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Ok Bhai aap apne kaam par focus Karo aur intjar rahega updates kaI am out of town on official work. Sorry for the delay in update. But please don't loose hope 2 updates will come before the end of this week.
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Update 8
Aditya aur Aditi mall akar thoda ghumne lagte hai Aditi ne Aditya ka hath bohot kas ke pakda hua tha.
shuruwat me toh wo samne bhi nahi dekh paa rahi thi sirf sar jhookae chal Rahi thi Aditya bhi apni Maa ki nervousness samajh raha tha. thodi der Bad Aditi ko confidence aane lagta hai aur wo Sar utha kar chalne ki koshish karne lagti hai. Aditya ye dekh kar khush hota hai aur Wo apni maa ko ek jewellery shop par le jata hai. Lekin Aditi use Mana karne lagti hai
Aditi ~ Aditya iski Kya zarurat hai ?
Aditya ~ ye meri taraf se pehla tofa hai Aapke ke liye.
Aditi ~ par..
Aditya ~ koi par nahi .. Aap ye le Rahi hai bas ( ye bol kar wo smile karne lagta hai)
Apne bete ki zid ke aage Aditi bhi hathiyar daal deti hai aur Aditiya ke Gift ke liye Haa kar deti hai. Shop me pohoch kar Aditya Apni Maa ke liye earrings pasand kar leta hai.
Aditya ~( chehre par smile ke sath)ye aap par bohot achhi lagegi, apki sundarta se Match ho rahi hai.
Aditi ~ ( sirf Sharma ke reh jati hai )
earings kharid kar dono bahar aa jate hai Aditi ko abhi bhi Bahut Nervousness feel ho rahi thi. Fir wo kuch shops par Jate hai Aditi abhi bhi Aditya ka haath pakad ke ghum rahi thi, Aditi ko aandar ese haath pakad ke ghumne me ajib to lag raha thaa lakin use ek taraf se assurance bhi feel ho rahi thi ki koi uske saath hai jiske sath wo apne aap ko safe mehsoos kar sakti hai. wo Aditya ka haath chhodna nahi chah rahi thi. Aditya apne liye kuch kapde leta hai fir wo Aditi ko ek boutique le jata hai.
Sales girl ~ Welcome Sir , Welcome Ma'am. glad you came in! looking for something specific?
Aditya ~ Hi, thanks for having us! Actually, we were hoping to find something beautiful for her. Do you have a great selection of dresses?
Sales girl ~ absolutely sir, we have some fantastic selections. What kind of style you are going for.
Aditya ~ ( Apni Maa se) konse style ke Kapde pehna chahogi aap.
Aditi ~ ( Jo ab tak Ghabrai hui thi aur kuch nahi bol Rahi thi achanak is sawal se chok jati hai) haa.. main, Main Wo Adtiya..
Adtiya ~ haa boliye na.
Aditi ~ Mene toh Aaj Tak sirf Sadiya hi pehni hai.
Sales ~ Don't worry ma'am, we also have a stunning collection of sarees. Would you like to see them?
Aditi kuch bol nahi pati toh Aditya khud hi jawab deta hai.
Adtiya ~ yes definitely.
Salesgirl dono ko kafi Sundar sadiyan dikhati hai jo sabhi ek se badhkar ek thi kuch der bad Aditya ko ek saree kafi achhi lagti hai toh wo use select kar leta hai aur Aditi se pehan kar Check kar lene ko kehta hai Aditi sirf Haan me sar hila kar change karne chali jaati hai. Jab tak Aditi changing room me thi Aditya ki Nazar ek Western dress par jaati hai jo use kaafi Sundar lag rahi thi par bohot chhoti bhi thi Aditya ko pata nahi kya sujhhta hai aur wo salesgirl se us dress ko pack kar Dene ko kehta hai.
Kuch der bad Aditi change karke aati hai.
Aditi ki sundarta esi thi ki normal saree bhi us par khilati thi par abhi jo saree usne pehni thi wo bani hi Aditi ki jesi khubsurat aurato ke liye thi jisme Aditi ka Roop aur jyada Lubhawana lag raha tha.
