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Please rest karo Monu.

Maine yahaan kaafi kahaniya parhi hai. Sab utna interest leke nahi likhte jitna tum likhte ho. Tum sach mein apne pathako ka dhyan rakhte ho.

Aaj ke waqt mein kaam dhande aur niji zindagi ko chor doosro ke manoranjan ke liye kahani likh har har hafte update dena koi mazaak nahi...iske liye main tumhara abhaari hoon.

Paatro ke beech sambhog aur besharmi aur hawas ki bebasi tum bahut ache se dikha hi chuke ho. Par ab samay hai dar, chinta aur badle kaa. Monu acha sex karta hai par usne ye sab naya seekha hai aur Maalti ko utna sukh nahi de sakta jitna maalti chahti hai. Peechle update mein usne maalti ko nahi maalti ne usko choda. Mujhe lagta hai, abhi ke liye, Maalti ko chahiye koi aur daanvi mard jo us jaisi hasthani ko masal ke rakh de...uski chaal hafton ke liye bigad ke rakh de...usse sharmanak harqatein karwae aur mahapaapi bana de.

Mujhe pata hai...Tumhe roz kayi sujhav milte hai kahani mein twist dene ke liye. To kuch sujhav mera bhi hai. Inhe par ke agar tum kahani mein inka istemaal karoge to main tumhara abhaari rahunga 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽 :

1. Monu aur Anokhi ko 3 mahine ke liye agwah/kidnap karwa do aur chupa do Delhi mein Is baare mein detail baad mein kisi update mein dena ki gaye kahaan dono .Jabbar unhe kisi ke kehne pe torture kare aur apna gussa uspe nikaale. Kundan ko Maalti se pehle hi nafrat hai, use maalti se filhaal door rakho par usi se Monu ka uddhar karwao.

Udhar ghar pe Maalti akeli hogi...

2. Maalti ko Bhanu bataye ki Monu Savita aur Anokhi ko chodta hai aur gabhin kar chuka hai. Unke pet mein monu ka beej panap raha hai. Maalti ko is vishwatghaat se chot pahuche aur Monu uski nazron se gir jaaye. Wo pehle hi is dwand se guzar rahi hai ki maa hoke bete ke saath kaise so gayi. Is dhitkar aur grihna se use Monu ko avoid karne ka maula mile.

3. Bhanu is baat ka faida utha ke Maalti ko apne musal se hafte bhar, baari-baari chode. Hawas ki jalan aur monu ka vishwatghat Maalti ko Bhanu se pyar karwa de aur wo, Bhanu ko khush karne ke chakkar mein+ apni khud ki hawas mitane mein itni andhi ho jaaye ki besharmi ki har had paar kar jaaye..maalti ko monu ke peeth peeche bhanu ke saath bahut hi zyaada besharmi ke saath sex karwao aur isi lagatar chudai ke chalte - gabhin (pregnant) karwa do. Daal do bhanu ka beej uski kokh mein jise liye wo poore ghar mein akeli adhnangi rahe..

4. 3 Mahine Baad,.Kundan Monu ko bachaye - par Monu jab tak jaan bacha ke bhaage, aur ghar pahuche uski maa 3 mahina garbhwati hai aur uske stan aur bare, bhaari aur doodharu ho gaye hai. Monu maalti ko sach bataye. Maalti ko galti ka ehsaas ho, wo Monu se maafi maange, monu maa ke pyaar ke chalte use maaf kare aur dono milke Bhanu aur Jabbar se badla le, dusmano ko raaste se hatakar, apni poori zameeno ke malik ban jaaye.

Baaki pathako ka kya kehna hai is baare mein?

