Incest Maa meri rand (Extreme)
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Update lajawab hai and story narration is also good... Waise tum maa se badla ke writer ho kya?2025
EXT. LAHORE [ PAKISTHAN ] – EARLY MORNING – 6:00 AM
Subah ki hawa mein thandak thi. Na zyada sardi, na garmi… bas ek aisi narmi, jo insaan ko puri duniya se door le jaye.
Chhat par ek purana pankha halki khar-khar ki awaaz ke sath ghoom raha tha. Aasmaan abhi poora neela bhi nahi hua tha – thoda sa grey, thoda sa narangi.
Door se ek mandir ka ghanta bajta hai, uske saath kisi chai wale ke stove ki seeti, aur ek kabutaron ke pankhon ki fadfadana
Ek naya din jaise dheere-dheere uttar raha ho.
Camera jaise ek chhoti si gali se ghuste hue ek simple se ghar ke upar aata hai.
Us ghar ke chhote se kamre ke ander – ek lamba, patla ladka – raat bhar so nahi paya tha. Aankhon ke neeche halki siyahi thi, lekin chehre pe ajeeb sa noor tha.
Ji... Hain wo ladka aur koi nahi main hi hoon...!!
Aaj mera 18th birthday jo… tha.
Koi cake nahi tha. Koi balloons nahi. Par fir bhi mere liye ye subah sabse alag tha.
Bed ke pass ek purana radio padha tha – jisme se halki awaaz aa rahi thi: “Aaj ka suraj kuch naya leke aaya hai…”
Mein aankh band karta hoon, aur ek lambi saans leta hoon.
Hawa mere chehre se takrati hai. Jaise koi keh raha ho – “Tu ab bachcha nahi raha.”
“Ritesh! Uth jaldi. Aaj tera birthday hai bhool gaya kya? Jaldi naha-dho kar ready ho ja, mandir jaana hai humein!”
(Mein aankh kholta hoon, chhat ki taraf dekhta hoon. Thodi der bas ceiling fan ghoomta dekhta hoon. Phir halki muskaan aata hai mere chehre pe – woh wali muskaan jo har maa ki awaaz pe apne aap aa jati hai.)
“Yeh jiski aawaz aap sun rahe ho… yeh aur koi nahi meri maa ki aawaz hai – Lalita. Age: 47. Lekin lagti? Bhai… koi film ki heroine se kam nahi.... jo ki aap khud dekh sakte ho.”
MUMMY (gussa, louder now):
“Tujhe kitni baar bolungi? 7am bajne wala hai! Jaldi uth… nahi toh danda leke aaoon kya main?”
MEIN (neend mein suljhe hue baalon ke saath):
“Ji Mummy… bas 5 minute aur…”
MUMMY (with a bramatic taunt):
Mujhe kuch nahi suna! Tu ready ho raha hai ya mein birthday ke din pitai karu teri? Achha lagega tujhe?”
Mein haste hue uthta hoon. Aur washroom ke taraf chala jata hoon.
7:45 AM
Subah ki dhup ab safed se peeli hone lagi thi. Mein aur mummy mandir ke seediyon par chadh rahe the. Mein simple jeans aur kurta pehna tha, aur mummy ne deep cut wali blouse jis mai cleavage saf saf dikh rahi hoti hai aur cotton saree aur saree ke side maise mummy ki gori kamar bhi saf saf dikh rahi hoti hai.
Phoolon ki thali ek hath mein, aur dusre se dupatta sambhalte hue, mummy ne aankhon se mujhe scan kiya.
MUMMY (softly):
“Bada ho gaya tu… par dimaag abhi bhi paanch saal ka hai.”
MEIN (muskurate hue):
“Toh birthday gift mein dimaag bhi dila do phir.”
MAA:
“Pehle mandir mein Prasad chadh jaaye, fir dekhte hain.”
(Mandir ke andar ghanti baj rahi hai. Mein aankhein band karta hoon, ek lambi saans leta hoon. Pehli baar mere chehre par ek shaant si muskaan hoti hai. Jaise andar kuch thoda halkaa ho raha ho.)
OUTSIDE TEMPLE – 8:15 AM
Mandir ke bahar ek patli si sadak thi. Chhoti chhoti dukanee abhi khul rahi thi. Ek chaat wala apna thela dhakka dekar le ja raha tha, aur ek chaiwala kone main stove jala raha tha.
Mummy aur mein hum dono ek bench pe baith kar auto ka intezaar kar rahe the.
Mein thoda bored hokar mummy se kheta hoon:
MEIN:
“Auto waale aaj holiday pe hai kya?”
MUUMY (nakhre main)
“Jaldi ready hone ke liye bola tha, tab toh drama kar raha tha. Ab jaldi ho rahi hai?”
Hum dono haste hain.)
Garmi badhne lagi thi, aur mahol mein ek ajeeb si neend chhayi hui thi. Rikshe ja rahe the, par koi ruk nahi raha tha. Auto waale toh jaise gayab ho gaye ho.
Mein tohda thak gaya tha. Pair sune ho rahe the. Pet main gur gur ho rahi thi.
Tabhi door se ek green color ki gadi dikhayi di. Pehli nazar mein laga auto hai – lekin jab thoda paas aayi, toh pata chala ki wo Amini car thi.