Aditya jo pehle hi Apni Maa ki Abha me Hosh gawa chuka tha apni Nigaho se Aditi ko bas take jaa raha tha uski aankho me Aditi ke liye ek ajib sa bhav tha. Pyar toh har beta apni Maa se karta hai par jo feelings Aditya ke man me hai wo us Sadharan Pyar se kahi jyada hai.
Apne bete ko khudki aur yun taktaki lagaye dekhta paa kar Aditi ko Sharm mehsus hoti hai. Tabhi
Salesgirl ~ ( jo ek ladki hone ke bawajood Aditi ki sundarta se Mohit ho gayi thi) Wow Ma'am, this saree looks stunning on you! It really complements your breathtaking beauty.
Aditi ~ (Aditya ko kuch bolta na dekh) Aditya, kya tumhe achhi nahi lagi?
Aditya ~ ( Apne aap ko sambhalte hue) Alfaz dhund raha hoon... Lekin apki Khubsurti ke samne sab fike lag rahe hai.
Aditi bohot jyada Sharma jati hai aur apni nazre niche kar leti hai. usi samay Aditya ka phone ring hota hai aur wo call attend karne ke liye thoda dur chala jata hai.
sales girl ~ (Aditi se) Ma'am this saree looks absolutely exquisite on you! And can I just say, you two seem like such a fantastic couple.
(Aditi chonk Jati hai ki ye Ladki Aditya aur Aditi ko couple samjh Rahi hai)
Sales girl ~ (apni baat puri karte hue) He must have amazing taste to pick out such a stunning outfit for you, and it's clear you two have something truly special. To be honest I am feeling very jealous, I wish I too get a life partner like your husband.
Aditi ka Dimag Kaam karna band kar deta hai use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki wo ab kya bole Aur bole bhi toh kese usme itni himmat hi nahi thi. Sath hi sath yadi ab usne kuch bola toh kahi ye use aur Aditya ko galat na samjhe ye soch kar wo chup rehti hai.
Thodi der bad Aditya wapas Ata hai aur us saaree aur alag se li Hui us dress ko pack karne ko bolta hai lekin wo us dress ke bare me Aditi ko nahi batata. Aditi bhi kuch der pehle hui misunderstanding ke karan aur jyada Nervous ho gayi thi. Kuch der bad Aditi se raha nahi jata aur wo Aditya se kehti hai.
Aditi ~ Bs Aditya ab mujhse Nahi ho raha hai itne logo ke bich.. Hum Ghar chalte hai.
Aditya ~ lekin hume aaye jyada samay kaha hua hai..
Aditi ~ Aditya mujhe itne anjan logo ke bich rehne ki Adat nahi hai. please samjho.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya apni Maa ki Baat samajh nahi pata lekin fir bhi wo use force nahi karna chahta tha) thik hum kisi ekant jagah par chalte hai.
parking lot par Akar Aditya aur Aditi mall se nikal Jate hai Aditya soch hi Raha tha ki Wo ab kaha chale tabhi use kuch yaad Ata hai aur wo Car ko Ghar ki aur Mod leta hai. Aditi ko lagta hai ki wo log Ghar Jaa rahe hai isiliye wo Apne man ko shant karne lagti hai. Ghar ke karib pahuchne se pehle hi Aditya apni Car ko Dusre turn par mod leta hai aur Drive karne lagta hai. Aditi ko samajh nahi Aata lekin wo kuch bolti nahi hai kuch der drive karne ke Bad Aditya apni Car ko ek Pahadi Raste par le jata hai.
Rasta kacha hone ke karan Car me kuch Jhatke bhi lag rahe the Aditya apni Maa ko Car ka Grab-handle Kas kar pakad lene ke liye kehta hai. Kuch der tak drive karne ke bad Aditya Car rok deta hai aur Car se Bahar Aa kar dusri taraf Jake apni Maa ke liye Darwaza kholta hai.
