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Bahot behtareen shaandar updateUPDATE : 36
PLACE : RAJ VILLA (MUMBAI)
Abhi apna hero apni dono jaan se pyari behno ko gale lagae hue tha uski aakho mai bhi aasu the
mosom bhi begana tha aaj kitne salo baad vo apni behno se mila tha
Kisi ne khoob kaha hai
EK NAFRAT HAI JO PAL BHAR MAI MEHSOOS HO JAATI HAI
EK PYAR HAI JISE DIKHANE MAI POORI ZINDAGI BEET JAATI HAI
Raj : (
aaj kitne saalo baad mai apni behno se mila hu
ye sab un teeno aurato ki vajah se hai kabhi maaf nahi karunga un tino ko mai (karishma anjali anupriya)
)
Ritu () : tu kyu dur khadi hai aaja lag jaa apni jaan ke gale
Tanya() : ji didi abhi aa....
Ritu, alka hasne lagi deko toa kitni jaldi hai isko tarini ke chere pe bhi todhi hasi aayi par vo dobara mayush ho gayi
Kittu : namaste aap sabhi ko
Bittu : namste bhaiya ji
Tanya didi aur aap logo ko bhi namaste
Sab unka bade pyar se uttar dete hai fir raj un sabhi ka intro karvata hai kittu bittu ko tarini ko chod ke
Tarini (man mai) : mujhe pata hi tha raj mere baare mai baat bhi nahi karna chaega vo dukhi ho gayi
Bittu : (tarini ki taraf dekh ke)
Bhaiya ye kon hai inke baare mai toa bataya nahi
Raj kuch bolta tabhi inspector raj ki bmw pe dono baccho ko leke aa gaya
inspector ne salam thoka aur raj ke ishare pe wapas nikal liya
(Ab jaan lete hai tarini ke bhai bhen ke baare mai
Tarini ki behen ka naam madhuri hai behad hi pyari ladki hai
padai mai ek dum jabardast iska sapna doctor banne ka hai ye ** saal ki sundar si dikhne wali ladki hai
Samaj lo Aisha ke hi umar ki hai iska 12 th pichle saal hi ho gaya tha par paise ki Kami ke chalte
isne chod diya apna sapna !!
(inke pass paisa nahi hai kyuki tarini isse phele private job karti thi vaha se jo usko Paisa milta vo khane aur ghar ke rent mai nikal jaata tha)
Madhav ye tarini ka chota bhai hai jo 12 saal ka hai akash ka hum umar
ye bhi bohat masoom hai apni didi se sabse jyda pyar karta hai)
Madhav ne bhag ke didi...didi karke tarini ko gale se chipka liya
Tarini ne madhuri ko bhi pass bula ke baho mai bhar liyaa
Raj(man mai) : hmmm mai sahi tha ye ladki dil ki buri nahi ab isko yahi rahna padega aur toda muskura diya
Tarini : raj inko yaha kyu bulaya hai uski aakho mai dukh tha sayad use lag raha tha
raj ne in dono ke samne tarini ko beizzat karne bulaya hai
Raj : tumare dimak mai jo khayal hai usko nikal do mai aisa kuch nahi karunga samaj gayi abhi andar chalo fir baat karenge
Tarini : hairan hui aur fir sar jhuka liya
Raj : kittu bhai ye chabhi pakdo aur ye bike park kardo jara
Aur abhi 2 commando aaenge jinko government ne meri family ke liye rakha hai
unke liye apne room ke side wala 1 kamra khol Dena vo yahi rahenge
Sab logo ne aaj raj ki takat dek li thi vo jante the ye commando kitne khatarnaak hote hai upar se raj ka toa kya ho kehna
Bittu : Ji bhaiya ji
Jaise hi raj ne villa ke bade black gate ko khola toa
Tanya ko chod sabhi ke muh khule ke khule rah gaye!!
Alka : (raj mai janti hu tune puri baat nahi batai hai kuch toa hai jo tu chupa raha mai bhi pata laga ke rahungi teri hi behen hu)
Ritu : mere bhai ye tune kaise le liya kya papa ne .....
Raj : nahi maine kisi se madad nahi li ye sab meri mehnat ka ha itna jaan lijiye baaki kyu kaise vo mai nahi bata sakta didi
Tarini (ye kya hai aakhir hai kon ye ladka agar ye itna powerfull tha fir bhi aaj isne mujhe chod diya aakhir kyu vo bohat hairan aur dukhi thi)
Madhav : bhaiya ye kitna sundar hai ye aapka hai?