Thoda ajeeb laga, par chalne wali cheez thi – aur us waqt mujhe bas ghar pahuchna tha.
Par tab meri nazar uske window se baahar nikle ek haath pe gayi.
Wo haath aadha bahar latka hua tha – aur usme ek bujhti hui cigarette thi. Usme se dhuaan nikal raha tha, seedha hawa mein ghulta hua.
Mujhe laga driver hi hoga.
Maine bina zyada soche, haath utha kar signal diya.
Amini dheere dheere ruk gayi.
Tab muumy ne dheere se mera haath pakda. Uska chehra thoda sa sankuch gaya
tha.
Aankhon main wo waali “intuitiob” thi jo sirf maaon ke paas hoti hai.
MUMMY (thoda ghabra kar):
“Beta… ye gadi sahi nahi lag rahi. Cigarette pakde hua hai… aur shayad… daru bhi pee rakhi ho. Chhod, jaane de… thoda aur ruk jaate hain… auto aa hi jaayega.”
Par main thak chukka tha. Subah se uth ke mandir gaye the, kuch khaya nahi tha. Body main bas chhoot si chubhan ho rahi thi.
MEIN (thoda zidd main, lekin shaant):
“Nahi mummy… aur wait nahi hota mujhse. Bhookh bhi lagi hai… Aur mummy, cigarette toh aajkal sab peete hain, isme darne wali baat kya hai?”
Mummy ne kuch nahi bola. Bas meri aankhon main dekhti rahi. Shayad unke andar kuch chillaya, lekin usne mujhe sunne diya nahi.
Meine phir se haath dikhaya, aur is baar Amini bilkul samne ruk gayi.
Car ka window dheere se niche hota hai.
Andar ka scene dekh ke mera pair ek second ke liye jam gaye.
Driver… nahi… wo aadmi… ekdum mota, kala,ganja, aur uska chehra jaise jal chukka ho. Muh main aadhe daant safed the, aadhe sade hue – jaise kisi ne raakh se polish kiya ho.
Aankhen… peeli.
Jaise purani bottle main rakhi daaru.
Kandhe pe ek geela gamcha tha, jo paseene se chipka hua tha. Garmi main bhi uski body se thoda badboodar dhuaan nikal raha tha – jaise gadi ke andar ka temperature normal insaan ke jeene layak nahi tha.
Ek hath se mein thoda darr laga… lekin maine halke se himmat jutayi.
MEIN (dheere se, almost politely):
“bhaiya… bazar tak chhod doge kya? 15 minute se auto ka wait kar rahe hain…”
Mujhe laga wo kuch nahi bolega.
Par usse pehle, mummy ne mera haath zor se pakda.
Mera kandha kheechte hue, kaan ke paas fusfusai
MUMMY (bahut dheere):
“Nahi beta… ye theek nahi lag raha. Isko jaane de… please. Hum aur ruk jaate hain.”
Ye baat usne itni dheere boli thi, par pata nahi kaise…
Driver ne sun liya.
DRIVER (ab gusse main, window se jhuk kar):
“Oyye… Sali… tu kaun hoti hai ye bolne wali mujhe? Tu jaanti nahi mujhe samjhi…!!! Tere bete ne haath roka, toh main ruka. nahi toh main rukta bhi nahi. Aana hai toh chup chaap aao. Nahi toh nikal lo. Samjhi? Samjha…. chalet bano!”
Uska tone… uski aankhon ka ghoorne… mummy ki saans andar hi atak gayi. Wo ek kadam peeche ho gayi, aur mein… mein confuse sa khadar aha.
Mere mann main ek aawaz thi – bhaag ja yahan se.
Par doosri awaz bolti thi – ho gaya, chadh ja, aur kitna kya wait karega?
Main ne mummy ka haath pakda. Dheere se uski aankhon main dekha.
MEIN:
“Mummy… please. Kuch nahi hoga. Main hoon na.”
Wo kuch nahi boli. Sirf haan ya na ke beech me atki aankhon ke saath chhupi si haan de di.
Aur hum…
Chadh gaye us Amini main.
(Window band hoti hai. Cigarette ki smell aur body sweat ki badboo hawa mein failti hai. Amini dheere se start hoti hai… aur chalne lagti hai.
Mein aur mummy peechhe baith gaye. Mummy ne saree ka pallu thoda aur sambhala, aur khidki ke paas thoda lean ho gayi – jaise hawa pakadna chahti ho, par khuli hawa kahaan thi.
Gadi ne dheere se move karna start kiya. Us waqt, ek purana song radio pe bajne laga:
“Jaane jaa… dhoondta phir raha…
Main yeh tu kahaan… main yahaan… tu kahaan…”
Gaana soft tha, lekin uski vibe… us moment main kuch alag hi feel de rahi thi. Ek ajeeb si udaasi aur tension ek saath.
Us driver ne front mirror – jo windshield ke beech main laga hota hai – use dhrre se adjust kiya.
Pehle mujhe laga wo apna chehra dekh raha hoga… par phir mujhe samjh aaya… Wo mirror sedha mummy ke upar set kiya gaya tha.
