Fantasy Magistic Veer

[Rohit1988]

Hello Friends kaise hai ap sab log is dafa me apni ik story likh raha ho basically ye ik anime se prabavit ho ke likh raha ho umeed hai ap ko pasand ayye ge apne rai se agah kaete rahye ga
Regards
Prince2000

Dear bhai ji
Congregation new story ke liye

Ummid hai hame ek extraordinary story padhne ko milegi
But please aap update long or regular update de taki story ko padhne me maja aaye

Please bhai story me sex de ke story ko sex story na banaye

 

[Rohit1988]

Update 01
Amar…Dad
Veer…Hero
Raj…Hero friend
Anita…Hero friend
Kiran…Rana ke beti
Sania…Teacher(maam ik govt secret organization ke liye b kaam karte hai)
Sameer…Kiran ka chachazad
Prabhas Mehta…Army Head
Boss…vikrant(fire element)
1st Larka…raju(wind element)
2nd Larka…sam(earth element)
1st Larki…nisha(ice element)
2nd Larki…simma(water element)

Year 3020
Ik scientist apne lab me kaam kar raha tha bekre baal lambi dhari daikh ke he lag raha tha kai pata nhi kitne arse se na shave ke hai na he baal banaye hai
Is scientist ka naam tha Veer (HERO) is ke umar lagbhag 35 saal the unmarried tha or anth b
Apne dimagh ke wajha se is ne apni sari paraye scholarship ke through ke the or intern ke thor par ik scientist ke sath helper ke thor par kaam karne laga
Kaam ke doran he is ke dimagh me kai thara ke plans banne lage jis par ye separately kaam karne laga
Apni sarre salary apni kaam par laga daita is ke inventions ko govt ne bht like kiye jo ke keval military based inventions the
Kuch arse baad he isse military science laboratry me as a head scientist appoint kiya gaya or alehda se ik laboratory de gai jaha par is ke ilawa koi nhi ja sakta tha
Kuch inventions ke baad is ke dimagh me spaceship bannane ka plan ayya or is ne us par he kaam karna shuru kar diya
Space rocket to pehle se the likin un ke ik limit hote hai fuel ke
Is liye ye apne spaceship ke liye ik unlimited sourse ko banane me laga howa tha
Magar ye itna asan na tha unlimited source k liye veer ne soraj ko chunna or ik minni soraj banane me lag gaya
Ye banane ke liye veer ka dimag kaam phar raha tha is liye sab se pehle is ne ik artificial intelligence program banaya jo bilkul insano ke tarah sochta tha or us ke baad lag gaya apne minni sun ko banane me
Aj lagbhag 3 saal ho gai the isse is project par kaam karte howe
Is bech govt ne kai bar is se pocha ke naye inventions q nhi banna raha to us ne keh diye ke wo is par kaam kar raha hai or is bhar wo puri dunia ko heran kar de ga apni invention se
Ab atte hai story par from hero prospect
Veer…mikki (Artificial Intelligence) hum ne mini sun ik bar phir banna liya hai ab daikte hai ye kitna kamyab experiment hota hai
Mikki…yes doctor ye hamara 105 experiment test hai
Veer…yes mikki is bhar me ne har calculation ko kai bar check kiya hai is bhar me khud test drive lo ga is ka
Mikki…but doctor it is dangerous
Veer…mujhe pata hai mikki but I m confident is bar hum kamyab ho ge
Us ke baad veer ne mikki ke program ko ik chip me transfer kar ke spaceship me laga diya or phr bhar gaya minni sun ke taraf or usse b ahtiyat se chip ke pass ik khane me fit kar ke on kar diya jis se sare spaceship ko energy milne lag gai
Mikki…doctor everything is working perfecly
Veer…I know mikki know lets go for a test drive mikki plz set the coordinate
Mikki…the coordinates are set doctor
Veer…start the jump in 3..2...1
Or issi ke sath roshni ke raftar se spaceship waha se gaib ho gaya or door kahi antariksh me prakhat howa
Mikki…doctor it was a success congratulation
Veer…thank u mikki ab dusri coordinates lagao
Mikki…all set doctor
Veer…jump in 3..2...1
Or phr se spaceship roshni ke raftar se gaib ho gai or ik aise jaga prakhat howe jaha mosibat intizar kar rahe the
Mikki…doctor danger danger yaha pe ik dimensional hole hai jo hamare ship ko apni or kench raha hai
Veer(gabrate howe)…mikki jaldi se wapsi ke coordinates fix karo
Mikki…sir coordinates nhi lag rahe dimensional hole ne hamara adha ship nasht kar diya hai
Tabhi baki ka ship b hole me chala jatta hai

