Fantasy Magistic Veer

[Prince2000]

Update 04
Veer…haan ab bataok itne stars on kiye
Anita…tum believe nhi karo ge first try me he me ne do stars on kar diye
Veer…mujhe b yahi umeed the q k tum dihan lagana jante the bas focus nhi kar pa rahe the aj jab sahi direction mili to tum kamyab ho gai ab tu bata
Raj…3 stars or chuta adha on howa hai matlab us me b tori chamak a gai hai
Anita…what 3 stars shuru me he
Raj…to is me itna herani ke kya baat hai bataya to tha hum khab se ye kar rahe hai
Us ke baad hum tori or batain ke or break khatam ho gaya to hum wapis apni class me chale gai jaha sania maam mojood the
(yaha ka school system alag hai ik he teacher ik class ko daikhte hai or us class ke har student ke liye she is responsible)
Sania…ok bacho aj tum sab ko baghe diye jai ge jis se ap apne magician ke costum select kar sakte hai costum kaisa ho ye apne deicide karna hai ye is baat ka saboot ho ge that u r a magician
Phr sab students ko ik ik baghe diya gaya phr school se chutti howi to hum apne apne ghar chale gai
Papa b ghar par mojood the or kaam par jane ke tayari kar rahe the
Veer…dad ap kaha ja rahe hai
Dad…kaam pe beta or kaha
Veer…likin ap ne to agency ka plan kiya tha
Dad…haan beta likin soch raha ho jab ye kaam start karna he hai to sahi tareeke se start karo or us ke liye paiso ke zarorat ho ge is liye filhal ye idea kuch waqt ke liye drop kar diya hai
Veer…jaise ap ko thek lage dad
Dad…waise aj ka din kaise guzra
Veer…bht bariya aj ik or friend b bana liya us ka naam anita hai wo b meri tarah fire element user hai
Dad…ohhh mtlb gf bana le hai
Veer…come on dad gf nhi hai srf friend hai or kuch nhi
Dad…chalo pehle fresh ho ke khana kha lo
Phr me fresh howa or hum dono ne mil kar khana khaya khana khane ke baad papa kaam pe nikal gai me b apne kamre me aram karne nikal gaya or meri ankh lag gai
Wo din phr aise he nikal gaya agle din school ke liye tayar ho ke me nikal gaya to raj or anita school gate pe he wait kar rahe the
Me un se mila or hum theno class me chale gai tori dair me school bell howe or maam class me a gai
Sania…ok bacho ab tum logo ko apne magic ka pata chal chuka hai or apne element ko kaise powerful banana hai ye b pata lag gaya hai tume
Sab…yes mam
Sania…ab se tum logo ke ik dusre se muqable ho ge ta ke tum apne element ko ache se use kar sako
Anita…par maam class me kai aise log b hai jo abbi apne element ko use nhi kar pa rahe
Sania…me jante ho anita or mere nazar sab par hote hai is liye me janti ho kis ko kis ke samne kara karna hai
Anita…thek hai maam
Sania…ok bacho sab practice hall me poncho
Sab students practice hall me ponch gai
Sania…sab a gai to pehla moqabla karate hai sameer or veer ka
Sameer…hahaha lagta hai aj mere kismat chamak rahe hai
Sania…donoab moqabla kare ge sirf magic se physical combat nhi ho ga
Sameer…maam agar is ko chot lag gai to
Sania…magic combat me ye amm baat hai waise b healing teacher yaha mojood hai is liye gabrane ke koi baat nhi hai
Raj…veer yahi sahi moka hai is ko sabaak sikane ka ab to maam ne b ijazat de de hai
Veer…mera irada b wahi hai
Or hum dono muskura utte
Sania…chalo dono combat area me jao
Hum dono combat area me ponch gai sameer mujhe daikh ke muskura raha tha jab ke me kamosh kara tha
Sania…start
Sameer…freezing blaze
Or isse ke sath barfeli hawa chalne lage or combat ground jamne laga
Veer…flame circle
Is ke sath he mere ird gird agg bharak uthe freezing blaze meri aag ke diwar par nhi kar pai abbi sirf first star combat chal raha tha
Sameer ne jab apna war khali jate daika to or gusse me a gaya
Sameer…ice typhoon
Sameer gusse me a ke apna second star ke waar karne laga or ik barfila bawander mere taraf anne laga
Veer…fire typhoon
Me ne b apne second star ka fire typhoon bana diya dono apass me takra gai or daikhte he daikhte dono khatam ho gai
Veer…kya howa tum me bas itna he dam hai
Sameer pehle se ghusse me tha mere fikre ne agg me ghee ka kaam kiya wo or zyada barak utha
Sameer…ab tume koi nhi bacha sakta “ice cage”
Ice cage starters ka aisa magic hai jis me starters level ka banda band ho jai to barf ke waja se maar b sakta hai
Kiran…maam rokye inne veer mar jai ga
Likin sania ne hath ke ishare se usse chup kara diya or battle ko dikhne ka ishara kiya
Veer…flame blast
Or isse ke sath us cage me blast howa or cage ke chetre urr gai
Veer…fire ball
Or theen fire ball sameer par chor diye
Sameer apne cage ke halat daikh ke sadme me tha is liye wo apna bachao na kar saka or theno fire ball ja ke sameer ko lage or wahi zakhmi ho ke behosh ho gaya
Healing teacher jaldi se us ke pass gai or usse heal karne lage
Sania…bht khoob veer lagta hai tum ne 3 star open kar liye hai
Veer…g maam
Kiran…mtlb ab tum mere barabar a gai ho
Me ne us ka jawab na diya bas muskura diya
Raj…maam srf is ne nhi me ne b 3 stars open kiye hai
Sania…kya waqi me
Raj…g maam
Sania…magar kaise
Raj…maam hum dono pehle se he dihan lagate the is liye koi problem nhi howe
Sania…or anita tum b in ke group me ho na
Anita…g maam likin mere srf 2 stars open howe hai
Sania…bht khoob ab is baar competition me hum b hissa le sake he
Raj…kaisa competition mam
Sania…har saal school me internally competition hote hai or jo us me jetta hai usse school ke taraf se ik magic gear milta hai
Raj…wow maam phr is bar me zaroor hissa lo ga apni kismat azmao ga
Sania…zaroor us me har koi hissa le sakta hai abbi us me bht waqt hai is liye apni magic power or barao
Anita…zaroor maam me b kismat azmao ge
Phr isse tarah batain karte howe or mokablo me school ka time khatam howa or sab apne apne ghar chale gai
Ghar par papa nhi the wo kaam se gai howe the is liye khud khana bana ke kha liya
Phr me apne kamre me a gaya or dihan me baith gaya
Veer…mikki mujhe batao ke me kaise apne powers ko barao
Mikki…veer sirf dihan se he tum apne power ko bara sakte ho or koi tarika nhi hai
Veer…likin is me to bht time lag jai ga
Mikki…veer bolo maat tum ab srf ik school student ho is liye kafi time hai tumare pass srf apne stars ko activate karo abbi
Veer…thek hai mikki
Us ke baad me apne fifth star ko activate karne me lag gya likin ye itna asan nhi tha
Chale veer ko dihan lagane de hum tora or is world ke bare me jante hai
Yaha ka map bilkul muktalif hai yaha countries nhi hote sirf cities he hote hai
Is world bht se cities hai likin yaha 5 cities hai HU city jaha hum rehte hai yaha zyada thar humans he rehte hai
Us ke baad EL city ye elfs city hai
DH city ye demi humans city hai
DE city demon city demons hai is ka matlab ye nhi ke ue villans hai ye b ik peaceful city hai
Or last me central magical city ye sab se bare city hai or yaha koi b a sakta hai matlab humans demi humans elfs and demons
Magical city is liye isse kaha jata hai ke yaha sab se bare magic ke university hai or yaha charo cities se log atte hai
In cities ke ilawa baki sara area forest hai jaha janwar rehte the likin inne monsters kaha jata tha in forest me jaise hamari cities hai waise he or b hai likin monsters ke waja se ik dusre se contact nhi hai
Q k monsters humans,elfs,demi humans or demons ko khate the
Monsters me b level the jisme sabse neche darje ka tha wo hai
One Eye Rat
Is ka akar ik admi jitna hota hai is ka vision sahi nhi hota ye body temperature se insan ka pata karta hai
One Eye wolf
Is ka akar admi se dugna hota hai is ke speed normal he hai or hathyar is ke panje or dant hai
3 Eyes wolf
Is ka akar insan se 5 guna zuada hota hai speed nhi hai is me kafi taqatwar hota hai
Dragon wolf
Is ka jisam to dragon jaisa hota hai dragon ke tarah pank b hote hai or urr b sakta hai likin sir wolf ka hota hai ye apne mou se sonic wave or fire dono attack kar sakta hai or isse srf ik majestic level banda he hara sakta hai
(Ab readers kom mazeed bore na karte howe story ko forward karte hai or jaha se interesting ho ge waha se shuru karte hai)
