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Dosto, Maaf karna Main apne personal life me thoda busy chal raha tha wese busy toh filhal bhi hoon lekin jese hi mujhe time Mila main aap logo ko Good news Dene aa gaya hoon. Update jlad hi wapas shuru jaenge. Probably from end of November.

Kahani me mere sath Bane rehne ke liye shukriya. Main wada karta hoon kahani complete hogi aur ho sakta hai future fir se break Lena pade lekin yakin rakhiye kahani adhuri nahi rahegi.

Thanks for your love and patience.❤️
 
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Kuch hi dino me, Mumbai ki tez zindagi meri aadat ban gayi thi. Subah college jaata, din ke waqt Mausaji ke hospital aur unki factories me unke sath kaam karta,

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jo mere liye personal teaching jaisa tha, aur shaam ko gym jaata

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— bas yehi mera naya routine tha. Dheere dheere waqt beetne laga, aur mera MBBS course chal raha tha. Mumbai mujhe andar se badal rahi thi—main us nasamajh ladke se ek samajhdar, mature aadmi ban raha tha. Is naye sheher ne mujhe ek sakhti de di thi jo pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi.

In dino me, main kabhi Pune wapas nahi gaya. Ghar se kabhi kabar calls aate, lekin main sirf papa aur apni behno se thodi bahut baat karta lekin Maa se koi baat nahi hoti thi, na main chahta tha. Kabhi kabhi unhone koshish ki phone lekar mujhse baat karne ki, lekin main ya to koi bahaana banakar phone kaat deta, ya phir bas "haan" ya "hmm" keh kar baat khatam kar deta.

Sach yeh tha ki main ab kaafi badal chuka tha, lekin jo ek cheez kabhi nahi badli thi, wo tha Maa ke liye mera sachcha pyaar. Main jo kuch kar raha tha, uske peeche sirf ek hi wajah thi— meri Maa meri Radha. Har pal, har mehnat, sab kuch sirf unhe apna banane ke liye tha, aur apne aap ko unke layak banane ke liye.

Main us dard aur doori ko apni taqat bana raha tha, aur Mumbai ki har choti-badi cheez ko apne sapne ke nazariye se dekh raha tha.

Waqt apni raftaar se aage badhta raha, aur main apne MBBS ke teesre saal me aa gaya. Ek shaam — Mausaji, Mausi, aur main — unke ghar ke hall me baithe the.


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Mausaji aur main roz ki tarah kaam ki baatein kar rahe the aur mausi humari baate bas chup chap sun rahi thi, jab achanak Rahul wahan aaya aur ek khushkhabri sunai.

Rahul ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Mom, Dad... mera selection Cambridge University me ho gaya hai.”

Mausaji ki aankhein chamak uthi,
“Kya? Sacchi? That’s amazing, beta!”

Mausi apne haath jodte hue boli, “Bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukr hai! Mere bete ki mehnat rang laayi.”

Main bhi Rahul ko gale lagate hue bola, “Mubarak ho, Rahul Bhaiya! Aapki mehnat ne safal hui.”

Rahul apni khushi chhupa nahi pa raha tha, “Shukriya sabko, main aaj bahut khush hoon.”

Mausaji ne phir kaha, “Aise kaam nahi chalega! Is khushi me hum ek badi party rakhenge.”

Maine Rahul se poocha,
“Rahul Bhaiya, kitna waqt hai aapke paas U.K. jaane se pehle?”

Rahul thoda sa muskuraya aur hath ke ishare se plan banate hue kaha,
“Sirf 2 hafte, phir main sidha England.”

Mausi thodi hairaan hui,
“Sirf 2 hafte…?”

Rahul ne apne andaaz me kaha,
“Haan mom, aur Dad, main soch raha hoon ki kyun na hum koi party na dein, balki is dauran sab milkar ek trip par chalein. Mere liye bhi yaadein ban jaayengi.”

Rahul ki yeh baat sunkar sab ke chehre par ek nayi muskan thi.

Mausaji ne turant Rahul ki baat maan li aur khushi se bole,
"Theek hai, beta... Batao kahan chalna hai."

Rahul ne thoda soch kar jawab diya,

"Malaysia chaltein hain, Dad."

Mausaji ne agree karte hue kaha,
"Wah, badhiya choice hai! Main abhi 4 tickets book karta hoon."

Yeh sunte hi maine thoda ghabraate hue kaha,
"Are, Mausaji, aap meri ticket kyun book kar rahe hain?"

Tabhi Mausi ne kaha,
"Kyun, Raaj beta? Tu bhi toh chalega na?"

Maine thoda hichkichaate hue kaha,
"Mausi, main kya karunga wahan? Aap logon ko pareshani hogi."

