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Incest Maa-beta ek sacche pyaar ki kahani part-3

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Jaisa ki maine kaha tha, main aap logo se gifs chahta hoon jo aapke pasand ke hai.. agar koi update aapne padha aur aap sab ko laga ki kaash ye gif ya pic udhar rahata mujhe wo section detail dm Karo aur gif or pic bhejo, even after update main edit karunga..so baki log bhi pasand karne lgenge...so please aap apne taraf se ye karte jaao.
 
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Maa kadambari jab dekhti hai ki unhone apni ek ungli yoni me daali hui thi. Unhone jhat se apne ungli ko bahar nikala. Wo apne aap me ek dum se sharmindagi me doob chuki thi. Wah jalkund se bahar nikal kar apne gile sharir ko kapde se saaf kiya aur wapas apne bistar ki taraf aagayi. Aaine ke saamne khadi hokar wah khud ko dekh rahi thi. Wo apni yoni ki taraf dekhti hai.

Maa kadambari-(man me)- ye maine kya kiya. Aisa main kar bhi kaise sakti hoon. Aur wo bhi yuvaraj.....

Man me - tumhare chahre par ek Ashanti jaroor dikh rahi lekin lagta hai hriday ko bhi shanti aaj jald hi milegi.

Maa kadambari- kya matlab aaj jald, nahi hum aisa kuch nahi karenge. Hume ye sab pasand nahi.

Unka man- kyun nahi, yah to har stree karti hai. Isme pasand naa pasand ki kya baat aagayi.

Maa kadambari- humne jo kiya bas galti se hogaya. Isme hamara kya dosh.

Unka man- sharir tumhara hi tha to galti bhi to tumhari hi hogi na kadmabari. Ab to is baat ko maan lo ki tum yuvaraj ke prem me pad chuki hai. Tumhe kalpana me bhi ab wahi nazar aa rahe hai.

Maa kadambari- par main unke saath...nahi

Unka man - tum jara apne aap ko dekho. Tum abhi bhi kitni jawan lagti ho. Tumhare is sharir ki sundarta ko gaur se dekho. Kya tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhari ab bhi kuch jaroorate hai. Tumhara sharir Kai samay se ek sacche prem ki chahat me akela baitha hai. Ab jab tumhe mauka mil raha hai. Kya tum ise gawana chahti ho.

Maa kadambari dhire dhire apne nagn sharir par haath pherati hai. Apn sundar, sudaul sharir ko dekh man hi man muskurati hai.

Maa kadambari- haa jaanti hoon, meri kuch jaroorate hai lekin ye sab karna mujhe sahi nahi lag raha.

Unka man- kyu nahi tum bas meri baat maano. Tumhe apni jivan ka ek anandpurvak samay ka anubhav hoga.

Maa kadambari apni ungliyon ko dhire dhire yoni ke upar le jaati hai. Wo khudko aaine me dekhti hai. Aur kuch sochte hue apna haath yoni se hata deti hai.

Unka man- kya hua. Kya tum is khshan ka anand nahi lena chahti.

Maa kadambari- nahi mujhe ye sab nahi karna. Main ab sona chahti hoon. Ab mujhe aur pareshan mat karo.

Maa kadambari apna dhyan in sab se hatati hai aur sone lagti hai.

Agli subah-


Subah maa kadambari uth jaati hai. Uthne ke baad wah snaan kar leti hai aur taiyyar hone lagti hai. Wah apni kal ki us harkat se khudko sharmindagi mahsoos kar rahi thi. Wah jab saree pahan rahi thi tab fir se unhe yuvaraj ki yaad aati hai.

Maa kadambari- (khud se)- shayad mujhe yuvaraj se puchna chahiye ki main kya pahnu. Lekin unhe main kaise puch sakti hoon. Aur pata nahi wo hai kaha. Kya main unke aane ka intezaar karu?. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Wo bahot sochti hai lekin ant me vah nirnay leti hai ki koi khaas saree pahan legi.

Wah ek hare aur laal range ke mishran vaali saree pahanati hai. Saaj sringar karne ke baad wah khudki taraf aaine me dekhti hai.

Maa kadambari- (khud se)- kya lagta hai kadambari, kya main yuvaraj ko aise pasand aaungi? Ya nahi.

