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Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha lekin Kabhi dekhne ka moka nahi mila.

Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.

Aditi ~ Haan lekin tujhe dekh kar lag raha hai tu yahan Aaya hua hai.

Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Continue .....

Aditi ko abhi abhi kahi baat ko Samjhne me thoda samay lagta hai lekin jese hi use kahe Gaye shabdo ka matlab samjh aata hai wo chonk jati hai aur uske Man me hazaro sawal janm lene lagte hai.
Aditi ~ kya?... Tumne Isee raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Aditya ~ Haa maa

Aditi ~ (apne man me uth rahe sawalo ke sath) par... par Beta yaha se kese.? ?
Aditya, apane Maa ki awaaz me Vibration mehsoos karke naram pad jata hai, aur uske kuch pichhe rakhi purani bench par baith jata hai. "aaraam se baitho, maa. Aap apna time lo. hamaare paas poora din hai."
Aditi us ghisi hui lakdi ki bench par bethi, jis par bethne ke baad uski skin par thandak mehsoos hui. Aditi ke haath uski god mein mud gae, uski aankhen horizon par door ek point par tiki hui thi.



aakhirkaar jab Aditi ne baat ki, toh uski awaaz me ek foosfusahat thi, jisme bhawnao ka ek mazbuti se bandha hua toofaan tha. "beta, tum... tum sach mein isee raaste se gae the?"

Aditya ne Haa me sir hilaya, uski aankhon me dard ki ek jhalak dikhai di.
"lekin tab tum bahut chhote the," Aditi ne kaha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "ye jagah hamari property ke door ke hisse me hai, Jangal se bhare hue raaston aur bhoole hue kono ki bhool bhulaiya me tum akele kaise kaamyaab ho gaye, ek bachcha jo mushkil se itna bada tha ki unchi diwaro ke upar nahi dekh paata tha?"

"main Apko sab kuchh bataunga, Maa," Aaditya ne waada kiya, uski awaaz me ateet ka bojh tha.

Wo utha aur usne apni Maa ki or haath badhaaya. Aditi ne jhijhakate hue haath pakda, uske kadam phoolo se bhare raaste par halake se goonj rahe the.


ek thandi aashanka ne Aditi ko haddiyon tak thanda kar diya. har kadam ke saath, khaamoshi badhati gai, ankahe sawaal jo jeevan bhar ki laalsa se bhare hue the. Raasta unhen jangal mein aur bhi aage le gaya jo property ka hi hissa tha.
akhirkar, wo apni manzil par pahunch gaye: pedo ke bich chhipa ek sunsan ghar,



jo kabhi Alishan hua karta hoga ab ukhadte hue pent aur kaai jam chuki diwaro se kharaab ho gaya tha. yaha ek Sipahi ki tarah khada tha, apne bheetar chhipe raazo ka ek khaamosh rakshak.
Aditi uske samne khadi thi, uska dil uske Seene se takra raha tha, uske dimaag me laakhon sawaal ghoom rahe the. uski saansen uske gale me atak rah thi, Aditya ki chuppi todane aur ateet ki sachchai ko ujaagar karane ka wo intajaar kar rahi thi.

Aditya bhi us sunsan ghar ke samane ruka tha, uski khali windows andhi aankhon ki tarah unhen ghoor rahi thi. "yahi hai," usne kaha, uski awaaz karkash thi, "ye wo jawab hai jiski apko talaash thi."
Aditi ne eyebrows sikodi, uske maathe par ulajhan ki lakiren ubhar aayin. "lekin main samajh nahin pa rahi hoon, beta," Aditi haklate hue boli. Aditya ki nazar ghar ke us taraf gai, jahaan tootati neenv ke niche ek Basement tha. "Wo basement dekh rahe ho aap?"


usne andhere me chhipe basement ki or ishaara karate hue puchha. "haan," Aditi ne jhijhakte hue kaha, "lekin—" "uski madad se hi," Aditya ne bich mein tokate hue, apani awaaz ko feelings se bharate hue kaha, "main yahaan tak pahuchane me kaamyaab ho paaya tha." Aditi ki ghabrahat aur bhi badh gayi. "beta, please," usne vinati ki, "mujhe samjhaao ki kya hua tha. mujhe kuchh bhi samajh me nahin aa raha hai." Aditya ne koi jawaab nahin diya. Wo basement ki or badha, zang lage get ko kholte hi wo get karaah utha. "yahaan aao, Maa" usne kaha, usaki awaaz mein tatparta thi.

Aditi, jiska dil ghabrahat aur ek ajeeb si ashanka ke saath dhadak raha tha, chupchaap uske peechhe chali gayi.
Aditya ne ek taraf kadam badhaaya, aur khule hue darwaze ki or ishaara kiya. "ye, ek gupt raasta hai. Ye ek kuen ki or jaata hai... Jo hamaare ghar ke theek peechhe hai." usne bataaya, uski awaaz dhimi ho gayi.

Aaditya ne apni baat poori ki, "jab main bachcha tha, to main apni classes se bachne ke lie ghar ke pichhe jangal ke bageeche me chhip jaata tha. main vahaan ghanton bitaata tha, aur ummeed karta tha ki papa ko pata na chale ki main apni classes bunk kar raha hoon. aise hee ek din, jangal kee khoj karate samay, maine ek kuen par thokar khai... aur yah chhipa hua raasta....."


Aditi ke liye is paheli ke tukade aakhirkaar apni jagah par aa gaye,



usne apne gaal par behate hue ek aansoo ko ponchha. "to tum aise hi chale gaye," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz bhaawanao se bhari huee thi. uski aankhon mein aansoo bhar aae, jo behakar uske khubsurat chehare par ek khaamosh raasta bana rahe the.

Aditya ka dil apni Maa ki udaasi ko dekhkar chalani ho gaya. "Maa, Aap ro kyu rahi ho?" usne poochha, uski awaaz me chinta jhalak rahi thi.