Mausi ne meri taraf dekha aur thodi narazgi se boli,
"Matlab tu ne sabit kar diya ki tu mujhe paraaya samajhta hai? Kya main teri maa jaisi nahi hoon, jo apne hi bache ko pareshani mehsoos karoon?"

Main kuch kehne hi wala tha,
"Lekin, Maus..."

Tabhi Mausaji ne beech me rok diya,
"Koi 'par-war' nahi. Main ticket book kar raha hoon, aur tum chal rahe ho. And that's final."

Usi waqt, Mausi ne ek aur raaye di,
"Suniye ji, main kya soch rahi hoon... Kyun na meri behan Radha aur Raaj ke Papa aur iski behno ko bhi saath le chalein? Raaj ko unse mile kitna waqt ho gaya hai. Agar poora pariwaar ek saath hoga, toh kitna maza aayega!"

Mausaji hanste hue bola,
"Wah, badhiya soch hai, patni ji! Aap din-ba-din aur samajhdar hoti ja rahi hain."

Mausi bhi haste hue boli,
"Aakhri patni kiski hoon."

Maa ka naam sunte hi mere dil dhak se room sa gaya... Ab Maa bhi wahan trip par mere saath hogi. Main sochne laga, wo mujhe dekh kar kaise react karegi? Maine itne dino se na unhe dekha hai, na baat ki hai.

Lekin in sab cheezon se zyada, ek sawaal mere zehan me aaya: Kya main unhe dekh kar apne dil ke jazbaat kabu kar paunga?


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Kya hoga jab main us khubsurat chehre ko fir se apni ankhon ke samne dekhunga jisse mujhe ishq hua hai. Aur Sab kuch jo main ab tak kar raha hoon, Maa ke liye hi toh kar raha hoon. Ab main beech me tutna nahi chahta.

Dosto mujhe ganuine comments and feedback chahiye. Agar aap log sach meri story padh rahe hai toh apne sachhe khayal batao. Warna main samjhunga ki logo ko is kahani me interest nahi hai aur main ise band kar dunga.
 
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Agar aap ko kahani baand karani hai to that's ok koi baat nahi hai kyuki aap lik rahe ho aur koi feedback yaa comment nahee kaar Raha hai to ye baat swabhavik hai kee aap ko pata kese chalega kee kahani achi hai yaa buri hai mene mukya kahani padhi hai lagbhag kuch 52 page taak but baad me connect Tut Gaya aur fir aage nahee padh paaya ab aap ke kahani pe aata hu .
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1) Aap ne Raaj me jo parivartan laaye hai ye ek dukhi paar strong determination Wale and fighting spirit Wale yodha jese hai
2) aap ne kahee pe bhee abhi taak kahani ko loos nahee Kiya changes dikhe hai kahani me trip malaysia ye naya hai kahani me
3) purane kahani me ek hisaab se Raj ka accident karvata hai aur fir Radha usake pyar ko samaj jaati hai ye topical cliche type hai I hope aap usame bhee changes layenge


Agar aap continue karenge to wait rahega agali update kaa
 

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Kuch hi dino me, Mumbai ki tez zindagi meri aadat ban gayi thi. Subah college jaata, din ke waqt Mausaji ke hospital aur unki factories me unke sath kaam karta,

IMG-20241023-000845

jo mere liye personal teaching jaisa tha, aur shaam ko gym jaata

8989-gif-wh300

— bas yehi mera naya routine tha. Dheere dheere waqt beetne laga, aur mera MBBS course chal raha tha. Mumbai mujhe andar se badal rahi thi—main us nasamajh ladke se ek samajhdar, mature aadmi ban raha tha. Is naye sheher ne mujhe ek sakhti de di thi jo pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi.

In dino me, main kabhi Pune wapas nahi gaya. Ghar se kabhi kabar calls aate, lekin main sirf papa aur apni behno se thodi bahut baat karta lekin Maa se koi baat nahi hoti thi, na main chahta tha. Kabhi kabhi unhone koshish ki phone lekar mujhse baat karne ki, lekin main ya to koi bahaana banakar phone kaat deta, ya phir bas "haan" ya "hmm" keh kar baat khatam kar deta.

Sach yeh tha ki main ab kaafi badal chuka tha, lekin jo ek cheez kabhi nahi badli thi, wo tha Maa ke liye mera sachcha pyaar. Main jo kuch kar raha tha, uske peeche sirf ek hi wajah thi— meri Maa meri Radha. Har pal, har mehnat, sab kuch sirf unhe apna banane ke liye tha, aur apne aap ko unke layak banane ke liye.

Main us dard aur doori ko apni taqat bana raha tha, aur Mumbai ki har choti-badi cheez ko apne sapne ke nazariye se dekh raha tha.

