Fantasy Maharaja- Ek Ankahi Dastaan

[Nevil singh]

Update 01

Ye wo samay tha jab rajayon ka nahi aadhe se jyada ilaakon par kabilon ka raaj hota tha...

raja bhi huva karte the par tab unki sankhya bahut kum thi ya kahin-kahin to bilkul hi nahi...

chhote-chhote kabilon me ye duniya bati huyi thi...unn kabilon me raja nahi sardaar raj karte the...

aisa hi ek chota kabila tha singh kabila jiski aaj uske padosi kabile se jung hone wali thi...

dono kabilon ke sainik aamne-samne taiyaar khade the jung kabhi bhi ho sakti thi...

wahin ek gufa me ek sadhvi varshon se tapasya kar rahi thi...

uske paas bahut gyaan tha isiliye sab use gyaani maa keh kar bulate the...

uski baat talne ki himmat kissi me bhi nahi thi...abhi bhi wo tapasya me leen thi...

tabhi achanak uski aankhon ke samne kissi ka aksh aa gaya...jise dekhte hi uski aankhen khul gayi...

ye uske liye ek sanket tha ki kuch bahut galat ho raha hai jise use rokna hoga...

wo turant gufa se bahar aayi aur chal padi uss disha me jahan ke sanket use mile the...

wo abhi ja hi rahi thi ki raste me use bhagdad dikhayi di...

jise dekh wo aur bhi jyada baichen ho gayi aur ek aurat ko rok kar poochne lagi...

gyaani maa- kya huva tum sab bhaag kyun rahe ho...

wo aurat gyaani maa ko janti thi to usne aadar se bola...

aurat- gyaani maa singh kabile aur garud kabile ke beech bahut bhayanak yudh hone wala hai...

surya ki pehli kiran ke saath dono kabeele aapas me bhid jayenge...

yahi karan hai ki sab log apni jaan bachakar bhaag rahe hai...

gyaani maa- ye tum kya bol rahi ho mujhe unhe rokna hoga...rokna hi hoga...

ye bolte-bolte wo aage badh gayi aur wo aurat bhi wahan se bhaag gayi...

nahi main aisa nahi hone de sakti...agar aisa huva to chahe jeete koyi bhi haaregi poori duniya...

uske aane me main koyi badha nahi aane doongi...mujhe jaldi wahan pahunchna hoga...

ye bol kar wo jaldi-jaldi aage badhne lagi...wahin dusri taraf dono taraf ke log surya ki pehli kiran ka intzaar kar rahe the...

surya ki pehli kiran jaise hi nikli dono taraf se humla bol diya gaya...

abhi hathiyaar takrane hi wale the ki ek awaaz goongi..."ruk jao ye ladaayi band karo"...

ye awaaz sunte hi dono taraf ke logon ke haath wahin ke wahin ruk gaye aur sab awaaz ki disha me dekhne lage...

khubsurat update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 02

gyaani maa ko dekh kar sabke sab ruk jaate hai aur aadar se unke samne jhuk jaate hai...

gyaani maa- ye sab kya ho raha hai...

tabhi garud kabile ka sardaar jiska naam shaka tha bolta hai...

shaka- gyaani maa aap to antaryaami hai aap to sab janti hai...

gyaani maa- haan janti hoon phir bhi tumse janna chahti hoon...

shaka- gyaani maa aap to janti hai ki hum apne hi kabile me ladkiyon ko bhyate hai...

magar simha ke muh bole bete ne humari beti ko bhagakar wo rasam tod di aur ye log use bacha rahe hai...

shaka ki ye baat sunkar singh kabile ke sardaar simha ne baat aage badhayi...

simha- nahi gyaani maa aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai mere bete ne inki beti ko nahi bhagaya...

balki inke kabile ke ladke ne humari beti ko bhagaya hai...

shaka (gusse se)- ye jhuth bol raha hai gyaani maa...

simha- nahi tum jhuth bol rahe ho...

aise hi dono me phir se jhagda hone laga par iss baar hathiyaar jubaan thi...

unke teer dono ke muh se nikalne wale shabd...jo kissi tarkash ki tarah the...

gyaani maa- band karo ye sab bilkul chhup ho jao...tum dono me se ab koyi kuch nahi bolega...