"kya tumne us samay mere baare me nahin socha tha?" Aditi ne ghutate hue kaha, uska dard ab ujaagar ho raha tha. "mujh par kya beeti hogi?"

Aditya ne haath badhaaya, wo apni maa ko sparsh karne me hichakicha raha tha, aur usne Aditi ka haath pakad liya.



"haan, maa. sirf apki vajah se hi main 14 saal ki umr tak yahaan ruka. nahin to main bahut pahale hi chala jaata. Apko toh pata hi hai paapa..." uski awaaz dhimee pad gayi, hawa me ankaha aarop bhaari pad gaya.

Aditi ki aankhon me phir se aansoo aa gaye, jisase uski nazar dhundhali hone lagi. "Wo yaade mera dil ko tod deti hai," Aditi ro padi, "tumhaara bachpan meri aankhon ke samne hi chheen liya gaya.


main royi, Aditya, main har raat royi, lekin tumhare papa ko rokne me asamarth thi." Aditi ki awaaz ruk gayi, uski bhavanae umad padi. "lekin mera vishvaas karo, beta, aisa koi pal nahin tha jab maine tumhaare lie ladayi na ki ho, aisa koi pal na tha jab maine tumhaare lie ishwar se prarthana na ki ho."

jaise-jaise Aditi ki siskiyaan tez hoti gayi, Aditya par niraasha ki lahar chha gayi. Wo apna ateet batana chahta tha, lekin apni Maa ki peeda ko dekhkar wo andar se hil gaya. "Maa, please mat roiye," usne vinati ki, uski awaaz me sahanubhooti bhari hui thi. "main apko phir kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga. main vaada karta hoon." Aditi uske shabdon se chup hone lagi, uske dukh ke toofaan ke beech ek naajuk aasha timtima rahi thi.


Aditi ki siskiyaan us ghar ke khaalipan me goonj rah thi, Aditi ka har aansoo Aditya ke jaane ke baad uske andar mehsoos kie gae akelepan ki gavahi de raha tha. duniya is sunsaan jagah ke ayamo me simat gayi thi, jo uske dil me ban chuki darar ko reflect kar rahi thi. achaanak, ek komal sparsh ne Aditi ko sahaara diya. Aditya uske bagal me khada ho gaya, uski upasthiti ek maun vaada thi. usne Aditi ka haath fir se thaama,


Aditya ki ungaliyaan Aditi ke haathon se itani softness se takarai ki Aditi ki spine me siharan paida ho gai. ek aise yakin ke saath jisne Aditi ki saansen rok li, Aditya ne us hath ko apne dil par rakh diya.


uski hatheli ke niche sthir Rhythm uski apni tez dhadakan ke lie ek powerful reflection thi.

Ye unke dilon ki bhaasha me kaha gaya wada tha. jaise hi unki aankhen mili,


dono ke bheetar bhaavanaon ka ek moti chamak utha: ek vidroh jo tootane se inkaar kar raha tha. lekin Apne hi bete ki nigaahon ki gehraee me, Aditi ko araam mila. uske bheetar ka toofaan kam hone laga, uski jagah ek naazuk shaanti ne le li. us saajha duniya me khokar, duniya feeki pad gayi. Wo vahaan khade the, do souls ankahee bhavanao ke sagar me beh rahe thi, unke shareer ek maun pratigya dwaara ek saath tehar gae the. us pal mein, unke beech ek brahmaand khil utha,


ek aise pyaar se juda hua jo shabdon se pare tha.

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Behtreen update bro .plz next update thoda jaldi dijiyega

Wapsi par apka swagat hai... Very nice update..

Superb update

Nice and beautiful introduction of the story....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Esac bhai....
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Update 9



Previous

Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha lekin Kabhi dekhne ka moka nahi mila.

Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.

Aditi ~ Haan lekin tujhe dekh kar lag raha hai tu yahan Aaya hua hai.

Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Continue .....

Aditi ko abhi abhi kahi baat ko Samjhne me thoda samay lagta hai lekin jese hi use kahe Gaye shabdo ka matlab samjh aata hai wo chonk jati hai aur uske Man me hazaro sawal janm lene lagte hai.
Aditi ~ kya?... Tumne Isee raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Aditya ~ Haa maa

Aditi ~ (apne man me uth rahe sawalo ke sath) par... par Beta yaha se kese.? ?
Aditya, apane Maa ki awaaz me Vibration mehsoos karke naram pad jata hai, aur uske kuch pichhe rakhi purani bench par baith jata hai. "aaraam se baitho, maa. Aap apna time lo. hamaare paas poora din hai."
Aditi us ghisi hui lakdi ki bench par bethi, jis par bethne ke baad uski skin par thandak mehsoos hui. Aditi ke haath uski god mein mud gae, uski aankhen horizon par door ek point par tiki hui thi.



aakhirkaar jab Aditi ne baat ki, toh uski awaaz me ek foosfusahat thi, jisme bhawnao ka ek mazbuti se bandha hua toofaan tha. "beta, tum... tum sach mein isee raaste se gae the?"

Aditya ne Haa me sir hilaya, uski aankhon me dard ki ek jhalak dikhai di.
"lekin tab tum bahut chhote the," Aditi ne kaha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "ye jagah hamari property ke door ke hisse me hai, Jangal se bhare hue raaston aur bhoole hue kono ki bhool bhulaiya me tum akele kaise kaamyaab ho gaye, ek bachcha jo mushkil se itna bada tha ki unchi diwaro ke upar nahi dekh paata tha?"

"main Apko sab kuchh bataunga, Maa," Aaditya ne waada kiya, uski awaaz me ateet ka bojh tha.

