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Fantasy MAHAGATHA : EK PRACHAND YODHA

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UPDATE : 36
PLACE : RAJ VILLA (MUMBAI)

Abhi apna hero apni dono jaan se pyari behno ko gale lagae hue tha uski aakho mai bhi aasu the

mosom bhi begana tha aaj kitne salo baad vo apni behno se mila tha


Kisi ne khoob kaha hai

EK NAFRAT HAI JO PAL BHAR MAI MEHSOOS HO JAATI HAI
EK PYAR HAI JISE DIKHANE MAI POORI ZINDAGI BEET JAATI HAI


Raj : (
aaj kitne saalo baad mai apni behno se mila hu

ye sab un teeno aurato ki vajah se hai kabhi maaf nahi karunga un tino ko mai (karishma anjali anupriya)
)

Ritu (😼) : tu kyu dur khadi hai aaja lag jaa apni jaan ke gale

Tanya(🥲) : ji didi abhi aa....

Ritu, alka hasne lagi deko toa kitni jaldi hai isko tarini ke chere pe bhi todhi hasi aayi par vo dobara mayush ho gayi

Kittu : namaste aap sabhi ko

Bittu : namste bhaiya ji
Tanya didi aur aap logo ko bhi namaste

Sab unka bade pyar se uttar dete hai fir raj un sabhi ka intro karvata hai kittu bittu ko tarini ko chod ke

Tarini (man mai) : mujhe pata hi tha raj mere baare mai baat bhi nahi karna chaega vo dukhi ho gayi

Bittu : (tarini ki taraf dekh ke)
Bhaiya ye kon hai inke baare mai toa bataya nahi

Raj kuch bolta tabhi inspector raj ki bmw pe dono baccho ko leke aa gaya
inspector ne salam thoka aur raj ke ishare pe wapas nikal liya

(Ab jaan lete hai tarini ke bhai bhen ke baare mai

Tarini ki behen ka naam madhuri hai behad hi pyari ladki hai
padai mai ek dum jabardast iska sapna doctor banne ka hai ye ** saal ki sundar si dikhne wali ladki hai
Samaj lo Aisha ke hi umar ki hai iska 12 th pichle saal hi ho gaya tha par paise ki Kami ke chalte
isne chod diya apna sapna !!

(inke pass paisa nahi hai kyuki tarini isse phele private job karti thi vaha se jo usko Paisa milta vo khane aur ghar ke rent mai nikal jaata tha)

Madhav ye tarini ka chota bhai hai jo 12 saal ka hai akash ka hum umar
ye bhi bohat masoom hai apni didi se sabse jyda pyar karta hai)

Madhav ne bhag ke didi...didi karke tarini ko gale se chipka liya
Tarini ne madhuri ko bhi pass bula ke baho mai bhar liyaa

Raj(man mai) : hmmm mai sahi tha ye ladki dil ki buri nahi ab isko yahi rahna padega aur toda muskura diya

Tarini : raj inko yaha kyu bulaya hai uski aakho mai dukh tha sayad use lag raha tha

raj ne in dono ke samne tarini ko beizzat karne bulaya hai

Raj : tumare dimak mai jo khayal hai usko nikal do mai aisa kuch nahi karunga samaj gayi abhi andar chalo fir baat karenge

Tarini : hairan hui aur fir sar jhuka liya

Raj : kittu bhai ye chabhi pakdo aur ye bike park kardo jara

Aur abhi 2 commando aaenge jinko government ne meri family ke liye rakha hai
unke liye apne room ke side wala 1 kamra khol Dena vo yahi rahenge

Sab logo ne aaj raj ki takat dek li thi vo jante the ye commando kitne khatarnaak hote hai upar se raj ka toa kya ho kehna

Bittu :
Ji bhaiya ji

Jaise hi raj ne villa ke bade black gate ko khola toa
Tanya ko chod sabhi ke muh khule ke khule rah gaye!!🙀

Alka : (raj mai janti hu tune puri baat nahi batai hai kuch toa hai jo tu chupa raha mai bhi pata laga ke rahungi teri hi behen hu)

Ritu : mere bhai ye tune kaise le liya kya papa ne .....