Nice start
Lovely update

 

[Siraj Patel]

For starting new story thread.
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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Hello Friends kaise hai ap sab log is dafa me apni ik story likh raha ho basically ye ik anime se prabavit ho ke likh raha ho umeed hai ap ko pasand ayye ge apne rai se agah kaete rahye ga
Regards
Prince2000

Bhai new story ke liye

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 01
Amar…Dad
Veer…Hero
Raj…Hero friend
Anita…Hero friend
Kiran…Rana ke beti
Sania…Teacher(maam ik govt secret organization ke liye b kaam karte hai)
Sameer…Kiran ka chachazad
Prabhas Mehta…Army Head
Boss…vikrant(fire element)
1st Larka…raju(wind element)
2nd Larka…sam(earth element)
1st Larki…nisha(ice element)
2nd Larki…simma(water element)

Year 3020
Ik scientist apne lab me kaam kar raha tha bekre baal lambi dhari daikh ke he lag raha tha kai pata nhi kitne arse se na shave ke hai na he baal banaye hai
Is scientist ka naam tha Veer (HERO) is ke umar lagbhag 35 saal the unmarried tha or anth b
Apne dimagh ke wajha se is ne apni sari paraye scholarship ke through ke the or intern ke thor par ik scientist ke sath helper ke thor par kaam karne laga
Kaam ke doran he is ke dimagh me kai thara ke plans banne lage jis par ye separately kaam karne laga
Apni sarre salary apni kaam par laga daita is ke inventions ko govt ne bht like kiye jo ke keval military based inventions the
Kuch arse baad he isse military science laboratry me as a head scientist appoint kiya gaya or alehda se ik laboratory de gai jaha par is ke ilawa koi nhi ja sakta tha
Kuch inventions ke baad is ke dimagh me spaceship bannane ka plan ayya or is ne us par he kaam karna shuru kar diya
Space rocket to pehle se the likin un ke ik limit hote hai fuel ke
Is liye ye apne spaceship ke liye ik unlimited sourse ko banane me laga howa tha
Magar ye itna asan na tha unlimited source k liye veer ne soraj ko chunna or ik minni soraj banane me lag gaya
Ye banane ke liye veer ka dimag kaam phar raha tha is liye sab se pehle is ne ik artificial intelligence program banaya jo bilkul insano ke tarah sochta tha or us ke baad lag gaya apne minni sun ko banane me
Aj lagbhag 3 saal ho gai the isse is project par kaam karte howe
Is bech govt ne kai bar is se pocha ke naye inventions q nhi banna raha to us ne keh diye ke wo is par kaam kar raha hai or is bhar wo puri dunia ko heran kar de ga apni invention se
Ab atte hai story par from hero prospect
Veer…mikki (Artificial Intelligence) hum ne mini sun ik bar phir banna liya hai ab daikte hai ye kitna kamyab experiment hota hai
Mikki…yes doctor ye hamara 105 experiment test hai
Veer…yes mikki is bhar me ne har calculation ko kai bar check kiya hai is bhar me khud test drive lo ga is ka
Mikki…but doctor it is dangerous
Veer…mujhe pata hai mikki but I m confident is bar hum kamyab ho ge
Us ke baad veer ne mikki ke program ko ik chip me transfer kar ke spaceship me laga diya or phr bhar gaya minni sun ke taraf or usse b ahtiyat se chip ke pass ik khane me fit kar ke on kar diya jis se sare spaceship ko energy milne lag gai
Mikki…doctor everything is working perfecly
Veer…I know mikki know lets go for a test drive mikki plz set the coordinate
Mikki…the coordinates are set doctor
Veer…start the jump in 3..2...1
Or issi ke sath roshni ke raftar se spaceship waha se gaib ho gaya or door kahi antariksh me prakhat howa
Mikki…doctor it was a success congratulation
Veer…thank u mikki ab dusri coordinates lagao
Mikki…all set doctor
Veer…jump in 3..2...1
Or phr se spaceship roshni ke raftar se gaib ho gai or ik aise jaga prakhat howe jaha mosibat intizar kar rahe the
Mikki…doctor danger danger yaha pe ik dimensional hole hai jo hamare ship ko apni or kench raha hai
Veer(gabrate howe)…mikki jaldi se wapsi ke coordinates fix karo
Mikki…sir coordinates nhi lag rahe dimensional hole ne hamara adha ship nasht kar diya hai
Tabhi baki ka ship b hole me chala jatta hai

