Fantasy Mʏ Vᴀᴍᴘɪʀᴇ Sʏsᴛᴇᴍ ~ Tʜᴇ Hɪɴᴅɪ Eᴅɪᴛɪᴏɴ

[Your Sensei]

Guys! listen once again, likes ka target pura hone se pehle update nahi dene wala mai, bilkul bhi nahi. So agar next update chahiye to target pura kro.
One update per week ka schedule fix krne ka socha tha but past 3 days me back to back 3 update de chuka hu. So itna to kar hi sakte ho tum log.
Isliye target pura kro aur update le jao. Yahi deal hai apni.

Aur guys jo bhi naye bande thread par aa rahe hain wo upar poll me apna keemti vote jarur dalte jaye.

Ek aur baat tumhe story achhi lagti hai, batao.
Tumaye story achhi nahi lagti hai, wo bhi batao.
Tumhe kya achha lga, batao.
Tumhe kya achha nahi lga, wo bhi batao.
Agar thread par aaye ho, story read ki hai, to please kuchh na kuchh bol kar jao. Tum log bc aate ho aur aise gayab ho jate ho jaise gadhe ke sarr se kabhi seengh gayab ho gaye the. Bc 2 sabd naa bole jate tumse.

Jyada kuchh nahi mang raha, bss agar thread par aate ho to ek like kar diya kro aur ek chhota sa revo de diya kro. Kam se kam tumhari presence ka pta chalte rehta hai, ki bc tum log exist bhi karte ho.

Bss jo hai itna hi hai, itni baaton ka dhyan tum rakh lena baki tumhara dhyan mai rakh lunga. Tum khush, Mai khush, Dono log khush. To deal done samjhu Mai??

And once again, keep supporting!!!

 

[Your Sensei]

Update - 1
[ The daily routine ]​

"Gir kar mat mar jana, Vikram!" Ek ladke ne hallway ke entrance se chillate huye kaha.

Vikram school ke corridor me chalta raha. Uske sath ye lagbhag har roj hi hota tha. Bully hona jaise uske liye ek daily routine ban chuka tha. School ke kuch dabang ladke use roj bully karte the aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jab use is baat ka bura na lagta ho aur wo khud ko unka virodh karne se nahi rok pata tha.

Vikram ruka aur usne apne glasses ko pichhe Kiya kyuki wo uske chehre se khisak kar niche aa gaye the. Use naye chasme ki jarurat thi. Har physical object ki apni ek limit hoti hai. Koi bhi pehli nazar me dekh kar ye bta sakta tha ki lambe samay se use hote rehne ki vajah se wo chasme bahut jyada damage ho chuke hain. Chasme par jagah jagah tape chipka hua tha aur ab to wo uske chehre par thik se fit bhi nahi hote the.

Vikram pichhe muda aur usne immediately us ladke ko apni middle finger [] dikhai.

"I bet ki tu ye bhi nahi bata sakta ki mai kitni ungliya dikha raha hu!" Vikram ne us ladke se kaha.

Ye sunkar us ladke ki mutthi kas gai aur wo daat bheenchte huye Vikram ki taraf bhaga.

"Madharchod!! Tujh jaisa Level 1 ka chuja ye kab shikhega ki is duniya me tere jaise kamjor logo ki koi jarurat nahi" Us ladke ne gusse me Vikram se kaha.

Phir us ladke ne apni aankhen band kar apne dono hathon ko aapas me joda aur uske aisa karte hi ek green colour ki light se bani ball uske hantho ke paas form hone lagi. Wo ladka Vikram se bss kuchh ki meters door tha. Us ladke ne apne hantho ko full force ke sath aage ki taraf pheka aur uske aisa karte hi green light se bani wo ball uske palm se nikal kar full power ke sath Vikram ki ore shoot ho gai.

Achanak huye is hamle se bach pana Vikram ke liye lagbhag namumkin tha. Uske paas bhagne ke liye koi rasta nahi tha aur jis speed se wo green light ki beam Vikram ki ore badh rahi thi use dodge kar pana Vikram ke bss ki baat nahi thi. Apne daanton ko pees kar us dard ko sehan karne ke alawa wo aur kuchh bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Jaise hi wo beam Vikram se takrai, uska sareer hawa me uchhal gaya aur pichhe ki taraf corridor ki diwaar se ja takraya.