Raj : nahi maine kisi se madad nahi li ye sab meri mehnat ka ha itna jaan lijiye baaki kyu kaise vo mai nahi bata sakta didi

Tarini (ye kya hai aakhir hai kon ye ladka agar ye itna powerfull tha fir bhi aaj isne mujhe chod diya aakhir kyu vo bohat hairan aur dukhi thi)

Madhav : bhaiya ye kitna sundar hai ye aapka hai?

(Aakhir usne Puri jindagi mai sirf 2 kamre ka ghar dekha tha ab jab vo ek villa ke bahar hai aap samaj sakte ho uska haal kaisa hoga)

Raj(smiles) : haa chote yaha mai aur meri family rahti hai

Jab ye madhuri ne suna toa udas ho gayi kyuki unki toa koyi family nahi aur jiski koi family nahi unko raj apni family banata hai😎😆

Raj ne system ki madad se sabke past jaan liye the !!

Commandos guard area mai bane ghar mai chale gaye
Baaki ye log villa mai jaane lage

Ritu : ruk jaao sab log aise nahi jaaenge apun andar

Alka : aur vo bhala kyu kya shararat chal rahi hai tere dimak mai

Alka ki baat sunke madhav Ritu ke pass gaya aur usko kaan pass lane ko kaha

Ritu ko bacche bohat pasand the usne kaan pass laya aur bola didi kya shararat karogi aap

Ritu uske kaan mai aap bhi mere saath hona

Madhav haa didi

Tanya madhuri tarini ye tamasha dek rahi thi

Ritu : alka didi bas mai un dono ke saath todhi Masti karungi please please didi 🥺🥺

Madhav : didi please 🥺

Alka : bas bas tum dono maska mat lagao thik hai bhak karlo Masti

Raj : alka didi inko mana Karo na un dono ko pata chala toa mujhe thapad jarur padenge please 😔😔

Tanya : toa kya tum Ritu didi ke liye 2 thappad nahi kha sakte 😳

Jaise hi ye baate Ritu ne suni usne ghoor ke raj ko deka jaise raj ka javab sunna chahti ho

Raj (man mai) : kaha fas gaya mai mana karunga toa ye Ritu didi thappad maaregi 🗿nahi karunga toa mahima didi☠️

Raj : alka didi mai kuch bhool gaya aata hu jara 2 min aur baag gaya kittu bittu ke pass

Sab khil khila ke has padi !!

Tanya and family already villa mai the !!

Achanak se hi Tina ne bahar ka gate khola usko uski beti ke saath ye naye chere dikhayi diye

Villa ek dum thanda ho rakha tha aur vastav mai itna sundar tha ki kya hi kehna is villa ka sab usko dekhne mai khoye the

Tanya : didi ye meri mummy hai

Ritu aage badhi aur usne jaake Tina ke pair chune chae toa usne gale se laga liya aur boli betiya pair nahi chuti


Alka ne bhi chaha toa usko phele hi usne gale se chipka liya

In dono ke deka dekhi MADHAV THE SHARARTI ne bhi jaake Tina ke pair chu liye aur bola mai toa ladki nahi hu aunty
Tina ne haste hue usko chipka liya

Tarini aur madhuri ko bhi tina ne gale lagaya

Tanya ne ishare se Tina se pucha sab kaha hai aur mahima didi kaha hai ☠️😂

Tina : sab andar hai aur mahima kitchen Mai hai sayad


Ritu : aap sab 🤫 shhh vo andar kitchen Mai jaane lagi madhav bhi uske piche piche jaane laga

Mahima : ye pata nahi kyu
Aaj ye raj ka baccha hume yaha chod ke gayab hai subah se dekhti hu aane do

Mahima gas slab ki tarah muh karke khadi thi achanak se Ritu ne uski aakho pe haath rakh diya aur piche se apni Bina bullet wali gun laga di

Ritu : ladki chup chap khadi rah yhi jara bhi chillayi toa iska anjaan thik nahi hoga

Mahima ki gand fat chuki thi usko samaj nahi aa raha tha uske piche ye gun kisne laga di hai aur kya hua abhi abhi ye aur kon hai jo uske
ghar mai ghus gaya

Mahima : chod do mujhe Varna tum janti nahi mera bhai aa gaya toa chodega nahi tumko

Ritu(haste hue) : tere bhai 😂🗿ki toa khud mere aage fat jaati hai


Ab mahima ko ye jaani pehchani aawaj lagi vo turant piche ghum gayi jaise hi usne Ritu ko deka 2 pal mai hi pehchan gayi