Yah sawal khudse karte wakt unke andar ek sharmili bhavana aajati hai.

Maa kadambari- shayad iska jawab mujhe yuvaraj hi de sakte hai. Pata nahi wo kaha hai. Aaj mujhse milne bhi nahi aaye. Main hi jaakar unse milti hoon.


Maa Kadambari rajmahal mein dheere-dheere kadam rakhte hue chal rahi thin. Unki aankhon mein kuch udaasi thi, jaise unki aatma kahin kho gayi ho. Yuvaraj ke bas ek prashansa ke liye wo puri taraj vyakul thi. Woh une dhoondte hue mahal ke un bhaagon mein pahunchn gayi thi, jo kam hi logon ke liye khule hote the. Aaj unka dil jaise kuch vishesh ki ummid kar raha tha, aur woh beman se badhati rahi.

Wahin, achanak unki nazar ek baramde par padi, jahan se halki awaazain aa rahi thin. Woh dheere-dheere paas gayi aur parde ko halka khol dekha



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—Yuvaraj ek vishal talwar thame, apni taqat ka abhyas kar rahe the. Unke tan par ek safed dhoti thi, aur upar unka sharir puri tarah nagn tha. Har ek hilaavali mein unki maanspeshiyan nikhra rahi thin, jaise sury ki kiranein us par sone ka chhidkav kar rahi ho. Unki aankhon mein jo teevrata thi, woh kisi asadharan veerta ka pratik thi.

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Maharani Kadambari ka dil achanak bahut tez dhadakne laga. Woh kuch kshanon ke liye thithki, jaise samay unke liye tham gaya ho. Yuvaraj ka roop, unki shakti, aur unki chaal—sab kuch un par aisa asar daal raha tha, jaisa pehle kabhi nahi hua tha. Unke mann mein ek halchal si mach gayi, jo woh khud bhi nahi samajh paa rahi thin.

"Kya yeh wahi Yuvaraj hai, humne to unhe aajtak aisa ardhnagn nahi dekha tha" Kadambari ne socha, parantu kuch pal mein hi unka dil yeh maanne ko tayaar ho gaya ki yeh wahi veer, wahi nayak hai, jo har pal unki soch aur swapnon mein basa rehta hai.

Unki dhadkan tez ho gayi, aur woh apne dil ke jazbaaton ko niyantrit karne ki koshish karti, lekin yeh sab unke liye asaan tha. Ek ajnabi aakarshan ka ahsas, jise woh pehchaan nahi paa rahi thin. Woh dheere-dheere kadam aage badhati hain, phir bhi Yuvaraj ke us adbhut roop se apni nazarein hata nahi paa rahi thin.


Kadambari apne man me yuvaraj ki prashansa kar rahi thi.

Maa kadambari-(man me)- aap to kisi sher ki tarah dikhte hai yuvaraj. Shayad ek saccha mard kuch aapke jaisa hi dikhta hoga.


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Jaise hi Yuvaraj ne ek shaktishaali vaar kiya aur talwar hawa mein ek khoobsurat chaap banate hue neeche giri, Maa Kadambari ki aankhon mein ek chamak aayi. Unki hriday ki dhadkan tez ho gayi, aur woh apni bhavnaon se ghabraate hue, halke se ek kadam peeche hat gayi.

Parantu unka mann nahi maan raha tha, unka dil to usi kshan mein Yuvaraj ke paas jaane ko tadap raha tha. Woh yeh soch rahi thin ki kaise shabdon mein un jazbaaton ko vyakt karein, jo achanak unke bhitar uth rahe the.

Woh unke paas aane ka saahas nahi juthaa paa rahi thin, lekin unki aankhon mein ek gehri ichchha aur prem ki chaaya thi, jo shabdon se kahin adhik spasht thi.


Maa Kadambari, jo apne andar uthti ajeeb si bhavnaon ko sambhalne ki koshish kar rahi thin, tabhi Yuvaraj ki nazar achanak un par padi. Unki aankhon mein kuch vishesh tha, jaise ek aahwan ho, jo seedha unke dil mein utar gaya ho. Yuvaraj ne ek dheemi, akarshak muskaan ke saath apni talwar neeche rakhi aur Kadambari ki aur dekha.

