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Incest Maa aur beti se pyar (Completed)

With whom would you like more Romance

  • Masi

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mass8787

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Dear Friends,
I am getting regular requests to write the Second part of this story
"Maa aur beti se Pyar"


Well right now I am busy with another story
"Rishta"

Well if you feel that the Second part be started simultaneously, I can do that, but you won't be getting regular updates for either of the story.

I can give total of 4 updates per week. It could be 2 for each story.

Please let me know your likings.

Need your comments in this regard. Please make me aware.

Thanks



AMITA JEE maray mukhlesana muswara hay kay RISTA koo pura time dejay or woo kahani khatam huu jay tuu pher is kahani kaa send part suru kurya gaa sakoon or tasali say or kisi bhi reader kay kuch bhi kahnay main aakay koi twist ya turn na dejay gaa kahani koo woo likya gaa joo aap kay zahun main hay please
 
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AMITA JEE maray mukhlesana muswara hay kay RISTA koo pura time dejay or woo kahani khatam huu jay tuu pher is kahani kaa send part suru kurya gaa sakoon or tasali say or kisi bhi reader kay kuch bhi kahnay main aakay koi twist ya turn na dejay gaa kahani koo woo likya gaa joo aap kay zahun main hay please
Main bhi aapki rai se ittefaq rakhti hu aur chahungi ki Rishta ko ek anjaam dene ke baad pure man se iss kahani par aaun.

Abhi Pathko ko Rishta ki story ka pata nahi hai, jaise jaise kahani aage badhegi tu vahi pathak kanhege ki pehle Rishta puri karo.

Main abhi kuchh waqt tak sirf Rishta par hi update dungi. Pathako ko agar fir bhi lagega ki mujhe iska dusra bhag saath me shuru karna chahiye tu fir decide karenge.

Dhanyawad
 

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Maaf karna thoda late ho gaya review dene me. Update 125 tak mene padh liya hai, kahani shandaar jaa rahi hai, neha ka behaviour mujhe thode weird laga, sarita ka attitude apne bete ko lekar badhiya tha. Geeta ka character mujhe behad pasand aaya, ab bas ye jaan na hai ki rekha aur baaki sab ko eksath kese sambhaalega amit. Yadi iske baad aur bhi updates hai toh kripya kar unki link index me add kar dijiyega, mein wahi se padh lunga. Dhanyawad!! Keep writing!! (◍•ᴗ•◍)
 
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Maaf karna thoda late ho gaya review dene me. Update 125 tak mene padh liya hai, kahani shandaar jaa rahi hai, neha ka behaviour mujhe thode weird laga, sarita ka attitude apne bete ko lekar badhiya tha. Geeta ka character mujhe behad pasand aaya, ab bas ye jaan na hai ki rekha aur baaki sab ko eksath kese sambhaalega amit. Yadi iske baad aur bhi updates hai toh kripya kar unki link index me add kar dijiyega, mein wahi se padh lunga. Dhanyawad!! Keep writing!! (◍•ᴗ•◍)
Aapko mafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai.
Agar ham writers hi ek dusre ki bhavnaon ko nahi samajh paye tu iss forum par aana bekar hain.
Hamare upar pathkon ka pressure hota hai jaldi se jaldi update aur unke review ka jawab dene ka tu waqt kanha bachta hai.
Jo thoda bahut bachta hai vo ham ek dusre ki khaniyoun ko padh lete hain der saver. Isliye mafi mangne ka sawaal hi paida nahi hota.
Dhanyawad
 

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Mai nai ye story abhi abhi prrhna shuro ki hai I hope so k bohat achi story hogi mai zyada complete stories hi parrhta ho kuch stories ko chorh kr q k kuch writers aise hai Jo darmiyan mai stories chorh dete hai isliye mai zyada tar complete stories hi parrhta ho.
 
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Mai nai ye story abhi abhi prrhna shuro ki hai I hope so k bohat achi story hogi mai zyada complete stories hi parrhta ho kuch stories ko chorh kr q k kuch writers aise hai Jo darmiyan mai stories chorh dete hai isliye mai zyada tar complete stories hi parrhta ho.
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Keep reading and you would enjoy it.

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Update 130


Tab tak Dadaji Swamiji ko dakshina dekar aa gaye the aur unhone vanhi hotel me rehne ka parbandh kar diya tha aur sabse badi baat Rekha aur mere liye ek hi kamra book karwaya tha.

