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बहुत ही अच्छा लिख रहे हो भाई। मैं सिर्फ कुछ ही कहानियां पढ़ रहा हु जिनमें से एक महारानी देवरानी है। अपने आप में अनूठी और श्रेष्ठ।
धन्यवाद भाईजी आपका ,अभी कहानी का आधा पड़ाव ख़त्म हुआ है अभी शमशेरा कि प्यार की दास्ताँ के बाद ट्विस्ट कि साथ कहानी समाप्त होगी ।
 
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आपकी कहानी पढ़ रही हूं, अच्छी लग रही है, आप बहुत अच्छा लिख रहे हैं, क्या राज़ परिवार पर आधारित और कहानी मुझे बता सकते हैं ?
 

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आपकी कहानी पढ़ रही हूं, अच्छी लग रही है, आप बहुत अच्छा लिख रहे हैं, क्या राज़ परिवार पर आधारित और कहानी मुझे बता सकते हैं ?
धन्यवाद ।मुझे इस थीम पर दूसरी कहानी नहीं दिखी नेट पर ।
 

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baldev dono hath se pakad kar mammo ko khoob zor se masalta hai
"aai maa dheere se raja bete"
devrani dard se siisakti hai
baldev ab dono than me apne muh laga k
"galpp galpp galp"chusne lagta hai
"aah maa kya swadisht aam hai tere aah ummmm aah galllpp"

"choos k kha le aaam mere mere raja beta mere pati "

Baldev devrani k bhari mammo ko hath me lye baari baari se chus raha tha k tabhi unke kano me aawaz aati hai

Shurushti:Bahuraani o bahuraani

Devrani:chhoriya naa saasu maa bula rahi ha

Baldev:nahi chhorunga meri chudakkad maa ko

devrani:baad me kar lena abhi aapki badi maa bula rahi hai nayi shadi hai baat samjho

Baldev devrani ko chhor deta hai devrani apne blouse fir se pehan kar niche aati hai

Devrani:aapne bulaya

Shurushti upar se niche tak devrani ko dekhti hai devrani k asth byasth saree bikhre baal kheeche hue blouse dekh kar shurushti ko samajh aagaya k upar dono maa beta kaam kriya me leen the

Shurushti:Lagta hai galat samay per bula li meri bahu ko

Devrani ko dekh shurushti muskurati hai or matlab samajhte he devrani bina jawan diye jhep jati hai

Devrani:koi baat nahi aapka beta to har samay bass laga he rehta hai

Shurushti:tum to khushnaseeb ho Maharaj baldev k roop me itna pyar karne wala pati mila hai
Shurushti:man me)Ek me hu jo raja rajpal k budha land ko khada karne me he aadha ghanta lag jata hai

Devrani:man me)Shurushti rani ek din tha jab me tadapti thi or tum maze karti thi mere pati k sath aaj me jawan pati k sath maze kar rahi hu or tum kisi randi ki trrah kisi na kisi ka land lete fir rahi ho mera shaap lagega tumko to jeevan bhar pyasi he rahogi

Devrani apne pure dino ko yaad karti hai jab rajpal se byah k baad shurushti ne rajpal par pabandi laga di thi k wo devrani k kaksha me na jaye or na he raat guzare devrani bhale se shurushti ko kshama kar di thi par jeevan me pichle 18 saal se yon sukh se tadpi devrani apne dukh k karan rani shurushti ko ab bhi apne dill se muaf nahi ki thi

Devrani:Kya hua saasu maa,kya sochne lagi

Shurushti:Yahi k hamara rishta samay k sath kitna badal gaya meri sautan thi tum aaj mere bete ki patni or tum apne he bete k patni ban gayi

Devrani:man me)tumhe to mere or baldev ka pyar kat raha hai shurushti chhupa kis se rahi ho