Yuvaraj - maa, aap yaha. Haa samajh gaya.

Yuvaraj ne ek aur talwar uthayi aur maa kadambari ko de di.

Yuvaraj - shayad aap talwarbaazi sikhna chahti hai. Hum us wakt aapko utna sikha nahi paaye lekin ab wakt hai ye lijiye aur hamare saath abhyas kijiye.

Yeh aawaz jaise hawa mein goonj gayi, aur Kadambari ka dil ek halki si dhadkan ke saath ruk sa gaya. Unhone nazarein uthayi aur dekha—Yuvaraj unhe usi veerta aur atmvishwas se dekh raha the, jaisa pehle kabhi nahi mehsoos hua tha. Unki aankhon mein kuch aisa tha, jo unhe bheetar se chubh raha tha, par yeh chubhan ek asadharan akarshan mein badal chuki thi.


Kadambari ka dil is baat se thodi der tak dhadakta raha, jaise woh koi nirnay le rahi ho. Lekin bheetar se ek anokhi ichcha ubhar rahi thi jo yuvaraj ke sharir ke paas lana chahta tha. Wo khudko unke paas samarpit karna chahti thi.

Maa kadambari- "Ji haan, hum taiyaar hai.,"


Yuvaraj ne talwar uthayi aur unhe dheere-dheere apni aur bulaaya. Unki aankhon mein jo chunauti thi, woh maa Kadambari ke liye kuch adhik hi arthpurn ho gayi thi. Woh dheere-dheere unke paas badhi, aur jaise hi woh Yuvaraj ke saamne khadi hui, unka dil tezi se dhadakne laga. Is qareeb mein dono ke beech ek ajeeb si taazgi aur nazdeeki mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Yuvaraj ne talwar ko thoda aur upar kiya aur Kadambari ko sanket kiya.

Yuvaraj - maa, "Apne haath se ise pakdakar humpe vaar karo.,"

Is bich un dono ka ek dusre ke sharir ke saath sparsh hota. Yuvaraj ke sharir se bahta pasina maa kadmabari ke liye kisi sugandh ki tarah kaam kar raha tha. Jisse wo yuvaraj ki taraf aur khichi chali aa rahi thi.Yeh sparsh na keval sharir ka tha, balki ek gehri bhavna ka bhi ahsas tha, jaise unke beech koi adrishya taar jud raha ho. Kadambari ka hriday ek anjaani si kasak se bhar gaya. Woh Yuvaraj ke nazdeek thin, aur unki maanspeshiyon ki halchal, unka atmvishwas, aur unki gehri nazrein use kahin kho dene ka dar bhi mehsoos kar rahi thin.


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Unke beech ka yeh bhavnatmak aur sharirik sampark jaise kisi jaadu se bhi adhik tha. Kadambari ne apni talwar ki dhaar ko mehsoos kiya, aur Yuvaraj ke haathon ki shakti ka ahsas kiya, jo unhe atmvishwas se bhar raha tha.

Dono ke beech yeh nazdeeki, yeh sparsh, kuch halke fulke samvaad, ek doosre ki aatma ko chhune jaisa tha. Kadambari ko laga, jaise talwar ka abhyas aur bhi gehra ho, jaise dono ki urja ek saath jud rahi ho. Woh chahti thi ke ye bas kabhi ruke hi na..


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Lekin kuch der ke abhyas ke baad yuvaraj ne maa kadambari ko vishram karne ke liye kaha.

Yuvaraj- shayad aapko ab rukna chahiye aapne bahot abhyas kiya. Is baar aap atmavishwas se abhyas kar rahi thi. Agar aap aisehi abhyas karegi to aap ek acchi yoddha ban sakti hai.

Maa kadambari apni prashansa se khush ho jaati hai.

Maa kadambari- agar aap mujhe sikhayenge, to hum koi bhi chiz sikh lenge yuvaraj.

Yuvaraj (muskurate hue)- to aap jab chahe hume bula lijiye hum aapko jo sikhna hai sikhayenge.

Maa kadambari thodi narazgi dikhate hue- bade aaye aap sikhane waale. Aapne kaha tha aap hume ghudsawari bhi sikhaoge. Us ek din aapne sikha to diya lekin ab kya.