Hotel me lunch karne ke baad Dadaji ne sab se kaha "Dekho baccho jaise ki Swamiji ne kaha hai apani jindgi ka faisla swayam le aur koi bhi kisi par dabav nahi dalega tu aaj se aap sab me jo bhi rishta ho lekin ab aap sab barabar ho aur saheliyan ho, haan agar kisi ke man ne yeh tay kar liya hai ki vo Amit se shadi nahi karega tu bina kisi jhijhak ya dabav ke bata sakta hai. Ham parso subah yanha se jayenge, jo shadi karne ke liye taiyar hai uske sath kal Amit ki shadi karwa denge. Aaj aap sab free hain aur jo karna chahe kare"

N: Main yanha ghumna chati hu
Priya: Main bhi

Priti: I want to go out but don't know much hindi
Gita: Don't worry, I will take care.

Uske baad yeh decide hua ki Vo charo ghumne ke liye nikal padi aur idhar Sarita, Rajni aur Rekha ne gappe marne ki sochi. Dadaji aur mere Papa Ravi ek kamre me chale gaye aur aage ke bare me sochne lage.

Main aaram karne ke liye apane kamre me jane laga tu Mom ne chheda ki "apani dulhan ko tu leta ja" Jisse sunkar Rekha sharmane lagi aur main Rekha ka hath pakad kar apane kamre me le jate hue Mom ko ek smile de gaya jisse Mom bhi sharmane lagi aur maine kamre me jate hi kamra band kar liya aur Rekha ko apani banhon me bhinch liya. Usne bhi mujhe aise jakad liya jaise vo ab kabhi mujhse alag nahi hogi.

Vo mujhe apane America trip ke bare me batati ja rahi thi aur bich bich me uski aankhe bhi nam ho rahi thi. Main use santavana dete hue apane hathon ko uski peeth par chalate hue uske nitambon par le jata aur usko pata bhi nahi chala ki maine kab uske blouse ko peeche se khol diya aur bra ke huk bhi khol diye aur uski nangi peeth ko sehlata raha.

Mera ek hath beech beech me uski ran par aa jata aur use sehlane lagta aur kabhi kabhi uske samtal pait par panhunch kar uski gehri nabhi me utar jata aur Rekha ke dil me halchal machane lagta.

Rekha dukhi thi ki uske pehle pati ne chhod diya tha lekin usss jayada iss baat se khush thi ki ab vo meri patni thi, jisse sabhi parivar walo ne accept kar liya tha. Jab main uska blouse utarne laga tu usne puchha "ab tu aapki saat patniya ho jayengi tu aap mujhe tu pucchoge hi nahi"

Maine uske chere ko apane hathon me lekar uski aankhon me jhankate hue kaha "koi aatma ko sharir se alag kar de tu kya hota hai? Tum chali gayi tu pata hai mera kya haal ho gaya tha. Tum saat ki baat karti ho agar 700 bhi ho janye tu bhi aatma tu aatma hi hoti hai aur tum mujhse alag nahi ho balki mere sharir ka ek hissa ho, tum malikaye aalam ho, tumhare begair tu main ab jee bhi nahi sakta"

Rekha ne jaldi se ungali mere munh par rakhi "ab aap iske aage kuch nahi kahoge aur mujhe aapki jindagi me kisi ke aane se koi farak nahi padta kyounki mujhe maloom hai ki aap aur main alag nahi hain. Main tu jana bhi nahi chahti thi, lekin aapke kehne se vanha gai, lekin vanha sirf mera sharir gaya tha dil tu aapke paas tha ."

Aisi pyar bhari bate karte hue kab hamare kapde utar gaye pata hi nahi chala aur mera maharaj tu apani puri aaukat par tehlaka machane ko taiyar tha. Maine Rekha se kaha "Jaan dard hoga" tab Rekha ne kaha "Vo dard nahi balki milan ka kathin rasta hai jo paar tu karna hi hai aur aap mujhe mere dharam ko nibhane se kabhi mana nahi karenge"

Baat karte karte maine apane ling ko Rekha ki yoni me pevasat kar diya, use dard tu hua lekin vo use pi gai aur thodhi der baad vanha tufan aa gaya aur Rekha mere jhadne se pehle teen baar jhad chuki thi aur thak gayi thi. Ham donon ek dusre ke gale lag kar so gaye, lekin mer ling jo abhi bhi Rekha ki yoni me tha ek baar fir apane uffan par aa gaya aur puri tarah se akad gaya. Rekha ne pucha ki "ye kya ho raha hai"