Devrani:Ab niyati ko jo manjur tha hua waise ab me apne jeevan se zyada khush hu

Shurushti:han ab tum Maharani ho ab tumhe sirf apne he nahi rajya k logo k bare me sochna hoga .Mahilao k sabha me saari ghatrashtra ki mahilaye apne dukh le kar aati hai apne maharani se baat karne unsab ka faisla karna hoga

Devrani:Me ek kadam piche nahi hatungi Ye Maharani devrani Baldev singh ka waada hai
apne rajya k lye lahu ki zarurat padegi to bhi ye rajputni piche nahi hattegi

Shurushti:waah Maharani ho to aisi..aaj k khane me kya kya banwaye aap bata dijiye maharani ji

Devrani:kya aap me kya bolu

Shurushti:nahi ab se is ghar me mahal me or is rajya me apke nirnay se he sab kam hoga

Devrani khush hote hue khane ka sab kuch bata deti hai jo use khane ki ichha thi rasoi me kamla or radha kaam karne lagti hai or Maharani devrani wahi sofe per baith jati hai

PARAS

Aaj subah se he Chand pasha jo Gul Shah ka chela tha apne aadmi ikathe karne me laga tha Sultan meer wahid ko marne k lye .chand pasha ki yahi khawaish thi k Sultan k marne k baad Gulshah Sultan ban jaye or Gul shah k barso ki khwaish thi Mallika jahan hooriya ko bhogne ki jo k riwayat k anusar Bade bhai k marne k baad Gulshah apne bhabi hooriya se shadi kar sakta tha.Gulshah ne bhi apne sultan ban ne ki chahat or Hooriya ko paane ki aarzu se apne bhai sultan ko maarne k lye chand pasha ko apne aadmi theek karne k lye keh dya tha

Sultan meer wahid k pita Sultan dastan chahte the k Sultan ka dawedar shehzade shaan jo k sultan ki dusri patni Naaz begum ka beta tha wo agla sultan bane par sultan ne sab se khulasa kar dya tha k agla sultan shamshera he banega.sultan ka jakhm dheere dheere theek ho raha tha

Sultan apne huzre me apni begum naaz jo dusri biwi thi uske sath waqt guzar rahe the

Sultan:Naaz tumhe kya chahiye begum saaf saaf q nahi kehti

Naaz sultan k pair k paas baithi sultan k pair dabate hue

Naaz:Sultan aap kahi bura na maan jaaye me koi gustakhi nahi karna chahti

Sultan:nahi meri jaan aap meri biwi ho aapki gustakhi muaaf hai boliye kya kehna chahti hai aap

Naaz:Me ye keh rahi thi aapka beta Shaan bhi bada ho gaya uske kandho par bhi kuch zimmedari honi chahiye sultanat ki

Sultan muskurate hue
Sultan:Sultan dastan abba jaan bhi yahi chahte hai or lagbhag har afraad khandan ka yahi chahta hai k Shehzade shaan agle sultan bane kya me sahi hu naaz begum?

Naaz:ji ji..wo

Sultan:Naaz begum aap seedhe kahiye na k aap chahti hai k agla sultan Shehzade shaan bane na k shamshera

Naaz:kya aap k dono bete aapke samne azeez nahi ek jaisi ahmiyat nahi rakhte or kya burai hai shaan me

Sultan:mujhe pata hai aap kya kehna chahti hai yahi na Shamshera aawara hai maikhane me din raat guzarta kothe per jata hai vaisyao se rishte rakhta hai

Naaz:ji gustakhi muaaf sultan kya aisa shaksh jo din raat nashe me ho wo Sultan ban ne k qabil hai?

