Incest Maa bete ka safar..

[Maya Rani Saha]

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[Kumarshiva]

Congrats for complete 200 pages

Fokat ka congrats mt kiya kro aise gh... Writer ko ko
Teen saal se ek story likh rha hai c

 

[Ranchojaiker]

Maine ye poori story maatra 1.5 ghante me padh li. Chaukne waali baat nahi kyunki ginkar 25 updates bhi nhi hai iske normal length waale. Isi forum par aise bhi writers hain jinka ek update iss poori story ke sab updates se bhi bada hota hai. Pehle to characters ki baat:-
1) Vinod to showpiece hai yaha. Uska bhi use use ho sakta hai.
2) Reema jiska koi khaas role nhi dikha abhi tak har baar Ravi Pramila ke milan me badha hi ban rahi hai.
3) Vinod Reema kya kam the jo Pramila ke bhai aur bhabhi bhi aa gye milan mushkil karne.
4) Ravi abhi tak to maa ke isharon pe naach raha hai, jab Pramila ka mann hota hai ise bhaav deti hai, jab nahi mann hota to mana karke gaayab ho jaati hai. Ravi ka khudka to koi stance hi nahi hai. Sex dono ki sehmati se hona chahiye par koi baar baar klpd kar de uske baad bhi bhaav dena chutiyagiri hai.
Ravisingh Bhai agar mann nhi hai to incomplete rehne do. Aise 2 3 mahine par updates deke readers ki bhavnao se mat khelo. Iss story me itna scope hai ki sahi se likha jaaye to ye iss forum ki sabse badi story bann sakti hai but aapne plot+characters ko waste hi kiya hai abhi tak. Bhavishya me bhi sudhaar ki koi sambhavna nahi dikh rahi mujhe. Jinko meri baat buri lagi ho, lage. <25 updates wali iss story ke 62lakh readers dekh ke mujhe ascharya ho raha hai. Readers kuch bhi padh lete hain jaise maine ise padh liya aur yahi ham readers ki galti hai. Isiliye writers hame wait karwate rehte hain. Highly disappointed

 

[Kartik69]

Maine ye poori story maatra 1.5 ghante me padh li. Chaukne waali baat nahi kyunki ginkar 25 bhi updates bhi nhi hai iske normal length waale. Isi forum par aise bhi writers hain jinka ek update iss poori story ke sab updates se bhi bada hota hai. Pehle to characters ki baat:-
1) Vinod to showpiece hai yaha. Uska bhi use use ho sakta hai.
2) Reema jiska koi khaas role nhi dikha abhi tak har baar Ravi Pramila ke milan me badha hi ban rahi hai.
3) Vinod Pramila kya kam the jo Pramila ke bhai aur bhabhi bhi aa gye milan mushkil karne.
4) Ravi abhi tak to maa ke isharon pe naach raha hai, jab Pramila ka mann hota hai ise bhaav deti hai, jab nahi mann hota to mana karke gaayab ho jaati hai. Ravi ka khudka to koi stance hi nahi hai. Sex dono ki sehmati se hona chahiye par kou baar baar klpd kar de uske baad bhi bhaav dena chutiyagiri hai.
Ravisingh Bhai agar mann nhi hai to incomplete rehne do. Aise 2 3 mahine par updates deke readers ke bhavnao se mat khelo. Iss story me itna scope hai ki sahi se likha jaaye to ye iss forum ki sabse badi story bann sakti hai but aapne plot+characters ko waste hi kiya hai abhi tak. Bhavishya me bhi sudhaar ki koi sambhavna nahi dikh rahi mujhe. Jinko meri baat buri lagi ho, lage. <25 updates wali iss story ke 62lakh readers dekh ke mujhe ascharya ho raha hai. Readers kuch bhi padh lete hain jaise maine ise padh liya aur yahi ham readers ki galti hai. Isiliye writers hame wait karwate rehte hain. Highly disappointed

Ekdum sahi

 

[jarvis432]

Maine ye poori story maatra 1.5 ghante me padh li. Chaukne waali baat nahi kyunki ginkar 25 updates bhi nhi hai iske normal length waale. Isi forum par aise bhi writers hain jinka ek update iss poori story ke sab updates se bhi bada hota hai. Pehle to characters ki baat:-
1) Vinod to showpiece hai yaha. Uska bhi use use ho sakta hai.
2) Reema jiska koi khaas role nhi dikha abhi tak har baar Ravi Pramila ke milan me badha hi ban rahi hai.
3) Vinod Reema kya kam the jo Pramila ke bhai aur bhabhi bhi aa gye milan mushkil karne.
4) Ravi abhi tak to maa ke isharon pe naach raha hai, jab Pramila ka mann hota hai ise bhaav deti hai, jab nahi mann hota to mana karke gaayab ho jaati hai. Ravi ka khudka to koi stance hi nahi hai. Sex dono ki sehmati se hona chahiye par koi baar baar klpd kar de uske baad bhi bhaav dena chutiyagiri hai.
Ravisingh Bhai agar mann nhi hai to incomplete rehne do. Aise 2 3 mahine par updates deke readers ki bhavnao se mat khelo. Iss story me itna scope hai ki sahi se likha jaaye to ye iss forum ki sabse badi story bann sakti hai but aapne plot+characters ko waste hi kiya hai abhi tak. Bhavishya me bhi sudhaar ki koi sambhavna nahi dikh rahi mujhe. Jinko meri baat buri lagi ho, lage. <25 updates wali iss story ke 62lakh readers dekh ke mujhe ascharya ho raha hai. Readers kuch bhi padh lete hain jaise maine ise padh liya aur yahi ham readers ki galti hai. Isiliye writers hame wait karwate rehte hain. Highly disappointed

Madarchod pagal hai ye bhai

 

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