Wo utha aur usne apni Maa ki or haath badhaaya. Aditi ne jhijhakate hue haath pakda, uske kadam phoolo se bhare raaste par halake se goonj rahe the.


ek thandi aashanka ne Aditi ko haddiyon tak thanda kar diya. har kadam ke saath, khaamoshi badhati gai, ankahe sawaal jo jeevan bhar ki laalsa se bhare hue the. Raasta unhen jangal mein aur bhi aage le gaya jo property ka hi hissa tha.
akhirkar, wo apni manzil par pahunch gaye: pedo ke bich chhipa ek sunsan ghar,



jo kabhi Alishan hua karta hoga ab ukhadte hue pent aur kaai jam chuki diwaro se kharaab ho gaya tha. yaha ek Sipahi ki tarah khada tha, apne bheetar chhipe raazo ka ek khaamosh rakshak.
Aditi uske samne khadi thi, uska dil uske Seene se takra raha tha, uske dimaag me laakhon sawaal ghoom rahe the. uski saansen uske gale me atak rah thi, Aditya ki chuppi todane aur ateet ki sachchai ko ujaagar karane ka wo intajaar kar rahi thi.

Aditya bhi us sunsan ghar ke samane ruka tha, uski khali windows andhi aankhon ki tarah unhen ghoor rahi thi. "yahi hai," usne kaha, uski awaaz karkash thi, "ye wo jawab hai jiski apko talaash thi."
Aditi ne eyebrows sikodi, uske maathe par ulajhan ki lakiren ubhar aayin. "lekin main samajh nahin pa rahi hoon, beta," Aditi haklate hue boli. Aditya ki nazar ghar ke us taraf gai, jahaan tootati neenv ke niche ek Basement tha. "Wo basement dekh rahe ho aap?"


usne andhere me chhipe basement ki or ishaara karate hue puchha. "haan," Aditi ne jhijhakte hue kaha, "lekin—" "uski madad se hi," Aditya ne bich mein tokate hue, apani awaaz ko feelings se bharate hue kaha, "main yahaan tak pahuchane me kaamyaab ho paaya tha." Aditi ki ghabrahat aur bhi badh gayi. "beta, please," usne vinati ki, "mujhe samjhaao ki kya hua tha. mujhe kuchh bhi samajh me nahin aa raha hai." Aditya ne koi jawaab nahin diya. Wo basement ki or badha, zang lage get ko kholte hi wo get karaah utha. "yahaan aao, Maa" usne kaha, usaki awaaz mein tatparta thi.

Aditi, jiska dil ghabrahat aur ek ajeeb si ashanka ke saath dhadak raha tha, chupchaap uske peechhe chali gayi.
Aditya ne ek taraf kadam badhaaya, aur khule hue darwaze ki or ishaara kiya. "ye, ek gupt raasta hai. Ye ek kuen ki or jaata hai... Jo hamaare ghar ke theek peechhe hai." usne bataaya, uski awaaz dhimi ho gayi.

Aaditya ne apni baat poori ki, "jab main bachcha tha, to main apni classes se bachne ke lie ghar ke pichhe jangal ke bageeche me chhip jaata tha. main vahaan ghanton bitaata tha, aur ummeed karta tha ki papa ko pata na chale ki main apni classes bunk kar raha hoon. aise hee ek din, jangal kee khoj karate samay, maine ek kuen par thokar khai... aur yah chhipa hua raasta....."


Aditi ke liye is paheli ke tukade aakhirkaar apni jagah par aa gaye,



usne apne gaal par behate hue ek aansoo ko ponchha. "to tum aise hi chale gaye," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz bhaawanao se bhari huee thi. uski aankhon mein aansoo bhar aae, jo behakar uske khubsurat chehare par ek khaamosh raasta bana rahe the.

Aditya ka dil apni Maa ki udaasi ko dekhkar chalani ho gaya. "Maa, Aap ro kyu rahi ho?" usne poochha, uski awaaz me chinta jhalak rahi thi.

"kya tumne us samay mere baare me nahin socha tha?" Aditi ne ghutate hue kaha, uska dard ab ujaagar ho raha tha. "mujh par kya beeti hogi?"

Aditya ne haath badhaaya, wo apni maa ko sparsh karne me hichakicha raha tha, aur usne Aditi ka haath pakad liya.



"haan, maa. sirf apki vajah se hi main 14 saal ki umr tak yahaan ruka. nahin to main bahut pahale hi chala jaata. Apko toh pata hi hai paapa..." uski awaaz dhimee pad gayi, hawa me ankaha aarop bhaari pad gaya.

Aditi ki aankhon me phir se aansoo aa gaye, jisase uski nazar dhundhali hone lagi. "Wo yaade mera dil ko tod deti hai," Aditi ro padi, "tumhaara bachpan meri aankhon ke samne hi chheen liya gaya.


main royi, Aditya, main har raat royi, lekin tumhare papa ko rokne me asamarth thi." Aditi ki awaaz ruk gayi, uski bhavanae umad padi. "lekin mera vishvaas karo, beta, aisa koi pal nahin tha jab maine tumhaare lie ladayi na ki ho, aisa koi pal na tha jab maine tumhaare lie ishwar se prarthana na ki ho."

jaise-jaise Aditi ki siskiyaan tez hoti gayi, Aditya par niraasha ki lahar chha gayi. Wo apna ateet batana chahta tha, lekin apni Maa ki peeda ko dekhkar wo andar se hil gaya. "Maa, please mat roiye," usne vinati ki, uski awaaz me sahanubhooti bhari hui thi. "main apko phir kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga. main vaada karta hoon." Aditi uske shabdon se chup hone lagi, uske dukh ke toofaan ke beech ek naajuk aasha timtima rahi thi.


Aditi ki siskiyaan us ghar ke khaalipan me goonj rah thi, Aditi ka har aansoo Aditya ke jaane ke baad uske andar mehsoos kie gae akelepan ki gavahi de raha tha. duniya is sunsaan jagah ke ayamo me simat gayi thi, jo uske dil me ban chuki darar ko reflect kar rahi thi. achaanak, ek komal sparsh ne Aditi ko sahaara diya. Aditya uske bagal me khada ho gaya, uski upasthiti ek maun vaada thi. usne Aditi ka haath fir se thaama,


Aditya ki ungaliyaan Aditi ke haathon se itani softness se takarai ki Aditi ki spine me siharan paida ho gai. ek aise yakin ke saath jisne Aditi ki saansen rok li, Aditya ne us hath ko apne dil par rakh diya.


uski hatheli ke niche sthir Rhythm uski apni tez dhadakan ke lie ek powerful reflection thi.