Mummy ki pasine wali cleavage aur unke blause pasine se bhig chuki hoti hai aur bagal bhi bhig chuki hoti hai aur ek madhos karne wali smell aarahi hoti hai mummy ki saree maise.
Fir maine dekha - wo aakhon se nahi, mirror se mummy ko dekh raha tha.
Ye dekh kar mere andar kuch sikud gaya.
Mummy ne kuch nahi kaha… par unka chehra thoda aur stiff ho gaya. Unki aankhon ka stress mujhe siddha mehsoos ho raha tha.
Mein kuch bolna chahta tha, lekin mere body aur uske body ke size main zameen aasman ka farak tha. Usse panga lena matlab maut ko invite karna.
Bas… mein chup hi raha .
Maine sirf mummy ki taraf dekha – unka chehra paseene se bhiga hua tha, aur saans bhi thodi bhaari lag rahi thi.
Pallu baar baar sambhal rahi thi. Saree ke kapde halke geele ho chuke the – kapda skin se chipka hua sa lag raha tha.
Mein us taraf dekh raha tha… mummy ki discomfort mujhe chilla ke keh rahi thi ki “kuch galat ho raha hai”.
Aur jaise hi maine nazar wapas samne ghumaya…
Wo driver…
mirror ke through mummy ko direct ghoor raha tha.
Uske chehre pe koi sharam nahi thi. Koi chhupana nahi.
Sirf ek ajeeb, bechai kar dene wali nazar thi – jaise wo tum dono ko test kar raha ho.
“Kabhi kabhi… sab kuch normal dikhta hai, par andar hi andar kuch toot raha hota hai.”
“Us Amini main sirf hum teen the.
Ek driver…
Ek maa…
Aur ek mein…
Aur uss waqt…
Mujhe pehli baar feel hua… ki mein mummy ko protect nahi kar paunga.”
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Nahi sir, maine aaj tak iss name se koi story nahi likhi hai. Main usually extreme stories likhta hoon jo sabko pasand aati hain, but problem yeh hoti hai ki meri stories itni bold hoti hain jis mai koi limit nahi hoti hai jiske karan maine jo 2-3 stories likhi hai wo sabhi Xforum par block ho jati hain, isliye mujhe adhe mein hi chhodna padta hai.
Iss baar main koshish kar raha hoon ki story engaging bhi rahe aur rules ke andar bhi, taki aapko poori kahani mil sake. Best content dene ke chakkar mein update thoda late ho jata hai, lekin quality ka promise hai. Thanks for the patience!
Mai jis writer ki baat kar raha hu wo bhi bold hi likhta hai xf se bahar ek likha tha maa ka naam madhuri tha aur jin related thaNahi sir, maine aaj tak iss name se koi story nahi likhi hai. Main usually extreme stories likhta hoon jo sabko pasand aati hain, but problem yeh hoti hai ki meri stories itni bold hoti hain jis mai koi limit nahi hoti hai jiske karan maine jo 2-3 stories likhi hai wo sabhi Xforum par block ho jati hain, isliye mujhe adhe mein hi chhodna padta hai.
Iss baar main koshish kar raha hoon ki story engaging bhi rahe aur rules ke andar bhi, taki aapko poori kahani mil sake. Best content dene ke chakkar mein update thoda late ho jata hai, lekin quality ka promise hai. Thanks for the patience!
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2050
ICU Room, Time: 3:02 AM
[ TV CHANNEL FLIP ]
“And here we are, 18,000 feet above sea level…”
CUT…!!!
“With AI powered auto-drive and panoramic sunroof-this is the future…”
CUT…!!!
“Ek lion gazelle ka peecha kar raha tha. Jungle. Dhool Aankhon mein khoon.”
CUT…!!!
Breaking News…!!!
“Ek aur kalank! Ek aur kahani jispar bharosa to kya, insaniyat bhi sharma jaye!”
“INDIA… ke Uttar Pradesh ke Bareilly se aayi hai ek aisi khabar jise sunkar aapka dil kaanp uthega.
Ek 27 saal ke ladke ne… apni hi dadi ke sath kiya
DUSKARM….!!!! fir unko maar diya…
Jab police ne use pakda, toh who hass raha tha. Usne bas ek line boli “Uski face mujhe irritate karta tha”
Ab sawal uthta hai – kya hum insaan reh gaye hain? Ya sirf ek ghatiya yaadon ka dher?”
Mere haath mein ek half-eaten seb tha “Apple” Wo crisp bite jo ab bhi mere daant ke beech phansa hua tha, lekin main kuch soch raha tha… bahut gehra, bahut andhera.
Room mein bas ek batti jal rahi thi-dim, neeli si, jo monitor ke side se aati thi. ICU ka wo kona jahan main pada tha, ek ajnabi duniya jaisa lagta tha. Aisi ek duniya jahan waqt ruk gaya ho… ya shayad waqt sirf mujhe dekh raha ho – ghoor kar, bina palke jhapkaye.
Main chup tha.
Main TV nahi dekh raha tha,
main us TV mein khud ko dekh raha tha.
Phir main ek aur seb ka tukda kata… dheere se. Chew kiya.
Aur jaise wo tukda gale ke ceeche gaya. maine narmi se socha :
“Yeh sab ab mujhe normal lagne laga hai.”