5 Years later
Aj veer apne high school ke last year me tha
Me raj or anita ka ik group bana howa tha or raj or anita ka pyar b parwan char raha tha jis ka ilam srf mujhe tha
Kiran apne family ke rasokh ke waja se aj expert level pe ponch gai the or 2 saal pehle he school chor kar chali gai the
Q k us ke family rich the is liye equipment un ke liye koi mushkil nhi the manage karna
Khair aj hum sab city forest border par ja rahe the apne assignment ke liye school ke taraf se
Waha ke soldiers ko pehle he hamare bare me bataya gaya tha is liye camp thak ponchne me hame koi pareshani nhi howe
Pehla jatka tab laga jab camp me hum ne army head prabhas mehta ko daikha
Sania…sir ap or yaha
Prabhas…haan me aj young generation ke welcome ke liye idar mojood ho or jab thak ye yaha hai tab thak raho ga
Sare students prabhas ko daikh ke heratzada or exited the mujhe chor ke
Raj or anita b un me shamil the likin me normal behave kar raha tha jo ke prabhas ne b note kar liya likin kaha kuch nhi
Prabhas…sab log safar se thak gai ho ge is liye aj aram kar le kal se sab shuru ho ga
Un ke kehne ke baad hume hamare camp me le jaya gaya har ik apne group me tha
Me or raj ik he camp me the anita ko girls camp me bejh diya gaya tha
Abhi dopeher he the is liye sab ko lunch karne bolaya gaya jab sab kha chuke to me ne raj se kaha
Veer…chal zara forest ghoom ke atte hai
Raj…are pagla gaya hai kya ye sheher nhi forest hai or agar halti se b koi monster mil gaya na to phr aj hume roast kar ke wo party kare ge
Veer…chal to phr apne mena ke sath gutargu kar me chala
Me samjh gaya tha wo q inkar kar raha hai is liye me akela he nikal gaya
Veer ko tora jungle me agge jane daite hai or ik short naxar dalte hai in 5 years par
Veer ke dad ne agency khol le the or magical city shift ho gai the mujhe bht kaha likin me nhi gaya me ne kaha ke high school ke bad ao ga
Sania maam ne in panch salo me mujhe bht kuch siksya tha fire element ke hawale se
Sania maam ke waja se he me ne fire element ka fifth star open kiya jab ke lighting element ka me ne kisi ko kuch nhi bataya tha is liye us ke training me mikki ke sath kiya karta tha
Sania maam ka figure b acha tha age b laghbag 27 ho ge magar 19 se zyada ke nhi lagte the
Competition ka b bata do jo har saal hota tha pehle saal ke baad me ne hissa nhi liya us me b me ne match ho forfeit kar diya tha q k competition me zyada thar seniors the
Ye nhi tha ke me un ka mokabla nhi kar sakta tha mokabla kar sakta tha likin us ke liye mujhe apni asli power use karne parte jo ke me nhi chahta tha
BACK TO PRESENT
Me forest me kafi agge nikal ayya tha or mujhe koi soldier b nhi dikha shaid lunch break ke waja se me itna age nikl ayya warna mujhe agge bilkul b nhi anne daite
Veer…mikki zara area skan karo koi monster to nhi hai nazfeek
Mikki…skanning……….skanning complete..nhi veer hamare 5 km ke radius me koi monster nhi hai likin ik gufa hai tum se 500 meter ke dori par
Veer…gufa kis taraf
Mikki ne mujhe directions bataye to me waha ponch gaya likin mujhe kuch nazar nhi ayya
Veer…gufa kaha hai mikki mujhe to kuch nazar nhi a raha
Mikki…samne jo pather me greenre nazar a rahe hai waja jao
Me waha chala gaya
Mikki…ab is bush ko hatao
Me ne bush ko hata diya to samne gufa nazar a gai
Veer…kya baat hai yaar tum na batate to me kabhi b is ko donde na pata
Me gufa ke ander chala gaya gufa me kafi andera tha is liye apne fire magic use kar ke me roshni ke or ander jane laga
Veer…mikki koi khtra to nhi hai ander
Mikki…scanning………nhi koi khatra nhi hai
Mikki ke kehne ke baad me ander janne laga gufa kafi bare the 10 min chalne ke baad me ik kule jaga poncha or jo daikha mere ankhain khuli ke khuli reh gai
Ander sone ka ambar laga howa or jaga table para howa tha us par ik sword ik black colour ka locket ik ring ik book or ik pouch para howa tha
Veer…ye sab kya hai
Mikki…kisse ka khazana lagta hai jo tume mil gaya hai
Tabhi me ne pouch ko utaya to us se ik roshni mere andar chale gai
Veer…ye kya tha
Mikki…ye ik magic pouch hai is me ap koi b chez rakh sakte hai beshak wo kitne he bare q na ho is se is ke wazan pe koi farak nhi pare ga or ab ye pouch ap ke naam ho gaya hai isse ab srf ap he use kar sakte hai or koi nhi
Veer…mtlb ye khazana me is me rakh sakta ho
Mikki…haan bilkul bas poucu ka mou khazane ke taraf kar de sara is me samma jai ga
Me ne bilkul waise he kiya or sare moti jawaherat or sona pauch ke andar chala gaya jaise kuch tha he nhi yaha par
Veer…ab ye talwar locket or anguti or book ye kya hai
Mikki…ye sab b magical items hai khas kar ke ye locket ye bht he rare hai isse abbi pehen lo ye ap ke power ko increase karne me kafi madad kar sakta hai
Me ne jalti se wo locket pehen liya pehenne ke baad wo tori dair chamka us ke baad shant ho gaya
Angoti healing magic ke the jis ke pass ho us ke gao khud ba khud heal ho jate hai is liye usse b pehen liya or sword or book ko me ne pouch me rakh liya
Ye sab karne ke baad me waha se nikal ayya or wapis chala ayya
Wapsi me b mujhe koi nazar nhi aya to me sidha apne camp me chala gaya jaha raj or anita ik dosre ko kiss karne me lage howe the
Unne mere anne ka bilkul b pata na chala mujhe dono ka pata to tha magar kiss karte howe pehli bar daikh raha tha
Veer…aahhhmmmm ahhhhmmmm
Mere kansne se dono ko hosh ayya or mujhe daikhte he dono ke toote urr gai
Anita to jaldi se waha se bhag gai jab ke raj apni bhagle jankne laga
Veer…chal raj naha ke atte hai phr dihan me b batna hai
Me ne baat badal de ta ke wo or sharminda na ho
Raj…haan q nhi chal
Camp ke pass he nadi guzarti the hum dono waha chale gai to prabhas sir pehle he ik pathar pe dihan me baithe howe the
Raj or main b nahaye or sir ke pass patharo par dihan me baith gai hum pata nhi kab thak dihan me baite rahe likin jb ankh kholi to andera cha chuka tha or sir hum dono ko he daikh rahe the
Prabhas…bht bariya is dafa kuch ache students b ayye hai yaha par mujhe bht khushi howe tumd dono ko aise dihan me daikh ke
Raj…bas sir adaat ho gai hai
Prabhas…to raj tum ne chaar stars open kar liye hai or veer tum ne panch
Raj…kya panch abbe ye me kya sun raha ho to ne to mujhe chaar kaha tha
Veer…nhi sir mere chaar stars he open hai
Prabhas…beta me magistic level ho is liye mujhe stars ka pata chal jata hai ke kis ke kitne stars open hai
Mujhe pata chal gaya ke abbi bht kuch hai jo mujhe nhi pata is liye me ne sir neche kar liya jo raj ne b daikh liya
Raj…camp chal phr batata ho tujhe
Prabhas…ab do itne ache students mile hai to kuch sikhao na ye galat ho ga
Hum dono un ke baat se achambit ho gai q k hum ne un ke bare suna tha wo kissi ko kuch nhi sikate
Prabhas…apna pehla sabak sikh lo aj stars ko apen karne ke bajaye jo open stars hai un par itna control pa lo ke tume magic ka naam na lena pare srf soch se he magic activate ho jai
Ye kehte sath he wo nikal gai likin jate jate un ke nazar meri pouch par par gai
Jis ko daikhte he un ke ankhain herat se pail gai likin khud ko control kiya or waha se bina kuch poche nikal gai
Raj…ye sir ne abbi kya kaha kuch samjh laga
Veer…haan lag gai jab dihan me baithe ge tab bata do ga
Us ke baad hum camp me chale ayye raat ka khana kaya or so gai
Agli subah 4 baje mere ankh khul gai raj ke taraf daikha to wo ab b so raha tha
Me ne us ke pichaware pe laat mare
Raj…aye maa maar dala re are sale laat q mare
Veer…ab anita ko to bula nhi sakta na ke wo ayye or kiss kar ke tume jagaye ab jaldi uth fresh ho ke dihan b karna hai
Anita ka naam sunte he wo chup ho gaya or ache bache ke trah uth gaya
Hum dono phr kal wali jaga par ponch gai aj waha koi nhi tha is liye ache se nahaya or apni kal wali jaga par a gai
Veer…raj aj apni sare concentration apne open stars par lagana nai stars ko open karne me nhi samjh gai
Raj…samjh gaya
Or phir hum dono dihan me chale gai or apne open stars par dihan lagaya jis se wo stars chamkne lge
