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Incest Maa aur beti se pyar (Completed)

With whom would you like more Romance

  • Masi

    Votes: 192 66.0%
  • Neha

    Votes: 99 34.0%

  • Total voters
    291

amita

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Fantastic review and summarising.
You are a real vigilant Reader.
Your suggestion has been taken care of.
Thanks so much for bringing out the shortcomings in tha update.
Amit also decides that he will not touch Neha until she wants it. Perhaps Amit does not like Neha's actions. Rekha is not getting a call, she has not got into any trouble. Give a little praise to the girls, they become happy.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:

A few paragraphs are repeated in today's update, please correct it.
 

amita

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Itna sundar aur vistrit vishleshan koi aapse hi séekhe.
Aapne to update ki aatma ko hi samne la kar rakh diya aur usme se moti nikal diye.
Yeh ek swabhavik parkriya hai ki jab hame do logo se pyar, nafrat ya aur kuch lena ya dena ho to ham use compare karne lagte hai
Aapke vishleshan ke liye jitni tarif karu utni kam hai.
Dhanyawad
Is update koo purhty huway laga kay jasay Amit kuch baato main abhi tuk clear nahi hay jasa uss kaa or Rekha kay relation kay rustay say woo Neha koo dekh raha hay jub kay dusry turaf woo Neha koo aak girlfriend kay tuur pay bhi dekh raha hay iysa lugta hay jasay Amit kay dil main demag main kuch kusmakus see hay Neha kee tulna Rekha say kurna butata hay kay Neha kay mamlay main Amit kaa dil kuch ukhra sa iysa lugta hay huu sukta hay yea aak fitri see baat huu kun kay janay unjanay hum logo koo aak dusray say compare kurty hay yea woo huu lakin Amit kee negah main lugta hay kay Neha abhi aak choty bachi kee haseyat hee rukhty hay or kuch kuch uss ka undaz hay bhi iysa wasay aak baat saaf hay yea sara munzar iysa likha hay jasay waha tesri chair pay main batha wo sub khud apni aankho say dekh raha hun jasay Amit bahir gaya maray samnay hee woo Rekha koo call kurnay kee kosis kur raha huu wah zaberdust lajawab sandar qasam say maar dala kya must update hay maza aagaya
 

amita

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Update 108
Fir hamne khana khatam kiya aur bill chukaya aur waiter ko tip dekar bahar jane lage tu Neha ne mera hath pakdana chaha tu main usse aage hokar chalne laga aur......

Aur vo gusse me dekhte hue vanhi khadi rahi, jab kuch dur mein aage nikal gaya to Maine dekha ki Neha mere piche nahin aa rahi, main wapas Gaya aur use vahi khada dekhkar usse poochha "kya baat hai chalna nahin hai kya"

N: ek taraf tu mujhe girlfriend kehte ho aur dusri taraf akele akele aage badh jaate ho
A: kahan aage gaya hun tumhen lene ke liye wapas to aa gaya, ab chalna hai to batao nahin to tumhari marji

N: chalna hai lekin agar tum mujhe apni girlfriend ki tarah le jaaoge to
A: aur kaise le ja raha hun

N: agar girlfriend ke sath ja rahe Ho Mera hath kyon jhatak diya
A: tumhen maloom hai Maine vada Kiya hai ki Main tumhare sharir ko nahin chuunga

N: theek hai aapane vada Kiya hai Lekin main aisa Koi vada nahin kiya ki main aap ko nahin chhunhgi, main apne boyfriend ko janha Mera man karega chhungi
A: yeh theek nahin hai

N: kyon theek nahin hai main to pahle hi kah rahi ho ki apna vada tod do mujhe koi aapatti nahin hai agar aap mujhe chhutte ho tu
A: Sorry, aap Jo man karta hai kariye Lekin main abhi apna vada todne wala nahin hu

Neha ne Meri baju mein apni baju dalkar aur mujhse sat kar boli "ab Chalo"
uske itne pass hone se mere Dil mein tarange uthne lagi Lekin main apne aap ko control karta Raha aur Socha ki abhi isko aur tadpaunga taki agali bar mujhe aisa karne se na rok paye.

Ham jab vahan se bahar aaye tu ek achcha sa readymade garments ka bahut bada store tha jise dekh Kar naya boli ki mujhe ismein Jana hai to uski baat sunkar maine kaha ke long drive per nahin Jana. Meri baat sunkar apna jawab Diya ki 15-20 minute mein ham nikal jaenge. Maine kaha jaisi tumhari marji aur ham donon us store ke andar chale gaye.

Store ke andar jakar Neha ne mere liye ek jeans aur t-shirt kharidi Maine poochha yah kis liye kaha ki yah meri taraf se aapke liye gift hai. Maine usko dhanyvad kaha aur usne kaha ki vo do minute me washroom hokar aa rahi hai to maine use kaha main uski vanhi wait kar raha hun.

Uske aane ke bad ham donon Meri bike ki taraf badh gaye aur aur main bike par baith kar usko baithane ke liye kaha tab wo bike par dono taraf paer kar ke baith gayi aur mere se satt gayi to main use thoda sa piche jaane ke liye kaha to usne jawab Diya ki boyfriend aur girlfriend tu aise hi jaate hain. Uske mumme baar- baar meri pith par lag rahe the aur uske mummo ke gharshan se mere maharaj ki halat kharab ho rahi thi. Mera maharaj to mast fudakane lag raha tha or kapdo se bahar aakar uski kamsin jawani se khelne ko betab tha lekin main usi Koi bhav nahin de raha tha to uski harkatein dhire dhire badne lagi thi.