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Bhai aapne to mere muh ki baat chin li apka suggestion bahut hi mast hai bhanu bahut hi interesting charecter hai aur story me jab ek baar maalti aur bhanu conversation hua tha to wo conversation bahut hi hot chedkhani bhara naughty tha jise padh kar mai itna garm ho gya tha jitna malti ki kisi aur ki chudai se nhi hua tha haalanki malti ka satyam aur uske jeth ke sath scene bahut mast tha lekin last two month se main feel kar raha hu ki story monu aur malti par centred ho gyi hai jisse adultry story inchest me change ho gyi thi

Aisa nhi hai ki monu aur malti ke sex me mja nhi aya lekin jo mja ek gadrai mast aurat ke gair mard se chudai me hai wo mja uske bhai pati aur bete se nhi hai
Lekin fir bhi mai story writer ki tareef karunga wo kisi scene ko ache se present karte hai mja aa jata hai
mai writer ki story me koi interfere nhi chahta hu

Bas suggestion dena chahta hu ki

1- bhanu aur malti ka scene jab laye to usme direct chudai n ho pehle chedkhani wali conversation ho hasi majaak ho mauj masti emotional relationship bulid kro dono ke beech pehle


2- emotional relatoinship and bond banne ke baad bhanu dheere dheere malti ko seduce karna shuru kare.malti ko bhanu ki baate achi to lage lekin use bahut sharm aye aur apni grace ko turant na chore wo dheeme dheeme iski ओर khichti chali jaye bhanu malti ko touch kiye bina hi sirf baato se gili kar de jab bhanu ka pent me khada ho jaye to use malti se chupate hue adjust kre aur use adjust karte dekh malti ke chehre par muskaan aur hasi aye


3- fir bhanu aur malti ka dheere dheere physical chedkhani shuru karwao kamar par hath फेर kar aankh marna uske hath ko sehlana aur body ko touch karna jisse malti unconfortable bhi ho lekin acha bhi lage chahe in sabke liye bahut sare update lag jaye chahe do mahine lag jaye


4- aur jab dono ke beech sex ki shuruaat ho pehle sex me bhanu malti ko pura dominate kre aur malti apni grace sharm haya aur jhijhak ke sath bhanu ko ye sab karte hue roke lekin hawas ki jalan ki wajah se rok n paye malti bhanu ko sex karte samay bole ye sab galat hai hame ye nahi karna chahiye aur bhanu malti se sex karte hue apne pyaar ka ijhaar kare aur kahe ki jab se tumhe pehli baar dekha tha tab se mujhe tumse pyaar hai tab se mai tumhara deewana tha tumhare sapne dekha karta tha aur sochta tha tum kitni khubsurat ho to bina kapdo me kitni khubsoorat hogi aur aaj mera sapna pura ho gya tum sach me nangi bahut khubsoorat ho


5- ye sab bhanu ke muh se sun kar malti hairaan ho jaye ki bhanu itne din uske liye itna bhara baitha tha aur usse bole ki mujhe nhi malum tha aap mere bare me aisa sochte hai mai to apko bhai sahab bolti thi aur bhanu bole mai to apko jee bhar ke din raat pyar karna chahta tha chodna chahta tha nangi karna chahta tha tumhare pati kundan se jalan hoti thi ki usko tumhare jaisi bhare badan ki gadrai hui mast biwi mili hai kundan aapko itna pyaar nhi dega jitna mai de sakta hu


6- ye sab sun kar malti bhanu ko apne baho me lapet le aur fir next sex me saari sharm ko tyaag krke bhanu ka sath de besharmi ki had paar kar de जो usne kisi aur mard ke sath n kiya ho


7- maalti bhanu ka land chuse bhanu malti ki chut chuse ek dusre ka paseena chatate hue sex kare har position me khade khade ghodi bna kar aage se peeche se missionary doggy cowgirl koi position na chute kabhi kitchen bed sidhiya aur makaan ki छत aur kheto me bhi har jagah chudai ho


8- malti bhanu se pregnant wala idea bhi bahut mast rahega beech beech me chaho to satyam ya kisi aur gair mard ka malti ke sath thoda bahut scene daal denge to bhi chalega lekin story bhanu aur malti ko lekar hi chale kuch dino और update tak malti bhanu ke liye kitna khaas feel karti hai ye aap par depend karta hai lekin agar bhanu ko malti ke dil me special jagah mil jaye to monu aur kundan se uske takrav me mja aa jayega