Mere do element the is liye me ne srf fire element par dihan lagaya q k me nhi chahta tha k mere dosre element ka kissi ko pata chale
Aisa karte he mere or raj ke element bahir anne lage
Me or raj pehle is phase se guzar chuke the is liye us ko wapis apne andar kaid karne lage jis se stars ke chamak or bhar gai
Lamha ba lamha wo chamak or bharne lagi
Apni powers ko kaid karna or stars ke chamak ke waja se hum dono ke halat kharab hone lage or hume pasina anne laga likin hum dono ne dihan nhi tora
Tori dair baad humare element shant ho gai likin stars ab b chamak rahe the hume b tori rahat milli tori dair baad hum ne ankhain khol de to daikha sir wahi kare hai or hume daikh muskura rahe hai
Un ko daikh ke hum jaldi se kare ho gai
Prabhas…bht khoob raat ko yahi milna dosra sabak hasil karne ke liye
Ye kehte sath he wo waha se nikal gai or hum b ja ke tayar ho kar baki students ko join kiya
Tori dair baad prabhas sir or un ke sath un ke panch sub ordinates stage pe ayye
Prabhas…hello students ap sab mujhe jante hai is liye fazool ke intro me time waste nhi karo ga
Tum sab ne ab thak apne element par ache se kabo kar liya ho ga or mere report par he tum pass ya fail ho ge
Agar pass ho gai to agge future bright ho ga or agar fail ho gai to future dark
Me kal ik report phar raha tha to yaha is area me ik one eye wolf daikha gaya hai or tum sab ne usse harana hai
Agar kissi ne usse hara diya ya maar diya to sab ko A category me pass kar do ga or jis ke karkardagi ache howe usse ik magic gear b gift karo ga
Or agar tum har gai to fail karne ke zarorat he nhi hoge mujhe q k tab tum sab ko wo apni khurrak bana chuka ho ga
Sania…sir ye abbi bache hai or in ke pass practical experince
Prabhas…sania hum yaha koi bacho ka game nhi khel rahe soldier ke ik galti or zindagi khatam aj nhi to kal inne experience hasil karna he ho ga to aj se he sahi
Ik baat or jisse daar lag raha hai wo yahi camp me reh sakta hai or is ka mtlb F yani fail hoga wo
Is ke liye tum sab apne group bana sakte ho wo tumare marzi jo jana chahe wo bata de jo nhi jana chahe wo b
Veer…location sir
Mere baat pe sab meri taraf herat se daikhne lage raj or anita ko chor ke me ne ye baat bina koi waqt ginwaye kahi the
Mere baat pe prabhas sir ke honto pe b muskhan a gai shaid wo mujh se aise he jawab ke tawaqo kar rahe the
Prabhas…kitna group hai tumara
Veer…sir hum theen logo ka group hai or hum itne he jai ge
Prabhas…waise to tum ne sun he liya ho ga agar waha tum me se kisi ko kuch ho gaya us ke zimidar tum khud ho ge
Veer…janta ho sir
Prabhas…Thek hai
Unno ne apni sathi ko ishara kiya to wo sir hilata ho hamare pass a gaya
A1…chaliye
Me raj or anita us ke sath waha se nikal gai sameer apne baki chamcho ke sath baat karne laga or hum nikal gai
A1…yaha se sidha jao ge koi 15 min ke safar ke baad tume ik khai nazar aye ge waha wo monster daikha gaya hai
Us ke baat sun kar hum waha se nikal gai us taraf jaha ka us ne bataya tha koi 15 min baad waki me waha kai a gai
Is doran sameer ne sab se baat kar ke baki ke sare class ko apne sath mila liya or unno ne b sir ko bata diya wo b kai ke taraf chal pare jab wo nikle tab thak hum waha ponch gai the
Veer…kya irada hai chale neche
Raj…ab jab a he gai to neche na jana bewaqofi ho ge
Anita…nhi abbi nhi yaha se neche pore kai nazar a rahe hai pehle us monster ke location check karte hai us ke baad
Veer…keh to tum thek rahe ho q k ye hamara pehla moka hai agar tori se ghar bhar b ho gai to hamara patta saaf
Phr hum theno theno disha me pail gai or neche monster ke location check karne lage ke wo is waqt kaha hai
Aisa check karte karte hum theno ko ik gufa nazar aye jo kafi bare the hum theno waha ponch gai
Tab thak baki ke class b ponch gai the magar hum ne un par dihan nhi diya
Raj…pore kai me wo nhi hai ab ye gufa he bacha hai yahi ho sakta hai wo
Sameer hamare qareeb he tha us ne sun liya
Sameer…ice slide
Us ne barf se slide bana le
Sameer…chalo chale
Or ik ik kar ke wo slide se neche janne lage
Veer…raj anita ko pakar kar nevhe jao
Raj wind element tha is liye wo aram se urr sakta tha
Raj ne anita ko goud me utaya or jump kar ke kai me chala gaya
Us ke baad me ne b jump kiya kai me or zameen pe ponchne se pehle he me ne pao se fire nikle or me aram se zameen pe land howa
Raj or anita ke ilawa land kaarte howe mujhe kisi ne nhi daikha kai me b kafi ghanna jungle tha
Bakki class b utar aye or gufa ke taraf janne lage hum b un ke peche peche janne lage
Jab wo gufa me gus rahe the to wahi gufa ke bahir ik talaab tha jis par jab mere nazar pare to me ruk gaya or talaab ke taraaf chala gya
Raj or anita b mere peche a gai
Raj…kya howa yaha q aye ho
Veer…raj hum ne aj thak one eye wolf nhi daikha khud ko tayar kar lo dono q k ye kafi bhara hai
Anita…ye tum kaise keh sakte ho
Veer…gour karo pani par or us dewar par jis se pata chalta hai ke koi abi talab me utar kar pani pe ke gaya hai q k dewar abbi b geli hai or diwar jis jaga thak geli hai us se pata chalta hai kafi bara hai
Raj…mtlb jo andar gai hai wo sab khatre me hai
Tabhi andar se students ke chillane ke awaz anne lage
Wo awazain sun kar hum hum b andar ke taraf bhage
Wahi sania prabhas se baat karne lage
Sania…sir ye kuch zyada nhi hai wo abbi is ke liye tayar nhi hai
Sania ke baat pe sir hansne lagte hai tabhi waha soldier atta hai
A2…sir dono group kai me ponch gai hai jo pehla group tha wo plan kar ke sab kar rahe hai jab ke dosra group randomly sab kar raha hai
Prabhas…good nazar banae rakho
Sania…matlab ap ke admi un pe nazar rakhe howe hai matlab wo one eye beast b ap ne waise he kaha tha
Prabhas…bilkul waha one eye beast nhi kuch or hai
Jaha students bahir ke taraf bhag rahe the hum jaise he andar ponche sameer apne ice element ka use kar raha tha us wolf pe
Likin wo concentrate nhi kar pa raha tha jis ke waja se us ke attack kafi weak the
Dusra jo monster tha wo one eye wolf nhi tha wo pictures se bilkul muktalif tha
Hum theno waha pe ponch gai tab thak spirit wolf sameer pe hamla karne wala tha
Me ne or anita ne wolf par fire ball se attack kiya jis se wo sameer pe hamla nhi kar payao or ja ke dewaar se takra gaya
Ab us ka dihan sameer se hat kar hum pe a gaya
Tab thak raj sameer ko utha ke bahir le gaya
Me ne or anita ne dobara wolf par hamla shuru kar diya wo wolf fire ke agge kamzor tha or us ke jisam me aag lag gai
Jis se wo jalne laga or takleef me darne laga wo hamari taraf bhag ke ayya or hamare saro ke oper se hota howa bahir pani me khood gaya
Bahir prabhas sania maam or un ke soldiers kai ke oper kare ho kar ye sab daikh rahe the
Prabhas…hahaha mujhe maloom tha ye theno khuch khas hai inno ne spirit wolf ko zakhmi kar dala
A3…ye kya ho raha hai
Prabhas…kya howa
A3…spirit wolf mera adesh nhi maan raha
Prabhas…kyaaaaa
Sania…bache
Prabhas…ye kaise howa ab sab ko bachana pare ga
Jab ye bate kar rahe the tab thak wolf ke agg buch gai the or wo dobara andar a gaya
Raj ne bahir daikha to sare students dewaro ke peche chupe howe the
Raj(man me)…agar yaha lare to in kon uksan ho sakta isse andar le jaana ho ga
Raj jaldi se samne a gaya or wolf ke samne se urr kar andar janne laga
Anita ne daikh liya raj ne isse bahir janne ka ishara kar diya
Raj ja ke veer ke pass utra or usse le ke or andar chala gaya dono urte howe gufa ke end thak a gai jo bht bhare room ke manind tha
Prabhas b ik magic gear ka prayog karta hai or us ke wings a jate hai or urr kar ghar ke pass jata hai jaha sare students chupe howe the
Prabhas…ander khon khon hai
Tabhi anita bahir atte hai
Anita…andar sirf raj or veer hai mujhe bahir anne ko kaha unno ne or khud wolf ko apne peche gufa ke andar le gaya ta ke kissi ko nuqsan na ponche
Prabhas…sab idar he raho me jatta ho un ke peche
Or andar ke taraf irr chala
Wahi dono jab end pe ponche to un ke peche wolf b waha ponch gaya or dono pe hamla kar doya