Mahima rone lagi khub tej tej usko bohat bada jhatka laga itne saalo baad

Ritu usko khich ke hall mai le aayi
Fir dobara jaise hi uski nazar alka pe gayi vo firse rone lagi

Aur didi bolke baag ke alka ke pair chue aur jaake gale se chipak gayi jaise koi choti bacchi ho

Aur fir alka ko chod Ritu ko sofe pe gira ke uski godi mai Chad ke chipak gayi aur rone lagi didi aapko ab yaad aayi meri kaha chali gayi thi aap didi

Ritu aur alka ki bhi aakhe nam thi

Tina sayad samaj gayi thi ye raj ki badi maa ki betiya hai

Ritu : shant hoja choti tu toa sab janti hai fir bhi puch rahi

Mahima usse kisi chote bacche ki tarah chipki bethi rahi

In sabki awaj sunke sabhi Ghar Wale ( garima bhusan sudha shalini ram akash muskan ramaa Aisha vikash joohi kunnu sweety Pinki rinki)

Sabhi family members niche aa jaate hai jaise hi is baar garima ki nazar Ritu didi aur alka didi pe jaati hai uske bhi aasu nikalne lage vo jaake alka ke pair chuti hai aur uske gale lag jaati hai

Alka : kaise hai meri choti behen

Garima : didi mai badiya hu
toa vo aapko bhi wapas le aaya

Alka : tu bilkul meri tarah hai garima

Ritu : mujhse nahi milegi garima

Alka : pehel is shaitaan ki nani ko toa hata apni godi se (mahima ki baat kar rahi thi)

Mahima ye sunke aur kas ke chipak jaati hai Ritu se garima aake Ritu ke bhi pair chuti hai aur gale lag jaati hai

2 Min baad Ritu in dono ko alag karti hai aur alka ko saath leke
Bhusan aur sudha ke pair chute hai kyuki un dono ne deka hua hua hai bhusan sudha ko apne ghar pe

Alka : kaise ho Nani Nana ji aap dono

Sudha(smiles) : kaise hai meri bacchi tu ab yaad aayi hai meri jab choti si thi tab dekha tha tujhe Milne bhi nahi aayi tum dono

Ritu(evil smile☠️) : Nani aap toa young ho gayi Nana ji kahi aapne toa kuch nahi kiya

Nana(haste hue) : nahi nahi beta bas teri Nani kuch...

Sudha unko ghurne lagi vo sofe ki taraf nikal liye

Unhone jaake vikash ke bhi pair chue usne bhi pyar se sar seh laya

Fir dono ne jaake ram aur Shalini ke bhi pair chue

Shalini : meri pyari bacchiyo tum dono ko mai yaad huna

Alka : koi apni sehli jaise mami jaan ko kaise bhul sakta hai hasne lagi alka aur Shalini

Alka aur Ritu ne ramaa ko gale se lagaya sweety ko bhi


Fir dono ne Pinki aur rinki ko bhi gale lagaya

Sabhi baccho ne bhi un dono ka abhi wadan kiya

Tabhi sudha ne tarini aur madhuri ki taraf ishara karke alka se pucha

Alka ne aakh band karke ishare se kaha raj ko aane dijiye

Bhusan sudha jante the kuch gadbad hai par vo shant hi rahe

Aisha ko ye bhi maloom tha hua kya hai vo bhi shant rahi par uske chere pe hameshaa ki tarah muskurahat thi

Mahima ne wapas se Ritu ko sofe pe dhakel ke uski godi mai sawari ki
Aur boli didi aapne mere saath itna bakwas mazaak kyu kiya ?