uske baad gyaani maa do logon ko bula kar unhe un ladka-ladki ko laane ko kehte hai jinki baatein chal rahi thi...

saath hi unke pariwaar walon ko bhi...kuch dair baad sabhi ko wahan laaya jaata hai...

itne waqt me gyaani maa ke baithne ka bhi intzaam kar diya gaya tha...

aaye huve logon ko dekh gyaani maa bolti hai...

gyaani maa- maine dono jodon ko kaha tha laane ko ye to ek hi hai...

ye baat sunte hi wahan ek sannata sa chha jaata hai...koyi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha...

ye dekh kar iss baar gyaani maa gusse se poochti hai...

gyaani maa- main kuch pooch rahi hoon kahan hai dusra joda...

tab bhi koyi kuch nahi bolta...par ek awaaz se sab chonk jaate hai...

awaaz- gyaani maa wo kahan hai ye hum aapko batate hai...

ab ye awaaz kiski thi aur ye kya batane wale the...

rochak update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 03

awaaz dene wali do auratein thi jinke saath kuch aur auratein chali aa rahi thi...

awaaz dene wali auraton me se ek ka naam tha geeta aur dusri ka naam tha chaya...

geeta simha ki patni thi to chaya shaka ki...par ye dono bahut acchi saheliyaan bhi thi...

gyaani maa- haan batao kya batana hai...

abhi wo kuch bolti usse pehle hi shaka bol pada...

shaka- gyaani maa ye kya batayengi maine bataya na...

ye sun kar gyaani maa ko bahut gussa aaya aur wo boli...

gyaani maa- shaka kuch bolne se pehle socch liya karo kya tumhe ab hamare kabile ke reeti-riwaj bhi batane padenge...

ye sun kar wahan khade sabhi mardon ke sar jhuk gaye aur wo kuch bol nahi paaye...

ye dekh kar geeta ne bolna shuru kiya...

geeta- gyaani maa jaisa ki aap janti hi hai ki shakti hamara goud liya huva beta hai...

jo humein wahan mila tha jahan se aage ja kar aaj tak koyi jinda wapas nahi aa paaya...

aapne hi uska naamkaran kiya tha...saath hi chaya ki beti rukmini ka bhi...

uske baad aap tapasya karne chali gayi thi...humare kabile wale ek saath hi raha karte the...

jiske chalte shakti aur rukmini saath-saath hi bade huve...samay beeta aur unka pyaar bhi badhta gaya...

jab dono bacchon ne apne dil ki baat bataayi to garud kabile walon ne inkaar kar diya kyunki ye pratha ke khilaaf tha...

iske aage chaya ne bolna shuru kiya...

chaya- jab mere pati ko ye pata chala to wo bahut krodhit ho gaye...

uske baad unhone jald hi rukmini ka swemwar rakh diya...

jiska niyam aapne hi banaye hai...pratiyogita ko jitne wale vyakti se hi ladki ka vivah hota hai...

ye jankar ussi pratiyogita me hissa lekar shakti uska vijeta ban gaya...

tabhi shaka phir se bol padta hai...

shaka- shakti ne dhokhe se pratiyogita me bhaag liya tha...wo to hamare aamantrit mehmano me tha hi nahi...

gyaani maa- shaka kya tum ye bhi bhool gaye ho ki uss pratiyogita me aamantran ka bandhan nahi hai...

ek niymat aayu ka kuwara purush chahe wo kissi bhi kabile ka ho bhaag le sakta hai...

chahe wo amantrit ho ya na ho...bas uska vijeta banna jaruri hai ladki se vivah ke liye...

ye tumhare liye aakhiri chetawani hai...ab beech me bolne ki koshish mat karna...

jab tumse kuch poocha jaaye sirf tabhi bolna...

chaya ne phirse bolna shuru kiya...

chaya- jab sab ko pata chala ki vijeta shakti hai to sab ne niyam manne se inkaar kar diya...

magar rukmini nahi maani aur shakti use apne saath le gaya...

jisne bhi unhe rokne ki koshish ki wo bahut buri tarah se nakaamyaab huye...

uske baad shakti use singh kabile me le gaya...jisse dono kabilo me dushmani ho gayi...