Maine TV ki taraf dekha – wahan ek sadhe hue insaan ki kahani chal rahi thi… Lekin mujhe pata tha…. Wo main nahi tha, Ya… Shayad main hi tha….!!!
“Main janta hoon, jab main apni kahani khatam karunga na…”
“…aap sab mujhe nafrat karne lago ge.”
“ Aur uss waqt tumhe pata chalega ki INCEST fantasy tumhara kya haal kar sakta hai.”
Toh chalo… raat ke 4 bajne wale hain. Main sone jaa raha hoon…. Baki kahani kal sunaunga.
Main dheere se apne ICU wale bed par let jaata hoon. Room main sirf ek dim light jal rahi hai – ek halki neela pan ke bulb ki roshni, jo bed ke paas lagi oxygen cylinder ke metal body pe halki si reflection maar rahi hai.
Dheere dheere mere chehre par….!!! Kalapan chane lagta hai. Aur dhire dhire, Sab kuch andhera ho jaata hai.
(Background slowly fades into an early moring sky)
Upar… asman dikh raha hai.
Pehle ek deep neela rang ka asmaan… fir thoda halka neela…. Aur fir dheere dheere pehla suraj ka rangin jhalak padta hai – jaise koi sunehra rang hawa mein ghul gaya ho.
Birds flying across the sky – ek group of pankhiyaan gol gol ghumm rahe hain… kuch seedhe udh rahe hain…
Peeche se halki si awaaz aati hai – “Allahu Akbar… Allahu Akbar…”
Ek masjid se nikalti hui woh fajr ki azaan, jo seedha dil ko choo jaati hai.
Awaaz mein koi dard nahi… koi jabar nahi… sirf shanti aur ahsaas hai… Ek aisi feeling jo andar tak utar jaaye – jaise sab kuch ruk gaya ho duniya mein.
Us azaan ke beech main, kuch bacchon ke hasne ki awwaz…
Ek kahin door se cycle bell ka chhan-chhan… aur ek gaon ke kone mein bajti hai- local chai ki tapir se uthti chai ki seeti…
Sab kuch ekdum perfect….
Lekin…
ACHANAK…
Charo taraf andhera chha jaata hai. Ek dam se – jaise kisi ne poore nazare se roshni kheench li ho.
Sky… black.
Ground… invisible.
Vo mitti ki khushboo… hawaka sarsarahat…
Sab khatam.
Sirf ek cheez baaki hai…
“Ti….”
Ek patli, tez, constant high-oitched sound…. Jo dheere se mere kaanon mein goojti hai… Aur har second ke sath zyada tez hoti ja rahi hai.
“Ti………
Ti………..TI……….TI……..TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII…….”
Mere kaam phatne lagta hai….
Mujhe lagta hai mein pagal ho raha hoon…
Mera dimaag… band ho raha hai….
Main… samajh nahi paa raha… kya ho raha hai….
Aur fir ek moment aata hai – Jahan sab kuch toot jaata hai.
Mere samne… ek shadow jhalakti hai Main use ghur kar dekh raha hota hoon.
“AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!”
Main ek jhatke se nind se jag jaata hoon.
Saans tez hai.
Peshina beh raha hai.
Chest upar neeche ho rahi hai.
Room mein sab kuch wapas hai – lekin mere chehre pe wo dar ab bhi hai.
Mummy ( ghabra ke):
“Kya hua tujhe? Koi bura sapna dekh liya kya?”
[Main thoda hichkichata hoon, lekin khud ko sambhalte hue…]
Main (kaha-suna tone mein):
“Ji mummy….kuch nahi bas ek bura sapna tha…”
Mummy (relieved sa hans ke, thoda taana deti hai):
“Hahaha… 18 saal ka ho chuka hai yaad hai na… abhi bhi darr gaya nahi kya? (Thoda haath se taunt maarkar)
Main (nazar ghuma kar, gusse se):
“Ji mummy yaad hai mujhe. Baar baar yaad dilane ki zarurat nahi hai ki main 18 ka ho gaya hoon. Aur ye mat bhooliye ki aap bhi kuch saal mein 50 ki ho jaogi.”
[Sudden silence. Background ka fan ki awaaz bhi ekdum heavy lagti hai. Mummy ekdum rukh jati hai. Expression – jhatka.]
Mummy (thoda shock ho kar):
“Acha thik hai… tu hi toh kal baar baar bol raha tha – ‘main 18 ka ho gaya, main 18 ka ho gaya’… toh maine bhi mazaak mein bol diya. Mujhe kya pata tha tujhe itna bura lag jaayega ye baat.”
Main (voice thoda tharthraata hua, lekin gusse se):
“Kal bohot kuch hua hai… agar yaad nahi hai… toh ek baar aur yaad dilaaun kya wo Amini…..!!!!!
[Room mein dead silence. Light thodi dim. Frame mummy ke aankhon mein chubhan si hoti hai. Bina kuch bole, wo dheere se palat room se nikal jaati hai.]
[Main – guilt se bhar chukka hoon. Dil ekdum heavy. Apne hi words ka echo suntan hoon apne kaan mein.]
“Maine ye kya bol diya…?”