Ye unke dilon ki bhaasha me kaha gaya wada tha. jaise hi unki aankhen mili,


dono ke bheetar bhaavanaon ka ek moti chamak utha: ek vidroh jo tootane se inkaar kar raha tha. lekin Apne hi bete ki nigaahon ki gehraee me, Aditi ko araam mila. uske bheetar ka toofaan kam hone laga, uski jagah ek naazuk shaanti ne le li. us saajha duniya me khokar, duniya feeki pad gayi. Wo vahaan khade the, do souls ankahee bhavanao ke sagar me beh rahe thi, unke shareer ek maun pratigya dwaara ek saath tehar gae the. us pal mein, unke beech ek brahmaand khil utha,


ek aise pyaar se juda hua jo shabdon se pare tha.

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Previous

Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha lekin Kabhi dekhne ka moka nahi mila.

Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.

Aditi ~ Haan lekin tujhe dekh kar lag raha hai tu yahan Aaya hua hai.

Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Continue .....

Aditi ko abhi abhi kahi baat ko Samjhne me thoda samay lagta hai lekin jese hi use kahe Gaye shabdo ka matlab samjh aata hai wo chonk jati hai aur uske Man me hazaro sawal janm lene lagte hai.
Aditi ~ kya?... Tumne Isee raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Aditya ~ Haa maa

Aditi ~ (apne man me uth rahe sawalo ke sath) par... par Beta yaha se kese.? ?
Aditya, apane Maa ki awaaz me Vibration mehsoos karke naram pad jata hai, aur uske kuch pichhe rakhi purani bench par baith jata hai. "aaraam se baitho, maa. Aap apna time lo. hamaare paas poora din hai."
Aditi us ghisi hui lakdi ki bench par bethi, jis par bethne ke baad uski skin par thandak mehsoos hui. Aditi ke haath uski god mein mud gae, uski aankhen horizon par door ek point par tiki hui thi.



aakhirkaar jab Aditi ne baat ki, toh uski awaaz me ek foosfusahat thi, jisme bhawnao ka ek mazbuti se bandha hua toofaan tha. "beta, tum... tum sach mein isee raaste se gae the?"

Aditya ne Haa me sir hilaya, uski aankhon me dard ki ek jhalak dikhai di.
"lekin tab tum bahut chhote the," Aditi ne kaha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "ye jagah hamari property ke door ke hisse me hai, Jangal se bhare hue raaston aur bhoole hue kono ki bhool bhulaiya me tum akele kaise kaamyaab ho gaye, ek bachcha jo mushkil se itna bada tha ki unchi diwaro ke upar nahi dekh paata tha?"

"main Apko sab kuchh bataunga, Maa," Aaditya ne waada kiya, uski awaaz me ateet ka bojh tha.

Wo utha aur usne apni Maa ki or haath badhaaya. Aditi ne jhijhakate hue haath pakda, uske kadam phoolo se bhare raaste par halake se goonj rahe the.


ek thandi aashanka ne Aditi ko haddiyon tak thanda kar diya. har kadam ke saath, khaamoshi badhati gai, ankahe sawaal jo jeevan bhar ki laalsa se bhare hue the. Raasta unhen jangal mein aur bhi aage le gaya jo property ka hi hissa tha.
akhirkar, wo apni manzil par pahunch gaye: pedo ke bich chhipa ek sunsan ghar,



jo kabhi Alishan hua karta hoga ab ukhadte hue pent aur kaai jam chuki diwaro se kharaab ho gaya tha. yaha ek Sipahi ki tarah khada tha, apne bheetar chhipe raazo ka ek khaamosh rakshak.
Aditi uske samne khadi thi, uska dil uske Seene se takra raha tha, uske dimaag me laakhon sawaal ghoom rahe the. uski saansen uske gale me atak rah thi, Aditya ki chuppi todane aur ateet ki sachchai ko ujaagar karane ka wo intajaar kar rahi thi.

Aditya bhi us sunsan ghar ke samane ruka tha, uski khali windows andhi aankhon ki tarah unhen ghoor rahi thi. "yahi hai," usne kaha, uski awaaz karkash thi, "ye wo jawab hai jiski apko talaash thi."
Aditi ne eyebrows sikodi, uske maathe par ulajhan ki lakiren ubhar aayin. "lekin main samajh nahin pa rahi hoon, beta," Aditi haklate hue boli. Aditya ki nazar ghar ke us taraf gai, jahaan tootati neenv ke niche ek Basement tha. "Wo basement dekh rahe ho aap?"


usne andhere me chhipe basement ki or ishaara karate hue puchha. "haan," Aditi ne jhijhakte hue kaha, "lekin—" "uski madad se hi," Aditya ne bich mein tokate hue, apani awaaz ko feelings se bharate hue kaha, "main yahaan tak pahuchane me kaamyaab ho paaya tha." Aditi ki ghabrahat aur bhi badh gayi. "beta, please," usne vinati ki, "mujhe samjhaao ki kya hua tha. mujhe kuchh bhi samajh me nahin aa raha hai." Aditya ne koi jawaab nahin diya. Wo basement ki or badha, zang lage get ko kholte hi wo get karaah utha. "yahaan aao, Maa" usne kaha, usaki awaaz mein tatparta thi.

Aditi, jiska dil ghabrahat aur ek ajeeb si ashanka ke saath dhadak raha tha, chupchaap uske peechhe chali gayi.
Aditya ne ek taraf kadam badhaaya, aur khule hue darwaze ki or ishaara kiya. "ye, ek gupt raasta hai. Ye ek kuen ki or jaata hai... Jo hamaare ghar ke theek peechhe hai." usne bataaya, uski awaaz dhimi ho gayi.