Yuvaraj- aap naraz mat hoiye. Kisi din hum aapko wo bhi sikhayenge.

Maa kadambari- thik hai jaisi aapki marji. Hum jaakar maa se milte hai. Aap bhi taiyaar ho jaaiye.

Yuvaraj - thik hai.

Maa kadambari mud jaati hai aur jaa hi rahi hoti hai.

Yuvaraj - maa, rukiye.

Maa kadambari- kya hua yuvaraj.

Yuvaraj maa kadambari ke piche khade hote hai aur unke piche nange badan haath pherne lagte hai.

Maa kadambari samajh nahi paati ki Yuvaraj aakhir kar kya rahe hai.

Yuvaraj - haa, hogaya. Ab in baalo thoda thik se rakhiye.

Maa kadambari dekhti hai ki unke kuch baal bikhar gaye the wahi yuvaraj ne thode thik gaye the.

Maa kadambari- koi baat nahi, main inhe baand deti hoon.

Yuvaraj - nahi nahi, inhe khol dijiye.

Maa kadambari- lekin kyun.

Yuvaraj - maa aap baalo ko kholiye to sahi.

Maa kadambari vaise hi karti hai jaisa unhe Yuvaraj karne ko kahate hai. Wah apne baal kholti hai. Unke kaale lambe aur ghane baal unke mandal tak aa jate hai. Yuvaraj turant unke baalo ke pakad unke gardan se hote hue saare baal ek taraf saamne ki or lekar aate hai.


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Yuvaraj - haa, ab sahi hai. Dekhiye ab ye kitna Sundar lag raha hai.

Maa kadambari man hi man muskura deti hai aur waha se chali jaati hai.

Ab dhire dhire samay bit raha hota hai. Dopahar ke samay me yuvaraj usi kaksh ki taraf jaate hai jaha mangalpratap apna abhyas karte hai.



Mangalpratap pehle se hi kaksh mein upasthit the. Woh akela khada apne vicharon mein khoya hua the. Unka baaya haath apahij tha, lekin unki aankhon mein hamesha ki tarah ek adbhut dridhta jhalk rahi thi. Unke andar gehraayi mein kahin ek sankoch bhi chhupa tha, jo unhe aksar unka sarvashreshth dene se rok deta tha.

Usi samay kaksh ka dwaar khula. Yuvaraj andar aaye. Unke chehre par sanyamit muskaan thi, aur unki chaal mein atmvishwas aur shaahi garima spasht jhalak rahi thi. Mangalpratap ne Yuvaraj ko dekhkar sir jhukaaya.

**Yuvaraj (gambhir swar mein):**
"Bhai Mangalpratap, aap samay se pehle aa gaye. Yah accha hai. Parantu kya aaj ka abhyas aapke liye keval ek samaanya din jaisa hoga, ya aap apne bhitar ki taqat ko aaj saamne laayenge?"

Mangalpratap thoda hichkichaye, lekin dheere se bole, **"yuvaraj, main apni or se prayaas karta hoon. Parantu sachai yah hai ki kabhi-kabhi lagta hai, mujhe nahi lagta main aapke saath ye abhyas jit bhi paaunga.

Yuvaraj kuch kshanon tak unhe dekhte rahe, phir dheere-dheere unke sameep aaye. Unhone Mangalpratap ke kandhe par haath rakha.

**Yuvaraj (halki muskaan ke saath):**
"Aap jo keh rahe hain, wah keval aapke mann ka dar hai, bhai Mangalpratap. Asli yodhha wah hai jo apni kamzoriyaan pehchankar unhein apni taqat banaata hai. Main jaanta hoon ki aapke andar kitni kushalta hai. Aaj ka abhyas aapki us shakti ko baahar laane ka prayaas hoga. To jaisa ki humne shart rakha tha us shart ko ab pura karne ka samay aagaya hai."

Mangalpratap ne thodi hichak ke saath kaha, **"Parantu yuvaraj, main ek haath se apahij
hoo. Main har baar yah mehsoos karta hoon ki main adhoora hoon."

