sakte the
Aap acche writer ho.. hum writer hote to khud na likte..
Bas as reader aapko feedback de rahe hai ki aap aur behtar kar sako

 

[urc4me]

Pratiksha agle update ki

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update

 

[Rumi]

bohot khoob. story achi chal rahi hai. main bas itna kahungi ki writer ko apni vision ke hisab se likhna chahiye. sabhi readers ki aap sunoge to story barbad ho jayegi. agli update ka intezar hai

 

[Vikashkumar]

Waiting Next Update