 

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Update 05
Likin dono ne muktalif direction me jump kar diya jis se dono bach gai
Veer jaise he zameen ko chutta hai fire ball se wolf par hamla kar daita hai
Likin wolf zigzag jump kar ke bach jata hai or veer pe hamla kar daita hai
Jaise he wolf veer ko pangha marne wala tha tabhi raj urr ke atta hai or veer ko dhakka de deta hai
Veer to bach jata hai likin raj ke bazo pe pangha lag jata hai or raj ja ke dewar se taqra kar behosh ho jata hai us ke bazo se b khon nikalne lagta hai
Ye daikh ke veer ko gussa anne lagta hai us ke ankho me jo halka redish colour tha wob bhar jata hai
Veer…mere dost pe hamla kar ke to ne mout nishchit kar le hai mere hatho
Or is ke sath he us ne apne lighting element active kar liya or lighting cage me wolf ko qaid kar liya
Jab veer ne oper daikha to ik nokeela patha cage ke oper laga howa tha
Veer ne fire ball us pathar ko de mara jis se wo tut kar sidha wolf ke aarpar ho gaya or wahi wolf maar gaya
Veer is ke bhag kar raj ke pass gaya us ke hath se khoon nikal raha tha jaise he veer ka hath jis me angothi the wo us ke zakham par laga to anghoti chamakne lagi or raj ke gao khud ba khud barne lage
Tabhi waha prabhae sir ponch gai or urthe urthe jab unno ne wolf ko mara howa daikha to heran ho kar veer ke pass uthar ayye
Prabhas…wolf ko kiss ne marra
Veer…me ne mara hai
Prabhas…magar kaise?
Veer…bas kismat ne sath diya to maar diya filhal raj ko daikhe ye behosh hai
Prabhas…oohhh chalo isse bahir le chalte hai
Abbe hum ne usse uthaya he tha ke soldier or sare students waha ponch gai
A3…wolf kaha hai
Prabhas…waha mara howw para hai
A3…kya apne usse q mara ap usse aram se qabo me kar saktr the
Prabhas…me ne nhi mara me jab poncha to wo already mar chuka tha
A3…ye namukin hai students usse kaise maar sakte hai wo itna kamzor nhi tha
Prbhas…jo sach hai wo bata diya
A3 rote howe spirit wolf ke pass chala gaya
Prabhas…chalo isse rone do bechare ko shock laga hai ke ik chote bache ne is ke spirit wolf ko maar diya
Veer…to ye ik test tha
Prabhas…haan likin tore gharbhar ho gai spirit wolf ne A3 ka adesh manne se inkar kar diya jiss ke waja se mujhe bech me anna para
A1…likin tum ne sir ke challenge ke mutabiq wolf ko maar diya is liye tum sab ko A grade se wo pass kare ge
Prabhas…kya sach me me ne aisa kuch kaha tha
Sania…haan or sath me veer ko ap magic gear b de ge jaise ke ap ke ap ne kaha tha
Prabhas sir ka mou daikhne wala ho gaya tha
Us ke baad kuch khas nhi howa or wo din phr aise he guzar gaya
Raj b thek ho gaya tha is liye agle subah phr veer or raj subah ke time dihan me baith gai or apne open stars ke power bharne lage
Sab chezo se farig ho kar wo center area me chale gai jaha sare students mojood the
Phr prabhas sir stage pe ayye
Prabhas…mujhe kafi khushi howe ke is saal koi b stydent fail nhi howa sab ne participate kiya likin kuch students ne extraordinary perform kiya is liye unne inne mere taraf se performance certificate diye jai ge jo baad me ap ke bht kaam aye ge
Sab se pehle sameer rana
Sameer stage pe chala gaya or sir ne usse certificate diya
Prabhas….Anita
Anita kob certificate diya gaya
Prabhas…raaj
Raj stage pe chala gaya usse certificate ke sath bravery badge diya gaya
Prabhas…veer
Me b stage pe chala gaya mujhe certificate bravery badge or sath me magic gear jo ke glove ke sorat me tha or basicaly sheild ke tarah kaam karta tha wo diya gaya
Ye gear ik iron glove tha ye ap ko chote mote attacks se bachata tha
Prabhas…tum mere army q join nhi karte yaqeen mano bht faide mile ge koi tume kuch keh nhi sakta agar kaha to us ka pora khandan he gaib ho jai ga yaha thak ke rana ke family b mujh se darte hai is liye dostana taluq rakha hai mere sath
Me un ke baat pe muskura diya
Veer…nhi sir thank u magar me abbi study karna chahta ho
Prabhas…to study ke baad join kar lo
Veer…abbi kuch socha nhi sir likin baad me mood bana to zaroor join karo ga
Prabhas…me wait karo ga
Us ke baad sab wapis school a gai or chutti ke baad ghar a gaya
Dad to shift ho gai the is liye me ghar par akela tha apne liye khana bana k kha liya
Ghar par ab zyada to kuch karne ko tha nhi merr liye to socha ke q na apni lightning element ko practical use me laya jai
Issi liye me city hall chala gaya jaha monster ko marne par inam milta tha or agar koi city organization ho jo city me chupe monsters ko marte hai ka interview ho raha ho to waha try kar lo
Q k last fight me me ne jaan liya jab thak lightning element ko use me nhi lao ga tab thak ye strong nhi ho ge
Is liye me ne apne chehra chupa liya tha jis se mere identity kisi ko pata nhi chale ge
City hall ponch ke me sidda board par chala gaya likin waha aisa kuch khas nhi tha jis par ache paise mile
Tabhi meri nazar ik lambi line par pare
Veer…bhai ye line kis liye lage hai
Waha se guzarte howe ik larke se us ne pocha
Larka…are ye MHT (Monster Hunting Team) me nai member ke liye interview ho rahe hai
Veer…ye to sab se zyada mashahor team hai na
Larka…haan issi liye to itne lambi line kare hai
Veer…ye lightning element wale ko le ge kya
Larka…q mazak karte ho yaar lightning element wale ko khon nhi leta likin lightning walo ko to pehle he is sheher ke raeeso ne reserve kar raka hai
Veer larke ke baat sun ke line me ja ke lag gaya takreeban gante baad us ke bare ayye
Gate ke bahir ik larka or ik larki kare the
Larka…haan to tumara naam kya hai
Veer…Reev
Larka…Reev kafi ajeeb hai kair hunting certficate hai tumare pass
Veer…haan
Larka…kis level ke hunter ho tum
Veer…ye first time hai
Larka…kya daiko reev yaha pe kafi experienced hunter ayye howe hai or tum ik nosikye ho akhir hamara time q barbaad kar rahe ho
Veer…me ne suna hai tum lightning element walo ko rakhte ho
Larki…khon nhi rakhta magar sab ke kismat ache nhi hoti
Veer…me lightning element ho
Dono larka or larki statue ban gai
Larki…tum mazak kar rahe ho na
Veer ne apna hath agge kar diya or apne lightning element ko active kar diya
Us ka hath purple ho gaya or lightning nikalne lage us se
Peche line me jitne b the wo b aj pehle bar lightning user ko daikh rahe the
Larki…tum sach me lightning user ho roko me abbi boss ko batati ho
Tabhi darwaza damake se kulta hai
Boss…hahahaha pochne ke zarorat nhi hai baki sab ko wapis bach do selection ho gai hai hahahhaaha ao ao reev tumara swagat hai MHT me
Waha par total 5 bande the jin me do larkiyan the or theen admi boss ko mila ke or ab me add ho gaya
Boss…vikrant(fire element)
1st Larka…raju(wind element)
2nd Larka…sam(earth element)
1st Larki…nisha(ice element)
2nd Larki…simma(water element)
Tabhi boss ke pass larki atte hai or us ke kaan me kuch kehte hai jis se un ka chehra serious ho jata hai
Boss…tayar ho jao sab girls school me ik one eye rat daikha gaya hai
Sab ne jaldi se change kiya or gari me baith gai or chal pare apne location pe
Boss…reev tm khushkismat ho joining wale din he mission mil gaya tora experience mila ga aj tume
Itne dair me hum school ponch gai
Boss…pail jao sab school ko khali kar diya gaya hai is liye koi problem nhi ho ge reev tum canteen ke taraf jao waha pe us ke chances kam hai likin koi risk nhi lena chahye
Veer…ok sir
Or me nikal gaya canteen ke taraf tension free ke yaha pe us ke hone ka chance nhi hai
Canteen ponch ke waha ke ik rack se choclate utaye or idar udar daik ke khane laga abbi me canteen ke ik khone thak poncha he tha ke choclate kaa khri bite mere halak me pans gaya
Q k one eye rat wahi mojood tha us ne b mujhe daikh liya
Me ne apna lightning element active kiya tab thak rat ne mujh par apne ik ankh se laser mar de jis ko bare mushkil se me ne doghe ke
Us laser k waja se waha blast howa or sare members ko pata chal gaya is liye sab us taraf dhor pare
Tab thak me lightning se us par war karta raha likin behenchod kafi putila tha idar udar khud raha tha is liya mera koi war usse nhi lag raha tha
Tabhi wo dobara laser se hamla karne he wala tha to me ne socha ke prabhas sir ka diya howa shield aj kaam a jai ga
Jaise he us ne mujh par laser se hamla kiya mere samne ik pani ke diwar kare ho gai jo laser par nhi kar paya or khatam ho gaya
Ye kam mere team ka tha wo ponch gai the waha
Boss…bht ache reev k tum ne isse kahi jane nhi diya or yahi isse rakha team lag jao kaam par
Sab ne har taraf se usse gair liya nisha apne ice magic se us ke speed ko kam karne ke koshish karne lagi or raju wind element se us ka dihan apni taraf karne laga ta ke nisha aram se apna kaam kar sake
Likin wo rat jaan gaya or us ne jump mare or boss isse lamhe ka wait kar rahe the
Boss…firr circle
Or rat ik fire ke gole me jalne laga kuch dair baad boss ko laga wo mar chuka hai to unni ne fire circle khatam kar diya
Jo ke ik galti the jaise he fire khatam howa raat ke ankain khul gai or sab se nazdeek jo ke nisha the us pe hamla kar diya me b nisha ke nazdeek he kara tha
Rat ko hamla karte daikh ke me ne jaldi se nisha ko dakka de diya or apne shield se is ka war rook diya
Jaise he us ne peche jump kiya me ne lightning ball us par paink diya hawa me hone ke waja se wo doghe nhi kar paya
Lightning ke waja se wo wahi mar gaya q k wo pehle se he kafi zakhmi tha
Boss…bht ache reev
Nisha…thanks reev mujhe bachane ke liye
Veer...yahi hamara kaam hai
Tabhi sab us ko hatne ke tayari karne lage tabhi mera locket chamka or us raat se white roshni nikle jo ke is locket me samma gai
Veer(maan me)…ye kya tha or kisi ko nazar b nhi ayya
Mikki…master ye ik self evolving equipment hai iss ke liye ap ko isse evolve karne ke zarorat nhi ho ge ya sare monster se jo maar chuke ho ge un se un ke souls collect kar ke khud ko evolve kar le ga
Veer…bht bariya
Us ke baad hum waha se nikal gai me b apne ghar a gaya or apna mask hata diya
Veer…chalo paisa kamane ka zarya to mil gaya
Tabhi mujhe wo pouch yaad ayya me ne us me hath dala or book or sword nikal liya
Me ne ghoor se sword ko daikha to us ke hood pe yin yang ka sign tha or sword ko hood ke sath seal kar diya tha
Veer…ye kya hai mikki
Mikki…sorry master is ke mere pass koi information nhi hai or na he me isse skan kar pa raha ho
Me ne sword ko side me rakh diya or book ko utha liya jo ke pata nhi kis bhasha me the
Mikki ne wo language mere mind me feed kar de or me usse parne laga
Ye ik martial arts book the jis me kai tarah ke unique teqniques the
Veer…ye kaam ke chez hai ab me isse sekna shuru karo ga magic ke sath physical power b chahye hota hai
Phr me sab se pehle teqnique daikhe jo ke the Heaven Pawn fist
Booj me total 50 ke kareeb alag tarah ke teqniques the jo ke mujhe kafi interesting lage is liye me pehle teqnique ke practice karne laga hall me he
Dad ke jane ke baad me ne haal practice ke liye khali kar diya tha
Book me likhe tarekhe ke mutabik me Heaven pawn fist ke practice karne lags jo ke bht powerful tha us ko master karna asan na tha 3 gante ke practice ke baad b me usse master na kar saka
Is liye dobara bait ke book parne laga explanation ke sath
Heaven pawn fist ko master karne ke liye ap ke speed zyada hone chahye us ke bagair ap ye teqnique master nhi kar sakte
