Title "Maa Ka Saath Diya Behan Ke Liye"
To abtak kahani title ke hisab se hi chal rahi hai lekin scene aur character filler bahot add kiye huye hai,
Title ke hisab se 1st phase me Behan ki totlepan ko door karne ke liye Maa ke saath sex kiya bete ne, jo ki abtak ka hottest phase chala tha story me aur kahani bahoot hi badhiya gayi, suru-suru me dhongi wala character irritate kar raha tha kyunki INCEST category me agar koi kisi family member ke baare me galat soche tab wo galat lagta hai ek hadd tak to laga tha Kahani Adultery jaane wali hai par aisa hua nahi, writer ka sex scene likhne ke tareeka gand-faad tha, aur wo dhongi ka character bahoot jagah scene-filler ka kaam kiya tha(aisa mujhe laga), ek cheej aur aachi nahi lagi Kahani me sex scene ke beech me Hero ka name bahot baar change hua hai idk why
Ab 2nd phase me Behan ke shadi ke liye Bete ne phir se maa ka saath diya "Par Kaise?" Wo abhi tak clear nahi hua hai kyuki 2nd phase abhi bhi chalu hi hai, is 2nd phase me me bahot se character aise the jo scene-fillers ka kaam kiye hai, baap ka character ab pata nahi kyu par aacha nahi lag raha hai, Hero try kar raha hai baap ko saath me rakhne ka par jabardasti ka lag raha hai, Behan ka character fade hota dikh raha hai(maybe aage behan ka scene aye par abhi tak aisa laga), Aur sabse khass character Maa bhi gayab hoti dikh rahi hai kahani ke beech me atleast 1-2 seductive incounter to hona chahiye tha, pata nahi par mujhe ye aacha nahi laga, Chacha ka character sahi laga aur ek baat aur aachi lagi is phase 2 ka story phase 1 se hi suru ho gaya tha jahan Hero ka aur wo hotel me CCTV camera wala scene ho raha tha, us waqt to wo aacha nahi lag raha tha par ab kahani par wo scenes aache se baith raha hai..
Overall kahani me bahot hi badhiya hai, chhote mote errors to sab kahani me hote hai, abhi shayad update late se arahe hai isiliye mujhe page change karte karte 5hr beet gaye, khair mast story hai especially sex scenes, aur upar diye gaye review puri tarah se meri man se socha gaya hai kripya kar demotivate hokar update dena band na kardein, sukriya
Intejar rahe agle update ka