simha- shakti aur rukmini ke milan se hum sab bahut khush the...wahin dono kabilon ki dushmani se dukhi...

aise hi waqt beetne laga aur rukmini ne ek rajkumar jaise bacche ko janam diya...

magar jaise hamari khushiyon ko grahan lag gaya...rukmini ke bacche ko marne ki koshish hone lagi...

jisse tang aakar ek din wo dono bina kissi ko kuch bataye yahan se chale gaye...

hume laga ki ye kaam garud kabile walon ka hai...jisse dushmani aur bhi badh gayi...

issi beech ek din garud kabile ka ek ladka humare kabile ki ladki ko bhaga le gaya...

par unhe humne pakad liya aur jab shaadi ki baat karne garud kabile me gaye...

tab garud kabile walon ne ye keh kar hamara majak udaaya ki unke ladke ne bilkul sahi kiya...

humare kabile ki ladki ko bhaga kar...magar ab wo apne ladke ki shaadi kissi aur ladki se karenge...

ye jo bhi kuch huva hai ye humare liye sada badnaami ka kala dabba ban kar rahega...

issi wajah se hum majboor ho gaye the ladayi karne ke liye...

ye baat sun kar to gyaani maa ka gussa bahut badh gaya...aisa lag raha tha jaise wahan bhuchaal hi aa gaya ho...

mohak update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 04

gyaani maa- kisne kya kiya uske baare me hum baad me baat karenge...

pehle hume ye batao ki shakti aur rukmini kahan hai...

simha- gyaani maa main nahi janta ki wo ab kahan hai...

gyaani maa- main kuch pooch rahi hoon tumse jawab do jaldi...

jab sabne dhyaan diya ki gyaani maa ka ishaara kis aur hai to sab hairaan reh gaye...

gyaani maa kissi aur se nahi balki shaka se pooch rahi thi...jiska matlab shaka ko unke baare me pata hai...

ye dekh kar simha aag-babula ho kar shaka par toot padta hai aur chillate huve poochta hai...

simha- bata shaka kahan hai mere bacche...agar unhe kuch bhi huva to main sabko khatam kar dunga...

gyaani maa- simha ruk jao...

magar ab simha jaise sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi tha...jo bhi use rokne aata wo bas maar kha kar pata rehta...

tabhi gyaani maa ne kuch mantra padh kar uspe maare jisse wo shant hone laga...

gyaani maa- tum aaj bhi khud par kaabu paana nahi seekh paaye...

simha- gyaani maa mujhe maaf kar di jiye...main khud ko rok nahi paaya...

abhi ye baat kar hi rahe the ki achanak kuch ne inpe humla kar diya...

jinhone humla kiya tha unme se kuch singh kabile ke the to kuch garud kabile ke...

unke mukhiya ko main aadmi 1 (singh kablie se) aur aadmi 2 (garud kabile se) likhunga...

jab sabki gardane talwaron ki nok par thi tab aadmi 1 ne bolna shuru kiya...

aadmi 1- shaka tujhe to main tabhi maar dena chahta tha jab tune mere bete ko maara tha...

magar usse mere dil ko thandak nahi milti...main tujhe bhi wohi jillat ki mout dena chahta tha...

jaisi tune mere bete ko di thi...wo bhi simha ke haathon taaki wo bhi paapi ban jaaye ek nirdosh ki jaan lekar...

shaka- tere bete ne paap kiya tha to use kaise chhod deta...usne uss masoom ki jaan le li...

aadmi 1- wo simha kabile ke hone wale sardaar ke raste me aaya tha to maara gaya...

tune uske liye mere bete ko maar diya...wo to tere kabile ka bhi nahi tha...

shaka- kabile se kuch nahi hota insaaniyat sabse oopar hoti hai...

aadmi 1- bhaad main gaya tu aur teri insaaniyat...maine to soccha tha ki simha ke haathon tujhe marwa dunga...

par iss gyaani maa ne sab ulat-palat kar diya...

shaka- tera beta to kabhi sardaar ban hi nahi sakta tha kyunki tera simha se khoon ka rishta nahi hai...

par tune aakhir hum dono me phoot kaise dalwa di...

aadmi 1- ban sakta tha agar simha ka koyi waris na hota...