Ye parne ke baad mujhe pats chala ke q me master nhi kar pa raha
Adora gyan waqi me khatarnak hota hai
Sham hone wali the is liye me park me chala gaya or running karne laga tawreeban 20 min thak me running ke us ke baad waha bench pe bait gaya
Sania…arre veer tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
Veer…good evening maam kuch khass nhi maam me to running kar raha tha jab thak gaya to bait gaya
Sania…woow tumare umar ke larke ye sab nhi karte sirf masti me lage hote hai
Veer…sahi kaha maam likin wo well off family se hote hai mujhe kuch banna hai
Sania…theek keh rahe ho tum apne umar ke larko se kafi mature ho
Veer…maam ap merr teacher b hai kya ap mujhe bata sakti hai ke me apne speed kaise bhara sakta ho
Sania…bilkul us ke liye tume equipment chahye jo basically ik magic gear hai or itna costly b nhi hai wo tume kissi b magical shop se mil jai ga us ka naam hai beast boots
Veer…beast boots
Sania…haan is se tum is ke gravity ko zyada ya kam kar sakte ho jo ke tumare speed ko barane me kafi kaam aye ge
Veer…thank u maam
Us ke baad tori se idar udar ke baat kar ke me market ke taraf nikal gaya or ik magical shop se waqi me wo boot mil gai
Jaise he us ke ownership mujhe milli wo mere pao me a kar gaib ho gai ab jab me chaho ga wo a jai ge
Me waha se nikal kar ghar jane laga or boots ke gravity 10% bhara de ta ke me hal phal train hota raho
Mere pori body ab 10% zyada gravity me kaam karne lagi the jo ke kafim ushkil tha likin karna to tha he
Sara kaam khatam kiya khana khaya or zameen pe bister bicha ke so gaya q k is gravity me bed ne toot jana tha
Agle subah me fresh howa or school chala gaya apne classes le or office chala gaya
Aj ponchte sath he boss ne mujhe ik device de jis se wo emegency me mujh se contact kar sakte hai
Waha se me ground me ponchk ar running karne laga
Yahi mere routine ban gai the is tarah ik mahina guzar gaya is ik mahine me me ne gravity ko 100% thak bhara diya tha jis se mere body shape b nikar gai the or running speed b normal the mtlb 100% gravity ke sath normal speed me dhor leta tha ab me ne Heaven pawn fist b master kar liya tha or sath me kuch martial arts techniques b sikh le the
Raj…veer tum koi secret training kar rahe ho kya
Veer…q kya howa
Raj…kuch nhi zara apni body daikho
Veer…kya howa sahi to hai
Raj…haan wo to dikh he raha hai
Hum bate karte howe canteen ponch gai jaha ka nazara daikh ke mere to ankhain laal ho gai or raj ne usse waqt apne magic ka use kiya or laga sameer ke tobre pe ik punch
Howa u ke sameer or us ke chamche anita ko pakar kar us se zabardasti kar rahe the
Sameer rana family se tha is liye koi usse kuch nhi keh sakta tha
Jaise he sameer ko pare us ke chamche agge bhare likin tab thak me b waha ponch chuka tha
Sameer b uth chuka tha or gusse se hume daikh raha tha
Sameer…ye tum dono ne acha nhi kiya
Us ke is baat se to mera dimagh he kharab ho gaya or jo techniques me ne sikhe the wo usse pe sare apply kar dali
Bechara admara hoke wahi gir gaya me ne koi magic use nhi kiya or sameer ko b is ka mokka nhi diya
Us ke dost b sameer ke halat daikh ke dar gai or usse utha ke waha se nikal gai
Us din hum ne classes nhi le or wapis a gai raj anita ko chorne chala gaya or me ghar a gaya
Sameer ke harkat is waqt b mere dimagh me ghoom rahe the or reh reh ke gussa aye ja raha tha
Phr me ne khud ko shant kiya or wapis book nikal ke pharne laga
Hell Dragon Style technique
Ye kafi deadly technique the or is ke steps b kafi unique the is liye me wahi haal me is ko sikhne laga aj pora din me ne is technique pe laga diya ghar se bahir b nhi nikla or raat bhara baje thak geethor mehnat ke baad akhir me ne ye technique master kar he le
Isse ke sath haal me ghir gaya or wahi pe so gaya
Chale zara sameer ka haalb daikh le us ke dost usse school despensiry le ayye jaha ik healer ne us ko heal karna shuru kar diya
Q k magic usse nhi howa tha is liye healing me kafi time lag gaya or ue baat principal thak b ponch gai the
Principal ne usse waqt sania maam or sameer ke dosto ko bola liya
Principal…ye me kya sun ho sania ap ke class ke larko me laraye or wo aise ke sameer is waqt thak heal nhi howa
Sania…sir me veer ko ache tarah jante ho wo aisa larka nhi hai zaroor koi bare waja rahe ho ge ke us ne ye kadam uthaya hai
Principal…bolao usse
Sania…wo aj class me nhi ayya sir
Principal…tum charo batao kya howa tha
Chari ik dusre ke shakal daikhne lagte hai
Chamcha1…sir hum to canteen me he baithe howe the ke us ne sameer ko marna shuru kar diya
Sania…nhi ye nhi ho sakta sir ap canteen ke camera recording mangwai
Ye sunna tha charo ke chehre pe hawain urne lagi un ke dosto ne sameer ko decpensery le ja ke us ke dad ko phone kar ke bata diya tha
Principal ne peon ko bhej ke photage mangwa le tab thak sameer ke father b ponch gai the
Kamlesh Rana(K Rana)…kis ne mere bete pe hath uthaya hai me usse zinda nhi choro ga
Principal b K. Rana ko daikh ke gabra gai
Pruncipal…sir usse bare me pata laga raja ho ye video b abbi mandwai hai
K.rana…to mera mou kya daikh rahe ho jaldi lagao
Principal ne jaldi se video laga de or canteen me jo kuch howa wo sab daikne lage
Sania…daikha sir me ne kaha tha veer kabhi galat kar he nhi sakta
K.rana…he larki apni had me reh sameer paisa wala hai to tori masti to kare ga na
Sania…ye masti nhi batameezi hai Mr rana or sir ne shaid ghoor na kiya ho likin unno ne video offical link pe chala diya tha or ab ye video har student or teacher ke pas ponch gaya ho ga
Ye sun ke principal ne link daikha to un hosh b urr gaya
Sania…bas ye khyal rakhe k ye baat bahir na chale jai warna jo izzat bani hai ap logo ne wo ap ke bete ke waja se mitti me mil jai ge
Ye keh ke sania maam waha se nikal gai principal ke ishare se sameer ke chamche b chale gai us ke baad andar kya baat howe pata nhi likin k.rana bht gusse me school se nikla tha
Ye baat us ke bare bhai thak b ponch gai the us ne kamlesh se baat ke or us ne sab kuch unne bata diya larki ke baat unno ne b serious nhi le ye un ko mamooli baat lagi
Sameer b heal hi ke ghar a gaya tha
Likin sania maam veer ke martial arts moves daikh ke chonk gai the wo ik secret organization me kaam kar rahe the or us ne b aj thak in moves ke bare me nhi suna tha na daikha tha jo veer ne use kiye the
Ab veer un ke liye b ik paheli ban gai the
Agle din mahesh rana(M.Rana) kiran ke father b school a gai or sedha principal k office chale gai
Classes start hone ke baad peon ayya or sania maam ko kuch keh ke chala gaya
Sania…ok bacho sab school ground me chalo principal sir ka order hai
Sab school ground me chale gai sare school waha mojood tha
Tabhi principle waha a gai satg me M.rana b the
Principle sir kuch kehne wale the k m.rana ne ishare se mana kar diya or khud stage pe a gai
M.rana…sab se pehle to ye veer khon hai jis ne rana family ke bache ko mara hai
Main bahir nikal ayya
M.Rana…ohh to tum ho tumare himmat kaise howe sameer pe hath uthane ke
Veer…wo jo kar raha tha us ke kiye ke saza de hai usse is dafa sirf marra hai next time jaan se maar do ga
Mere baat sun ke sare school me pi drop silence ho gaya kissi ko mujh se is jawab ke umeed nhi the sania maam ko b nhi
M.rana…tumare okat nhi hai jante ho me kya kar sakta ho
Veer…or me jo kar sakta ho wo me ne kal dikha diya hai
Mere baat se us ke sulag gai or us ne apna power release kar de jis ka pressure sare school ke students ne mehsoos kiya jis ke waja se unne sans lene me problem ho rahe the
Principle…sir ye ap kya kar rahe hai yaha pe bache mojood hai
Abbe us ne itna he kaha tha ke m.rana ne gusse se usse daikha
M.rana…sab ko pata lagna chahye ke rana family se takrane ka nateeja kya hota hai
Veer…mikki release my minni sun power
Mikki…yes master
Or issi ke sath me ne b apne power release kar de jo us ke power se takra gai likin srf utne he jitne us ne release ke the
Sab sakte me a gai ke ik bache ke pass itne taqat kaha se a gai ab M.Rana b serious ho gaya us ne apne sare power release kar de
Jab mujhe mehsoos howa ke us ne sare power release kar de hai or us me killing intent hai to mujhe gussa a gaya or mene b sare power release kar de jo us ke power se kahi zyada tha or us ke or bharne laga
Us ke power mere power ke neche dabne lage chalte chalte me us ke pass ponch gaya
Mere power ke pressure ke waja se wo mere samne ik gutne pe baith gaya
Veer…mujhe kamzor samjhne ke galti maat karna warna aj srf ik trailler tha agle dafa pori picture dikao ga
Ye keh ke me ne apni power kam kar ke wapis normal ho gaya or wapis apne class ke taraf jane laga
M.Rana apni aise beizzati bardasht nhi kar saka or mere peth pe apne ice magic se hamla kar diya
Tabhi mere peche fire wall kare ho gai
Ye sania maam ne kiya tha M.rana ks war fire wall ko cross na kar saka or khatam ho gaya
Sania…M.Rana ik bache pe us ke peth par war karna ap ko shoba nhi daita izzat issi me hai ke ap school se chale jai
M.Rana…me is beizzati ko itne asani se nhi bholo ga is ka badla to me le ke raho ga
Veer…jaga or waqt bata do me ponch jao ga
Me ne hans kar kaha usse chirane ke liye
M.Rana dant pestte howe waha se chala gaya or me wapis a ke apne class me khara ho gaya
Ab or classes hona mushkil tha is liye principle ne aj chutti kara de
Jaie he hum jane lage sania maam ne mujhe rook diya jis ke waja se raj or anita b ruk gai
Sania…mere peche ao
Hum theeno un ke peche chale gai wo hame apne cabin me le gai or jab andar gai to unno ne darwaza peche se band kar diya
Sania…veer jo tum ne kiya us par me behes nhi karo ge q k tumare point of view se wo bilkul thek tha likin ab tune ahtiyat karne ge ye log apne beizsati asani se tasleem nhi karte
Veer…me janta ho maam or me is ke liye hamesha tayar raho ga
Sania…ik baat or me ne wo footage daikhe hai jis me tum ne sameer ko marra hai us me magic ka istimal na kar ke tum ne martial arts ka istimal kiya hai
Veer…bilkul maam aisa he hai
Sania…tum ne khon se technique us me use ke hai q k ye technique me ne ne to khi daikhe hai or na pare hai to wo akhir khon c technique hai
Raj or anita herat se hum dono ke batte sun rahe the
Veer…ye ap q poch rahe hai maam
Sania…waise he apne knowledge ke liye
Veer…maam wo Heaven Pawn Fist ke kuch chote techniques the agar ap ko yaad ho hamare ground wale mulakat wo issi liye me ne pocha tha
Tabhi merr pao me wo shoes a gai
Veer…aj b wahi magical gear me ne pehna hai
Sania maam jaldi se waha ayye or us ke gravity check karne lagi
Unne herat ka jatka laga jab unnon e gravity deikhe q k is ke gravity is waqt maximum the
Sania…ye ye to maximum gravity hai matlab tum is waqt maximum gravity my chal phr rahe ho
Veer…g maam or me ik hafte se maximum gravity me ho
Sania…yaqeen nhi hota ke koi itne gravity me itne aram se chal phr raha hai
Phr wo raj or anita ko daikhte hai is liye kuch nhi pochte
Sania…chalo thek hai me bas tume savdan rehne ka keh rahe the ab tum log ja sakte ho
Phr hum theno waha se nikal gai raj anita ko chorne chala gaya or me apne ghar
Main ne dihan nhi diya likin koi mera pecha kar raha tha bht savdani se