Aaditya ne apni baat poori ki, "jab main bachcha tha, to main apni classes se bachne ke lie ghar ke pichhe jangal ke bageeche me chhip jaata tha. main vahaan ghanton bitaata tha, aur ummeed karta tha ki papa ko pata na chale ki main apni classes bunk kar raha hoon. aise hee ek din, jangal kee khoj karate samay, maine ek kuen par thokar khai... aur yah chhipa hua raasta....."


Aditi ke liye is paheli ke tukade aakhirkaar apni jagah par aa gaye,



usne apne gaal par behate hue ek aansoo ko ponchha. "to tum aise hi chale gaye," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz bhaawanao se bhari huee thi. uski aankhon mein aansoo bhar aae, jo behakar uske khubsurat chehare par ek khaamosh raasta bana rahe the.

Aditya ka dil apni Maa ki udaasi ko dekhkar chalani ho gaya. "Maa, Aap ro kyu rahi ho?" usne poochha, uski awaaz me chinta jhalak rahi thi.

"kya tumne us samay mere baare me nahin socha tha?" Aditi ne ghutate hue kaha, uska dard ab ujaagar ho raha tha. "mujh par kya beeti hogi?"

Aditya ne haath badhaaya, wo apni maa ko sparsh karne me hichakicha raha tha, aur usne Aditi ka haath pakad liya.



"haan, maa. sirf apki vajah se hi main 14 saal ki umr tak yahaan ruka. nahin to main bahut pahale hi chala jaata. Apko toh pata hi hai paapa..." uski awaaz dhimee pad gayi, hawa me ankaha aarop bhaari pad gaya.

Aditi ki aankhon me phir se aansoo aa gaye, jisase uski nazar dhundhali hone lagi. "Wo yaade mera dil ko tod deti hai," Aditi ro padi, "tumhaara bachpan meri aankhon ke samne hi chheen liya gaya.


main royi, Aditya, main har raat royi, lekin tumhare papa ko rokne me asamarth thi." Aditi ki awaaz ruk gayi, uski bhavanae umad padi. "lekin mera vishvaas karo, beta, aisa koi pal nahin tha jab maine tumhaare lie ladayi na ki ho, aisa koi pal na tha jab maine tumhaare lie ishwar se prarthana na ki ho."

jaise-jaise Aditi ki siskiyaan tez hoti gayi, Aditya par niraasha ki lahar chha gayi. Wo apna ateet batana chahta tha, lekin apni Maa ki peeda ko dekhkar wo andar se hil gaya. "Maa, please mat roiye," usne vinati ki, uski awaaz me sahanubhooti bhari hui thi. "main apko phir kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga. main vaada karta hoon." Aditi uske shabdon se chup hone lagi, uske dukh ke toofaan ke beech ek naajuk aasha timtima rahi thi.


Aditi ki siskiyaan us ghar ke khaalipan me goonj rah thi, Aditi ka har aansoo Aditya ke jaane ke baad uske andar mehsoos kie gae akelepan ki gavahi de raha tha. duniya is sunsaan jagah ke ayamo me simat gayi thi, jo uske dil me ban chuki darar ko reflect kar rahi thi. achaanak, ek komal sparsh ne Aditi ko sahaara diya. Aditya uske bagal me khada ho gaya, uski upasthiti ek maun vaada thi. usne Aditi ka haath fir se thaama,


Aditya ki ungaliyaan Aditi ke haathon se itani softness se takarai ki Aditi ki spine me siharan paida ho gai. ek aise yakin ke saath jisne Aditi ki saansen rok li, Aditya ne us hath ko apne dil par rakh diya.


uski hatheli ke niche sthir Rhythm uski apni tez dhadakan ke lie ek powerful reflection thi.

Ye unke dilon ki bhaasha me kaha gaya wada tha. jaise hi unki aankhen mili,


dono ke bheetar bhaavanaon ka ek moti chamak utha: ek vidroh jo tootane se inkaar kar raha tha. lekin Apne hi bete ki nigaahon ki gehraee me, Aditi ko araam mila. uske bheetar ka toofaan kam hone laga, uski jagah ek naazuk shaanti ne le li. us saajha duniya me khokar, duniya feeki pad gayi. Wo vahaan khade the, do souls ankahee bhavanao ke sagar me beh rahe thi, unke shareer ek maun pratigya dwaara ek saath tehar gae the. us pal mein, unke beech ek brahmaand khil utha,


ek aise pyaar se juda hua jo shabdon se pare tha.

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Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha lekin Kabhi dekhne ka moka nahi mila.

Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.

Aditi ~ Haan lekin tujhe dekh kar lag raha hai tu yahan Aaya hua hai.

Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Continue .....

Aditi ko abhi abhi kahi baat ko Samjhne me thoda samay lagta hai lekin jese hi use kahe Gaye shabdo ka matlab samjh aata hai wo chonk jati hai aur uske Man me hazaro sawal janm lene lagte hai.
Aditi ~ kya?... Tumne Isee raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Aditya ~ Haa maa

Aditi ~ (apne man me uth rahe sawalo ke sath) par... par Beta yaha se kese.? ?
Aditya, apane Maa ki awaaz me Vibration mehsoos karke naram pad jata hai, aur uske kuch pichhe rakhi purani bench par baith jata hai. "aaraam se baitho, maa. Aap apna time lo. hamaare paas poora din hai."
Aditi us ghisi hui lakdi ki bench par bethi, jis par bethne ke baad uski skin par thandak mehsoos hui. Aditi ke haath uski god mein mud gae, uski aankhen horizon par door ek point par tiki hui thi.



aakhirkaar jab Aditi ne baat ki, toh uski awaaz me ek foosfusahat thi, jisme bhawnao ka ek mazbuti se bandha hua toofaan tha. "beta, tum... tum sach mein isee raaste se gae the?"

