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Great start suspense is good....Chapter I - Pita ya Premi
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Mohan pure raste sochta raha ki kaise wo ghar pahunchte hi Sundari ko pehle ache se apni baahon mein bhar k use chumega phir tight chuchiyon ko dabakar unka maza lega… phir apne hathon se mithai khilate hue use chumega
Ye sabhi vichar Mohan k jism mein aag laga rahe thay, wo bas jaldi se jaldi ghar pahuch jana cha raha tha
Mohan bus stand pe aake pehle kuch dair bus ki pratiksha karta par phir auto leke ghar chal padta hai, Mohan k ghar aur dukan me kab se kam 6 km ki duri thi jo kharab rasta hone k karan kabhi 15 min toh kabhi agar traffic mil gaya toh kaho ye jara sa rasta pura hone mein 1 ganta bhi lag jaye, waise Mohan khud bike ya car chalana nahi janta tha usne kai baar koshish toh ki par use dar lagta hai jis karan usse kabhi seekha nahi gaya
Jaldi hi auto se utarta hai toh use wahi kinare Aslam ki dukan nazar aati hai jo abhi es samay band thi, waise Aslam wahi apni dukan k peeche hi rehta tha par abhi toh bas ghar pahuchne ki jaldi thi esliye tezi se waha se chalte hue ghar waali gali mein ghus jaata hai,
Es samay tak 5 baj chuke thay.. suraj abhi bhi thoda upar asman pe tha hai par dhire dhire garmi kam ho rahi thi, Mohan puri khushi k sath yahi sochta ja raha tha ki aaj Sundari ko surprise dega toh wo use dekh k kitni khus ho jayegi, phir poori raat wo usse piyar karega
Ghar ke darwaze pe pahunch kar woh dheere se khatkhatata hai, 1 baar, 2 baar… phir thoda zor se
Par ab bhi koi uttar nahi aata toh woh phir khatkhatata hai, aur lagbhag 10 minute baad darwaza khulta hi jata hai aur ab Sundari darwaze pe khadi thi
Lekin aaj wo thodi alag dikhti thi, Saree puri tarah uljhi hui thi jaise jaldbaji mein bandhi gayi ho, blouse ka uperi button ab bhi khula hi hua tha aur mangalsutra bhi kuch uljha hua tha, baal puri tarah bikhre hue thay or paseene k karan kuch baal chehre pe chipke hue bhi thay
Wo Paseene se poori tarah bheegi hui thi.. maatha se hota hua paseena gale se neeche tak tapak raha hai, Chehra thaka hua sa, saans bhi thodi tez chal rahi hai jaise abhi abhi koi race laga k aayi ho
Mohan- Tumhe kiya ho gaya hai, kiya haal bana rakha hai aur kaha thi kabse darwaja peet raha hu
Sundari thodi si dari si gayi par phir gehri saans le kar bolti hai
"Arre aap aaj itni jaldi kaise aa gaye ?
Aur wo main andar peeche wale kamre ki safai kar rahi thi na… esliye toh
Aap andar aaye na, khade q hai bahar"
Mohan andar pravesh karta hai jaha wo Sundari k aise paseene mein bheegne ka karan Samjhta hai qki peeche wala wo kamra faltu saman k liye tha aur waha na pankha tha na koi khidki, wo chalte hue Sundari ke peeche peeche andar aa jata hai
Sundari jaldi se kitchen ki taraf jaati hai paani k liye toh Mohan dekhta hu ki usne aaj saree ulti bandhi hui thi jispe mujhe use aa jati hai, phir Sundari paani lake deti hai aur apna paseena pallu se pouchte hue kehti hai
"Wo mere Babuji aaye hai"
Mohan chaunk jaata hai
"Kiya sasurji
Kab aaye?
Kahan hain abhi?"
Sundari bolti hai
"Chatt wale kamre me aaram kar rahe hain"
Mohan jaldi se mithai ka dibba Sundari ko deta hai aur seedha chatt ki seedhiyon ki taraf chalta padta hai, waise Shadi k baad ye pehli baar tha jab uske Sasur yaha sehar aaye thay
Mohan Seedhiyan chadh kar chatt pe pahunchta hai, jaha shaam ki achhi thandi hawa chal rahi hai aur suraj dheere dheere dhal raha tha wo sidha kamre mein pahuch jata hai jaha uske Sasur 'Manak Das' bistar pe baithe hue thay par bistar kuch jada hi ast vyast tha, Mohan man hi man sochta hai ye Sundari bhi ajeeb hai kamsekam Bistar toh sahi kar dena chahiye tha use
Mohan dekhta hai ki Sundari k pita wahi bistar pe baithe thay par unka kurta paseene se poora bheega hua hai, chehre se hoke neeche tak paseena tapak raha tha baal bikhre hue aur chehra laal thay, Jaise abhi abhi koi bahut mehnat ka kaam kiya ho
Mohan jaldi se aage badkar unke pair chhuta hai aur ab tak uske sasur bhi use dekh chuke thay
"Pranam Sasurji..