yahi to wajah thi ki maine kabhi simha ke kissi waris ko paida hi nahi hone diya tha...

magar najaane wo shakti kahan se aa gaya...saala bahut sakht jaan hai...

bahut baar marne ki koshish ki par harr baar wo bacch nikla...

ye baat sunkar simha ko bahut gussa aaya...par wo hil bhi nahi paaya...

aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kissi shakti paash me kaid ho...

aadmi 1 ne bolna jaari rakha...

aadmi 1- meri kismat bol ya teri badkismati ki mujhe tere kabile me ek saathi mil gaya aadmi 2 ke roop me...

ab shayad tu ye socch raha hoga ki usne mera saath kyun diya to sun...

aadmi 1- wo chaya ko chahta tha...par uski shaadi tujhse ho gayi...

wo kabhi tujhse khul kar mukabla nahi kar sakta tha isiliye hum dono mil gaye...

jab shakti ne pratiyogita jeet li to mujhe laga ki tu shakti ko maar dega aur yudh shuru ho jayega...

par tera koyi bhi aadmi uska baal bhi nahi ukhaad saka...

uske baad maine uske bacchon par bhi kayi vaar kiye...magar har baar wo bacch gaye...

unke bhaagne ke baad waise ek baar to main bhi chakma kha gaya tha ki tu sacchme unke khilaaf hai...

tabhi to tune wo sab hone diya jo main chahta tha...warna tere kabile wale simha ka majak kyun udaate...

magar shayad meri kismat mujhpe meherbaan thi jo teri sacchayi mujhe pata chal gayi...

ussi se mujhe pata chala ki tune unhe kahan chhupa rakha hai...

ab yahan tum sab maroge aur wahan meri bheji huyi daayi baaki sabko khatam kar degi...

bas abhi wo itna hi bola tha ki tabhi wo huva jisse sab hairaan reh gaye...

parsanshniye update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 05

garudon ko ek jhund ne aadmi 1, aadmi 2 aur unke saathiyon par humla bol diya...

agar koyi insaan hota to bhi wo usse lad kar bacch sakte the...par itne garudon se koyi kaise bacch sakta tha...

kuch hi dair baad aadmi 1 aur aadmi 2 ko chhod kar sab maare gaye...

aisa lag raha tha ki jaise wahan koyi rakht tandav huva ho...

dono ki haalat adhmare jaisi ho gayi thi...tab shaka ne aage badhkar apne saathiyon se kaha...

shaka- inko bandi banakar sab humare saath chalo...

sawaal to sabke dimag me bahut the ki aakhir ye sab ho kya raha hai...

sabko ye sab bas ek sapna sa lag raha tha...par phir bhi sab shaka ke saath jaane lage...

waqt beeta aur sab shaka ke saath wahan pahunch gaye jahan unhe pahunchna tha...

wahan pahunchne par jaise hi rukmini ki nazar inpe padi wo daudti huyi inke paas aayi aur rote huve bolne lagi...

rukmini- maa mera baccha...

uski ye baat sunkar jahan sabke honsh udd gaye ki pata nahi kya huva hai yahan...

wahin aadmi 1 keh-keha laga kar hansne laga aur bola...

aadmi 1- shaka maine teri beti ke bacche ko aakhir marwa hi diya...

ab chahe tu mujhe jaan se bhi marr de mujhe koyi gam nahi...

shaka tu jeet kar bhi harr gaya aur main harr kar bhi jeet gaya...hahahaha...

usko aise hansta dekh jahan sab log dukhi the wahin teen log aise the jo muskura rahe the...

wo teen log the shaka, gyaani maa aur teesra tha shakti...

shaka- tujhe pata hai main tujhe yahan kyun laaya...

aadmi 1- meri jeet hoti dikhane ke liye...haan maine iske liye to tujhe shukriya kaha hi nahi...

maine kitna galat kiya hai na...hahahaha...

shaka- tu aaj bhi nahi samjha ki jeet teri nahi meri huyi hai...

tujhe batakar kuch nahi hoga chal tujhe dikha hi deta hoon...

uske baad wo sabko saath lekar ek jagah pahunch jaata hai...