Aditya ne Haa me sir hilaya, uski aankhon me dard ki ek jhalak dikhai di.
"lekin tab tum bahut chhote the," Aditi ne kaha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "ye jagah hamari property ke door ke hisse me hai, Jangal se bhare hue raaston aur bhoole hue kono ki bhool bhulaiya me tum akele kaise kaamyaab ho gaye, ek bachcha jo mushkil se itna bada tha ki unchi diwaro ke upar nahi dekh paata tha?"

"main Apko sab kuchh bataunga, Maa," Aaditya ne waada kiya, uski awaaz me ateet ka bojh tha.

Wo utha aur usne apni Maa ki or haath badhaaya. Aditi ne jhijhakate hue haath pakda, uske kadam phoolo se bhare raaste par halake se goonj rahe the.


ek thandi aashanka ne Aditi ko haddiyon tak thanda kar diya. har kadam ke saath, khaamoshi badhati gai, ankahe sawaal jo jeevan bhar ki laalsa se bhare hue the. Raasta unhen jangal mein aur bhi aage le gaya jo property ka hi hissa tha.
akhirkar, wo apni manzil par pahunch gaye: pedo ke bich chhipa ek sunsan ghar,



jo kabhi Alishan hua karta hoga ab ukhadte hue pent aur kaai jam chuki diwaro se kharaab ho gaya tha. yaha ek Sipahi ki tarah khada tha, apne bheetar chhipe raazo ka ek khaamosh rakshak.
Aditi uske samne khadi thi, uska dil uske Seene se takra raha tha, uske dimaag me laakhon sawaal ghoom rahe the. uski saansen uske gale me atak rah thi, Aditya ki chuppi todane aur ateet ki sachchai ko ujaagar karane ka wo intajaar kar rahi thi.

Aditya bhi us sunsan ghar ke samane ruka tha, uski khali windows andhi aankhon ki tarah unhen ghoor rahi thi. "yahi hai," usne kaha, uski awaaz karkash thi, "ye wo jawab hai jiski apko talaash thi."
Aditi ne eyebrows sikodi, uske maathe par ulajhan ki lakiren ubhar aayin. "lekin main samajh nahin pa rahi hoon, beta," Aditi haklate hue boli. Aditya ki nazar ghar ke us taraf gai, jahaan tootati neenv ke niche ek Basement tha. "Wo basement dekh rahe ho aap?"


usne andhere me chhipe basement ki or ishaara karate hue puchha. "haan," Aditi ne jhijhakte hue kaha, "lekin—" "uski madad se hi," Aditya ne bich mein tokate hue, apani awaaz ko feelings se bharate hue kaha, "main yahaan tak pahuchane me kaamyaab ho paaya tha." Aditi ki ghabrahat aur bhi badh gayi. "beta, please," usne vinati ki, "mujhe samjhaao ki kya hua tha. mujhe kuchh bhi samajh me nahin aa raha hai." Aditya ne koi jawaab nahin diya. Wo basement ki or badha, zang lage get ko kholte hi wo get karaah utha. "yahaan aao, Maa" usne kaha, usaki awaaz mein tatparta thi.

Aditi, jiska dil ghabrahat aur ek ajeeb si ashanka ke saath dhadak raha tha, chupchaap uske peechhe chali gayi.
Aditya ne ek taraf kadam badhaaya, aur khule hue darwaze ki or ishaara kiya. "ye, ek gupt raasta hai. Ye ek kuen ki or jaata hai... Jo hamaare ghar ke theek peechhe hai." usne bataaya, uski awaaz dhimi ho gayi.

Aaditya ne apni baat poori ki, "jab main bachcha tha, to main apni classes se bachne ke lie ghar ke pichhe jangal ke bageeche me chhip jaata tha. main vahaan ghanton bitaata tha, aur ummeed karta tha ki papa ko pata na chale ki main apni classes bunk kar raha hoon. aise hee ek din, jangal kee khoj karate samay, maine ek kuen par thokar khai... aur yah chhipa hua raasta....."


Aditi ke liye is paheli ke tukade aakhirkaar apni jagah par aa gaye,



usne apne gaal par behate hue ek aansoo ko ponchha. "to tum aise hi chale gaye," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz bhaawanao se bhari huee thi. uski aankhon mein aansoo bhar aae, jo behakar uske khubsurat chehare par ek khaamosh raasta bana rahe the.

Aditya ka dil apni Maa ki udaasi ko dekhkar chalani ho gaya. "Maa, Aap ro kyu rahi ho?" usne poochha, uski awaaz me chinta jhalak rahi thi.

"kya tumne us samay mere baare me nahin socha tha?" Aditi ne ghutate hue kaha, uska dard ab ujaagar ho raha tha. "mujh par kya beeti hogi?"

Aditya ne haath badhaaya, wo apni maa ko sparsh karne me hichakicha raha tha, aur usne Aditi ka haath pakad liya.



"haan, maa. sirf apki vajah se hi main 14 saal ki umr tak yahaan ruka. nahin to main bahut pahale hi chala jaata. Apko toh pata hi hai paapa..." uski awaaz dhimee pad gayi, hawa me ankaha aarop bhaari pad gaya.

Aditi ki aankhon me phir se aansoo aa gaye, jisase uski nazar dhundhali hone lagi. "Wo yaade mera dil ko tod deti hai," Aditi ro padi, "tumhaara bachpan meri aankhon ke samne hi chheen liya gaya.


main royi, Aditya, main har raat royi, lekin tumhare papa ko rokne me asamarth thi." Aditi ki awaaz ruk gayi, uski bhavanae umad padi. "lekin mera vishvaas karo, beta, aisa koi pal nahin tha jab maine tumhaare lie ladayi na ki ho, aisa koi pal na tha jab maine tumhaare lie ishwar se prarthana na ki ho."

jaise-jaise Aditi ki siskiyaan tez hoti gayi, Aditya par niraasha ki lahar chha gayi. Wo apna ateet batana chahta tha, lekin apni Maa ki peeda ko dekhkar wo andar se hil gaya. "Maa, please mat roiye," usne vinati ki, uski awaaz me sahanubhooti bhari hui thi. "main apko phir kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga. main vaada karta hoon." Aditi uske shabdon se chup hone lagi, uske dukh ke toofaan ke beech ek naajuk aasha timtima rahi thi.