Sultan apna pair kheech leta hai or modte hue baith jata hai
Sultan:Begum naaz aapko is baat ki ilm nahi sultanat chalane k lye or badhane k lye shaan jaisa masoom nahi Shamshera jaisa chalak or talwar jiski khoon ki pyasi ho wo chahiye

Naaz:mera beta shaan bhi acha talwarbazi karta hai

Sultan:Bass aap is baat ki parakh nahi k kaun hamare lye jung jeet sakta hai shayad aapko pata nahi kis bahaduri se shamshera ne jung jeeti hai Ghatrashtra me or mera faisla yahi hai k Shamshera he takht par baithega agla sultan hoga

Naaz:gustakhi muaf sultan e azam jaisi aapki marzi

Sultan muskurate hue fir let jata hai or naaz sultan k pair ko dabane lagti hai

Udhar mahal me teen log sar k upar potli le kar mahal me dakhil ho rahe the to sainik unhe rok dete hai

Sainik:ary tum sab kaha chale andar jana mana hai

Aadmi:bhai sahab in sab potlio me Mallika e jahan k samaan hai

Sainik:mujhe khol kar dikhao kya saman tum mahal me le ja rahe ho

tabhi wo aadmi piche mudta hai

piche shehzade shamshera aarahe the

Aadmi:shehzade ye potli khol kar dikhane ko keh rahe hai

shamshera sainik k nazdeek aate hue

Shamshera:inhe jane do in sab me mallika jahan k kapde hai or kuch nahi

Sainik:gustakhi muaaf shehzade ..aap sab jaaye

Shamshera:chalo mere sath

wo teeno aadmi shamshera k sath peeche peeche chalne lagte hai thodi der chalne k baad shamshera ek huzre k aage ruk jata hai

Huzre k samne do dasiya khadi thi

Dasiya:salam shehzade

Shamshera:ye darwaza band hai mallika e jahan ka

Dasi:wo Mallika naha rahi thi

Shamshera:acha theek hai ..tum teeno samaan yahi rakh do or chale jaao

Teeno potli rakh k wo teeno aadmi chale jate hai

Shamshera:Kaneez zara ammi ko aawz de kar pucho kitna waqt lagega

dasi darwaze k paas ja kar
"Mallika e jahan aapse milne shehzade aaye hai"

Hooriya:Bass kholti hu
Hooriya jo abhi naha kar nikli thi jaldi se apne hijab pehan leti hai or kuch der tak apne baall sukhate hue darwaza kholti hai

Jaise darwaza khulta hai samne shamshera ko saamaan k saath dekh
"beta ye sab kya hai"

"salam ammi jaan wo darji khala ne aap k saare kapde sil diye islye le aya me"

Shamshera:kaneez in potlio ko utha kar andar huzre me rakh do

Dono dasia mil kar kapde k potilio ko andar huzre me rakh deti hhai

huzre ka parda band kar k hooriya andar aati hai

shamshera:Darwaza band kar dijiye ammi jaan

Hooriya:Me apne bete k sath hu huzre me darwaza band karna theek nahi

Shamshera:me ye chah raha tha k aap ek do kaftan pehan kar dekh lete k darji khala ne teen din me kaise logo se silwa dye sare kapde

Hooriya bhi aajati hai shamshera k paas hooriya har kapde ko alat palat kar dekhne lagti hai

Hooriya:waah bhut khub ek se badhkar ek kapde hai..mai gusalkhane se pehan kar aati hu ek..waise fiqar mat karo bina meri ijazat k koi andar nahi aata

Shamshera:aap ye kaftan pehan kar dekhiye

Hooriya us kaftan ko utha kar

Hoorya:ye burkha numa kaftan hai par chaudai me kam hai beta mujhe to ye sab kapde kase hue aayenge ..mai nahi pehan sakti

Shamshera:Aapko meri kasam ammi jaan..ab aapko saare purane niqab nahi pehan ne hai aap mallika e jahan hai aap sultana hai sultanat ki aapko to sajna sawarna chahiye

Hooriya:har aurat sajna sawarna chahti hai par tum to jante he ho log yaha mujhe dekh kar qatl ho rahe hai

