Please rest karo Monu.
Maine yahaan kaafi kahaniya parhi hai.
Sab utna interest leke nahi likhte jitna tum likhte ho. Tum sach mein apne pathako ka dhyan rakhte ho.
Aaj ke waqt mein kaam dhande aur niji zindagi ko chor doosro ke manoranjan ke liye kahani likh har har hafte update dena koi mazaak nahi...iske liye main tumhara abhaari hoon.
Paatro ke beech sambhog aur besharmi aur hawas ki bebasi tum bahut ache se dikha hi chuke ho.
Par ab samay hai dar, chinta aur badle kaa. Monu acha sex karta hai par usne ye sab naya seekha hai aur Maalti ko utna sukh nahi de sakta jitna maalti chahti hai. Peechle update mein usne maalti ko nahi maalti ne usko choda. Mujhe lagta hai, abhi ke liye, Maalti ko chahiye koi aur daanvi mard jo us jaisi hasthani ko masal ke rakh de...uski chaal hafton ke liye bigad ke rakh de...usse sharmanak harqatein karwae aur mahapaapi bana de.
Mujhe pata hai...Tumhe roz kayi sujhav milte hai kahani mein twist dene ke liye. To kuch sujhav mera bhi hai. Inhe par ke agar tum kahani mein inka istemaal karoge to main tumhara abhaari rahunga :
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. Monu aur Anokhi ko 3 mahine ke liye agwah/kidnap karwa do aur chupa do Delhi mein Is baare mein detail baad mein kisi update mein dena ki gaye kahaan dono .Jabbar unhe kisi ke kehne pe torture kare aur apna gussa uspe nikaale. Kundan ko Maalti se pehle hi nafrat hai, use maalti se filhaal door rakho par usi se Monu ka uddhar karwao.
Udhar ghar pe Maalti akeli hogi...
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Maalti ko Bhanu bataye ki Monu Savita aur Anokhi ko chodta hai aur gabhin kar chuka hai. Unke pet mein monu ka beej panap raha hai. Maalti ko is vishwatghaat se chot pahuche aur Monu uski nazron se gir jaaye. Wo pehle hi is dwand se guzar rahi hai ki maa hoke bete ke saath kaise so gayi. Is dhitkar aur grihna se use Monu ko avoid karne ka maula mile.
3. Bhanu is baat ka faida utha ke Maalti ko apne musal se hafte bhar, baari-baari chode. Hawas ki jalan aur monu ka vishwatghat Maalti ko Bhanu se pyar karwa de aur wo, Bhanu ko khush karne ke chakkar mein+ apni khud ki hawas mitane mein itni andhi ho jaaye ki besharmi ki har had paar kar jaaye..maalti ko monu ke peeth peeche bhanu ke saath bahut hi zyaada besharmi ke saath sex karwao aur isi lagatar chudai ke chalte - gabhin (pregnant) karwa do. Daal do bhanu ka beej uski kokh mein jise liye wo poore ghar mein akeli adhnangi rahe..
4. 3 Mahine Baad,.Kundan Monu ko bachaye - par Monu jab tak jaan bacha ke bhaage, aur ghar pahuche uski maa 3 mahina garbhwati hai aur uske stan aur bare, bhaari aur doodharu ho gaye hai. Monu maalti ko sach bataye. Maalti ko galti ka ehsaas ho, wo Monu se maafi maange, monu maa ke pyaar ke chalte use maaf kare aur dono milke Bhanu aur Jabbar se badla le, dusmano ko raaste se hatakar, apni poori zameeno ke malik ban jaaye.
Baaki pathako ka kya kehna hai is baare mein?