jahan ka nazara dekhkar sabke honsh udd jaate hai aur muh khule ke khule reh jaate hai...

khubsurat update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 06

samne ka najara sacch me tha bhi ascharya chakit kar dene wala...

wahan samne aadmi 1 ki bheji huyi daayi aur uske saathiyon ki laashein padi thi...

par ye dekh kar unko achambha kyun hoga jabki wo sab saara din yahi kaam karte hai...

asal main ascharya chakit kar dene waali baat ye thi ki wahin paas me ek sheron ka jhund tha...

unke theek beech me ek nanha sa baccha bade pyaar se so raha tha...

aisa lag raha tha jaise wo sab uss bacche ke rakshak ho aur uske charon taraf raksha ghera banaye huye ho...

asal me huva kya tha ye janne ke liye thoda peeche chalte hai...

jaise hi aadmi 1 ko apni chaal ulti padti dikhayi di gyaani maa ki wajah se...

jo ab tak soojh-boojh se kaam kar raha tha usne bina socche samjhe faisle lena shuru kar diya...

shaka aur baaki sab pe humla karne se pehle usne apne kuch saathi daayi maa ke paas bhej diye...

shakti, rukmini aur unke sabhi saathiyon ko khatam karne ke liye...

daayi maa ne sabka vishwaas jeet liya tha isiliye usne sabhi ko gehri neend me sula diya iska use yakeen ho gaya...

par jab daayi ke saathiyon ne humla kiya to sab jaag rahe the...

magar phir bhi jaise-taise daayi apne saathiyon ke saath bacche ko lekar bhaag nikli...

unke peeche baaki sab the...ladayi hoti rahi aur daayi ke saathi kum hote gaye...

wahin paas me sheron ka ek jhund rehta tha...jiski wajah se wahan koyi nahi jaata tha...

daayi ne iss ilaake aur usme rehne waale sheron ke baare me suna tha ki ye sab bahut khoonkhar hai...

yahi karan tha ki koyi bhi insaan yahan se jinda wapas nahi aaya tha...

ye socch kar wo apne bache huye saathiyon ke saath uss ilaake me chali gayi...

wahan ja kar usne bacche ko sheron ke jhund ke paas phenk diya ki wo use khaa lenge...

par yahan wo huva jiski usne to kya kissi ne bhi kabhi kalpana nahi ki hogi...

sheron ne use khaane ki jagah jaise apni panah me le liya...

wo na to khud use khaa rahe the aur na hi kissi ko uske paas aane de rahe the...

iss baat se daayi aur uske saathi gusse se aag babula ho gaye...

apna kaam poora karne ke liye wo apne saathiyon ke saath bacche ko maarne ke liye aage badh gayi...

bas yahi unn sabki aakhiri galti saabit huyi aur unn sheron ne sabko maar diya...

bahad umda update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 07

aadmi 1- ye nahi ho sakta meri itni mehnat vifal nahi ho sakti...meri chaal bekaar nahi ja sakti...

shakti- hahahaha...chaal arre chaal to wo hoti hai jiska kissi ko pata na ho...tu kab, kya aur kaise karega wo to hum teh kar rahe the to teri kaisi chaal...

aadmi 2- dhokha kiya hai tumne humare saath...

shaka- jo tumne kiya wo kya sahi tha...dhokhebaaz ke saath kiya dhokha bhi sahi hota hai...

aadmi 1- mujhe pata hai tum mujhe maar doge...magar usse pehle mujhe batao ki tumne ye sab kyun kiya...

shakti- tu bahut badi duvidha mein hai na ki kab kaise huva...

aadmi 2- haan hume sacch janna hai...

shakti- sacch janna hai to suno...

ye bolte hi shakti ne dono ke sar dhadh se alag kar diye...sab ye dekh kar hairaan reh gaye...

simha- beta ye sab kya hai...

geeta- haan rukmini batao na tum ro kyun rahi ho jabki sab theek hai...

rukmini (rote huve)- maa to main kya karun bada waala saara din inke saath chipka rehta hai...soccha tha ki main mere ladle ke saath khelungi par dekho na usne to paida hote hi kaise dost bana liye...

ab main kiske saath khelun wo sab to mujhe bhi badi mushkil se uske paas jaane dete hai...