[Main ek gehri saans leta hoon. Thoda rukta hoon. Phir mummy ke peeche jaata hoon kitchen ke taraf.]
Main (pachtaate hue, dheere se):
“Mummy… sorry. Mera matlab waise nahi tha. Galti se muh se nikal gaya. Sorry…”
[Mummy – kuch nahi kehti. Haath se chai bana rahi hoti hai.]
Main (ek aur baar, thoda narmi se):
“Aaj main school nahi jaa raha… mann nahi hai mera, Mein room mein jaa raha hoon…”
[Main apne room mein aata hoon. Darwaza lock kar deta hoon ander se, Fan ki halki awwaz, Phone jo mummy ne kal mujhe gift kara hai wo uthata hoon aur Instagram par reels dekhne lag jata hoon.]
[ Fir mere feed par dhire dhire actress ki video aane lagi aur mein aise hi dekhta raha... dekhta raha...!! Fir mere se raha nahi gaya aur kuch time baat mujhe mere Instagram suggestion par Tamanna Bhatia ki ye pic show hua
Aahhh iss ke Gore gaal curvy body, sali ko randi bana kar chodunga aahhh Tamanna aahhh.....!!!
Fir mein apne lund ko jo ki 2.5 inch ka hai.
Isko bahar nikala aur hilane laga aaahhh.....!! Tammu fuck you... Ahhhhuhh...!!
Aise bol bol kar muth marne laga
Aur muth marte marte main jab uski account par gaya toh udhar Tamanna ki aur ek pic show hua mujhe ye wala
Isko dekh kar mein pagal ho gaya
Uski dudh jaisi chubby kamar uski gori face aahhh saree pehni hui dekh kar mera lund bilkul tight ho gaya
Aahhh Tamanna randi tujhe bohot chodunga teri chut far dunga aahhh teri face ko ache se chatunga aahhh
Ek baar bas real mai mil ja.... Aahhhh
Tu meri randi hai aahhhh
Ye sab soch soch kar karib 15 min baad mera sara maal nikal gaya
Mera body dhili pad gaya pura mein thak chuka tha pura ka pura
Aur mein fir se ek baar so Gaya nanga ho kar hi
ICU Room, Time: 3:02 AM
[ TV CHANNEL FLIP ]
“And here we are, 18,000 feet above sea level…”
CUT…!!!
“With AI powered auto-drive and panoramic sunroof-this is the future…”
CUT…!!!
“Ek lion gazelle ka peecha kar raha tha. Jungle. Dhool Aankhon mein khoon.”
CUT…!!!
Breaking News…!!!
“Ek aur kalank! Ek aur kahani jispar bharosa to kya, insaniyat bhi sharma jaye!”
“INDIA… ke Uttar Pradesh ke Bareilly se aayi hai ek aisi khabar jise sunkar aapka dil kaanp uthega.
Ek 27 saal ke ladke ne… apni hi dadi ke sath kiya
DUSKARM….!!!! fir unko maar diya…
Jab police ne use pakda, toh who hass raha tha. Usne bas ek line boli “Uski face mujhe irritate karta tha”
Ab sawal uthta hai – kya hum insaan reh gaye hain? Ya sirf ek ghatiya yaadon ka dher?”
Mere haath mein ek half-eaten seb tha “Apple” Wo crisp bite jo ab bhi mere daant ke beech phansa hua tha, lekin main kuch soch raha tha… bahut gehra, bahut andhera.
Room mein bas ek batti jal rahi thi-dim, neeli si, jo monitor ke side se aati thi. ICU ka wo kona jahan main pada tha, ek ajnabi duniya jaisa lagta tha. Aisi ek duniya jahan waqt ruk gaya ho… ya shayad waqt sirf mujhe dekh raha ho – ghoor kar, bina palke jhapkaye.
Main chup tha.
Main TV nahi dekh raha tha,
main us TV mein khud ko dekh raha tha.
Phir main ek aur seb ka tukda kata… dheere se. Chew kiya.
Aur jaise wo tukda gale ke ceeche gaya. maine narmi se socha :
“Yeh sab ab mujhe normal lagne laga hai.”
Maine TV ki taraf dekha – wahan ek sadhe hue insaan ki kahani chal rahi thi… Lekin mujhe pata tha…. Wo main nahi tha, Ya… Shayad main hi tha….!!!
“Main janta hoon, jab main apni kahani khatam karunga na…”
“…aap sab mujhe nafrat karne lago ge.”
“ Aur uss waqt tumhe pata chalega ki INCEST fantasy tumhara kya haal kar sakta hai.”
Toh chalo… raat ke 4 bajne wale hain. Main sone jaa raha hoon…. Baki kahani kal sunaunga.
Main dheere se apne ICU wale bed par let jaata hoon. Room main sirf ek dim light jal rahi hai – ek halki neela pan ke bulb ki roshni, jo bed ke paas lagi oxygen cylinder ke metal body pe halki si reflection maar rahi hai.
Dheere dheere mere chehre par….!!! Kalapan chane lagta hai. Aur dhire dhire, Sab kuch andhera ho jaata hai.
(Background slowly fades into an early moring sky)
Upar… asman dikh raha hai.