Ritu kuch bolti ki
madhav the shararti ne kaha

didi mai kuch bolu

Mahima ne usko pass bulaya aur uska gaal sehlate hue boli haa bolo na beta

Madhav : didi isme Ritu didi ki galti nahi ye vo ye vo....vo raj bhaiya ka plan tha vo ye bata ke guard bhaiya ke pass baag gaye the

Aisa bolke usne Ritu ko aakh marti
Ritu ne bhi usko aakh maardi

Ye sunke alka Tanya tarini madhuri hakki bakki rah gayi

Mahima : kyaaaaa......ye usne Kiya ek toa subah se gayab hai ab ye use nahi chodungi aaj mai samjhta kya hai vo mai sabke saath mazak karti hu usne mere saath karvaya vo bhi didi se raj ke bacche Ghar aa tu

Aakash ki aakho mai chamak aa gayi use koi uske jaisa mil gaya usne Ritu aur madhav ko aakh marte dek liya tha

Aakash : ab aaega maza ab yaha sirf shararat hi hongi hihi no school 🎒 😁👁️☠️👁️

Aakash ne aage badh ke madhav se haath milaya

Aakash : hi mai akash

Madhav : hi mai madhav

Aakash ne madhav ko gale lagaya aur kaan mai kaha plan toa aacha hai meri team join karoge hum dhamaal macha denge

Madhav haste hue haa kyu nahi dost hai hum ab

Tarini bohat khush thi yaha sabke saath apne bhai ko milta dekh ke par sayad vo kuch din baad wapas chale jaaye

muskan ko laga jaise ye ladki madhuri akeli thi vo iske saath dosti karke ghul mil gayi

Alka ne sudha ko ishara kiya

Sudha : kunnu kirti jaao apne play area mai khelo jaake

Aakash madhav tum dono bhi jaao upar jaake khelo

Kunnu aur kirti vaha se baag gayi

Aakash madhav ko saath liye 4 th floor pe baag gaya jaha raj ne games area bana rakha tha jaha car driving se leke sabhi latest games thi aakash ke liye !!

Abhi hall mai
Tina-vikash
Bhushan-sudha
Ram-shalini
Rinki-pinki
Ramaa-sweety
alka-garima
Ritu-mahima
Muskan-aisha
Tarini-madhuri

(Ye sabhi family members hall mai the sabhi Jake sofe pe beth gaye )

Raj
vo dono commandos ko dekhne gaya tha kahi koi dikkat nahi

Vaise bhi guard room bhi marbel se bana hua tha attach toilets vagrah sab the aur 5 rooms the bade bade
Vaha sab set karke apni parking mai chala gaya

Jaha abhi raj ki family ki 4 car 1 vikash ki car 1 raj ki bike khadi thi
Abhi yaha alka aur Ritu ki bhi laal batti ki gadi laani thi

raj ne kuch socha vo vaise bhi abhi sando mai tha aur niche jeans mai


vo sidha jaake pool ki deep side kudh gaya jaha pool 15 feet deep tha

Vo sidha pani mai jaake pool ke niche farsh pe beth gaya aur dhayan lagane laga
usne 5 min aakhe band karke apne mastak ke Bindu ko band aakho se dekha usko apne andar Suraj ki garmi mehsus hui aur usko apne sarir mai takat ka ehsas hua usne 5 minutes dhayan lagaya


Back to past ......

....raj ye kyu kar raha hai jante hai ab

Raste mai aate hue jab raj khamosh tha tab vo Noor se baat kar raha tha

.....

Raj : hello Noor kaise ho

Noor : ohh janab meri yaad aa hi gayi (awaj mai narazgi thi)

Raj : maaf kardo yaar tum toa janti ho kya hua

Noor : haa mai janti hu aaj kuch bhi thik nahi hua
Aur uski awaj mai sadness lag rahi thi

Raj : arre meri rani ji khush raha kijiye aap hasne laga

Noor(blush) : kaaa kyaa rani bas bhi karo raj huh

Raj : Noor mai kuch puchna chahta hu

Noor : haa kaho

Raj : vo laser kab tak full install hogi ?

Noor : raat ko 9:57 pe ye full install ho jaaegi raj

Raj : Noor jaisa tumne Aaj deka mujhe had se jyda gussa aa raha tha maano mai apne control mai Nahi
mai kya karu Noor

Noor : raj maine dekha sab kuch mai bhi isi baare mai baat karna chahti thi tum ek kaam karo kal se roz pani mai Beth ke dhyan lagao

Raj : vo kyu Noor ?