Waqt apni raftaar se aage badhta raha, aur main apne MBBS ke teesre saal me aa gaya. Ek shaam — Mausaji, Mausi, aur main — unke ghar ke hall me baithe the.


Picsart-24-10-23-00-40-55-308

Mausaji aur main roz ki tarah kaam ki baatein kar rahe the aur mausi humari baate bas chup chap sun rahi thi, jab achanak Rahul wahan aaya aur ek khushkhabri sunai.

Rahul ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Mom, Dad... mera selection Cambridge University me ho gaya hai.”

Mausaji ki aankhein chamak uthi,
“Kya? Sacchi? That’s amazing, beta!”

Mausi apne haath jodte hue boli, “Bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukr hai! Mere bete ki mehnat rang laayi.”

Main bhi Rahul ko gale lagate hue bola, “Mubarak ho, Rahul Bhaiya! Aapki mehnat ne safal hui.”

Rahul apni khushi chhupa nahi pa raha tha, “Shukriya sabko, main aaj bahut khush hoon.”

Mausaji ne phir kaha, “Aise kaam nahi chalega! Is khushi me hum ek badi party rakhenge.”

Maine Rahul se poocha,
“Rahul Bhaiya, kitna waqt hai aapke paas U.K. jaane se pehle?”

Rahul thoda sa muskuraya aur hath ke ishare se plan banate hue kaha,
“Sirf 2 hafte, phir main sidha England.”

Mausi thodi hairaan hui,
“Sirf 2 hafte…?”

Rahul ne apne andaaz me kaha,
“Haan mom, aur Dad, main soch raha hoon ki kyun na hum koi party na dein, balki is dauran sab milkar ek trip par chalein. Mere liye bhi yaadein ban jaayengi.”

Rahul ki yeh baat sunkar sab ke chehre par ek nayi muskan thi.

Mausaji ne turant Rahul ki baat maan li aur khushi se bole,
"Theek hai, beta... Batao kahan chalna hai."

Rahul ne thoda soch kar jawab diya,

"Malaysia chaltein hain, Dad."

Mausaji ne agree karte hue kaha,
"Wah, badhiya choice hai! Main abhi 4 tickets book karta hoon."

Yeh sunte hi maine thoda ghabraate hue kaha,
"Are, Mausaji, aap meri ticket kyun book kar rahe hain?"

Tabhi Mausi ne kaha,
"Kyun, Raaj beta? Tu bhi toh chalega na?"

Maine thoda hichkichaate hue kaha,
"Mausi, main kya karunga wahan? Aap logon ko pareshani hogi."

Mausi ne meri taraf dekha aur thodi narazgi se boli,
"Matlab tu ne sabit kar diya ki tu mujhe paraaya samajhta hai? Kya main teri maa jaisi nahi hoon, jo apne hi bache ko pareshani mehsoos karoon?"

Main kuch kehne hi wala tha,
"Lekin, Maus..."

Tabhi Mausaji ne beech me rok diya,
"Koi 'par-war' nahi. Main ticket book kar raha hoon, aur tum chal rahe ho. And that's final."

Usi waqt, Mausi ne ek aur raaye di,
"Suniye ji, main kya soch rahi hoon... Kyun na meri behan Radha aur Raaj ke Papa aur iski behno ko bhi saath le chalein? Raaj ko unse mile kitna waqt ho gaya hai. Agar poora pariwaar ek saath hoga, toh kitna maza aayega!"

Mausaji hanste hue bola,
"Wah, badhiya soch hai, patni ji! Aap din-ba-din aur samajhdar hoti ja rahi hain."

Mausi bhi haste hue boli,
"Aakhri patni kiski hoon."

Maa ka naam sunte hi mere dil dhak se room sa gaya... Ab Maa bhi wahan trip par mere saath hogi. Main sochne laga, wo mujhe dekh kar kaise react karegi? Maine itne dino se na unhe dekha hai, na baat ki hai.

Lekin in sab cheezon se zyada, ek sawaal mere zehan me aaya: Kya main unhe dekh kar apne dil ke jazbaat kabu kar paunga?


images-9

Kya hoga jab main us khubsurat chehre ko fir se apni ankhon ke samne dekhunga jisse mujhe ishq hua hai. Aur Sab kuch jo main ab tak kar raha hoon, Maa ke liye hi toh kar raha hoon. Ab main beech me tutna nahi chahta.

Dosto mujhe ganuine comments and feedback chahiye. Agar aap log sach meri story padh rahe hai toh apne sachhe khayal batao. Warna main samjhunga ki logo ko is kahani me interest nahi hai aur main ise band kar dunga.
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