Ye saare suggestoin mere hai mai koi story writer nhi hu aur nahi story likhne ke kaabil hu lekin ek regular reader hu mai sirf suggestion de sakta hu story nhi likh sakta

Baki story best hai mere favorite writers me se ek hai
Get well soon aur fir dhamakedaar waapsi kro bhai
 
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Dua karti hu ki Aap jaldi se sahi ho jaye toh aage k update jaldi jaldi aaye
Updated aya ya na aya
Aap aa gai
Or oh vi itna bada rasila kasa huya Mumma laka...
Is sa humara tabiyat to kharab ho gaya
Jo tha soya oh jag gaya
Aab aa nahi bahata ga
Bas aap ki dua manga ga
Isa sirf aya ga tabhi chan
Jab aap pak ro gi, iski jan
Karo gi is sa pyar
Banow gi mujha yar...


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Please rest karo Monu.

Maine yahaan kaafi kahaniya parhi hai. Sab utna interest leke nahi likhte jitna tum likhte ho. Tum sach mein apne pathako ka dhyan rakhte ho.

Aaj ke waqt mein kaam dhande aur niji zindagi ko chor doosro ke manoranjan ke liye kahani likh har har hafte update dena koi mazaak nahi...iske liye main tumhara abhaari hoon.

Paatro ke beech sambhog aur besharmi aur hawas ki bebasi tum bahut ache se dikha hi chuke ho. Par ab samay hai dar, chinta aur badle kaa. Monu acha sex karta hai par usne ye sab naya seekha hai aur Maalti ko utna sukh nahi de sakta jitna maalti chahti hai. Peechle update mein usne maalti ko nahi maalti ne usko choda. Mujhe lagta hai, abhi ke liye, Maalti ko chahiye koi aur daanvi mard jo us jaisi hasthani ko masal ke rakh de...uski chaal hafton ke liye bigad ke rakh de...usse sharmanak harqatein karwae aur mahapaapi bana de.

Mujhe pata hai...Tumhe roz kayi sujhav milte hai kahani mein twist dene ke liye. To kuch sujhav mera bhi hai. Inhe par ke agar tum kahani mein inka istemaal karoge to main tumhara abhaari rahunga 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽 :

1. Monu aur Anokhi ko 3 mahine ke liye agwah/kidnap karwa do aur chupa do Delhi mein Is baare mein detail baad mein kisi update mein dena ki gaye kahaan dono .Jabbar unhe kisi ke kehne pe torture kare aur apna gussa uspe nikaale. Kundan ko Maalti se pehle hi nafrat hai, use maalti se filhaal door rakho par usi se Monu ka uddhar karwao.

Udhar ghar pe Maalti akeli hogi...

2. Maalti ko Bhanu bataye ki Monu Savita aur Anokhi ko chodta hai aur gabhin kar chuka hai. Unke pet mein monu ka beej panap raha hai. Maalti ko is vishwatghaat se chot pahuche aur Monu uski nazron se gir jaaye. Wo pehle hi is dwand se guzar rahi hai ki maa hoke bete ke saath kaise so gayi. Is dhitkar aur grihna se use Monu ko avoid karne ka maula mile.

3. Bhanu is baat ka faida utha ke Maalti ko apne musal se hafte bhar, baari-baari chode. Hawas ki jalan aur monu ka vishwatghat Maalti ko Bhanu se pyar karwa de aur wo, Bhanu ko khush karne ke chakkar mein+ apni khud ki hawas mitane mein itni andhi ho jaaye ki besharmi ki har had paar kar jaaye..maalti ko monu ke peeth peeche bhanu ke saath bahut hi zyaada besharmi ke saath sex karwao aur isi lagatar chudai ke chalte - gabhin (pregnant) karwa do. Daal do bhanu ka beej uski kokh mein jise liye wo poore ghar mein akeli adhnangi rahe..