Aditi Bahar Akar puchhti hai ki wo log Kaha aaye hai toh Aditya sirf uske sath chalne ke liye kehta hai. Aditi chup chap Aditya ka pichhe pichhe chalne lagti hai thodi hi der me wo log ek Ghane Jangle me pahuch jate hai Kuch der chal kar Aditi ko girte hue Jharne ki awaz aane lagti hai Aditya apni Maa ka hath Tham kar use ek Bahut hi Sundar Garden me le Aata hai.
jo Dekhne par Jannat se Kam nahi tha Charo taraf hariyali aur Alag alag tarah ke Ped podhe us jagah ko extremely ferdousi bana rahe the. Halaki dekh kar ye bhi pata lag raha tha ki kafi samay se yahan ki dekh rekh nahi ki gayi hai. Aditi is nazare ko Mohit ho kar dekhti reh jati hai lekin fir kuch samay bad apne sawalo ko na rok pane ke karan Aditya se puchhti hai.
Aditi ~ ye... Ye konsi Jagah hai Beta ?
Aditya ~ (muskurate hue) guess Karo.
Aditi ~ ( kuch samajh na ane ke karan) Batao Na Aditya. ye Hum Kahan aaye hain?
Aditya ~ Maa ye sab Hamara hai.
Aditi ~ (confusion me ) Kya? Ye hamara hai. par..
Aditya ~ Maa ye Hamari hi property ki Backside hai. Hamari Pushteni Zamin jo Papa ko mili hai wo lagbhag 500-600 acre ke area me feli hai ye sab usi me Ata hai. Papa ne Business ke Alawa kisi chiz par dhyan hi nahi Diya isiliye iski dekh rekh ab nahi hoti lekin ye sab hamara hi hai. Aur ye hi nahi Iske alwa bhi bohot hai lekin Aap ghar se Bahar hi nahi Jati toh apko Pata nahi hoga.
Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha ki hamari property bohot badi hai lekin yaha tak dekhne ka moka nahi mila.
Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.
Aditi ~ Haan lekin tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai tum yahan Aaya hue ho.
Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se Ghar chhoda tha...
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Aditya aur Aditi mall akar thoda ghumne lagte hai Aditi ne Aditya ka hath bohot kas ke pakda hua tha.
shuruwat me toh wo samne bhi nahi dekh paa rahi thi sirf sar jhookae chal Rahi thi Aditya bhi apni Maa ki nervousness samajh raha tha. thodi der Bad Aditi ko confidence aane lagta hai aur wo Sar utha kar chalne ki koshish karne lagti hai. Aditya ye dekh kar khush hota hai aur Wo apni maa ko ek jewellery shop par le jata hai. Lekin Aditi use Mana karne lagti hai
Aditi ~ Aditya iski Kya zarurat hai ?
Aditya ~ ye meri taraf se pehla tofa hai Aapke ke liye.
Aditi ~ par..
Aditya ~ koi par nahi .. Aap ye le Rahi hai bas ( ye bol kar wo smile karne lagta hai)
Apne bete ki zid ke aage Aditi bhi hathiyar daal deti hai aur Aditiya ke Gift ke liye Haa kar deti hai. Shop me pohoch kar Aditya Apni Maa ke liye earrings pasand kar leta hai.
Aditya ~( chehre par smile ke sath)ye aap par bohot achhi lagegi, apki sundarta se Match ho rahi hai.
Aditi ~ ( sirf Sharma ke reh jati hai )
earings kharid kar dono bahar aa jate hai Aditi ko abhi bhi Bahut Nervousness feel ho rahi thi. Fir wo kuch shops par Jate hai Aditi abhi bhi Aditya ka haath pakad ke ghum rahi thi, Aditi ko aandar ese haath pakad ke ghumne me ajib to lag raha thaa lakin use ek taraf se assurance bhi feel ho rahi thi ki koi uske saath hai jiske sath wo apne aap ko safe mehsoos kar sakti hai. wo Aditya ka haath chhodna nahi chah rahi thi. Aditya apne liye kuch kapde leta hai fir wo Aditi ko ek boutique le jata hai.