(Aakhir usne Puri jindagi mai sirf 2 kamre ka ghar dekha tha ab jab vo ek villa ke bahar hai aap samaj sakte ho uska haal kaisa hoga)
Raj(smiles) : haa chote yaha mai aur meri family rahti hai
Jab ye madhuri ne suna toa udas ho gayi kyuki unki toa koyi family nahi aur jiski koi family nahi unko raj apni family banata hai
Raj ne system ki madad se sabke past jaan liye the !!
Commandos guard area mai bane ghar mai chale gaye
Baaki ye log villa mai jaane lage
Ritu : ruk jaao sab log aise nahi jaaenge apun andar
Alka : aur vo bhala kyu kya shararat chal rahi hai tere dimak mai
Alka ki baat sunke madhav Ritu ke pass gaya aur usko kaan pass lane ko kaha
Ritu ko bacche bohat pasand the usne kaan pass laya aur bola didi kya shararat karogi aap
Ritu uske kaan mai aap bhi mere saath hona
Madhav haa didi
Tanya madhuri tarini ye tamasha dek rahi thi
Ritu : alka didi bas mai un dono ke saath todhi Masti karungi please please didi
Madhav : didi please
Alka : bas bas tum dono maska mat lagao thik hai bhak karlo Masti
Raj : alka didi inko mana Karo na un dono ko pata chala toa mujhe thapad jarur padenge please
Tanya : toa kya tum Ritu didi ke liye 2 thappad nahi kha sakte
Jaise hi ye baate Ritu ne suni usne ghoor ke raj ko deka jaise raj ka javab sunna chahti ho
Raj (man mai) : kaha fas gaya mai mana karunga toa ye Ritu didi thappad maareginahi karunga toa mahima didi
Raj : alka didi mai kuch bhool gaya aata hu jara 2 min aur baag gaya kittu bittu ke pass
Sab khil khila ke has padi !!
Tanya and family already villa mai the !!
Achanak se hi Tina ne bahar ka gate khola usko uski beti ke saath ye naye chere dikhayi diye
Villa ek dum thanda ho rakha tha aur vastav mai itna sundar tha ki kya hi kehna is villa ka sab usko dekhne mai khoye the
Tanya : didi ye meri mummy hai
Ritu aage badhi aur usne jaake Tina ke pair chune chae toa usne gale se laga liya aur boli betiya pair nahi chuti
Alka ne bhi chaha toa usko phele hi usne gale se chipka liya
In dono ke deka dekhi MADHAV THE SHARARTI ne bhi jaake Tina ke pair chu liye aur bola mai toa ladki nahi hu aunty
Tina ne haste hue usko chipka liya
Tarini aur madhuri ko bhi tina ne gale lagaya
Tanya ne ishare se Tina se pucha sab kaha hai aur mahima didi kaha hai
Tina : sab andar hai aur mahima kitchen Mai hai sayad
Ritu : aap sabshhh vo andar kitchen Mai jaane lagi madhav bhi uske piche piche jaane laga
Mahima : ye pata nahi kyu
Aaj ye raj ka baccha hume yaha chod ke gayab hai subah se dekhti hu aane do
Mahima gas slab ki tarah muh karke khadi thi achanak se Ritu ne uski aakho pe haath rakh diya aur piche se apni Bina bullet wali gun laga di
Ritu : ladki chup chap khadi rah yhi jara bhi chillayi toa iska anjaan thik nahi hoga
Mahima ki gand fat chuki thi usko samaj nahi aa raha tha uske piche ye gun kisne laga di hai aur kya hua abhi abhi ye aur kon hai jo uske
ghar mai ghus gaya