Pehle ek deep neela rang ka asmaan… fir thoda halka neela…. Aur fir dheere dheere pehla suraj ka rangin jhalak padta hai – jaise koi sunehra rang hawa mein ghul gaya ho.
Birds flying across the sky – ek group of pankhiyaan gol gol ghumm rahe hain… kuch seedhe udh rahe hain…
Peeche se halki si awaaz aati hai – “Allahu Akbar… Allahu Akbar…”
Ek masjid se nikalti hui woh fajr ki azaan, jo seedha dil ko choo jaati hai.
Awaaz mein koi dard nahi… koi jabar nahi… sirf shanti aur ahsaas hai… Ek aisi feeling jo andar tak utar jaaye – jaise sab kuch ruk gaya ho duniya mein.
Us azaan ke beech main, kuch bacchon ke hasne ki awwaz…
Ek kahin door se cycle bell ka chhan-chhan… aur ek gaon ke kone mein bajti hai- local chai ki tapir se uthti chai ki seeti…
Sab kuch ekdum perfect….
Lekin…
ACHANAK…
Charo taraf andhera chha jaata hai. Ek dam se – jaise kisi ne poore nazare se roshni kheench li ho.
Sky… black.
Ground… invisible.
Vo mitti ki khushboo… hawaka sarsarahat…
Sab khatam.
Sirf ek cheez baaki hai…
“Ti….”
Ek patli, tez, constant high-oitched sound…. Jo dheere se mere kaanon mein goojti hai… Aur har second ke sath zyada tez hoti ja rahi hai.
“Ti………
Ti………..TI……….TI……..TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII…….”
Mere kaam phatne lagta hai….
Mujhe lagta hai mein pagal ho raha hoon…
Mera dimaag… band ho raha hai….
Main… samajh nahi paa raha… kya ho raha hai….
Aur fir ek moment aata hai – Jahan sab kuch toot jaata hai.
Mere samne… ek shadow jhalakti hai Main use ghur kar dekh raha hota hoon.
“AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!”
Main ek jhatke se nind se jag jaata hoon.
Saans tez hai.
Peshina beh raha hai.
Chest upar neeche ho rahi hai.
Room mein sab kuch wapas hai – lekin mere chehre pe wo dar ab bhi hai.
Mummy ( ghabra ke):
“Kya hua tujhe? Koi bura sapna dekh liya kya?”
[Main thoda hichkichata hoon, lekin khud ko sambhalte hue…]
Main (kaha-suna tone mein):
“Ji mummy….kuch nahi bas ek bura sapna tha…”
Mummy (relieved sa hans ke, thoda taana deti hai):
“Hahaha… 18 saal ka ho chuka hai yaad hai na… abhi bhi darr gaya nahi kya? (Thoda haath se taunt maarkar)
Main (nazar ghuma kar, gusse se):
“Ji mummy yaad hai mujhe. Baar baar yaad dilane ki zarurat nahi hai ki main 18 ka ho gaya hoon. Aur ye mat bhooliye ki aap bhi kuch saal mein 50 ki ho jaogi.”
[Sudden silence. Background ka fan ki awaaz bhi ekdum heavy lagti hai. Mummy ekdum rukh jati hai. Expression – jhatka.]
Mummy (thoda shock ho kar):
“Acha thik hai… tu hi toh kal baar baar bol raha tha – ‘main 18 ka ho gaya, main 18 ka ho gaya’… toh maine bhi mazaak mein bol diya. Mujhe kya pata tha tujhe itna bura lag jaayega ye baat.”
Main (voice thoda tharthraata hua, lekin gusse se):
“Kal bohot kuch hua hai… agar yaad nahi hai… toh ek baar aur yaad dilaaun kya wo Amini…..!!!!!
[Room mein dead silence. Light thodi dim. Frame mummy ke aankhon mein chubhan si hoti hai. Bina kuch bole, wo dheere se palat room se nikal jaati hai.]
[Main – guilt se bhar chukka hoon. Dil ekdum heavy. Apne hi words ka echo suntan hoon apne kaan mein.]
“Maine ye kya bol diya…?”
[Main ek gehri saans leta hoon. Thoda rukta hoon. Phir mummy ke peeche jaata hoon kitchen ke taraf.]
Main (pachtaate hue, dheere se):
“Mummy… sorry. Mera matlab waise nahi tha. Galti se muh se nikal gaya. Sorry…”
[Mummy – kuch nahi kehti. Haath se chai bana rahi hoti hai.]
Main (ek aur baar, thoda narmi se):
“Aaj main school nahi jaa raha… mann nahi hai mera, Mein room mein jaa raha hoon…”
[Main apne room mein aata hoon. Darwaza lock kar deta hoon ander se, Fan ki halki awwaz, Phone jo mummy ne kal mujhe gift kara hai wo uthata hoon aur Instagram par reels dekhne lag jata hoon.]
[ Fir mere feed par dhire dhire actress ki video aane lagi aur mein aise hi dekhta raha... dekhta raha...!! Fir mere se raha nahi gaya aur kuch time baat mujhe mere Instagram suggestion par Tamanna Bhatia ki ye pic show hua
Aahhh iss ke Gore gaal curvy body, sali ko randi bana kar chodunga aahhh Tamanna aahhh.....!!!