4. 3 Mahine Baad,.Kundan Monu ko bachaye - par Monu jab tak jaan bacha ke bhaage, aur ghar pahuche uski maa 3 mahina garbhwati hai aur uske stan aur bare, bhaari aur doodharu ho gaye hai. Monu maalti ko sach bataye. Maalti ko galti ka ehsaas ho, wo Monu se maafi maange, monu maa ke pyaar ke chalte use maaf kare aur dono milke Bhanu aur Jabbar se badla le, dusmano ko raaste se hatakar, apni poori zameeno ke malik ban jaaye.

Baaki pathako ka kya kehna hai is baare mein?

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Adbhut vichar

Sabse pehle toh main prathana karungi ki Monu ji aap jaldi se jaldi theek ho jaye, aur thoda aaram bhi kare

Aap mere liye Guru saman hai qki maine aapse hi likhna seekha hai

Aur ab samajh aata hai ki likhna bachon ka khel nahi

Aapke in mitr k sujhaav sach main bahut hi alag aur ache hai, aasha hai aap inmain se kuch jarur estimal karenge


Seeder4Breeder ji maine bhi apni kahani likhni suru ki hai, par abhi jada knowledge nahi hai

Kripya mera bhi marg darshan kare

Dhanyawaad 🙏
 

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Bhai aapne to mere muh ki baat chin li apka suggestion bahut hi mast hai bhanu bahut hi interesting charecter hai aur story me jab ek baar maalti aur bhanu conversation hua tha to wo conversation bahut hi hot chedkhani bhara naughty tha jise padh kar mai itna garm ho gya tha jitna malti ki kisi aur ki chudai se nhi hua tha haalanki malti ka satyam aur uske jeth ke sath scene bahut mast tha lekin last two month se main feel kar raha hu ki story monu aur malti par centred ho gyi hai jisse adultry story inchest me change ho gyi thi

Aisa nhi hai ki monu aur malti ke sex me mja nhi aya lekin jo mja ek gadrai mast aurat ke gair mard se chudai me hai wo mja uske bhai pati aur bete se nhi hai
Lekin fir bhi mai story writer ki tareef karunga wo kisi scene ko ache se present karte hai mja aa jata hai
mai writer ki story me koi interfere nhi chahta hu

Bas suggestion dena chahta hu ki

1- bhanu aur malti ka scene jab laye to usme direct chudai n ho pehle chedkhani wali conversation ho hasi majaak ho mauj masti emotional relationship bulid kro dono ke beech pehle


2- emotional relatoinship and bond banne ke baad bhanu dheere dheere malti ko seduce karna shuru kare.malti ko bhanu ki baate achi to lage lekin use bahut sharm aye aur apni grace ko turant na chore wo dheeme dheeme iski ओर khichti chali jaye bhanu malti ko touch kiye bina hi sirf baato se gili kar de jab bhanu ka pent me khada ho jaye to use malti se chupate hue adjust kre aur use adjust karte dekh malti ke chehre par muskaan aur hasi aye


3- fir bhanu aur malti ka dheere dheere physical chedkhani shuru karwao kamar par hath फेर kar aankh marna uske hath ko sehlana aur body ko touch karna jisse malti unconfortable bhi ho lekin acha bhi lage chahe in sabke liye bahut sare update lag jaye chahe do mahine lag jaye


4- aur jab dono ke beech sex ki shuruaat ho pehle sex me bhanu malti ko pura dominate kre aur malti apni grace sharm haya aur jhijhak ke sath bhanu ko ye sab karte hue roke lekin hawas ki jalan ki wajah se rok n paye malti bhanu ko sex karte samay bole ye sab galat hai hame ye nahi karna chahiye aur bhanu malti se sex karte hue apne pyaar ka ijhaar kare aur kahe ki jab se tumhe pehli baar dekha tha tab se mujhe tumse pyaar hai tab se mai tumhara deewana tha tumhare sapne dekha karta tha aur sochta tha tum kitni khubsurat ho to bina kapdo me kitni khubsoorat hogi aur aaj mera sapna pura ho gya tum sach me nangi bahut khubsoorat ho