Mujhe bata dete me Station lene aa jata"
Sundari ka Pita use muskurate hue ashirwad dete hai
"Bas tum dono ko dekhne ka man kara toh chala aya"
Mohan uper pankhe ki aur dekhta hai jo puri raftar se chal raha par tab bhi uske sasur pure paseene se bheege hue thay use kuch samjha nahi ata toh wo khud hi uth k kamre ki khidkiyan bhi khol deta hai aur phir kaafi dair tak unke pass baith k baatein karta rehta hai
Shaam ko Sundari kai ache pakwaan banaye thay sab unke pita ki pasand k thay, teeno saath baith kar khaate hain
Manak Das ji apni beti ki tareef karte hue
"Waah tere hathon me aaj bhi wahi purana wala Jadu hai"
Jispe Mohan or Sundari dono hi has padte hai
Waise aaj Mohan ka man bahut machal raha tha usne socha tha aaj wo poori raat Sundari ke saath piyar karega use apne ras se nehla dega par ab uske sasurji k waha aane k baad usne aaj k liye ye plan taal diya tha
Khane k baad teeno baith k baatein karte hai aur phir raat k kareeb 11 baje teeno sone chale jate hai jaha bistar pe laita hua Mohan sochta hai ki jab Sasurji chale jayenge toh wo ache se apni Patni se prem karega par abhi toh kabu rakhna hoga par wo jaise hi apni aankhein band karta hai use aaj darwaja Khulne pe apni Patni ki wo ajeeb si halat yaad aane lagti hai
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Amazing & hot likha haiChapter I - Pita ya Premi
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Mohan apni dukaan ke counter ke peeche khada hai, haath mein purana sa blue ball pen pakde hue bill book pe hisab likh raha tha
Aankhon pe wohi purana chashma laga hua tha jiska frame thoda tedha ho chuka hai, or baar baar neeche sarak jaata hai toh woh beech ungli se upar dhakel deta hai
Sar ke baal upar se bilkul khatam ho chuke hai sirf chaaron taraf halke se baal bache hain jo paseene se chipak gaye hain, shirt ke upar waale do button khule hue hain sath hi pait halka sa bahar nikla hua hai par khud ko "thoda sa hi toh mota hu" bol ke taal leta hai
Dukaan mein purana sa ceiling fan chal raha hai, par garmi itni hai ki hawa bhi garam lag rahi hai par Mohan apne kaam me puri tarah mang tha agar koi cheez beech beech me uske hontho pe muskaan la rahi thi toh wo thi uski Patni Sundari ki yaad
Qki aaj subah se hi uska dimaag wahi atka hu tha, jabse Subah ghar pe chai dete hue Sundari ka pallu sarak gaya tha aur use uska yovan dekhne ko mila tha
woh nazara abhi bhi uske aankhon ke saamne ghum raha tha
Mohan sochne pe majbur ho jata hai na jane uski khubsurat Patni ghar pe akeli kiya kar rahi hogi
Sundari k bare me Sochte hue uska lund paint ke andar dheere se tight hone lagta hai, woh jaldi se counter ke neeche haath daal ke use adjust karta hai or idhar udhar dekhta hai ki koi customer ya raah chalta dekh toh nahi raha
Sundari
Jo sirf abhi 24 saal ki hi thi, or shadi ko abhi ek saal bhi pura nahi tha wo ek sidhi shadi Gaon ki ladki hai jo waha apne baap ke saath kheton mein kaam bhi karti thi
Dhoop mein kaam karne se halki rangat saawali si ho gayi thi par woh saawla rang uspe bilkul sexy aur aakarshak lagta hai
Padhai 12th tak hi ki hai, sayad gaon ki zindagi mein zyada nahi padh paayi par jism k katav bilkul sahi uthan liye hue hai
Uski bhari hui 34D ki badi kasi hui chuchiya jo saare ke blouse mein bhi upar uthe hue dikh jaati hain or jab wo garam hoti hai toh uske nipples kapdon k uper se hi halke nazar aane suru ho jaya karte hai
Kamar sirf 27" ki patli si hai jo haath mein aane pe makkhan jaisi lagti hai, uspe neeche 36" ki bhari hui gand jo chalte waqt upar neeche hilti hai aur dekhne waale ka dil dhadka deti hai
Motii motii janghen, patle gulabi honth, ghane kaale baal jo choti mein bandhe hote hain ya khule toh peeth tak latakte hain
badi badi kaali aankhein jismein thodi si sharam aur thodi si chhupi hui aag hamesha nazar aati hai
Sundari hamesha Simple si saare ya suit pehnna hi Pasand karti hai jo uski khubsurti ko hamesha bada dete hai aur jise dekh k Mohan har baar apna control kho deta hai