Aditi ki siskiyaan us ghar ke khaalipan me goonj rah thi, Aditi ka har aansoo Aditya ke jaane ke baad uske andar mehsoos kie gae akelepan ki gavahi de raha tha. duniya is sunsaan jagah ke ayamo me simat gayi thi, jo uske dil me ban chuki darar ko reflect kar rahi thi. achaanak, ek komal sparsh ne Aditi ko sahaara diya. Aditya uske bagal me khada ho gaya, uski upasthiti ek maun vaada thi. usne Aditi ka haath fir se thaama,


Aditya ki ungaliyaan Aditi ke haathon se itani softness se takarai ki Aditi ki spine me siharan paida ho gai. ek aise yakin ke saath jisne Aditi ki saansen rok li, Aditya ne us hath ko apne dil par rakh diya.


uski hatheli ke niche sthir Rhythm uski apni tez dhadakan ke lie ek powerful reflection thi.

Ye unke dilon ki bhaasha me kaha gaya wada tha. jaise hi unki aankhen mili,


dono ke bheetar bhaavanaon ka ek moti chamak utha: ek vidroh jo tootane se inkaar kar raha tha. lekin Apne hi bete ki nigaahon ki gehraee me, Aditi ko araam mila. uske bheetar ka toofaan kam hone laga, uski jagah ek naazuk shaanti ne le li. us saajha duniya me khokar, duniya feeki pad gayi. Wo vahaan khade the, do souls ankahee bhavanao ke sagar me beh rahe thi, unke shareer ek maun pratigya dwaara ek saath tehar gae the. us pal mein, unke beech ek brahmaand khil utha,


ek aise pyaar se juda hua jo shabdon se pare tha.

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Update 9



Previous

Aditi ~ Haa mujhe pata toh tha lekin Kabhi dekhne ka moka nahi mila.

Aditya ~ (halki hasi ke sath) Aaj mil Gaya na.

Aditi ~ Haan lekin tujhe dekh kar lag raha hai tu yahan Aaya hua hai.

Aditya ~ (chehre se Bhav mitate hue) Maine isi Raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Continue .....

Aditi ko abhi abhi kahi baat ko Samjhne me thoda samay lagta hai lekin jese hi use kahe Gaye shabdo ka matlab samjh aata hai wo chonk jati hai aur uske Man me hazaro sawal janm lene lagte hai.
Aditi ~ kya?... Tumne Isee raste se ghar chhoda tha.

Aditya ~ Haa maa

Aditi ~ (apne man me uth rahe sawalo ke sath) par... par Beta yaha se kese.? ?
Aditya, apane Maa ki awaaz me Vibration mehsoos karke naram pad jata hai, aur uske kuch pichhe rakhi purani bench par baith jata hai. "aaraam se baitho, maa. Aap apna time lo. hamaare paas poora din hai."
Aditi us ghisi hui lakdi ki bench par bethi, jis par bethne ke baad uski skin par thandak mehsoos hui. Aditi ke haath uski god mein mud gae, uski aankhen horizon par door ek point par tiki hui thi.



aakhirkaar jab Aditi ne baat ki, toh uski awaaz me ek foosfusahat thi, jisme bhawnao ka ek mazbuti se bandha hua toofaan tha. "beta, tum... tum sach mein isee raaste se gae the?"

Aditya ne Haa me sir hilaya, uski aankhon me dard ki ek jhalak dikhai di.
"lekin tab tum bahut chhote the," Aditi ne kaha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "ye jagah hamari property ke door ke hisse me hai, Jangal se bhare hue raaston aur bhoole hue kono ki bhool bhulaiya me tum akele kaise kaamyaab ho gaye, ek bachcha jo mushkil se itna bada tha ki unchi diwaro ke upar nahi dekh paata tha?"

"main Apko sab kuchh bataunga, Maa," Aaditya ne waada kiya, uski awaaz me ateet ka bojh tha.

Wo utha aur usne apni Maa ki or haath badhaaya. Aditi ne jhijhakate hue haath pakda, uske kadam phoolo se bhare raaste par halake se goonj rahe the.


ek thandi aashanka ne Aditi ko haddiyon tak thanda kar diya. har kadam ke saath, khaamoshi badhati gai, ankahe sawaal jo jeevan bhar ki laalsa se bhare hue the. Raasta unhen jangal mein aur bhi aage le gaya jo property ka hi hissa tha.
akhirkar, wo apni manzil par pahunch gaye: pedo ke bich chhipa ek sunsan ghar,



jo kabhi Alishan hua karta hoga ab ukhadte hue pent aur kaai jam chuki diwaro se kharaab ho gaya tha. yaha ek Sipahi ki tarah khada tha, apne bheetar chhipe raazo ka ek khaamosh rakshak.
Aditi uske samne khadi thi, uska dil uske Seene se takra raha tha, uske dimaag me laakhon sawaal ghoom rahe the. uski saansen uske gale me atak rah thi, Aditya ki chuppi todane aur ateet ki sachchai ko ujaagar karane ka wo intajaar kar rahi thi.