Fir mein apne lund ko jo ki 2.5 inch ka hai.
Isko bahar nikala aur hilane laga aaahhh.....!! Tammu fuck you... Ahhhhuhh...!!
Aise bol bol kar muth marne laga
Aur muth marte marte main jab uski account par gaya toh udhar Tamanna ki aur ek pic show hua mujhe ye wala
Isko dekh kar mein pagal ho gaya
Uski dudh jaisi chubby kamar uski gori face aahhh saree pehni hui dekh kar mera lund bilkul tight ho gaya
Aahhh Tamanna randi tujhe bohot chodunga teri chut far dunga aahhh teri face ko ache se chatunga aahhh
Ek baar bas real mai mil ja.... Aahhhh
Tu meri randi hai aahhhh
Ye sab soch soch kar karib 15 min baad mera sara maal nikal gaya
Mera body dhili pad gaya pura mein thak chuka tha pura ka pura
Aur mein fir se ek baar so Gaya nanga ho kar hi
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Intersting writing style and story setup. Let's see where it goes.
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Nice update aur hua kya tha aur age kya hoga2050
ICU Room, Time: 3:02 AM
[ TV CHANNEL FLIP ]
“And here we are, 18,000 feet above sea level…”
CUT…!!!
“With AI powered auto-drive and panoramic sunroof-this is the future…”
CUT…!!!
“Ek lion gazelle ka peecha kar raha tha. Jungle. Dhool Aankhon mein khoon.”
CUT…!!!
Breaking News…!!!
“Ek aur kalank! Ek aur kahani jispar bharosa to kya, insaniyat bhi sharma jaye!”
“INDIA… ke Uttar Pradesh ke Bareilly se aayi hai ek aisi khabar jise sunkar aapka dil kaanp uthega.
Ek 27 saal ke ladke ne… apni hi dadi ke sath kiya
DUSKARM….!!!! fir unko maar diya…
Jab police ne use pakda, toh who hass raha tha. Usne bas ek line boli “Uski face mujhe irritate karta tha”
Ab sawal uthta hai – kya hum insaan reh gaye hain? Ya sirf ek ghatiya yaadon ka dher?”
Mere haath mein ek half-eaten seb tha “Apple” Wo crisp bite jo ab bhi mere daant ke beech phansa hua tha, lekin main kuch soch raha tha… bahut gehra, bahut andhera.
Room mein bas ek batti jal rahi thi-dim, neeli si, jo monitor ke side se aati thi. ICU ka wo kona jahan main pada tha, ek ajnabi duniya jaisa lagta tha. Aisi ek duniya jahan waqt ruk gaya ho… ya shayad waqt sirf mujhe dekh raha ho – ghoor kar, bina palke jhapkaye.
Main chup tha.
Main TV nahi dekh raha tha,
main us TV mein khud ko dekh raha tha.
Phir main ek aur seb ka tukda kata… dheere se. Chew kiya.
Aur jaise wo tukda gale ke ceeche gaya. maine narmi se socha :
“Yeh sab ab mujhe normal lagne laga hai.”
Maine TV ki taraf dekha – wahan ek sadhe hue insaan ki kahani chal rahi thi… Lekin mujhe pata tha…. Wo main nahi tha, Ya… Shayad main hi tha….!!!
“Main janta hoon, jab main apni kahani khatam karunga na…”
“…aap sab mujhe nafrat karne lago ge.”
“ Aur uss waqt tumhe pata chalega ki INCEST fantasy tumhara kya haal kar sakta hai.”
Toh chalo… raat ke 4 bajne wale hain. Main sone jaa raha hoon…. Baki kahani kal sunaunga.
Main dheere se apne ICU wale bed par let jaata hoon. Room main sirf ek dim light jal rahi hai – ek halki neela pan ke bulb ki roshni, jo bed ke paas lagi oxygen cylinder ke metal body pe halki si reflection maar rahi hai.
Dheere dheere mere chehre par….!!! Kalapan chane lagta hai. Aur dhire dhire, Sab kuch andhera ho jaata hai.
(Background slowly fades into an early moring sky)
Upar… asman dikh raha hai.
Pehle ek deep neela rang ka asmaan… fir thoda halka neela…. Aur fir dheere dheere pehla suraj ka rangin jhalak padta hai – jaise koi sunehra rang hawa mein ghul gaya ho.
Birds flying across the sky – ek group of pankhiyaan gol gol ghumm rahe hain… kuch seedhe udh rahe hain…
Peeche se halki si awaaz aati hai – “Allahu Akbar… Allahu Akbar…”
Ek masjid se nikalti hui woh fajr ki azaan, jo seedha dil ko choo jaati hai.
Awaaz mein koi dard nahi… koi jabar nahi… sirf shanti aur ahsaas hai… Ek aisi feeling jo andar tak utar jaaye – jaise sab kuch ruk gaya ho duniya mein.
Us azaan ke beech main, kuch bacchon ke hasne ki awwaz…
Ek kahin door se cycle bell ka chhan-chhan… aur ek gaon ke kone mein bajti hai- local chai ki tapir se uthti chai ki seeti…
Sab kuch ekdum perfect….