 

[Prince2000]

Aao bhai aao... Welcome hai aapka...
Lekin bhai humare mobile me to chal rahi hai aapne aisa koun saa phone le kiya ki ye site open nhi hota......... Bhai Chinese site nhi hai ye jo india me khulegi nhi... Hihihihihi... Hum log mob par hi use kar rahe hai...

hahahahahahahaha janta ho chiness site nhi hai me ne Techno spark lite mobile liya hai or tabhi se ye howa hai abbi 3 update diye hai baki b 1 gante thak upload kar do ga
regards

 

[Prince2000]

Ye story kahi padhi hui hai par 10-12 update ke baad band ho gai thi mujhe acche se yaad hai
Par agar aap fir se start kr rhe hai to mujhe khushi hai aur mai aap ke sath hu
Rhi baat update ki to update accha tha

aisa bilkul b nhi hai radhe bhai ye mere story hai aisa ho he nhi sakta ke ap ne pehle pare ho shaid agge parh kar ap ka point of view badal jai

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

sorry friends likin ye sab me ne jaan bujh kar nhi kiya me ne naya mobile liya hai us me xforum nhi khul raha tha host error a raha tha me samjha shaid site band ho gai hai is waja se ab thak koi update nhi de saka aj raat thak me ne jitne story likhi hai wo sab update aj me de do ga ta ke jo bhai naraz howe hai un ke narazgi khatam ho jai me zyada tar mobile me likhta ho is liye ab se sirf saturday ya sunday ko update ayye ge q k mobile me ye site nhi khul rahe or ye b mujhe kal he pata chala hai kisi dosri site pe
regards

Welcome back Bhai aap ko dubara dekh kar khushi hui mare kai bhai thode se naraj ho gaye the ab vo bhi man jayege hahahahaha & tks bhai

 

[Prince2000]

me ne sab ke comments pare hai I M EXTREMELY SORRY me samjha shaid site close ho gai hai is liye ye sab howa aisa dobara nhi ho ga
Regards

 

[Prince2000]

Welcome back Bhai aap ko dubara dekh kar khushi hui mare kai bhai thode se naraj ho gaye the ab vo bhi man jayege hahahahaha & tks bhai

Thank u Killer Pandit Bhai for ur support

 

[Hunterrrr69]