Yuvaraj ne gehri nazron se unhe dekha aur drid swar mein bole, **"bhai Mangalpratap, aapka ek haath nahi hona aapki kamzori nahi, balki aapki sabse badi taqat hai. Aap jis prakar is kami ke bawajood apna har vaar karte hain, wah aapke bhitar chhipe advitiy yodhha ka pramaan hai. Aaj main nahi, aap mujhe sikhaiye ki ichhashakti kya kar sakti hai."**

Abhyas ka aarambh

Yuvaraj ne apni talwar uthai aur Mangalpratap ko sanket diya ki wah bhi apni talwar uthaye. Dono ek dusre ke saamne khade ho gaye. Mangalpratap ne talwar pakdi, lekin unki pakad mein ek halka jhijhak spasht dikhayi de rahi thi.

**Yuvaraj (muskurate hue):**
"Talwar ko apne saathi ki tarah pakdo, dar ki tarah nahi. Wah aapke haathon ki shakti badhaayegi, use seemit nahi karegi. Chaliye, pehle vaar se shuru karte hain."

Mangalpratap ne pehla vaar kiya. Yuvaraj ne aasani se ise roka aur saath hi ek tez palatwaar kiya. Mangalpratap ne poori sajagta se vaar ka saamna kiya.

Talwaren ek baar phir takraayi. Mangalpratap ka har vaar majboot tha, lekin unki gati mein atmvishwas ki kami dikhayi de rahi thi. Yuvaraj ne ise mehsoos kiya.

**Yuvaraj (gambhir swar mein):**
"Mangalpratap, apne mann ko kamzor na banaiye. Yadi main aapke vaar ko rok sakta hoon, to yah keval isliye kyunki aap apni poori shakti ka upyog nahi kar rahe hain. Apni talwar ko svatantr chhod dijiye, aur apne dimaag ko is dar se mukt kariye ki aap haar sakte hain."


Yuvaraj ke in shabdon ne Mangalpratap ke bhitar ki jijivisha ko jaga diya. Ab unka har vaar adhik sashakt aur teevr hone laga. Talwaron ki goonj poore kaksh mein pratidhvaniit hone lagi. Dono ke beech ki ladai ab keval abhyas nahi, balki asli sangharsh jaisi prateet ho rahi thi.

Ek vaar ke baad doosra vaar, Mangalpratap ne apni poori taqat se ladai jaari rakhi. Yuvaraj ne unhein chunautipurn drishti se dekha.

**Yuvaraj:**
"Bahut accha, Mangalpratap! Ab aap sahi maayne mein lad rahe hain. Yah wahi yodhha hai jise main janana chahta hoon. Apni kamzori ko taqat mein badalte dekhna mere liye garv ka kshan hai."

Mangalpratap paseene se lathpath the, lekin unki aankhon mein ek nayi chamak thi. Wah lagatar Yuvaraj par prahar kar rahe the. Lekin achanak, thakaawat ne unki gati ko kam kar diya. Yuvaraj ne mauka dekha aur ek teevr vaar kiya. Mangalpratap apni talwar ko sambhal nahi paaye aur wah unke haath se gir gayi.

Mangalpratap haar nahi manana chahte the. Lekin thakawat ke saamne wah kuch nahi kar paaye.

Mangalpratap sir jhukaakar khade ho gaye. Unke chehre par thakaawat thi, parantu unki aankhon mein garv ka aabhaas bhi tha. Yuvaraj ne unki talwar uthai aur unhein wapas saunp di.

**Yuvaraj (narm lekin drid swar mein):**
"Bhaai, aap haarkar bhi aaj jeet gaye. Yah abhyas keval talwarrbaazi ka nahi tha, yah atmvishwas ka tha. Aur aapne yah siddh kar diya hai ki aap apni seemaon se upar uth sakte hain."

Mangalpratap ne thoda sankoch ke saath kaha,- "Parantu yuvaraj, main antatah haar gaya. Shayad main ab
bhi utna saksham nahi hoon."**

Yuvaraj ne gehri drishti se unhe dekha aur dridhta se bole, - Haar keval wah hoti hai jab aap prayaas karna chhod dete hain. Aapne haar nahi maani, aap ant tak ladhe. Yah sachha yodhha banne ki pehli nishani hai."**

Mangalpratap ne apne bhitar ek ajeeb-sa atmvishwas mehsoos kiya. Unhone jhukkar Yuvaraj ko pranam kiya.