Sales girl ~ Welcome Sir , Welcome Ma'am. glad you came in! looking for something specific?
Aditya ~ Hi, thanks for having us! Actually, we were hoping to find something beautiful for her. Do you have a great selection of dresses?
Sales girl ~ absolutely sir, we have some fantastic selections. What kind of style you are going for.
Aditya ~ ( Apni Maa se) konse style ke Kapde pehna chahogi aap.
Aditi ~ ( Jo ab tak Ghabrai hui thi aur kuch nahi bol Rahi thi achanak is sawal se chok jati hai) haa.. main, Main Wo Adtiya..
Adtiya ~ haa boliye na.
Aditi ~ Mene toh Aaj Tak sirf Sadiya hi pehni hai.
Sales ~ Don't worry ma'am, we also have a stunning collection of sarees. Would you like to see them?
Aditi kuch bol nahi pati toh Aditya khud hi jawab deta hai.
Adtiya ~ yes definitely.
Salesgirl dono ko kafi Sundar sadiyan dikhati hai jo sabhi ek se badhkar ek thi kuch der bad Aditya ko ek saree kafi achhi lagti hai toh wo use select kar leta hai aur Aditi se pehan kar Check kar lene ko kehta hai Aditi sirf Haan me sar hila kar change karne chali jaati hai. Jab tak Aditi changing room me thi Aditya ki Nazar ek Western dress par jaati hai jo use kaafi Sundar lag rahi thi par bohot chhoti bhi thi Aditya ko pata nahi kya sujhhta hai aur wo salesgirl se us dress ko pack kar Dene ko kehta hai.
Kuch der bad Aditi change karke aati hai.
Aditi ki sundarta esi thi ki normal saree bhi us par khilati thi par abhi jo saree usne pehni thi wo bani hi Aditi ki jesi khubsurat aurato ke liye thi jisme Aditi ka Roop aur jyada Lubhawana lag raha tha.
Aditya jo pehle hi Apni Maa ki Abha me Hosh gawa chuka tha apni Nigaho se Aditi ko bas take jaa raha tha uski aankho me Aditi ke liye ek ajib sa bhav tha. Pyar toh har beta apni Maa se karta hai par jo feelings Aditya ke man me hai wo us Sadharan Pyar se kahi jyada hai.
Apne bete ko khudki aur yun taktaki lagaye dekhta paa kar Aditi ko Sharm mehsus hoti hai. Tabhi
Salesgirl ~ ( jo ek ladki hone ke bawajood Aditi ki sundarta se Mohit ho gayi thi) Wow Ma'am, this saree looks stunning on you! It really complements your breathtaking beauty.
Aditi ~ (Aditya ko kuch bolta na dekh) Aditya, kya tumhe achhi nahi lagi?
Aditya ~ ( Apne aap ko sambhalte hue) Alfaz dhund raha hoon... Lekin apki Khubsurti ke samne sab fike lag rahe hai.
Aditi bohot jyada Sharma jati hai aur apni nazre niche kar leti hai. usi samay Aditya ka phone ring hota hai aur wo call attend karne ke liye thoda dur chala jata hai.
sales girl ~ (Aditi se) Ma'am this saree looks absolutely exquisite on you! And can I just say, you two seem like such a fantastic couple.
(Aditi chonk Jati hai ki ye Ladki Aditya aur Aditi ko couple samjh Rahi hai)
Sales girl ~ (apni baat puri karte hue) He must have amazing taste to pick out such a stunning outfit for you, and it's clear you two have something truly special. To be honest I am feeling very jealous, I wish I too get a life partner like your husband.
Aditi ka Dimag Kaam karna band kar deta hai use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki wo ab kya bole Aur bole bhi toh kese usme itni himmat hi nahi thi. Sath hi sath yadi ab usne kuch bola toh kahi ye use aur Aditya ko galat na samjhe ye soch kar wo chup rehti hai.