Usne apne hath Jo mere kandhon per rakhe hue the dheere dheere sehalane lagi, jab maine usse poochha ki yah kya kar rahi ho usne jawab diya apne boyfriend ko Pyar ka izhhar kar rahi hu.
Maine kaha ki yah Pyar ke izhaar mein kahin accident na ho jaaye to usne chod ke kaha mujhe apne janu par bahut vishwas hai aur kuchh bhi nahin hoga.
itna keh kar usne apne hath mere kandho se aage karke Mere gale me daal diye aur meri neck par kiss karne lagi. Uske kiss karne se Mere rakt ka samachar ekadam teevar ho gaya aur Mera Man Karne laga ki main bike rooku aur usko kass kar gale laga loo, lekin jab maine iska bhi Koi response nahin diya to usne aur aage badhane ki sochi.
Usne apne hathon ko meri bagal ke niche se nikal kar meri chhati per le gayi aur fir mujh se acche se satt jati hai aur uske sattne se mera taapman badne laga.
Wo baar- baar apani nangi jangh ko meri jangh se jeans ke upar se ragad rahi thi aur beech beech me mere paer me apna paer maar rahi thi jisse Meri uttejna badh rahi thi aur bike chalana bhari ho raha tha tu maine ek side me bike rok di aur usse kaha "Tum kya chahti ho ki main bike na chalu"

N: Maine kab aisa kaha
A: tumne nahi tumhari harkatein Mujhe bike chalane se rok rahi hain

N: Tu kya karu chup karke baithi ranhu, fir long drive ka fayada hi kya agar masti bhi na karen, usse accha hai ki ghar hi chaltey hain.
A: Maine kab kaha ki masti na karo lekin mujhe agar itna disturb karogi tu bike chalana mushkil ho jata hai
N: Main sab samajhti hu, aapka tu dil hi nahi tha mere sath aane ka, vo tu zabardasti majburi me aana pad raha hai tu ab aap bahana dundh rahe ho ki kaise vapis chala jaye.

A: Meri aisi koi mansha nahi hai, main tu sirf yeh keh raha hu ki mujhe jayada tang karogi tu main bike nahi chala paunga
N: Main aapko tang kar rahi hu, kab tang kiya aur aap ko tang karke kya milega

A: (Bahut hoshiyar ban rahi hai, abhi do minute me bata deta ki hishiyari ka matlab kya hai, lekin abhi maine apane aap ko Rekha ki taraf se dhyan hatane ke liye shant kiya hua hai) Madam aap tu bahut acchi hain, aap mujhe kyoun preshan karengi mujhe hi koi galatfehmi ho gayi hogi.
Mere itna kehte hi usne meri gardan par kaat khaya tu main "aaaaa.....uuuu....cccc......hhhh"
A: yeh kya hai

N: Maine pehle hi kaha tha ki mujhe 'aap' kahoge tu kaat lungi
A: (apani gardan ko malte hue) sharafat ka zamana hi nahi hai, Izzat do tu aise hi bhugatana padta hai
N: are are bahut dard ho raha hai, aage se yaad rakhna nahi tu iss baar kanha kanha katungi soch lena. Iss baar tu main maaf kar deti hu

A: accha tarika hai, pehle kaat khao aur fir maaf karne ka ehsaan bhi kar do.

Neha ne apane honth meri gardan par rakh diye aur dheere dheere vanha chumne lagi janha usne kaat khaya tha aur fir pucchane lavi ki aaram mila, ab use kya bataun ki katne ke baad aise chumegi tu main kanha kanha katwane ko taiyar tha lekin pratayaksh me "haan thoda sa aaram hai"

Meri baat sunkar usne apani jeebh bahar nikali aur jeebh se uss hisse ko jeebh ki nook se chhatne aur chubhlane lagi tu mujhe aisa laga ki jaise main jannat me panhuch gay hu.

Thodhi der baad Maine jab dekha ki mera taapman had se jayada bad raha hai tu bike start ki aur apani manzil.ki taraf chal diya. Neha aur jor se mujhse chipak gayi aur meri peeth par uski chuchiyo ka gharshan bad gaya, vo jaanbhujkar mujhse chipak jati fir mujhe apni banhon me kas leti aur meri chathi par apane komal hathon se sehla deti aur fir peeche ho jati, thodhi der baad fir se chipak jati aur yahi kriya baar baar dohr rahi thi. Uski in kriyaon se mujhe bahut maza aa raha tha jisse mere khoon ka daura badne lag aur mera mahraj apani aaukat par aane laga tha.

Mera man kar raha tha ki main bhi uski kaam kridaon ka uttar du aur maze lootu lekin meri ego mere aadey aa rahi thi aur apane man ko shant rakha hua tha jabki sharir me utthal puthal mach hui thi.
Neha puri tarah se masti me dubi hui thi aur mujh ko rijhane ka har aaujar istemal kar rahi thi. Meri peeth par chuchliyan ragadna, meri chathi sehalana, apani jaangh ko meri jaangh se ragadna, apane pair ko mere pair par marna aur jab isse bhi uska koi hal nahi nikal raha tha tu usne meri gardan par apane naram naram hontho ko rakhkar use chumna, chattna aur kabhi kabhi halke se katna.

Ye sab meri utejna badaye ja rahe the aur rasta bhi almost khali tha tu main bike chalane me bhi thodha laparvah ho gaya tha ki tabhi meri bike ke aage se ek kutta bhagta hua nikla tu maine bahut jor se break lagai jisse bike ka thoda sa balance bigad gaya aur Neha mere upar puri lad si gayi aur uska hath jo meri chahti par tha vo fisal kar neeche chala gaya aur jakar seedha mere akade hue maharaj par tik gaya tu kya bataun main tu jaise sabkuch hi bhul gaya aur Neha ka tu haal puchho hi mat
 
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