5- ye sab bhanu ke muh se sun kar malti hairaan ho jaye ki bhanu itne din uske liye itna bhara baitha tha aur usse bole ki mujhe nhi malum tha aap mere bare me aisa sochte hai mai to apko bhai sahab bolti thi aur bhanu bole mai to apko jee bhar ke din raat pyar karna chahta tha chodna chahta tha nangi karna chahta tha tumhare pati kundan se jalan hoti thi ki usko tumhare jaisi bhare badan ki gadrai hui mast biwi mili hai kundan aapko itna pyaar nhi dega jitna mai de sakta hu


6- ye sab sun kar malti bhanu ko apne baho me lapet le aur fir next sex me saari sharm ko tyaag krke bhanu ka sath de besharmi ki had paar kar de जो usne kisi aur mard ke sath n kiya ho


7- maalti bhanu ka land chuse bhanu malti ki chut chuse ek dusre ka paseena chatate hue sex kare har position me khade khade ghodi bna kar aage se peeche se missionary doggy cowgirl koi position na chute kabhi kitchen bed sidhiya aur makaan ki छत aur kheto me bhi har jagah chudai ho


8- malti bhanu se pregnant wala idea bhi bahut mast rahega beech beech me chaho to satyam ya kisi aur gair mard ka malti ke sath thoda bahut scene daal denge to bhi chalega lekin story bhanu aur malti ko lekar hi chale kuch dino और update tak malti bhanu ke liye kitna khaas feel karti hai ye aap par depend karta hai lekin agar bhanu ko malti ke dil me special jagah mil jaye to monu aur kundan se uske takrav me mja aa jayega


Ye saare suggestoin mere hai mai koi story writer nhi hu aur nahi story likhne ke kaabil hu lekin ek regular reader hu mai sirf suggestion de sakta hu story nhi likh sakta

Baki story best hai mere favorite writers me se ek hai
Get well soon aur fir dhamakedaar waapsi kro bhai
Idea bahut hi garam karne wala aur khubsurat hai aapke ❤️
 

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Mujhe Viral ho gaya hai, esliye kuch likh nahi paaya hu

Sorry for this

Agle update main thoda samay lagega
Bhai sahab...
Tabyat kasi ha...
Viral ki gand fad do..
Land ko khada kar do..
Viral ko to tum,
Jarur do ga pel.
Viral jhel nahi paya ga,
Tumhara lund ka khel,
Lagaw jor ka dhakka..
Viral ho jaya ga hakka bakka..
Jis Monu na, Maalti, Savita, Anokhi
Ko jhad ba ya..
Usa Viral kasa jhel paya ..
Viral jaldi jarur vaga ga..
Monu Bhai jo uska picha..
Lauda utha ka dauda ga...

Get Well Soon, Monu Bhai...

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Bhai sahab...
Tabyat kasi ha...
Viral ki gand fad do..
Land ko khada kar do..
Viral ko to tum,
Jarur do ga pel.
Viral jhel nahi paya ga,
Tumhara lund ka khel,
Lagaw jor ka dhakka..
Viral ho jaya ga hakka bakka..
Jis Monu na, Maalti, Savita, Anokhi
Ko jhad ba ya..
Usa Viral kasa jhel paya ..
Viral jaldi jarur vaga ga..
Monu Bhai jo uska picha..
Lauda utha ka dauda ga...

Get Well Soon, Monu Bhai...

❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍
Thank U Danny Bhai for Amazing Love
Aapke Sabdo se mujhe bahut acha laga

Aapka dil se Thank You ❤️

Actually Test main Dengu nikal aaya tha, par ab recover kar raha hu

I hope 1 weak k andar update aane suru ho jayenge

Aap sabhi k Support or Prem k liye Dil se Dhanyawad 🙏 🙏
 
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Welcome Bhai Coolraj839

Actually Test main Dengu nikal aaya tha, par ab recover kar raha hu

I hope 1 weak k andar update aane suru ho jayenge

Aap sabhi k Support or Prem k liye Dil se Dhanyawad 🙏 🙏
 
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