Update 03
Or apni chair par baith gaya tabhi jo mere bajo me larkha tha
Larka…hello mera naam raj hai
Veer…veer
Raj…tum zyada baat nhi karte
Veer…nhi mujhe pasand nhi zyada baat karna
Raj…to tumare dost kuch kehte nhi
Veer…mera koi dost nhi hai
Raj…kyaaaa???
Veer…q is me aise herani wale khon c baat hai
Raj…chalo choro mere sath dosti karo ge
Veer…haan q nhi
Us ne mere sath hath milaya
Us ne apni desk mere desk ke sath mila le
Issi tarah periods ho gai or break me me maam ke paas chala gaya raj b mere sath tha
Veer…may I come in maam?
Maam…sure ao veer me tumara he intizar kar rahi the raj tum b chalo a jao
Veer…sorry maam hum dono dost ban gai to isse b sath le ayya
Maam…koi baat nhi to ab batao tum kaise dihan lagate the
Veer…maam jaise ke ap ne kaha tha me ne mind zero me le gaya jaha koi soch koi kaam ap ke dimagh na ayye tab ap apne antar maan me jank sakte hai
Maam…bilkul sahi agge
Veer…maam jaise he me dihan me jata tha to apne antar maan me jankne ke koshish karta likin usse ke sath mera dihan toot jata
Maam…bht ache veer mujhe nhi pata tha tum ne mere baat itne dihan se suni beta abbi jo tum kar rahe ho wahi karte raho q k dihan me janna bht time leta hai tabhi insan kar pata hai
Me tume bata do ke jo students ye abbi se karne lag jai ge secondry school me unne bht asaniyan farahm ho ge
Is liye apne ye koshish jari rakhna tum zaroor kamyab ho ge or agge koi pareshani ho to mujh se a ke discuss karna
Veer…g maam zaroor & thank u
Maam…ur welcome or apne is dost ko b kuch sikao warna tum to agge nikal jao ge ye sab ka mou takta rahe ga
Maam ne ye baat hans ke kahe the jis se raj tora sharma gaya
Hum apni class me chale gai
Raj…abbe ye sab kya tha
Veer…kuch nhi yaar wo kal maam ne dihan me jane ka tareka bataya tha wahi me ne try kiya
Raj…to phr kya howa
Veer…abe behra ho gya tha kya waha jo ab poch raha hai
Raj…to mujhe b sikka
Veer…thek hai baisc se shuru karo apne mind ko har baat se khali karo bilkul shunya pe le ao
Raaj…us ke baad
Veer…pehle ye karna start karo us ke baad agge ka batao ga
Raj…thek hai aj ghar ja ke yahe koshish karo ga
Us ke baad aise he school chalta raha or chuti ke time me akela nikal gaya to kisi ne mujhe peche se awaz de
Me ne peche mor kar daikha to raj tha
Veer…to yaha kya kar raha hai
Raj…ghar ja raha ho or kya karo ga
Veer…q koi tume lene nhi ayya
Raj…nhi kal ayye the ab me akele ye aya jaya karo ga
Veer…barya hai waise tumara ghar kaha hai
Us ne address bata diya jo mere street se ik street pehle tha
Veer…chalo acha hai tumara ghar b mere ghar ke nazdeek hai kal se ik sath aya jaya kare ge
Us ke baad hum apne apne ghar chale gai
Kahani ko tora or fast forward karte hai
Aj humara secondry school shuru hone wala tha aj me pore 12 saal ka ho
Me or raaj kafi ache dost baan gay the aksar wo mere ghar a jata tha jaha hum sath me dihan lagate the
Hum dono ab pora 1 ganta dihan laga pate the dihan ke doran me ne apne antar maan me minni sun ke power kob control kar liya tha
Minni sun power mere extra power me atte the pehle mere body power the jab ke sun power mere reserve power me atte the ya ye keh sakte hai ke me ne aisa rakha tha is ko
Hamara pehle he din me or raj school ponch gai jaha pe hume hamare magic ke bare me pata chalna tha
Hum dono kafi excited the hum dono apas me baat karte howe apne class me ponch gai or waise he baite gai jaise pehle beta karte the
Class ke bell baje or teacher class me enter howe
Teacher…hello students me ap ke class teacher ho mera naam sania hai
Sania…aj ap sab ko pata chale ga ke ap ke pass khon se magic hai jis ko ap control kar sakte hai
Tabhi class me ik admi trolly le ke atta hai jis me ik crystal ball hota hai
Sania…ab ap sab ik ik kar ke ayye or is par hath rakhe tha ke ap ke magic ka patta chale is se pehle me ap ko bata do ke khon sa colour kis magic ka hai
Wind…sky blue
Water…dark blue
Earth…brown
Light…golden
Yellow…healing
Fire…red
Lightning…purple
Humare class me zyada tar students pecle class wale he the bas kuch students he naye the
Sameer(jo har waqt mujhe necha dikane ke koshish karta hai) ke baal or eyes bilkul kiran jaise he the likin nature me zameen asman ka fark tha jaha kiran kamosh mizaj the ye sahab utna he shor sharabe ke shokeen bas itna hai ke dono ik dosre ke opposite the
Itna to me jaan gaya tha ke ye dono rana family se belong karte hai jo is sheher ko control karta hai
Ab ik ik kar ke students ja kar orb par hath rakhne lage jis se un ke magic ka pata chalta raha ik ik kar ke sab ka ho gaya kiran or sameer ka ice magic tha
Ab bare aye raaj ke wo ja ke orb ke pass poncha or orb pe hath rakh kar ankain band kar le
Raj ka wind magic ayya tab mere barri aye or me ja ke jaise he orb par hath rakha wahi dusri class se tez purple colour ke roshni nikalne lage
Hamare class ke sabhi students or teacher sania us class ke taraf chale gai or me apni ankain band kar ke orb par hath rakhe kara tha
Tabhi aisa laga jaise me antariksh me ho or samne purple colour ka ball ghoom raha hai or us se lightning har taraf nikal rahe hai
Tabhi manzar ik dam se badal gaya or lava a gaya or me lave ke oper kara tha or har taraf aag ke lipte faile howe the
Orb pehle purple ho gaya or tori he dair bad red
Wahi is dosre class me b orb se logo ko un ke magic ka pata chal raha tha roshni purple the jo lighting ka pata de rahe the
Lightning sab se powerful mane jati hai or bht rare b ye 1 out of 10000 me se ik me hoti hai is liye sare class us ko daikne chale gai
Ab hamare hero ko b daikhte hai un ka pehla magic lightning tha or dusra fire lightning ko kissi ne nhi daikha jab sab wapis ayye to orb red colour ke the to sab ko yahi laga ke me fire magic karta ho
Me ne b kisi ko apne lightning magic ka nhi bataya
Raj…wah yaar fire b acha magic hai
Veer…magic magic hota hai yaar water b hota to mujhe kuch farq nhi parta
Raj…acha tujhe pata hai sath wale class me ik lightning element ka banda b hai
Veer…to is me khon c bari baat hai
Raj…are yaar lightning magic sab se khtarnak magic hota hai
Veer…daikh yaar hum pechle kitne salo se dihan laga rahe hai ham us se kahi zyada taqatwar sabit ho sakte hai wo to ab shuru kare ga dihan lagana
Raj…baat to sahi hai magar ik baat hai
Veer…wo kya
Raj…shaid to ne dihan na diya ho likin kiran tujh me interest le rahi hai
Veer…kya bacho jaise batain kar raha hai yaar
Raj…na maan magar yahi sach hai
Veer…chalo maan leta ho but I m not interested
Aise he aj ka din khatam howa or hum apne apne ghar a gai
Papa…kaisa raha aj ka din beta
Veer…bht acha papa
Papa…khon sa element mila tume
Veer…fire
Papa…are wah ye to bht barya hai
Veer…waise aj ap ghar pe kaise dikh gai
Papa…haan kaam khatam howa to a gaya
Veer…is dafa kafi dino ke liye gai the ap
Papa…bas ab kahi nhi jao ga
Veer…q aisa q keh rahe hai
Papa…me apni transport agency khol raha ho
Veer…magar is me to kafi karcha aye ga
Papa…haan aye ga to sahi magar me ne sara kuch soch rakha hai
Veer…magar papa ye ho ga kaise
Papa…beta mere kuch savings hai wo b kaam a jai ge jo 2 truck company me lagye hai un ka contract b khatam ho jai ga or 2 or le lo ga filhal 5 se kaam chal jai ga baad me agar zarorat howe to daikh le ge