Maine use kal ki baat batai aur Gita ke bare me bhi kuch nahi chupaya aur use kaha ki lagata hai Swamiji ne jo kaha hai bo sach hota partit ho raha hai. Usne kaha ki jab tak aur koi aapki patni nahi banti aap mujhse jitna ho sake sehvas karen . Main uska pyar dekhkar bhavuk ho gaya aur uske mathe ko chumkar dhire dhire apane ling ko uski yoni me andar bahar karne laga aur koi 15 minute ki mehnat ke baad ham safal ho gaye aur thodhi der baad maine apane ling ko uski yoni se bahar nikala aur washroom jakar fresh hokar use saaf karke Rekha ke paas aa gaya. Rekha bhi washroom jakar fresh hokar aa gai. Jab vo vapis aai tu mere ling ko tane hue dekhkar use hairani hui aur use lagne laga ki akele usko shant karna uske bas ki baat nahi hai aur man hi man sochane lagi ki jadi buti ka asar sahi me shuru ho gaya hai aur jaldi se jaldi iski shadi bakiyon se ho jani chahiye nahi tu pata nahi mera kya hoga.

Usne socha ki ab kya karu kyounki neeche tu maharani puri tarah suj gai hai, tabhi use Virender aur Maria ka scene yaad aaya aur vo himmat karke aage badi aur mere ling ko hath me lekar aage peeche karne lagi tu Maine uski chuchiyon ko pakad kar masama shuru kiya tu vo dhire dhire neeche hokar mere supade ko kiss karne lagi tu mujhe àag lag gai aur fir dhire dhire mere ling ko munh me lekar andar bahar karne lagi tu main saatve aasman par udne laga. Beech me vo use chatne lagi aur fir meri goliyon par panhunch kar use chatte hue munh me bharkar use bich bich me katne lagi tu kya bataun mera aanand bahut bad gaya aur main bilkul apane charam par panhunch kar bandh tod diya aur bed par lait kar lambi lambi saanse lene laga.

Rekha aai aur meri chahti par hath rakhkar munhe chumne lagi aur main uske balon par hath firakar use Thanks kehne laga tu vo mujhse naraj hokar washroom me chali gayi aur kapde badal kar aa gayi.

Maine usse puchha ki mujhse naraj kyoun ho gayi tu usne kaha ki koi apane aap ko Thanks kehta hai. Main uski baat sunkar kaha ki koi apane aap se naraj hota hai. Meri baat samajh aate hi vo hans padi aur doudkar mere gale lag gayi. Ab isse aage koi baat hoti tu door par knock hui, maine jaldi se jeans aur T-shirt pehan li aur door kholne par pata chala ki Dadaji ghabraye hue khade the aur kehne lage ki "kisi ne charo ladkiyon ko kidnap kar liya hai aur unko chhodne ke liye 1 crore rupaye maang raha hai"

Maine pucha ki aapko kaise pat chala tab unohone bataya ki Ravi ko phone aaya tha tu maine Papa se puccha ki kis number se phone aaya tha. Vo number lekar maine Shyam ko phone karke usse vakil sahab ki madad se jo unka contact hai unse pata karen ki ye phone kanha se hua hai aur mujhe uski location ki jankari jald se jald de aur ho sake tu kuch acche ladake jaldi se jaldi mere paas bhijwaye.

Thodhi der baad Shyam ka phone aaya aur usne mujhe us phone ki location batai aur location change hone par message aata rahega. Ladako ka parbandh vakil sahab ki madad se local level par kar diya gaya tha aur vo sab 15 minute me panhunchne wale the.

Unke aane par maine unhe samjhaya ki vanha par main akela andar jaunga aur baki sab bahar do tukdiyo me do taraf ranhege aur sirf khatra hone par hi andar aayenge nahi tu bahar ranhege aur ek waqt me sirf ek team hi andar jayegi aur aapas me code word bhi rakh liye the.

Main unko samjha kar us jagah par gaya tu dekha ki vo ek bahut badi building thi aur uski boundar wall 7 foot unchi thi, lekin mere liye koi jayada unchi naji thi maine uspar chadh kar dekha ki andar ek main gate tha aur uske donon aur do log hathiyar lekar khade the. Main chupke se unke paas jakar martial art ka ek daav lagakar un donon ko behosh kar diya aur pehli team ko andar aane ka bolkar ki in donon ko kabje me le le aur andar se bahar ya bahar se koi andar aane lage tu use sambhal le. Main andar gaya tu dekha ki charo ladkiyon ko kursi se bandha hua tha aur unke munh par tape lagaya hua tha jisse vo chikh na sake.