Mahima : chod do mujhe Varna tum janti nahi mera bhai aa gaya toa chodega nahi tumko
Ritu(haste hue) : tere bhai
Ab mahima ko ye jaani pehchani aawaj lagi vo turant piche ghum gayi jaise hi usne Ritu ko deka 2 pal mai hi pehchan gayi
Mahima rone lagi khub tej tej usko bohat bada jhatka laga itne saalo baad
Ritu usko khich ke hall mai le aayi
Fir dobara jaise hi uski nazar alka pe gayi vo firse rone lagi
Aur didi bolke baag ke alka ke pair chue aur jaake gale se chipak gayi jaise koi choti bacchi ho
Aur fir alka ko chod Ritu ko sofe pe gira ke uski godi mai Chad ke chipak gayi aur rone lagi didi aapko ab yaad aayi meri kaha chali gayi thi aap didi
Ritu aur alka ki bhi aakhe nam thi
Tina sayad samaj gayi thi ye raj ki badi maa ki betiya hai
Ritu : shant hoja choti tu toa sab janti hai fir bhi puch rahi
Mahima usse kisi chote bacche ki tarah chipki bethi rahi
In sabki awaj sunke sabhi Ghar Wale ( garima bhusan sudha shalini ram akash muskan ramaa Aisha vikash joohi kunnu sweety Pinki rinki)
Sabhi family members niche aa jaate hai jaise hi is baar garima ki nazar Ritu didi aur alka didi pe jaati hai uske bhi aasu nikalne lage vo jaake alka ke pair chuti hai aur uske gale lag jaati hai
Alka : kaise hai meri choti behen
Garima : didi mai badiya hu
toa vo aapko bhi wapas le aaya
Alka : tu bilkul meri tarah hai garima
Ritu : mujhse nahi milegi garima
Alka : pehel is shaitaan ki nani ko toa hata apni godi se (mahima ki baat kar rahi thi)
Mahima ye sunke aur kas ke chipak jaati hai Ritu se garima aake Ritu ke bhi pair chuti hai aur gale lag jaati hai
2 Min baad Ritu in dono ko alag karti hai aur alka ko saath leke
Bhusan aur sudha ke pair chute hai kyuki un dono ne deka hua hua hai bhusan sudha ko apne ghar pe
Alka : kaise ho Nani Nana ji aap dono
Sudha(smiles) : kaise hai meri bacchi tu ab yaad aayi hai meri jab choti si thi tab dekha tha tujhe Milne bhi nahi aayi tum dono
Ritu(evil smile) : Nani aap toa young ho gayi Nana ji kahi aapne toa kuch nahi kiya
Nana(haste hue) : nahi nahi beta bas teri Nani kuch...
Sudha unko ghurne lagi vo sofe ki taraf nikal liye
Unhone jaake vikash ke bhi pair chue usne bhi pyar se sar seh laya
Fir dono ne jaake ram aur Shalini ke bhi pair chue
Shalini : meri pyari bacchiyo tum dono ko mai yaad huna
Alka : koi apni sehli jaise mami jaan ko kaise bhul sakta hai hasne lagi alka aur Shalini
Alka aur Ritu ne ramaa ko gale se lagaya sweety ko bhi
Fir dono ne Pinki aur rinki ko bhi gale lagaya
Sabhi baccho ne bhi un dono ka abhi wadan kiya
Tabhi sudha ne tarini aur madhuri ki taraf ishara karke alka se pucha
Alka ne aakh band karke ishare se kaha raj ko aane dijiye
Bhusan sudha jante the kuch gadbad hai par vo shant hi rahe
Aisha ko ye bhi maloom tha hua kya hai vo bhi shant rahi par uske chere pe hameshaa ki tarah muskurahat thi
Mahima ne wapas se Ritu ko sofe pe dhakel ke uski godi mai sawari ki
Aur boli didi aapne mere saath itna bakwas mazaak kyu kiya ?
