Dark Devil
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Nice update keep updating
Wah Wah kya must thee prem ke nok jhuk maza aagaya kya jadoo rucha hay in chund subhdoo main jaan hee lay leey aak aak lufz jasay aak tasveer kee turha aankho kay samnay say guzra hay jub bhi yea update purha hay wah wah sunder ati sunder
very cheeky update Amita ji .. kabhi - kabhi to aap bahut hi romantic lines likhti hai .. par meri ek guzarish hai .. ki story mein in logo ki thodi si social aur professional life bhi to dikhaiye .. story mein thoda variety aayegi to .. interest aur badhega .. aur please kuch Rekha ke baare mein bhi to bataye ki wo ab kaisi hai .. neha ke papa ke saath ...
Today's update was full of love. Amit and Neha's talk, lovely activities of both, you have shown everything very well. You write the story as if everything is happening in real time while reading. There is new love and both are enjoying this magnificent moment of love. But maybe things are getting worse...
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...