rukmini ne ye sab itni masumiyat se kaha ki wahan khade sabhi ke hontho par muskaan tair gayi...gamgin mahol mein khushi phir se lout aayi...tab kuch dair baad shakti ne bolna shuru kiya...

shakti- pitaji ye sab tab se shuru huva jab aap mujhe yahan le kar aaye...tabse mujhe har raat sapne aate aur koyi mujhe batata ki mere saath kya hone waala hai...

wo mujhe bacchne ki tarkeeb batata lekin wo ye bhi kehta ki main unko hone se rokne ki koshish na karun...jab meri mulaqaat rukmini se huyi tab mujhe ye pata chala ki humari hone wali dusri santaan vishesh hogi...

magar usse pehle humpar bahut bada sankat aayega aur jaisa kaha gaya tha sab waise hi ho bhi raha tha...aap to jante hai ki aapka khud par vash nahi rehta jab krodh aapke oopar hawi hota hai...

tabhi maine aapko kuch nahi bataya...saath hi ek maa ka mann komal hota hai...wo apne bacchon pe aane waale sankat ko sunkar dukhi ho sakti hai...tabhi humne kissi ko nahi bataya...

shaka- siwaye mere koyi nahi jaanta tha ki kya ho raha hai...inke rishte ko thukrana, rukmini ka swayamwar, sab vidhi ka vidhaan tha...tabhi to jaisa kaha gaya tha sab waisa hi huwa...

ab kuch ye bhi socch rahe honge ki jab hum jaante the to inhe khatam kyun nahi kiya...iska jawaab hai agar ye pehle khatam kar diye jaate to wo kabhi na hota jo hona tha...

samay ke chakra ke saath hume khilwaad nahi karna tha ye hum bhali-bhaanti jante the...

bemishaal update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 08

aise hi waqt ka pahiya ghooma...din kab hafton mein aur hafte kab saal mein badal gaye pata hi nahi chala...

aaj humara hero poora jawan ho chuka tha...jawani tak aate-aate uska poora sharir sakht ho chuka tha...

ek taraf jahaan 5 saal pehle huyi shakti ki mout se uska sabse bada beta ravi gumsum aur gussail ho gaya tha...

wahin humara hero veer aaj bhi mast-moula aur shant mizag ka tha...

ab baat karein rukmini ki ladli shalini ki to wo apne naam ke bilkul vipreet thi...

sabse badi ladaka aur utni hi gusaail...gusse mein to ye apne bade bhai ko bhi peeche chhod deti thi...

aakhir mein baari aati hai rajat ki...rajat humesha santulan me rehne waala tha...

wo hamesha harr niyam ka paalan karta...jabki uske baaki bhai-behan unko todne se gurej nahi karte...

aise hi ek din garmiyon ke mausam me jab veer garmi ke chalte raat ko jaaga to usne dekha...

uski maa safed ghagra-chholi jaise kapde pahne soyi huyi hai...

garmi ki wajah se unhe bhi bahut paseena aa raha tha...jisse safed chholi geeli hokar unki chuchiyon se chipak gayi thi...

tab bra to hoti nahi thi jiske chalte veer ko uski maa ke khade nipples ke darshan ho gaye...

saath hi ye veer ka pehla mouka tha jab wo kissi ki lagbhag nangi chuchiyan itne paas se dekh raha tha...

abhi veer apni maa ko dekh hi raha tha ki achanak uske peeche kissi ke hilne ki aahat huyi...

jisse veer darr gaya aur chup-chap bina kuch kiye so gaya...

uss samay jhonpadi huya karti thi pakke ghar nahi aur sone ke liye naram bail aur patton se bana bistar...

jispe jaanwar ki khaal bhichayi gayi hoti thi...jhonpadi ka aakaar aur usme rakha samaan iska prateek hota tha ki kabile mein unka sthaan kya hai ya wo kya karta hai...

agle din jab veer ghar se bahar gaya to usne dekha ki harr din ki tarah aaj bhi uska bada bhai kushti lad raha tha...

baaki log unke charon taraf khade unka manoranjan kar rahe the...

veer ko jyada kushti ladna pasand nahi tha kyunki wo harr kushti bahut asaani se jeet jaata tha...