Zabardast update dost

 

[Ristrcted]

bhai kab se wait kar rahha tha aapki story ka

nice update

 

[Prince2000]

Update 02

Jaise he ship hole me jata hai to mikki or minni sun combine ho jate hai or veer ke jisam me chale jate hai
Veer ke jisam me b tabdeeli shuru ho jate hai us ke jisam chota hone lagta hai
Likin veer ko is ka pata he nhi chalta q k wo behosh ho chuka hota hai veer phr se ik bacha ban jatta hai or dimensional hole usse kisi or greh pe poncha daita hai ik bache ke roop me
Veer ko jab hosh atta hai to wo utne ke koshish karta hai likin kamyab nhi hota phr jaise he is ke nazar apne hatho par jati hai wo chownk jata hai us ke hath ik bache ke hath the jo bamushkil 1 hafte ka hota hai
Veer(maan ke)…ye sab kya hai ye me bacha kaise baan gaya or me ho kaha par
AI…doctor lagta hai dimensional hole ne hame kissi or planet pe poncha diya hai
Veer(maan me)…mikki kya ye tum ho kaha par ho tum
AI…doctor us hole ke waja se me or ap ka artifical sun combine ho ke ap ke body me a gai hai
Veer…likin ab me karo kya me to kuch kar b nhi sakta yaha pare pare to me maar jao ga
Tabhi ik gari waha se guzarti hai jis me ik admi betha hota hai
Admi ke nazar veer pe parti hai to wo japdi se gari ko break marta hai or japdi se utar kar veer ke pass ponchta hai or veer ko goud me utha leta hai
Admi…kitna pyara bacha hai pata nhi kis ne isse yaha paink diya hai
Pht wo admi waha tori dair rukta hai ke shaid koi a jai par na kissi ne anna tha or na ayya is liye wo veer ko apne sath le gaya
INTRODUCTION...
Admi…Amar(commoner)…age 35…ik minni truck chalata hai jis se ache amdan ho jati hai hasmukh hai
Veer(Hero)…age 1 week…dark brown eyes jis me redish colour b tha and white body
(bhai bacha tha kuch pehna nhi tha is liye bata raha ho)
Amar veer ko utate hai or wapis gari me baith ke ghar ke tarf nikal jate hai
Ayye ab tora is world ke bare me jante hai is world me magic ik bht aam chez hai ya to wo god gifted ho ya phr artifical
Is world me humans demi humans demons elfs or b bht se prajtian rehti hai
Ik insan max 3 kind of magic kar sakta hai likin wo b waqt ke sath sath
Starters srf 1 magic kar sakta hai or ye tab pata chalta hai jab wo high scondry school start karta hai tab ik orb ke zarye unne pata chalta hai
Magic me fire wind earth water ice thunder nature dark magic hota hai tunder magic sab se powerful magic samjha jata hai is ke ilawa summoning magic b hota hai jo bht he rare hota hai
Har city ko waha ke Nobles he chalate hai yaha pe koi mantri neta ya cm nhi hota
Is city ko chalna wale rana family(Nobility) hai jo ice specialist family hai and the most richest family humare city ka naam HU city hai
HU city me zyada tar humans he rehte hai
Is ke ilawa migic gears b hote hai jo ke story me ap ko pata chalta rahe ga
Magic ke b levels hote hai
1st…starters level
2nd…midium level
3rd…expert level
4th…magistic level
Magistic level thak ponchna bht muskil hota hai or bht he rare b is city me b hai or wo is city ke army head hai jab in ka role aye ga tab pata chale ga
Ab atte hai story par aman veer ko le ke ghar ponch gai
Veer bacha zaroor tha likin samaj sab raha tha
Veer…mikki is duniya ke koi jankari hai tumare pas
Mikki…g doctor me ne wifi se connect ho ke sare jankari nikal le hai
Or phr mikki veer ko wo sab kuch batata hai jo me ne ap ko bataya hai
Veer…wow yaar magic mere pas khon sa magic hai