Thodi der bad Aditya wapas Ata hai aur us saaree aur alag se li Hui us dress ko pack karne ko bolta hai lekin wo us dress ke bare me Aditi ko nahi batata. Aditi bhi kuch der pehle hui misunderstanding ke karan aur jyada Nervous ho gayi thi. Kuch der bad Aditi se raha nahi jata aur wo Aditya se kehti hai.
Aditi ~ Bs Aditya ab mujhse Nahi ho raha hai itne logo ke bich.. Hum Ghar chalte hai.
Aditya ~ lekin hume aaye jyada samay kaha hua hai..
Aditi ~ Aditya mujhe itne anjan logo ke bich rehne ki Adat nahi hai. please samjho.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya apni Maa ki Baat samajh nahi pata lekin fir bhi wo use force nahi karna chahta tha) thik hum kisi ekant jagah par chalte hai.
parking lot par Akar Aditya aur Aditi mall se nikal Jate hai Aditya soch hi Raha tha ki Wo ab kaha chale tabhi use kuch yaad Ata hai aur wo Car ko Ghar ki aur Mod leta hai. Aditi ko lagta hai ki wo log Ghar Jaa rahe hai isiliye wo Apne man ko shant karne lagti hai. Ghar ke karib pahuchne se pehle hi Aditya apni Car ko Dusre turn par mod leta hai aur Drive karne lagta hai. Aditi ko samajh nahi Aata lekin wo kuch bolti nahi hai kuch der drive karne ke Bad Aditya apni Car ko ek Pahadi Raste par le jata hai.
Rasta kacha hone ke karan Car me kuch Jhatke bhi lag rahe the Aditya apni Maa ko Car ka Grab-handle Kas kar pakad lene ke liye kehta hai. Kuch der tak drive karne ke bad Aditya Car rok deta hai aur Car se Bahar Aa kar dusri taraf Jake apni Maa ke liye Darwaza kholta hai.
Aditi Bahar Akar puchhti hai ki wo log Kaha aaye hai toh Aditya sirf uske sath chalne ke liye kehta hai. Aditi chup chap Aditya ka pichhe pichhe chalne lagti hai thodi hi der me wo log ek Ghane Jangle me pahuch jate hai Kuch der chal kar Aditi ko girte hue Jharne ki awaz aane lagti hai Aditya apni Maa ka hath Tham kar use ek Bahut hi Sundar Garden me le Aata hai.
jo Dekhne par Jannat se Kam nahi tha Charo taraf hariyali aur Alag alag tarah ke Ped podhe us jagah ko extremely ferdousi bana rahe the. Halaki dekh kar ye bhi pata lag raha tha ki kafi samay se yahan ki dekh rekh nahi ki gayi hai. Aditi is nazare ko Mohit ho kar dekhti reh jati hai lekin fir kuch samay bad apne sawalo ko na rok pane ke karan Aditya se puchhti hai.
Aditi ~ ye... Ye konsi Jagah hai Beta ?
Aditya ~ (muskurate hue) guess Karo.
Aditi ~ ( kuch samajh na ane ke karan) Batao Na Aditya. ye Hum Kahan aaye hain?
Aditya ~ Maa ye sab Hamara hai.
Aditi ~ (confusion me ) Kya? Ye hamara hai. par..
Aditya ~ Maa ye Hamari hi property ki Backside hai. Hamari Pushteni Zamin jo Papa ko mili hai wo lagbhag 500-600 acre ke area me feli hai ye sab usi me Ata hai. Papa ne Business ke Alawa kisi chiz par dhyan hi nahi Diya isiliye iski dekh rekh ab nahi hoti lekin ye sab hamara hi hai. Aur ye hi nahi Iske alwa bhi bohot hai lekin Aap ghar se Bahar hi nahi Jati toh apko Pata nahi hoga.
Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha ki hamari property bohot badi hai lekin yaha tak dekhne ka moka nahi mila.
Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.
Aditi ~ Haan lekin tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai tum yahan Aaya hue ho.
Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se Ghar chhoda tha...
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