Vanha par char log baithe hue the aur taash khel rahe the aur daru pi rahe the. Main chupke se unke piche gaya aur unke sath baith gaya aur unme se ek ke kandhe par hath rakhkar uski gardan ki nas dabakar use behosh kar diya tu samne baithe hue vayukti ne jaise hi mujhe dekha tu chaku nikalkar mere upar var kiya jise maine apane hathon se rok diya lekin meri baju par thodhi kharonch aa gayi tu maine gusse me aakar baki dono ko mukke jad diye jisse vo dono dur jakar gire. Uske baad main khada ho gaya aur ek ko apani thokar par rakh diya tab tak pehle wala chaku leka mere piche se lapka aur piche se var karne laga tu maine ek taraf hat kar uspar laat chala di aur bo dur ja gira. Fir baki dono ko bhi dhun diya. Abhi main inko maaf hi raha tha tu unka boss pistol lekar mere samne aa gaya aur mujhe dhamkane laga ki hath upar uthao aur ghutno par hone ke liye kaha tu maine hath upar karke jaise hi ghutno par baithne laga tu ek hath se gun wale hath par karate ka var kiya aur dusre hath se uske pait me jad diya jisse uske hath se pistol nikalkar dur ja giri aur maine use dhun diya. Abhi main aur kuch karta tab tak uska ek sathi hosh me aakar pistol ki taraf lapka tu maine chalang laga di aur pistol ko thokar markar dur fenk diya aur uski dhunai kar di. Fir maine dusri team ko bhi andar bulakar un sabko pakad liya aur police ko phone karke unhe pakdwa diya aur un charon ko apane sath le gaya. Police wale iss gang ko kafi samay se dundh rahe the. Dadaji ke rashukh ki vajah se un charon ka kanhi naam nahi aaya. Jab ham vanha se chale tu un sabki aankho me aabhar tha kyounki mujhe Gita ne bataya ki agar ham unhe nahi bachate tu vo gunde unhe bech dete. Mujhe Swamiji ki baat yaad aayi aur hansne laga ki jo koi bhi tum sab ka bura chahega bo barbaad ho jayega, yahi hua.

Hotel me aakar sab ne dekha ki mujhe kharonch aai hai tu Neha doudkar mere paas aai aur kehne lagi "Mujhe maaf kar do aur chupchap baith jao' aur khud hi meri chot par First aid karne lagi. Maine kaha "kis baat ki maafi mang rahi ho aur kis hak se mujhpar roub chaan rahi ho"

Neha sab ke samne mere gale lag gayi aur mere kaan me kehne lagi "aapki biwi hu aur mera kehna manna padega"

Maine kaha kab bani meri biwi tu usne kisi ki parvah nahi ki aur mere hothon par apane honth rakhkar kaha "Janam janmantar se" Sab khilkhilakar hansne lage aur uske baad sabne mujhse shadi karne ki hami bhar di

Rajni bua hami bharne me sharma rahi thi tu maine uska hath pakadkar kaha "Dekho ek baat jan lo ki meri biwi ko bold aur beautiful hona chahiye"

Rajni: Main hu na
Main bola kanha ho tab unhone bhi mujhe kiss kiya. Dada ji boley 'kuch tu sharam karo mere samne hi shuru ho gaye"

Maine jaha "Dadaji jisne ki sharam uske fute karam"

Fir agle din Swamiji ke aashram me meri un sanke sath shadi ho gai, lekin samasya yeh thi ki samaj ke samne isko kaise.kiya jaye. Jisko ek secret rakha ja raha hai, use main kisi dusri kahani me bataunga.

Udhar shadi karne ke baad vo sab bahut khush thi aur un sab ki kismat ki vajah se mera bussiness desh videsh me bahut teji se failne laga aur paison ki barish hone lagi aur bahut sare desho me hamari company ki branches thi aur Shyam ab chauffer driven Mersedes me chalta tha tu aap samajh sakte hain meri company ki hasiyat.

20 saal baad main ek anjan tapu par apni family ke sath vaccinations par aaya hua tha aur samundar ke kinare easy chair par baitha hua tha ki Rekha meri bagal me baithi thi aur ek alhad si ladki jo sirf bikani me thi samundar me se doudti hui aai aur mujhse lipat gai aur kiss karke kehne lagi "Hi, my handsome boyfriend". Sath me baithi Rekha kehne lagi ki ye tu tere Papa hain tu usne kaha "He is my Papa, but my real and only boyfriend" Aapko koi taklif hai tu batao.

Rekha bechari kya bolti, Usne man me socha "Maa aur beti se pyar" aur partyaksh me usne bas itna hi kaha "No mera baccha, enjoy with your boyfriend" Uske itna kehte hi Vo mere se lipat gai aur mere chere ko chumbanon se bhar diya.

..........END.............

Bahot hi shaandaar story writer sahiba.
 
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