**Mangalpratap:**
"Yuvaraj, Aapki yah shiksha meri taqat banegi. Aasha karta hoon jitna din aap yahapar rahenge, utne din hum roj abhyas kar paaye.

**Yuvaraj (muskurate hue):**
Kyun nahi bhaai, lekin main us din ka intezaar karunga jis din aap ek yoddha ki tarah yuddh me ladhane jaaye.

Mangalpratap- ji yuvaraj..

Yuvaraj - waise hume aap ye yuvaraj mat kahiye. Aap hamare Bhai hai. Aur haa hum aapko anumati dete hai. To abse hume aap apna bhai kahe.

Mangalpratap muskurate hue- ji bhaiyya.

Mangalpratap kuch sochte hue- waise aapne kal ke baare me kya socha hai, kya aap jaane waale ho.

Yuvaraj - aap kis baare me baat kar rahe hai.

**Mangalpratap (muskuraate hue):**
"Vastav mein, Bhaiyya, kya aapko kisi ne yah nahin bataya? Chaliye, main hi aapko is vishay mein batata hoon."

**Yuvaraj (chaukate hue):**
"Kis vishay ki baat kar rahe hain aap, Mangalpratap?"

**Mangalpratap (gambhir swar mein):**
"Bhaiyya, hamare rajya mein prati varsh ek mahatvapurn pratiyogita ka aayojan hota hai. Yah koi saadhaaran pratiyogita nahin, apitu veeron ke shaurya, parakram aur shauryata ki pareeksha hai. Ise **'Veerbhumi Sangram'** ke naam se jaana jaata hai. Yah samast rajya ka gaurav hai aur har koi ise dekhne ke liye utsuk rehta hai."

**Yuvaraj:**
"Veerbhumi Sangram? Is pratiyogita ke vishay mein mujhe adhik batayiye."

**Mangalpratap (bhavuk hokar):**
"Bhaiyya, yah pratiyogita hamare rajya ke sabse vishal maidan, 'Mahayudh Sthal' mein aayojit hoti hai.



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Yahaan hamare rajya ke sarvashreshtha yoddha ek-doosre ke sammukh khade hote hain. Pratyek yoddha akela yudh karta hai, apni talwar, dhaal aur apne sahas ke saath. Yah tab tak chalta hai, jab tak unmein se koi ek vijayi na ho jaye ya...(kuch shan rukte hue)...shatru ka jeevan samapt na ho jaye."

**Yuvaraj (aashcharya mein):**
"To yah mrityu ke paar jaane wala sangram hai? Kya yah pratha kathor nahin hai, Mangalpratap?"

**Mangalpratap:**
"Ji Bhaiyya, yah kathor avashya hai, parantu yahi hamare sainikon ki veerta ka saakshaatkar karati hai. Yah yudh bhoomi kisi ek ki vijay nahin, apitu hamare poore rajya ke garv ka pratik hai. Yahaan hamare nagrik apni sena ko parakhte hain, unke balidan aur shaurya ko samman dete hain. Yah pratiyogita keval jeevan aur mrityu ke sangharsh ka prashn nahin, apitu adarsh sainik banne ki kasauti hai."

**Yuvaraj:**
"Aur rajya ka har nagrik ise dekhne ke liye aata hai?"

**Mangalpratap:**
"Ji Maharaj. Hamare rajya ka har vyakti is mahayudh sthal mein upasthit hota hai. Yah keval pratiyogita nahin, balki ek utsav hai. Yoddhaon ke liye yah samman aur gaurav arjit karne ka avsar hota hai. Rajya ki maharani aur samast mantrigan bhi ismein sammilit hote hain. Yahi nahin, vijay prapt karne wale yoddha ko rajsi samman ke saath 'Ranvijay' upadhi pradan ki jati hai."

**Yuvaraj (gambhir swar mein):**
"Parantu yah sangram itna bhishan hota hoga, to kya kabhi koi aisa yoddha aaya hai jisne apne praan na khokar yah sangram jeeta ho?"