Aditya bhi us sunsan ghar ke samane ruka tha, uski khali windows andhi aankhon ki tarah unhen ghoor rahi thi. "yahi hai," usne kaha, uski awaaz karkash thi, "ye wo jawab hai jiski apko talaash thi."
Aditi ne eyebrows sikodi, uske maathe par ulajhan ki lakiren ubhar aayin. "lekin main samajh nahin pa rahi hoon, beta," Aditi haklate hue boli. Aditya ki nazar ghar ke us taraf gai, jahaan tootati neenv ke niche ek Basement tha. "Wo basement dekh rahe ho aap?"


usne andhere me chhipe basement ki or ishaara karate hue puchha. "haan," Aditi ne jhijhakte hue kaha, "lekin—" "uski madad se hi," Aditya ne bich mein tokate hue, apani awaaz ko feelings se bharate hue kaha, "main yahaan tak pahuchane me kaamyaab ho paaya tha." Aditi ki ghabrahat aur bhi badh gayi. "beta, please," usne vinati ki, "mujhe samjhaao ki kya hua tha. mujhe kuchh bhi samajh me nahin aa raha hai." Aditya ne koi jawaab nahin diya. Wo basement ki or badha, zang lage get ko kholte hi wo get karaah utha. "yahaan aao, Maa" usne kaha, usaki awaaz mein tatparta thi.

Aditi, jiska dil ghabrahat aur ek ajeeb si ashanka ke saath dhadak raha tha, chupchaap uske peechhe chali gayi.
Aditya ne ek taraf kadam badhaaya, aur khule hue darwaze ki or ishaara kiya. "ye, ek gupt raasta hai. Ye ek kuen ki or jaata hai... Jo hamaare ghar ke theek peechhe hai." usne bataaya, uski awaaz dhimi ho gayi.

Aaditya ne apni baat poori ki, "jab main bachcha tha, to main apni classes se bachne ke lie ghar ke pichhe jangal ke bageeche me chhip jaata tha. main vahaan ghanton bitaata tha, aur ummeed karta tha ki papa ko pata na chale ki main apni classes bunk kar raha hoon. aise hee ek din, jangal kee khoj karate samay, maine ek kuen par thokar khai... aur yah chhipa hua raasta....."


Aditi ke liye is paheli ke tukade aakhirkaar apni jagah par aa gaye,



usne apne gaal par behate hue ek aansoo ko ponchha. "to tum aise hi chale gaye," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz bhaawanao se bhari huee thi. uski aankhon mein aansoo bhar aae, jo behakar uske khubsurat chehare par ek khaamosh raasta bana rahe the.

Aditya ka dil apni Maa ki udaasi ko dekhkar chalani ho gaya. "Maa, Aap ro kyu rahi ho?" usne poochha, uski awaaz me chinta jhalak rahi thi.

"kya tumne us samay mere baare me nahin socha tha?" Aditi ne ghutate hue kaha, uska dard ab ujaagar ho raha tha. "mujh par kya beeti hogi?"

Aditya ne haath badhaaya, wo apni maa ko sparsh karne me hichakicha raha tha, aur usne Aditi ka haath pakad liya.



"haan, maa. sirf apki vajah se hi main 14 saal ki umr tak yahaan ruka. nahin to main bahut pahale hi chala jaata. Apko toh pata hi hai paapa..." uski awaaz dhimee pad gayi, hawa me ankaha aarop bhaari pad gaya.

Aditi ki aankhon me phir se aansoo aa gaye, jisase uski nazar dhundhali hone lagi. "Wo yaade mera dil ko tod deti hai," Aditi ro padi, "tumhaara bachpan meri aankhon ke samne hi chheen liya gaya.


main royi, Aditya, main har raat royi, lekin tumhare papa ko rokne me asamarth thi." Aditi ki awaaz ruk gayi, uski bhavanae umad padi. "lekin mera vishvaas karo, beta, aisa koi pal nahin tha jab maine tumhaare lie ladayi na ki ho, aisa koi pal na tha jab maine tumhaare lie ishwar se prarthana na ki ho."

jaise-jaise Aditi ki siskiyaan tez hoti gayi, Aditya par niraasha ki lahar chha gayi. Wo apna ateet batana chahta tha, lekin apni Maa ki peeda ko dekhkar wo andar se hil gaya. "Maa, please mat roiye," usne vinati ki, uski awaaz me sahanubhooti bhari hui thi. "main apko phir kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga. main vaada karta hoon." Aditi uske shabdon se chup hone lagi, uske dukh ke toofaan ke beech ek naajuk aasha timtima rahi thi.


Aditi ki siskiyaan us ghar ke khaalipan me goonj rah thi, Aditi ka har aansoo Aditya ke jaane ke baad uske andar mehsoos kie gae akelepan ki gavahi de raha tha. duniya is sunsaan jagah ke ayamo me simat gayi thi, jo uske dil me ban chuki darar ko reflect kar rahi thi. achaanak, ek komal sparsh ne Aditi ko sahaara diya. Aditya uske bagal me khada ho gaya, uski upasthiti ek maun vaada thi. usne Aditi ka haath fir se thaama,


Aditya ki ungaliyaan Aditi ke haathon se itani softness se takarai ki Aditi ki spine me siharan paida ho gai. ek aise yakin ke saath jisne Aditi ki saansen rok li, Aditya ne us hath ko apne dil par rakh diya.


uski hatheli ke niche sthir Rhythm uski apni tez dhadakan ke lie ek powerful reflection thi.

Ye unke dilon ki bhaasha me kaha gaya wada tha. jaise hi unki aankhen mili,


dono ke bheetar bhaavanaon ka ek moti chamak utha: ek vidroh jo tootane se inkaar kar raha tha. lekin Apne hi bete ki nigaahon ki gehraee me, Aditi ko araam mila. uske bheetar ka toofaan kam hone laga, uski jagah ek naazuk shaanti ne le li. us saajha duniya me khokar, duniya feeki pad gayi. Wo vahaan khade the, do souls ankahee bhavanao ke sagar me beh rahe thi, unke shareer ek maun pratigya dwaara ek saath tehar gae the. us pal mein, unke beech ek brahmaand khil utha,


ek aise pyaar se juda hua jo shabdon se pare tha.

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Nice update....

 

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Lajawab update tha

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Esac bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Esac bhai....
Nice and excellent update..

Thank you so so much dosto

 

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