Ritu kuch bolti ki
madhav the shararti ne kaha
didi mai kuch bolu
Mahima ne usko pass bulaya aur uska gaal sehlate hue boli haa bolo na beta
Madhav : didi isme Ritu didi ki galti nahi ye vo ye vo....vo raj bhaiya ka plan tha vo ye bata ke guard bhaiya ke pass baag gaye the
Aisa bolke usne Ritu ko aakh marti
Ritu ne bhi usko aakh maardi
Ye sunke alka Tanya tarini madhuri hakki bakki rah gayi
Mahima : kyaaaaa......ye usne Kiya ek toa subah se gayab hai ab ye use nahi chodungi aaj mai samjhta kya hai vo mai sabke saath mazak karti hu usne mere saath karvaya vo bhi didi se raj ke bacche Ghar aa tu
Aakash ki aakho mai chamak aa gayi use koi uske jaisa mil gaya usne Ritu aur madhav ko aakh marte dek liya tha
Aakash : ab aaega maza ab yaha sirf shararat hi hongi hihi no school
Aakash ne aage badh ke madhav se haath milaya
Aakash : hi mai akash
Madhav : hi mai madhav
Aakash ne madhav ko gale lagaya aur kaan mai kaha plan toa aacha hai meri team join karoge hum dhamaal macha denge
Madhav haste hue haa kyu nahi dost hai hum ab
Tarini bohat khush thi yaha sabke saath apne bhai ko milta dekh ke par sayad vo kuch din baad wapas chale jaaye
muskan ko laga jaise ye ladki madhuri akeli thi vo iske saath dosti karke ghul mil gayi
Alka ne sudha ko ishara kiya
Sudha : kunnu kirti jaao apne play area mai khelo jaake
Aakash madhav tum dono bhi jaao upar jaake khelo
Kunnu aur kirti vaha se baag gayi
Aakash madhav ko saath liye 4 th floor pe baag gaya jaha raj ne games area bana rakha tha jaha car driving se leke sabhi latest games thi aakash ke liye !!
Abhi hall mai
Tina-vikash
Bhushan-sudha
Ram-shalini
Rinki-pinki
Ramaa-sweety
alka-garima
Ritu-mahima
Muskan-aisha
Tarini-madhuri
(Ye sabhi family members hall mai the sabhi Jake sofe pe beth gaye )
Raj
vo dono commandos ko dekhne gaya tha kahi koi dikkat nahi
Vaise bhi guard room bhi marbel se bana hua tha attach toilets vagrah sab the aur 5 rooms the bade bade
Vaha sab set karke apni parking mai chala gaya
Jaha abhi raj ki family ki 4 car 1 vikash ki car 1 raj ki bike khadi thi
Abhi yaha alka aur Ritu ki bhi laal batti ki gadi laani thi
raj ne kuch socha vo vaise bhi abhi sando mai tha aur niche jeans mai
vo sidha jaake pool ki deep side kudh gaya jaha pool 15 feet deep tha
Vo sidha pani mai jaake pool ke niche farsh pe beth gaya aur dhayan lagane laga
usne 5 min aakhe band karke apne mastak ke Bindu ko band aakho se dekha usko apne andar Suraj ki garmi mehsus hui aur usko apne sarir mai takat ka ehsas hua usne 5 minutes dhayan lagaya
Back to past ......
....raj ye kyu kar raha hai jante hai ab
Raste mai aate hue jab raj khamosh tha tab vo Noor se baat kar raha tha
.....
Raj : hello Noor kaise ho
Noor : ohh janab meri yaad aa hi gayi (awaj mai narazgi thi)
Raj : maaf kardo yaar tum toa janti ho kya hua
Noor : haa mai janti hu aaj kuch bhi thik nahi hua
Aur uski awaj mai sadness lag rahi thi
Raj : arre meri rani ji khush raha kijiye aap hasne laga
Noor(blush) : kaaa kyaa rani bas bhi karo raj huh
Raj : Noor mai kuch puchna chahta hu
Noor : haa kaho
Raj : vo laser kab tak full install hogi ?
Noor : raat ko 9:57 pe ye full install ho jaaegi raj
Raj : Noor jaisa tumne Aaj deka mujhe had se jyda gussa aa raha tha maano mai apne control mai Nahi
mai kya karu Noor
Noor : raj maine dekha sab kuch mai bhi isi baare mai baat karna chahti thi tum ek kaam karo kal se roz pani mai Beth ke dhyan lagao
Raj : vo kyu Noor ?
Noor : kyuki tumhare andar sakshat surya ka ansh hai suryamani ki vajah se isse tumhare bahari sharir aur mastishq mai Shanti aaegi
Aur sehen Shakti badegi
Raj : samaj gaya Noor thankyou
Noor : aur raj ye sab business ka kaam jaldi shuru karo kyuki Hume nikalna hai aur pata nahi hume vaha 15 - 20 din bhi lag jaaye tum samaj rahe hona raj
Raj : hmm mai samaj gaya Noor accha main kuch puchna chahta tha kya mai laser installation ke baad physical ho sakta hu ?