Sundari ke ghar waale bahut gareeb thay jaha chhote se gaon mein thodi si zameen thi aur kheti ki unka jeevan tha
Jab Mohan ki shadi ki baat chali toh tab wo 34 saal ka tha par sabse badi baat ki usne koi dahej nahi maanga jiske chalte Sundari k gharwalo ko wo devta saman laga or aise 23 saal ki Sundari uski Patni banke yaha Kamna Nagar uske paas aa gayi
1 saal se bhi kam samay mein Sundar ne Mohan k makan ko ghar bana diya tha, jaha har pal khushiyan hi thi
Sundari ek purn sanskari gharelu grehni thi jo ghar sambhalna ache se janti thi, khana banane se leke bunai tak k kaamo me wo bahut nipun hai
Par edhar kuch dino se Mohan dukan me kuch aisa vyast tha ki subha jaldi aana aur raat se jana aam sa ho gaya tha or uska karan tha ki usne apne dono naukaro ko naukari se nikal diya tha
Jiska karan tha ki ek din subha jab Mohan dukan pahuchta hai toh apne dono naukaro ko uski Patni k liye asleel baaten karta hua paata hai aur ghusse me aake dono ko nikal deta hai
Wo baatein kuch aisi thi -
Mohan us subha jaise hi Dukaan pe pahunchta ki use uske dono hi naukar waha nazar nahi aate par tabhi peeche godam se kuch awaazein sunai padti hai jo uske dono naukar Kasim aur Kareem ki thi jinki umar yahi koi 50-55 hogi
Mohan unhe dukan chor k peeche jaan k ghusse se jaise hi paas jaata hai or godown ke darwaze pe pahuchta hai use kuch ajeeb sa sunai padta hai
Kasim bol raha tha
"Kareem bhai apne Sahab ki Patni kiya mast maal hai na.. haii unki wo mast chuchiya dekh k toh Mera dimag hi ghoom jata hai"
Mohan jaise hi ye sunta hai ghusse se uska chehra laal hone lagta hai par tabhi 55 saal ka Kareem has padta hai
"Baat toh sahi kahi tune, saali mil jaye toh Rand ko patak patak ke chod doon…"
Kasim- Bhai mein toh pehle uski chuchiyon ko muh mein leke jor se chusunga phir uski gaand pe thappad maarte hue peeche se pelunga
Jispe Kareem Chacha haste hue bolte hai
"Arre mujhe agar ek baar mauka mila na… toh uski chut aur gaand dono apne garam maal se bhar doon… saali waise chilayegi bahut jab hum logo ka asli mota loda ghusega"
Ye sab sunte hi Mohan ka khoon khaul jaata hai ghusse se uske haath paonn kaanp lagte hai aur aankhein laal ho jati haihain, woh godam ke darwaze pe zor se laat maarta hai aur andar ghus jaata hai jisse dono ki naukar chaunk kar uth jaate hain
Mohan pure gusse
"Tum dono ki himmat kaise hui meri Patni k liye aisi asleel baaten karne ki, abhi ruko main police ko bulata hu"
Jispe Kareem Chacha jo buri tarah dar gaye thay wo jaldi se maafi mangte hue kehte hai
"Sahab galti ho gayi wo bas.. es umar me hum kaha jayenge ?"
Kasim bhi turant hath jodte hue kehta hai
"Sahab maaf kar dijiye, police ko na bulayie"
Mohan ek pal k liye kuch sochta hai aur phir ghusse se kehta hai
"Theek hai me police ko nahi bulaunga, par tum dono abhi k abhi niklo yahan se
Tum dono ki naukri khatam aaj se aur agar ass pass bhi dikhe toh Police mein report kar dunga"
Dono hi samajh jate hai ki ab kuch nahi ho sakta esliye sar jhukaye, bina kuch kahe bahar nikal jaate hain
Tabse Mohan ko sab akele hi sambhalna pad raha hai aur esi k chalte wo pehle jaisa samay nahi de pa raha tha Sundari ko
Mohan aaj bhi subha 8 baje hi dukan aa gaya tha aur tabse hi kaam mein akela laga hua tha, par tabhi waha market mein ek choti si aag ki durghatna k chalte sabhi dukanen band karwa di gayi thi waise aag Mohan ki dukan se bahut dur thi par usne bhi lage hath apni dukan band kar di waise bhi itne dino se akele sab sambhalte hue wo bada thak chuka tha
Qki esi k chalte hue jaldi ghar jane ka moka mil gaya tha par usne pehle counter ke neeche se ek naya condom ka packet nikaal liya tha, aaj subha se hi uska mood rangeen hua pada tha
Aur yaad se raste mein Sundari ki pasandida rabdi bhi le li thi, Mohan puri tayari se ghar chal pada tha
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