Noor : kyuki tumhare andar sakshat surya ka ansh hai suryamani ki vajah se isse tumhare bahari sharir aur mastishq mai Shanti aaegi

Aur sehen Shakti badegi

Raj : samaj gaya Noor thankyou

Noor : aur raj ye sab business ka kaam jaldi shuru karo kyuki Hume nikalna hai aur pata nahi hume vaha 15 - 20 din bhi lag jaaye tum samaj rahe hona raj


Raj : hmm mai samaj gaya Noor accha main kuch puchna chahta tha kya mai laser installation ke baad physical ho sakta hu ?👁️👁️

Noor : tum nahi sudhar sakte ho raj haa ho sakte ho aur tum jise shikar banana chahte ho janti hu uske baare mai
lekin dhyan rahe raj tum koi aam insaan nahi vo ladki akeli nahi jhel paaegi tumhe isiliye aaram se hi !!

Raj : haa haa Noor samaj gaya mai thanks Noor !!

Back to present!!

Raj : hmm sach mai dhyan laga ke mujhe bohat Shanti ka ehsas ho raha hai chalo ab ye kapde utar deta hu

Raj ne apni sando nikal di barmuda vahi chod jeans daal ke chal diya villa ke andar ki taraf ganaa gungunate hue !!

(Andar bethe sabhi logo ko is gaane ki awaj aa rahi thi sab kho gaye the is awaj mai)


Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun haari
Hoon piya bas teri main
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main…)


Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri
Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee
Ishq ye paake main tera
Nikhar jaaun ri…


Piya bas teri main
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main
toh khari main khari main…
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan



Uski awaj Puri badal chuki thi sach mai aisa lag raha tha koi professional gun Guna raha ho

sab ye awaj bahar se aati sun rahe the sab madhosh the

Unhe nahi pata tha raj gun Gunata bhi hai

Tabhi raj apni nangi upper body mai aa gaya ghar ke andar

6.5 feet ka lambe balo wala abs aur muscles wala ye koi Rajkumar vaha aa gaya ho jaise koi devta ho itna sundar tha raj aur uski vo awaj

Muskan ke dil mai halchal uthne lagi madhuri ne jaise hi raj ko is roop mai dekha vo kho chuki thi

Yahi haal sabhi ladkiyo ka tha khas kar mahima ka use vo us din wali ghatna yaad aa gayi

tabhi shalini aage aayi aur raj ke kaan pakad liye

Shalini : kyu re badmash ye kaise ghum raha hai tu nanga punga tu itna accha gaana nhi gaata hai ye kab bataega mujhe

Raj : aah maa chodo mujhe aah dard ho raha hai

Jaise hi raj ke muh se sabne shalini ke liye maa suna sab hairaan ho gaye

Vaha tabhi shaitaano ki nani mahima bhi aa gayi
Aur usne dusra kaan pakad liya raj ka

Raj : aah aapko kya hua ab

Mahima : tune mere saath ye kaisa mazak karvaya aaj

madhav bata raha tha tune Ritu didi se mere saath mazaak karvane ke liye kaha

Raj : kkkk kyaaa haa nahi nahi matlab maine nahi kiya ye in dono ne hi Kiya didi juth bol rhi

Mahima : meri didi jooth nahi bolti tu toa gaya

Tabhi raj ko kuch suja vo shalini ko bola maa ek baar kaan chodo mera wapas pakad Lena fir

Raj mahima ke kaan mai kuch aisa bola mahima Sharma ke vaha se bathroom mai baag gayi

Sab firse hairaan the
Ritu : sabse jyda hairaan thi ye kya bola usne mahima ko usko janna tha socha baad mai mahima se hi puchegi

Raj : ye lo maa wapas pakad lo kaan

Shalini ne uske baal sehlate hue apne se kas ke chipka liya
Raj ko uske nipples ka feel ho raha tha shalini ne uske gaal ko kiss kiya aur raj jaake apni ramaa chachi Tina mummy ke bhi gale laga

Vikash : beta tumne hum sabko yaha kyu bulaya hai aur ye ladki ka bhi nahi bataya ( matlab tarini ka )


Raj : papa mai sab batata hu ruko bas todha sa aap

Raj : garimaa didi aap ek kaam kardo room se ek tshirt laake dedo mujhe
Or
Maa kya aap sabke liye 1 - 1 cup coffee aaogi usne shalini se kaha

Shalini : aare ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai rukja beta

Tina : ruko shalini mai bhi aayi

Ramaa and pinki : hum bhi aayi didi ruko

Ye charo kitchen Mai nikal jaati hai

Abhi dekhte hai raj kya bolta hai agle update mai dosto abhi ke liye tata✨🤗
Nice update bro
 

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