Noor : tum nahi sudhar sakte ho raj haa ho sakte ho aur tum jise shikar banana chahte ho janti hu uske baare mai
lekin dhyan rahe raj tum koi aam insaan nahi vo ladki akeli nahi jhel paaegi tumhe isiliye aaram se hi !!
Raj : haa haa Noor samaj gaya mai thanks Noor !!
Back to present!!
Raj : hmm sach mai dhyan laga ke mujhe bohat Shanti ka ehsas ho raha hai chalo ab ye kapde utar deta hu
Raj ne apni sando nikal di barmuda vahi chod jeans daal ke chal diya villa ke andar ki taraf ganaa gungunate hue !!
(Andar bethe sabhi logo ko is gaane ki awaj aa rahi thi sab kho gaye the is awaj mai)
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun haari
Hoon piya bas teri main
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main…)
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri
Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee
Ishq ye paake main tera
Nikhar jaaun ri…
Piya bas teri main
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main
toh khari main khari main…
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Uski awaj Puri badal chuki thi sach mai aisa lag raha tha koi professional gun Guna raha ho
sab ye awaj bahar se aati sun rahe the sab madhosh the
Unhe nahi pata tha raj gun Gunata bhi hai
Tabhi raj apni nangi upper body mai aa gaya ghar ke andar
6.5 feet ka lambe balo wala abs aur muscles wala ye koi Rajkumar vaha aa gaya ho jaise koi devta ho itna sundar tha raj aur uski vo awaj
Muskan ke dil mai halchal uthne lagi madhuri ne jaise hi raj ko is roop mai dekha vo kho chuki thi
Yahi haal sabhi ladkiyo ka tha khas kar mahima ka use vo us din wali ghatna yaad aa gayi
tabhi shalini aage aayi aur raj ke kaan pakad liye
Shalini : kyu re badmash ye kaise ghum raha hai tu nanga punga tu itna accha gaana nhi gaata hai ye kab bataega mujhe
Raj : aah maa chodo mujhe aah dard ho raha hai
Jaise hi raj ke muh se sabne shalini ke liye maa suna sab hairaan ho gaye
Vaha tabhi shaitaano ki nani mahima bhi aa gayi
Aur usne dusra kaan pakad liya raj ka
Raj : aah aapko kya hua ab
Mahima : tune mere saath ye kaisa mazak karvaya aaj
madhav bata raha tha tune Ritu didi se mere saath mazaak karvane ke liye kaha
Raj : kkkk kyaaa haa nahi nahi matlab maine nahi kiya ye in dono ne hi Kiya didi juth bol rhi
Mahima : meri didi jooth nahi bolti tu toa gaya
Tabhi raj ko kuch suja vo shalini ko bola maa ek baar kaan chodo mera wapas pakad Lena fir
Raj mahima ke kaan mai kuch aisa bola mahima Sharma ke vaha se bathroom mai baag gayi
Sab firse hairaan the
Ritu : sabse jyda hairaan thi ye kya bola usne mahima ko usko janna tha socha baad mai mahima se hi puchegi
Raj : ye lo maa wapas pakad lo kaan
Shalini ne uske baal sehlate hue apne se kas ke chipka liya
Raj ko uske nipples ka feel ho raha tha shalini ne uske gaal ko kiss kiya aur raj jaake apni ramaa chachi Tina mummy ke bhi gale laga
Vikash : beta tumne hum sabko yaha kyu bulaya hai aur ye ladki ka bhi nahi bataya ( matlab tarini ka )
Raj : papa mai sab batata hu ruko bas todha sa aap
Raj : garimaa didi aap ek kaam kardo room se ek tshirt laake dedo mujhe
Or
Maa kya aap sabke liye 1 - 1 cup coffee aaogi usne shalini se kaha
Shalini : aare ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai rukja beta
Tina : ruko shalini mai bhi aayi
Ramaa and pinki : hum bhi aayi didi ruko
Ye charo kitchen Mai nikal jaati hai
Abhi dekhte hai raj kya bolta hai agle update mai dosto abhi ke liye tata
Bada emotional or shararat se bharpoor tha aaj ka update
Emotional tha Charo behno ka milna or shararati tha Madhav ko raj ko leker jhoot Bolna
Raj n shayad Mahima ho Raat me Milan ke liye kaha h isliye woh Sharma ker bhagi h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
is story ke saath don't worry I know ye uske jitni abhi acchi nahi but just see!!