Shamshera:ab aap ko koi mai ka laal nigah utha kar bhi nahi dekehega q k agar kisi ne dekha to uske pure khandan ko me apne hatho se qatl karunga

Hooriya:theek hai ab jab tumne kasam de di hai to me kya kar sakti laao ye neele rang ki pehan leti hu aaj

Thodi der me he hooriya neele rang k kaftan me bahar aati hai jise dekh kar shamshera aakhe faade rah jata hai
Hooriya:kaisi lag rahi hu mai..
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Shamshera bass apne palak jhapkaye apne maa k tarashe hue badan ko dekh raha tha

Hooriya:bolo na shamshera

Shamshera:Bhut khoobsurat lag rahi ho ammi jaaan mujhe yaqeen nahi hota k meri ye wahi ammi hai

Hooriya ghumti hai or uske bade bade doodh kase hue kapde me saaf pata chal rahe the
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shamshera apne maa k bade doodh ko dekh raha tha
Shamshera:man me)Kya sar utha k mujhe chidha rha hai dono ko ek din masal kar rakh dunga

Shamshera:ammi jaan peeche ghumo
shamshera:man me)ammi jaan ki gaand k nazare to karu

Hooriya jaise he piche ghumti hai uske bhari
gaand k dono pat aapas me takrate hai
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Dono gaand aapas me takra kar ek dusre se
ragad khate hai jise dekhte he shamshera ka land khada ho jata hai or hooriya fir ek baar palati
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is baar dono gaand k ragad dekh kar shamshera ka lauda tann jata hai
shamshera:man me)jab kaftan k upar se itne lachak rahe hai gaand to asal me nange honge to kaise lachkenge

Shamshera mauqa dekhte he apna land par hath fer deta hai

Hooriya:ye kaftaan to bhut tang hai kase hue hai pura jism se chipka hai ajeeb lag raha hai

Shamshera:aapko dheele dhaale niqab ki aadat hai ammi jaan aap kuch dino me aise libas ki aadi hai yaqeen maniye aap jaisi khoobsurat pure Paras me nahi

Hooriya:ab kaha beta ek waqt tha jab Mishra me meri khoobsurti ki misal dete the log ab to budhi ho gai

shamshera:aap ab bhi utni he khoobsurat hai me to kehta hu aap tab se bhi zyada khoobsurat hai or jo budhi samjhega wo gadha

Hooriya:man me)ab kaise kahu k mera shauhar sultan meer wahid he mujhe ab budhi moti samajhne laga hai

Shamshera man me:kaise koi itni achi maal ko budhi kah k rula dya Mere abba jaan bhi pagal hai waise mujhe devrani mausi ne ye baat bata kar ammi ko patane ka behtar mauqa dya hai

Hooriya:kya soch rahe ho

Shamshera:ammi me keh raha tha ab aap naye kapde jo aaye hai usme se he roz pehnenge dheele dhaale niqab nahi jo sar se le kar pair tak aapko dhak kar aapki khuubsurti chhupa deti hai

Hooriya:man me)kya sach me me aise libas me zyada khubsurat lagti hu

Shamshera:theek hai ammi jaan ab mujhe ijazat dijiye

Hooriya:aate rehna ..mera man akele huzre me nahi lagta

Shamshera:man me)aapke man ko ek mazbut lauda chahiye jo apke chut or gaand ka chhalli kar de jo abba jaan nahi kar paa rahe hai wo jald he karunga me ammi jaan

Hooriya:kya sochne lage

shamshera:kuch nahi.salam
shamshera huzre se wapas bahar chala jata hai hai or hooriya aayine k samne apne aapko dekhne lagti hai pehle apne aap ko samne se dekhti hai fir jaise he peeche se dekhti hai to apne lachakti gaand dekh

Hooriya:man me)ye kya kya shamshera ne meri matakti hui gaand ki deedar kar lya tha islye wo soch me dooba tha ?

To be continued..
 
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