Veer…idea acha hai papa
Or hum fresh hone chale gai fresh hone ke baad hum ne lunch kiya or aram karne apne kamro me chale gai
Me apne kamre me ja kar dihan me baith gaya or apne antar maan me apne fire and lightning ko daikne laga
Veer…mikki kya tum sun rahe ho
Mikki…haan veer me yahi ho
Veer…mere pass do magic element hai jab ke baki sab ke pass ik is ke koi khass waja
Mikki…ye to sirf suruwat hai abbi or b moke aye ge tume herat me dalne ke liye
Veer…matlab
Mikki…kuch nhi batao mujhe kaise yaad kiya
Veer…mikki magic to me kar sakta ho likin ab in ke power kaise barao
Mikki…daikho veer har magic ke 7 chakar hote hai ghor se daiko apne magic center ko is ke ird gird 7 stars ghom rahe hai jo bilkul na hone ke barabar hai
Mikki ke baat sun ke me ne us taraf daikha to waqe me aisa he tha
Mikki…pehle do star jab active ho ge tab tum magic karna start kar sakte ho jo ke beginner magic ho ga
Jab 4 star par poncho he to tum medium level pe ponch jao ge is tarah 6 star expert magician kehlate hai
Veer…or 7 star
Mikki…7 star magistic magician kehlate hai or me is pore sheher ko scan kiya hai is pore sheher me sirf ik he magistic magician hai is ka naam prabhas mehta hai jo ke army head hai
Veer…ab mujhe kya karna hai
Mikki…tum kafi waqt se dihan laga rahe ho ab apni dono power par concentrate karo mujhe umeed hai tum dono power ko abbe midium level thak poncha sakte ho
Mikki ke baat sun ke me ne ankhain band ke or apne power par concentrate karne laga
Jaise he mere concentration bare mere dono powers ke chamak bhar gai or usse ke sath pehla star roshan ho gaya
Mikki…bht ache veer agge bharo
Me usse tarah dihan me raha us ke baad dosra phr thesra or akhir me chota b on kar diya
Usse ke sath mere ankhain khol gai
Mikki…bht ache veer ab daikho apni power ko waha pe 4 star chamak rahe hai matlab tum midium level pe ponch gai ho or me yaqeen se keh sakta ho tumare age me tum pehle insan ho jo midium level pe poncha hai
Mikki ke baat sun ke me khush ho gaya
Veer…mikki kya me apni power chupa sakta ho mtlb ke agar me ye na batana chaho ke me medium level pe ponch gaya ho
Mikki…bilkul kar sakte ho tum jitne star dikana chaho itne star he dikke ge likin midium level thak ponchne ka ye matlab nhi ke tum midium level magician jitne taqatwar ho gai ho ye experience ke sath he tumare power bhare ge
Veer…ye barya hai kal raj ko b sikana hai
Us ke baad hum sab ne raat ka khana khya or so gai
Agle din school poncha to raj mera he wait kar raha tha
Veer…kaisa hai tu
Raj…me barya ho
Hum baat karte howe class me ponche
Tabhi school bell howe or tori dair me sania maam a gai
Sania…bacho kal tume pata chal gaya ke tum khon sa magic kar sakte ho ab me tume batao ge ke ap ne apne magic ko kaise bharana hai
Phr wahi bate maam ne bataye jo mikki ne mujhe pehle he bata de the
Sania…me ap ko batate chalo ke kiran ne 3 star thak apne magic ko active kiya howa hai is liye aj se ap sab log dihan lagana start karo me cahte ho ke tum sab 3 star nhi to kam az kam 2 star active karo
Raj…are yaar hum to sath saloon se dihan laga rahe hai matlab hume zyada problem nhi ho ge
Veer…akele me baat kare he
Raj b mere baat samjh gaya or chup ho gaya
Sania…ap sab me se khon khon fire element ke hai
Ye sunte sath he me khara ho gaya or ik larki jis ka naam anita tha wo khare ho gai
Sameer…lo g loser b khara ho gaya
Sania…sameer behave ur self
Maam ke baat sun ke sameer chup ho gaya
Sania…me khud ik fire magician ho is liye agar tum dono ko koi problem ho u can discuss with me
Hum dono…sure maam
Sania…chalo sab practice haal me a jao aj tori practical work kiya jai
Issi ke sath hum sab hall ke taraf chal diye me or raj hum dono ne alag he group banaya howa tha
Sania…ok boys n girls sab group me bat jao or dihan me bait jao ik dosre ke help karo
Me or raj shuru karne he wale the ke anita hamare pas aye
Anita…kya me tum dono ko join kar sakti ho
Raj…haan q nhi magar tumare friends
Anita…wo kya hai na mere dost bas mastyian karna jante hai or kuch nhi jab ke me ne apni family ko support karna hai is liye me ne un ka group chor diya
Veer…welcome to our group
Anita…thanks
Veer…ok anita pehle ye batao ke dihan kabhi lagaya hai
Anita…haan magar 10 min se zyada nhi kar pati
Veer…perfect mtlb basics tume sikana nhi pare ga
Raj…haan basic sikate sikate he sara time waste ho jata
Anita…ap dono aise q baat kar rahe jo jaise ap pehle se he dihan lagana jante ho
Raj…wo is liye ke hum dono sath salo se dihan laga rahe hai waise to hum 1 ganta dihan laga pate hai likin chahe to 3 ganto thak b laga sakte hai
Veer…acha raj ab bakwas choro pehle me tume bata daita ho ke tume karna kya hai us ke bad anita ke help karo ga
Raj…thek hai batao
Veer…jaise ke class me maam ne bataya stars ke bare me tumne apne antarman me ja ke apne element pe focus karna hai ta ke tumare element se power release ho sake wahi power tumare stars ko active kare ga thek hai
Raj…samjh gaya
Ye kehte sath he raj dihan mudra me chala gaya anita bot bane hamare bate sun rahe the
Anita…veer kya jo raj ne kaha wo sach hai to dono sath salo se dihan….
Veer…haan wo sach hai pehle to me akele karna chahta tha magar usse din hum dost ban gai to is ke na chahte howe b me ne isse karwaya jis ka phal aj isse mile ga ab tum b dost ho to tumare madad b karo ga
Anita…thanks veer
Veer…us ke zarorat nhi hai ab dihan mudra me baith jao or apne dimagh se har soch har kyal nikal do jaise he tume lage tum ne ye kar diya usse waqt apne element ka sochna jis se tum waha poncy jao ge or phr tum wahi karna jo me ne abbi raj ko kaha hai
Mere baat sun ke anita b dihan me chale gai me dono se tori age baith ke dono ko daikne laga
Hall me sabhi dihan me jane ke koshish kar rahe the likin kiran ke ilawa koi kamyab nhi ho raha tha
Me ne idar udar dihan nhi diya likin sania maam ka dihan hum theno pe tha
Wo mujhe dono ko instruction deta daikh chuke the
Me ne wapis apne dosto ke taraf rukh kiya tabhi raj ke ird gird bawandar banne laga me jaldi se us bawandar ko par kar ke raj ke pas gaya
Veer…raj apne power ko control karo usse bahir mat nikalne do apne andar he rako warna zyada stars ko active nhi kar pao ge
Me ne jaise he ye kaha wo bawander khatam hone laga or phr bilkul khatam ho gaya
Anita ke sath b yahi hone laga us ke ass pass ke zameen garam hone lage mujhe us se koi farak nhi para q k me khud b fire element tha
Us ke pass b ja kar me ne yahi kaha us ne b wahi kiya taqreeban adhe gante baad dono ne ankhain khole
Dono ke ankhon me chamak the jis se me samjh gaya dono kamyab howe wo kuch bolne wale the me ne unne rook diya
Veer…abbi nhi baad me baat kare ge ye sahi jaga nhi hai
Wo dono chup ho gai likin maam ne shuru se le kar akhir thak sab daikha tha jis se hum theno un ke nazro me a gai the
Sameer kamina to tha he likin wo b ache tareke se dihan laga raha tha
Us ke baad break howe or hum theno canteen me ja kar ik khone ke table par baith gai

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