magar tab bhi wo apne bhai ki kushti harr din dekh kar hi jaata tha...

julmi update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 09

aise hi poora din beet gaya...agle din main kissi ke uthane se utha...

dekha to paaya maa khadi thi aur mujhe gusse se dekh rahi thi...

unhe dekh kar main bhi socch mein pad gaya ki ab kya kiya maine jisse unhe gussa aaya huva hai kyunki main harr din kuch na kuch karta hi rehta tha...

mere taiyaar hone ke baad maa ne mujhe kuch fal khane ko diye...ye mere harr din ki dincharya me shamil the...

aaj kal to logon ke paas chahe paise ho ya na ho...jyadatar log apna saara kaam dusron par thhop dete hai...

magar pehle aisa nahi tha...tab sab log milkar kaam kiya karte the...

phir chahe wo sardaar ka pariwaar ho ya ek sadharan kabile me rehne wale vyakti ka...

par kaam kaunsa hoga ye umar ke hisaab se nirdharit hota tha...

jaise ki bade shikaar kiya karte to wahin chhote sabzi aur fal kheton se lekar aate...

sabko harr kaam sikhaya jaata bacchpan se hi...jab wo bade ho jaate wo apna kaam khud chhun lete...

maine bhi bacchpan se harr kaam seekha tha...saare kaam alag-alag bhaagon me bante huwe the...

jaise khet se sabjiyan aur fal lane se shikaar karne tak, kapde banane se lekar khet me kheti karne tak...

maa hamesha mujhe khud nahane ke baad hi uthati thi...jiski wajah mujhe baad me pata chali par main aapko abhi bata raha hoon...

ye isiliye tha kyunki nadi me subah suraj ugne aur shaam ko suraj dhalne ke baad wahan sirf auratein hi nahati thi...

uss samay wahan kissi bhi mard ka jaana varjit tha...baaki ka saara waqt mardon ko diya gaya tha...

usme wo kabhi bhi nadi me jakar naha sakte the...main sabjiyan aur fal laane ka kaam karta tha...

issi ke chalte mere kuch dost bhi ban gaye the jo aaj tak hai...

hasheen update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 10

mere chaar dost the chitwan, shyam, dara aur chelu...chitwan hum sabme bada tha...

wo bahut socchta tha isiliye wo harr kaam dheere-dheere karta tha...

shyam apne naam ki tarah hi thoda sawla tha...magar kissi ko isse farak nahi padta tha...

dara aur chelu dono judwa bhai the...dara jahan deel-doul se majboot tha wahin chelu thoda kamjor tha...

humne ek tree house banaya huwa tha jungle me jahan hum sab cheezein ikattha karke rakhte the...

aise hi hum sab harr din jarurat ke hisaab se sabjiyan aur fal ikatthe karte...

uske baad wahin khelte...aise hi hum sab ek saath bade huye...

meri maa aur bahen harr din subah jaldi uthkar kabile ki baaki auraton ke saath nahane jaati thi...

wahan pahunch kar sab auratein poori tarah nangi hokar baatein karti huyi nahati thi...

nahane ke liye sabun kuch khaas paudhon se banayi jaati thi...

auratein teen bhaagon me bant kar nahaya karti thi...budhi, madhyam varg aur jawaan...

jawaan ladkiyon aur auraton me wo bhi aati thi jinki abhi-abhi shaadiyaan huyi thi...

shalini ki do saheliyaan thi rupa aur rati...ye dono shyam ki badi bahne thi...

shalini inse umar me chhoti jarur thi magar teeno ko ek dusre ka saath bahut accha lagta tha...

dono bahne sanwli jarur thi...magar inki chuchiyan umar ke hisaab se kuch jyada hi badi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki shalini jiski chuchiyan chhoti to nahi par itni badi bhi nahi thi wo hamesha dono behno jaisi chuchiyan chahti thi...

sirf wohi kya kabile ki kayi shaadi-shuda auratein tak bhi inse jalti thi...

wo sab bas koyi na koyi mauka dhundhti thi unhe sharminda karne ka...

magar shalini ke chalte wo unhe bahut kam hi milta tha...

ab dekhna hai ki inki zindagiyon me aage kya hone waala hai...

chetnye update