**Mangalpratap (muskuraate hue):**
"Haan Bhaiyya, kuch aise bhi veer yoddha hue hain jinhone apni kushalta aur parakram se apne shatru ko parajit kar diya. Yah bahut durlabh hota hai, kintu asambhav nahin. Yah pratiyogita veerta ke saath-saath buddhimatta ka bhi parikshan karti hai. Jo yoddha apni takat aur chaturai ka sahi upyog karta hai, vah apne shatru ko parajit kar sakta hai."

**Yuvaraj (aaschary hokar):**
"Mangalpratap, yah to atyant adbhut aur romanchkari prateet ho raha hai. Kya yah pratiyogita kal hone wali hai"

**Mangalpratap:**
"Ji Bhaiyya, yah pratiyogita kal hone wali hai. Kya aap isme hissa lena chahenge.

Yuvaraj - hum, hum kaise kar sakte hai hum to is rajya ke bhi nahi hai.

Mangalpratap - haa hum to bhul hi Gaye.

Yuvaraj - vaise aap isme kyun hissa nahi lete.

Yah sun mangalpratap ek dum se dar gaye.

Mangalpratap - nahi nahi, main nahi...aap ye kya kah rahe hai bhai. Main isme hissa nahi le sakta hai.

Yuvaraj (muskurate hue)- aapki marji bhai. Lekin yahi samay hai jo aapki veerta ka darshan pura rajya kar sakta hai. Jara is bare me bhi sochiye. Ab hum chalte hai.

Mangalpratap phir se abhar wyakt karte hai aur wo bhi apne kuch anya kaamo ke liye nikalte hai.








Agla bhaag jald hi.
 

sharma ji_91

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Story Start Kya Hui Thi Chali Gai Kaha ? Ab Kya hi bole bolenge to bhaiya report aajaegi chalo koi ni update aaya uske liye dhanyawaad...... Bas ek request h ki next time se ye mention kare sabhi writer's ki vo apni story me koi change karenge ya nahi jaise ki audience ke kehne par ya fir jo likh diya vahi hoga no change so next time se dekh lena if it possible
 
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Story Start Kya Hui Thi Chali Gai Kaha ? Ab Kya hi bole bolenge to bhaiya report aajaegi chalo koi ni update aaya uske liye dhanyawaad......
😂Are bhai bhai. Story wahi hai jaha se hone thi. Sirf maa aur yuvaraj ke character ko thoda hi dikha sakte hai baaki characters bhi dikhane padenge. Nahi to story ka kya fayda. Waise koi report nahi aayega bhai. Jo galat Lage wo bata sakte ho. Ya phir dm karo.
 

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Story Start Kya Hui Thi Chali Gai Kaha ? Ab Kya hi bole bolenge to bhaiya report aajaegi chalo koi ni update aaya uske liye dhanyawaad......

😂Are bhai bhai. Story wahi hai jaha se hone thi. Sirf maa aur yuvaraj ke character ko thoda hi dikha sakte hai baaki characters bhi dikhane padenge. Nahi to story ka kya fayda. Waise koi report nahi aayega bhai. Jo galat Lage wo bata sakte ho. Ya phir dm karo.
Koi sarcastic nahi bolra bus itna kehna chata hu har reader's ki taraf se story kaisi bhi ho kitni hi badi kyu na ho lekin jab tak regular update nahi honge tab tab jaldi bazi machate h sab kyuki agar aise chalegaa sab ko dikhega writer story me to update jaldi aane chaiye story abhi yaha maa ke ghar aane ke 2 din hi hue h bas baki character bhi to h na iski bhabhi or baki log vo to yaad bhi nahi honge logo ko islie bola main bas ki story achhi badiya hai 10/10 but update ke mamle me 2/10
 

Incest--boy

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Koi sarcastic nahi bolra bus itna kehna chata hu har reader's ki taraf se story kaisi bhi ho kitni hi badi kyu na ho lekin jab tak regular update nahi honge tab tab jaldi bazi machate h sab kyuki agar aise chalegaa sab ko dikhega writer story me to update jaldi aane chaiye story abhi yaha maa ke ghar aane ke 2 din hi hue h bas baki character bhi to h na iski bhabhi or baki log vo to yaad bhi nahi honge logo ko islie bola main bas ki story achhi badiya hai 10/10 but update ke mamle me 2/10
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Super update.
 
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