Lekin…
ACHANAK…
Charo taraf andhera chha jaata hai. Ek dam se – jaise kisi ne poore nazare se roshni kheench li ho.
Sky… black.
Ground… invisible.
Vo mitti ki khushboo… hawaka sarsarahat…
Sab khatam.
Sirf ek cheez baaki hai…
“Ti….”
Ek patli, tez, constant high-oitched sound…. Jo dheere se mere kaanon mein goojti hai… Aur har second ke sath zyada tez hoti ja rahi hai.
“Ti………
Ti………..TI……….TI……..TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII…….”
Mere kaam phatne lagta hai….
Mujhe lagta hai mein pagal ho raha hoon…
Mera dimaag… band ho raha hai….
Main… samajh nahi paa raha… kya ho raha hai….
Aur fir ek moment aata hai – Jahan sab kuch toot jaata hai.
Mere samne… ek shadow jhalakti hai Main use ghur kar dekh raha hota hoon.
“AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!”
Main ek jhatke se nind se jag jaata hoon.
Saans tez hai.
Peshina beh raha hai.
Chest upar neeche ho rahi hai.
Room mein sab kuch wapas hai – lekin mere chehre pe wo dar ab bhi hai.
Mummy ( ghabra ke):
“Kya hua tujhe? Koi bura sapna dekh liya kya?”
[Main thoda hichkichata hoon, lekin khud ko sambhalte hue…]
Main (kaha-suna tone mein):
“Ji mummy….kuch nahi bas ek bura sapna tha…”
Mummy (relieved sa hans ke, thoda taana deti hai):
“Hahaha… 18 saal ka ho chuka hai yaad hai na… abhi bhi darr gaya nahi kya? (Thoda haath se taunt maarkar)
Main (nazar ghuma kar, gusse se):
“Ji mummy yaad hai mujhe. Baar baar yaad dilane ki zarurat nahi hai ki main 18 ka ho gaya hoon. Aur ye mat bhooliye ki aap bhi kuch saal mein 50 ki ho jaogi.”
[Sudden silence. Background ka fan ki awaaz bhi ekdum heavy lagti hai. Mummy ekdum rukh jati hai. Expression – jhatka.]
Mummy (thoda shock ho kar):
“Acha thik hai… tu hi toh kal baar baar bol raha tha – ‘main 18 ka ho gaya, main 18 ka ho gaya’… toh maine bhi mazaak mein bol diya. Mujhe kya pata tha tujhe itna bura lag jaayega ye baat.”
Main (voice thoda tharthraata hua, lekin gusse se):
“Kal bohot kuch hua hai… agar yaad nahi hai… toh ek baar aur yaad dilaaun kya wo Amini…..!!!!!
[Room mein dead silence. Light thodi dim. Frame mummy ke aankhon mein chubhan si hoti hai. Bina kuch bole, wo dheere se palat room se nikal jaati hai.]
[Main – guilt se bhar chukka hoon. Dil ekdum heavy. Apne hi words ka echo suntan hoon apne kaan mein.]
“Maine ye kya bol diya…?”
[Main ek gehri saans leta hoon. Thoda rukta hoon. Phir mummy ke peeche jaata hoon kitchen ke taraf.]
Main (pachtaate hue, dheere se):
“Mummy… sorry. Mera matlab waise nahi tha. Galti se muh se nikal gaya. Sorry…”
[Mummy – kuch nahi kehti. Haath se chai bana rahi hoti hai.]
Main (ek aur baar, thoda narmi se):
“Aaj main school nahi jaa raha… mann nahi hai mera, Mein room mein jaa raha hoon…”
[Main apne room mein aata hoon. Darwaza lock kar deta hoon ander se, Fan ki halki awwaz, Phone jo mummy ne kal mujhe gift kara hai wo uthata hoon aur Instagram par reels dekhne lag jata hoon.]
[ Fir mere feed par dhire dhire actress ki video aane lagi aur mein aise hi dekhta raha... dekhta raha...!! Fir mere se raha nahi gaya aur kuch time baat mujhe mere Instagram suggestion par Tamanna Bhatia ki ye pic show hua
Aahhh iss ke Gore gaal curvy body, sali ko randi bana kar chodunga aahhh Tamanna aahhh.....!!!
Fir mein apne lund ko jo ki 2.5 inch ka hai.
Isko bahar nikala aur hilane laga aaahhh.....!! Tammu fuck you... Ahhhhuhh...!!
Aise bol bol kar muth marne laga
Aur muth marte marte main jab uski account par gaya toh udhar Tamanna ki aur ek pic show hua mujhe ye wala
Isko dekh kar mein pagal ho gaya
Uski dudh jaisi chubby kamar uski gori face aahhh saree pehni hui dekh kar mera lund bilkul tight ho gaya
Aahhh Tamanna randi tujhe bohot chodunga teri chut far dunga aahhh teri face ko ache se chatunga aahhh
Ek baar bas real mai mil ja.... Aahhhh
Tu meri randi hai aahhhh
Ye sab soch soch kar karib 15 min baad mera sara maal nikal gaya
Mera body dhili pad gaya pura mein thak chuka tha pura ka pura
Aur mein fir se ek baar so Gaya nanga ho kar hi