"Waha kya ho raha hai? Kya school ke aakhiri din bhi ye log lad rahe hain?" Paas hi me khade ek student ne kaha.

Hangama hota dekh kar bahar turant hi ek bheed ekattha ho gai kyuki har koi jan'na chahta tha ki aakhir waha chal kya raha hai. Usi bheed me se ek female student bhag kar deewar ke us tute huye hisse ke paas gai taki wo dekh sake ki ghayal student thik hai ya nahi.

Vatavaran se dhool dheere dheere gayab hone lagi aur Vikram ke ghane kale aur sath hi halke ghunghrale baal dikhayi dene lage. Jaise hi dhool puri tarah saaf ho gai aur us female student ne dekha ki ghayal student kon hai, to wo turant hi pichhe hat gai aur waha se aise chali gai jaise mano waha par kuchh hua hi na ho.

Jab wo female student apni friends ke paas wapas lauti to Vikram dekh sakta tha ki uski friends us ladki ka majak uda rahi thi.

"Mai visvas nahi kar sakti ki tune uski madad karne ki koshish ki."

"Maine dekha nahi tha ki wo kon hai," Ladki ne gusse se laal galon ke sath jabab diya.

Itna sab hone ke baad, Vikram utha aur usne floor se apna chasma uthaya. Ek baar phir, chasme ka ek side toot chuka tha.

"Damn it. Not again..."

Aaj school ka aakhir din tha aur Vikram ko ummeed thi ki aaj koi use pareshan nahi karega. Vikram isse tang aa chuka tha aur wo ise nazarandaj karne walon mese bhi nahi tha. Usne aise logon ko bhi dekha tha jinhone sar jhuka kar chupchap sab kachu sahan kar liya tha aur unki haalat Vikram se bhi jyada kharab thi.

Vikram ko baki students ki tarah school me rukne ka shauk nahi tha. Jate huye usne dekha ki sabhi students aapas me bate kar rahe hain. Kuchh has rahe the to kuchh aankhon me aansu liye baat kar rahe the, Shayad ye soch kar ki wo ab shayad hi ek dusre ko phirse dekhenge. Lekin Vikram in sabka hissa nahi tha aur na hi wo banna chahta tha.

To be continued...

 

[Your Sensei]

Introduction and Update 1

Agar bhai Tumko reader ki sankhya Jyada chahie to hinglish mein likho......
Lekin mera personal interest devnagri mein hai story ke liye best of luck

First update posted

 

[Your Sensei]

Guys update padho aur padhkar batao ki font, size, colour aur spellings bagaira thik hai ya nahi aur agar koi dikkat lage to batana, Mai wo change kar dunga.
Baki padho aur padhkar batao ki kaisa lga.

 

[Your Sensei]

Index created and updated

 

[CFL7897]

Shandar shuruaat ki hai dost....
Level 1??yeh Kis Tarah ka school hai ..aur yah Kis Tarah Ki Duniya Hai..??

 

[Your Sensei]

Shandar shuruaat ki hai dost....
Level 1??yeh Kis Tarah ka school hai ..aur yah Kis Tarah Ki Duniya Hai..??

Kahani Earth par hi based hai bss setup thoda different hoga.
Aur ye is tarah ka school hai jaha aapki power ke hisab se aapke upar ek level ka tag lga diya jata hai.
Baki sath bne rehne ka brother aage sab clear ho jayega.
And thanks for your revo

 

[Smith_15]

Update 2

 

[Your Sensei]

Update 2

Soon

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Vaise bhailog ye batao ki story Hindi ( Devanagari ) me padhoge ya Hinglish me?
I want your opinion about it.

Hinglish me

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Basically ye story same name ki ek novel se inspired hai so all credit goes to Jksmanga.

Congratulations Bhai for your first thread kisi se bhi inspired hi aap apne tareeke se likhna aur story ko jabardast bana Dena