Mikki…sorry doctor wo ap ko khud pata karna pare ga is me me ap ke koi madad nhi kar sakta
Veer…yaar ab me doctor na raha ab mujhe veer he kaha karo
Mikki…thek hai veer
Veer…or koi baat jo batane laik ho
Mikki…haan ab jo tumne minni sun banaya tha wo tumare andar hai os liye tumare power yaha sab se zyada hai jo ke tume control karne pare ge
Veer…magar me kaise control karo ga
Mikki…me ho na me help karo ga tumare
Veer…phr thek hai
Idar aman ik unmarried banda tha is liye bache palne ka koi experience nhi tha us ke pass likin phr kissi tarah wo veer ko paal raha tha yaha thak ke jab kaam pe jata tha to b veer ko apne sath he gari me rakhta tha
Aman ka koi nhi tha sab kuch jo us ke pass tha wo us ne apni mehnat se banaya tha
Matlab ghar or ye gari yahi is ne ab thak banaya tha
Veer koi aam bacha to tha nhi is liye aman ko kabhi b bewajah tang nhi karta tha
Tora fast forward karte hai
Aj veer 5 saal ka ho gaya tha or us ke school ka first day tha is liye aman usse school chorne ayye tha
School start hote he veer class me chala gaya aman wapis chala gaya
Class me ik teacher ayye or sab ka introduction howa
Teacher ik larki jis ne apna naam kiran bataya tha kafi importance de rahe the
Kiran ke baal light blue the or ankhon ka colour b wahi tha
Phr teacher hame magic ke basic sikane lage ke magic kis tarah karna hai etc etc
Dosra period me magic ko kaise barana hai wo batane lage us ke liye dihan lagana zarori tha bacho ko is me koi interest nhi tha
Me bacha zaroor tha likin dimgh se nhi is liye ye cheze mere liye kafi iteresting the or me ghoor se sab sun raha tha or sekh raha tha
Issi tarah pehla din school ka guzar gaya chuti ke waqt papa mujhe lene a gai ab me aman ko papa he kehta tha
Aman…beta aj me ap ko le ayya ho likin kal se ap ko khud ye sab karna ho ga
Veer…thek hai papa koi problem nhi hai
Aman…good boy
Jaise ke me ne pehle bataya tha wo ik minni truck chalte the saman kabhi kaha le jana kabhi kahi
In panch salo me unno ne savings kar ke 2 minni truck or b le liye the jo ke rent pe company ko de diye the us se b ache kamaye ho jati the
Papa to zyads pare likhe nhi the likin wo chahte the ke me ache taleem hasil karo or ik ache zindagi guzaro
Me phr fresh howa to papa ne khana bana liya tha ab papa ko daikh daikh ke me ne b seek liya tha isliye hum dono ne mil ke khana kha liya or wapis apne room me a gaya
Teacher ne tareeka bata diya tha me us pe amal karne laga likin zyada dair nhi kar pa raha tha max bas 5 min us ke bad mera dihan toot jata tha aise he raat ho gai or hum khana kha ke so gai
Agle din me khud tayar ho ke school nikal gaya or aram se school lagne se pehle ponch gaya
Second period jab khatam howa to me teacher ke peche chala gaya
Veer…maam mujhe kuch pochna hai
Maam ne peche mor kar mujhe daikha or muskuraye
Maam…haan veer pocho
Veer…maam kal ap ne dihan lagane ke bare me bataya tha tareka b me ne koshish ke the likin 5 min se zyada nhi ho pata tha aisa q
Maam mere baat se heran or pareshan ho gai q k unne b pata tha bacho ka in sab me interest nhi hota
Maam…kya tum ne waqi me koshish ke the
Veer…g maam
Maam…thek hai break me mujh se a k milna thek hai
Veer…thek hai maam
Or me wapis class room me chala gaya

 

[rocking navi]

nice update bro

 

[Xander cage]

Awesome update bhai

Bas ap Veer ke age ko * kar fo kyun ki abhi woh under age hai.

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Congrats for new story Prince2000
Nice update ?